Hello. You may want to change the power of your zanpakuto. Power to control the underworld isn't possible in bleach seeing as all souls go to the soul society and the only thing considered "underworld-ish" is hueco mundo and no zanpakuto has the power to contro the very forces of hueco munco. Not even Aizen who seems to be nearly impossible to defeat. I understand the concept you were going for but it would've been better if you said something along the lines of it has the power to control "evil forces/darkness/etc." I know this is a bleach fanon but even so there are some concepts that aren't possible.Razeluxe91 22:54, August 10, 2010 (UTC)
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