Thread:Kenji Hiroshi/@comment-3403804-20150505003701


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Well, that doesn't sound like cheap innuendo at all, right? Regardless, as I've already said, thanks a lot for commenting on my guide, and abuse my ideas as much as you like, that's what they're there for. That and boosting my self-confidence by dictating what issues to discuss and think about at any given time, harr-harr!

At any rate, time to get to business, you may already be aware of this, but this previous year I actually spent one year in a private school taking classes in writing. During this time I learned how to read stories and literature in ways I was unable to do something before, essentially, it improved my ability to look at writing critically. So yeah, if you bring me a few links relating to the current main characters, I can probably give you feedback upon how they are, if they're varied and developed enough and if you took the advice I gave you two years ago to heart.

But I can probably do more than that, I can examine certain chapters you're uncertain about for clichés, overdone plot elements and unfortunate implications and plot holes. I can then tell you, based upon my own experience what I think of them and how they hold up as stories of fiction. There's probably a limit to what I can do of course, as I'm fairly busy these days, but I should always be able to make some time for an old friend. 