Thread:Mangetsu20/@comment-4280197-20140202041157/@comment-4326112-20140203020728

Okay, I didn't know about the Royal Family, I only knew about the Spirit King. Sorry for voicing that complaint out in the open.

As for Hollowfication, the method of attainment felt very forced and contrived. If you're going to give someone Hollow powers, it has to be done in a manner that is both believable and unique. If there has been a process in which, say, a Clan has been doing this for generations and has been able to Hollowfy as Visoreds because they've perfected the practice (even if there's a fatality rate) then that's a method of which is more unique than sudden power gaining.

Your Grammatical style is leaving much to be desired, and a lot of your powers/abilities haven't been questioned by yourself, so you need to clean that up. Its always best, when doing something ambitious, to research and research and research some more. Be prepared to do a lot of legwork like a lot of users here, or your articles will never have the quality that you desire or deserve.