Thread:BraveHeart70/@comment-26193148-20160719045217/@comment-26193148-20160720015640

I will have to agree with Ash. But in a more helpful way.

Me and you do the same thing, Brave. We talk too much about how fucking awesome this thing is but never really display it. So one thing I would note is write how he is in perfect synchronization. How does it effect his movement? You started good with the horizantal strike but lost momentum. What I recommend is learning about the sword style you are using, so like if you are basing it off of Iaido, read about it. Research it. See what real masters use and tips they have and incorporate it.

Too much fluff gives a feeling of stroking ego.

If you need help, let me know, we can work on it together.