Thread:Njalm2/@comment-136273-20151115175718/@comment-18812574-20151127164922

Darn. Over already eh?

Personally my highlight of the RP was whoever used that golden fire cyclone, I think it was Fumio. I could literally feel the power jumping of the page. That attack as a whole (not just the tornado) was awesome.

As a suggestion, I think the RP could have used more flow or organization, perhaps. It was hard to find my place in the story and to keep up with who was doing what and what was going on and so-forth. Mainly because it was so thick on how each character processed the attacks and came up with their own moves and so-forth, which isn't a bad thing it just seemed... rather dense/hard to grasp at times.

Well done! An enjoying read overall!