Thread:Stylx/@comment-1493741-20140907212745/@comment-136273-20140921104612

Anyway, there's one thing I feel should be pointed out and discussed.

Effort. Countless times throughout this fanfic I've had the impression that the amount of effort my characters put into their actions is virtually meaningless. Not always, definitely not, but given the ratio, my impression is that the instances where it shows are actually the exceptions. It is rather annoying when generic techniques are about as (in)effective as explicitly empowered high-level ones. This involves both of you.

So, perhaps a genuine request? Could you try to be a bit more mindful of the instances of explicitly described effort my characters put into their actions? I try to take yours into account, so I think it's fair to request this.