Thread:Mangetsu20/@comment-5651818-20130216143836/@comment-4326112-20130219000712

You know what I believe the problem is? You have no real idea what your character should be like. It came to me as you had no idea why you added the "Primal Energy" tidbit into your character's Shikai abilities. I mean, this guy seems to control nearly ALL aspects of Nature, which seems a little much. That would mean this guy would have a ego trip and a god complex (personality-wise) in order to compensate.

Soul Reapers' Powers and Abilities are reflected upon their character, their experiences, their upbringing, and their personality (and their contrasting traits or vices they keep hidden from view). They're not a collection of "Super Powers" for you to make your character "Badass", they're there because you trained to bring out your innermost potential.