Thread:Somnium Fluxus/@comment-25983604-20141208222052/@comment-2182964-20141210000832

Here's some advice, buddy. Go into detail on all parts of your character, not just the history. Really explain what he looks like, what he does for fun, how he sees things, how he thinks, how he got to where he is now, how he fights, what his techniques are, and what his Zanpakuto does. If you do that any really go into depth you'll reach the byte count.