Talk:Shiratori

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First, I'd like to address the lack of spaces between sentences; it is common grammar that you add spaces between sentences. Second, the coding is slightly wrong (and I understand this sometimes happens on accident), as it shows the coding for italics when it is already italized. Third, the name on the infobox should be Shiratori, and the meaning of her name should be put in trivia, or perhaps personality if it relates so. Then, Vizard is typically spelled 'Visored' and this is the correct spelling. Height would be 6'1" (185.4 cm) and weight would be 180 lbs (81.8 kg) and a common mistake (even I did this at a time) is the mispelling of Shin'ō Academy. Lastly, you should specify if she was a Captain of the Gotei, or the Captain-Commander. If it is the latter, then you may want to look up dates and such. I assure you that I am not trying to be mean/rude, and I am only trying to help in your improvement. Thank you.

—Phoenix 02:50, October 29, 2012 (UTC)