Talk:Sudden changes

Amaririsu
Well first off, the grammar needs fixing up (but this is the case almost most every other story I've read here so far -.- ...). Also I would suggest not having "sudden" in the title of both of these chapters (this and the first one, "A Sudden, New Threat"). But as to Risu ... well there would be a few things that I think would be different. Of course you wouldn't of known about them before as I hadn't created a proper captain page for her yet and was just using her lieutenant page but now I do have an updated page for her here that shows how she has grown by the time she has become captain. Though I do think that she would be sheepish after arriving late by now she has out grown her timid nature around male authority figures. But more noticeably, she actually has "matured" ... (see her Trivia sections on her pages here and here to see what I mean -u-). I'm sorry if this messes up your story -_- *bows*.

-- Tsukiyume o^u^o 21:45, March 29, 2010 (UTC)