Thread:Mallory16461646/@comment-1493741-20121206225129/@comment-1493741-20121208232850

Well its not the promised tomorrow or a morning for that matter, but here's the first critique: Lyon Harribel.

It might sound kind of harsh, it might not, I'm a bad judge at that personally but its not intended to be offensive. And you never wanted me to start off anywhere specific, excepting maybe the Crimson Lotus, but reading that step-by-step I haven't seen anything wrong with that barring that one, totally serious, life or death missing word. So I picked this randomly out of yer category page.