User talk:Zaraikou/Archive I

Welcome
Hi, welcome to Bleach Fan Fiction Wiki! Thanks for your edit to the Zanpakutō - Zaraikou (The Lightning) page.

Please leave a message on my talk page if I can help with anything! -- Seireitou (Talk) 16:33, December 30, 2009

Joining
Well, then you have to give me a link to the person you'd like to have in the Gotei 13 and what division you'd like them in. --Seireitou-shishō (瀞霊冬川平) 22:54, March 2, 2010 (UTC)
 * Sorry, but he is denied from attaining Captaincy. He has Hollow Powers, which goes against Soul Society's laws, and also once was a rogue. A Captain would never be someone who went against Soul Society's rules. --Seireitou-shishō (瀞霊冬川平) 23:05, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

Advice
Its none of my business but I use the Sekkiseki Protection Technique which I created on my characters and Zanpakutos you may want to add it to your characters on the official BFF Gotei 13.

P.S having this ability makes the character's and their Zanapkuto's Powers work on Sekkiseki and able to fly in the Seireitei.Creator5000 23:35, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

Answer and Info
To add it just add it to your character's or Zanpakuto's spiritual power level as the last sentence thats what I do

Here is an example, He and is Zanpakuto know the Sekkiseki Protection Technique. You can word it anyway just make Sekkiseki Protection Technique bold.

P.S I dont care but you should use the signature button after you finish typing the last sentence on your messages for most user find it rude not to use it.Creator5000 00:01, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry clean up message
To add the technique it just add it to your character's or Zanpakuto's spiritual power level as the last sentence thats what I do.

Here is an example, He and is Zanpakuto know the Sekkiseki Protection Technique. You can word it anyway just make Sekkiseki Protection Technique bold.

P.SYou should use the signature button after you finish typing the last sentence on your messages for most user find it rude not to use it.

P.S.S To become a Captain or Lieutanant level on the Official BFF Gotei 13 you need to be approved by Sei the Head Admin but all the Captain ranks are full.Creator5000 00:09, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

Its fine
Hey I am still new I started BFF on Dec 2009 and I am still learning so you can understand the technique just read the artcile Sekkiseki Protection Technique for I created it and how to add the technique just see my Captain on the BFF Gotei Miya Hana or my Lieutanant Takeo Ogata.Creator5000 00:17, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

Zaraikou
I forgot to tell you I am not an admin so with certain things you may want to ask an admin like Seiritou or Thepatheon and about making the Sekkiseki Protection Technique in bold I dont know how to make it a link just if anyone asks you about tell them to look at the article.Creator5000 16:22, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

Kagami
Thank you for replying so quickly. If you need help on anything, don't hesitate to ask. --Thepantheon 17:08, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

Captain Vacancy
Yes there is. --Thepantheon 22:06, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

Seireitou is the admin who is authorized to approve Captains. --Thepantheon 00:34, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

Captain Info
Just so you know what might happen my captain Miya Hana was removed for Grammer and Spelling mistakes without telling me and the same could happen to you, you should make sure you have looked over what character you are going to asked to be added onto the Gotei list of Captains for any mistakes and try to fix them this is just advice from another member.Creator5000 00:44, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

Seireitou has told me to inform that he has accepted it into the Gotei 13 as the captain of the 4th Division. --Thepantheon 00:45, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

It is fine
It is fine i am trying to have her be made the 4th Squad Lieutenant and dont forget if you want you can add the Sekkiseki Protection Technique to your Captain character.Creator5000 00:51, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

Advice
I know this meddling but your captain on the Gotei 13 might be too strong Sei really only want the Captain Commander the Head Captain with their battle status of 550/600 and above for that is Aizen's rank meaning twice as strong as a captain but since it is 550/600 you may not be told anything but you may want reduce it from 550/600 to like 540/600 so you aren't told anything. Miya the one that was removed from her captain status and made as a lieutenant her former status were 510/600. Though you dont have to listen and i know I am medding but I was just concerned.

P.S You know you can give her the Sekkiseki Protection Technique.Creator5000 14:41, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

Permission
Since your captain is the captain of Squad 4 and my Lieutenant is in the same squad may I use her in the info of my character like in Background/History Pesonailty etc?

P.S It not that you did anything wrong and in fact you didnt but to make sure you understand the ability once someone learns the Sekkisekk Protection Technique it can never be unlearned or even turned off though having it doesn't change your amount or what kind of spiritual power he/she has and it doesnt use any of that person spiritual energy just to make clear on how the ability works.Creator5000 15:41, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

Bankai
I know your character is new but just wondering are you still making her bankai or just waiting for the right time to reveal it.Creator5000 16:09, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

Both Elemantal Type Zanapkutos
Hey I just remembered I got a Water Based Zanpakuto for my Lieutenant and for her Captain that is you is a Wind Based Zanapkuto.

P.S If you make her zanpkuto on article by itself in the categories you may want to lable it a wind tpye and a kido type do that most elemental zanapkutos are also Kido Based.Creator5000 16:19, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

Zaraikou
I know you gave me permission to use your captain character in my lieutenant character Miya Hana history background etc but I cannot think of anything and I dont want iy to interfer your character's history any ideas Zaraikou Sama?Creator5000 21:09, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Your idea
I removed about haft her history plus I didnt like most of her history anyway but the rest is here family history before she became a Shinigami but what is your idea(s) and if I need to change some more let me know please.Creator5000 21:34, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Nearly Perfect
Your Idea is nearly perfect only two then I would like to change.
 * 1) That instead of four years she graduates from the Shinigami Academy in one year not 4 and it should say she passed the entrance exam on her first try.
 * 2) The second thing is that it should say what seated officer position she had before becoming a lieutenant other than that it is good.Creator5000 22:15, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Ok
I can live with her graduating in two years and I forgot to tell you in her history it should say that she was recommend for her healing abilitlies being very high and that her spiritual power level was higher that a third seated officer and that should do it right?Creator5000 22:30, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Zaraikou
I would but right not I am kind of busy with studing and Track for high school and I just got back from a track meet and I am tired could you add it to her history please Zaraikou sama?Creator5000 22:39, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Just clean up the wording
Some of the words were misspelled and some grammer errors I fixed I didn't want the admins saying anything thats ok sama?Creator5000 23:22, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Zaraikou Sama
I need your opinion on a few articles

Here they are cause I dont know how to create links These are the articles I need to help with like are they overpowering or stupid.Creator5000 17:07, March 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * 1) Satoshi Asukai
 * 2) Souzoushakouin
 * 3) Federico Machu

Hmm
I know Federico is slightly godmodding interms of his spiritual power level but let me clear the confusion. The reason for his spiritual energy being limitless is due to the powers of Souzoushakouin Satoshi's Zanpakuto. Since Souzoushakouin has limitless spiritual energy that is immuned to the effect of Sekkiseki the seal it made didn't make Federico's spiritual power any stronger just limitless and immune to Sekkiseki. Plus the reason for the term Overwhelming Limitless Spiritual Energy is that his spiritual powers is that of 4 captains twice the strength of Aizen's spiritual power the reason for that is due to him being a Dios Vasto Lorde before becoming an arrancar.Creator5000 19:08, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

Confusion
What you mean by article structure I though this was the the basic order?

Trivia
Creator5000 19:22, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

Zaraikou
Ok I will fix Satoshi in a bit but I got another matter to ask you.

I am working on a story of my own called Kazu's War on Heaven Saga and would you like to add any characters to these military groups? Let me know.Creator5000 19:38, March 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * 1) New Espada Army only Arrancar may be added to this.
 * 2) The Protection Corps of Spiritual Guidence and Discovery only Shinigami Captains and Lieutenants may join no vizards.

Plot
Well first thing is that it a former Shinigami Captain Kazu Konsetsu whos zanapkuto has the power to shapeshift himsel and his zanapkuto into any other Shinigami with all their power he is the main bad guy.

The New Espada Army are the ten Espada like normal but with Federico being the Leader and Primea Espada cause Kazu was killed by Ulises Jaquares who is the Segunda Espada but Federico has the same plot of First leader desire Aizen's and Kazu's overthrough the Soul Society.

The Protection Corps of Spiritual Guidence and Discovery is a Groups of Elite Shinigami captains and Lieutenants made as a protection defence in the world of the living to help souls to the soul society and to fight hollows of the Adjuchas and Vasto Lordes level but all over the world.Creator5000 20:12, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

Zaraikou Sama
Ok the reason for me creating this story arc is so I could make my characters without the admins saying much like Satoshi being the greatest kido master and having the Strongest Kido based Zanpakuto. When I created the Story Arc it is made without harming the Bleach Anime/Manga and not taking any of the BFF Wiki plots characters, zanapkutos, story arcs etc and I just want other user helping me it isn't made fun creating the story arc the characters, zanpakutos and plots all by yourself.Creator5000 20:29, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

opinion
I need your opinion on a new character I am making do you think that having the spiritual power 4 times as much as an average captains is too strong?Creator5000 21:02, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

True
That is true thats why I only have two charactes Federico Machu and Naoko Kyassuru having four times the spiritual power strength of an average captains but Federico Machu dies at the end of story arc and Naoko is transformed in a Konippin a Soul Gem after his battle with Federico.Creator5000 21:20, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

True part 2
Maybe but my two characters are only part of my Story Arc Kazu's War on Heaven Saga.

P.S. I need you opinion on a character Amaranto Chavez is he weird or stupid cause I was told that his Zanpakuto name is Ghost Translated yes I know about the level of his spiritual power.Creator5000 21:38, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

True part 3
Ok thanks but Federico's Zanapkuto Crepusculo (Spanish for Twilight) but I cannot find the Japanese Translation do you know it?Creator5000 21:57, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks again and have you any characters or want to save any ranks in ether militar groups I asked you yesterday.Creator5000 22:18, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm the rank isn't a problem but when you mean going from rank 10 to 0 do you mean that your character will be stronger than Federico Machu because he is the Strongest Espada I really didn't make an 0 ranked Espada in my stroy arc but I got an Idea if you would hear it.Creator5000 22:52, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

Ok I was thinking that your character can have some kind of ability that can fuse dead arrancars with himself increasing his/her spiritual power I was thinking after Naoko kills Ulises the Segunda Espada he fuses with you character making his spiritual power rivialing Federico's just the character creation is yours to make but they have to follow 4 rules.

Not exactly toward the end your character would do that. The reason for him being the 0 ranked after his release is for if all of the other Espada members are killed your character is suppose to absorb all of them to make sure he can carry out the plan but he only gets to absorb Ulises for Federico's body is completely destroyed and the rest are in Los Noches for Naoko with all the top 4 Espada go to the World of the Living. Does this clear some of your confusion?Creator5000 00:13, March 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * 1) The first rule is that your character for The New Espada army has to know the Sekkiseki Protection Technique
 * 2) He/She cannot be shorter than 54 but not taller than 6'3 at least before releasing their zanpakuto.'
 * 3) Your character has to have a Spainsh first and last name.
 * 4) Your character cannot have a Segunda Etapa sorry I made it in my story arc only the 1th rank and 4th rank Espada have one.Creator5000 23:24, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

Ok the top four Espada Federico, Ulises, Socorro, and Amaranto go to the world of the living to where the Protection Corps is Satoshi and a few other Shinigami in the Protection Corps fight against the Arrancars the rest of the Protection corps are in Los Noches. When are the Espada in the world of the living are killed and ranks 5 to 9 are killed your rank 10 Espada leaves Los Noches cause their bodies are beyond his ability to fuse with and goes to the World of the Living and absorbs Ulises for his body is still intact mostly and all of their Fracción thus making him nearly as strong as Federico for in theory if he would absorb all of the Espada he would be unstoppable. Does this help.Creator5000 00:42, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

Ok I look foward to it and just to clear all of the confusion he can only absorb dead arranars in his realease form and I would like to be a guy for all the Espada only have one female the Tres Espada. Please follow the four rules in it creation and could you name his zanpakuto with someting that can absorb someting like a vampire or something like that. Finally I look foward to it.Creator5000 00:56, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

How is this to absorb Arrancars that aren't dead their Spiritual Power has to be weaker than his for if he could absorb Arrancars that are stronger than him that are alive that would make a problem and for dead ones if he absorbs them before 30 minutes after their death his gains all their spiritual pressure for until their body transforms into spirit energy it is fair gain as long as their bodies are at least 90% intact for the ability to work.Creator5000 01:26, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

Ok ingnore the two of the four rules and it can be a girl. Just give him/her a Spainsh first and last name and make sure he/she knows the Sekkiseki Protection Technique the creation is completely up to you and that goes for how the absortion ability too.Creator5000 01:54, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

Ok but I wont see it till after 10:30 a.m you know High School and all and one more theing just please make sure your character's spiritual power is only high or great spiritual power just immense before his/her after release form after you can name it whatever u wish is this ok?Creator5000 02:07, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

Kanji
No problem; well, I use Google Translate for the most part. The kana I copy and paste off of its Wikipedia page. Maggosh 16:45, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

Done. Maggosh 19:04, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

Muerte Guerrero
Ignore the message in True part 3 I got a bad internet contection.

Muerte Guerrero I like your character but I need you to change one or two things please.

In History can you make it to where that Federico gives him orders to absorb him if he dies for he know Muerte's Desire. and his abstract of death would be Emptiness.

His Spiritual Power can stay vast but I need you to reworded a little here is an example.

Vast Spiritual Power: He can at any given time before releasing his zanpakuto only release 40% his power is equal to that of an espada rank of six, though he keeps it mostly hidden. Upon using his release, however, his spiritual power becomes much greater. He is able to use the Sekkiseki Protection Technique. his spiritual power rivials that of Federico's and Ulises spiritual power. This release makes his spiritual power about that of two to three captains. After he absorbed a battled Ulises he absorbed him making his spiritual energy limitless like Ulises and increasing his powers greatly nearly equal to even Federico's before his release. Is this ok cause I was thinking that Federioc gave him the orders to absorb any dead or dying Espada to continue with his plan but never can absorb Federico cause he was stronger even after absorbing Ulises the reason for this is cause Federico was the stronger Dios Vasto Lorde and Ulises was weaker but still greatly strong.Creator5000 17:06, March 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * Resurrección Special Ability: In this form all his powers and abilities are enhanced and he gains even greater physical abilities.
 * Enhanced Spiritual Power: While in his released form, his spiritual pressure has explosively increased. Muerte's power in his released state far outclasses all other Arrancar. He is able to ues 100% of of full power, his spiritual energy is worlds apart from most of the other Espada the other Espada. He has also demonstrated that with enough control and focus, he is able to unleash his spiritual pressure in the form of a powerful shockwave. After releasing his Zanapkuto

Ok how is this
Sorry for the confusion.

Near the end of the Stroy arc Ulises is the only top Espada not killed but has been battling Naoko Kyassuru thus weaking him. Muerte absorbs him for Federico gave him an order to absorb all of the top Espada if he died for he knows it is his plan to do that to overthrow him and since Federico, Soccoro and Amaranto bodies are completely destroy cause of their battles with the Protection Corps so since Ulises had limitless spiritual energy Muerte's spirit energy becomes limitless too thus making him even stronger than Ulises but still not as strong as Federico. Does this clear some of the Confusion. Oh and can his Abstract of death be Emptiness.

And his could reword these things like this

Vast Spiritual Power: He can at any given time before releasing his zanpakuto only release 40% his power is equal to that of an espada rank of six, though he keeps it mostly hidden. Upon using his release, however, his spiritual power becomes much greater. He is able to use the Sekkiseki Protection Technique. his spiritual power rivials that of Federico's and Ulises spiritual power. This release makes his spiritual power about that of two to three captains. After he absorbed Ulises this made his spiritual energy limitless like Ulises and increasing his powers greatly nearly equal to even Federico's before his release.Creator5000 17:43, March 17, 2010 (UTC)
 * Resurrección Special Ability: In this form all his powers and abilities are enhanced and he gains even greater physical abilities.
 * Enhanced Spiritual Power: While in his released form, his spiritual pressure has explosively increased. Muerte's power in his released state far outclasses all other Arrancar. He is able to ues 100% of of full power, his spiritual energy is worlds apart from most of the other Espada the other Espada. He has also demonstrated that with enough control and focus, he is able to unleash his spiritual pressure in the form of a powerful shockwave. After releasing his Zanapkuto

Greed
Yeah his personailty is like greed but the original Espada number 9 abstract of death was greed and i dont want to be told off for copy writing but could it be wrath or pride?Creator5000 18:00, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

Pride is more of his Personailty I think and in his Vast Spiritual Power make his released power equal to Ulises sealed form before absorbing Ulises not Federico to clear any confusion and the rest is perfect.Creator5000 18:18, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

Ulises Jaquares is still under construction but I will give you the info in a little while cause the former article I had to erase it for it was stupid but one ability is the Ability to control gravity. You can name it what you want and can makes special kinds of attacks with it.Creator5000 18:44, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

Opinion
Would you like Muerte to have an faccion or not and do you want him to be friends or have any kind grudge against with any of the other Espada?

P.S since ever Espada needs a job or responailty what would you like for his job in the Espada to do?Creator5000 16:38, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

Ok he can be the leader of the privaron espada but could you make his faccon cause I am trying to make the rest of the Espada ranks and the Protection Corps ranks. Even though Ulises is under contruction but his main ability is to control gravity if you want to add it to Muerte.Creator5000 17:25, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah cool just dont make too many Faccion cause that would go against his abstract of death which is pride. and about the gravity controlling ability Ulises can use it prior of his release and after though it does have a spainsh name I cannot find the translation.

P.S Do you want Ulises to be in his release form or not when Muerte absorbs him?Creator5000 18:02, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

Ok its name is Gravity Force Field I just cannot find a true Spainsh Translation. And a I got an opinion do you want he to change the story arc so that Muerte absorbs Federico too just a thought though.Creator5000 18:38, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

sorry bad intercontection but ok how is this Ulises is still battling Naoko Kyassuru but is losing and Federico is battling the Rank 1captain in Protection Corps then Muerte leaves Los Noches to battle the stronger Captains of the Protection Corps see Ulises is losing and takes his chance to absorb Ulises and does though he still isn't strong enough to absorb Federico even if he is in his sealed form but Federico see this and goes to Muerte and tells him to absorb him which he does and gains his spiritual power strength and all of his abilitlies but that unlike all of the other hollows and arrancars he has absorbs a part of Federico soul is still alive in him.

How is this?Creator5000 19:42, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

That is hard to say a part of his soul is alive in him but cannot take control of the body and can only hear Federico voice in his in his head he can though hear, see, feeling, taste, and smell everthing Muerte can this makes Federico happy that he is part of him kind of like the released form of how Starrk and Lilynette does than make sense?Creator5000 19:57, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

P.S. gravitación is perfect for Ulises gravitly abilitly.Creator5000 20:01, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

that is cool but remember Federico influence on Muerte is limited and that he is alive in him they are still two seperated spiritual beings just sharing Muerte's body though Muerte has 100% of control over the body. And I am not trying to make you do my work but do you want to take over construction over Ulises cause I am stummed on him but you dont have to and he gains Federico's Spatail and Temporal eyes that he can use it even in his sealed stated.Creator5000 20:19, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

Ulises apperance is near the height of Yammy and but more like Niorrta body built with short light brown hair and brown eyes. and the name of his Zanpakuto is Ruin and the release command is crash or unless you can think of something else.Creator5000 20:43, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

Sure if you want to and since you ask may I edit Muerte I know I have been you without asking sorry. but I cannot find translation for ruin. and Soccoro Herrera the Tres Espada could use some help too.Creator5000 20:59, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

ok Ulises released form should be something like a giant for when he was a Dios Vasto Lorde he was about the sizeof a Gillian and he should look something like a giant in black torn robes with he face having several scars something like that, as for Soccoro her personailty need work you can make her personality how you want and her apperance can be made like you want just dont make her taller than 5'9 please thanks and the release for Ulises should look like with his hammer Zanpakuto he slams it into the ground turning into a black spiritual pressure completely covers him.'Creator5000 21:37, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

First Ulises arrancar uniform his like Yammy's with his jacket open with the remains of his hollow mask is like Starrk as a Former Dios Vasto Lorde he has three hollow holes but the only one showned is the one in the center of his chest. His Zanpakuto is a giant hammer and he comes giant size only after releasing his zanapkuto and Soccoro personality is like Nel but talks like Tia you know not saying much and the rumber 3 his on her right arm and her abstract of death is War.Creator5000 22:03, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

Sure but make sure his gravilty ability can be used in his sealed form it increases in his released form. His abstact of Death is Hateridge and Federico his is Power. may i edit just a little on Muerte just the history I am not correcting anything but adding something may i?Creator5000 22:32, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

He is good and now only the 6 and 9 Espada are need to be made you want the 9 Espada and I will take the 6th Espada and do you think Federico has good abilities or do you got some ideas sama?Creator5000 22:46, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

Ok just you can make your completely how you want just remember this isn't rule but a point an admin once told me that any Espada under the rank of 6th should only have great Spiritual power though for your Muerte it plays in the story arc so it is cool so dont worry about sama and I just remeber your character closely rivial Ulises before even absorbing him but Muerte absorbs the battled weakend Divino arrancars that means his spiritual power level is like 5 to 6 average captains.Creator5000 23:00, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

Federico's spiritual power is 4 captains before resuccion and Ulises is 3 captains before resuccion and I already fixed Muerte spiritual power sorry cause before absorbing Ulises his spritual power is slightly higher than two captains and after absorbing Ulises his power increases to right under 4 captains after absorbing Federico it is higher than 5 captains.Creator5000 23:31, March 18, 2010 (UTC)