Talk:Szayel Du Riktushavank

Suggestions
The biography of Szayel is a lot better than I expected, which is quite good considering I am considered one of the stricter personalities on Bleach Fan Fiction when it comes to role-playing. For that history, you should omit all of your out-of-character remarks (most notably the one about you saying that you will be making the character to Szayel's love interest), and just place the wiki link brackets around the name instead. It's a lot easier, and it does imply that you intend to make an article for that character/thing/location in the future. Also, you should break up the paragraph into smaller ones for easier reading (it takes two enter spaces to create a new paragraph in the coded mode. In the newer WYSIWYG mode, it only takes one enter).

As for the setup of the article, I find it a bit of a mess, to be honest: your infobox information should be at the top of the article, since its basically your character's attributes in a nutshell. Keep in mind that Wikia automatically formats your pictures based on where you placed it in the article, so that the image flows well with the text (unless you don't put it in a thumbnail). The #1 rule of articles, in my opinion, is that it should be neat and tidy so that the reader would not have to look about frantically for information. --れび (talk to Lavi!) 15:36, December 23, 2009 (UTC)