Thread:Shiro of the Outer Path/@comment-2089817-20120517015740/@comment-3403804-20120518104041

Hi there, Masaru - to clarify. I gave Ash permission to use my own Kido format after he asked me to make use of it for his new character. Ash's Kido Format is essentially taken from my own character Hiroya Ginkarei. Therefore, crediting both me and Ash is still wrong, as this was made entirely on my own; and whatever he has done, he's most likely in turn taken from me.

At any rate, I've read through your article Mandala and I want to point out that Onmyoji is a mortal art, Kido is an art crafted over milleniums. Combining the cores of every other form of magic into one, Onmyoji is but a tiny fraction of it in its entirety and is in all truthfulness the lesser art among the two, its fundamentally unnessecary for your character to possess Onmyoji, cause Kido can already accomplish all the feats that Onmyoji can, most likely even better to boot!

To close my post, I want to inform you that simply slapping on "Grandmaster" or even "Master" means nothing if you can't thoroughly prove that level of skill, Mandala's "Kido Grandmastery" is not even remotely close to the actual thing so I strongly suggest you revise it and expand on it thoroughly. But lastly, you must also mention WHERE your character got it from, to give him proper ties to his abilities.