User blog comment:Razeluxe91/Just Me Writing down Future Zanpakuto for Van...(feel free to comment)/@comment-3403804-20110531230110

A very advanced Zanpakuto, and very original, I myself would likely never have thought of it and I inmodestly view myself as being a capable Zanpakuto Creator. You've used a lot of flowery language, I'd moderate that while writing Zanpakuto abilities as it pretty much obscures the actual abilities of the weapon in question, which is hardly beneficial to neither you nor the reader, albeit given the nature of the Zanpakuto, flowery language is nessecary as to formulate completely coherrent sentences in laymans terms while alluding to these aspects would be quite. Its abilities are quite tricky and can all easily be fatal, it is also capable of great versatility, both defensively, offensively and supplementary so, this may however lead someone to concider it overpowered as it doesn't have a clearly defined weakness or limitation.