Thread:Silver-Haired Seireitou/@comment-5778280-20141026030801

I would have posted this message in my challenge to you, but it has no business being there. So, forgive me filling up your wall with seperate message. Ahem, anyway. With the whole right of character thing, I'm not sure I can push my "out of the box" thinking to the extreme. So, I'd like for you to review an ability I have created, and personally tell me where it stands in terms of limitations. Is it okay, can I do more with it, or is it just on the edge of being acceptable?

Nisshoku (日食, "Eclipse"): As a member of the Tsuki Clan, Kōsa is extremely skilled in the manipulation of spiritual energy. His inclination toward it, which he shares with his kin, brings about a desire to advance it. Though, as a single individual, the knowledge he houses is limited. It is, also, demonstrated within a single technique. You see, according to the laws of physics, energy cannot be destroyed or created. Upon learning this basic bit of information, Kōsa became curious. What if, by some phenomenon, there was an ability to eliminate energy? Quincy, whom are capable of completely destroying the souls of those they kill, are the only known beings capable of breaking the fundamental law. Why exactly is this? Well, after having studied them, Kōsa came to a conclusion. Quincy, despite being Human, possess the ability to manipulate space and time. They can, essentially, create a space that flows differently than the space they currently exist. This, clearly resulting in the creation of a space not directly affected by the laws of this, creates a loop hole within the natural flow of energy. Any and all that is pierced by their arrows, are directly sent to that space upon death. Their energy, vanishing from this space and time, is then believed to be destroyed. Though, what truely happens to it? It is snt away, and pushed into a secluded area. That area, similar to a Quincy's place of residence, is within the "shadow" of this world's natural flow of time and space. It is directly governed by them, and used to house energy they no longer wish to allow flow. So, what would happen, if somebody other than a quincy possessed this ability? Kōsa, having studied their spiritual energy, deduced a means to mimic their power. He, essentially, creates a space of his own by storing energy within the "shadow" of his spiritual energy. Similar to a Quincy's ability to reside within shadows, Kōsa's ability open shadows directly creates a space that flows different from the one he resides in. Black in color, much like a shadow, it is an intangible mass that acts like a "door" to his own personal domain. Capable of sealing away energy, as well as housing living individuals, it is the pinnacle of his studies. 