Talk:Kaiketsu Notoko

Review
I see that you have reconstructed this article in the hopes of its redemption. I'm curious as to wonder why you didn't simply inform me on my talk page and instead chose to tell me through Blankslate, but that matters little. I'm sure you have your reasons, and I am capable of respecting that.

I did a bit of research during this article's deceased state. Coincidentally, I found a character by the name of Kamina on the anime Tengen Toppa Gurren Lagann. At first, I simply thought that you had taken the name. When I actually clicked on the article and took a quick skim over both it and yours, I discovered that both of their elements and content were strikingly similar. Too similar for originality to have developed for your article, and just similar enough to give me the impression that you simply copied the character Kamina over to Bleach. Negative points right off the bat.

There is no such thing as a "Demi-Shinigami". Unless you have some sort of plausible backstory for that, there has never been one until it is confirmed in the possible future by Kubo. So he is either a Shinigami, a Human, a Quincy, or whatever. The closest thing to that would be a Substitute Shinigami, someone who becomes a Shinigami by obtaining another Shinigami's powers.

The grammar and layout of this article is severely lacking once again. Where's his background? What's with the drastically short bits of information in each section? You cannot rush characters like this, or else it will make for horrible results.

Moving on to the abilities. Being able to fight against anyone? Nope, that's still overpowered. Every character has his or her limitations, restrictions, and weaknesses. Does he have a Zanpakutō or not?

Overall, this article has not showed much improvement from its deletion. If you do not want it deleted again, fix it. -- Achrones, the Cold Sniper 05:26, December 22, 2011 (UTC)