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Its not up to me
Its not up to just me. You will have to ak everyon what they think. If you get a majority vote then yea, but if not well...that's the way it has to be. Good luck pal. Raze Kucabara-Dono  Light  01:50, May 13, 2011 (UTC)

RE: Overture of the King
Sei and I have two different interpertations, and its fine that we do. In my story, Ninigi will be the Soul King, since my stories will draw heavily from Japanese mythology, and I'll be drawing connections between the two. Its obvious that Sei's original conception has changed given the new rules they've created, how much I'm not sure, and to what changes he'll make to his own work is also up in the air. Whether my creation will be independent or accepted as a whole is unclear, and frankly beyond my concern. So as long as I can create it, thats fine by me.

My soul king will inherently be different than Sei's for many reasons, and as for Aizen hating him? Even if he is supposedly one of smartest characters in the series, there are many things that even he is unaware of, and his own interpertations can be just as flawed as anyone else. For simplicity sake, the Soul King in my story has "transcended" in a similar manner that Aizen wanted to, but on a completely different scale. Pronouns denoting gender, are irrelevant, and he's become closer to an "it" than an actual person. What "it" is remains to be seen. --- Illuminate Void (Talk) 21:31, May 13, 2011 (UTC)

Kamui vs Masanori
Sure, perhaps sometime this weekend? I've gotten a real limitation on my computer usage time due to my laptop being in the shop. I'm stuck using my home computer, which I can't really use after a specific time. --Seireitou-shishō (My True Identity 00:17, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

Sure
Sure! But who'd u wanna fight? Lone Black Garuga 02:16, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

uhmmm.... Its either Ciel or Hotaru.... But oh well... lets use Hotaru on this one ^_^ Lone Black Garuga 02:25, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

U might wanna start this one pls ^_^ Lone Black Garuga 02:35, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

Ur go TD-kun! Lone Black Garuga 03:27, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

I don't really know his weakness...but i guess u can look at his Konton ga kaijū ^_^ Lone Black Garuga 04:05, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

RE: Masanori Kawahiru
With whom, and for what reason exactly? Njalm2 18:52, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

Well, Izanagi is impossible given the fact that if they fought Masanori likely wouldn't be alive to face Kamui at all - Hiroya will be doing alot of other things so I don't really know what that leaves us with :) Njalm2 19:12, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

Than I guess we cannot rp. But while Masanori is only standard Aizen class without Zanpakuto release he can still use a complete Philosophy that even without his sword he would end up stronger than Aizen's fourth form without releasing his shikai, (abeit only for a few minutes.): The Twilight of Your Despair 19:33, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

Well Masanori doesnt appear to be finished, and there's a lot of formatting/grammatical errors you should correct on your article. You also need to add an introduction and expand on his appearance, personality and powers and abilities. Explain them in detail, dont just list their effect. I've told you before, I wont RP with you until you're work has improved. Simple things like that can easily be fixed with barely any effort. If you wont bother putting at least that much effort in, why should I go out of my way to do so in any RP? Trying to RP with an incomplete character shows otherwise. --- Illuminate Void (Talk) 21:30, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm
I would but all my most powerful characters are caught up in RPs already. Sorry pal. And well, I think you just need a 1-2 more votes and you should be good. Raze Kucabara-Dono  Light  20:05, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

Sup. My support
Yeah I support ya. and yes I'll Rp with ya. --- Twon Junior (the Third)  20:33, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

Whenever you ready here it is. Crossing Blades of Peace. Its with my newest character Kami Kemuri. --- Twon Junior (the Third)  21:08, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

Philosophy
Yes, I would greatly appreciate if you did. Also, who do I ask for creating a member of the Royal Guard?The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 22:16, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

It's ok, thank you for your help.The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 22:29, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, thanks for the heads up.The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 22:43, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

yo
Intrested in doing an RP with me? Grizzaka (Talk)  22:31, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

since u decided to once again use powerful characters I'll be using my best: Ray Martinez. Since ur the powerful person u start the RP. Grizzaka <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">(Talk)  22:40, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

Well? we gonna start this RP or what? <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">Grizzaka <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">(Talk)  22:48, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

Well dude Ray didn't become strong when i made him, i had him endure so much hardship that he got to be the person he is today. <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">Grizzaka <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">(Talk)  22:53, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

Okay him i can understand but the rest were made powerful without going through the proper places in training, like they say Rome wasn't built in a day and don't worry about messenging me when it's my turn I'll know so don't worry. <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">Grizzaka <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">(Talk)  22:59, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

ur post. <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">Grizzaka <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">(Talk)  23:23, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

dude my bad, i messed up u should redue ur post. <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">Grizzaka <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">(Talk)  23:37, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

ur post <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">Grizzaka <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">(Talk)  23:53, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not redoing him and sorry i got other stuff on my mind. <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">Grizzaka <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">(Talk)  18:52, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

sorry dude but for right now i need to stop the RP cuz I'm completely changing Ray's powers. <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">Grizzaka <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">(Talk)  20:06, May 17, 2011 (UTC)

Weakness
...Hmm... I bet memories of killing his friend and most of the Quincies haunts him today.. ^_^ ur go by the way Lone Black Garuga 03:34, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Tougenkyou Zenaku no Kajitsu has now become more of an optical-illusion for Hotaru due to his zanpakuto, so he could only see this inner conflict, not actually feel them in reality and someone his caliber won't fall like that easily. ^_^ ur go Lone Black Garuga 05:33, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Masanori Review
Ok, let's start off with introduction. (Note, I'll be a little harsh on this article because it has A LOT of potential)

Introduction-You haven't really given him an introduction, but the quote is nice, it clearly defines his (is it hatred?) for Kamui, which is nice, unique as it actually describes his personality in a sense as well, well done.

Rating-8/10 (would have been ten if you had put a brief summary of the character in the intro as well, but never mind)

Appearance- Nice section, doesn't really need to be rated, so I'm not going to rate it, nice work with how he makes his own clothes, cool!

Personality- Very nice personality, although you could go into a little more depth, maybe explain his personality before Kamui did all that mean stuff, and put in a quirk or two, otherwise nice work.

Rating- 7/10 (I'm being quite harsh, please don't blame me, but this character has alot of potential)

History- Very good section, although a little detail would help, it clearly defines his great hatred for Madara, which is very reasonable, I'd do the same if I was in his position.

Rating- 9/10

Powers and Abilities, alright, here we go! 9.8/10 (I think the grandmaster shouls be toned down, otherwise very nice)
 * Immortality: That is cool, it's like Kiyoshi Souzou and all that which is very unique, especially among Kawahiru members, great job with that.
 * Excellent use of intellect, which is really good, I love how you made Madara slightly frightened by it, as Madara is also highly intellectual, nice!
 * Great use of swordsmanship, although if he was really grandmaster I would've thought he had mastered some techniques, because 'Grandmaster' is the highest you can go, so maybe add a few techniques that he has created and/or learned
 * Hand to Hand Combat: It's good you haven't overpowered him by saying Master, otherwise I would get annoyed, I hate overpowered characters for no reason, but I like your style of editing, nice work.
 * Shunpo and Kido: Good work with these two, shows him as a prodigy in the art, although for the Senju Koten Taiho, you should say it tires him visibly, so that they know he isn't overpowered, just a suggestion however.
 * I like his spiritual pressure, gentle is very unusual when it comes to spiritual pressure, yet you say it brings down opponents, how about you say, when not focusing it on opponents it seems gentle, then when he focuses it, it becomes really dense, or something like that, and I like the deity like spiritual energy and the angel wings, cool!

Zanpakutou/Philosophy

Interesting combination of his zanpakutou and philosophy, hats off to you for that. I like his special ability, to calm everyone in the area is very 'deity like' indeed. His abilities are very well done, it's very cool that you added that the ability doesn't fade away even if they seal their zanpakutou, makes it seem very powerful, that's good for matching Kamui. You have balanced it with you must have the mental will to activate them, meaning he must control his emotions and mindset if he wants to use them right? Rating-9.5/10, I think you should go into more detail with how philosophy relates to his zanpakutou and such, otherwise, great job!
 * Tougenkyou Zenaku no Kajitsu: First ability, I like this ability, to bring out the greatest weakness of the enemy, I like the reference to tree and fruit here. This ability is awesome
 * Shinkagami: A defensive ability, nice, however it seems overpowered although it can only be used if he wants to truly protect someone right? So I guess it's ok
 * Futen Hikari: Nice attack, so this can only be used if he wants to destroy something right? Nice work, although stronger than a level 90 hado spell is a bit much, but you could say, at it's full power it's more devastating than a level 90 Hado spell or something.
 * Ok the last ability is cool, another reference to Philosophy is nice, I was wondering when it'd show up, but can attacks phase through the giant or something, because if not, then how will Masanori get injured, detail man, detail.

So, my overall rating is 9/10, Great Character, it can really be improved though, it has a lot of potential.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 08:04, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Well, that's cool, anyways, good luck with it! You wanna RP sometime by the way? After you've done all this, maybe a little fight between Hayato and Masanori (Hayato is Aizen Class)<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 08:21, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah pal to tell the truth I'm actually very interestted in your Phiolshy idea nice. --- <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">Twon Junior <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">(the Third)  21:35, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Like with what? <font color="#0255255" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#2550255" face="Tahoma">Light  00:41, May 16, 2011 (UTC)

I have no idea as I have the same problem you do. <font color="#0255255" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#2550255" face="Tahoma">Light  01:04, May 16, 2011 (UTC)

Yay, you increased your introduction, good job, and nice work with adding some stuff to your zanpakutou abilities, now it's a 10/10 for me :D<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 21:30, May 17, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, if you want to, you can start it, I'll add some stuff in a little later, I have homework.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 05:55, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

RTE
I see you're having trouble with the RTE. Well, to change your editor, go to your preferences and click the "Editing" tab. Once you get to that page, just find where it says "enable Rich Text Editor." Uncheck that box, save at the bottom of the page and you should be already to go with the coding editor (which I find much easier to use). Hope this helps.


 * Hmm, well then I guess it's because there are so many kidou-type zanpakutou in the list. But what do you mean by "editing with source?" Are you meaning source as in wiki code? If you are, then I don't know why you think it's difficult; I've been using it since I first appeared on wikia over a year now. Anyways, I hope that everything works out for you.


 * Hiya, Despair. I was wondering if you'd like to have an RP with me, with you using Masanori and I using either Fūma Kotarō, Naishō Kawahiru or Oda Nobunaga. If you choose the former two, we can start the RP, if you accept, as soon as you'd like. However, if you pick Nobunaga, we'll have to wait till this week. I know you have your RP with Sei coming up, so I thought, "why not have Masanori face another Kawahiru, or someone of equal strength to said Kawahiru?" So, if you wish to accept my offer, I shall be waiting. Ciao~


 * Well, it'll have to wait till tomorrow, seeing as I have two concerts to perform at tonight, so I won't be home till late at night. So, we can start it whenever you get on tomorrow. It's about 5 PM, my time, in case you were wondering around what times I'm on. Some people do, so I just give everyone a heads up. Anyways, I have to leave, so I'll see ya tomorrow. Ciao~

If you would be so kind to start our RP, I'd be greatly appreciative of you. I ask for two reasons: one, I suck at introductions to RP's; and two, I'm trying to finish Oda Nobunaga's personality. So, I need to focus on writing that before I attempt starting an RP.


 * Your go. Would you rather we tell each other when it's our turn to post, or just go by looking at the recent activity page? Also, I changed the name to "Discord between Clansmen," due to the fact that I find it to be intriguing to the reader. I hope you don't mind...


 * Okee doke. It'll be your post in a few minutes(:


 * Hey, I just wanted to say that when doing RP's it's best to write in past tense, as it sounds rather weird when reading something in present tense in a roleplay. Anyways, I was wondering if I could use Naishō's hollow powers in this RP.  If you have read the RP A Game with the Gamemaster, you'd notice that Naishō is developing an inner hollow, and I'd like to use him in this battle.  However, I have yet to post this on Naishō's article, so I will understand completely if you wish for me not to use these abilities.  Your post, by the way.

Well, there's no need, seeing as I get on my phone to check BFFW just about every forty minutes. Anyways, your post when you return.


 * Sorry, I thought you weren't on yet. Usually, most people I RP with aren't on when I am, which is why I said that.


 * Like I told you before, I don't like philosophy or reason being used as zanpakutō; so I wouldn't be helpful in the least.


 * EDIT: Change your post. When I said "impossible to find," I meant impossible to find.


 * ...wow. You have just lost all of the respect I had for you in that one post.  I ask you to change it because you made Masanori do something I stated it was impossible to do, so you go "I'm bored. hardyharhar."  Whatever, I don't care anymore.

Well, I don't play off of deserters in the middle of a RP. If people were fixing your internet, you could have easily just have waited until they were done to change it. That way I wouldn't think that you're just up and leaving. And, I will not continue your "I'm leaving, so come chase me," tactic. They piss me off to no end. So, unless you'd rather not RP anymore, then I suggest changing your post.


 * You didn't have to tell me. I mean, they fixed in, what?  A half hour?  It's not like it doesn't take people hours to reply.  You could have just waited, then changed it.  Then none of this would have transpired.


 * Your post, and, if you had read Naishō's zanpakutō, you'd know that he didn't actually release his shikai. "I want to become" is his initial release command, but it doesn't actually release his shikai.  That's why I like it; 'cause it confuses the enemy into thinking that Naishō had released his zanpakutō, but in truth, he only appeared to have released it.


 * Already did.

Please add something to your post. I have nothing to lead off on, so, with your current post, this is at a standstill. Also, I have no idea what Masanori's talking about, 'cause the black and white has nothing to do with this rp.

Masanori
His powers & abilities are quite detailed, pal. The only problem I see aside from a few grammar issues are the length of your appearance and personality sections. In many ways, those sections are the fundamentals of any article, so try and spruce them up a bit with more details and examples, and you'll make the article a lot better. And you might wanna write some kind of opening paragraph letting people know a little bit a bout his character. It gives a reader more incentive to read more of the article, ya know? Aside from that, you've explained well his abilities and zanpakutō, so nice one on those accounts, Twilight. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  15:25, May 16, 2011 (UTC)


 * Having any control over reality would be taxing, I'd imagine. There's a lot to control after all, and I'd say you'd need quite a degree of concentration to stop anything, like say, reality unwinding during battle from happening. If Philosophy was working alongside that, he might not be fit to concentrate. As for an RP, I can't right now. I've got whatever RP's I'm doing with Raze, the arc I'm now in with both Raze and Yuki, my tourney match with Njalm, one to start with Koukishi and another RP to do with Fire. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  17:21, May 16, 2011 (UTC)


 * Yo. A new group for good guys only? To be honest pal, I don't see the point, personally. We've got the Gotei 13, Royal Guard, Heavens Dark Guardians, and other small groups which would essentially serve the same purpose. Trust me when I say we've got enough good-guy organizations in the GF. If you wanna form one though, then post something to that effect on the GF talk page and see what the others think. After all, I'm only one opinion, and there's a lot more than me in the GF :P <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  18:35, May 18, 2011 (UTC)


 * Njalm and I have already gotten our judges sorted, dude. All we need to do is wait on their decision. The one who gets two outta the three votes is the winner. We decided to put the match on hold until we figure out the winner, since it'll allow us to better build up to the victory and show which one is gonna slow down first and ultimately lose. Its the best way to do things, we figured. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  18:55, May 18, 2011 (UTC)


 * I won't be fit to face him for quite a while, dude. My RP schedule is pretty full right now, and most of 'em aren't one shots either. The majority are ones which follow onto another almost immediately after ones finished :P But if it was anyone, I'd either run with Meian or Rosuto, 'cause those two are easily my strongest. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  19:05, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

Meian's easily my strongest character, and when his Akuma Taisen form is finally revealed; he'll be even stronger. And Rosuto's on the same level in terms of spiritual strength, even though his other abilities do lag behind somewhat. But Seireitou and Kamui are indeed powerful, with some awesome abilities that only make 'em all the better. Well, I reckon you using him is deserved. You did put a lot of work into him, after all. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  19:58, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

RE: Equipment
You've piqued my interest speak your mind :) Albeit I don't have any characters whom could have invented it, or whom would need to use it. Njalm2 19:22, May 16, 2011 (UTC)

R.A.I.S.E
Hmm...it would be good except it woul be considered OP. Think about those who would want to RP with you yet don't use reason or philosophy? They wouln't be able to anything at all and that would just be unfair completely. I know you said even those with the above mentioned powers could use theirs for a period of time before they are unable, but before they run out there is more than enough time to overwhelm and defeat the opponent. So I would vote no. But hey, youcan if you want...that's just my take on it =) And yea I knew what i from...I used some code geass in some of my articles. Heck...I'm still trying to find a way to use Kallen or C.C lol <font color="#0255255" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#2550255" face="Tahoma">Light  20:15, May 16, 2011 (UTC)

Hm? I confused. In one post you say that it completely renders spiritual energy and seals it in its source yet in the next post you say spiritual energy can destroy it? Also you didnt mention that it had a set time period previously, as that would make a major difference. But all in all...its your choice. Do as you will. <font color="#0255255" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#2550255" face="Tahoma">Light  20:41, May 16, 2011 (UTC)

Hmmmm..... Though I'm slightly confused... I think I grasp the concept.. Maybe just a lil more tweak on it ^_^ and it'll be fine..... Lone Black Garuga 02:23, May 17, 2011 (UTC)

Masanori
I guess... Kawahirus are known for their complexity and superiority over others... ^_^ Seireitou is one hell of a good example... The whole GF cant take him hehehe Lone Black Garuga 02:42, May 17, 2011 (UTC)

Be careful then ^_^.... Even that is not a reason for u to underestimate Kamui with Sei using him <_< his BFF's Tite Kubo afterall hehehehe, his got more than 1 trick up his sleeves....

Late Reply
I apologize for the late reply. We could probably RP sometime later this week, as school is nearing its end for me. And sure, you can make a Sinseang Jeongsu for Masanori. --Seireitou-shishō (My True Identity 04:29, May 17, 2011 (UTC)

RE: Hello
um.... o.o okay~ Who will you use?

FFFFUUUUUU- holy shit i just wread his power and abilities.... o-o;; and ... give me acouple minutes to figure out who to use.

You dont have to ask me. I told you that once you had majority then you're back in. Though if this happens again, there are no second chances. <font color="#0255255" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#2550255" face="Tahoma">Light  03:28, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

A resolve of judgement
So what do you want Hayato to do? I mean he can't just say you wanna fight and etc. Although, since he doesn't dismiss the need for violence when something 'evil' is happening, what do you want Hayato to do?<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 06:04, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

That sounds interesting, although he was kicked out of Soul Society because of this dude, we'll go with your idea for now, I think I'll say that he was denied of the promotion for unknown reasons.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 06:33, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

I saw that, anyways, your turn.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 06:39, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

Oh I see, that's fine.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 21:16, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, I had no idea, sorry about that, next time I won't do it, anyway, it's your turn.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 06:24, May 19, 2011 (UTC)

It's your turn by the way.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 22:29, May 20, 2011 (UTC) Oh and the Shusseki technique is basically a kido spell he invented. The dust created from the explosion absorbs a little bit of the opponent's spiritual power, which then gets transferred to all the dust, allowing Hayato to sense him. <font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 22:29, May 20, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, thanks.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 09:09, May 23, 2011 (UTC)

your turn.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 09:21, May 23, 2011 (UTC) For battling, how will we be able to know whether the opponent or something responds to the attack if we can't control the other user's character.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash  (Let's Chat!) 09:21, May 23, 2011 (UTC)

Ideas
I see you want me to pitch you a few ideas. Anyway, I'm PersonaSuperiorDeus (well, you already know that). I'm new here, but I'll give it a shot. This Philosophy is really powerful. ...I don't know very much about Reason either, so I'm going through the articles. So I was thinking for Bankai, Masanori could obtain use of Reason, and meld it and Philosophy into an unexplainable and incomprehensible type of energy. The energy by nature cannot be explained. Since it can't be comprehended, very few things can stop it. Of course, that probably sounds overpowered. I could think of something else later if this isn't good, but this is all I can come up with right now. ...Oh, yeah. Nice to meet you, Td5! PersonaSuperiorDeus 04:38, May 20, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry about that. I didn't know, but I'll check that out. Just wondering, why is Sei's property template there? ...I'm not really good with anything other than reishi and reiatsu when it comes to energies, but if you want help with anything else, just ask. See you later. PersonaSuperiorDeus 04:53, May 20, 2011 (UTC)

I see. Well, my friend on Fairy Tail Fanon (He's Ash9876 here) told me how to put templates on when I first started, so I'll help you out with his advice: "Go into Insert Template, and find the property template, then you can write your username, then click ok and it will automatically create a box at the top of the screen". Hope this helps! PersonaSuperiorDeus 05:09, May 20, 2011 (UTC)

It's great. The amount of detail you've put into it is stunning. 10/10! Good job! PersonaSuperiorDeus 05:18, May 20, 2011 (UTC)

I've got a some RPs I've promised several people (Raze, Lone), so after all that, yeah, of course! PersonaSuperiorDeus 04:00, May 23, 2011 (UTC)

Td5, I was wondering, could I create a Kosumossukihaku (That's a lot to stomach, lol)? PersonaSuperiorDeus 00:29, June 5, 2011 (UTC)

Wha...? All I know is that you said I could create a Kosumossukihaku. Sorry about that, I think you probably did message the wrong person, Td5. Though I'm not so good at these sort of things. PersonaSuperiorDeus 05:57, June 5, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, that's what you meant. Ahaha, sorry for that, pal. I wasn't thinking straight at the time. I'm perfectly fine, I just misinterpreted your question. PersonaSuperiorDeus 06:07, June 5, 2011 (UTC)

It'd vary my cast up a bit (full of Shinigami, one Mototsu, and whatever the heck Nika is), and I'm going to use her to RP with Lone if so. PersonaSuperiorDeus 06:21, June 5, 2011 (UTC)

What? I think you've got the wrong guy, sorry. I didn't have any poison Sake Zan on any of my characters, though you suggested what Zan Hizashi could have to me, Td5. PersonaSuperiorDeus 05:33, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

Haha, no worries. I've already thought of a Zan for Hizashi anyway. See you later. PersonaSuperiorDeus 06:12, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

Td5, could you look at my Mototsu race if you have the time, please? PersonaSuperiorDeus 05:09, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

About Griz
Well apparantly this what ten said "I'm here to inform you that, after an encounter with Grizz and his fake account on the chat, we have come to the same conclusion Raze has. We have numerous factors to consider here, including lying to you all as his fellow users and us as the administration team, multiple accounts, and vandalism, even if it was of his own stuff. We all (the admins) debated the facts and the story both Grizz and his supposed "cousin" gave us, and came to a unanimous consensus to ban Grizzka. At first, it was just going to be a month long ban, for harassment, however, after discovering that it really was a fake account and that Grizzka had done all of this, primarily to get attention, we have decided to ban him permanently." And after what I saw on here well I can't blame them for this conclusion. He brought it on himself =/ <font color="#0255255" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#2550255" face="Tahoma">Light  04:45, May 21, 2011 (UTC)

Yea...Idk what brought him to that..I realized that he was doing it because I myself have the experience with dealing with those trying to use the faux family excuse. Its quite sad but then again...I suppose griz had some things going on in his life. /but now we won't ever know...as for removing his name...I forbid that as he was one of the founding members. <font color="#0255255" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#2550255" face="Tahoma">Light  05:17, May 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re"Hello
hi its nice to meet you td2 i am sento for short. and is there something i can help you with?

(Sentonara 05:02, May 21, 2011 (UTC))

well yes and no i never have really,my thing is i just want to try to be a little more known and just to have my work for people to enjoy.even though i make villians mostly lol.i am sorry but that has to be my thing,but i can give it a shot why not i need to try to be on both ends i have often asked other users to see what they think from alot of the stuff i get back they really like my stuff,though really my spelling and crap but i am working on that lol.But i am shocked that alot of the members of the gravity force likes some of my work one of my most remeberable moment is from i think kenji that he was imperssed with Gaiten and just posted it a few mins ago that day.and i often taking much of the stuff taken from the other users and then rebuild up my characters i started out a know nothing on here and now its like i have been on here for years.lol but i do have a question for you this maybe out of left feild,is it possible that one can become a member of the gravity force ? i have seen many of yours guys work and i love it. i am just wondering if you don't take in new members i understand i was wondeirng thats all.

Thanks

(Sentonara 05:24, May 21, 2011 (UTC))

thank you very much i will see about the character and such which you gave me and i will ask kenji or raze about the stuff to become a member and thanks i myself really feel kinda lucky that you would have a vote for me thank you very much Td :)

(Sentonara 05:33, May 21, 2011 (UTC))

Hi how you doin

i did look over masanori and that other page.well first off it was very good,but the only thing i notice was with the appearance and personality on masanori.what i often do with my characters i listen their personality as in their actions and emotions.i did see that with masanori but you could have gone into a little more for him such as he has a great love for his brother and cousin.maybe you could explain how thier relastionship can be like do they hang out alot and stuff. like for my character Koushaku,i explained the different relationships he has with his partners and what they would do as in do they respect eachother are each other all the time.

with his appearance very good,but i often discribe maybe if he wears like different outfits like Setsuhiro i said that when he is in the soul society sometime he wears a different outfit to hide his face and such.Like if he is in the world of living would he wear something else like jeans and top kinda guy or something else.

as for the philosophy it is a very interresting power and stuff.i think that was very well written by you.I know myself have created the Reiniku race what i am think is it a yes and no within it being under a race what i am thinking is its like a fullbring every human has it but it has to be devloped.i think i am in the same area with the philosophy.i personality like it because.

this is just coming from me,within buddhism they have almost the same princeple with it to be in compelete harmony.the same princeple can be said about the buddhists they wish to reach that harmony.but bottom line they both are very good if you could make the changes i suggested it would be prefect.as for the philosophy its prefect the way it is.

(Sentonara 18:05, May 21, 2011 (UTC))

Yo
Well Twilight, it seems you've taken my words to heart, at least to some degree, I can see that you're trying to improve your articles, which is good start, just keep things up. Its a long road to recovery in some cases, but given your zeal for the wiki, I'm sure you'll continue to grow both as a person and a writer in the future.

I have been keeping track of some of the things you've been doing, so as a friend I'll offer some advice. When roleplaying with your characters, you tend to....address your opponents in the same manner regardless of your actual character. Insults and vulgar language are common, even amongst those who are apparently, "soft-spoken" or those who seek peace. In any given battle, you should try to refrain from outright insulting your opponent, possibly even complimenting them on their prowess, while your character continues to dodge their assaults while using counter-attacks. Given what you've written about Masanori, this could be something to attribute to his nature.

Just try to keep your character's personalities in mind when roleplaying them, as it can be difficult to try and visualize different personalities, and "roleplay" as them when they're so different than your own. In such cases, dont imagine that you are "roleplaying" as the character, but instead write it from the perspective of a author whose putting the character they created through the given situation. If you keep that in mind, its much easier to differentiate between yourself and the character your writing about. Well, just wanted to say good luck to ya, and keep up the good work. --- Illuminate Void (Talk) 20:10, May 21, 2011 (UTC)

I think you're overthinking it too much in regards to your ruling species. I've only made one race and thats the Diabolus, because I wanted them to be distinct from Hollows. Creating an entire species isnt...necessary, so as much as getting down the concept of what they do. Unless you plan on creating a whole bunch of them, then just creating the Kishimetsu should suffice for you, and even then, you only need to devote a paragraph or two to describing what it is they do and their purpose. Other than that, I cant be of much help. Like I said, our creations are somewhat different, and even if I did create the Kishimetsu we'd end up butting heads more often than not due to differences in roles/concept, etc and what I visualize them as and you. Even in my "Turn Back the Pendulum" the whole...creation of the gods is left ambiguous, at best, and open to change if need be. So in short, I'll have to kindly decline your offer. --- Illuminate Void (Talk) 20:56, May 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re:rp
No thank you, I have alot on my plate and can barely keep up with the rp im in with zaraikou at the moment.. sorry.--Fenix-Taichō (Request an Audience) 04:31, May 23, 2011 (UTC)

RE: Hey
Sure but I can't right now because I am writing a paper for class. Haha. I'll give you my thoughts/ideas for his Bankai later tomorrow. Cheers!

RE:Slots
Well not to bring up old wounds, but it wouldn't be fair to give you the spot seeing as you did leave the GF at one point. Who knows when another situation such as that might arise, but in saying that I reccommend you either go for the now vacant 2nd and 8th spots or make sure no one else wants the Primera spot and go from there. Though I must warn you, I want the Primera espada to be of the highest quality possible, so I will be critiquing everything. Sorry if it sounds mean but I have to bring down the mantle per se. <font color="#0255255" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#2550255" face="Tahoma">Light  21:52, May 24, 2011 (UTC)

Yea..if I said it then why are you asking? Hahahaha silly goose =P <font color="#0255255" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#2550255" face="Tahoma">Light  19:47, May 25, 2011 (UTC)

Hmmm..why are you telling me if there nothing even there? <font color="#0255255" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#2550255" face="Tahoma">Light  02:10, May 26, 2011 (UTC)

Kaosu Souzou
Evidently I used a somewhat similar premise, in Overture of the King, although mine relates specifically to japanese mythology. I also left it ambiguous at best at "what/whom" were the first to emerge, and how long ago they did so. This way other stories relating to the beginning can emerge.

Anyways, as for the story itself, its a short introduction, and while there are a few errors (mostly uses of pronouns in my opinion) its writtenly fairly well. Im not exactly sure of the tone you want to set for this, which will depend entirely on your use of vocabularly to describe how the events play out. If you want, look at my story above, its not much but it could serve to help you if you. Adding a bit of..mysticism to this could enhance the mood, though to do that you may need to use...more...symoblism in your writing. But other than you've got a good base, but I found my own story difficult to write, as I modified it several times. It helps to speak out loud, so as to help you set the tone, pacing, etc of what you're writing. --- Illuminate Void (Talk) 23:59, May 24, 2011 (UTC)

Masanori
Hmm, no I dont. Like I said to Raze, for me I've always established a theme to my characters, from their name down to the abilities, its all part of this neat little package. Its why I have so few characters overall. Well at least "main ones". As for Masanori, I'm not sure of the connection he has to his Zanpakutou, and aside from you creating Masanori for Sei, if there isnt much else for his creation, I can't get any ideas from that either. You may need to establish a story-arc or plan if you want to develop Masanori. That or elaborate more on his personality and how it connects to his Zanpakutou. What sort of theme if any or archetype did you have when creating this character. Anything regarding his history? Future? etc. --- Illuminate Void (Talk) 21:21, May 26, 2011 (UTC)

Seems to me that you might be better off making his Zanpakutou Spirit the spiritual manifestation of Masanori's Philosophy. Or rather, his power/control over philosophy has changed the very nature of his Zanpakutou. In this case, I would make it so that Masanori only has an incomplete version of Philosophy, but while manifesting his Zanpakutou he gains the "complete" Philosophy. It would probably have the appearance of a god/goddess perhaps an androgynous being or something. For an RP character its important to have weaknesses, and Philosophy by itself is already powerful enough. Im not sure how you envisioned Philosophy, but you should probably stick with only one aspect for Masanori. Giving him...a box, a means of confining his abilities, is necessary, as its the only way for you to start thinking "outside" of the box and expand upon them. Otherwise, his powers will seem odd, unrelated and slapped together. Well thats all the advice I have for Masanori. Oh and, yes I would give Masanori's spirit a level of spiritual energy, be it he has a lot, or like my character Kenshin Yagami during his Bankai, quanity simply becomes meaningless. His reserves refill too fast for it to even matter. After Overwhelming Spiritual Power, there really isnt a point to quantifying it anymore. The point is made, the character has a lot, big deal, only question is, can you make it interesting enough for it to matter? --- Illuminate Void (Talk) 21:51, May 26, 2011 (UTC)

Avaron would be the japanese romaji seeing as "L's" dont exist in the langauge. As for the other translation:

Saijin (最神, lit. "Highest Deity"). --- Illuminate Void (Talk) 01:38, May 27, 2011 (UTC)

Just so you know...
It's your post when you can(:

I think I will decline on your offer, only because this character is a bit too powerful for my taste, and even if i used my best character it wouldn't be a fair fight, due to Masanori's large amount of abilities and lack of weaknesses to exploit........-- Feel the Rage  (Talk)  07:09, May 25, 2011 (UTC)

I don't see why not. --Seireitou-shishō (My True Identity 21:52, May 26, 2011 (UTC)

My decision about RPing your character may have been premature and if your offer still stands I would like to RP against Masanori, mainly because Rping against a character of this magnitude and power would surely be interesting, so do let me know, and I would also like to apologise if I sounded harsh or rude earlier, that was not my intention........-- Feel the Rage  (Talk)  09:55, May 29, 2011 (UTC)

Well then, I suppose Saigo will be fighting against a deity like being, not that it matters, since I am confident he can hold his own or even overcome this advesary. But let me remind you, he is not any regular Captain level shinigami, so i hope you don't treat hi like one. And also I read through bits of the articles you posted on my talk page, and I have a basic understanding of it, so if you don't mind starting the RP, we can get started.....-- Feel the Rage  (Talk)  11:02, May 29, 2011 (UTC)

I'll be using Saigo Murakami in the RP, and I don't have problem with him using Spiritual Power or Philosophy, and if you don't mind starting the RP, we can get started.....-- Feel the Rage  (Talk)  11:11, May 29, 2011 (UTC)

Like i said, it doesn't make much difference, but anyways I posted so its your turn......-- Feel the Rage  (Talk)  11:34, May 29, 2011 (UTC)

No problem mate, take your time, I'll be busy as well.....-- Feel the Rage  (Talk)  16:27, May 29, 2011 (UTC)

You Post mate on Lost Temprance, I know I've been away for a while due to my exams, but I am back for a week before I head out for Vacation, so we need to get this RP moving in that time, if you have any problems let me know, cheers......-- Feel the Rage  (Talk)  08:04, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re: Pic
Hmm, thank you for the picture, but I don't think I'll use it. Might I suggest that you use the picture yourself for a future character? Kiyoshi's lover mayhaps?

Njalm2 06:41, May 27, 2011 (UTC)

"Homosexual Title Match"
Kiyoshi vs Hiroya, eh? Well that'd certainly be quite interesting; the winner likely becomes worthy of the title of "Strongest Homosexual Character on the Wiki" :P - though I feel compelled to note that Hiroya never spars, any battle would have to be initiated by Kiyoshi for obvious reasons.

Hiroya also has no idea that he has Philosophy, and thus he would never ask Kiyoshi for help, though I suppose Kiyoshi might be aware of the fact that Hiroya does indeed have such. As for the timing of the battle, I suppose it would be somewhere after the events of the Valhalla Tournament.

Kido, being magic doesn't follow the laws of nature, something which by extension would render Kiyoshi's abilities useless against it.

Oh and, well we are currently waiting for the judgement of our three judges - namely Iluminate Void, Koukishi and Razeluxe. Though they spend an awful lot of time deciding.

Njalm2 07:23, May 27, 2011 (UTC)

RE: Segunda Espada
Psh..I dont know, its your character. If you have a theme or archetype just go for that, I'm sure that if you try you can put as much detail as you need to for this character. Personally? If I had to choose for myself I'd go with the light manipulation since its more like manipulation of waves on the electromagnetic spectrum. That has a bit more potential than poison, and telekinesis is overdone. Finally, as I recall Njalm's Alejandro Nuevo specializes in the use of Cero. --- Illuminate Void (Talk) 19:35, May 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reply
Well, today was my Calculus exam, and... that's pretty much it. And trained on my Moon-Moo form. How about you? --Seireitou-shishō (My True Identity 22:57, May 27, 2011 (UTC)

Sup?!
^_^ hows life treating u td-kun? Lone Black Garuga 05:11, May 28, 2011 (UTC)

uhmm that would be interesting ^_^ ok... but u can start it Lone Black Garuga 06:40, May 28, 2011 (UTC)

Ur go Td-kun! ^_^ the character is going along quite well... Hope to see him improve more and get involve throughout ur stories.. Lone Black Garuga 03:28, May 30, 2011 (UTC)

Custodio
I like this guy, curiousity really makes him stand out among other arrancar great job, history's nice as well, although grammar could be improved, it probably will be improved eventually. It's your go in our RP<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 00:18, May 29, 2011 (UTC)

So our RP is finished I presume, sorry for adding new abilities without telling. Although it was a great RP, I was surprised you bought in Kaosu, although it was still nice, so it's ok.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 10:07, May 29, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I see, anyways, I really like Custodio, his abilities are great, especially the Pesquisa, which is surprising as almost no arrancar use pesquisa these days, nice. Oh, and for the personality section, just for more detail, you could describe where his curiosity arised from.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 10:19, May 29, 2011 (UTC)

I thought so, thanks for the warning though.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 21:33, May 29, 2011 (UTC)

Hi Td
Hi How you doing

I am wondering Td could you look at Ankoku though he is very very new. I am wondering what you think of him, if you don't want to it I understand. 戦闘丸,Sento-Sama 03:09, May 29, 2011 (UTC)

Well thanks Td, but if a diety that you want I do have one for tsudzuru she is a hindu god. but I as I said within her overview many pagan religons want her to be named as one of the gods. She is Kali.

戦闘丸,Sento-Sama 03:28, May 29, 2011 (UTC)

Well td I can see your point, Kali is not really wordship. With Tsudzuru, I made to be more or less like a monk well a fallen monk is maybe his better term. I see where your comming from, well it seems that Kali hasn't been an issues. She has been added a few weeks ago, and I was careful with many of kali's things. I Often just use her as an example like the rp I am doing right now, Setsuhiro and Ciel. Kali was only said about, I have it as that only a thing that is spoken of. Not an enemy or ally. Though with tsudzuru he sees her as a mother than a god. She only had one connect with him and that is by his asura form. Then other than that she is just spoken of. So she doesn't have a role.

Btw, I think some of the adim have seen kali and she hasn't been deleted. Hopefully not -.-, but like I said she is only a thing that is spoken of. 戦闘丸,Sento-Sama 03:54, May 29, 2011 (UTC)

-Sigh-
No one told you to give up your spot,, you did that on your own accord. Don't go trying to blame me like I forced you into doing something. And by leaving comments like that on the page, you still give off the impression of a bratty child in passive agressive way. <font color="#0255255" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#2550255" face="Tahoma">Light  20:34, May 30, 2011 (UTC)

First don't compare yourself to Griz as we gave him chances because he came asking for help with his zanpakuto and then did or did not do whatever transpired. You on the otherhand just up and left becuase you wanted pretty much wanted to se how people would respond. Those are two different things entirely, and no one said you are five, you threw that out there (by my count) twice now. And honestly, I'm quite sick of you stating that you think that I'm seeing you in some kind of negativelight or thinking of you in some bad way. I never did once up until now because frankly I'm quite sick of arguing with you over pointless things. Good day. <font color="#0255255" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#2550255" face="Tahoma">Light  20:45, May 30, 2011 (UTC)

New tournament
I can't give you details as of yet. As soon as I get at least six participants, I shall create the page, which will have all the rules for the tourney. Just so you know, unless a character has 600 stat-wise, they're allowed the participate. I will set character limitations on that page, so stay tuned. Try getting the other members of Gravity Force involved as well. (:
 * I'd go with the poison-type, seeing as a scientist would be more inclined to study a multitude of toxins, which could be incorporated into the zanpakutou. However, that's just my take on it; feel free to totally disregard what I just said.

School
Yeah, I just finished up, and have my graduation this Saturday. I can finally begin working on my Baguazhang techniques, along with Taekwondo. --Seireitou-shishō (My True Identity 23:46, May 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * Uh... I live in the United States, dude. ~_~ Anyways, I'll probably get to our RP sometime this week. I'm assisting in some renovation on Naruto Fanon, so I'm trying to finish up my Kōkiorosu members and some of Sōkudo's followers. --Seireitou-shishō [[File:Seireitou's signature picture.jpg]] (My True Identity 23:52, May 30, 2011 (UTC)

RE: Translation Request
Kenpu Eizou (絹布影像, lit. "Silk Silhouette") --- Illuminate Void (Talk) 05:34, May 31, 2011 (UTC)

Interesting Zanpakutou. Its useful but not overtly powerful or possessing overpowering offense. Great job. Oh and if I may, I'd like make a request. If you dont mind, would it be possible for Tsuchimikado Shikizaki to have Incomplete Philosophy? I was looking for a means of giving him a power boost, since he's going to rely entirely on his martial arts and magic (I havent decided on his Zanpakutou yet, im changing it around), but I think the Philosophy of Destruction fits quite well with his character. He helped orchestrate the Sengoku Era of Japan, basically condeming destruction everywhere, and allowed himself to be killed, ensuring his "destruction" so to speak. I could go into detail, but I think that his character fits, given his mind-set and soothsayer abilities. Who better to possess the aspect of destruction in regards to Philsophy than a man who can peer into the future and know when it must be done? And do nothing to stop it? Perhaps even ensuring that it happens? Well I'm going to crash for the night. I'll respond tomorrow morning to any messages. Good night. --- Illuminate Void (Talk) 04:55, June 1, 2011 (UTC)

Editor
Well, then I guess your screwed. I've used the coded editor since day one, as the rte is quite annoying to use when placing a template on an article. Since I've never not used the coded editor, it works just fine for me. Sorry.


 * Yeah... if I'm ever editing while not signed in, it's me on my phone. My phone lags terribly once there is a certain amount of characters that have been typed here, so it makes posting on things like rp's incredibly stressful.  But I promise that I haven't forgotten and it should be your turn in just a few moments.


 * If you had listened to what I said on the GF talk page, you would know that I said we will be waiting until next week Friday to see if Hiroshi can participate. As for the rp, I won't be stopping anything because we're starting up a tournament.  I don't put all my time into one thing, 'cause then I lose interest of the previous project, and bye-bye to that.  So, no, we won't be finishing it until it actually finishes.


 * Well, I don't really care, considering I find being drunk is idiotic, to say the least. For your twenty-first birthday, of course I plan on drinking, but only buzzed and not shit-faced.  I don't condone drinking ever, and my birthday will be the first and final time I ever have alcohol.  Also, you turn.


 * EDIT: Your post the characters in your team on their team pages. Just look at Juniors.
 * EDIT #2: Yes, it was reiryoku, but, whether I change it or not, Naishō's zanpakutō's ability can easily do the exact same thing. In fact, if I really wanted to win, I could make Masanori unable to use philosophy because of Naishō's zanpakutō.  Of course, I don't really care who wins, so I most likely won't be using the aforementioned plan.

It's not that I don't like it, it's that I just find it unethical. I mean, even reason doesn't have such power, and it's supposedly able to completely destroy a person through contact. And reality-warping powers? Seriously; if you are gonna have all these side powers, I will not accept reality-warping. If you use it in this rp, I will stop it right then and there, because Masanori has used many more powerful attacks than Naishō, and yet he's still not even that badly injured/exhausted. Just a forewarning. I shall change my post, but what I just said still stands...


 * Sure.

RE: Njalm2
Not at all TD :) I'd be impressed if you managed to do that though. I think Minoru has an interesting personality, if abit general. I generally don't like characters whom try to avoid things that cannot be avoided, after all, were he to become mad - he wouldn't know he was. I also don't like evil characters whom admit that they're evil and all such archetypes. But otherwise he is interesting.

A chat with Arthfael, eh - I don't think that'd be a pleasant conversation for Kaosu, and the only way he'd be capable of talking to Arthfael would be for him to enter Elysium himself and request an audience - depending on Arthfaels mood it might go well, or it may end in complete and utter tragedy. Besides, I feel compelled to note that I don't think talking about the future with Arthfael would have any purpose given how he's unable to influence the Human World directly.

Kaosu is a ridicolously powerful character, but he's not Omnipotent; Arthfael is Omnipotent when he's in Elysium, which he always is. Kaosu would in all honesty be incapable of even wounding him other than a superficial gash, killing him would thus be all but impossible by extension - Arthfael as opposed to that could simply erase him out of existance; Arthfael's power is as such incalculable - he's not simply more powerful than anyone else, Arthfaels power cannot in fact be called power for the sole reason that it is incomprehensible. If Arthfael was capable of leaving hell, which would likely include a lot of vessels and thus dilate his power by billions of times, it'd be possible that he'd be on Kaosu's level.

You've got alot of what the Optimates can do and are wrong - the fact is, that none of them are Diabolus; hell they're not even actual beings, they are pictures, pigments and representations of something much greater; besides even if they were, Philosophy likely doesn't have enough power to destroy beings of their magnitude, or even of the magnitude of the average Daemon-class and above; the greatest weaknesses to Diabolus are Silver and even that has its limits. I've chosen to interpret purifying abilities as something akin to burns - when Flamen faced off against that character of yours he was painfully affected by her presence - their Aura are in a sense damaging to them, but such effects are quite limited. Kaosu is also a very unbalanced character in that he can move freely, he has no restrictions at all - he can simply travel wherever he pleases, do whatever he wants and no one have the capacity to challenge him. For someone of his power that is in my opinion completely ridicolous - if he is what you've made him out to be he would likely be bound to something and his abilities to influence the world should be quite inhibited. The Optimates are bound to hell after all, and each of them are effectively Omnipotent while they're present.

Njalm2 22:01, June 3, 2011 (UTC)

It should also be noted that the "purification" abilities associated with your Kosumosukihaku would likely be useless against the Optimates. For the same reason Sesshoumaru was largely immune to the effects of "purification" due to his Youki being "pure" the same would hold true for any Optimates and any Arcus Daemon imho. They've gotten to a point where any "impurities" burned off by the Kosumosukihaku would actually empower them instead of weaken/kill them. --- Illuminate Void (Talk) 01:06, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, I'll do it - I promised to make a Kosumi-whatever at one point after all. :) Njalm2 23:45, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

Yo
I've already seen it, pal. I wasn't on before 'cause my router is basically F'd with very little connectivity at the minute. It worked a while this morning and then died again shortly after. I'm now working off my neighbors wireless signal, who were kind enough to let me use it until my new router comes on Monday. Anyways, on the subject of the winner, its your turn to post on Kenji and Hiroya's tourney match, 'cause the match is pretty much finished. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  17:08, June 4, 2011 (UTC)


 * To avoid overloading Kenji with new powers as a consequence of Zettaiteki, I was wondering if it'd be alright to slowly bring its powers, and the effect they'll have on Kenji himself, to the fore slowly? Basically, since the weapon has its own spiritual energy that Kenji could effectively use himself should he need to in certain situations, I was wondering if Hiroya's sealing spell could work, but not in the intended manner. Instead of sealing the weapon completely, it only cuts Kenji off from using its spiritual energy. He'll still be able to develop techniques and use the sword, but it would take a while for the weapons true potential to reveal itself; mainly because like all Kidō, the seal would eventually erode with time. This sound okay to you, Twilight? <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  18:17, June 4, 2011 (UTC)


 * That works fine with me, pal. There will be a time, either through Hiroya voluntarily removing the seal or it simply eroding to the point it breaks, though it'll take quite an amount of time to happen. It gives Kenji the chance to familiarize himself with the blade, but having it with merely lieutenant-level power is alright; 'cause its still a good deal of power, though pretty small that it makes little difference to a powerful combatant. I'll run the plan by Njalm so we all know what we're doing, as he'll be the one who describes the spells actual activation since he knows more about the mechanics of the sacred spells than any of us do :P Anyways, I'll add the actual weapon to Kenji's article tomorrow at some point, 'cause I'm spending my time working through Ashni and getting her powers and what-not established for my next individual arc, as well as my other gen2 characters. P.S. Oh yeah, its your turn on the tourney round, pal. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  20:42, June 4, 2011 (UTC)

Just as a heads up, pal. When my post is done, it'll be Njalm's turn, as he set the spell up in such a way that it'll activate when Kenji receives the sword. Just to let you know :P <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  22:12, June 4, 2011 (UTC)


 * Cheers for the heads up, dude. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  16:22, June 6, 2011 (UTC)


 * Its being a good router right now - maybe its finally taken my threats seriously lol. Managed to get my post done, though. Outta curiosity, whats the other prize, pal? <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  20:53, June 8, 2011 (UTC)


 * I'll work with a brace on the handguard then that'll basically do the same thing. Its basically so the spiritual energy can be hidden so it doesn't cause adverse reactions to the human world, and since Kenji does technically live there, its an important point for him :P I'm a firm believer that those who are dead should remain as such, though, I do have one thing in mind that would save me a lot of time - 'cause I wouldn't need to write an arc explaining it all. Rosuto Shiba is stuck in the Wandering Spiritual World; which is a realm explored in Bleach: The 3rd Phantom for the DS. Usually, its next to impossible to enter or leave, so if Kaosu could teleport him out and send him to Horiwari, it'd save me a lot of time and effort. That be okay with you, pal? <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  21:33, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

I'll make my post in a sec then. The thing is, that's a youtube video your looking to add, ain't it? I'd need to download the actual video and post it that way, and I'm not doing that, pal. If you want it added, you'll have to download it yourself and upload it as you would any other picture, dude. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  18:29, June 10, 2011 (UTC)


 * Cheers for that dude, but ask before adding it next time and I'll get round to it when I'm sprucing up other parts. After my next few RP's with Kenji there'll be a few new abilities added as well. Anyways, I enjoyed the tourney. What I'm glad for is that we managed to finish the thing. The Kanmuri Taikai didn't get that luxury. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  19:42, June 13, 2011 (UTC)


 * I read that at the bottom of the tourney match. Kenji would probably keep an artifact like that in a safe place. The [Mukashi Shinden]] is a spiritual retreat of sorts for the Yuengiri, so currently only four people know of existence. I can keep the key there to be reclaimed whenever its needed, pal. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  19:58, June 13, 2011 (UTC)


 * Point this new fellow in the direction of Kenji Hiroshi and Van Satonaka :P Those two have quite the number of tricks up their sleeves and more power than they know what to do with. With a few others backing them, not many would beat 'em :P In all seriousness though, that sounds pretty fun. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  20:12, June 13, 2011 (UTC)


 * Then point Haru in their direction lol. Believe me, after Part II of my stories are finished with and Part III begins, you won't recognize Kenji. Big changes are coming his way :P <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  20:24, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

Looking forward to seeing what you come up with, pal :P <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  20:53, June 13, 2011 (UTC)


 * Awesome dude. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  18:21, June 17, 2011 (UTC)


 * The idea Void and Njalm gave is pretty solid, so I look forward to seeing the changes you three come up with, dude. Good luck with that :P <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  18:51, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

RE: Philosophy
Well you probably shouldnt do a Zanpakutou Rebellion arc, as thats already been done before. Though I am keen on the idea of having my own Cosmos Soul being weakened, for whatever reason. As for Philosophy, yes it should probably have a limit of sorts, though not necessarily time. If you do, it would be similar to a Hollow Mask in that aspect, but use of it should always end in extensive fatigue and exhaustion. Also if you dont mind, I'd like to correct a few formatting issues and clarify some things with the Kosumosukihaku article. If you dont like the changes or rewording, your more than welcome to change it back. --- Illuminate Void (Talk) 23:57, June 4, 2011 (UTC)

Idea
Hi, Despair. I was wondering if I could have the one and only character that can destroy philosophy. The reason I ask this as they will be the former Captain-Commander and their zanpakutou has the ability to destroy anything by using it's own kinetic energy against it. If you say I can't, I completely understand; if you say I can, awesome! I hope to hear from you asap.


 * I guess that I can't do that, 'cause that is not how my zanpakutō works. See here for what it does (scroll down to the bottom of the section).


 * Okay; and thanks for the name, but I already had one in mind.


 * Actually, it was both. I did it because it was your work, so you'd be the one to decide it, but I also did it 'cause if I did it without your permission, you, with a few others, would probably bitch at me about it, and I do not allow bitchiness about something so dumb as the internet.  So, whatever you decide is fine with me, and here's the character that'll have the ability. Ciao~

The wording's fine, but you could always just say that quincies and Orijinaru can completely dispel philosophy. But, whatever; your choice. And here's the completed character.


 * No, I'd rather not do another rp at the moment. Also, for future reference, I'd rather that you'd post a new reply in your original section, as I find more than one section per user incredibly unorganized (thank my extreme ocd for that one).


 * It wasn't that hard, so I thought I'd save Ketchum the trouble.


 * Sorry, but I have to focus on my own characters that aren't yet finished before I do anything else.

Philosophy
Well technically speaking Van could beat philosophy with Jishaku as it doesnt use spiritual energy but works by breaking down the balance of forces within any technique. Onto the question at hand, first well you really gotta stop referring to yourself as a previous admin. Just makes you sound ridiculous as it has no merit here. Not trying to be mean just honest. But hmm...well two...you can change the abilities you hae listed. its not wrong. If its to make it better then that's what you have to do or else everyone would be using something that's broken. You see what I'm coming from? And Hmm Idk..honestly I think you should change it a bit so that there is something that can break it down as that would be OP if used against someone who's zanpakuto is mainly for asorbing spirital particles. I mean you can make it resistant against absorption but there should be something that can destroy it. Like make an anti-matter for philosophy called like doubt or soemthing =P. <font color="#0255255" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#2550255" face="Tahoma">Light  03:33, June 5, 2011 (UTC)

Actually if philosophy is a form of energy then it would have mass and if it as mass then it would count as matter so antimatter would still apply =P Maybe you should stick to a chef. Jk jk. <font color="#0255255" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#2550255" face="Tahoma">Light  03:50, June 5, 2011 (UTC)

Haha you're talking to a magic fanatic here =p Magic in its purest form is all realtive of energy being used to perform wonders that humans don't have any idea of how they happened so lable them as magic (or in some cases magiks) SO in that regard magic would be considered energy and ipso facto it would be matter =P BUt even if philosophy is base don the roots of amgic then it would still be energy based due to the simple history of magic revolving around the practical use of enery to perform "miracles". And on the page itself it is referenced as energy several times further proving my point xP <font color="#0255255" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#2550255" face="Tahoma">Light  04:07, June 5, 2011 (UTC)

Well seeing as you just said that in an incredibly rude way as if you control what we talk about, no I do not wish to hear your idea. <font color="#0255255" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#2550255" face="Tahoma">Light  04:14, June 5, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry to intrude, but it seems this conversation has already come and passed, but Twilight, I did reword how the "Complete Protection from Negative or Dispelling Effects" worked for Tsuchimikado as I interperted it. As the ability is it written it seems...overpowered but also not, and very confusing, so instead I worded it in a way that was what you probably intended. For Tsuchimikado it simply allows him to use his abilities in situations where he normally wouldnt be able to. It also provides a viable defense against abilities such as the manipulation of reality, or things that would counter-act his use of spiritual energy such as the sekkiseki stone. Not only could he freely pass through the barrier, he could cast his magic through it. I think the basic concept of Philosophy is interesting but it still needs some revision in some parts. And if you do revise it, thats fine, just let us know what the changes are going to be ahead of time before making it "concrete". Because as written he's not "manipulating" Philosophy or the energy itself, rather he's using it to coat his own powers, which in augments them to varying degree's. I suppose its more similar to the Chakra Shroud of a Jinchuuriki, as opposed to anything else. It seems Complete Philosophy would be the actual use of this energy as opposed to just harnessing it like a cloak. At least thats what my interpertation. --- Illuminate Void (Talk) 15:15, June 5, 2011 (UTC)

Norwegian Translations
Alright, I've decided to help you flesh out some translations for some of the words you've been using.

Varukirri = Valkyrie

Valhalla = Valhall

Hope this helps, and I happen to BE norwegian so I can transelate anything you want.

Sure, I'm all ears!

Njalm2 12:01, June 5, 2011 (UTC)

Opinion
Hi how you doin Td?

I am wondering, could you take a look at Masashi (He is still in progress and he is a bit freaky) but could I have your opinion on him. 戦闘丸,Sento-Sama (come and see) 02:40, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

Hey Td, I did manage to get Masashi's powers up and into his page. So when you get time, can you look over him and see what you think of his stuff. Thanks 戦闘丸,Sento-Sama (come and see) 04:00, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

RE: Longwei
Twilight, I have to apologize for the late response, I'm not ignoring you or your suggestions on what to do with Longwei, I do appreciate them as they've been helpful in narrowing down exactly what had happened to make him so weak. Although I wont be using the aforementioned suggestions, you gave me, like I said they did help narrow the list down drastically. Anyways, I'm still in the process of constructing him and so forth, but its going to be awhile, since I still have one last character left on the back burner who I've neglected for so long - Dorothy. Once she's finished with her...revisions, I'll be clear to go with Longwei. Once again, thanks for the help. --- Illuminate Void (Talk) 02:57, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I've been trying to catch up on some reading, and my weekened was pretty busy. Lately when I make updates, its a bunch of updates at one time, given how things are changing around my place. Just needed a break from everything, some time to get some fresh prespective, new ideas, etc. But thanks for asking man, how are things going on your end? --- Illuminate Void (Talk) 20:15, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

I would suggest looking at this: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Takamagahara. Although short it could provide some inspiration. If you're going with predominately japanese culture, than perhaps you should consider some japanese mythology in the Kosumosukihaku. They appear to have quite a number of similiarties to the Kotoamatsukami which is where I was in a way basing Longwei off of, given how you've presented them. I could go on about the similiarities between the Shinigami and the other kami, but thats for another day. Just check those two links out and see if anythings interesting. --- Illuminate Void (Talk) 22:04, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

I hinted that there were many wars in the past, so whichever one it doesnt matter really. As for becoming the king permanently that also doesnt make sense. How could there have been three kings before Kiyoshi if that was the case? Although at the moment, there is actually very little reason for Longwei to meet with Kiyoshi and even if they did, it would probably turn violent. He's still a bit sore from having his powers sealed and the subsequent banishment. I need him to mellow out a bit, and grow in strength. He's currently one of the weakest characters on the BFF too. So he'll need to gain some power. --- Illuminate Void (Talk) 23:30, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

It would make sense. You have permission to make any reference you want to Longwei, though do ask for my permission if it concerns specific events in their history. Not that you havent already, but just reiterating. --- Illuminate Void (Talk) 21:46, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

Ya know, one thing I've been curious about is, the construction of how a Cosmos Soul attains their powers, and why there is a large number of just..."ordinary" souls that exist. In the Cosmos Soul description they seem to be more of a collection of very powerful souls. As opposed to a race, they seem more like a family or a Clan. You might want to explain why they arent born immortal, and besides explaining the effects of immortaility (which you go into far too much detail than is necessary), you should explain why the immortaility itself is there. What triggers the immortaility if its something to be attained? Sorry if I seem nosy regarding the race, but thats just how I am. --- Illuminate Void (Talk) 19:41, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

Void's translation sites
From what him and I have discussed, Void, as well as myself, use http://nihongodict.com and http://translate.google.com when needed. Nihongodict is more useful for individual words, but it's way more accurate than google translate. Well, I hope that this helped. (:

hm
Hmm honestly, it was fair but personally i didn't like how your attempted to "direct" the way things flowed, the participants seemed far more robatic than usual. I know its your creation and all but it wouldve been better to let things just flow rather than telling them that certain things needed to happen. Wouldve made it funnier if they did something wrong or tried to figure out what was going on. You know what I mean? <font color="#0255255" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#2550255" face="Tahoma">Light  02:01, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

12th division
Hi Td5 how you doing

I am still working on him, I did his appearance and Personality. I am hoping, what I did was he was a former 4th seat. So yeah we could have something between them. How about you read his personality and maybe we can see what we can do. I still have to make the relationship with the captian. so yeah look at what I have so far and then we can go from there. ~   Sentonara of  the Spirits  03:47, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

I see whatcha getting at Td, how about that they wouldn't get along. I can see they are compelete opposites, thought maybe like one thing. Ryuhaku seen Mayuri as a mentor or such and has put some of his traits into his personality. But the one thing that he has that mayuri didn't is that. He wants the 12th division to the best out of the 13 divisions. But what could happen is that, maybe that your character can try to hold back ryuhaku. From trying to yell and taunt the members of the squad. that can be the hate they have for eachother. Though underneath, he only wants his division to be the best.

My idea with his was, I wanted him to have maybe a higher status that a normal Lieutenants like before in that bleach turn back the clock or whatever. That some Lieutenants where within the captians meetings. Now I put this up for discussion, I want him to be like a strategist or tactician to the Gotei 13. Thats why I kinda gave him an Haori because I want to put him as maybe one who wants to have a high status.  ~   Sentonara of  the Spirits  04:01, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Ok Td, I can do that. They both have a love to research that can be the only thing they may have in comman. Then maybe likehe will go by that code thing. But he will question it alot, but he knows that it will be for the best of the division status so ok then.Though I will still try to keep that idea of him being a strategist or tactician  ~   Sentonara of  the Spirits  04:19, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Ok Td, I wouldn't mind doing an RP with the two. So would it be like, that he was made the captain and he wanted to meet all of the members of the division and then he sees Ryuhaku and then go from there. ~   Sentonara of  the Spirits  23:42, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Oh yeah Td, I am still working on Ryuhaku as well. so he was promoted to captain and then we can go from there how does that sound when your character is done? then by that time, Ryuhaku will be done as well. ~   Sentonara of  the Spirits  23:53, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Ok Td, I am still experimenting with Ryuhaku. I can make the changes to him, I still want to get most of his info together and then I can make most of the changes but I can change him no probelm. ~   Sentonara of  the Spirits  02:01, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

Td, how about we do this. I will lower his Kido and speed down to like 75 but could ryuhaku be the better swordsmen? ~   Sentonara of  the Spirits  02:06, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

Ok td, that is fair enough. But Let Ryuhaku do as he pleases, when it comes to research of course the captain can try to stop him. ~   Sentonara of  the Spirits  02:35, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

Ok Td, mostly he knows if its like a emecery or whatever he will listen to his captan. Now as for the Rp, would you like to start it up or should I? If I would start it up I would just start it out as saying like. "All the members of the 12th division where gathered at there HQ waiting for some news or something like that. ~   Sentonara of  the Spirits  02:50, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

Ok Td, my only personal thing of mine is. If your going first could you leave a link to the rp itself on my talk page thanks and I have to warn you. I am still getting use to the RP onto here, so forgive me if I kinda go overboard lol. ~   Sentonara of  the Spirits  02:56, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

No just having a little treat for his captain. ~   Sentonara of  the Spirits   02:19, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

Satonaka
Sure. I will be scutinizing it lol Two things, they usually have some sort of manipulation ability and they dont usually use anything besides spiritual energy lol. =P bwahaha jk <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Yuri <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  01:36, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

Haha I was kidding but sure...let's go with what you said =P It'll be good to se what you come up with. Hmm as for the relation that's entirely up to you though It can't be any higher than Brother/Sister to Shiro, Van and Toru, as I already have all the Parents figured out. I hope that makes sense =) <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Yuri <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  02:20, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

Nooooooo! don't tell me...just make it up and then let me see lol. Then we can RP it out to see if it all works out =) <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Yuri <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  02:30, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

Ok thats fine. <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Yuri <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  02:35, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

not really. just alive =P <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Yuri <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  02:46, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

Just do as you please. Don't worry about it. I'll let you know if anything needs changing. <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Yuri <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  03:18, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

Ive been keeping track. No need to tell me pal. lol But yea they're looking good. As for the Satonaka member...who are her parents? What relation does she have with the others? <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Yuri <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  03:17, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

Well thats the thing I didnt want like a large clan filled with various people just yet =P But hm why don't you have her be the daughter of Inai and Araziel who I havent revealed to be the father just yet. That way she's is half-siblings with most of the Satonaka boys and ful blooded sibiling with Toru Satonaka. =) <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Yuri <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  03:28, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

Well Inai wouldnt just go sleeping around lol jk jk. That works for me. As does the Culinary thing. Though I dont see the point of having it labled as Grandmaster. Master is fine. As she wouldnt primarily rely on cooking in combat would she? Cause if she's a grandmaster chef she better be able to cook a giant ball of death coming down at her pretty fast hahaha. <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Yuri <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  03:55, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

Haha thats fine. Cant wait to see what you come up with. <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Yuri <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  04:14, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah
Graduation was pretty good, the weather was excellent. I've been working at Taekwondo more often, and also been looking for another job too to start getting some money in for college. I have a decent amount stashed away, but it won't be enough to pay for the entire four years, and I'd like to get a jump start on it. So yeah, plus, I've had alittle writer's block lately, so I'm hoping to work on some characters and hopefully get some sort of spark started in my head. How are you? --Seireitou-shishō (My True Identity 19:11, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

May I have a review? From Ash
Hey there Td5, how are you going? Anyway, I was wondering if you could give me a short or detailed review (I don't care which) of Jin Terumi, I think that he is quite a nice character. If you want to RP with him, I don't mind at all.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 07:22, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Well hope that gets fixed, anyway, thanks.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 21:36, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Sure, I don't mind. That's one of the only things I'm good at, lol<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 21:48, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

done! If you want a review on him later I'll be glad to give him one, and nice image!<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 21:49, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

Oh yeah! That's right, it's Cornelia isn't it? Sorry I'm a little off today. By the way, I was wondering, if she's done and she's in the Jusanseiza I presume? If we could RP, I'll use Jin Terumi and you can use her, if you want.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 21:59, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

sorry, I just presumed that. Well I guess I can fight Kiyoshi, don't know what he's like, and Haru is epicly strong, I don't think I could keep up that well, lol, but he's an awesome character.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 22:07, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

Well that's fine, I'm going to school, so see ya!<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 22:15, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

Sure, why not, btw I live in Australia so yeah. And Purinsu is a cool character, I'll RP with him if you want, by the way, you want me to put the image in his infobox?<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 05:10, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

By the way, does his last name have to be Souzou?<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 05:49, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

By the way, here he is! Hope you like him, although he isn't done. Is he Kiyoshi's brother?<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 06:43, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

Ok no problem, by the way am I allowed to use him for RP's against others? And I'll put the pic in right away.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 21:42, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

Sure, you can start it, they could have a sparring session, could they?<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 21:50, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

Ok then, I have no problem with that.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 22:02, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

By the way, how do you like Junsui's Philosophy, although it's still in completion.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 22:49, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 22:57, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

Oh ok, I'll change it.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 00:42, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

Ok thanks!<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 03:51, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

hey man, before we continue, do you mind if I add some stuff to Junsui's philosophy section, just so people don't think I'm randomly adding abilities, even though he's your character.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 07:45, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

Oh ok, I thought you'd use him in a storyline or something. You know, we could do a collaborative storyline a little while later (after my RP's start to rest) and when you're free, cause your Kosumosukihaky race is really cool, we could base it off two young Kosumosukihaku and such.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 07:51, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

No problem.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 08:00, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I don't mind.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 08:26, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

Thank You
Thank you for the offer, but I already had the picture saved xD. I'm waiting to expand to add more pictures, or else it would look very unorganized and sloppy.-- Hohenheim ☯ Talk ☯  06:22, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

RE:Paradiso
I personaly like it Td, it makes me want to wait and see what it is really for and stuff. Now can you tell me what do you think of this ~   Sentonara of  the Spirits  01:50, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

Well the three great sages idea came from a very old thing I wanted to do, but never got the time to do it. I didn't really get the idea from avatar. I got this idea from a set of men, back in Japan that served under Hideyoshi that acted as advisers to him.

On to the demonic and divine knowing thing. I personaly am catholic, but I look into the Buddha and Hindu beliefs. Which all in reality are all the same. Just be a good person and you will be good haha. Though alot of my ideas from the demons and others are from just things I come up with out of the blue. I just need to see a picture, and most of the times I can figure out a back stroy and all that for a charatcer. I am really creative -.- although my drawing skills suck. ~   Sentonara of  the Spirits  02:03, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

Well Td not many know this about me but, I believe this. that the buddha himself and even the hindu dieties. The buddha was sent by a higher power to help teach the world peace, though he WAS NOT the messiah. He is most like a great Saint in my eyes. Then onto the hindu Dieities, they where created to act mostly like either messageners or maybe a bit more powerful angels that will help people of the 'All mighty" on his behalf. Though they should NEVER be put before the all might one. well thats what I believe hahah ~   Sentonara of  the Spirits  02:18, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

Yes each sage well almost all the sages have their own article thing. I just need to work on the sage of the viod. These sages can be playable. ~   Sentonara of  the Spirits   02:32, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

Sōzō Clan
Sorry for the late reply, things have been hectic with my two jobs. Anyways, I'd be glad to make the character for the Sōzō Clan. Any specifics on what sort of character you want me to make? --Seireitou-shishō (My True Identity 05:08, June 20, 2011 (UTC)