Talk:TBTP: Sengoku - Overture of the King

Short Review
Alright, I'm quite pleased and delighted in how you've written this up til now - you make it sound like a mythical occurence which really serves to add atmosphere to your work, along with making it that much easier to read. How you've explained what happened and how the Soul King created the different dimensions is also quite like the original Japanese myth with Izanagi and Izanami.

Njalm2 21:32, May 24, 2011 (UTC)