Thread:PITZWIL100/@comment-18812574-20140202051205

So, you should probably check to see who leaves messages on talk pages so you don't end up spamming the same poor person's wall. ;)

1. The headings haven't been fixed, now they're just one huge block of text. Make sure you put each section in a different paragraph, and bold the headings.

Like This- (put the info here)

Shunpo- blah blah blah

Etcetera- Blah blabbity blah blah

THIS is the Manual of Style for this Wiki, and you need to read it. It doesn't take that long. So... yeah, read it.

2. The links I left on the talk page explain why Seke is a rip-off of Ichigo. Please look through them. Basically, it's called god-modding. Sure, Shinigami ARE gods, but that doesn't mean your character should be more powerful than even the MAIN CHARACTER in the series. Seireitou's a very bad example for giving characters way too much power, so don't follow what he does. (no worries Sei-sama, ;) ) But what he said on Mangetsu's wall is something you should pay attention too. His characters (for the most part) have themes. Which leads mean into:

3. Pick one. It's a good idea to make your character a hollow OR a shinigami OR a ____ whatever, but don't mix them all together into one thing. Again, this is just copying Ichigo. It doesn't add any depth to the character, nor does it automatically make him "cool." Cool characters, are mostly about, well, character. If Seke has a unique and unforgettable character (meaning the way he speaks and acts) then people are going to remember him and like him. Which is something they won't do just by slapping a bunch of random powers on him willy-nilly. Believe it or not, the more powerful your character is, the less interesting the fights actually become. Story is about conflict, and weakness creates conflict. It's a good thing to have, and something you should give Seke. He can't be good in every area. Everyone has limitations. So unify the article, choose ONE theme and stick with it. Get rid of excess "paper" powers and try to define who this guy really is, underneath the skin. 