User talk:Illuminate Void

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I was an admin, on four oversite so when I need to give instructions on edits or archive I write better.

Side note the only Royal Guard I have is my Former Supreme Commander of the Royal Guard Haru Nakamaru and he is Aizen-class. Yet he is a villian. As for Philosophy I was wondering, while an user can manifest incomplete Philosophy. I was thinking a complete manifestation can grant the user a semi-control over reality. Kind of like Orihime Inoue's Power.: The Twilight of Your Despair 03:46, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Ok. However, and I don't mind losing Haru is Aizen class like your character. So in keeping with that I made him possess well over twice as much spiritual power as an average captain-level Shinigami like Aizen. However while at his current level I doubt he could take on Aizen's third or second tranformation at least without his Bankai. Also, he was at least just for reference was a former Supreme Commander like the Head Captain of the Royal Guard.

So he was the strongest member of the Guard at least during his time. So shall I or you start it.: The Twilight of Your Despair 04:18, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Modest Truth of the Night God Vs Colorless World is the rp. Your turn and it takes place in the Soul Society.: The Twilight of Your Despair 04:31, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Your turn and sorry about if the quality of my post isn't top notch I need sleep which I am going to do now I'll post later: The Twilight of Your Despair 05:36, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Your turn.: The Twilight of Your Despair 15:11, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Oh I forgot to tell you Haru's spirit corspes or fake harus are just reannimated spirits. They are eqaul in terms of Swordmanship, Hakuda, Shunpo, Kido, and the same strength of reiatsu. However, their zanpakuto have no powers like Haru's and in shikai Haru can only use on at a time.: The Twilight of Your Despair 16:56, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Your turn and even though they "can" I don't make the fake Harus do things like Hado # 96 or 90 level Kido but once or twice in an single rp. Also, while they are as strong as Haru himself if they are wounded to a high enough degree than they become useless and Haru must return to his zanpakuto to either heal it or summon another one.: The Twilight of Your Despair 17:30, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Your turn and don't worry Haru has an item that will keep him alive the Nekkuresu no Raifu (ネックレスライフNecklace of life) something I created if you want to read it on his article. Also, after this rp will you help me make the spirit race that rules destruction.

Cause the Shinigami and the lossely the Sozoshin rule Death.

The Raifutenshis/LifeAngels rule Life

And the Immortal Kosmouskihakus/Cosmos Souls rule Creation.

So I could use some help with the destruction species.: The Twilight of Your Despair 18:01, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Your turn and I was at a doctor's appointment today.: The Twilight of Your Despair 01:30, March 17, 2011 (UTC)

Your turn and you are the first to have me reveal that their are twelve personalties in Haru.: The Twilight of Your Despair 02:47, March 17, 2011 (UTC)

Your turn and not to brag but the 12th haru at the bottom is the real Haru and he is truly well like the Quote on his Template A maddness against all of existance.: The Twilight of Your Despair 04:00, March 17, 2011 (UTC)

Your turn and no I won't be using Kiyoshi Souzou the Supreme King he is just kidnapped by Haru and will be released after the rp. And remember what I said the spirit corpses may be as strong as Haru but they can easily be rendered useless.: The Twilight of Your Despair 04:40, March 17, 2011 (UTC)

Now I don't plan to use it as while as powerful as this Kido it is easily prevented. Just take the scythe from him. And just its on the Gravity Force Kido page if you want to read it I created it a long time ago as Haru's crime. Just I told you why he is a madness against all of existance. He makes Aizen look like a poster boy for sane people.

btw your turn and by surrending I mean Haru will leave the Soul Soceity.Oh and try to Limit how much before hand knowledge of this spell as Haru;s mind is made up of twelve sides all talking at once so if Kenshin can search through his mind slightly than Kenshin would know of twelve sides of memories which would make anyone crazy. And I tried to limit grammer error but I am at college and unless it is facebook or school work we cannot really do stuff like this. Your turn.: The Twilight of Your Despair 15:59, March 17, 2011 (UTC)

Your turn and the scythe is broken and gone while its powers cannot be stop by abilities like your characters the scythe itself can. Haru is still waering his necklace, and I gave you a hint on to his goal in the quote.: The Twilight of Your Despair 18:57, March 17, 2011 (UTC)

Your turn and unless you want Haru to return or Kenshin follows in the garganta than the only thing left I would say is to bring the fading spirit corspe to the Research and Devlopment dapartment to study for clues on how to stop Haru's Spirit Corspes.: The Twilight of Your Despair 20:58, March 17, 2011 (UTC)

I just I am only making Japanese Cosmos Souls or Kosumosukihakus. As that is what they are just the most used language they use is japanese so they call everything that they are and use in japanese translation. Also only the ancentos pre-date time. And the only one of the ancestors that is still alive is Kaosu Souzou the First King and the first Cosmos Soul.

Plus the original King or First King of them could see in the future or past to a small degree. So he thought as they relate to future Japanese's way of life they would take up their language etc.

As for how Philosophy relates to Sacred Energy it is just as while anyone can manifest they must have the inner mental desire to correct the universe. Plus it is something like spiritual power yet it isn't let me explain.

As everyone has a soul everyonr such have a Philosophy just they need to know how to bring it out.

Finally, I know what I can seal in the ark I can seal things or people of immense danger inside. As Haru in my stories will be sealed away by the end. Also to understand the Kosumosukihakus want to rp with one I have two Shino Terasawa Rangiku-class or Kyoshi Souzou Aizen-class and equal in battle status and reiatsu to Haru and he is the cuurent King but if nothing to any of the three prior Kings.: The Twilight of Your Despair 04:08, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

P.S. "Spirit" will be the one to defeat Haru one day.: The Twilight of Your Despair 04:24, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

RE: Shouhei
Ahh, yes, a roleplay would be good, Mosou is a prestigeous Cafe so that is as good a place to start as any, also given that Shouhei is there alot; I did as you intructed, though there was nothing in the preferences that I believed able to assist with this case, I think this is a job for the Admins, moreover, could you try to convert the articles of Hiroya and Shouhei into Source? Or atleast fix the spacing in Hiroya's article, it is really bad, even worse than Shouhei because of its great length.

Thank you for the assistance on Hiroya though, now it only remains to clear this issue on a permanent basis.

I've fixed the Edit Errors, i found out that it was the tables whom kid around with the code, and that otherwise, editing the sections separately seemed to work, I took care of this problem by removing the RTE Tables and converting them to Source-Coded Ones.

Also, I thought about that Shōhei could perhaps be a member of the Shinsengumi as that would flow quite well with his character, as well as provide a deeper story and background to him (Not to mention the RP possibilities), so what do you say?

Well, Division, I thought it'd be best if you decided on that, where would he fit, with his Personality, Provess and Zanpakuto? Allright, Inilftration & Espionage it is then!

Njalm2 12:52, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Ok
Well, you said that your character is Aizen-level so its not like my Aizen-level can just kill him with one sword swing. As for Haru I haven't used him in a while but when I rp I say all of the tricks or mechnisms of an ability so that the other person knows how to react according.

Now on to other matters. I was wondering the opimates are Hell inself, well I was thinking what if there is a small place it Hell outside the range of all of the four Opimates like the very center of Hell. This place could be the lowest place for evil beings so ominus that not even the opimates can completely control them.

Also, you have any idea of what could be sealed in my Divine Ark of Twilight?

And do you know any general powers that Philosophy can have.: The Twilight of Your Despair 02:23, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Hey, its Td5 again.

I have been thinking about what you are have been say, and I feel a few changing in my work isn't to bad. I will be re making my Kosumosukihakus slightly. However, there are things I wish not to change. Also some other things I need to tell you.


 * 1) While, they still will pre-date time and the universe that only goes for the King, his brother, and the other clans ancentors. In keeping with that, Japanese Language will be their main language as the King could to a small degree see in the future. So he liked Japan's lifestyle or future life-style and took it up.


 * 1) They will only be incharge of re-stocking Reishi in Spirit Worlds, when Humans soul isn't enough to add on to the soul Society. The are also responible to govern over other duties. Their second function, like all the ruling species to protect the natural order.


 * 1) Now for the Raifutenshins/Life Angles. Like how the Shinigami send souls to the Soul Society. These Spirit Angels returns souls to be reborn in the World of the Living.


 * 1) Philosophy, I am making it seem not like just some generic new kind of energy. I want it to be something grand.


 * 1) Finally, after I making the Destruction ruling Species, I will start to make the Kings. When I do I would like your Help to make them right.: The Twilight of Your Despair 21:04, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Well, while you do offer immense and great information. I believe I will keep my original ideas. Just Kaosu Souzou is the Original First Supreme King. Before his brothers and the other none related clans existed he searched for other beings yet couldn't find any.Whether or not there were other beings is unknown. Just he had the power to see into the future to a small degree and after looking at every culture he liked Japan the most so he based everything from food, language, even culture from it for his people yet they didn't start it in japan. Oh I forgot to added something ot the history if a Cosmos Soul lacks their immortality than they don't have a zanpakuto and have very limited spiritual power. They have to master their power to gain eternal life. For like humans they age as fast as them even in spirit worlds so if they don't want to die than they have to acquire eternal life.

The destruction species are to clean up or destroy the remains of certain locations and things. Kind of like cleaners.

Just I will work on everything. : The Twilight of Your Despair 00:02, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

RE: RP Battke
That'd be fully possible yes, and Hiroya would have to meet Kenshin at one point or another (The fact that he's an infamous Rogue Shinigami would be all the more reason for Kenshin to attempt to eliminate him or atleast bring him into custody) I happen to have the perfect spell for the occassion. Its a very powerful Haien variant that liquifies Spiritual Energy into a purple substance of incredible heat (Comparable to lava, in fact) - when used on Shirohane's feathers its easily one of his most powerful Spell-Combinations - as that would allow him to manipulate it to a vast degree.

I picture that Kenshin is engulfed in this substance and that he trough the effects of his Zanpakuto manage to create "Tunnels" inside there, as he moves trough the Flood of purple liquid; the heat quickly building up as he uses his great intellect in order to calculate just how long his Zanpakuto can stall the effects, and how big a rift would be created.

A single mistep on his part could easily cost him his life, or in less dire cases limbs such as legs and arms may be incinerated: He also has to attempt trough navigate trough this violet inferno quickly, otherwise the heat will overcome him and he'll faint (and be instantly incinerated upon contact with the "Cave-Walls, or Floor".

We could also incorporate a ton of other of Hiroya's spells into this, I burn to test many of his more advanced ones.

Yes, luckily in this case my previous Roleplay cases often incorporated Story Telling, so indeed, I'm able to become a story teller in this battle. (Its also refreshing that Hiroya would be the "Bad Guy" in this battle, given the fact that Kenshin would most likely seek to eliminate him for the sake of Soul Society.

I do however picture some regular combat to get warmed up first though. As Hiroya's not going to make use of Sattō Haien (Japanese for Flood, Abolishing Flames) before he gets serious - for fairites sake; the signal when he's becoming serious is when he withdraws his left arm from the sleeve of his robe (Kenshin should've read that in the information he had no doupt been given - as that is widely regarded as a trademark of his when combating powerful opponents)

I've been quite good thank you, though I still don't see any reason for him to have the "Grandmaster" Skill; the rules don't mention such things at all (not to mention that it isn't made for any other distinct purpose than to lower the worth of "Master" no?) - I don't use the "Grandmaster" term for Hiroya's Kido provess, though there are few characters whom would be more applicable of that title than him, excuse my arrogance, mind you.

Though, I believe that you did it primarily to put emphasis on the fact that Swordsmanship is his greatest strength, while I myself have no need for such a signation (Hiroya has a whole section devoted only to Kido abilities after all, so I suppose its fairly obvious what he specialises in :P)

Oh? I've never thought about reafing Chinese artwork and comics; though I've seen that some of them have a very exquisite drawing style (Kinda like Seinen Manga - which I read almost exclusively these days) and well, the thing against "Grandmaster" is likely due to a bad experience on this site, involving a character "Dispelling" all of Hiroya's Shō spells, he didn't even use Haki!! He was one of those Kido Grandmasters - he had also only written a few sentences at the time about his Kido Provess, as opposed to Hiroya's wall of text and several sections and mini-sections. Kinda made me wonder what exactly was the benefit of writing out a detailed article at all (>_<)! I did correct him though, quite angrily in fact, as Roleplay is supposed to be fun for both sides.

And, Hiroya's not really worthy of that nomination, he's detailed, I'll give myself atleast that much! But I didn't write out that section for it to look good, okay, maybe a little, but because that I felt like writing more, and give more information about him as well as to give myself "Limits", as due to the fact that Kido is such an extensive field it is easy to just make Kido spells for every possible occassion and even invent some on the spot! Which isn't how I want to roleplay, as that is godmodding, pure and simple.

And back to the possible roleplay - I have to ask you some questions here, I guess that you'll be the one making it, given that Kenshin is the one hunting Hiroya. But first and foremost, and while I think that this question is simple; what would the basis for which Kenshin attacking him be? Orders from his superiours?

Hmm.. So, you've scheduled the roleplay to take part when Hiroya begins moving towards the Ryu Order? That is most likely quite far into the future, as Kenji first needs to finish some of his roleplay, in particular the Tournament thingy (and given the sheer length of those fights I think its going to take some time)

Basically, his plot hasn't moved forwards all that much, he basically only has a few one-shot encounters - I'd love for their battle to take place soon though, as that'd put him onto the right track and allow me to continue his story,

Though basically I wait for Kenji to get done with his roleplay so that he can become associated with the Ryu Order, and then I suspect he'll become a good deal more active.

Yes, that's quite the good idea though I still have to discuss the details with Kenji.

Njalm2 23:39, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Hi
How was your weekend? While, I haven't come up with a name. The species that rule Destruction are a species that are responible for cleaning up forfeit reiatsu in the world of the living and destroying distortiant in time and space like time loop that expand etc. Like supernatural guards. And they are made when a soul of a human dies and is reformed having these kinds of powers.: The Twilight of Your Despair 20:58, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Well, my rp skills are only average. But you like the method of this species? I was thinking that they are the remains of Soul that are thrown in the dangai and instead of being destroy the current reforms them into new souls that have unique powers. When larges ammounts of reiatsu exist in the World of the Living they are to destroy it and are to destroy distortion in time and space like wormholes and the like.: The Twilight of Your Despair 21:53, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Response
Thanks for the message. I should've seen that idea for what it was.

I'll keep it in mind when I get the chance for it.

Xamusel 22:20, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

"Balance" Review Request
Right, I've been thinking alot about Hiroya's abilities, and I naturally wonder if they're balanced or not, and if he has enough weaknesses - all that stuff, so for that reason. I'd like to ask you to review the entire Powers & Abilities section from the perspective of balance, not to gauge if the original abilities are well-written or not, but in order to find things which you deem to be overpowered, or unbalanced in any way.

I ask you this because these things commonly ellude their original creators, though I conciously attempt to craft my characters (especially those whom are as ridicolously powerful as Hiroya) with balance, no-one ever does a perfect job. I actually put alot of faith in you here, as if you find something that conflicts with your personal beliefs of balance - I'll look into that ability ASAP! Without attempting to explain it in any way, as I otherwise might be inclined to do.

So, what do you say?

Allright, as I've stated before I've updated several of Hiroya's abilities, I even swapped the Master for Expert in Hakuda and Swordsmanship respectively. Also, while I hate to nag - now that Jet is going next in our roleplay - I'll ask you to continue to the second part of the Review, I believe you've seen enough of Hiroya's Kido abilities for you to finish his Kido section, with Honshitsu included.

Njalm2 22:45, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Transition Please
As I am studying for college algebra which I will fail anyways and have to retake. I need some transitions in Japanese.


 * 1) The Destruction that rules Destruction. Spiritual Enforcer


 * 1) The King that rules over the Destruction species. Silent King


 * 1) The King that rules over the Raifutenshis/Life Angels. Sacred King


 * 1) A great and ancient evil. The High King of End. This will be what is sealed in the Divine Ark. I will explain on later date. However, Haru Nakamaru wants to release the High King, for reasons I won't say yet.


 * 1) The neutral meeting place where the Kings can meet without worry of trying to kill each other. The Land of the True Kings.


 * 1) Finally, the last Transation I need is Promordial One. Also, with Kanji character if you can.

Thank you for the transitions. Now for why for those things. As according to many canon characters to limited affecting the Souls of the World of the Living Shinigami Lieutenant/Vice Captains, Captains and stronger fighters are limited the use of their Reiatsu. So to prevent Human Soul from develop supernatural powers or from decreasing or increasing the ages of Humans, these Enforcers remove ammounts of overpowerful Reiatsu until the are back to normal levels. These souls have the power to fix time loops, or distortant in space or time that aren't natural if they become harmful to a large location. Inshort they clean up the spiritual messes that the other species miss. Example, they are the ones that would destroy/clean up the Reiatsu left by the Soul Society's Captain and Aizen Esapda during the Battle of Fake Karakura Town. (They wouldn't destroy the Fake Town just the Reiatsu left in the area of the Town.) Although, unless you have a better idea for why they are the species of destruction.
 * 1) Inclusion, the Spiritual Enforcers will be like supernatural cleaners that destroy the remains of unwanted supernatural activity in certain worlds. Like they destroy the remains of large ammounts of reiatsu left by captain-level Shinigami or Soul. Like after the Fake Karakura battle the destroy the remains of the Reiatsu that is after that battle. This is just their main job.: The Twilight of Your Despair 13:46, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

Also, about how they are made. I figured that doing something with Dangai is better than my immortal species pre-dating time. Although, if you have a better idea for these destruction species I will hear it. But, please no demonic things or ideas. As these Kings are spiritual or semi-divine.: The Twilight of Your Despair 19:45, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

I forgot, to add somethings. These species cannot remove some Time Loops or Time Space Distortants as temproal and spatial powers are very limited. Plus, only ones that are harmful to mostly the World of The Living as unlike the Spirit Worlds. They lack methods to fix them. Plus there are many military orgizantions that govern and makes up the units. Plus the King rules them.: The Twilight of Your Despair 19:58, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

The idea of the Kings.

Each King and their jobs

Soul King/ Ruler of Death or the transmigertion to the Soul Society for Souls and related jobs.

Sacred King/ Ruler of Life or the rebirth of Souls from the Soul Society back to the World of the Living and related jobs.

Silent King/Ruler of Destruction or the rate of supernatural destruction and how to fix such things.

Supreme King? Ruler of Creation or the creation of Reishi and other supernatural related things like weapons or objects in the Spirit World and the World of the Living.

The Kings and each Species has a Spirit World or Deminsion that they live in. The Kings is the unquestion authority. The military groups that run the duties so that the Kings doesn't have to. Like The Gotei 13 does most of the Soul Society duties. The High King of End wants to become a greater King than the Four thus becoming a "True God." This is may idea.: The Twilight of Your Despair 20:09, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

A few more tanslations please The King that rules over the Raifutenshis/Life Angels. Sacred King

Also what the four first Kings will be called the Original Kings. Plus if you want you can make some abilities for the destruction species. As me completely making all three other ruling species isn't fun.: The Twilight of Your Despair 20:43, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

RE: Honshitsu
Actually, Honshitsu has been used many times by Hiroya up til now, and it will be used against Kenshin: Hiroya's ﻿Shō spell, is a Honshitsu-enhanced spell; the difference between a normal spell and one that is Honshitsu enhanced is thus quite vast; without this Hiroya's Shō spell would only be moderately more powerful than the Shō-like spell that Shunsui used against Chad. As you've witnessed in the battle between Hiroya and Dorothy, this is not the case - as the Shō spells Hiroya casts are actually quite deadly on their own (Though they require thrice as much Reiryoku to cast). Basically, all the spells whom are currently in the "Spell Mastery" Section, of Hiroya's article are in fact Honshitsu-enhanced spells.

I do see the point in having Honshitsu be a rather limited ability though, but I don't think it should be exclusive only to Shirohane - but most likely to a rather limited number of very powerful Kidō-Type Zanpakutō; Honshitsu basically allows Hiroya to draw on the power of Shirohane's Spirit as well, when he casts the designated spells - effectively doubling them in power.

Honshitsu on its own is also limited, as it doesn't work on all spells, but rather a choosen few of which the Shinigami has shown to favor. The rest of Hiroya's spells are "Normal".

As for the comment about Pokemon Battles, I really hope that Dorothy vs Hiroya didn't count as one of those "Pokemon Battles"?

--Njalm2 21:14, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

RE:Long time no see!
Hey man! Long time indeed. I'm doing alright, how about you? I saw some of your stuff, got free from papers yesterday so plan to read it in more detail now. I'd definitely like to RP once I finish up the two characters I have started. -- Jet'ika (Talk  | Contribs ) 08:01, March 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * Hey! So I think I have my new guy's abilities more or less figured out. Just a few techniques to be added. I was wondering if you would mind looking him over once and letting me know if he looks alright and if the abilities are alright (don't want them to be too powerful)? I'll have the history up soon so we can RP after that. Cheers!-- Jet'ika (Talk  | Contribs ) 03:01, March 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * Thanks man! I just went through Kenshin Yagami's abilities and have to agree they are quite similar. Ought to make for an interesting RP scenario if they meet. I actually ended up reading the entire character and have to say he looks bloody awesome. His assassination and psychometry abilities particularly drew my eye. I've actually used a character with psychometry at another site and simply love the concept. Also, I have completed the article so if you wanna RP with him I'm up for it. -- Jet'ika (Talk  | Contribs ) 13:45, March 24, 2011 (UTC)

Hey I had a favor to ask of you man. This guy, Tarō Suzuki, was made by a friend of mine and he's given him to me. So I was wondering could I have him as a former member of the Shinsengumi? -- Jet'ika (Talk  | Contribs ) 03:11, March 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * Thanks man! -- Jet'ika (Talk  | Contribs ) 04:32, March 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * Hey man! I just noticed that you are now a member of Gravity Force so congrats on that. Also, as I have myself just applied to join I was wondering if you would mind giving me your vote? And lastly, I am ready to RP anytime you like. Maybe Tarō Suzuki with Kenshin Yagami? They are both Shinsengumi members and he's my only character other than Lucio who would stand a chance against Kenshin. Anyway, let me know what you think of all this. Cheers! -- Jet'ika (Talk  | Contribs ) 10:00, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

Also, Njalm2 suggested I join The Swan and the Hunter with Tarō Suzuki and we could have a 2 on 1 against his guy. Would you mind if I did? -- Jet'ika (Talk  | Contribs ) 12:21, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

Hiroya
Hiroya's stats are somewhat misleading, the fact is that Offense and Defense for him is overally tied to his skills with ﻿Kidō, and his Zanpakutō, as well as his Master Hand-to-Hand Combat Skills (I followed your reasonable suggestion and swapped Master Swordsman for Master Hand-to-Hand Combatant) - His biggest Stat problem is that I have decided that his stats shall equal exactly 545. In Hiroya's case, his stats are very vague and they only give a general appearance of his skills, in actuality he counts as much stronger than that, due to his Kidō spells and -MASSIVE- ability Rooster.

If we both judged solely on stats, neither Kenshin nor Hiroya would be classified as Aizen-Class (Seireitou has stated that Aizen-Class characters are predominately 560-590 in stat Total) - This would also have made Kenshin lose to Haru, whom happen to have a total of 560. So while Stats are useful indeed, they're quite bendable and abstract in the long run.

I also thank you for the first part of your review and it was certainly really helpful! I knew I could trust you with this, and everything negative that you pointed out has been taken care of already. I've also updated his stats, his offense is now 95 (I removed 5 points due to his Pacifism which always seem to limit him), his Speed is reduced to 90, which I deem to be the correct amount given that his Shunpo is roughly on par with that of Byakuya.

I also read about Phantasmagoria: The Struggle - and I was surprised at how closely Unohana's Kidō resembles Hiroya's, and as such I'll use this as a reference to how to roleplay that out properly (Hiroya's so far the only character that I know of whom is capable of incantationless spells, as well as motionless ones (Though those are unfinished). So this was a major inspiration to our next roleplay.

Excellent, I had actually decided to wait for the Balance-Review to be completed but since that can take some time we could of course start sooner! There's a few "Phases" before Hiroya begins to get serious after all, I might simply use those abilities whom you have deemed as "fair" until you're done with the review.

After all, even without Honshitsu or his Zanpakutō he's bound to still be a match for Kenshin.

--Njalm2 10:25, March 23, 2011 (UTC)

Umm, I am kind of busy with two rp
 * Learning of the Immortals edited by Twilight Despair 5 2 seconds ago
 * Crawl into Heaven or Strut into Hell edited by Twilight Despair 5 1 minute ago if you want to read them so far.: The Twilight of Your Despair 20:52, March 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * I'll rp with you if you give me one final japanese tranistion calls Failing Path of the Undefeated One this is something that will become most likely my best work.: The Twilight of Your Despair 01:23, March 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * Thank you and I was replying to your rquest to rp whenever you want is fine. Also if you want to understand my immortals better than read Learning of the Immortals which Kenji and myself are doing. Thanks for the transition.: The Twilight of Your Despair 01:37, March 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re: RP
I'm always game for another go. I've also read your stuff. Dang good work. Seeing as I've never gone rounds with a Quincy before, Ishida Ryuichi seems like a challenge. I've only got two fighters at the moment, due to a very interesting Hell battle. I'll let you choose between my half-breed, Hayashi Kagekyo or my 'Vampire' (Reikon Kyuuban) Myst. User:Firegod00 (Say your prayers) 20:51, March 23, 2011 (UTC)

Sure. Sorry for the late reply, went to dinner. At any rate, do you want to start, or shall I? It is your choice. Just so you know, Myst is honestly one of my stronger people, if not the strongest. Whenever you feel like starting just leave a message, and I'll get to you ASAP. User:Firegod00 (Say your prayers) 23:00, March 23, 2011 (UTC)

Your turn. Here's the link. http://bleachfanfiction.wikia.com/wiki/Vampires_and_Quincy,_Oh_my! (Normally, I'm good at titles, so I do apologize for this one.) User:Firegod00 (Say your prayers) 20:07, March 24, 2011 (UTC)

Our Roleplay
Allright, its done, took myself time to write a proper prologue (all good stories got to have atleast a decent one), the name of the roleplay is The Swan and the Hunter - and it is your move.

I decided to attempt to give you something of a challenge/headache - I'm curious as to how Kenshin will come out of this one, and of course, its your turn.

Ahh, its your turn - and don't you worry. Hiroya's only warming up, and so is Kenshin, given that I haven't seen a single Ansatsuhō ability yet. As for the Haien spell - he's only going to begin to use that towards the end, as all his spells up to now have been mostly for incapacitation. Haien kills people, there's no inbetween: And given that Hiroya fights "Backwards" he's only going to use that when Kenshin has given him an indication that he can handle it.

Ahh.. Death huh, thats always sad - Take the time you need to recover, its always best not to push things in such cases, and only write something if you feel like it. I don't want you to feel obligated at such a time, I have however put up the Juusanseiza page. For that Organisation, feel free to add your character, even if he's not created yet ^^. I'll however be happy to assist you in his creation, I'd even give you a hand with his Zanpakuto if you'd need it.

Njalm2 21:46, March 23, 2011 (UTC)

SkunkMight
Sorry! I didn't know about the leaving talks on other peoples pages, I'm such a newb haha! I'm not sure what you mean though 'manual' style, I mean when I open the bleach character infobox thing. That you told me about, I only want to write my character's name, not also in Romanji and Kanji, but if I don't put anything it looks stupid when you publish it it just says kanji romanji. I'm more than willing to convert haha, it's just a learning process.

Hey, I just tried out the infobox and left it as a sample next to the one I have up on my character's page Io Ai. You can see what I mean it has I don't think it looks very good though. Mmm. So, what should I do? Also, I feel dumb, I keep forgetting this haha. SkunkMight 02:07, March 25, 2011 (UTC)

Hey
I started the article Ikkitousen no Shippai Keiro (一騎当千の失敗経路, lit. "Failed Path of the Matchless Warrior" ) and I was thinking your thoughts and I won't say its true purpose until I can tell sei first. Also, if we rp against I might use Kiyoshi Souzou my other Aizen class character but I am not sure yet.: The Twilight of Your Despair 02:21, March 25, 2011 (UTC)

Howdy
Yeah, I'm up for you joining. Your works solid in content and pretty damn detailed (I love reading detailed articles the most). You've fulfilled one of the two things we ask for when people are joining (three votes and then an RP), but you've already done RP's with a few of our members, so there isn't any need to go through another in my opinion. And I'm not going to insult your intelligence and assign either you or Njalm a "shadow" to help your works develop, as we've done with a few others. You both know how to get around a wiki without one of us looking over your shoulders and giving helpful advice lol. You've got a vote from me pal, so ask two others and I'm sure you'll be a member in no time. I'm gonna post the joining rules on the GF membership page soon enough, so folks have a better idea of what they need to do lol. Kenji-Taichō (Talk) 14:19, March 25, 2011 (UTC)

You'll have my vote too, Illuminate Void! The Gravity Force could no doupt get alot from you, and vice versa!

Njalm2 14:26, March 25, 2011 (UTC)

I managed to find some thingso i've started changing out the old infoboxes! Thank you for your help!! <3

SkunkMight 07:20, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, you may have my vote. Also, if you want rp again with Kenshin than the only other character that I have that could be a match would be Kiyoshi Souzou an Aizen class character whom might even be slightly stronger than Haru. Though, as he is a good guy I cannot come up with an idea yet for why they would fight.: The Twilight of Your Despair 08:38, March 26, 2011 (UTC)


 * See you've got another twos vote since I was last here lol. No problem, dude. Welcome to the Gravity Force, 'cause you've already done an RP with one of us, so no I'll just add your name :) Kenji-Taichō (Talk) 08:41, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

/* To inform you */
As no one responds to my posting on the talk page of the Gravity Force. The only thing I think we shouldn't do with the new group is develop a new Royal Family for the Soul Soceity as then what if some made a verson of Kamui like Kamui/Gravity Force. Sei would have a break down and we shouldn't remake it completey as most of use use them for reference or have rped with them. Hell, I just though the Royal Family of the other three ruling species I would be happy to donate them for the group to make once each species is finished and buy next wednesday they should be. Also, welcome to the Gf.: The Twilight of Your Despair 22:13, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

Having characters of the royal families is fine just remaking them shouldn't happen like. Least say someone wanted to have a Kamui/Gravity Force than someone in the Gf could use him or edit it to their liking which is wrong. But the Royal Families of the Life Angels/ Spiritual Enforcers (sienote is their name and their job could for the theme of their ruling of destruction) and the Cosmos Souls. As their are of my creation and the royal family are the absolute authority with the king being of them and I don't mind sharing them.: The Twilight of Your Despair 02:52, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

Question should the Raifutenshi or Liffe angels be immortal like the Kosmosukihaku whom are deities and dieties should always have eternal life at least but as they are angels and are to return souls that are going to be reborn back to the world of the living I need to know for out of all the four species they are the ones with the second to last in terms of how many they are.: The Twilight of Your Despair 18:41, March 30, 2011 (UTC)

Well, Shinigami, The Spiritual Enforces the destruction species, the Raifutenshi, and the Kosumosukihaku. while the Soul Society has millions of Soul Society their are only so many Shinigami. And since all the Raifutensh that live in the "near future made Angelic Sanctuary" are that no other species or Souls live there. Inshort out of all the Four species the Raifutenshi are the second to last in popluation.

There are more Shinigami, and Spiritual Enforcers, and less Kosumosukihaku compared. For the souls that aren't Shinigami, Spiritual Enforcer and the Kosmosukihaku that have no eternal life or powers don't count only the ones with powers due.: The Twilight of Your Despair 20:11, March 30, 2011 (UTC)

You still want Kenshi to fight Kiyoshi the current Supreme King? Also incase you didn't understand this is the order from highest to lowest of the number os the species

1 Shinigami have the most in popluation

2 The species of Destruction has the second most in popluation

3 The Raifuteshi have the third highest in popluation

4 The Kosumosukihaku have the fourth highest in popluation. Now while there maybe trillions of them I will count the ones that are immortal for those that aren't have almost no powers.: The Twilight of Your Despair 03:48, April 1, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks!
Thanks man! Will join in soon. Also what do you say about a vote for joining the Gravity Force? I have two now and was hoping yours could be the third one I need. Cheers!-- Jet'ika (Talk  | Contribs ) 01:09, March 27, 2011 (UTC) Sweet! Thanks mate! So now I need a RP, this one ought to do it. Will jump in once I finish up some work I have here. -- Jet'ika (<font color="SteelBlue">Talk  | <font color="SteelBlue">Contribs ) 01:21, March 27, 2011 (UTC)
 * No problem from my side mate. Such liberties have to be taken sometimes to make for a more rich and interesting RP experience. Cheers!-- Jet'ika (<font color="SteelBlue">Talk  | <font color="SteelBlue">Contribs ) 07:13, April 1, 2011 (UTC)

I am really sorry to hear that man, very sorry for your loss. Take your time mate, dealing with this should be your first priority, I totally understand. -- Jet'ika (<font color="SteelBlue">Talk  | <font color="SteelBlue">Contribs ) 17:21, April 2, 2011 (UTC)

About last post, and vote
Hey, sorry for being late replying, I'm normally not on during weekends. As for the post, I just had Myst get out of the way for a moment, so if you'd like to continue, I'd be more than happy to as well. And of course I'd let you join the GF, so if you still need vote #3, you have it. If you need any help, please do not hesitate to ask. User:Firegod00 (Say your prayers) 00:46, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

It's ok. I totally understand. Things sometimes come up like that. Your turn when you have a chance. User:Firegod00 (Say your prayers) 19:35, March 29, 2011 (UTC)

It's no problem. Usually the first response I get when I use that transformation is "No fair, Vamps don't get a trasformation." But I guess the real fight begins now. And of course I enjoyed reading that reaction. User:Firegod00 (Say your prayers) 18:36, March 30, 2011 (UTC)

Oopsie
Hiya! Raze here...a bit late but as one of the founding members I just want to extend a warm welcome to you in joining the GF. I hope you have fun. I'm loving the work you do and would enjoy to RP with you sometime. RozeluxeMeitzen 13:30, March 30, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome! That works. I dont really have any ideas as I usully just go wiith the flow of things, we could have our characters meet and become friends, or enemies, spar, just talk, etc. Doesn't really matter...I just like to RP lol. RozeluxeMeitzen 02:59, March 31, 2011 (UTC)

RE: Welcome!
Hi there! Thanks for noticing me and I appreciate the welcome. You can call me APS or Poetic. Haha, its nice to know that you actually looked me up on Halo Fanon. :3 I hope I do fit in and I'll be sure to roleplay with you anytime. Is there anything I should know before I go underway?

Ah I see. But I had asked the question first. :P Ahh. I see. So I would at least be treated with some respect? And thank you for complementing my work. I'll be sure to for your help if I need anything. Please. Don't be afraid to stop by and chat with me. I'll always be willing. x] And here's a spoiler. I plan to make a Shinigami with a Bankai related to Dreams. ;D Cheers!

Ok
Well that is only right now not including Kaosu Souzou whom hold desrtuctive and creation powers on a planetary scale like the other original Kings and just just for reference and will be killed in the near to come future. And please don't go at me about that as its not like I am every going to use him. He was the first King and the First Kosumosukihaku ever so naturally he is powerful plus it helps to balance out how the opimates are of rivialing strength to the first Kings, And Yes I know that they are basically Hell divided into four parts with each land having like its own personality that can make avatars so that they can move and enter act with.

The rest of the Cosmos Souls that are immortal are weak not including Kiyoshi or his three order brothers.

Just if we rp Kiyoshi is slightly stronger than Haru but in so little regard than it doesn't matter. But I started the last one can you start this one when we ever start it?: The Twilight of Your Despair 04:11, April 1, 2011 (UTC)

Well the Raifutenshi and the Kousmosukihaku can save souls from hell but each have different methods the Raidutenshi can only go to Hell and back with one soul at a time yet they do so in a fast manner that not even the opimates know any until they go. The Kousmosukihaku can go to hell but have to drag the soul out and the souls has to serve them to be forgiven for their sins, but for ones like the King can mentally summon them. But Kaosu might at times in certain rps with Kiyoshi might make an appearance but he will NEVER fight anyone since he is so strong.

Also, I finally found out what could be sealed in the ark. An item that draws in any Reishi like a void but it never stops ot gets filled and that can give unrealistic power to the user but the item has its own mind and possess the user making them the High King an evil far greater than anything found in Hell.

'But Kiyoshi one thing you my want to be aware og he can use Philosophy only an incomplete manifestation be still.: The Twilight of Your Despair 04:50, April 1, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I was thinking Kenshin was following another rouge Royal Guard meember and they end up in the Kyuuten no Souzou the home world of the Kosmosukihaku for only the Soul King's demission is one of the few places that one can enter to the Kyuuten no Souzou without a Kosumosukihaku to teleport them there. Also, I get it what ever level of Kenshi intellect is how much he can possibly pre understand about one's talents and abilities but I think that to avoid op use of it for it took Haru some immense battle planing to defend against an abilitiy of such high calibar that Kenshin should only be able to use it for a certain time limit like say for 20 mintues but after which it take 60 minutes before he can use it again. Also, Kiyoshi isn't a bad guy and is one of the Kings. So I was thinking Kenshin catches the Rouge member of the Guard and damages the capital and to avoid an all out war trys to defeat Kiyoshi or to make him not start a war with the two of the four ruling species. But Kenshin would be in the wrong here.: The Twilight of Your Despair 13:55, April 1, 2011 (UTC)

Well you like the idea for a fight between Kenshin and Kiyoshi in the last meassge?: The Twilight of Your Despair 17:33, April 2, 2011 (UTC)

Translation please Demonic Taint and not demon taint or taint of demons but Demonic Taint. please.: The Twilight of Your Despair 22:38, April 3, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry I had to reset my computer and lost over 1000 pics I wanted to use damn it. Anyways its up to you and maybe just I think when you used him against Haru it was hard to know how to respond. Just I explain abilities and techniques in detail to limit reedits as much as possible. I will start it and you can post whenever you have time.: The Twilight of Your Despair 01:33, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

The Start of War?! Battle Between the Reapers and the Immortals. Post whenever you can. Also Kenshin has to to have came from the Royal Families Demission as other than that the Royal Palace the Kyuuten no Souzou cannot be enterred from the World of the Living, Hecuo Mundo, the Dangai, the Soul Society, or Hell. Without a Kosumosukihaku's aid. I will try to limited insults with Kiyoshi telling Kenshin to get lost, for after all the Soul; Society has no control over any of the other three ruling species.: The Twilight of Your Despair 01:43, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

It is very diffcult as other than the Soul King own Royal Demission in is almost impossible to break in from the outside from the norm of the Soul Society, the World of the Living, Hecuo Mundo, the Dangai, and Hell. Plus the Soul King and the Royal Guard would know of the door that is in the Soul King's Royal Palace that goes to that Kyuuten no Souzou as only members of the First Ring can even see it and is protected by a 12 or so members at all times. That is the story I am working on.

But here is another plan. Kenshin is chasing so rouge members of the Royal Guard and a crimimal Cosmos Soul is helping them and teleports them all to the Capital of the Kyuuten no Souzou and it is while they are fighting so that it does damage to the city.: The Twilight of Your Despair 03:07, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

I didn't read the complete message ok here it the best plan. some of the rouge roual guard member steal rare objects from the palace and one of them is a key to the Kyuuten no Souzou for it was a gift to the first Soul King from the First Supreme King for these two ruling species have never been at war. The Key allows one to be able to enter and leave this world, also their is a special door that was made to go to the Kyuuten no Souzou in the Palace for certain times. Pick whatever idea you want. Just I though if they was an easy way for one King to enter one of the other Ruling Species own spirit world it should only belong to a King.: The Twilight of Your Despair 03:14, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Greetings!
Hey! Just wanted to say hi! dats all....

no wait..

If ur ever up for an RP..

hehehe

Lone Black Garuga 04:22, April 1, 2011 (UTC)

KK! I guess ur just pretty famous Void-san (can i call u dat?) hehehe Lone Black Garuga 11:12, April 1, 2011 (UTC)

Welcome Back!
Its good to have you back, Void. I'm very curious as to your idea for the ﻿Jūsanseiza - I've added some more information about the organisation as a whole, and Kenji even found us a picture to use as the groups symbol and insignia. We've also decided to make an equivalent to the Akatsuki Rings and the Espada's Aspects of Death. Namely the Ancient Greek Zodiacs, befitting the name of the organisation itself. Also, in order to fill up the natural problem that occurs with 13 members, the last three members of Jūsanseiza are the leaders, and those three work in a group of three, as opposed to two - they're pretty much the Triumvirate of the organisation. Though, naturally, one can only make a Triumvirate by the acceptance of the rest of the community.

And as for understanding you, well, pretty much everyone here has faced death in the family atleast once. And it is always pretty major in some way, I think everyone can empathize with your loss one way or the other.

<p style="margin-left: 40px">Oh and, I think it is brilliant to make Tsuchimikado a member of the Juusanseiza, everyone else, except for me have made characters that are heavily linked to their main characters. Kenji's contribution is Suitai Shiba for example, which is a man banished from the Shiba clan due to his cruelty, in a matter very similiar to Koga Kuchiki. I don't think its the least bit unfair, and what if it was? He's a bad guy for heavens sake, its kinda what they do :P'

<p style="margin-left: 40px">Well, there are great differences between the Jūsanseiza and Dorothy's plot, if Jūsanseiza had a large assortment of underlings it'd be almost impossible to defeat them, given that a single team is already incredibly powerful. While Jūsanseiza DO have agents, they're likely not going to play a huge part. Though, I think that the majority of their agents would be within the Shinsengumi, as I can only imagine that Tsuchimikado would issue missions to Kenshin and Tarō based on what Jūsanseiza needs: Taking care of Hiroya so that he cannot intervene, taking care of Haru Nakamaru (given his insanity, and possible former connection to the group)

<p style="margin-left: 40px">This also brings me to my next question, would you be interested as having Tsuchimikado be Miyata's partner within Jūsanseiza? I think they'd be quite compatible personality-wise, as in, they won't kill one another. And since you've yet to make his Zanpakutō, perhaps abilities as well? Not to mention that I highly enjoy roleplaying with you. So well then, what do you say?

--Njalm2 21:21, April 4, 2011 (UTC)

Hey!
Hey, welcome back man! Looking forward to both the RP and how Jūsanseiza develops. On a side note, the zodiac you used in Jūsanseiza for your character is already in use, I used it for my guy just spelled it in the more romanised way:P. Also I have a paper tomorrow so won't be able to come on much today, so talk to you in a day. Cheers! -- Jet'ika (<font color="SteelBlue">Talk  | <font color="SteelBlue">Contribs ) 03:08, April 5, 2011 (UTC)
 * Yes, I agree that we ought to go for coordinated attacks. Taking Hiroya's latest move into consideration, would you like me to have Taro help Kenshin or use the opportunity to attack? -- Jet'ika (<font color="SteelBlue">Talk  | <font color="SteelBlue">Contribs ) 11:25, April 12, 2011 (UTC)

Clearner Message
I needed to make a cleaner message. How about this for Kenshin stops so robbers from stealing a special key that allows the user to enter into the Land of The True Kings, the four Kings neutal member grounds. And so it can up a door to the Kyuuten no Souzou but it will only work once if it is used by someone other than the Supreme Commander or the Soul King. This Key was made a a peace offering during the first great war that almost destroyed all the four ruling species despite the Kosumosukihaku only fight against the Angels. That is a future story arc to explain the past. Just the Soul King is the Key that current has it and it fall into Kiyoshi possess and as a King he can keep it but Kenshin thinks that since it was currently in the Soul King possession and not given to him it should be return and they fight.: The Twilight of Your Despair 13:24, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Umm, do you need the rps name or are you just busy. its fine if you are just curious75.66.254.53 16:18, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

That message was from me: The Twilight of Your Despair 16:25, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

That is fine, Just I will use a fake Haru to steal the Key and after they reach the Kyuuten no Souzou he will kill the fake Haru and Kiyoshi will see Kenshin with the key and since Kenshin only knows of the kings and not all the roles of each one he thinks that the Key should go back to the Royal palace. And they fight and just Haru and Kiyoshi are of nearly equal strength but Kiyoshi is slightly more powerful. And Haru knows that even if Kiyoshi is weakend he knows that Kenshin will be too if not killed which won't happen in the rp.

Also its your turn then I will use the fake Haru after you post what happened before the blast. Also the Sky of the Kyuuten no Souzou is always at twilight or at dusk like around 6 p.m.: The Twilight of Your Despair 18:19, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Your turn and Haru only lasts for one post cause I need Kenshin at near full power to fight against Kiyoshi and yes he left the key and you can just kill the fake Haru as even though he can control them from other worlds he can only control them so well interms of battle perfromance.: The Twilight of Your Despair 19:50, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Your turn.: The Twilight of Your Despair 20:20, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

It your turn cause I don't know if my message are going through as me or as an none login member right now.: The Twilight of Your Despair 13:54, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Had a bad day. Your turn and Kiyoshi will be back to normal just his anger makes his Reiatsu enhance until he lowers down. You see I often say "possess well over twice as much spiritual power as an average captain-level Shinigami" for that is Aizen's and most likely Yamamoto's level of power and since before Aizen's transformation Yamamoto was stated to be even stronger than Aizen. So my belief anything or one with a certain amount of strength beyond twice the spiritual power of a captain cannot be read by others of lower levels.

So to keep with that any charater or idea I make that is Aizen class gets it and it still is labeled as Immense and not some fanfiction name. Just stuff like Treamdous or Crushing should only be used for one with greater than standard Aizen-level power. Like standard Aizen-level power is low S rank power and higher than that is higher S rank power. Anyway your turn.: The Twilight of Your Despair 23:13, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Your turn. Now void I will not strike first like I normally do. Plus the Kyuuten no Souzou is a six cities world Kenshin is in the capital. The sky is a wall like Los Nochas that is why it never changes passed like 6 p.m. One city is always sunny one is always sowing and one is at night each city is different. Just unlike the Soul King the Supreme King deals with the public to a small degree.: The Twilight of Your Despair 01:56, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

Also I made the page Reiryoku (Gravity Force) so that members can make their own levels of Spiritual Power. Just it helps to have them cause lets say you have a character will Crushing Spiritual Power and one with lets say Treamendous Spiritual which one who normally he though to be stronger. Just also Kiyoshi when I finally make his Bankai will enhance his spiritual power to a new level just it helps to know where they fall at now.: The Twilight of Your Despair 02:19, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

Your turn and Kiyoshi has used his power to teleport all the remaining cosmos souls to another city in the spirit world. So now the Capital is empty say form them two. Also, since Kiyoshi is the King he is allowed to attack his building or do everything or anything at least there as his family created the Kyuuten no Souzou. Also I will be using Kaosu for I thought that Kenshin and Kiyoshi weaken each other to where Haru comes back to kill Kenshin for him being a tracer and to catch Kiyoshi. Just Haru leaves for Kaosu being the First Kosumosukihaku and the first Supreme King has like the other three first Kings of the other species destructive powers on a planetary scale. And I WON"T use him for battle for he plays a future role as he knows the Kosumosukihakus strongest ability and need to teach it to Kiyoshi and will die in battle so. Also just he will save Kenshin and Kiyoshi from Haru. Plus, just yes Kenshin is a master of control but Kiyoshi is one of the kings. Also regarding Kaosu whenever near the end, don't have Kenshin learn his memories for it would kill him to see what he saw from before time began to now.

Finally, the Kosumosukihaki that aren't immortal have less power than the later of the Shinigami Academy Students so those are ones you had Kenshin killed. Plus what you think of the new levels of Spiritual Power on the GF version of Reiryoku. Also if you ever due draw blood from him Kiyoshi like any full Cosmos Soul bleeds beautiful white sparkly blood not red.: The Twilight of Your Despair 04:22, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

Tsuchimikado's Zanpakutō
Allright, I did supply a guide for this sort of thing - and while its obvious that its going to be a Kidō type Zanpakutō - given Tsuchi's mastery in this field. But personality is what primarily decides a Zanpakuto's nature - Shirohane is a Defense-Type Zanpakuto because of Hiroya's personality, its massive Kidō enhancements are also based on Hiroya's personality to a degree, he wanted to uncover the secrets of Kidō in order to make all conflict cease to exist. Therefore, Shirohane's abilities naturally work towards that end.

Which means that his goal should also be put into concideration.

Though, I think that the ideal Zanpakutō would be one whom incorporated the use of several elemental attacks, with the possibility of making use of his intellect so as to perhaps combine them into completely new techniques alltogether. Another idea would be an Illusion-Type Zanpakutō, something that focuses on causing powerful mental trauma as opposed to creating traditional illusions like Kyōka Suigetsu, I've yet to see something like that, after all.

Anyhow, it'll be much easier to craft a Zanpakuto once you've put more information on his article.

I'm very much liking the concept so far, I assume this Zanpakuto is capable of summoning these creatures in a Spiritual Form? That'd be especially original given the great advantage it'd give them. It'd also allow Tsuchi to assist Miyata without actually having to risk blowing his cover.

You should also set up his general skills, you needn't write in them right away, but they would give people an idea about what and how he fights.

--Njalm2 21:37, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

RP
Always a pleasure to RP, and I agree it was fun. If you wish to have another one, I'm almost always game, except on weekends, when I'm not home. User:Firegod00 (Say your prayers) 20:37, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm
I reworded it to where both he and his royal guard teleports them away for we aren't really battling yet. Also Kenshin isn't really that weaker Haru but Kiyoshi is only slightly stronger than Haru mostly only in Reiatsu.

Plus in the second post he states that he kill several Kosmosukihaku and once he learns enough of their Reiatsu he can develop a spell or object that can allow in acess. Just The Kyuuten no Souzou is so hard to get into, from places that aren't like the Soul King's demension and in which each Key was create by each Key to allow access for certain times. Plus, Haru wants Kenshin dead for Kenshin keeps trying to hunt him, he wants to take Kiyoshi prisoner for only he other than Kaosu knows the spell method for the Object of Creation.

Once he has all four he can open the Divine arc. And what is sealed inside is a Soul. Just in the past a Soul came into possess of all the Reishi and Reiatsu left behind during the first great war when the first Four Kings clashed with each other. His power became in the class of the original Kings. But the High King is nothing more the Reishi with a mind. It enters the one that frees it. With this power he can keep war from never happening again. Kind of a Itachi meets Madara method. For if one King starts something he will stop that King. It will allow for a hateful but still peace.: The Twilight of Your Despair 13:18, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

P.S it your turn. Plus Kiyoshi most likely will just let Kenshin leave after he tears him a new one for not going to the King whom would have helped him.: The Twilight of Your Despair 13:25, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

its still your turn or do I need to reword it futher?: The Twilight of Your Despair 02:42, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Your turn and I am not angry but it is Cosmos Soul or Cosmos Souls for more than one if you don't feel like saying the japenese version it isn't Cosmic Soul. Also, one thing about Kiyoshi lets just say you may not what Kenshin to get to close for well, least just say I have a secret weapon for when he fights against male characters.: The Twilight of Your Despair 04:13, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

It is fine, And you would be right if I was using Cosmos like a noun like of the sky or like a star or seperate planet. It is effective noun use as I am making Cosmos mean heavenly not of an object, I have asked my college teacher of English if that was right and she said yes. Also its fine if you edited Kiyoshi. But you can post I shot that attack for a reason which will be in my next post. And sorry I am set on their name and after 10 rps I am not going change it now.: The Twilight of Your Despair 04:53, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Your turn told you I had made counter measures. I am going to sleep have to wake up in 6 hours.: The Twilight of Your Despair 05:28, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Your turn.: The Twilight of Your Despair 18:59, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

When are going to post or do I still need to reedit it.: The Twilight of Your Despair 19:15, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Your turn and you will read in the rp but that ability is one of the few that Kenshin zanpakuto ability cannot break or despell. : The Twilight of Your Despair 20:27, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Your turn and just end the rp for its not fun anymore.: The Twilight of Your Despair 20:52, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Howdy
Okay, I've come up with an idea for the GF collective arcs. Do me a favor and check out the Talk:Bleach (Gravity Force) page and leave a few comments if possible. Kenji-Taichō (Talk) 17:45, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

Archive
So, well.. hum, how do you actualy archive your Talk Page then?

Thank you for the assistance, and how does Hiroya's ability review go? I'm like a child on christmas eve for that!

--Njalm2 18:22, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

RE: KY
Well, I'm glad you enjoyed Kei. Haha, thanks for the complements. I'll try my best to complete him as soon as possible. Really, I got your vote? YES. I got three votes now and all I need to do is work on an RP. Thanks for the help, I didn't really figure out that I could've done that from the start. I'll try using youre suggestion next time. x]

Shoot
As the title says, shoot pal. Why be reluctant, though? Regardless of what happens, there will always be people who thinks things are overpowered, while others may think its awesome. Go with your gut and post what you want your Bankai to be instead of designing your abilities around what others want you to post. Anyways, what ya have in mind, and I'll see if I can give you a hand. And sorry about not replying sooner, Void. A late dinner got in the way of that lol. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  20:43, April 9, 2011 (UTC)


 * And you were worried about posting this why? Well, the 1st stage Bankai and 2nd stage Bankai have been done before, so I've no problems with that aspect, and the requirement means he cant spam it continually. These phases would need some level of concentration to perform I'd imagine, and if so, they could be interrupted if the opponent managed to figure out what you were planning. That gives them a weakness and a means by which someone familiar with the execution can avoid it completely. Early prevention is the most effective form of prevention, after all.


 * In regards to the idea of absorbing attacks used against him then. While the idea is sound and certainly effective as an ultimate defense, and in-line as a next stage, continually absorbing attack after attack could prove to be somewhat damaging to his body, both physically and spiritually. If its absorbed, I'd imagine the energy would then need to be cycled through his body to disperse said energy; which in itself could very well overload his system if too much energy is absorbed too quickly. To get around that, maybe you could introduce some manner in which he discharges this energy. Look at Jushiro Ukitake's zanpakutō. While it follows the same theme of absorption, it redirects the attack and fires it back quickly; probably as a fail safe so he doesn't need to actually absorb it into his own body.


 * Now onto this Final Bankai Ability you mentioned. If that was the case, and everything spiritual was negated/absorbed, wouldn't Kenshin lose his own powers also since he is a spiritual being? Even Ichigo couldn't escape the effects of the Final Getsuga when he used it to pulverize Aizen. Overall though, I like the idea and I know this is just a rough draft, but you've got more for Kenshin's Bankai than I have for some of my characters. Hope I helped out, dude. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  21:40, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

RE: Bankai
Oooh! A Bankai, how great - well, Kenshin's Bankai would undouptedly be very powerful, but any Bankai of an Aizen-Class Shinigami would easily be like that. Hiroya's Bankai is especially powerful, as it basically prevents him from dying, although that only works once per battle. Its other abilities also makes him alot more powerful, and the fact that I've not yet written out most of its abilities only adds to this fact.

But please, go on and tell me about it, I'll gladly give you feedback!

This Bankai is as expected incredibly powerful, and I can easily see the possible dilemma in that Yagami no Kenshin is such a powerful Zanpakuto in and of itself while in its Shikai, and thus making its Bankai is a very hard task - I find that making the Shikai and the Bankai at once to be the best solution in that it allows you to freely distribute and share the abilities.

I do however like the first part in that he absorbs the attacks in order to strengthen himself, that works very well. Though the full-body part is likely quite bad.. I for one would find that ridicolously overpowered, for this reason I've come up with a suggestion, why not make a Technique that he can use while in Bankai that releases "Negation Fields", this could work by charges, and be a ranged technique - as its only natural that his Bankai improves upon the Shikais weaknesses. These fields, while capable of being dodged, would serve as both an offense and a defense - as if one takes a direct hit it will likely prevent him or her from making use of Spiritual abilites for a set amount of time, and it can also be used defensively in order to negate opposing effects.

Allright, I figure that it'd work similarily to the Wheel of Time bookseries, in which certain spells are devised to "Shield" an opponent from channeling the One Power (The equivalent to supernatural abilities in that universe) - these spells take the shape of "Shields" that are thrown and whose appearance would likely resemble a Danku. Once it hits the "Shield" slips between the "Channeler" and the "Source" (A term used for the energy required for casting) effectively cutting them off from it for a certain time, and disabling them to make use of any supernatural abilities. I figure that Kenshin would be able to mimic this to an extent.

Njalm2 20:58, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

With his ability to read memories even though it is limited to his own intellect his own intellect is very high, and his that power you may a character that could defeat Kamu or Sei with ease if they were set up with each othe and if you followed through. Even Haru's powers and his necklace that keeps him young and restores his body he still can die if his head is cut off. Just I am not telling you to change a thing but some other people that you may rp with might get mad for your character makes even Aizen-class seem lesser than Kenshin. : The Twilight of Your Despair 21:25, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Illuminate Void
Post your turn. Now I am giving you a latitute, so stop having Kenshin act like he has the right to do can. Also, you don't have to change your character abiltiy but to have such a power with having to only hit something once is kind of op and 'even' orhime powers takes time to restore and even more time to restore lost Reiatsu. but I will be using Philosophy and stop having Kenshin being able to read minds whenever he can that makes rping with him like fighting yourself and him which would make even character of Aizen-calls intelligence having a hard time to fight against. Also I made Philsoophy unable to be negated by spiritual power like attacks still clash like energy beams but any power that destroys other power cannot work on Philosophy powered abilities. Your turn and you tell me about my op powers, abilities and the like so its only fair.: The Twilight of Your Despair 23:14, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Your turn and since Philosophy is a higher kind of supernatural energy that isn't spiritual power, any negation or blocking, or break down power like Sekkiseki, Reason, or Kenshin's cannot undo its affects. However, if one Philosophy energy fueled attack and a Spiritual Power fueled atack clashed into each other than the one with stronger force will win. Just you cannot break down Philosophy except with Philosophy. And Kenshin can have some pre-gathered knowledge of it due to his learning of it from Kiyoshi's but to really understand it one has to manifest it.: The Twilight of Your Despair 15:42, April 10, 2011 (UTC)

NoI planned to added it before, I will admint with Kenshin's ability I was forced to put it on there earlier. You see the Kosumosukihaku have a similar power to Philosophy which is their Deity-like Spirit energy. In limit time frames a Kosumosukihaku can render useless the affects against Sekkiseki and Reason. Just Philosophy is a power that is beyond Spiritual power and so it shouldn't be held that it can be broken down, restored or affected in similar matters like Orihime's powers or Sekkiseki or Reason.

Also, Kosumosukihaku's zanpakuto have no inner spirit and are not contected to the owner meaning anyone can use and release it up to shikai that is incase if you need to re edit. Plus Kenhsin cannot use Philosophy via without going throught the process for to use it even an incomplete manifestation requires that the user goes through a Kaigan (かいがん Spiritual Awakening). Inshort Spiritual Power hinds and sealed Philosophy inside the person and the awakening is how to use it.

Just its called the strongest and oldest known echelon of supernatural energy that can be manifested for a reason. Also do you take on traits form Kaosu the first Supreme King or Kiyoshi alone. BTW your turn. Also all my Aizen and near Aizen-class characters are either Shinigami or a separate species that one cannot normally become one like the Vizards or Arrancars.: The Twilight of Your Despair 19:07, April 10, 2011 (UTC)

P.S Kiyoshi's incomplete manifestation enhances his Reiatsu to where no one lower than him can sense like. Like Aizen''s forst tranformations. Finally, his manifestation of Philosophy is only under the aspect of creation which is why the energy that is releasing from his body is white and is surrounding him like an aura.: The Twilight of Your Despair 19:14, April 10, 2011 (UTC)''

Maybe, but one thing wrong with that idea. Every being both living and spiritual have a source of limitless Philosophy inside of them and using someone else's philosophy energy might go wrong : The Twilight of Your Despair 20:24, April 10, 2011 (UTC)

P.s your turn.: The Twilight of Your Despair 20:25, April 10, 2011 (UTC)

No its your turn this is to give you the change to describe how much if any damage was done to Kenshin I will decide on how much Kiyoshi got. Also, Kenshin could use his "own" Philosophy under the same aspects of Kiyoshi which is creation. For his taking of Kiyoshi's traits give him the ability to call upon his own Philosophy under creation while he uses that ability. But don't op it.: The Twilight of Your Despair 17:51, April 11, 2011 (UTC)

Your turn and if Kenshin uses Philosophy he isn't using Kiyoshi's but his own the second Kiyoshi stops using his Kenshin wouldn't be able to for his ability can only let him use it for as long as Kiyoshi is actively using it. also a translation please Teacher or Understanding and word for word please not similar words but Teacher of Understanding. Finally can you start a new message on my talk page for its hard when I cannot seem to find it. I think soon I'll archive my talk page again.: The Twilight of Your Despair 18:25, April 12, 2011 (UTC)

Your turn and I stopped using Philosophy.: The Twilight of Your Despair 23:05, April 12, 2011 (UTC)

Your turn and Kiyoshi has grown far past pissed off to just not caring about Kenshin. But the fight isn't over yet but he will no longer attack him first anymore for he doesn't deem Kenshin as someone that should be alive or dead.: The Twilight of Your Despair 02:47, April 13, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think we should rp anymore. Your character while prestine are too difficult to rp with, I mean I think Kamui and Seirietou Kawahiru would have been easiler to fight at least fight even if I did lose.

Just, even if it was the character people offent express their views or opinions of something through them. Example, even if it was just something that Kenshin would say and not you more than once you attacked stuff like Philosophy, which I stated multi times that isn't anything like Spiritual Power, its presence's just enhance Reiatsu for Philosophy is a kind of divine-like energy.

You kept telling Kiyoshi off in his own Kingdom and say how worthless or pathetic he was for a King.

Also, even if Kenshin main two powers have flaws the benfits completing outrank the flaws, drawbacks, or conquences for using them. You don't have to change your rp methods or your characters. And for the Record if Kiyoshi had his Bankai Kenshin would have been defeated the greatest enhancement that his Bankai does for him is for enhanced Spiritual Power would make him stronger than Aizen's third or Fourth Transformation. And remember he didn't even release his zanpakuto's shikai.

I would have liked to enjoy this rp more but no I always have to be clam and collected and either make a draw, or a walk away or a lost. I have never once won a rp here.

And before you say winner isn't that important than you do 34+ rps and never once the winner and always letting the others have fun .: The Twilight of Your Despair 12:47, April 13, 2011 (UTC)

It is not so much about winning/ losing or anything like that. Just you proclaim your character a good guy and destroying a city and killing hundreds of people and taking their king. Plus Kiyoshi normally is almost never upset but he hates self-righteous people or people that their views or morals aren't corrupt or at least have no groundstanding to preach that their right. Kiyoshi is normally often even clamer than Aizen, but what Haru and Kenshin did would make him a little angry. Also, Kiyoshi is one to forgive they the one that did the damge help to rebuild it. For if you wrote that Kenshin had permission form the current supreme commander to go there with some royal guardmens Kiyoshi woundn't say no.

Also, can I make one of the three tp characters in the Jūsanseiza or for do you think since Haru is the former founder for Njalm2 thought of it like that I shouldn't make one?: The Twilight of Your Despair 17:37, April 13, 2011 (UTC)

Well, just the offical side goal is to kill him but the top three at least are working with him in secret for he has high intel on the Soul Society and outside of the top three members he is stronger than anyone else in the group at one on one battle. This is just an idea. Also your character for that group is 9000+ plus if you want you can have him/her know how to manifest complete Philosophy.: The Twilight of Your Despair 18:16, April 13, 2011 (UTC)

ok and about haru he may have found the group but he isn't a part of it anymore really Just once Haru becomes the next High King he will have power as in regard to the original kings for what is inside the Divine Arc is a soul infused with all the reishi rom the final clash between the four first kings.: The Twilight of Your Despair 18:42, April 13, 2011 (UTC)

Void, I need help. I need a possible name for Masanori Kawahiru's zanapkuto the only Philosophy based type. Just I am redoing it and well I need a good name. Like how Madara Kawahiru/Kamui's zanpkauto Spiriutal Sickness as a relation to it being the only Reason type. Just anything that comes to mind but here is the latest one if you like it. Beyond Spiritual : The Twilight of Your Despair 19:02, April 14, 2011 (UTC)

Tsuchi and Miyata
Allright, I've been thinking about something, what do you say to create actual Collaboration Techniques between our characters? So as to better allude to their teamwork and abilities, it should be quite easy. Tsuchimikado is very suited for elemental combinations, and so is Miyata to a lesser degrees - both of them are Kido Masters though I personally acknowledge Tsuchimikado as being clearly superiour in that field.

Miyata has limited Elemental Techniques, his Mist holds traces of Fire, and he's capable of creating Fire remotely as well, quite ironic in fact: Miyata's primary use in Teamwork would of course be to provide a "Physical Represantation" of several elements, most likely Water and Fire, the Water case would of course always be possible and due to the enormous mass of Water that Miyata can more or less conjure up from his sleeve, Tsuchimikado would easily manage to create a true Deathtrap.

I also envision that Tsuchimikado would be capable of using Miyata's mist to great degrees as he's capable of using it as a physical represantation of both Genbu and Suzaku. I can easily imagine that Tsuchi would be capable of shaping the mist into the form of Suzaku for an incredibly powerful fire-based attack (essentially making use of both his and Miyata's Spiritual Energies for maximum effect) - and then use his Reishi Absorbation Abilities in order to return Suzaku back to the state of mist (thus not harming Miyata's Spiritual Resserves)

So, what do you say?

Njalm2 21:47, April 11, 2011 (UTC)

Swan and the Hunter, Final Phase
Alright, the Swan and the Hunter is approaching its end now; this last "Phase" of the battle is dedicated mainly to Hiroya﻿'s most powerful abilities, the first few posts will be about Hiroya's incredibly enhanced Kidō spells (I envision him using Sōkatsui Hato on a massive scale, summoning roughly a houndred of doves in a single go - and by that force Tarō and Kenshin to exert themselves to the maximum of their abilities. I'm also planning on following your advice an create a "Cero Metraletta" style Shō variation, enabling for one of those "Bullet Hells" you spoke about.

Finally, I'll be closing the case with a case of Incomplete Philosophy, and by that cause the last part of the battle to be primarily physical as he'd effectively lose all of his Zanpakutō abilities while in that state. With the hidden agenda of testing it out in battle - with the final application being one of the Sacred Spells.

Oh and, since you've not, (as far as I remember) used Sezokuteki Kuusou on Hiroya once in this roleplay, feel free to do so whenever you want - it'd be fun to see how Hiroya's memories and personality would affect Kenshin!

PS: ''I've read the roleplay between Kiyoshi and Kenshin up to this point, and you're doing quite the good job. Though like always, I think that TD5 might've exagerated the inteligence of Kiyoshi, as he really doesn't appear to be that composed and inteligent, actually, at certain moments he's almost like Kenpachi Zaraki ^^''

Njalm2 22:41, April 12, 2011 (UTC).

I have to say up till now this RP has been loads of fun and really informative in the sense that I know now what the next step in Taro's development should be. I mean I have become aware of a general lack of specialized attacks in his arsenal and his over reliability on his portal related abilities. So I was thinking that for this final phase I would have him go into Bankai, but the problem is I am still unsure what to make of his bankai. I had intended it to be such a strengthening of the portals that they could suck people in and push them out like tiny little black holes if Taro so chooses and then a general powering up of his shikai abilities along with a few new moves. But I'm still unsure of this and was wondering if you had any suggestions for his bankai? Cheers! -- Jet'ika (<font color="SteelBlue">Talk  | <font color="SteelBlue">Contribs ) 03:04, April 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Generally even I don't like adding stuff in the middle of RPs, but in this case I thought that maybe some sort of a boost after his bankai would help and so I thought if I had a better idea of what his bankai would be then I could have the power up written up properly. Your suggestions are really brilliant, the bankai idea is really, really good. Mixes in really well with his shikai. As for the inventions, I am working on a few and the soldier pills are something I have been thinking of as well. I was watching One Piece a while back and the Ruble ball that Chopper uses as well as Luffy's gear second kinda gave me a few idea. The thing will give the user a temporary boost in spiritual pressure but it can only work at optimal efficiency once a day or so. Every subsequent pill taken after the first one will have lesser and lesser effect and at the same time be harmful to the person consuming it also. A major problem right now is that my comp crashed and I lost all my data, so the itsy-bitsy notes I had saved are all gone. So will have to do the write-ups all over again. So I guess I'll just update his abilities after the RP is over. Cheers and thanks for the wonderful suggestions! -- Jet'ika (<font color="SteelBlue">Talk  | <font color="SteelBlue">Contribs ) 23:26, April 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * I'm fine with anything dude, so make your post as you want to and I'll post accordingly after that. And take all the time you want. I'm having some laptop problems as it is so I might be a little irregular with my activity for a few more days. -- Jet'ika (<font color="SteelBlue">Talk  | <font color="SteelBlue">Contribs ) 08:20, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

Question
hi how you doing

now i think it was on Shadow-sama's talk page. now if i am wrong then you can forget about it,or i had a blonde moment. I did see was it you that would have liked to RP against my Mori clan. if it was then just leave a message on my profile and i will get back to you when i can. Then i did make some new changes to Yoshitsugu. Maybe you will like it even better. also thank you for reading my message and i would enjoy to RP with you. then if it was to anyother person i am sorry i jsut had a blonde moment if it wasn't to me.

(Sentonara 19:41, April 13, 2011 (UTC))

Translations please The four ruling Kings. And the ruling species of destruction will be very simliar to shi igami but will have some unique powers.: The Twilight of Your Despair 20:41, April 13, 2011 (UTC)

Umm, I was thinking that your characteras one of the top three that are in secre still keeping ties with Haru Nakamaru out of respect for he founded it. Alao, I think the screams of slience when I make should fall into Kenshin hands for Haru's watches daily and to see over ten thousand years of history's worse events in a second whould drive anyone mad.: The Twilight of Your Despair 21:11, April 13, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, well the Screams of Slience are well, lets just say not matter how well powerful one's mind is the viewing of it will affect the viewer badly if only a little its that horrifying. Also, would one of their side goals is to take out the Four Kings I mean even if the Soul Society and the Royal Guard were to be defeated won't the other three King take actions to protect one of the other Kings.

Plus, I think we should have an rp with Haru leaving the group and your character becoming the new leader.: The Twilight of Your Despair 22:37, April 13, 2011 (UTC)

RE: Greetings
Why thank you so much! ^^ And yes, I would very much like to RP with you in the future. Though I may be a bit distracted. I'm working on another project separate from the fanons. Here is a link if you care to give it a look. http://myinferno.wikia.com/wiki/Characters Sadow-sama 22:07, April 13, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks ^^ And yes, it is inspired by that title, given the similar (somewhat) storyline. And yes, it should make for an interesting meeting. :3 Sadow-sama 22:52, April 13, 2011 (UTC)

yo
hey man, want to RP tommorrow? Grizzaka 04:39, April 14, 2011 (UTC)

Um tell you what, when you have the free time then we can start cuz i can tell your really busy. Grizzaka 21:49, April 14, 2011 (UTC)

Congratulations
Kou! It's been a while, ol' buddy. I would hereby like to congratulate you with your recent work, as it is truly ingenious (not that your previous work sucked or something like it, but this just stands above it). I love the things you did with Kenshin Yagami, and Ishida Ryuichi isn't just the regular article either. Therefore, you have been awarded with the official Medal of Kaisomeness, given out only to those with work I find truly appealing. Even though I made it up on the spot, consider it a gift of great honor and fortune. 'Til the next! Kai -  Talk  18:47, April 14, 2011 (UTC)

Great Work!
Hey Void, just wanted to say that your work is fantastic and greatly enjoy reading your articles and the RPs that you're involved in. Your attention to detail and descriptive narrative definitely makes your stories pop more. Anyways, figured I would introduce myself and give praise where it's due. Hope you have a good one! Northstar1012 21:45, April 14, 2011 (UTC)

Masanori Kawahiru
When I finish making him would you like to rp against Masanori. Since Sei isn't going to be using him anytime soon I will ask him if I can use him for he was a gift last xmas, old tradition I brought from my admin days on other site. Help the Head Admin with articles or create new ones for him/her. Also, his Philosophy type zanpakuto needs a better name any ideas. Also, complete Philosophy manifest different for Masanori's its his bankai and for lets say Kiyoshi when he can finally use it. His eyes will look like their filled with purple energy and will grant him beyond normally powers.: The Twilight of Your Despair 03:07, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

Well just Masanori will be like a friend to Kiyoshi so he may be some pay back for what he and Haru did to the Kyuuten no Souzou for his wife was from there and it is now his home for he plans to kill Kamui cause he killed his wife on there wedding date. Also, about Philosophy just the four different colors that manifest outward of the body will when all four are manifested will become the complete Philosophy, and I was thinking his Bankai should be it.: The Twilight of Your Despair 04:25, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

Which out of all of these names sounds better for a Philosophy Zanpakutp.

Divine Immortal, Harmonious of the Spiritual Method, Freedom Blessing, and Finally, Cure of Sin.

Which out of the names sound better.: The Twilight of Your Despair 18:38, April 16, 2011 (UTC)

thxs
thank u fa the help on Yoshi... it was frustrating im still not very well with editting yet and I make alot of mistakesTwonjr2 19:28, April 16, 2011 (UTC)TwonJr2Twonjr2 19:28, April 16, 2011 (UTC)

Howdy Pal
Well your right in saying that no ones delved far into the past. I've touched on the history, but not any further than the 2100 years when Yamamoto founded the Academy and from what I've seen of other articles, others have done the same lol. Before that, its pretty much a black spot with nothing explained and a world of possibilities to be explored. I say go for it, pal. You seem to have the relationships well in mind and the general structure of the story considered as well. I knew you'd make one of the Triumvirate an awesome character, and not just because of her abilities. Anyways, looking at Unohana, I can't see her being that much older than Shunsui or Ukitake, 'cause both Ginrei Kuchiki and Yamamoto look like fossils in comparison. At the very least, I'd hazard a guess that she was only a Captain a couple of years before them, or perhaps an Instructor at the Academy; hence the title? I don't know, but any of those are equally possible. I guess I'll be looking forward to the completed Pendulum story then :) Good luck with this idea, Void. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  09:04, April 17, 2011 (UTC)

Iwanaga
I first want to say that I very much enjoy reading about her, though for the sake of belief I think you should reduce her age quite alot, given that Shinigami can die of old age as well, and if you don't you should probably make her look like an old withering woman.. that would actually be kinda cool :P - though if you do reduce her age, you should do it to about.. 3.400 years or so, much more believable in my opinion.

Oh and.. I wonder what kind of Zanpakuto you have in store for her, I'd be happy to help in its creation :)

Njalm2 09:40, April 17, 2011 (UTC)

hey? Gotei 13
Hey i was gonna create a char for the Gotei 13 and make him lieutanant of the 1st division I just wanted to know if ur gonna make one 2 so that we dont have 2 lieutanants for the same position.

Howdy Pal
I'm using one of my new arcs to test out a new writing style I've been meaning to try out for myself. Its based on the style the Bleach Wiki use for highlighting important battles. I was wondering if you'd give me your opinion on the article as a whole? Its called A New Occupation... Introducing Team Sanretsu. At the end of part II, I intend to have a large-scale battle from multiple different point of views and locations, and want to get this style under my belt, so to speak, before that point in my story comes about. If you could give me some feedback, it'd be greatly appreciated, dude. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  20:40, April 17, 2011 (UTC)


 * That's the very reason I asked for some feedback, pal. I intend to write the meeting between The Ryu Order and Averian's Army in that style at the end of Part II, so I'm basically using this arc and my next as practice for that and to work through any kinks and improve it generally. But thanks for the compliments and the advice, dude. This is a style I only intend to use for my own stories, 'cause my usual writing style works well enough I think for the usual RP's I do. It just makes getting everything I need to get across a lot easier, instead of writing several different articles and linking them together, you know? I also like the style, now that Ive wrote two stories using it, so that in itself is a nice thing. And I saw that story back when you first wrote and worked on it, and liked it quite a bit. No one (apart from Sei, that is) uses Unohana much in their stories, so that was nice to see, actually. And you actually portrayed her well, which I find somewhat difficult to do with important canon characters. Anyways, thanks again for the feedback, and no worries about time, buddy. I understand you've got your own things to do, after all :) <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  17:23, April 21, 2011 (UTC)

RE: Bygones be Bygones
Sure, I'd like that as well. Though, to be honest, I didn't really think much about it up until now. Also, I apologize for my late reply, I've been feeling rather under the weather lately. Anyways, yeah, not much to say but let's begin anew. I have enjoyed reading some of your articles as of recently, I can honestly say you have a bright future in writing should you ever pursue it. --Seireitou-shishō (My True Identity 21:06, April 17, 2011 (UTC)

RE: Spiritual Affinity
I have to admit that I very much like this idea, it gives him a very unique technique, which seems to very much be the base of most powerful villain-like characters I've seen so far. It would also serve to make him much more formidable and more fearsome. Along with opening up a grand array of different possibilities for other characters - infact I think the idea is so good that you should likely write an article about it and give it to the rest of the Gravity Force!

Njalm2 18:56, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

yo bro
wanna do an RP? Grizzaka 19:42, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

my bad bro, I've been sleeping and i forgot to check up and idk if any character you have can match up with Ray Martinez. Grizzaka 14:17, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

No not Ryu Martinez Ray Martinez, and if you seen ray he's not too bad with the force either but anyway i would want to RP with you, mind if u start it off? Grizzaka 02:52, April 22, 2011 (UTC)

Wikipedia
Hey Void, I've noticed you have the tendency to link to wikipedia by putting , which doesn't actually link to it. The correct way would be. ;) Kai  -  Talk  09:11, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

Cosmos Soul Request
Sure you can make one. If you want you can make one of Kiyoshi Souzou's three older brothers whom are even stronger than him or weaker depending which one or you can make someone else thats up to you. And I am fine.75.66.254.90 22:36, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

P.S that message was from me. Also, and there will be other things that all Cosmos Souls have that you might have to add. Like Pale Skin and they bleed beautiful sparky white blood instead of red blood and to have a zanpakuto requires the Cosmos Soul to be immortal.: The Twilight of Your Despair 22:39, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, about about their Spiritual Power. The Cosmos Souls can purify demonic spirits by physical touch, and in limited time frame render useless the affects of Sekkiseki and Reason. Like how Kiyoshi can render those two things useless for a period of 32 minutes and that a long time but he is the King. So inshort that is why they have Deity-like Spirit Energy. Also, the standard shape of their zanpakutos are nodachi which are just longer katanas but that only the standard form. The Cosmos soul can make the weapon into whatever sealed form they want during its creations.: The Twilight of Your Despair 22:58, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

Thats fine and I have good, evil, and netural characters. and just cause Kaosu Souzou the first Cosmos Soul saw the future and choose japanese culture to base off his species that is only for his captial in the world. Their is an Italian lookingcity, Chinese looking city, an American city and a few others.: The Twilight of Your Despair 01:49, April 21, 2011 (UTC)

If you want you can make him one of Kiyoshi's Royal Guardsmen.: The Twilight of Your Despair 13:18, April 21, 2011 (UTC)

Ok well, then he then will be part of the Souzou clan. As he will be part of the royal family. Also how about you make the eldest brother amd that he choose a Chinese theme or names for some of his abilities.: The Twilight of Your Despair 16:14, April 21, 2011 (UTC)

I forgot most of the Royal Families males are tall at least 6 ft in the Souzou clan. Also, while your character isn't finished and yes I know that she is more powerful than Haru in one-on-one cambact would you like Haru to fight against your Jūsanseiza character.: The Twilight of Your Despair 19:37, April 21, 2011 (UTC)

Haru Nakamaru - Battle
Alright, Twilight has been asking me about a battle between Haru and Miyata - I figure that we might put outselves together on this one and attack him in unison. Tsuchimikado and Miyata, this would let us test both characters and their teamwork together by extension as well as furthering the goals of the organization as a whole.

Njalm2 20:50, April 21, 2011 (UTC)

Sure but please don't beat Haru Nakamaru like a rag doll like with how you fought against him with Kenshin and How Njalm2 fought against him with Hiroya. Thought I will still not be using his bankai I will be using his skills foreal this time.: The Twilight of Your Despair 21:07, April 21, 2011 (UTC)

Two transitions please: Immortal Untainted God. and Fruit of the Tree of the Knowledge of Good and Evil. and I hope to rp with you and Njalm2 soon.: The Twilight of Your Despair 21:39, April 21, 2011 (UTC)

Hey thanks for the transitions and I was thinking that your future Souzou Cosmos Soul clan member is the first born male of the current generation of the royal family and is hunting down one of his younger brothers for he is now evil and wants to kill him. And you can make him stronger than Kiyoshi as he would be his oldest brother at least 10,000+ years old.: The Twilight of Your Despair 17:17, April 22, 2011 (UTC)

Well, side from their last name being Souzou a pun off as it means creation for them being the ruling species od creation. The royal family has far great powers and secret techniques than all other clans or houses of Cosmos Souls don't have and well they are to make sure humans don't gain divine or godly power for their duties also include showing over that supernatural that isn't in related to the shinigami jobs regarding Souls.: The Twilight of Your Despair 18:10, April 22, 2011 (UTC)

P.S going take a shower be back into 35 minutes.: The Twilight of Your Despair 18:10, April 22, 2011 (UTC)

I am back and well what you kind of powers you would like to give to him or none spell like abilities, for any not Shunpo, Hakuda, or Zanjutsu, or Zanpakuto abilities are called none spell like abilities like their ability to create Reishi etc.: The Twilight of Your Despair 19:19, April 22, 2011 (UTC)

Well, yes your character can use the creation of reishi to be able to make objects but it also can increase Reishi in the area. (However, he cannot just create things with his mind only those that has the rarest power Souzou (Creation) can do that and only the first King Kaosu Souzou has been know to be able to use it.) Also, just once a Cosmos Soul creates their zanpakuto they cannot give it more powers like a Shinigami zanpakuto this is to prevent op use. This is just to really prevents one from making an elemental based zanpakuto to a Kido and to an even higher type.

As they know all the secrets for their zanpakuto have no inner concentation as there is no inner spirit in any Cosmos Soul Zanpakuto. As for they Mystical Power thats just their spells and none spell like abilities that, Their Shunpo like ability and Hakuda and Zanjutsu are like how other species select them. As for his history he attend a Kosmosukihaku Acadmey which are of the six cities that make up the Kyuuten no Souzou. And each Acadmeny is equal in education, just he went to the one in the Capital. Finally, I know you want him to have a Chinese theme but you kind of need to make his last name Souzou for all of them have that surname in the Royal Family. But if you want you can make how Madara Kawahiru is Kamui on his Article but Madara Kawahiru is still his real name.: The Twilight of Your Despair 20:50, April 22, 2011 (UTC)

Well ok just have it like that his and Kiyoshi's father gave him his name for certain reasons. And yes their spells and and abilities are far different from Kido like Saido: (さいどRedemption) which save souls from hell, or Tezawari no Kurenjingu: (てざわりクレンジングTouch of Cleansing) which can cleanse the sins of souls or Saikouishiki: (さいこういしきSupreme Sense) which not only can sense Reiatsu but can sense movement, emotions, and temperatures and even Philosophy. Just their spells gives them more open room to do what they want ot a point. So yes there power lets them do the immpossible like naturally able to rewrite reality, or control time or space, or create things out of then air, or purify evil etc. But still they aren't all powerful. Even Kaosu Souzou's power doesn't over lap any of other three first Kings or the High King of End at least one-on-one.

He doesn't have to go to the Academy but he must have developed his immotality and not be born with it for he he was he would stay a bady. for all Cosmos Souls have to for until one does gain eternal life they age like humans not like souls despite them being spirit beings themselves. Once they do they don't age anymore permentanly like how Kiyoshi looks 22 and is well over 4000. I hope you can create someone far more powerful than Kiyoshi.: The Twilight of Your Despair 21:31, April 22, 2011 (UTC)

P.S. Yes Kido is called the demon way but it is also called the spirit way. Just in Japan every kind of supernatural thing that isn't Kami or divine is often called spiritual or demon which can both be the same thing.: The Twilight of Your Despair 21:31, April 22, 2011 (UTC)'

Their method of gaining immortality differs from one Cosmos Soul to the next. Kiyoshi developed his at age 22 for that is when his powers were masterred and by mastered I means like when his powers gained deity status. Doing good, evil or neutral things govern when it will happen( also this dictates what kind of god they will become a good, evil or neutal one.) Like how Kiyoshi is neutral but does help more good people out than evil ones. and its something that happens differently as it something that is subconscious as the Cosmos Soul entire self on every level of exitence needs to know that they are immortal. And once their immortal status is gained their spiritual powers will really start to develop or grow. You see none immortal Cosmos Souls have never little Spiritual Pressure almost none and is why their gaining of immortality have nothing to do with their spiritual power as their spiritual pressure is so weak it cannot help to develop it.

As for powers, the reason their aren't that mean really powerful one left is the a civil war broke out and to prevent anymore 98% of all of the Cosmos Souls don't want their immortality and are so weak they can barely be called anything with powers. and Kiyoshi an Haru are equal if not higher than Aizen into regards at least. They both have well over twice the spirit energy as a captain like Aizen and have intellects at least of Aizen's level.: The Twilight of Your Despair 22:48, April 22, 2011 (UTC)

RE:Tōjū
Well, to answer your question, even though it's not technically "canon," a zanpakutō that does not possess a master/partner/weilder is considered a Tōjū (which is literally "beast sword"), giving off a sense of no control, which is due to having lost their master. Although it was stated in the anime that all Tōjū will eventually become mindless creatures that must be destroyed or they'll pretty much destroy anything in their path, most Tōjū on BFFW are given a reason as to why they haven't become mindless creatures of mass destruction. Take my Tōjū, Tenkō, for example: he was slowly losing his free will, but after my titular character, Naishō Kawahiru, found him and took him in as a secondary zanpakutō, thereby giving him a new master of sorts, he regained the part of his free will that he had lost, which stopped the process of him becoming a typical Tōjū. If you want any more information on the Tōjū, you should check out  on Bleach Wiki. Sorry if my explanation was a little much, by the way. :L

--- <font color="#FFFF00" face="Verdana">Gamemaster <font color="#FFFF00" face="Verdana">(Rules)  00:41, April 22, 2011 (UTC)

Triumvirate Zanpakuto
Alright, I've come up with an idea for an incredibly powerful Zanpakuto that I'll give to my Triumvirate character, if I'm allowed to make him. Since I have a ton of ideas in my head already I'll be relaying some details to as the nature of his Zanpakuto. I envision him to have a Zanpakuto that deals with the manipulation of dreams, or rather -. to be more correct. The creation of them. While in theory omnipotent, I've planned for it to have an interesting aspect, but for which I need your help, or rather the help of Iwanaga. I'll explain more if you accept.

His Zanpakuto is very dangerous in that it draws everyone within an immediate vicinity into a dream realm of sorts - he is capable of controling that completely and thus he can freely alter the rules of reality and logic however he pleases. However, it ain't selective in its use and would thus see no difference between foe and ally, moreover, he's one of those whom simply have so tremendously large amounts of Spiritual Power that its impossible for him to seal it, meaning that the Zanpakuto would remain in a constant released state - and I'm certain that you realize how bad that'd be. I've not included too much information here, but I can assure you that it'd be in Jūsanseiza's best interests for that not to happen. The idea is, that Iwanaga, in order to protect herself and the rest of the organization decided to seal his Zanpakuto completely, with several Talismans and likely with many powerful seals - and I can only imagine that Tsuchimikado would've helped. While he's still capable of using it, he first has to undo the seals in question with a special incantation and preperations, and there's ALOT of them, the Zanpakuto would also be locked away from his reach during normal situations and has to be "Summoned" by a specific spell that Iwanaga, given her mastery of the old ways have designed especially for that purpose.

He's also capable of, though this requires the sacrifice of a Spiritually aware human - swap dream for reality, and vice versa. Trough this ability he's made himself a "second" Zanpakuto which he uses in the absence of the original one, this one has abilities vaguely similiar to the original but much less powerful. I play with the thought of having the Jūsanseiza headquarters actually be in this "Dream realm" which would govern the fact that no one has ever found it. I also plan for his "Second" Zanpakuto to be the actual key to the place. So what do you think?

Alright, I'll adress your questions systematically.


 * 1) It brings the soul of the target inside, which means that humans will appear to go into a coma while it is in effect, while Shinigami will vanish completely, due to them naturally only consisting of a soul. He himself also vanishes as well,


 * 1) Its actually a combination of the two, it is both within his own mind and within a seperate space inside the essence of his Zanpakuto: The Zanpakuto provides the "Space", he himself provides "Personality" - this also means that the Zanpakuto itself remains in the actual realm while this is in effect, actually, it is possible to say that he essentially makes them enter his "Inner World", destroying the Zanpakuto would effectively trap its residents inside that realm til the Zanpakuto is repaired.


 * 1) As I mentioned earlier, the Zanpakuto is in a constant released state, this doesn't change even if it is sealed; the seal only prevents it from affecting the area continously and thus invariably causing great harm to friend and foe alike. The "Second" Zanpakuto is configured in such a way as to work around the seals and thus provide a passageway to the "Dream Realm" - also, its configured so that it has a very easy-to-read Spiritual Signature which can be affixed to Talismans in order to create additional "Keys".

Alright, that is the answers.

Njalm2 19:43, April 22, 2011 (UTC)