User talk:Illuminate Void

Archived
Archived my talk page. If you want to re-open old conversations, please put "RE:" as part of the heading. --- Illuminate Void (Talk) 16:26, May 31, 2011 (UTC)

RE: RP
Wow, this is really just that awesome! When I created Sōsaku, my target was to create just as an unique and many-sided character like Kenshin. So, yeah, I'd be thrilled to rp against him! :) Kai  -  Talk  18:42, May 31, 2011 (UTC)


 * Yeah, I'll get on it when I've finished studying and all >> And heck yeah you're right, this is going to be an rop that defies all common sense ;) Kai  -  Talk  13:33, June 1, 2011 (UTC)


 * Well, the rp is up: I Am Truth. I chose the name because it reflects your char's abilities and position, while it is also a reference to Salvador Dali, whom Sōsaku was inspired by. Hope you like it :) Kai  -  Talk  16:16, June 1, 2011 (UTC)


 * Okay, I've responded and now the confrontation can begin :P If there's anything unclear or unjust within my actions just give me a call Kai  -  Talk  19:02, June 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * Np, I completely understand Kai  -  Talk  13:22, June 3, 2011 (UTC)

I hope you don't mind, but I took control over Kenshin's movements for one post as a sort of "vision". I tried to portray his swordsmanship as poetically and masterfully as possible, so I hope you're content with it. I really like how this rp is going, Kenshin really is a more than worthy opponent against Sōsaku's mind-games ;) Kai  -  Talk  19:42, June 15, 2011 (UTC)


 * Yeah, I'm quite into Harry Potter and all and I'll be sure to read it once I've finally finished my exam period (I'm nearing the end -yay- ^^). Also, if you're wondering about the new header I inserted you'll got to wait a bit more. I'm sure I'll find a way for Sōsaku to subtly mention it but I can assure you it's very symbolic regarding both our characters' powers. ;) Kai  -  Talk  15:01, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

No problem at all. In my opinion it's only natural for a swordsman of Kenshin's mastership to shape even the most casual of attacks into awe-inspiring formations ;P Anyway, I'm really thrilled by which direction this rp is going - more interesting with every post ^^ Kai  -  Talk  07:13, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

I think I have succumbed to the same mystery as you :P I theorized that the meeting of Kanzadatō and Yagami no Kenshin would create some sort of loop effect (you know, with Genzoumetsu breaking down Kanzadatō's effects but at the same time Kanzadatō messing up that ability) and decided to add a more show to it. I think that both fighters are very weak to the other's zanpakutō, Kenshin in lieu of being a projection of his actual form - his sword - and Sōsaku's chaotic mindset risking to be "rationalized" by Yagami no Kenshin's powers. After all, his madness is partially contributed at Kanzadatō's effects and without them he would lose a lot of his genius. Kai -  Talk  07:37, June 22, 2011 (UTC)


 * Hey Void, kinda off topic here, but I strolled across this pic which greatly resembles Tsuchimikado Shikizaki and you might use in the future. Anyways here's the link :) Kai  -  Talk  03:08, June 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * On a similar note: here (sry if this is bothering you :P) Kai  -  Talk  03:25, June 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * No sweat. I'm only active now because I'm bedridden due sickness and my school is finished, so I completely understand your position ;) Kai  -  Talk  12:18, June 28, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry for not posting and all... It's just that I've got a lot of crap on my shoulders these days and I can't really find time to post on our rp... I'll try to do so as soon as I can~, however! :) Kai  -  Talk  19:00, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome :D Let's give the universe a treatment it has never seen before ^^ And even if we do, Sōsaku would loveit :P Kai  -  Talk  07:46, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Wow :O Your post was awesome, I spontaneously almost applauded upon seeing it... I never thought the battle would come to this, but I think I'm gonna try to face Kenshin on an equal ground and pull out my Bankai as well :O I think i can forgo the preceding rituals seeing the... Unusual conditions :P Watch out, the solution of dividing by zero was a negative and its square root is about to be drawn :P Kai  -  Talk  14:40, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Battle of Quincy
Hey, Inate (may I call you that?). I was wondering if you'd like to have an rp between our quincy characters when I complete mine. If you'd rather not, I completely understand. Ciao~

Alright, I apologize for butting in here but I just want to drop off a future idea - given how you two have the most well-written Quincy Characters on the page I want to up the subject about Ryuichi and Kanzen sometime in the future cooperating against Alejandro due to the fact that his desire to completely eradicate the Quincy would undoubtably put him at odds with both of the characters at a certain point in time - this could serve to furthen the storylines of all three characters, what do the two of you say? Master N 20:21, July 2, 2011 (UTC)


 * Hiya, IV (that's what I shall call you now, kay?). I was wondering, if you're not too busy, if you'd like to start our roleplay between Ishida Ryuichi and Kanzen Horagai? I know you're really awesome at starting rp's, so I'd like it if you could, but I can do it if you'd like. Also, how's this for a name: "Quincy: Royalty of Not?" I thought of it because Kanzen is of the Horagai clan, who are descended from royalty, and Ryuichi is the self-proclaimed Quincy Prince. If you don't like it, I'm sure I can find another name. Ciao~


 * Hey, IV. Just updating this, 'cause I guess you missed it; ciao~


 * Yeah, my home computer isn't working at the moment, so I'm using my dad's computer right now. I plan on doing what you suggested when I get back to my mom's house tomorrow. And can you start it, please?

That's okay. I'll be busy this coming week as well, so we'll get to it when we get to it. :L

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 * Hmm, since you always come up with awesome ideas, I don't know how interesting this will be to you, but I was thinking this: What if Kanzen had learned about Ryuichi creating an artificial zanpakutō, and was searching for him so he could create him one as well?  Seeing as Shiba frequently lends Kanzen his secondary zanpakutō, I'm sure Kanzen would get annoyed that he has to rely on his partner for something like that.  That's just my thoughts, though.

Review
Hi, IV; I was curious if you could do either a normal review, a balance review - or both - for my new main character. If not, I completely understand. Also, I've been reading Turn Back The Pendulum: Sengoku, and I must congratulate you on it. You're an absolutely brilliant writer, and I can't wait until the next chapter; ciao~

Hiroya's Advancement
Alright, I've long had troubles with Hiroya's advancement, as I don't want to give him something like Hollowfication or such - but improve upon existing talents of his mastery, most likely Kido. I've come to the conclusion as to have Hiroya's spell gradually begin to defy the laws of physics; making him capable of controling Time (something which he's already capable of to an extent) Teleport himself over vast distances, Astral forms, Illusions, Clairvoyance and possibly manipulate reality to a restricted degree, pretty much making his spells more Magical in nature and indeed quite similiar to Sortiarius.

I'd like to hear thoughts, suggestions and much of such from you, given that two of your characters have abilities in Kido equalling that of Hiroya's; namely Tsuchimikado and Iwanaga. And would thus be fit to comment upon this better that a good deal of others.

Alright, I've added some "Abstract Spells" to Hiroya and would much like you to look into them and tell me what you think, along with any suggestions.

Re: Izanagi
Your idea is something close to what I myself concidered possible as well; You're right though, Iwanaga's power would undouptably be much greater than the power of Ningyomada at that point: And such she would be immune to it, but only then, she'd likely not be immune to it anymore after Izanagi has become as powerful as he has, which would be why they decided to seal it away. Master N 19:09, June 25, 2011 (UTC)
 * I have finished illustrating Izanagi's "Bankai" and would like it if you gave me your opinion of it, also - I've given him a lot of air-themed abilities due to the fact that elemental powers are so versatile and powerful; and I might of course have been somewhat influenced by your ideas for Iwanaga.

RE: Clan Mortfleau
Alright, I'm simply re-opening this subject here along with the notice that I've added some more information on the page, I've also added a special form of jewelry which is worn by the clan members - which a Diabolus can be bound to, either crudely, or perfectly so, with the help of the given Diabolus' Epithet: The item in question is sitated from the page!

Scau (御召し輪, Lit. French for "Sigil", Japanese for "Summoning Ring"): Is a small object, usually in the form of a ring or similiar form of jewelry that is worn by a member of the Clan; the inside or back of the object is blank allowing a member to inscribe the particular Diabolus' Epithet; which when written in this manner allows the member complete and utter control of the Diabolus, allowing them to call upon them whenever they want. The rings can however also be used to call upon Diabolus whom are bound normally, though the Diabolus may in that case choose to deny the summon, albeit with painful consequences. Njalm2 22:43, May 31, 2011 (UTC)

RE: Juusanseiza Mission
Alright, I've decided that if we'll stick with your idea, I'll be impersonating Szayel Apporo Granz, due to the fact that I believe I'd be capable of mimicking that one to an extent; if we do a poor job of roleplaying them it'll pretty much be wasted, so if you plan on roleplaying Ulquiorra I really hope you're familiar with his personality, given that his personality is very complex compared to the other Espada.

Alright, do you have any ideas? I imagine that we'll be showcasing our respective Diabolus' Epithet forms, though to do that you must first flesh out more information, especially in regards to power, so far Epithet seems little more than a an attempt to further bleachify the race, I'd appreciate it if we talked abit over Chatango about this so as to really get in touch about the subject, because frankly, I don't quite see the meaning of giving Diabolus a second form, especially concidering that making them assume new shapes which they rarely do assume would make the liabilities outweigh the gains.

This being said though, it is your call given that the Diabolus are indeed your creation. Though I do have an alternative to Epithet, if you want to hear it, which would likely keep the theme, but still serve to distance the Diabolus from Arrancar, which I feel the direction they're going in will resemble.

Njalm2 22:43, May 31, 2011 (UTC)

Minoru Tanaka
I have begun to make my Gravity Force Gotei 13 character Minoru. I have change the name of his zanpakuto to Silk Veil. That in shikai it turns into a large cape like veil that hase temporal and spatial powers. It allows anything that is complete coverred with the cloth to be stored inside of it like in another demission and that isn't affected by time while inside the pocket demission. It can even transport things inside of it to another location. I would used that as Minoru is the head of the SRDI of Squad 12. He would once caught send subjects to research via the special power and they would appear in special cages. What you think. I kind of got the baisc idea from Madara Uchida's ability but not as strong.: The Twilight of Your Despair 04:04, June 1, 2011 (UTC)

Philosophy huh. Ok you can have it under that aspect. Intruth the "incomplete versions" are really just the complete form mamifested under one to three aspects. Now I am still editing it giving powers. However the color of that aspect is blue like Starrk's spiritual power's color. Also if you have any idea on powers that can only be used under a certain aspect if its under incomplete version as complete forms allow for all the powers. Inshori and example lets say Kiyoshi Souzou uses his creation aspect to lets say to be able to create things with his mind. Like a power that fits that incomplete version theme.: The Twilight of Your Despair 21:29, June 1, 2011 (UTC)

Quick Favor
Hey Void. I was wondering if you could take alook at my newest blogpost and let me know what you think of Van's future zanpakuto. Thanks =) Raze Kucabara-Dono  Light  18:15, June 1, 2011 (UTC)

You Know What
I ain't givin up... Keigai will defeat Ryuichi fair and square >:D Your move bud-- Hohenheim Talk to Me ◕ ‿‿ ◕ 21:46, June 1, 2011 (UTC)

Tsuchi & Miyata
You know, we should really roleplay more with those two in the future, especially since we really didn't get to show off their abilities in the battle with Haru, albeit it was decidely hilarious from start to finish - Tsuchi and Miyata sounded like a couple of cheerleaders, picking on people whom are "Different" :P

A possibility would be, given that they're already a team and that both of us possess relatively few very powerful characters is that we enter with those two as a collective team in Koukishi's Tournament; their synergy is after all likely good enough for them to fight effectively against more or less any other character in the Tournament, wether they're inferior in number or not.

Also, I'm going to go deeper into Miyata's Kido abilities, as he is after all a Master - and Kido Master for me is quite serious, and much more than simply four enhanced spells whom he never uses :P: I'd like to give Miyata weaker and differently behaving abilities akin to Tsuchi if possible, such as elemental conversion, only that Miyata can transform the water of Kyōsui into the elements that Tsuchi cannot, air, lightning and ice for instance, along with fire of course; as those two kinda have an "Elementalist" combo going on.

Also, Kyōsui is also going to be suspectible to Tsuchi's conversions as well, and given the fact that Kyōsui is a very wide-reaching Zanpakuto with tremendous amounts of destructive force they'll end up becoming a force to truly be reckoned with.

Also, we should probably decide which should fight first between Tsuchi & Miyata, the obvious choice would be Miyata since he is by far the most durable of them and as such he'd be perfect for tiring Tenma and Van out before having Tsuchi swoop in and finish the job with some amazing spell :P

Chromatic Spells
Alright, I've taken the liberty of having Tsuchi and Miyata put their heads together to make a serie of spells exclusive to them; namely spells which, as the title suggests belongs to every element and none. I've written these spells on Miyata's article, and I'll copy paste these over to you here, for you to take a look.

Shokunokyū (色の球, Lit. "Chromatic Sphere"): By watching his partner weave Kido, and combining what he's seen with his natural affinity for the elements, Miyata has managed to develop a spell which uses all of the elements in the known spectrum at the same time; moreover, it was perfected by his partner so as to not use too much energy, despite its very advanced nature; the sphere itself appears glass-like in its appearance and it can vary in size, being anywhere from on scale of a football to that of a large boulder. The sphere normally strikes with a combination of all elements at once which materializes in the form of a kind of non-elemental damage, albeit Miyata can easily make one element dominate the rest, thus making the damage correspond to that element. He can also freely alter the power of the projectile itself, and this is almost never done in correspondance to the spells size - and small spheres have been known to cause wide-spread destruction.

Shokunokabe (色の壁, Lit. "Chromatic Wall"): Miyata developed this spell together with his partner, pretty much at the same time as they developed Shokunokyū, it uses all the elements, like the previous spell only in a defensive way; and unlike the offensive version this spell continously draws energy from the elements around it, making it insuspectible to continous assault given that it will just restore itself over time; its only weakness is the fact that it can be destroyed by a single attack, whose power exceeds that of what it currently has: If used at the right time however, and if it is given enough time to strengthen itself its defense is in theory, unbreakable. Go ahead and write it to your hearts content and feel free to change the name of the team

Njalm2 15:06, June 2, 2011 (UTC)

Madame Amarantha
Thank you for the praise! And yes, I do intend to roleplay with her - I intend to do that with more or less all of my characters, why else should I make them? And yes, she could probably aid Ryuichi alot provided he fetched her the right price, she's quite akin to a Diabolus in that she does nothing for free.
 * Also, I'd like to ask you to do a formal review of Amarantha, as I'm curious as to what your views would be on her rather unusual traits and abilities. I've attempted to make her very powerful but yet also very weak at the same time - evidenced by the fact that a single strike from any Spiritual Creature of some power could easily kill her.

Njalm2 16:45, June 3, 2011 (UTC)

Story Arc
Hello, Void. I have two ideas for story arc.

One is a type of Zanpakuto spirit arc. This is where its a party for the Zanpakuto of certain characters, but something goes wrong and starts to control them to kill other Shinigami. This would be a real Zanpakuto rebellion. As for the second one. Your deity character Kiyoshi's oldest brother. How about they meet up after so many years except due to an until reason his powers are very weak. This would also help you to develop him to be much stronger than the start off immensly strong.: The Twilight of Your Despair 17:07, June 4, 2011 (UTC)

I saw that you are using Philosophy and I must say you make descibe it amazingly. Also if you want than you can have him use Death as well. Just Philosophy has nothing to do with genetics but like how Shinigami/Soul Reapers are the personaficiton of Death than they can manifest the "Death aspect" as they deal with death. Just like how Angels deal with Life. Destroyers deal with Destruction and Gods often deal with unrestricted creation.

But I was wondering to prevent op use of it do you think that their should be time limits for all Philosophy users. As despite the "amount of energy being limitless" the use of it isn't.: The Twilight of Your Despair 23:53, June 4, 2011 (UTC)

Ok about the Zanpakuto spirits. Just Phyiscal writing I can find any grammer mistake but not typing. And yes you edit and or correctly it. If something I don't like I will just re word. After all it was my earliest work. Also like with the Complete Philosophy what you "do" determines how long you can use it. But as for the Kosumosukihaku please don't change their foundation history, and their Deity like powers aren't Philosophy related. Just the Reishi that creates them that can in limit time frame negate Sekkiseki and Reason like Philosophy is semi-divine. But other than those main things go for it. Oh and no require worship power type of things this isn't d&d.: The Twilight of Your Despair 00:07, June 5, 2011 (UTC)

Philosophy
I guess that is the basic idea. Just the incomplete forms mostly are just an agumentation to the user powers and enhances Spiritual Power and grants their spiritual power the complete protection. (Kind of like the Kosumosukihakus Deity Aspect that achieves the same thing, but theirs is only against Sekkiseki and Reason.) The complete form is using the Philosophy as their main source and is controlling it not just summoning it like the Hollow Masks of the Vizards. : The Twilight of Your Despair 23:51, June 5, 2011 (UTC)

If It is still too confusing the Complete Protect than I will rework it again.: The Twilight of Your Despair 23:53, June 5, 2011 (UTC)

I have been thinking of ways of explaining, why Longwei Chuangzuo would at highest level and mostly in Spiriutal Power be at the rank of an average Lieutenant. Here are three possible ways.


 * 1) An attemp was made by an enemy to still his immortality. This would result in his death and all of his power or energy at least be transferred to the theft. I was thinking that he was defeated in battle and while his immortality was about to be stolen. He tried to get away and it resulted in his powers being greatly decreased. He would still have his immortality though.


 * 1) While trying to develop a new power it backfired on him. It could result in the last of his left eye as from his pic and the decreasement of his powers.


 * 1) Finally in an attempt to become the strongest immortal he challenged Kaosu and lost and instead of killing him made he weak. It would also let you say that he gain even more power than what he had when he challenge Kaosu.

Let me know what you think.: The Twilight of Your Despair 07:09, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

P.S I think I have finished the Complete Protection on Philosophy look for yourself.: The Twilight of Your Despair 07:09, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

Its your character use as you see fit just I know a lot of my articles have soooooooooooooooooooooooo many nick pick trivia things so I try and do those for people that use my work. Anyways its fine and here a pic I found that you might like for him.: The Twilight of Your Despair 03:10, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

I just thought of something. Now however you make him weak I request that you keep his intellect at 100%. That is as all of the Royal Family have it at least the direct members like Kiyoshi and his brothers. But you don't have to make him a master tactician and strategist or anything like that. Also I don't think his powers becoming weaker how affect his mind, unless you really want it to. Also I request that if do give him stats that you can make as you see fit as how strong he was before he became weak. And you can in time make him stronger than those original stats.

Just I had an idea. As Kiyoshi had three older brothers and most if not all of them would be stronger than him. Well why not let other members have the change to make them. Also I wanted to let you know you can make his Zanpakuto sealed form into any kind of weapon. Just I like Nodachi types a lot more than Katanas. Finally as for his relationship to Kiyoshi I was thinking that he and Kiyoshi don't have a close brotherly relationship as well read Kiyoshi's trivia and you will know what I am say. Well good night.: The Twilight of Your Despair 07:06, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

Haven't seen you online in awhile Void.: The Twilight of Your Despair 19:20, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

I am all right. Do you like the pic?: The Twilight of Your Despair 20:17, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

One question for today what kind of realm what a place called Paradiso be like. I don't want it to be just like another "Heaven" and I don't want it to be the place where an omnipotent deity lives. I want this realm to be a place of natural creation which is how Reishi natural forms something. But as Paradiso is Italian for paradise what kind of place would you think it shoul be like?: The Twilight of Your Despair 20:33, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

Well Paradiso isn't the home world of the Kosumosukihaku that is the Kyuuten no Souzou. Just I was thinking it a place that when a Soul whether it be Shinigami, Human, Hollows, Sozoshin, Kosumosukihaku etc that if they die they instead of being reborn are sent to this place and will stay there forever and in there they can make their "section" of Paradiso into what whether they want.

As Kiyoshi's oldest Brother Longwei Chuangzuo however you come up with him and how he loses alot of his power is fine. But remember three things Kaosu Souzou is the oldest one and he came into existence "before" time and the universe began. Secondary as Kaosu Souzou is the first King that makes him Longwei's and Kiyoshi's great grandfather for Longwei's and Kiyoshi's father was the third King. Lastly interm of appearance that is for you to decide but all natural Kosumosukihaku like Kaosu, Kiyoshi, Longwei have white blood and pale skin.: The Twilight of Your Despair 20:50, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

I have seen what you have seen so far and I like it. Just two questions? Is he still immortal and do you want to me on the Kosumosukihaku article itself explain how he can use Kido? As their species have their own spells and techniques but I am open to make it "possible" for them to learn how to use other species spells and the like.: The Twilight of Your Despair 18:57, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

To keep up with the history. When you and I rp with Longwei and Kiyoshi. Longwei and the second prince or second oldest brother were fighting in a war together and when it was over is when their father Banished him. As Kiyoshi would have not been strong enough for at that time he was only the King as his father fought with his two oldest sons and he needed someone watch over the Kyuuten no Souzou while they were gone for many centuries. And once a someone becomes the King there have the title forever.: The Twilight of Your Despair 22:46, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

I didn't explain it sorry. When a person takes the trone they have absolute say in Kyuuten no Souzou. But past kings if their alive have certain rights and keep the title like First, Second, Third, Fourth etc. Like how the former Third King had the right to banish his son as he is the third king. Now Kiyoshi "could" overturn this banishment but didn't. As lets say Kiyoshi and all his brothers would be killed that would mean Kaosu would be the King again as he is the only living past King. Just at one time all four Souzou were one happy family now they aren't. And I don't care if it takes more than 200 rps before we can have one with Longwei and Kiyoshi he is your character.

The order of rule is the.


 * 1) The King/Queen


 * 1) Past Kings/ Queens.


 * 1) Royal Family


 * 1) Royal Guard


 * 1) Council.

And down ward.: The Twilight of Your Despair 23:42, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

I am still reading your and Njalm2 ideas and advice and to save me time. My responds are on the Talk Page of the Kosmosukihaku. I also have start to use your ideas in some of changes I have started to make for them.: The Twilight of Your Despair 20:28, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

Hey I adding new things to their article. One I got from Longwei is Environement Affecting Reiatsu.: The Twilight of Your Despair 01:53, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

Go For it
Title speaks :)-- Hohenheim Talk to Me ◕ ‿‿ ◕ 22:53, June 6, 2011 (UTC)

Rutilus' Epithet
Right, I've made the basics for Rutilus' Epithet - I had figured I'd wait but given the fact that I don't think I managed to fully conceive what I meant on the Diabolus article I decided to do so in order to provide an example of what I imagine an Epithet to be. It is still largely new though, so it can easily be changed should the need arise.

It is also worth noting that it is definately much more powerful than most releases; being similiar to a Segunda Etapa in power gain - which I personally find plausible given that their Epithets are so rarely employed.


 * Rutilus' Epithet is not half done yet, and the Volo Everto form ain't done either, albeit it won't have too many abilities; at most one or two - as it more or less focuses on impoving the physical aspects of Rutilus, as that IS after all his preffered type of combat. I've also renamed his epithet to . Fidelis Socius, Trucido Agna, Charitas Curator (Latin for "Faithful Partner, The Slaughtered Lamb, Benevolent Defender") as I thought that fits.
 * Alright, Rutilus' Volo Everto form is now pretty much done, I may decide to add abit more to it at a later point but I'm pretty much content with how it is now - I'll eventually add a seperate Epithet state focusing more on his bestial aspects.

Njalm2 20:14, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

Miyata's Liquid-themed abilities
Alright, I've expanded more upon Miyata's Liquid themed abilities, the two first are rather simple; but the third is actually an artifical symbiote which I think you'd probably recognize as being quite inspired by the Gelatineous Cubes found in the D&D universe - albeit they work quite differently. The symbiote essentially works as a support-fighter if you may in that it uses the energy of opponents to affect Tsuchi and Miyata positively, such as increasing the power and general potency of their spells; being capable of simulating any known element and actually passing on a good deal of its Spiritual Energies to them so as to "heal" and "envigorate" them, at the expense of their opponents life of course :P - it is also capable of disrupting Kido and absorbing its energies so as to increase in power. It is called Ijieki, please take a look on his Liquid-themed abilities and see what you think?

I've also added the placeholder team name "Team Bō" which means "Team One" reffering to their status as the first team of the Juusanseiza. Njalm2 18:30, June 9, 2011 (UTC)


 * Right, Miyata has now practically turned the majority of Hama town into a potential humongous sinkhole, or quicksand depending on what you think is the most accurate description; this means that Miyata can pretty much cause the area to implode upon itself due to the water which damages the earth around it - I'm planning on taking full advantage of this aspect during the tournament, any comments? Master N 12:58, July 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * Ahh, I'm aware of those things and I don't plan on using it on the town but as a method in battle while in the tournament - due to the fact that water is so straightforward, my methods aren't technically unfair in that context as while the damages would indeed be great from Miyata's sinkholes it'd be nothing more than the damages that would be suffered to the city otherwise, the fact that very many characters are either Shunsui or Aizen class means that the city will suffer tremendous damage eitherhow. While Miyata can indeed plunge the whole city into a gigantic sinkhole he likely wouldn't do it, for the same reason that he didn't simply kill off everyone at the start of the tournament with Hyōhana Kyūshi. At any rate, I'll be using Kyosui's power in unique ways in the tournament as the ability to manipulate an element is often severely understimated. If you want to know more we should talk on Chatango, as its much easier to talk there. Master N 13:47, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

:)
It was a fun RP :) I'd be glad to do a collab again with Ryuichi and Kusagi, but it will have to wait due to my Finals this week. Afterwards I'd love to though :D-- Hohenheim Talk to Me ◕ ‿‿ ◕ 20:18, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

About your idea
I figured it would be quicker to leave you a message here rather than going on the talk page of the Espada but with your idea, do you mean something similar to the Gotei where the Espada are separated into divisions of sorts but there is still that hidden hierarchy where its known that some are weaker than others? If that is what you meant...then I would have to admit that it would be pretty interesting to see many fraccion and little hollows running around trying to appease their respective "Captains". lol Yuri Kucabara-Dono  Satanoka  14:35, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

I def like that idea. Our espada are much more civilized than those of old so it would be more likely that given their personalities that they tried to develop Hueco Mundo to that of the Gotei. Hmmm I could see everyone holding a piece of the area for themselves, and like perpetually battling and/or wagering pieces of lands just to pass the time lol. Yuri Kucabara-Dono  Satanoka  03:04, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

Dorothy's Epithet
Right, I was surprised by Dorothy's Epithet, as I imagined it to be quite quite different; I don't find it unfitting though, as Dorothy is in most contexts a monster; the fact that her Epithet shows her as she is is actually quite neat and when you look at it like that it also makes sense that Rutilus is very humanoid in appeareance while in Volo Everto; as he is more humane in personality as well as opposed to her, and likely among the other members of Dorothy's army. Master N 19:51, June 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * Also, I was wondering if you could do a second review of Rutilus due to the fact that you're one of the few people that understand Diabolus on this webpage - which is only natural given how you've created them: The reason is that Rutilus has been changed quite much since that time, and so have the Diabolus as a whole, most especially the fact that they're no longer being seen as "inherrently evil" - but simply "alien". Thank you for the praise, I too enjoy it alot, because I get to play upon Rutilus' personality alot too along with the fact that Diabolus have a rather alien mindset; as much of what Rutilus has done, and how he has acted in that roleplay is very alien as opposed to what is common among humans - he started the fight as a transvestite wearing a school-girl outfit and has for the last part of the battle fought completely naked.
 * Back to Dorothy though! I think that you were right in choosing Priscilla's Awakened form as the picture, due to the fact that she is actually very beautiful in that form, atleast just after she has awakened, when she fights Clare she looks like she's on steroids, I cannot quite fathom why I think her to be beautiful but I think it nonetheless and so does a good friend of mine who happened to watch the anime with me - you should find a colored picture though, albeit those are really hard to find, especially of that moment who I know you're looking for. And yes, perhaps she would be seen as more beautiful in that form by Diabolus.
 * I have a suggestion for ascertaining a Diabolus' given gender. Quite obviously, they're to be concidered as being genderless in definition, but what I've long chosen to believe is that they too have genders, but those "genders" aren't more permanent than what they themselves identify themselves to be, so basically, a Diabolus' personality is what defines their gender, as opposed to their appeareance.
 * Ahh, and Fanfiction eh? I can completely relate with you to that as I too have been reading fanfictions non-stop for the last few days and I am just as fond of them as you are, especially if they're good ones, and while I feel that I don't really have the material to be a good fanfiction writer I remain an avid fan nonetheless - I'll however take a look at the link you sent, and see if I'd appreciate too!

The Fanfic
I have to say that this is probably the most hilarious fanfic I've ever read; the author is a freaking genius! I love how he/she has portrayed Harry as being a genius with a very different personality from how he appeared in the books. Thank you for sending me the link!

Master N 22:46, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

RE:Oni vs Diabolus
I would love to see, I think Setsuhiro and his group would do good against her. ~   Sentonara of  the Spirits  02:04, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

We can pick it up after the battle between Shade and Setsuhiro. Setsuhiro has his army created and is starting to make his way to hell. But he needs to open, hell's gate. He has to go to a certian place and use the child Osanago to open that protal. So many we can pick up from there or something. ~   Sentonara of  the Spirits  02:29, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

Ok I will start out the RP then. ~   Sentonara of  the Spirits  02:44, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

Ok viod, I just wanted to warn. this is like my fourth RP, if I am doing something wrong just tell me and I will fix it up. and here it is, your turn ~   Sentonara of  the Spirits  02:54, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

Welll void I must tell you an dplease dont take this the wrong way. It seemed that your a bit of godmod in it, from what I have seen or atleast what I am thinking. You seemed to have controled some of my charatcers actions such as with the soldiers that attacked and with Kakuzoku's attack you just seemed to just blow it off. All the attacks that was given to dorothy was nothing, while with the Kokuzoku and the others they seemed to have taken every hit. -.- I think it would be best maybe to start out a new RP, I have nothing against you. It just seems that IDK how to put it. Along with setsuhiro and ankoku its part of a stragety, trying to lead dorothy into a trap where she can be sealed up. thats why they dissappeared. ~   Sentonara of  the Spirits  19:49, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

Ok OK I see what your coming from Void, I am still new so I am not hmmm experienced at it this is like my fourth RP. Though many have different styles so it may have seen that I misunderstood your style. Then I am very sorry for this little mess up, hopfully I can pick up on your style. Hopfully that It doesn't make you think any less of me. ~   Sentonara of  the Spirits  20:45, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

-.- I see, setsuhiro has taken osanago back the place dorothy had first appeared. While there shuu and mashoukai started to open the protal to hell. Ankoku is off with fleman fighting, the brothers are with Setsuhiro and the group. When dorothy had her wings around setsuhiro's legs he used flash step to escape her grip. If you just want dorothy to vs setsuhiro Then have dorothy follow them or something and have a barrier. Setsuhiro vs dorothy to be honest what I wanted is that dorothy followed setsuhiro and he would have had a trap waiting for her. He would use her, as a powersoucre to open the protal to hell. I am trying to make her follow Setsuhiro. and in all honesty I don't setsuhiro dead :(, but then again he has ankoku to bring him. So yeah how about dorpthy follows setsuhiro put up something and they will fight eachother or I will have setsuhiro go with his plan for her.  ~   Sentonara of  the Spirits   21:28, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

RP
I dunno. ^~^; I would like to RP with you, but I don't exactly have a lot of characters, and the ones I do have are indisposed of at the moment. x: I could make a new one to contend with yours, however. But I'm really persnickity when it comes to picking pictures for my characters and such, and I'm also extremely lazy when it comes to making them, so it could take a while. <-<

I'm probably going to bother you with these demands for answers to questions you probably did not expect to get from a simple "I'd like to RP with you sometime", but I'm going to ask them anyway. <:D I believe that's it. :B Thanks for reading, if you did.
 * Whom would I be facing? For a fair fight, I'll make my character equal to or lesser than yours in terms of skill and power. Unless the person is Dorothy, or someone of that nature, in which case my character would certainly be strong but definately weaker then your own.
 * Where would the battle be taking place? I don't like making random characters for no reason (I used to have twenty or so, but they were all bad quality, which is why I stopped), so I'd need a valid plot to motivate me to make the character. I just noticed that that has nothing to do with where the battle would be taking place, but whatever. <_<
 * Would this just be a skirmish between our characters, or would it lead to future RPs? There's difference between "our characters meet n' fight but no one dies then they never see eachother again" and an actual, well-develouped plot that takes several RPs and stuff. Not that I'm saying you don't know what it is, I just tend to rant when I go explaining things... Dx Sorry.
 * Where would the battle be taking place? I know I already said this, but I don't feel like going back and changing what I already said, so~. It could take place in the human world, Hell, or the Shinigami world, but I'd need to know so I'll keep it in mind when I make my character so it's plausible for him to be there.
 * Sometimes I use curses when I RP. Would this bother you? If it would, simply say the word and I won't.

Wahpah 19:26, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

Well... is there someone you'd prefer to use? If you want to pick a character and have an all-out brawl with a powerhouse I make, it's completely fine with me, but otherwise... -Shrug-. It doesn't matter to me whether we battle or not, it's just that an RP that involves something other than battling usually has a really in-depth and complicated story, and more often than not it's a little bit hard to flesh out. One person usually ends up controlling the enviornment and the majority of the characters, while the other controls one and interacts with it all (in my experience, anyway). I'm up for anything you're up for, and I'm terribly (for some reason itallics doesn't seem to be working, but imagine another "terribly" in italics in these parenthesis) indecisive. I'd love to make a character to fight Dorothy, but you use her in most RPs I've read and that'd be a little unfair to you. xD

On a side note, most characters on BFF are Captain-class, so it doesn't much matter to me. Though, I have to say, the option you're giving me to fight you as you use a Quincy is... I don't know how to describe it. I made a Quincy once, and their move set is pretty limited... :/ It's kind of repetive to just keep firing arrows at a person in an RP, if you know what I mean.

I hope you can pick up some kind of point from all this rambling. Thank you for your response!

Wahpah 00:10, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

... D: Godamnit, you're some kind of visionary or something. But, I'll adress what you said piece by piece, as to be better organized with my thoughts.


 * Okay, to adress the chess thing (I apologize for the crude way I'm referring to it), I would certainly be willing to have that sort of RP, but I've never actually done it before. If that makes sense, anyway. I've had RPs where the characters don't battle; where they go and meet people, or train, etc. But never something like... that. >_< I'm actually starting to doubt my intelligence/compitence just thinking about it.


 * However, in order to do that, I automatically jump to the conclusion that I'll need to make a character with a large amount of influence and power. Such a character would certainly have the means to manipulate the plot to fit their own ends, right? Or, at least, a character with a certain amount of intelligence.


 * I really don't know where I'm going with this... I'm kind of bummed out. Most of my characters end up being neutral, and then are persuaded to join a particular side by someone who's just manipulating them. /: They don't usually have goals of their own. I'm also not very sure what character to make; I just beat the remake of The Legend of Zelda: Ocarina of Time, so my head is filled up with sunny up-beat protoganists who use a wide-array of gadgets to overcome obstacles.


 * -Inserts something randomly right here for no reason. Well, there is a reason...- You say you would use Dorothy, right? Or just her as an example. From what I've read of her so far, I'm sure that her objective is to become ruler of the realms. Simple enough. However, I can only see three ways my character could have an involved role in her plot. One, they could oppose her. Maybe they're trying to take over the realms themselves. Two, they want to join her. Maybe they look up to her because she's so goddamned sexy, or they want to hop aboard her little gravy train because they figure she has a good chance of winning whatever war there is to come. And, finally, third, they could oppose her and try to stop her, which would probably land us in the "battle and level-up" scenario unless my character in control of an organization of some sort. We could try to flesh out the plot a little on here before we start (if we ever do ._.), if you want.


 * Thank you for the advice on making characters, I'll definately take it to heart.


 * Wahpah 23:10, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

Hey
I was wondering could Kiyoshi have learned his Hakuda skills from Longwei as I made Kiyoshi a master as he was trained by an older brother.: The Twilight of Your Despair 21:24, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

Ok thanks. I mean he is your character after all. Also, I created a place called Paradiso, as the former crown price he would have a key to this realm. As all the Royal Familiesd Kings both current and past and the first crown princes have one. So if you want Longwei to travel there is ok as despite it being a neutral place that no King has an real ruling power over it is a place they go. It is one of the most protected and peaceful place.: The Twilight of Your Despair 21:54, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

P.S I am working with the Kosumosukihaku history and to use your ideas too, but Kaosu is stay nearly the same as I have used his history in too many rps to change now. I look forward to seeing what unique powers you give Longwei.: The Twilight of Your Despair 21:54, June 20, 2011 (UTC)'

I am only on for a few minutes until later today. I came up with an idea for how to explain how a Kosumosukihaku "masters" their power and gains their immortality. How about this that their mastering is awakening there Divinity. That once it is complete is makes them immortal and awakens their powers to grow.: The Twilight of Your Despair 19:08, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

Its fine just the Divinity is in away is of kind like the Shinigami Zanpakuto in respect. That it requires time and training. Also the reason I detail their immortality so much is take sure that just because they don't age or require anything to live that they can be killed.: The Twilight of Your Despair 19:46, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

Btw are you going to make single short storys to advance Longwei to rp levels or are going to rp with him with weak characters. Cause I do have some weak ones even some below Lieutenant level. Not all my characters are captain and higher levels.: The Twilight of Your Despair 20:42, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blood and the Flesh
I guess not, but I'm concerned that if I make too many characters, they'll all pool out to be of lesser quality. How about this: I'll work on the character tonight, and then afterwords, you can give me your opinion? I might not be very active tomorrow or thursday (Regents Exams), but I'll try my best to work on her/him.

Wahpah 00:12, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, so here's the best plot I was able to come up with with the stress and depression ridden free time that I've had: Dorothy and her kind, the Diabolus, despise the "Demons" that migrated to Hell because they feel that they're an inferior species. For canon purposes, we'll say that the "Demons" and the Diabolus haven't met or had any major conflicts before this because of the large Lava Ocean surrounding the part of Hell the "Demons" call home, and that Dorothy & Co.'s more recent less-than-subtle appearances on earth has created the epiphany that they're actually sharing their realm with another species. Please keep in mind that I don't actually own the species of "Demons", but I have been involved with both them and the species of Demons that came before them (before that user was subsequently banned) since they were created, so I have a rather crude idea of how everything works. If anything, I'll just run it by the person who's in charge of it all to see if I could get cooperation.

Aaaaaaaaanyway, it's a well-known fact (at least, in your most-recent RP with Dorothy) that the Diabolus are disgusting by the idea of mutated Hollows coming into Hell and calling themselves the dominant species, yes? My character would be a powerful "Demon", who's out to prevent the extinction of his own species (or at least his own death; think of it as an X-Men approach, if you will, where the Diabolus are the next stage in Human Evolution, and the old stage is trying to fight their own extinction. Not that I'm implying the Diabolus evolved from the "Demons" or anything, this is strictly metaphorical). In contrast to your Dorothy, my character would be incredibly sane, to the point where he doesn't get overwhelmed by anything at all and can calmly rationalize almost any situation. This kind of character wouldbe easier for me to RP as, and would contrast to Dorothy, who's sane in an insane way, and acts on whims, whilst my character would act on statistics of "what would be the most logical course of action" and what-not. Not that my character wouldn't have an emotional side and wouldn't be able to be manipulated, but... >-< Yeah.

So, my character would have his group of followers; basically the most powerful of the Demons (regular ones, not the ruler-types like Fukienzeru and Bael who can warp reality to their needs depending on how large a portion of Hell they control). My character, being somewhat rational, would be able to see that a war would be heavily taxing on both sides and could result in the extinction of either species (which is exactly what he is trying to prevent). So, he would take a diplomatic approach. Servitude would not be out of the question, while slavery would be unacceptable. If she throws this command back in his face, he will make a declaration of war but attempt to leave their meeting place (wherever that may be) without bloodshed.

In my narrow-sighted view, this would leave us with a multitude of possible storylines. One, a war: not necessarily all battles, but a battle of wits as well (but definately with some physical battles in them), maybe some deceit and trickery, and if you're not afraid to have your characters die, perhaps one of our major characters wouldn't walk out of it. Though, I'd prefer servitude and Dorothy is too awesome to kill, so it'd probably be my character. > ~>;

Two: A political battle, or at least one fought in the shadows under the guise of peace. Maybe an assassination attempt at one of our characters, maybe a rebellion, etc... ~_~ I dunno, these are all underdevelouped.

Three: Isolationalism. They could both agree to leave eachother alone. :B Make our RP end extra boring.

Four: Conversion. I don't know if it's possible; I'd have to ask you, but maybe the band of demons could turn into Diabolus somehow, or at least become familiars. /: Though you can bet your bottom dollar my character will raise hell and probably write up a very long and detailed contract describing the rules of their deal if that's one of the conditions.

Tell me if this is any good, and I implore you to give me your input and change things.

Wahpah 02:08, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

But now I don't know about that line of plot. >_<

I apologize, I was excited and in my rush decided to do the stupid thing of not reading the Diabolus (and other pages related to this) thoroughly. Anyway, this whole train of thought leads me to believe that Dorothy could have any number of motives that would render that plot null. For one, I highly doubt she is trying to conquer hell, since that would be slightly impossible, seeing as how the Optimates(?) are godly powerful while inside their realms. This leads me to a number of conclusions, including:

1) Dorothy is searching for a way to free herself from Hell.

2) Dorothy knows something I don't and knows how to usurp power from a Lord of Hell.

3) Dorothy has some kind of secret motive going around involving the human world.

4) Dorothy is just dicking around and pretends to have some secret motive for shits and giggles.

Basically, if the Demon race isn't being threatened, my possible protaganist doesn't have a motive, and therefore no reason to conflict with Dorothy. And I know that the Gotei 13, or the "Good guys" might have something to intervene, but I've tried to make my own Gotei with somebody else for a project, and it didn't work to well. On the other hand, the number of people it would require to include an already-made Gotei would make the role-play a complete and total mess. Too many cooks spoil the broth.

I simply jumped to the conclusion that all of this would be taking place in one of the Hells, or that the good guys would be happy that they bad guys are about to kill eachother and would stand aside and watch.

So... I'll ask you, my friend. Do you have any ideas for a plot? Or would you still like to continue with the one I lined out?

Wahpah 20:48, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

It's not so much that you weren't clear, it's that I tend to ramble and forget things when I'm talking to people. D: Sorry.

I'm not actually sure how my character will act until I RP with him, so I wouldn't base anything on what the personality says about him. I mean, it will be a rough guideline I'm following for portraying the character, but whatever I type is what I feel is right for him/her to say at the moment, so it may not exactly fit the description in his personality.

I have a basic idea for his abilities worked out, and I'm satisfied with it, though I feel like I may want to find another picture. I'll start working on him tonight or tomorrow, (even though I know I've said that before), and hopefully you'll comment onto whether he's actually a good character, or just a complete waste of both of our time. :B

Wahpah 21:47, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

For some reason, that message gave me the overwhelming feeling that I did something wrong or got caught in a lie, or something. ; ~; If you're reading through my RPs, I cannot express to you how incredibly embarassed I am.

Nori Haruo: I left the wiki for a while, but when I came back I ended up having somebody deleting all my characters. He's a remake of another character, who was my main character, from before I left, and is effectively my main character now. He has no spine, is submissive, and very much hates change. He seems to lose nearly all of his fights, because I let him take an unusual amount of hits for some reason, or because my own competence as a fighter has deteriorated. After the whole episode where he was basically enslaved by people from Hell, twice, I highly doubt he'd want anything to do with the place, which is why I don't think he'd be suitable for any with Dorothy.

Mitsune Haruo: His daughter. She's not powerful enough, in my opinion. She doesn't have the necessary motivation to oppose anyone like Dorothy, and she's scheduled to go through some sort of training in Qualms or the next RP.

Sayama (I forget her last name): Gave up her body to an inner hollow in the last RP, because she was basically almost a zombie after her lover died. Is now the body Sasha runs around in.

Inku (Something or other): Was the first character I made on this wiki. He's dead. <_<

And I think I made a vizard or something, but he's a disgrace, and I'd delete him if I didn't hate asking people for things.

But I digress (what I digress is up for speculation).

I don't like my characters being in multiple plots at the same time, because it's difficult to explain the continuity errors. Like, when it could have possibly happened in her own synopsis. Not only that, but I'm hesitant to get in an RP with numerous people in it because we used to have three people permanently in an RP, and then one of them left, so that line of RPs came to a screeching halt and we had to do a timeskip. :/ It really, really bothers me. Not to mention that the more people you have in an RP, the more chaotic the RP becomes.

I'm not really sure if I've answered your question or not, but I hope I did.

Wahpah 19:39, June 29, 2011 (UTC)

Well... I'll do my best to answer even more. You didn't offend me, or anything, so don't worry about it; I'm just really paranoid. >_<

Let's see... Uhm... Hell-Hunters are made by souls (shinigami, arrancar, pluses) making deals with either Bael or Fukienzeru (similar to your concept of a faustian bargan, though... I dunno. Not exactly the same). They get their genes split, n' stuff, so they're like half Demon. If they were shinigami, they can no longer use their zanpakuto (though there are some exceptions) because Zanpakuto purify hollow, and demons are mutated hollow. So, they get Hell-blades, which are mock zanpakuto made from the souls of some prostitutes, really. They blade has a Shikai, but no bankai. Instead of a Bankai, each Hell-Hunter has a Demonic Release (I think I called it a "Demon Form"?), that they can use with or without their Hell-Blade. Like it's a part of themselves instead of part of their sword.

The Demon's highspeed movement technique is Kogeru, and it's teleportation. Since I was the one who described it originally, I made it so that in exchange for instantaneous teleportation, they are easily spotted when they use it by: Intense heat, a bright red flash, flames, and the smell of smoke. That should make it fairer in battle, and it's basically, in RPs, just a different way to do what Shunpo does. My character cannot use it to change dimensions (i.e. Human World to Hueco Mundo), but there are some Demons who can, so... -Shrug- I dunno.

Anyway, in exchange for making that deal, the Hell-Hunters are bound to the will of either Bael or Fukienzeru (depending on who they made the deal with) for a predetermined amount of time. The lords of Hell can cease their motor functions, cause them intense amounts of pain... etc. As long as they are bound by the deal, if they are killed in any realm other than their hell, they respawn in their hell.

From what I can understand, many different demons have their own abilities, and Hell-Hunters are generally frowned upon by other Demons, so... <_< Many of them are free-agents now. Including Nori, and his off-spring. They inherited the use of Kogeru, yada yada yada...

Yup. In the entire time I've been RPing, I've never considered my RPs to be Seinen... xD You flatter me.

Let's see... The new character. I'm not sure what to name him yet, but that can wait. I'll give you the run-down on what he can do, his personality, and his abilities... This is what I've come up with so far, anyway. :/

Appearance: Not exactly important at the moment. He wears a red tunic-ish thing, has black hair, and a slightly muscular build, if it answers any questions.

Personality: Calculating, rational (since I know you read it, think Harry Potter from The Methods of Rationality, but to a lesser degree. He's not above taking advice from his allies, and he does act on emotion occasionally, but his main line of thinking is to take the most logical course of action). Thanks for the fic recommendation, by the way. <3

Abilities: Okay, here's where it gets a little ifsy. What I've come up with is that, upon coming into contact with a non-organic solid (it'd be a little godmodded if he could just touch people and kill them), he sucks the color out of a substance (because of this he'll usually fight with no shirt and no footwear on). That substance will effectively become "grey". Substances that he greys out can be completely manipulated by him. All greyed out objects have a set density that isn't very high, so if he wants a feasible shield, he has to gather up a bunch of grey and then compress it. His objects generally aren't very detailed because that takes more concentration (one sword vs a thousand undetailed spear-ish things). The larger the object is, the longer it takes to "grey" it out. If he's interrupted in the process of greying something, he can use what he's already greyed (imagine it expanding in a dome or sphere from the first point of contact).

Okay, so what I'm ifsy about is whether or not he can control these things with his mind, or whether he can just shape them to what he wants. Naturally, he can still have Kogeru and such.

I'm also worried that the character page won't be very long. :/ I always feel like my characters suck balls.

Tell me what you think.

Wahpah 00:51, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

Hey
Would you like Sei to join if only for a time the Gf? Look at Kenji's talk page for why he wants to join.: The Twilight of Your Despair 23:21, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Well, just since Kenji-sama is busy most days with exams I thought as a member it was apporiate to pass the word to several members.

Btw would you like a rp with Spirit? After all I need to develop him too and Longwei and him are about the same level.: The Twilight of Your Despair 01:10, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

Well thats ok. Just Spirit has been developed to where he isn't a living statue anymore. But as for as when they met Spirit is 1200+ years old and well they could be at the Academy at the same time. However, as far as why they would fight. Spirit being completely logically and neutral well in Longwei's current state I suspect it won't take Spirit to say much to set him off.: The Twilight of Your Despair 19:24, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

Hey I was thinking that I shouldn't be the first person to fight against Longwei. I would like to see how you make use of him. Also I am trying to fix their articles in grammer. While the second Kings isn't as important as the First, Third and Fourth one do you think we should make the Third King as he is still alive. I even have a name and maybe it could be Chinese as well. Trust Creation as a kind of opposite from his trust in his son as the King would have a vision but Kaosu's are the strongest and most accurate in accordance with what will happen. Like How Kaosu Souzou is Chaos Creation and Kiyoshi Souzou is Pure Creation. Btw you do know that he could have had children as well Longwei is 6000+ plus years old.: The Twilight of Your Despair 02:44, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Do you Longwei would still have a Key to Paradiso as the crown princes of each Royal Family has one.: The Twilight of Your Despair 21:10, June 29, 2011 (UTC)

I think that Longwei and Kiyoshi (and mind you this isn't an battle rp but an intro into Longwei own series of Journeys) should meet soon as even though Longwei is banished from the Kyuuten no Souzou Kiyoshi "technically" could reverse the banishment but not the seal as the former king is worlds more power than him. Plus Kiyoshi respects his father's wishes in this matter. But this way you don't have to make another character to just advance him. Also I had an idea about his seal, to make more unique it is emotion based. Whenever Longwei starts to become more loving than destructive than parts of the seal break releasing some of his power.

After this rp you could make him comparble to a 6th or 5th seath.: The Twilight of Your Despair 01:36, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Translations please? Golden Key to Paradiso, Orb of Closed Way, and finally Sentinel of Philosophy.

Btw way read this rp please and tell me what you think. Link. : The Twilight of Your Despair 05:07, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Nike
Oh, I went through a period like that too. Just double-check, if you must. Usually I'll be relieved when I find out it was a dream, because the stuff I do in them is usually pretty messed up... > ~<;

Erm, anyway, this is why I'm usually so convinced most of my characters suck... >_< The theme I came up with, if you can call it that, was "neutral and selfish". Unfortunately, Dorothy has an army of several powerful Demons, so one person on their own probably wouldn't really stand a chance against all of them... >-< I also wanted to match the quality of Dorothy's article, and I'm really, really bad at writing histories, so that was the backstory I came up with to explain how he got his powers. One of my friends already related to me that the opening makes him sound like an evil bastard and then the picture is like "omfg can i just get this over with already", so that doesn't really fit, either...

That power would be mostly combat based, though I suppose it could also be used for reconnaisence and such. I didn't want to give him an illusion-based power, because I suck at those... Though I suppose all he needed to do was start a rebellion, and then the peasents would take care of most of the cannon fodder, while he took care of the leader in private? >_<; It's all circumstantial, really. History shows that the common people are grateful for whoever took their old leader out, so they make that person the new leader. <-< 

Yeah... D:

Afternote: The page Hell states that thought there are only 72 princes at one time, there are devils besides them, and it also states that the actual population of Hell is really quite small. Around seven million, if I recall without checking...? I'm not sure.

Wahpah 22:36, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Epithet Form
Hi how you doin

I got a suggest from Kenji, for Sentonara to have an Epithet Form. My question can you just give me the basic idea of what that form is. Is it something like an arrancar's release or something else? I have a basic idea for Sentonara's Epithet Form. But I just wanted to make sure, I have noticed like with dorothy and examples of this form. They seem to look more demonic, I personal don't really like the look but whatever.

The other thing is can an Arcus Daemon lose their powers? Because how my stroyline is going is that Sentonara took away Masashi's Arcus Daemon abilities thats why he uses weapons the most.

 ~   Sentonara of  the Spirits  19:34, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Ok ok thanks for clearing that up.  ~   Sentonara of  the Spirits  02:43, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

I think I found the prefect form for Sentonara, I am wondering what do you think of it? The form is still a work in progress but I think it fits him to a tea. Here.  ~   Sentonara of  the Spirits   05:54, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Howdy
Hey pal, I was wondering if you could do me a favor and let me know what you think of Van's Tance and Requiem abilities on his talk page. Thanks in advance. =) Raze "Rin-Okumura  Satanoka''  01:14, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Wish
I won't go into a huge explanation. But I am granting Gf members at least one wish from Kaosu Souzou. You don't have to take it but its everlast as when you want to use it. And hope you had good day as I haven't talked to you in awhile Void.: The Twilight of Your Despair 02:03, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Do you think the Diabolus would be unable to use Philosophy?: The Twilight of Your Despair 23:06, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Thank you for the Translations.

As for the wish I remade into three wishes. As for Kenshin Kaosu would grant one to him as he is Divine Chaos which is neutral. As for hating him Kaosu hates no one except maybe one guy, but just cause Kenshin fought against one of his great grand kids woundn't mean anything infact he would be pround that someone could keep up with the later. Also he could lossen the seal on Longwei for well Kaosu is the strongest Kosmosukihaku in all of creation. As for why he would Kaosu would not like how Longwei's father banished him for not doing any. So he would release the seal to a point.

And thanks about Philosophy just I wanted your opinion if demons can use it as very few species cannot use it. Also side note Philosophy users as well as Kosumosukihaku whether they be full, hybrid or just part cannot have parallel version of themselves in other universes. I hate parallel universes. Different demissions, worlds, realms, time-lines or planes of existance sure thats fine but any entire different universe no I don't like them.: The Twilight of Your Despair 23:44, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Sortiarius Ideas
Alright, I've added several incantations for Amarantha's spells or, well, spell-effects which are constructed trough reading the word backwards, and removing or adding additional spaces - I thought that this might be a possible recurring theme as I've pretty much come under the impression that Sortiarius can do alot of things with a single spell - these incredibly powerful spells such as the four main spell categories of Amarantha will for now be refered to as parent spells - these parent spells would commonly be incredibly powerful but really taxing, an example would be what Flamen did, as he with a single spell completely devastated a large areal and essentialy created, as you said yourself - a local ice age.

Right, due to these spells being really taxing; Flamen had to use the magical tatoos on his body in order to cast a single one of them, I suggest that Sortiarius has a system which allows them to release a fraction of a spells effects selectively trough the use of backwards talk and such, for example. Flamen could choose to say "Eezerf Latrop" which is the backward version of "Freeze Portal" in order for the ice to manifest directly at that point and attempt to freeze the portal as requested, without Flamen having to expend 80% of his energy resserves in order to cast a single spell as that'd be really inconvenient.

Its hard to explain in full details here, if possible we could talk about it at chatango?

Master N 13:39, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Gf
Hey there i was talking to Raze about joining gf and he said to ask 3 members for a vote or something, so i was asking if you think i deserve a vote. Oh and do you know by chance how to link your name to your page instead of a signature.

thx GuNzOfWoLfz 14:10, July 7, 2011 (UTC)