Talk:Naraku (spirit)

Raze here
I like it for one. Hmm you could possibly go more in depth about saying how he is able to live on with out a partner as that would mean he woul require a way to receive as suffiecnt amount of energy. You could possibly explore the rational side of his personality as well. He doesnt feel emotion so then he would be able to think without anything impeding those thoughts in combat instea dof becoming the way he is in battle

On the flip side of that, I would edit the skilled tactician part a bit as he wouldnt be as good as an average shinigami as he wouldnt be able to think like an emotionally charged warrior. take a samurai for instance. when they are angered and fighting for their pride they come up with several cunning strategies in order to battle the much cockier opponents with guns. (Watching The Last Samurai with some friends atm =P) But other than that...I would say to organize the zanpakuto so that when the abilities mention another one the one mentioned is below it or something so it flows better. =) Raze Kucabara-Dono  Light  20:24, June 1, 2011 (UTC)