Thread:Zf6hellion/@comment-3245042-20141126042720/@comment-5020614-20141126220510

I know I haven't been a part of this conversation, nor should I be a part of it, but I would like to answer your question Primarch, sadly it isn't.

Firstly your article needs to be 25,000 bytes for the RPCQE and it only at 17,767 at the minute, which would be an instant fail, but that can be solved by going into more detail in the article.

Now for what seems to be the main issue here, which is Powers and Abilities if I am not mistaken, well, it still doesn't conform to what is required, y'see, according to the RPCQE's rules, a 4th Seated Shinigami or it's racial equivilent (Soldat in your case) is allowed to be an expert in one field of combat, such as Zanjutsu or something like that, your character is an expert in Hirenkyaku and Swordsmanship, which is a no-no, so maybe you could make him a proficient swordsman with a good, but not expertly tuned amount of skill, and that would sort that out.

Secondly, looking through your Natural Abilities section, well, call it me being picky but I feel that your character is very physically enhanced, he's very durable, very strong, he has a lotta endurance and he has a high amount of intelligence. Now to me that feels befitting of a Lieutenant or Captain to have such powerful natural attributes, I feel a character who is supposed to be 4th seat or so in power would have two physical attributes that they are strong in and "maybe" have a sharp wit, being physically great in everything though is going to far in my honest opinion.

So there, I think I labelled every problem that I saw with your powers and abilities section, basically fix those things to suit the [guidelines of the RPCQE http://bleachfanfiction.wikia.com/wiki/Bleach_Fan_Fiction_Wiki:Right_to_Powerful_Characters_Qualification_Exam] and make sure your article is 25,000 bytes long, you can check how many bytes it is in the history logs for the article.

Once again sorry to pop in unannounced but I wanna help you out a bit. :)