User blog:Rengoku18/Like some Advice

Hey everyone. This is Rengoku18, one of the newest users of the Wiki. I've started creating my first character and am already finished chapter 4 of my first story. I do plan on re-editing the whole thing though, and I would like to hear your comments as well as any advice you can give me.

The name of the story is Bleach: Ultimatum Book 1: The Gathering Darkness.

Just send me a reply as to what you think I should do. Thx!