Talk:Deemed Unworthy

Good job, but...
I have no idea if you're asking for comments or critism, but I felt like I should congratulate you on this chapter. However, I must point out a couple of things that I believe will benefit you. 1 - your grammar and spelling could be better; I suggest you write everything in microsoft word or something that has spelling and grammar check. After you're finished correcting stuff, just copy&paste it to wikia. 2 - you start off in the middle of the plot (at least, that's the way I had interpreted it); you should have started it at the beginning of the team's formation, unless you plan on explaining that in a TBTP arc. Other than that, good job. (: