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Though I was looking forward to RPing, unfortunately I don't think I can at this time. I am suddenly finding free time rather hard to come by due to a number of extra classes and tests that my professors have started to arrange. Maybe after a few weeks, once I get more free time? Cheers! --Jet'ika (Talk | Contribs) 13:24, April 11, 2011 (UTC)

Van vs Miyata
That'd be quite possible yes, though we need to find a reason why Van would get offensive with Miyata, Miyata being a member of ﻿the Jūsanseiza would likely wish to keep as low a profile as at all possible, so as to not get his partner Tsuchimikado Shichika in a difficult situation (worse yet, blowing his cover) - the possibility is that Van might've detected his Spiritual Energy (due to the state of Miyata's Zanpakutō it'd be quite easy to pick up on it) and from there he follows him due to curiousty only to find out whom exactly he is. The Gotei 13 do have pictures and such of him after all, as they'd have with most Rogue Shinigami.

Yup, I suppose thats as good a solution as anything.

I think it'd be best if you did, given that it'd be Van that'd look for Miyata.

Nah, its not nessecary to end it, and well - Miyata has full control over the water that he summons, which is only natural since his water IS his Spiritual Power and thus by extension part of him, another addition is that in his first Roleplay it'd look quite bad if he was completely overwhelmed in every way, especially concidering his role as an antagonist.

But no, we don't have to end the battle no, I doupt that Van will listen to Miyata anyway, concidering his brother is concerned :P

Yes, we'll simply continue where we left off, and Miyata doesn't have anything besides his water abilities hence why he's immune to such things - while he's a Kido and Hakuda Master as well, he's not skilled enough in those fields to be able to fight on par with Van. I'm not offended by the technique however, with Hiroya I wouldn't have cared, given that Hiroya's capable of working himself around more or less anything and it is certainly original though you do make it abit overpowered by how it seems that he can crystalize great things that are in huge quantity without hardly breaking a sweat.

Ah, that is due to the fact that he pretty much crystalizes the water of Kyōsui. Miyata's Zanpakutō - and as a Zanpakutō its abilities are controled by Miyata's will. While Van may be capable of crystalizing its water he'd be unable to sever the bond between Zanpakutō and Shinigami. After all Van may choose to change the Zanpakutō's appearance and properties but in the end it is still a Zanpakutō and by extension he wouldn't be able to control it any more than he could control Miyata himself.

Basically, Miyata doesn't control the crystal itself and thus Van's skills are left completely irrellevant alltogether. And for the sake of future reference, I don't concider the "Grandmaster" title applicable - because to me it is an attempt to overdo the skills of Masters which I by no means support, this is emphasized by the fact that Hiroya is only a Kidō Master - despite there being very few whom would desserve the title of "Grandmaster Kidō-user" more than him.

The fact is, Raze that you've taken a quite Naruto-like approach to this so far, and indeed, in the Naruto universe the Crystal abilities would be fearsome. Though, the Naruto universe don't really have anything like the Zanpakutō.

Van's techniques are fully effective in most scenarios though, he can still use it fluently for defense, offense and support - and he's still capable of crystalizing Kyōsui's water, this would stop Miyata's attack and delay further action but controling anothers Zanpakutō is largely impossible save for a few exceptions.

I do realize that I was abit unclear but hopefully this puts a perspective on things: Don't worry, Miyata does NOT outmatch or even remotely use Van's Crystal abilities.

Well, if you say so. I will however be discontinuing our roleplay as It ceased to be fun on my part and the few last posts have primarily only been made to amuse you - I concider roleplays whom I don't find amusing to be a waste of time, while Miyate technically could better his scores I've lost the desire to roleplay with you further, atleast while you're using Van.

I will however concider this "Canon" to Miyata's story, along with portraying a sensible retreat on his part, the "Canon" part allows for some interesting dialogue in the upcoming Jusanseiza meeting - between Miyata and Toru :)

And don't worry, no hard feelings from me - and I'm not angry, merely slightly dissapointed in how this turned out.

I really think you've misunderstood me here, judging by your response - I never actually stated that YOU had been wasting my time, I'd be much more aggressive if I felt you had, you're a good roleplayer and in no way do I concider roleplaying with you to be a waste of time. What I DO concider to be a waste of time is to continue a roleplay which gives me no enjoyment - a roleplay should always be fun for both parts participating - this roleplay simply wasn't. I'm pretty sure that if you felt that I disregarded most qualities of your character you would've acted in quite the same manner, and as a matter of fact you did so very recently.

Well, our roleplay was approaching its end eitherhow. As the only way I'd be able to continue from here on would be for Miyata to use his Hollowfication, which I'd rather not reveal this early in the story - the fact that I didn't enjoy it did however hasten the process, and yes my comments was somewhat agressive, which was bred by my growing annoyance.

And while you never actually disregarded his abilities you did rend most of his abilities useless without seemingly ever breaking a sweat - when you spend so much time crafting your techniques like I do you can't help but be offended by that. I'm sure you can relate to this somewhat :)

Ouch.. you know my weakness.. flattery. Well - I suppose I overeacted abit, though I'd still wish that Van had used enough power for it to seem atleast abit intermediate for him to do so. Miyata does release an enormous amount of water, after all. And well, he also has other abilities - though I should probably get around to writing them down in more detail. Well.. I apologize on my part!

--Njalm2 14:35, April 11, 2011 (UTC)

Yo
Ahhh! Things have changed since I was last here lol! In essence, his Bankai's just a massive expansion of his Shikai abilities, cause everything shown in his Bankai have some connection of to the Shikai skills. But I've said this before and I'll say it again, great minds think alike :) Yeah, fire away dude. I trust your judgement, so make whatever changes you feel are needed to the fusion. We never really finished off that discussion about how it'd be used did we? Meh, hardly matters. I reckon When Fists Collide is pretty much done except for the finishing touches, along with the Captain one as well. To follow that storyline in the SS arc, you wanna introduce the follow up investigation and how Shori defects and the real captain returns, unless you had plans that is. If its okay with you, I'll use this charge into Soul Society as a way for Kentaro to learn more about Kohai Tochi before he jumps in to save Akiye. I can work seperately on Kitsui's hunt for Averian at the same time then and link the events together. Kenji-Taichō (Talk) 15:25, April 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * I hear ya, buddy! When we finish our RP's from now, lets leave something like: Next Story > Insert name here. that way folks know whats coming next in line. While Shori defects though, could he kick the living daylights out of Kentaro? Kentaro would wanna know about Kohai Tochi, and Shori would naturally know something, and I've seen how painfully annoying he can be, so Kentaro would resort to violence almost immediatly, but be no match for a captain. He'd learn only titbits, though so it wouldn't be for nothing. And I figured as we wrought the thing that the Captain one was heading in that direction. Drop me a few parts you need to go smoothly during the next RP and I'll make sure they're addresed. So go ahead and start it up, and we'll finally be fit to start these arcs off. And I get what your saying about the zanpakutos, so no worries there, pal. Where you want the fisticuffs one to lead? A planning RP to discuss how they plan on getting into Soul Society which follows on from there? Kenji-Taichō (Talk) 16:10, April 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * I'm gonna start up an actual page for the Soul Society Arc along the same lines of what I've done with my own individual arcs. We can add stories we need to do and start them when we're ready so we can keep up and know when to stop one RP and start another. Everything will be in the same place and make things easier. And I've made my post and added a little bit of an intro, along with a link back to the last part. I'll be controlling Kentaro, Jinta and Harumi for the break-in, 'cause I made a small change to Jinta's spiritual energy that might allow them to surpirse just about anyone briefly lol. I think I'll run a story of my own at the same time when Naibu and Riki go ask Kenji for some answers about Kohai Tochi. We could even bring Van into that and have Kenji and Van's rematch just before it to tie it all together nicely. Its serious that were only getting this done now lol :) Kenji-Taichō (Talk) 16:38, April 12, 2011 (UTC)

Uhmm...
R u mad at me raze? im really sorry... i hope your not mad at me... Lone Black Garuga 04:21, April 12, 2011 (UTC)

^_^ I am very thankful.... Though Im still sorry for forgetting to post in our RP, raze-kun... Lone Black Garuga 04:35, April 12, 2011 (UTC)

^_^ Ur post again Raze-kun... Ill try to be as active as I can Lone Black Garuga 04:48, April 12, 2011 (UTC)

I always have fun RPing with you raze... who wouldn't? Ur one of the best! Lone Black Garuga 05:03, April 12, 2011 (UTC)

Raz
I've been meaning to ask you, are u ever going to RP with me or anyone else besides Kenji? Grizzaka 01:17, April 13, 2011 (UTC)

fine then man. Grizzaka 00:15, April 14, 2011 (UTC)

we may be friends but you don't anything about me or how i lived Raz. Grizzaka 00:56, April 14, 2011 (UTC)

you know..... in all my life I've been screwed over so many times that I actually thought that maybe i should have killed myself but I didn't because I met you guys. I thought that maybe there can be a silver lining and that i finally found the friends that would be there for me when i needed them. Look you can say all this s*&t about me and this trash because that's how you really feel. It'll just be another remind of all the crap i've taken from people like you Raz. Yes i am a crybaby and Yes i thought that maybe i thought you guys would be there for me but all you've shown to me is nothing more than hatred.

I thought that maybe after i finished the cross-over arc that everything would be better but Like you say raz, I'm pathetic for thinking it and you didn't have to say it for me to get it. so say whatever you have to say Raz, i've taken worse crap from the ones i called friends.

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Whatever you may think of me.......... you guys were the best thing that ever happened to me. Grizzaka 01:41, April 14, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry. Grizzaka 01:41, April 14, 2011 (UTC)

Raze
Raze I need some advice about Masanori's zanpakuto which I am doing a complete redo. And before you say anything yes I got Sei permission to make a zanpakuto of the Philosophy type of energy. Just I made Masanori Kawahiru for Sei as a gift during xmas and I want it to be as good as possible and so while you haven't really heard about it what kind of powers do you think a Philosophy-type zanpakuto should have. Also, incase I never told you about Philosophy, Philosophy is the strongest and oldest "known" echelon of supernatural energy that can be manifested and it isn't Spiritual Power.: The Twilight of Your Despair 02:33, April 14, 2011 (UTC)

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Look man, I'm sorry for exploding on you It's cuz i have had the most rotten luck these past few days which i rather not discuss but I had to explode on someone and i chose the wrong person so i hope your forgive me man if not then i understand but i wanted to say what i meant. T-T Grizzaka 04:39, April 14, 2011 (UTC)

One more thing, gotta admit those three characters are looking good man, but not as good as mine :P just playing man. Grizzaka 04:41, April 14, 2011 (UTC)

Howdy!
I honestly didn't know a thing about the nomination until I read your message lol. It was basically "That's nice... wait a minute here. What?" But thanks, pal. But slow down, dude. You plan on killing Yurei? Have you any plans on whose gonna do the deed then? I like the poor blighter, but I guess some just need to get killed off, right? I had been planning a bount, but he kind of hit a snag when I started Twilights tourney lol. I gotta admit, I love the Fōrun-juu as a race. I'm glad we revived them for gen 2. Well, I'll go ahead and do the review you asked for here, 'cause I caught a free minute and have the time to do it properly. I'll break it down into sections so its easier to read, pal. Right, one review coming up!

Opening Paragraphs: Nicely detailed on his current location, short and to the point, pal. Not a bad thing, that but maybe you'd want to add that Van's his mentor, or something along those lines so you have a better idea who he affiliates himself with. Not all openings need to be miny stories that explain their entire backstory, so I felt you've done a good job here, pal. No mistakes that I could see either, so there's another good point. One thing I have noticed is that you tend to use a very complicated way of doing the template on the right. Its a lot easier copying the fields and pasting them into the editing window and filling it out without the complicated code. I tried that with Shigeru before I made the Excavado templates and it was one royal pain in the a$$ lol. Good section all in all, dude :)

Appearance: The detail is good and gives the reader a good sense of his actual appearance, which the picture you've icluded only helping to cement the image in your mind. If you wanna exand on it though, here's the method I usually use with my own characters. Split the appearance section into two different paragraphs; one for his physical build, hair, eyes, mannerisms etc and leave the second to describe his clothing and how that fits him. Loosely? Or baggy? You may also want to include what other people in your universe think of his appearance. In Kentaro's appearance, I've said that Harumi and Akiye have described him as pretty or handsome, and with Naibu I've said many consider his yellow eyes to be somewhat hollow-like. Little things like that really help to cement the characters image in your mind, ya know? And there's no grammar issues, and I know how quick you type lol. Congrats on a detailed section, though it could easily be expanded on, pal.

Personality: An important part of any character and one of my favorite sections in Rozeluxe's article. Its obvious you spend a lot of time thinking through or discussing his personality, as its one thing thats clear in every one of your characters that I've seen, pal. They all have well-written and imformitive personalities that let the reader know how they'd perform in certain siutations. But one thing above all the else that I picked out is that he'll be the one who'll stand up and leave someone behind. That takes guts in itself, and would make him a leader figure of sorts for his allies. One thing I would move into his powers and abilities (Shunpo or enhanced speed to be precise) would be the part in the first paragraph that details his hidden abilities as a swordsman and his ability to dodge reckless fire from zanpakutō and Kidō. Anyways, I loved this section and I've got nothing but praise for it, pal. Very nicely done!

Synopsis: I haven't seen him in action yet, so I'll skip over this section Raze. Ask me when he hands one of my younger characters their a$$ on a silver platter though lol :)

Powers & Abilities: *Shivers* If he can fight on par with Anna, I think I'll be grabbing my characters and turning tail with one of 'em screaming HIT THE DECK! The individual parts are realistic and detailed. Its clear you want his main skill to be swordsmanship, judging by the description and the mention of it in his personality further up the page. Then I come to his speed, pal. Its really short, and one of the reasons I said you should move that part I mentioned earlier from his personality to better fill out his speed. That's the only real complaint I have, as the grammars solid and the descriptions good. Anyways, I'm loving that Heiki skill he can pull off. Okay, here's an idea to make that weapon generation all the more deadly. Include telekenisis as well as one of the abilities gained, so he can mentally control the path of each individual weapon. That alone would take most folks by surprise. And another may be a focus on chains attuned to his Kidō skills. Wrap his opponent with the chain and then electrocute them with Tzuri Raiden, or set them alight with a good ol' Shakkahō lol. Those last two are only suggestions, though I loved reading this character again :)

Zanpakutō: Have I ever said i love that zanpakutō? I have? Well I'm saying it again lol. I've heard of people using the Hōgyoku as an item they simply keep in their possession, or even swallowing it to gain its power; but implementing it in a zanpakutō? I appluad you Raze. You've focused a lot on mind control and related techniques with Zettai Fukujū and Zen Chōkakuyo, though. Perhaps a few abilities that effect only Rozeluxe, as opposed to the opponent and the environment like say, if he desired for a minor boost in strength, his zanpakutō would respond by doing just that. Anyways, this is easily the most descriptive piece of the entire article, which is understandable considering what his zanpakutō is and whats embedded within it. I remembered you were thinking of turning him into an Excavado, so maybe the zanpakutō would play a huge role in him actually getting hollow powers, you know, because of the desire manipulation. Just a thought, pal.

Anywho, he's coming along nicely. Touch up the appearance section, expand on his speed and perhaps include some of his everyday habits within his personality section and you'll have yourself a character who'll be even more interesting than he is now. I've said in Kenji's personality that he likes a drink, so much in fact that hes been known to teach his students drunk, and then tie it into his laziness. Little things like that make the character more likeable, and ultimately more human. Right now, I'd give him a 34 outta 50, 'cause he's defintely getting better and better pal with every contribution that you make :) Hope this helps you out a little, pal. Kenji-Taichō (Talk) 18:31, April 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * I... am... wrecked! I've been building kitchen cabinets, drawers and cutting worktop boards since half past 5 this morning, and lets just say its 9 in the evening now >_< I'll read over Rozeluxe in a minute though, 'cause I still have to make a few comments on a certain someones Bankai lol. Hope that review helped ya out a little, pal. Well, what can I say? I'm starting to think we share some kind of mental link or something, dude. Its not like this is the first time this has ever happened lol. Kenji-Taichō (Talk) 20:09, April 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * Akio Katsu's Bankai, If I remember right? But ALL of them? Oh boy... Give me a second and I'll get right on them. Between Van and Naishō, poor Kenji's gonna get whaled on lol. I have no idea why your computer hates you so much, though >_< All I can think of it clearing out your coms cookies, clearing the cache and deleting any bogged up history then running an old fashioned clean-up. Not to be nosy or anything, but how much rubbish do ya have on it? Unneeded programs can slow a com down quicker than any virus would, pal. Kenji-Taichō (Talk) 12:01, April 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * Drum roll................ I'm on my Easter Holidays!! Yehaa! Took long enough lol :P Two weeks where I can just sit back, chill out, relax and pretend to do some much needed revision :) Ah, have I ever said how much I love my life? Plauge's going good right now, though he can't look at a bike right now, and to be honest... I can't blame him. Unfortunate thing, is that I'm the one who needs to get him from A to B because he fails to grasp the concept of a bus >_< Rozeluxe's transformation would really be a training thing. And I've got a way for him to actually learn about the Excavado. Kenji and Van's little RP (fusion needed lol). But you forgot? Tut tut. Bad form, Raze! Jk. I do it too often, so don't worry lol. I'll get right to it, pal. Kenji-Taichō (Talk) 11:01, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Already have, pal. I noticed the title of the message you left him not fifteen minutes ago, and curiosity got the better of me lol. I've been keeping track of the battle so far, after all so I kinda figured it'd come down to that. No one could hope to beat Van out in crystal control, though. Its thats simple it isn't evewn funny. Even if Kenji learned it tomorrow, he would still look like a child when compared to Van. Njalm's character can contreol water, I'll admit, but if the torrent was crystalized as you did in the RP, then there wouldn't be any water left for him to control unless I've somehow missed the entire point of crystillization lol. To be honest, I don't know where the logic in that counter came from. Anyways, Roxeluze. At the minute, its impossible for anyone outside the Ryu Order or the Imawashii to have access to knowledge about the Excavado. There's Alma Shizuka and Shigeru Yuudai... unless you want Shigeru to meet and teach him, you know, make amini-arc about it. It'd certainly add a new twist, considering Shigeru's status as an antagonist. Doing that to piss off the Shadoking would be something he'd jump at lol. Kenji-Taichō (Talk) 12:00, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

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man, i need you to look at this please cuz i really need a second opinon :( Akio Katsu Grizzaka 21:48, April 14, 2011 (UTC)

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i need your help. Grizzaka 18:55, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

-sigh- just.... take a look at this and tell me does ray have a chance to kill this guy? Grizzaka 19:07, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

Raz seriously man i need your help cuz i have no idea what I'm going to do man, plz man talk to me don't make me have to quit gravity force man Plz. Grizzaka 19:12, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

SORRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! read the RP despair did something very wrong to ray. Grizzaka 19:19, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

Gamemaster
I fixed it. When a problem like that arises, just revert the edit before. Do NOT allow anyone to edit it before it's been reverted, since it just makes it harder to do so. Also, when Depair attempted to fix it, he royaly fuck up half of the page.


 * No problem, and sorry that I godmodded a bit on my last post. Hope you're not upset with me.  Also, could you edit your last post, 'cause I would like to know where Kaien shot his water.  It'd be easier for me to post that way. Ciao~


 * EDIT: Would you check out my character, Idzumo, and tell me what you think? I'd really appreciate it(:


 * Naw, no hard feelings. However, you always seem to defend the person I'm talking about, which makes me feel like I'm always at odds with you and the other members.  Honestly, the only people I have an actual problem with is Grizzaka, and you look at see this to know why.  Anyways, it would be an interesting RP, but, unlike you, I can only handle four or five RP's at most, and I currently have Inquisition of Nobility, Academy Arc: Strict Training, Duel in the White Sands, A Game with the Gamemaster and Ideals of the Espada.  Plus, 00 (Firegod00) asked me to RP him when I had less RP's to post on, as well as Void, so maybe when I'm done with three of 'em I'll hit you up!(:  Oh yeah, Kenji and I plan on making our Naishō v. Kenji battle span over two to four RP's, so I won't be done with that anytime soon.  Sorry. :L


 * It's fine. Did you ever read Grizzaka and I's argument?  I found it rather comical, since he used reasons that had nothing to do with what I was saying.  If you haven't, it's a must-see! :L

No, I didn't, but remind me in the morning. It's 11:30 here, and I'm almost about to pass out. Any review of a zanpakutō would be this: "Well, I find it to behifoqguveahgJE'GHWGHWR'HGLKNFGBDGBlknnslanbnlsdgaehg4ptu240gyhnellllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll(...)" :L I'll do it first thing when I get on tomorrow, kay? Also, I don't even care about the abandonment thing with Grizzaka. I'm tired of being treated like I'm some third-class citizen within GF by him. You, Kenji, Despair, Void, Njalm, etc. seem to be able to show me as much respect as I do you, yet, he fails to do so. So, I just exploded. I personally like the last actual paragraph, as it truly shows how I feel about Grizzaka.


 * That was the one! I knew I was forgetting an RP.  See, this is why I don't do more than five; I'm already getting mixed up. :L  Your post again, my friend(:


 * Honestly, it's fine. The only thing I suggest is to take away a few of his abilities, that way it seems more realistic that he's only just learning about its "techniques."  Sorry if this wasn't much help.  It's one in the morning and I just had the most drama-filled night of my life.


 * Luxe, I know you're not really a chatango man anymore, but could you get on for a moment? I need to discuss something with you.

Shadows and Flames
Lol now what kind of level of suspense would I create if I replied? Maybe Eiji is dead, maybe he's down for the count, maybe he's resting and taking a small break from the fight? lol who knows! Either way, it's still your turn for a bit :) Unless you want me to write a bit. Northstar1012 20:34, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

Lol he's most likely not dead, but buying his time to heal up a bit or surprise Zeliel. Just figured you would want to duke it out with Zeliel as Rozeluxe for a while. Northstar1012 02:36, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Haha well now you can write the fight to go however you want and when you want me to, ahem, intervene, I can do so lol but i'm definitely excited to see what Rozeluxe can do. Northstar1012 02:55, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Hey Raze, I had Eiji use his Bakuhatsu ability that sends a stream of energy to the end of the chain and causes an explosion, but i didn't want to write the explosion in as I was afraid it was a form of auto-hitting. Let me know if you want me to rewrite anything. Thanks! Northstar1012 15:35, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Hmmm I'm not opposed to having Eiji learn something new =) Also, I don't know if you're interested in reading my stories but I've been adding quite a bit so far to my article Whispers of War if you ever wanted check it out and give me any criticism. Thanks! Northstar1012 01:42, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry for the late response to the RP. Crazy busy here that i've barely had time to do much. Anyways, if you're still interested in continuing the RP, you're up! Northstar1012 04:04, April 30, 2011 (UTC)

Hey buddy, do you want to finish our RP or do you want to keep going? I feel bad with all my late replies and I don't want to hold you up if you want to end it. Let me know either way! Northstar1012 19:08, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

Oh! No problem. What are you having trouble with? Do you want any help with anything? I like trying to come up with new abilities so let me know if want some help. Northstar1012 20:57, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

Lol BTW, you're up. i have no idea when was the last time i posted haha Northstar1012 03:03, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

Raz
i got a rookie who has potential to become a pro and i already have one vote to approve him for the group his name is Twojr2 and here's the RP we did. Grizzaka 02:45, April 16, 2011 (UTC)

Yo Dude!
Heya Raze! Long time no see eh? My studies have been going great! How bout yours? Oh and our RP about killing Hitsuke, let's resume it now. I wanted to ask if you support the idea of having subdivisions in the Gravity Force. Some to correct grammatical mistakes and others like being in the description group, helping with descriptions if the members need it. Whatcha think? 暗い夜 DarkNight (Talk To Me!)  13:41, April 16, 2011 (UTC)

hi
Hey i recently did a RP with Grizzaka.. he asked me to join Gravity Force and that I should ask 2 other members if it was ok wit them Twonjr2 15:54, April 16, 2011 (UTC)TwonJr2Twonjr2 15:54, April 16, 2011 (UTC)

Excuse me RP
I was wodering if you wanted to do a RP wit me Twonjr2 16:48, April 16, 2011 (UTC)TwonJr2Twonjr2 16:48, April 16, 2011 (UTC)

hey
would it be possible for you to be on Chatango. Grizzaka 01:46, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

yeah thx. Grizzaka 01:57, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Two thinks:

1. You can use Philosophy if you want for some of your stronger character. 2. Do you think that some objects, could be made of solely Philosophy for it is energy that isn't Spiritual Power at all.: The Twilight of Your Despair 02:40, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Yes it does come off a bit mean. However, that is your view and nothing wrong with it. That is why I ask more experience people these things. Because, if I did create or do whatever I wanted 100 percent of the time I am no better than an arrogant bastard or worse a god that is above everyone else.

But, one thing I am creating is a weapon that belongs to the Kings. As the High King of End the immense evil King sealed in the Divine Ark, was so powerful that they made a weapon that is powerful enough to fight against him, for other than the Original First Four Kings there are no one strong enough to fight him. And this is my main villian's goal to open the Ark take in the evil spirit and to keep the current Kings in check from starting a war with one another.: The Twilight of Your Despair 02:55, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

The Ark was create by Kaosu Souzou the First Supreme King before time began so in short the laws of reality weren't yet made and so it cannot be destroyed making it the prefect sealing box.

The High King of End was a Human Soul that was corrupted by all the power left after the end of the 10,000 year war with the Fist Kings. And Each of the First Kings had destructive powers on a planetary scale so you can think of all the power left behind with all four of them clashed into each other, but all the current ones cannot measure to them. So knowing that one day the ark's seal my open by someone they made a weapon able to fight him. The High King is just as strong as a single first original King.

And sure about the rp, which of my characters you wan to fight against?: The Twilight of Your Despair 03:14, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Its fine who you use but what character you want me to use?: The Twilight of Your Despair 12:36, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

I don't want to rp for most of my characters fall either too strong or too weak.: The Twilight of Your Despair 03:11, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

RP TAlk
about the RP i wasa lookin and grizzaka said that ur great to RP wit... for now i just would like to know what char you have made if i canTwonjr2 20:36, April 18, 2011 (UTC)TwonJr2Twonjr2 20:36, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

yo
what do u think of my new character? Grizzaka 01:28, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Well found her on some website i forgot where it was and I'll fix it right now. Grizzaka 01:32, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

alright check her again and y do you ask where i got her at? Grizzaka 01:50, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

oh come on, what else is still mispelled wrong and u gotta admit she got her body from her mother. member that pic u gave me for the character for masutkage? Grizzaka 01:59, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

oh my bad, I'll fix it right now sorry I was busy with fixing up Masuyo. Grizzaka 02:28, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

dude, you have to see what i added to Masuyo man it's wicked. Grizzaka 03:37, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Ouch!
Okay, I reckon this is how things are gonna play out with you and your mates:
 * Raze gets home and begins looking around for his friends. One decides, to his peril, that he'll pay his good friend a visit, unbeknowing of his friends anger. Seeing him approach from the window as he's getting ready, Raze waits with a large, evil grin and demonic glint in his eye. As the door opens, a scream is heard as a baseball bat becomes very much like a club in Raze's hands... Join us next week for Raze gets his revenge on friend Number 2!

I don't know about you, but I see television opportunities :) Don't do the above though, 'cause that might turn out bad for ya. Regardless, it'll let ya try out new ideas, and since you've already explained what happened on her talk page, no one will think twice about it. No worries, eh? But Jishaku is raw ownage, pal. *Nudge nudge* You know what to do :P But I don't even do chemistry to know that when something crystaliizes, there ain't anything left of said substance from its previous state... Now he knows my pain when my lightning is made all but useless, but again its what helped Kenji become so damn versatile lol. Kenji-Taichō (Talk) 13:30, April 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * A shinai? Oh boy, remind me never to piss you off, especially if you'll go all chemistry mad-man on me lol. One of ym best mates is the same way lol. I do see television opporunities, ya know. As promised, I'll give you the second installment next week :P Anyways, give your head a rub and don't get a headache on us now. And baseball bats, my good friend, are just like the good old days... and maybe because there's one in my bedroom that Garet ends up on the reciecving end of all too often... :) Kenji-Taichō (Talk) 14:08, April 19, 2011 (UTC)
 * And I've got a good swing :) Just drop me a message when you want me to work my magic lol. I've been busting out the latest tale in Kitsui's story-line, and things have just taken a turn for the worst. If you wanna give it a read over, then check out Hunting a Legend. He can be painfully annoying at times true, but he'd need to do something incredibly dumb and stupid to warrant me hitting him with a bat... Not that it stops me thinking about it, though :P Jk. Jk. I'm too young to go to jail for killing my little bro. Kenji-Taichō (Talk) 15:28, April 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * Thanks for that, dude! That's the style I plan on using for all my future individual arcs, 'cause it really helps me get everything across a lot easier and yet work with multiple different characters. So, you wanna pop at Kitsui? Our fisticuffs RP's coming to a close soon anyhow, so I don't see why we can't start up another. Who you wanna use, if your up for it? I got everything (I think?) a while back, but my cousin landed in the middle of my reply to you and I couldn't get it finished :( Happy anime watchings, dude! Kenji-Taichō (Talk) 18:24, April 22, 2011 (UTC)

This is gonna be a kind of baptism by fire for poor Kitsui... Why not make this a little more interesting and go for a two-on-two battle? Kitsui and Sairento vs. Luka and Akira? Those two partner one another among the Collective Vices, so it'd give ya a good chance to show off their teamwork, while the sames true for my guys. Introduce the group early to Kitsui as well, and since he has little coming and going with Kenji and Co. they remain in the dark as well. On the continuity front, can it be set a few months before The Hunt for Averian Arc? 'Cause Kitsui won't be up for a big lot of anything once that arc concludes. The cause, though, I'll keep closed mouth about :P Kenji-Taichō (Talk) 09:32, April 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * Sorry, had to disappear up to my cousins for a few drinks :P He's back for good from Afghanistan, so we're all in a bit of a mood for celebrating lol. If you want we don't need to start the RP right now, if you wanna work a little on Akira and Luka, pal. For when we do start it, any names in mind? Yeah, the two were used against Sei and Ten, but aside from that, I haven't seen 'em lol. But their with the Collective Vices, eh? Honestly didn't see that one coming until I checked out their articles. The problem with Averian, is that if the two of 'em are too weak and battered, he'll go through them for a short-cut. He's far stronger than Kenji is, after all. Even when Kenji's at full power its a battle for survival. he needs his Shikai just to keep up with Averian's sealed state. You'll see just how strong, though, at the end of Part II :) Kenji-Taichō (Talk) 15:33, April 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * One RP served with a helping of your turn! Key To The Endless Sky. Anyways, he says cheers, pal. They run into Shori, eh? Well, I'll tell you one thing about the final act of Part II. Kenji makes a fashionably late entrance. Rosuto, Meian and Kireina are the main ones to champion the cause, so you can no doubt imagine Kenji's reaction when he does arrive, especially with his family on the line. Well, If they've been training, I guess I can expect some new things from the stories I have read with those two? Oh boy, this is getting good! Kenji-Taichō (Talk) 16:03, April 23, 2011 (UTC)

Re:Hiteiteki
Go for it man, just use Sōsuke Chiri as a model, and follow the info on the Hiteiteki page.... good luck.--楽しい (talk to Fenix!) 14:58, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

RE: Welcome to BFF
Thank you. I will try to keep that in mind. And I am pretty sure that I'll enjoy myself here. :)

SereneDreams 19:12, April 21, 2011 (UTC)

Raze

 * Tell me please if you like these names.
 * Senjungami (仙純神, lit. "Immortal Untainted God") For the name of the only Philosophy based Zanpakuto
 * Tougenkyou Zenaku no Kajitsu (桃源郷善悪の果実, lit. "Fruit of the Tree of the Knowledge of Good and Evil") for an ability.: The Twilight of Your Despair 15:45, April 22, 2011 (UTC)

Dude
have u made a Zanpakuto spirit and if you have can you tell me which one cuz i want to make Ray and Aki's. Grizzaka 14:36, April 23, 2011 (UTC)

i need that information bro. Grizzaka 14:44, April 23, 2011 (UTC)

hey, could you help me put the pic from Ray's profile of him on cuz i have no idea how. Grizzaka 15:15, April 23, 2011 (UTC)

Hey bro listen i need a favor, would it be possible to fix the pics to make them look good on this character? Grizzaka 23:55, April 25, 2011 (UTC)

i mean move them to spots to make them look better. Grizzaka 00:33, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

thx bro. Grizzaka 00:42, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

Heyo!
Hah! So I see you've been active in BFF... a LOT? Can I join you and Kenz (A new nickname for Kenji lol) for the Soul Society Arc? 暗い夜 DarkNight  (Talk To Me!)  14:58, April 23, 2011 (UTC)

Heh, a twist in Hitsuke and Shirokyu's relationship eh? Truth is, Hitsuke never cared one bit about Shirokyu. He was just all acting. He thinks of himself as a very smart guy, though he's the opposite and that's the reason why he's gonna get killed. MUAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Evil mode on :D 暗い夜 DarkNight  (Talk To Me!)  15:16, April 23, 2011 (UTC)

New Sig
Nice change to your signature. Didnt know there were other fans of Defense Devil. --- Illuminate Void (Talk) 02:35, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, personally I like Shugral the most. His...tactics are by the far the most ingenious that I've seen in a series. Have you read any other manwha series? There are some damn good action ones: Veritas, The Breaker (and its sequal The Breaker: New Waves), I also like the series Witch Hunter (not witch hunter robin), the main character is a gunslinger and his allies are beast too. Give them a read. I'm sure you'll enjoy them, if you liked Defense Devil. --- Illuminate Void (Talk) 03:18, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

Howdy
Whew, I'm enjoying my holidays, pal. Nothing beats a good ol' sleep in with a sun to greet ya first thing in the morning :P Until now, I've barely been fit to sit at a com. Enjoyed a good game of rugby the other night, and when its us guys playing, rugby sure as hell ain't the term I'd use when naming it. Hell with a twinge of pain... wait, twinge? I should say agony lol. Anyways, how you been, pal? When your free, its your turn to post on the Luka Kitsui and co brawl. Kenji-Taichō (Talk) 09:42, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

Um
Kyodaina Uzumaki's release phrase wouldnt change As Kurogitsune already had a release phrase.... Zanpakutou sharing means that she also uses "Ashes rise now and become my shield; Flames burn now and become my blade" (灰は上昇し、私の盾になると、炎は燃えて私の刃になる, Hai wa jōshō shi, watashi no tate ni naru to,-en wa moete watashi no ha ni naru), sorry for the confusion --楽しい (talk to Fenix!) 12:50, April 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * Um follow Taka's page since Kurogitsune isn't updated (I haven't had the time to update her). And sure, I've been itching to test out my new powers, but its gonna have to wait until i finish his new zanpakutou.--楽しい (talk to Fenix!) 13:12, April 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * Ive kinda finalized his shikai, tell me what you think.--楽しい (talk to Fenix!) 13:27, April 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * That would be true if they were fighting together, once split they are drawn into a unique area where they are alone with Taka's separated self.... Since its Taka's power he's used to it, but his opponent wont be as lucky since it will be their first encounter.--楽しい (talk to Fenix!) 13:45, April 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * Started: Face-off: Tales of Shared Sword--楽しい (talk to Fenix!) 15:44, April 29, 2011 (UTC)
 * Ok now to explain the areas, In each area resides a form of Taka as you know already, the rules of each are simple the skill that form excels in is put into overdrive in a sense So for willpower it would be fighting and such but mostly melee, The Knowledge person would excel in Kidō and the emotion form is everything else. So in reflection of that both combatants should be mind full of this during combat... just giving you a heads up.--楽しい (talk to Fenix!) 18:29, May 1, 2011 (UTC)

Id say Hohō and such would fall under emotion, that and any shikai powers you have just at 50% power.--楽しい (talk to Fenix!) 18:36, May 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * 0.0 Well lets just try the best we can, I know that I was changing Taka during the rp but it was adding more explanations to his powers for easier comprehension and such as well as finishing his bankai (which i will not be using) But yeah This should be fun so dont think of it as one sided The knowledge side is the smartest of the three so they would be able to figure out something. ^_^--楽しい (talk to Fenix!) 19:13, May 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * Preferably the Hachiman technique or an attack from her shikai, Its up too you. --救済者 (talk to Fenix!) 14:00, May 2, 2011 (UTC)
 * I have no idea how too sorry im not good with wiki code.--救済者 (talk to Fenix!) 05:13, May 3, 2011 (UTC)

hey sorry men
sorry i havent been on in awhile but I would still like to do that RP if you wantTwonjr2 22:21, April 28, 2011 (UTC)TwonJr2Twonjr2 22:21, April 28, 2011 (UTC)

Talk back at you about the RP Grizzaka said that you were cool and a good guy to RP wit but I'll talk to you bout the RP kool Twonjr2 16:24, April 29, 2011 (UTC)TwonJr2Twonjr2 16:24, April 29, 2011 (UTC)

Yo!
How've you been doing raze! you've been gone for a hefty amount of time hehehe... well, i can't say i didn't lolXD... So good to see you again! Lone Black Garuga 01:31, April 30, 2011 (UTC)

Yo
I'm bored to death! My fav fanfic hasn't updated yet =.= And I'm outta ideas for Shitoki... any to gimme? LOL. Anyway, how can I "join" the Soul Society Arc you and Kenji are workin on? 暗い夜 DarkNight (Talk To Me!)  03:24, April 30, 2011 (UTC)

New Char check out
Hey wanna do a RP with my New Char... Fumetsu Shihoin. Check him out real quick

RE:Howdy
Thank you for liking my characters! I appreciate it very much. Yeah, I wanted to use good images as well as add a bit of their personalities and abilities into the mix while making them my own. Along with that, I try to give them an appopriate role as well such as for Shuten Tamane. He is essentially Sephiroth and is an antagonist. Hayate Tsukushima is Vincent Valentine and because of the experiment done to him in FF7, I have done the same to him, lol. And I do hope that I can integrate Kei Yume into the Gravity Force's storyline. =] And your welcome. I try to help out as much as I can. And Kenji always raves about you to me and I would love to RP with you sometime. Just ring a bell. Haha. Cheers! (/)___(\) [/\An Otaku of Bleach Fanon/\]

I'm glad that I made you jump in excitement. Haha. There will be a lot of obvious references to their Final Fantasy counterparts. Nah, I want his transformations be part of his Bankai, with Chaos being the final form. As for RPing, I'm not quite sure what to do. But I would love to work with you. Since, in a ways, I am now part of the Gravity Force. ;] (/)___(\) [/\An Otaku of Bleach Fanon/\]

We can work on the RP right now! But what are we going to do it on? Lol. Mmmm. Final Fantasy. Love them FF Girls. xD Wakka sure was lucky. But my favorite is Tifa. For various reasons. xP (/)___(\) [/\An Otaku of Bleach Fanon/\]

LOL. Cause Tifa is my type and she is the bomb. Sexy and Dangerous all in one. Plus personality. I like Aerith when shes not in that stocky dress thingy. I liked it when she was in Crisis Core Clothing. xD Rikku was lovely but I didn't really like Paine. haha. Another is Vanille. x] I don't really have a lot of characters at the moment. I'll probably be going with Kei or Hayate. Im sure once I do some Gravity Force work, there will be a lot of more to offer. (/)___(\) [/\An Otaku of Bleach Fanon/\]

Sorry. Due to the new changes done by wikia, I have never figured out how to reverse the changes done in a talk page. However, I believe an admin can fix what happened since they have capability to do so. Aw. Haha. I can't read you're mind but if you prefer him, I'm alrite with that decision. Haha. I already created the Rikku character. Go check her out. Ui Kōmoto. I hope we can accomplish some stuff with her. Right? Hmm. Sounds good actually. Although, would this be considered canon for my character or not? I can't really tell. Lol.

I don't know why you took out my previous comments but I'll still continue. For Ui, we need pictures; itll give me a visual aide as well as allow me to describe the abilities in detail. However, this will be a long shot; we might be forced to look for other sources. Lol. Kei = Badass Captain. (In theory) Cheers!

Haha its okay. I was a bit taken back. Wondering if I said something wrong. Kei shall be my figure head. Anyways. Pictures showing her Zanpakuto's abilities and whatever. Im guessing were going to have her two daggers be her Shikai or something. lol.

Nah its cool bro. Ohhh, you have a lady? Interesting. Haha. You go college boy. Lol. Im not sure for her abilities. Probably a jack of all trades? Or something along those lines. I don't know but I think of yellow when I look at Rikku. Or we can go with the ability to use multiple dress spheres fitting in each different situation. Aww. How nice Raze. Is it fine if I can take the position? I'll feel bad if I was a bother since it was someone elses.

Well, thats good. Lol. Her unique spiritual signature? You'll be writing that part. Haha. Hmmm, we have to think some more about her abilities. I was playing with the idea that we have her as Vice Captain for Kei. What do you think? Oooo. The 3rd Captain meets Jikan. Haha.

Alrite good. Im just imagining something yellow for her for some reason. Its so aggravating. Lol. There is no Vice-Captain to my current knowledge and Im imagining Rikku screwing around so much in the Division. Haha. Like this.

You can write her interactions since I feel like. You're better suited for it. Haha. Indeed. I feel the same with Jikan and Kei. I honestly don't know whats going to come out of this.

Sorry about that. Had school. So. For future references, I'll be telling you the time I wont be on for the most part. Monday-Friday: 7am-430pm (School/California Time]. Other than that, I try to be on as much as possible. Haha. And nice work on her so far. Ill be adding a part that she wears the basic uniform over her clothes and can get rid of it in a snap of her finger or something. Lol. Her abilities are pending. Thats for sure. And yes. I would like to start the RP now.

Yes. We shall make her awesome fast. Haha. She has the feeling of Mashiro to me. For some reason. And I guess I can do that. I just need to know what to title it.

Personality wise. haha. But yes. She will be indeed better. Especially since she'll have better character development.

Lol. I know. You should go on Ui's talk page and reply.

Waiting for your next post. And guess what? Ui has a cousin now. And its a lovely person we all love. :D Cheers!

Heyup.
U probaly don't want to from me but what the hey. Just saying hi and stuff, 'cause I haven't said hi in a long time. Apart from that just was thinking that I had been doing some RPs with quite a few people and they have kinda forgotten or not updated them so I am reminding them. We had one called "Meeting on an ill wind" so yeah. Sorry to be a bother and stuff and hope evrythings ok. and srtuff, so yeah. See ya, I am the lightning, The rain transformed 19:44, April 30, 2011 (UTC)

Defense Devil?
Is that where Kucabara-dono comes from?--Hohenheim   Talk to Me ◕ ‿‿ ◕  18:14, May 1, 2011 (UTC)

Bro
two things. 1: wanna talk on chatango? and 2: it's ur post on The_Fruits_Of_Labor:Ryu_Vs_Rozeluxe Grizzaka 20:33, May 1, 2011 (UTC)

so what? your never coming back on chatango? :( Grizzaka 20:39, May 1, 2011 (UTC)

k then.. well if ur gonna post then I'll be waiting. Grizzaka 20:43, May 1, 2011 (UTC)

Quit
Inshort I have quit the Gravity Force. I have removed my name from the list and any articles I have made from the use lists. When the next Wednesday the 11 of May comes will decide if I rejoin. The reason I quit is. An offering must be made in exchange for an equivalent miracle. Lets just say I made my offering and I am waiting for the miracle.:: The Twilight of Your Despair 02:28, May 3, 2011 (UTC)

This is a process of death and rebirth of sorts. Besides a certain event had made creating in the Gf diffcult.: The Twilight of Your Despair 02:41, May 3, 2011 (UTC)

When I joined the GF. It was right before Sei challenge and to be fair I didn't take place. I made a tournament and created a godlike prize and I don't even take part. I find new members that could give to the Gf. I don't make any main groups Heroes or Villian like the ones Void and Njalm2 made and at most make them former ones. I do all this to avoid the self-righteous and corruptation that plaque more than a third of the members not you or Kenji of course. However I am too tired from fighting to be like them and I hate feeling like that if I always do whatever everyone elses wants than I am a loser. So to stay my unbias and neutral self than I made discard all this negative feelings. For if I become like them than I fear what I will create. On my bday next wednesday if this issues are gone than I will rejoin.: The Twilight of Your Despair 02:55, May 3, 2011 (UTC)

Due to what is on my groups talk page I will not be returning. After the Tournament of with Kenji and Njalm2 I will nolonger interact with the GF. As well I said in the last message others currupting the GF I ment me for I didn't want others to think I am self-absorbed. And you can the yours that. Finally in real life I am a normal athletic italian/french male with a good future in college. Online I take on a more calmer persona. Farewell Raze maybe i'll see you around.: The Twilight of Your Despair 01:06, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

Hello Raze.: The Twilight of Your Despair 02:07, May 11, 2011 (UTC)

Ok
Not again Somethings wrong with your talkpage. And 60% change I'll rejoin but just I so tired of always pretending like everything is fine when it isn't.: The Twilight of Your Despair 03:37, May 3, 2011 (UTC)

This is all I could fix sorry. but after I edited it looked like that.: The Twilight of Your Despair 03:55, May 3, 2011 (UTC)

Raz
I would like you to look at this. Vision_of_Memories Grizzaka 03:47, May 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re: Favor
I don't see whats wrong-- Hohenheim Talk to Me ◕ ‿‿ ◕ 10:34, May 3, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry for the late reply Raze, but I had a look and I can't find anything wrong with it from my end, sorry couldn't be much help. Also while I am here I wanted to ask if you are interested in an Rp, since we've never had the chance to actually talk, I am not even sure you know about me, but i've been in BFF for a while now, although I am more known over at Naruto Fanon, anyways if you are interested let me know........-- Feel the Rage  (Talk)  08:06, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

Well thats good to hear, and sure we can do the RP now, unless you are not too busy. I'll be using my new character Saigo Murakami, and you may choose whom ever you like. So what kind of RP you are interest I leave that up to you since I am up for anything, anyways let me know about the deatils......-- Feel the Rage  (Talk)  15:15, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

All right then I'll start it up, and I like your first idea where our characters have a spar that gets interupeted by a villian, but the problem is i don't have that great of a villian in my gallery of characters, if you have one then we can use him as the main antagonist, but i like your first idea.......-- Feel the Rage  (Talk)  15:31, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

Oh by the way I wanted to ask where did you get the cool pics for Akira and Van's Rin'ne transformation, if its not too much trouble...-- Feel the Rage  (Talk)  15:33, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

Okay here are two choices one we can fight against Zangetsu or two we can fight against Sosuke Aizen (Shadow Rage), he would prove more than a match for both of us, its your call, today i am feeling a bit tired but definatly tomorrow I'll get the RP started, so let me know.......-- Feel the Rage  (Talk)  16:38, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

Wow 10 RP's at once, that is amazing, i don't know how you do it, but anyways all right then we will fight Aizen, and let me know as soon as your RP list has lessened, I don't want to add extra burden to you, I am already doing 4 Rp's with a fifth story line coming soon, and even that is a lot for me, as well as i just once again changed my characters powers and abilities, by removing hollowfication and giving him a Bakkoto, so anyways keep in touch mate........-- Feel the Rage  (Talk)  22:26, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

I've been following Rozeluxe for a while now and i have to say i find him very interesting, and i love his zanpakuto, as you don't see an ability that involves puppetry, thats mostly naruto, but he is overall a good solid character, i also had a desire to fight him, since he could easily overwhealm his opponents, with his sheer number of puppets. Anyways if you could have a look at Murakami and tell me what you think of him so far that will be greatly appriciated......-- Feel the Rage  (Talk)  22:57, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

Well actually I turned Hiruko into a puppet myself in Naruto Fanon Wikia, a funny coincidence, great minds do think alike….Lol. Yeah I was pretty proud of what I came up with, but in the end I thought that Yamabushi, as it was originally called, didn’t have the potential to evolve, it just felt like a Fullbring, and I needed a Zanpakuto that could evolve along with the user’s experience. I thought of my current Zanpakuto after seeing now one in the site had a pure darkness type Zanpakuto, it was either paired up with another element, so I thought why not make one. Anyways thanks for your honesty and review and once you are done with Rozeluxe, let have a match.......-- Feel the Rage  (Talk)  15:54, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah of course you can use him as a basis, here is the link.... Shiki’s House of Puppets. Wow really there was someone who made a Zanpakuto like that if you happen to remeber the name of the artilce or give a link that would be great, I wanna see what people wrote aboutit. Yeah the irony...LOL....-- Feel the Rage  (Talk)  17:24, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah sure definitely I'll give your puppet a review, just send me the link once it is done. Oh i see, well no problem then. Yeah i saw Hattori and also had a little chat with Jet, can't wait to see what he comes up with, actually once he is done I might challenge him to a fight against our two zanpakuto's, that should be interesting.....-- Feel the Rage  (Talk)  17:43, May 7, 2011 (UTC)

No problem mate, happy to have helped, and Arasoi is looking good, should prove a good enough challenge. As for the RP sure I don't mind we can get started anytime you are on, just let me know the details like how you want to do the RP or location, and stuff like that......-- Feel the Rage  (Talk)  11:26, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

No problem mate, just working things out for Raze and let me know, I might use Tenmei to fight him, and thanks, Yeah I have a few Ideas for him in mind, and as you can see from the name of the Zanpakuto, he goona have fire type, to match with his personality and looks.......-- Feel the Rage  (Talk)  16:25, May 12, 2011 (UTC)

Don't worry once we are both done, we will have an epic RP....-- Feel the Rage  (Talk)  16:34, May 12, 2011 (UTC)

Howdy Dude
I could've sworn I had already replied to you >_< Guess the tables are reversed this time, eh? How you been anyway, dude? My teachers are a royal pain in the ass, though they suck at giving anyone a supposed bullecking. I pissed off early yesterday and got a phone call asking why I was at home, being told "I'll speak to you tomorrow." Her grand speech was anything but. It consisted of "I expect more of a 6th former." I kid you not lol. I near pissed myself laughing at her, which she didn't like much, in hindsight :P Anywho, I'll be making Kitsui into a Xiāochú, but his abilities won't change. Only where they're located. He'll think of them as Hollow abilities (he'll think his Āoshǎn is a Cero), and they'll be called such in the RP when they're used, just so there's no confusion lol. Oh yeah, Seiza's looking good dude! Literally lol. But seriously, nice job :P Kenji-Taichō (Talk)  17:32, May 5, 2011 (UTC)


 * Many thanks, dude. Damn, I need to shot my history teacher and year head before I snap with them. I got yet another bullecking (I'm making a habit of this) for telling one of the younger kids to punch a bully in the balls. Now, what may I ask, is wrong with that? Its the only way to deal with 'em. But I'm glad you know just how much my school sucks lol. Give me until next wednesday, and I'll be on study leave *cough* not much studying done *cough* with only my exams to go into :P I saw the character your talking about, though. There was an issue with the clothing, or lack of, If I remember right? I think she looks just fine, in my honest opinion, but that's just me :) lol. I was hoping to make him a Xiāochú from the start, to be honest, 'cause Sei said himself it hasn't been used in a while. Seems a shame to me that a race like thats falling into disuse. Ah well, I'll get to the posts soon dude, 'cause right now, I'm working on punching out a review for Idzumo for good ol' Kou, and I'm actually in the mood to review, for once. Miracles never cease around me lol :P Kenji-Taichō (Talk)  16:51, May 6, 2011 (UTC)


 * P.S. I made my post pal. Sorry about all the delays, though. Anyway, I introduced Saikō Onkei as well so it makes more sense continuity wise that he plays the big bro role in the team, and since he's supposed to replace Yoshiaki. Btw, we haven't heard the last of Yoshiaki quite yet... Kenji-Taichō (Talk)  18:29, May 6, 2011 (UTC)

Right, I was flicking through some of the missions posted on the Jūsanseiza's talk page. I reckon Toru and Suitai should invade Hell (numbered 3 on the list) and stir up some trouble. Its been a while since we've done an RP where we're working together instead of knocking the stuffing outta each other. It says we'd need three max, but I reckon we could do it with only two :P We could make a pretty good stab at it if we involved Void and two or three of his Diabolus. What ya reckon? Kenji-Taichō (Talk)  14:50, May 8, 2011 (UTC)


 * My bad :P I was rushed myself, and didn't really get a chance to read over the attack fully. Sorry about that. Anywho, I know all about being swamped. These last few days, I've been running around like a blue assed fly without a head. Oh yeah, go watch that new Thor film, if you get the chance. It's pretty awesome. Me and two of the lads went to the cinema to see it yesterday, and it was well worth it. But slow down, dude! We can either get Void involved and use Dorothy's army, or create two or three canon-fodder Diablous ourselves, who'll die during the RP. Or we could do both. Kenji-Taichō (Talk)  15:28, May 8, 2011 (UTC)


 * Oh, I thought ya meant start it up lol. I'm the one who needs to whoa then. The entire point of the mission is seeing who would show up to defend Hama Town, right? It'd just be downright bad manners on my part If I wasn't there to give Van a hand, so I reckon Kenji can make an appearance :P Those two together, considering they know each others techniques inside and out, are basically a two-man army regardless. Meh, I thought it would be rubbish, to be honest. But they actually done it justice, surprisingly. I'd watch it again If I wasn't saving cash for the Hangover Part II myself. Saw the trailer in the cinema yesterday, and there's a monkey! I love monkeys! I say we kill a few of 'em to make 'em even more angry. They might forgive a simple attack with a few injuries, but you start killing their race off, a few of the hotheads will do exactly what we want 'em to do :P Kenji-Taichō (Talk)  15:54, May 8, 2011 (UTC)


 * Its been a while since Ken and Van actually fought beside each other, so it should give even Royal Guardsmen pause :P Its your turn on the three RP's we've got going lol. Oh yeah, how about we finish To The 4th Division now on a cliffhanger of sorts and begin the actual invasion of Soul Society with Haruki, Kentaro and Co. We could re-visit it later when the investigation has advanced a little while Kentaro and them are making their own way in. Raiden's a member of the Collective Vices as well, so he'll need to be dealt with. At the end of this arc, how about having Izaya as the new lieutenant of the 11th Division? Hows that all sound? Kenji-Taichō (Talk)  08:57, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

Yo man
Been meaning to ask.... how long do u think it would take to finish what u needed to do so we could do an RP? I am not begging so don't start to talk down on me please I've already had alot of disapointments this day and i don't need my bro calling me names right now. Grizzaka 02:24, May 6, 2011 (UTC)

btw i was wondering something else, this immortal children of the goddess is twilight's idea or your's? Grizzaka 02:26, May 6, 2011 (UTC)

well look whos on. :) Grizzaka 03:35, May 7, 2011 (UTC)

I apologize for the extremely long wait and will completely understand if you choose not to, but I would still like very much to do an RP with you. Only if you allow it thought also I was wondering if you could use Ruiko Crozzeria and a few of your other characters. I was thinking of a meeting between my espada and a few enemies of the espada. So watcha think. Twonjr2 01:43, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

Hey.
Yeah I should be on more, just slipped up there, soory. Anyway just saying hi,. I am the lightning, The rain transformed 20:52, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

I apologize
Sorry bout the heading. I really don't care my char Nou is and espada, but if you would want them to fight thats okay with me Twonjr2 21:50, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

What I was thinking is that both of our espada would meet, and afterwards go a couple of rounds with some shinigami characters. Twonjr2 22:00, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yea perfect. I knew your character was a vizard, but is she aligned with the espada 'cause on the espada page she is number zero strongest).

Would you like to have the honors or should I start?? Twonjr2 22:12, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

Gotcha Twonjr2 22:20, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

Hey I know this is sudden but can one of my char come into the Rp and fight the espada to. Seikatsu Okuri. Its okay if you say no he is just a human after all. Twonjr2 23:31, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

Great Idea Twonjr2 23:41, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

Dude
u think Ray can handle van or Roxzena Raze? Grizzaka 01:06, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

No reason, although Ray's powers don't always rely on energy blasts though. Grizzaka 01:10, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

Well only two parts manipulate the enviorment, there is one that is able to bypass Van's ability without trying. Grizzaka 01:17, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

Haha, to be honest i've been wanting this alot but i just hope it goes on fair game. Grizzaka 01:26, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

I'm ready when you are. Grizzaka 01:29, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

May the best warrior win. Fight_of_The_Legedary_Warriors Grizzaka 01:38, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

haha, you probably will bro. Grizzaka 01:41, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

g2g for today talk to you tommorrow i hope. Grizzaka 02:25, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

I apologize for this but my oldest account,Twonjr2 is now longer usable. Instead of going into detail why it was my stupid computers fault and I would wish to be contacted at Twonjr3 from now on please and thank you. Twonjr3 20:26, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

Dude
We're going to have to stop the RP because as of right now Ray has become unusable thanks to my stupid mistakes. Grizzaka 01:15, May 11, 2011 (UTC)

Accepting an RP request from this guy The_Tides_of_Battle:_A_Decisive_Blow Ray's done and there's nothing i can do..... Oh man this sucks... Grizzaka 01:25, May 11, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry about the top man, it won't matter whatever the guy did I'm not following along with it so let's continue the RP. Grizzaka 01:47, May 11, 2011 (UTC)

Then i guess it doesn't and no force on this place will ever make me accept it. All the guy did was give Ray some scar's nothing more. Let's continue the RP. Grizzaka 01:52, May 11, 2011 (UTC)

Raz ur post, g2g for today nite. Grizzaka 02:27, May 11, 2011 (UTC)

sorry if this RP is becoming a let down, fire keeps telling me I don't play fair on RP fighting so i guess i have to change my style. Grizzaka (Talk)  00:59, May 12, 2011 (UTC)

Dude Ray has a powerful control over his mask and can easily make it without trying so come on that's fair and fine. <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">Grizzaka <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">(Talk)  01:17, May 12, 2011 (UTC)

..fine i get it. <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">Grizzaka <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">(Talk)  01:27, May 12, 2011 (UTC)

you know what? fine with me if Ray gets hurt but there is no way I will give up to win this fight Raz not until i beat the best. <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">Grizzaka <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">(Talk)  01:45, May 12, 2011 (UTC)

I won't man. <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">Grizzaka <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">(Talk)  01:52, May 12, 2011 (UTC)

Seikatsu
Hey you wanna do another RP including Seikatsu? --- <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">Twon Junior <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">(the Third)  23:01, May 12, 2011 (UTC)

Oh and lets not forget Rozeluxe. --- <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">Twon Junior <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">(the Third)  23:08, May 12, 2011 (UTC)

Well Seikatsu and Rozeluxe can have a formal meeting with each other before attempting to take on the espada again. You know they can catch up ,talk about each others past, train abit oh and Seikatsu has a new friend Chibusa who Rozeluxe can meet aswell. --- <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">Twon Junior <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">(the Third)  23:11, May 12, 2011 (UTC)

Fine with me Introduce anyone you wanna! You can start the RP though lol --- <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">Twon Junior <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">(the Third)  23:20, May 12, 2011 (UTC)

Man your good at RPs. Its your turn friend. --- <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">Twon Junior <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">(the Third)  23:59, May 12, 2011 (UTC)

Check out Seikatsu Okuri. I went through a few quickl RPs and hours of thinking to make him stronger. --- <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">Twon Junior <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">(the Third)  00:01, May 13, 2011 (UTC)

Sup Raze --- <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">Twon Junior <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">(the Third)  21:49, May 13, 2011 (UTC)

I see. Looks like you've been pretty busy lately huh pal. --- <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">Twon Junior <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">(the Third)  21:58, May 13, 2011 (UTC)

Seriously. Hate to see a busy day lol. --- <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">Twon Junior <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">(the Third)  22:11, May 13, 2011 (UTC)

Wow. No wonder ur so good at it pal :) --- <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">Twon Junior <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">(the Third)  22:28, May 13, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks. You the second person to compliment my writing, the first being Grizz. --- <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">Twon Junior <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">(the Third)  01:24, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

thanks pal. --- <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">Twon Junior <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">(the Third)  02:28, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

ur post btw talk to ya tomr pal. --- <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">Twon Junior <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">(the Third)  02:36, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

Hey pal can we create and use characters that are in the real Bleach like how you did with Kaien Shiba and Koga Kuchiki. --- <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">Twon Junior <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">(the Third)  17:06, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

I like it. If I may say I think that Haruki can be more clear as it is a illusion type zanpaktou not a ice zanpaktou and that Shirai's zanpaktou have some sort of relation to Haruki as they are both apart of Haruki's split personality. To tell the truth I like Haruki overall as a character. --- <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">Twon Junior <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">(the Third)  17:23, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

Ur post pal. --- <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">Twon Junior <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">(the Third)  19:25, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

Hey you know you don't have to be so shy like that when talking to me. I suck at RPing and pretty much everything else at this site :), trust me I will accept any kind of helpful suggestion at all K and thanks. --- <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">Twon Junior <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">(the Third)  19:49, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

K and btw I never intended to get on your bad side :) pal. --- <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">Twon Junior <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">(the Third)  19:59, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

Hey pal do you have any Arrancar characters? --- <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">Twon Junior <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">(the Third)  20:06, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

Haha they all espada Kool. --- <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">Twon Junior <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">(the Third)  20:11, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

Would you mind doing like a war. Zeliel his fraccion, Nou, and Ruiko against Rozeluxe, My Fullbrings and Kekyuu. Can you at least think bout' it K pal. --- <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">Twon Junior <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">(the Third)  20:21, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

Your go!
As it says above Raze-kun! hehehe ^_^ how've you been anyway? Lone Black Garuga 01:01, May 13, 2011 (UTC)

Good to hear ur doing well.. I guess I too am doing fine ^_^ anyhow...its ur turn! Lone Black Garuga 04:48, May 13, 2011 (UTC)

Then back at ya! ^_^ Lone Black Garuga 06:01, May 13, 2011 (UTC)

Nice start for the new chapter raze-kun!! ^_^ just tell me when to post Lone Black Garuga 06:28, May 13, 2011 (UTC)

HAY! Ur go Raze-kun! soo ur in vacation? Lone Black Garuga 06:41, May 13, 2011 (UTC)

hmm mostly becaauuuuse..... Im in vacation too... ur go Raze... I sense a triangle-shape-something Lone Black Garuga 06:59, May 13, 2011 (UTC)

RE:Howdy
Hey Raze! I apologize for not posting for a bit. It was my mistake. >< Anyways, you're review for Raze. I will generally give you my impression of him (I will be doing an indepth one later lol). To simply say it, I enjoyed reading about him and I can fully imagine him in a combat situation. Overall, he is very well written albeit the entire thing is a bit short however, I have faith in you that you will make it longer in no time. :3 Anyways, his abilities are amazing and I am looking forward to his Bankai if he were to have one in the future. Later on, I'll give a much better review. lol. Cheers!
 * We should totally go with the Alchemy Zanpakutō for Ui and then we go work on it from there. =] The review should be coming this weekend. I assure you.
 * You take out the thumb option when you add the image. Otherwise you would have something that wouldnt be liked to look at. Lol. I'll give that character and Raze a full review later this weekend. Hopefully late at night or around there. Also. Get to work on Ui's Zanpakuto! LOL. Cheers! :D
 * You only remove the thumb option when its on the main image. From there you would pick the size. Normally, it would be 250px-350px. The sizes would grant it a better appearance. Get where I'm getting at? lol. Alrite. Can't wait! :] And yeah I know. >< lol.

Hello
I know you want to punch me in the face for the drama it caused and I won't get into a long explaination about why. However as some of my articles are used by several members like Kenji, Njalm2, Void etc. And it isn't right for me to tell them to re edit their articles. So may I rejoin? If not its fine. And if you allow it than I won't act like I did last week.: The Twilight of Your Despair 01:39, May 13, 2011 (UTC)

Very well.: The Twilight of Your Despair 01:53, May 13, 2011 (UTC)

Yo, Raze
I'm the creator of Nika, PersonaSuperiorDeus. ...Didn't you use Accel's powers as a base for Akira Cagali? Anyway, I'll work on her a bit now. Make her less broken. ...Sorry about that, I got off to a bad start. Nice to meet you! PersonaSuperiorDeus 06:21, May 13, 2011 (UTC)

Anyway, I'm taking Illuminate Void's advice, and changing her abilties. And Gai defeats Nika the same way Kihara defeats Accel the first time (sucker punches). I looked into a lot of characters before I joined, and I'm new to Bleach, but I'm not new to writing. Yours are great. So, after a little more revision, I think that Nika won't be overpowered. See you 'round. PersonaSuperiorDeus 06:38, May 13, 2011 (UTC)

...Sorry about this if I'm bothering you. I was wondering if I needed to revise some more on Nika. PersonaSuperiorDeus 06:45, May 13, 2011 (UTC)

Sounds like a plan! I might start my storyline first, though. PersonaSuperiorDeus 06:47, May 13, 2011 (UTC)

Well, Nika likes playing the fool, and she delights in seeing the looks on her opponents' faces when she uses her release. I'll work on her some more. Other than that, what do you think of Gai? I might change the ability so that he could copy Shikai attacks for his Bankai or something (except Yamamoto, Tousen, Gin, and Aizen). Should I give him a Hollow mask? I don't know about that. Anyway, Raze (can I call you that, sorry if that was rude before if not) who do you have to see to make your character a Shinkuumyou? Seireitou probably has too much stuff to do to answer me. PersonaSuperiorDeus 06:59, May 13, 2011 (UTC)

Anyway, if you want to read it, here's the first chapter. Aside from this chapter and the next, the canon characters don't make very much appearances, unless its for a joke or something. Enjoy! PersonaSuperiorDeus 10:32, May 13, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for the review, Raze! I changed all you suggested on him. Though I wanted something to Getsuga, so I'm modifying it to make a bit more original. PersonaSuperiorDeus 00:42, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, I'll give you my opinion on Kansen Zoshoku. It's based on Caprico's Human Subordination Magic from Fairy Tail, am I right? Anyway, it's good. It all depends on who he summons (I know, mainly Kaien, but there could be more), otherwise it's balanced. Kankin, it's partly based on Kain Hikaru's Ushi no Koku Mairi from the same series, right? It's also good, as is Kankin Dami. Though, just like the Shikai's special ability, it all depends on who Kankin Dami takes the form of. Though it's just my opinion, but 10/10! It's great! PersonaSuperiorDeus 01:20, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

OMG Hiro Mashima is a plagarist! ...Sorry, had to say it. I wasn't thinking of the Bankai when I wrote that review, though you could make it that he never achieves Bankai, and defeats his toughest opponents using only Shikai as a testament to his skill. ...Though I'm sure you want him to have Bankai, right? Maybe have that as his Bankai or something, I'm not sure. I could help you think of something if you want. PersonaSuperiorDeus 02:22, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

Well, Kubo is known to be a troll...PersonaSuperiorDeus 02:38, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

I hate being a bother, but I was wondering, what do you think of this guy? Should I completely change him around? PersonaSuperiorDeus 00:07, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

...Ultimo's good, though Chapter 21 put me off. Anyway, Haru is of a different race than other Shinigami, though I don't know what yet. For Boyaen, I wanted to have it simple, yet powerful. As for Haruki's Shikai, it's great. Did you use Haku's Ice Mirrors (Sorry, I can't remember the proper name) from Naruto as a base? Though the correct word and kanji for ice is Kōri (氷). Maybe you could add more ice manipulation techniques to his Shikai as well? All in all, 10/10. And what do you think of this guy? I revised him a bit. PersonaSuperiorDeus 00:39, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

...I do get the feeling that I've gotten myself into a corner: Gai controls black and white feathers, and can manipulate them in any way he sees fit. Gunha can manipulate time and space and distort it to his will. Who do you think will win? ...Anyway, if your friend speaks Japanese, then he's right. I only used Google Translate and this. I'm sure that we could RP soon enough if you want, after I finish Chapter 6 of my story. PersonaSuperiorDeus 01:07, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

I was wondering what you think of Gai's Bankai, if you have the time. Is it any good? PersonaSuperiorDeus 02:36, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Gunha's kinda like "Aizen on steroids", but I can see that happening, since Gunha's pretty full of himself. I need to stop relying on Google Translate... Anyway, I look foward to RPing with you if you can. I've never seen Hitman Reborn, but I'll revise it immediately. Is it worth watching/reading? I essentially went with "incredibly flashy" for the last attack. I think I adapted it from a really old anime, I think it was a sports anime or something. After the "attack scream" part, I changed it all around, incorperating the basic elements of the attack into the revised version. Even if it was from a videogame, it'd be some sort of pointlessly-long fighting animation. I loathe those. PersonaSuperiorDeus 04:43, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Vacation
Yep... But mine's a lil bumpy with all the works hehehe ur go Lone Black Garuga 23:25, May 13, 2011 (UTC)

Tnx Raze-kun! ^-^ and about the zanpakuto... Its totally up to you ^_^ ur go Lone Black Garuga 01:08, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

uhmm I think his current zanpakuto is perfectly fine... but uhmm a zanpakuto that could develop is good too... how about using his current zanpakuto and unlock its power bit by bit? Then scare the hell out of his opponents lol hehehe ^_^ just my opinion tho Lone Black Garuga 02:10, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

^_^ glad to help (did i really?) 02:19, May 14, 2011 (UTC)Lone Black Garuga

^_^ well...Its ur go now.... If u need anymore help... I'll be here.. Ill try my best hehehe Lone Black Garuga 02:47, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

Well
Im not sure how to expand on it.--Fenix-Taichō (救済者) 02:21, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

Practice
I need practice rping for a rp I am doing with Sei later. Want to rp against MAsanori Kawahiru? Also, I have Njalm2, Void, Griz, Lone Black Garuga, and possibly -Hohenheim support to rejoin so far.: The Twilight of Your Despair 20:01, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

I have Twonjr3 support as well. That make 6: The Twilight of Your Despair 18:36, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

yo
ur post <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">Grizzaka <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">(Talk)  20:22, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

as far as anyone is concerend ur time-space is still a zanpakuto move so i am not affected by it and sorry bout the auto hit cousin put it on for me without me knowing. <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">Grizzaka <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">(Talk)  21:07, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

ur post bro. <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">Grizzaka <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">(Talk)  21:14, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

ur turn bro, sorry if i seem like a big baby i just get tired of not once having a fair fight on fair grounds sure call me a baby or whatever but I'm old school so sue me. <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">Grizzaka <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">(Talk)  00:16, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

hold on forget what i said, open foot insert mouth. Let me fix this problem. <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">Grizzaka <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">(Talk)  00:30, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

alright there we are and btw it's not like i tried but man most people will tell me that I cannot make him stronger cuz I don't want to be like Sei. <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">Grizzaka <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">(Talk)  00:37, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Let me ask you: do you really think Ray can even become more powerful even with two powers under his belt. <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">Grizzaka <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">(Talk)  00:44, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

I can't get stronger all by myself, if he could would you help me gain that power? <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">Grizzaka <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">(Talk)  00:49, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

...Man i mean i didn't mean to base it so much on the lion theme i just got one idea and rolled with it man I didn't have anything else i mean all the powers were my first and it's really hard to give that up man...... to me man Ray is more than just some computer character man he's like my best friend and it's just hard for me to get rid of all the work. I know man that this is fake and that it won't matter but unlike you man who has good friends both off and online and who has a girlfriend I don't got anything cept a few friends who i've known since like 6th grade.

It's hard and I guess i do need therpy like most people tell me, but just once i wanted to have something that didn't leave after getting to know me. I'm sorry man If you feel like this is a pity party but newflash It's my feelings. If you can try to find another way I'd be so stocked if not then thx for trying.

Hahahaha, man that's the problem. Should i try to do what I want it'll go over board, people will start to complain, Then I'm banned permenantly. Come on man Help a brother out man..... Hahaha dude i wish i would have been here in my 8th grade year. <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">Grizzaka <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">(Talk)  00:59, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Okay man look I know you've grown up and all but please don't tell me u lost ur humanity man because I swear man you gotta learn that emotions are the only things that make u human, and if you forgotten what emotions are then you've really got to remember. Second man I'm not like all the people of GF i mean I cannot create these powerful abilities that people will love like u guys i mean dude all i can do is come up with the moves that i can. I don't have the inspration like you, Kenji, or Hit has. Besides it's not like i didn't try so many ways to change his Zanpakuto but that's all i could come up with. Look man I am trying so hard to take the advice I really am but man you just don't have a clue how hard is it to find something that will get attention. Something that can make people say "Oh man he must be good at what he does."

I am truly listening Raz i really am but Doing is a whole different thing that i have the most dificulty with man. It's especially if you have never been taught how to let go of something. Man no matter how you see me, I have always seen you as the best creator in my life time and no matter how many times i try to make my own I will always be jeleous of you and mad at myself for not being good. <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">Grizzaka <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">(Talk)  01:35, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Hahaha, man i know we may have our difference's and that we lived our lives completly different i wish we could have been friends in real life. Maybe i would have turned differenty and be a better person for it, you know man I always wanted to say that i really wished we would be best friends. Your really are a better person than i am..... Maybe i should have asked you to help me out the whole time i was here...... But can't change the past.

I just want you to know that I considered you my mentor and my best friend. <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">Grizzaka <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">(Talk)  01:57, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Hahaha, u reallly are something. I really like your advice bro and heck man maybe u are right about all the other stuff. I do not know what to do at this moment, maybe i should just delete him and start from scratch, maybe i should stick with him and prove to everyone that He's the best the way he is or hell I could swallow my pride, delete him, and ask someone to help me with a character....... truth be told hahahahahahahahahahahaha

I have no answer and don't go negitive on me because I will smack you with a wet noodle -Takes out very big paddle- Truth be told Even if he is easy to counter it's alot more fun when i get to bring some flavor into the mix. Anyway let's get back to the RP so i can show you just how weak he is. :) btw ur fault for choosing psychitrist so learn to love it hahahahahahaha :] <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">Grizzaka <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">(Talk)  02:10, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

alright then I'll shut up now, talk to u soon i hope before i graduate high school next month... I hope. <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">Grizzaka <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">(Talk)  02:19, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

look at this and tell me what u think ofhim. <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">Grizzaka <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">(Talk)  18:48, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

U Wanna
Would you mind doing like a war. Zeliel his fraccion, Nou, and Ruiko against Rozeluxe, My Fullbrings and Kekyuu. Can you at least think bout' it K pal. --- <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">Twon Junior <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">(the Third)  20:46, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

K tell me when you wanna pal :) --- <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">Twon Junior <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">(the Third)  20:54, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

I'm patinent :) --- <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">Twon Junior <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">(the Third)  21:01, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

Heyy pal can one of my characters join the Jusanseiza? --- <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">Twon Junior <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">(the Third)  23:43, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

Or could he join the Collective Viecs since he isnt apart of the Royal Guard. btw his name is Kami Kemuri --- <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">Twon Junior <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">(the Third)  23:48, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks man, also ur post haha :) I'll add'em to the Collective Vices page pal. --- <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">Twon Junior <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">(the Third)  00:04, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not rushing you or forcing you or anything but I would like to take your advice. I want my character Kami Kemuri to accomplish bankai and like you said I should take my time. So could you help me or give me like hints if you don't want to do the RP. --- <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">Twon Junior <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">(the Third)  00:55, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Haha well actually I currently got two RP's going on with him included, btw he is pretty powerful lol. I didn't want to like overdo it with his powers and I know that a Zanpaktou reflects the weilders soul and as a soul develops and becomes stronger they Zanpaktou also grows. Thing is I don't want him personality to really change. But that Izuru Kira thing is a great idea like always i like it. Plus kira is actually a bleach character I like so it works out for everybody. --- <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">Twon Junior <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">(the Third)  01:31, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

I like Kira's Zanpaktou aswell love his fight with Avirama Redder. I think I will go with the second idea something like doubling the weight, you know something along those lines. I'll sleep on it, and hopefully come up with something. Thanks for the help pal. :) --- <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">Twon Junior <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">(the Third)  01:44, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Should we create a new RP for meeting Mr tatsuki and becoming a shinigami or you wanna continue off the first one. pal --- <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">Twon Junior <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">(the Third)  02:38, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

I have no idea what you mean lol but sure lets keep going and I'll just stop when you say so K pal. --- <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">Twon Junior <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">(the Third)  04:10, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

I would live to start the next RP. My top three are Gin, Kenpaichi and lastly Izuru Kira. It dosen't say that on my page just so you know thought. --- <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">Twon Junior <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">(the Third)  19:22, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

I know you're askin to help Grizz and me out. Ur good pal. Anyway I guess its gonna be Shuhei Hisagi, Komamura, Joshiro Ukitake, Rangiku Matsumoto and Hitugaya Toshiro K :) --- <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">Twon Junior <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">(the Third)  19:35, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

K pal and btw who startin the RP. --- <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">Twon Junior <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">(the Third)  19:55, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry bout that caught in the moment lol Jsoshi Ukitake pal. --- <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">Twon Junior <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">(the Third)  20:02, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

We bought to start the new RP pal. Should I start? --- <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">Twon Junior <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">(the Third)  20:15, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Yes I'll take Haineko.Besides I love Rangiku. pal --- <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">Twon Junior <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">(the Third)  20:20, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

K but I just started the RP pal. see ya there. --- <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">Twon Junior <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">(the Third)  20:26, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Im sorry but I felt I had to say something I'm getting tired of Njalm and Kou and other people intervening in whay me you and Grizz got goin on so can we just ignore them and do are on thing please pal. --- <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">Twon Junior <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">(the Third)  20:50, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

I know right nosey people lol :) --- <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">Twon Junior <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">(the Third)  20:56, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Is it my post pal. --- <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">Twon Junior <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">(the Third)  21:08, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

I just win ur go pal. --- <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">Twon Junior <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">(the Third)  22:04, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

ur go pal. --- <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">Twon Junior <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">(the Third)  22:47, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

I don't care I have no idea when Grizz is coming back on. You can skip my part until Seikatsu becomes a shinigmai, but sure we could do another RP if you wanna pal. --- <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">Twon Junior <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">(the Third)  23:52, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

.....
Oh man...... fine just..... get it over with quickly....... <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">Grizzaka <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">(Talk)  19:04, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

don't have any, just liked all characters and story line that's it. <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">Grizzaka <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">(Talk)  19:10, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

...Fine Kenpachi, Ichigo, and Yoruichi there okay?. <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">Grizzaka <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">(Talk)  19:15, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

...No thank you and sorry those are the only ones i like besides Yourichi of course so sorry.. <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">Grizzaka <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">(Talk)  19:31, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

... Ikkaku, Soi fon, Ukitake, Yourichi, and Kisuke.... as for That Grizz he died when school started and all his friends turned away from him. <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">Grizzaka <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">(Talk)  19:44, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

I don't have any idea for a Zanpakuto okay? I don't exactly have my own computer right now so a little hard to come up with any ideas.... <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">Grizzaka <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">(Talk)  19:50, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

...k <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">Grizzaka <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">(Talk)  19:55, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

.... k <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">Grizzaka <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">(Talk)  20:01, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

..can you make that former ability thing... please. <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">Grizzaka <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">(Talk)  20:19, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

look man i know i have this temperory zanpakuto but dude I would really like to keep the Lion theme for my permenant Zanpakuto. <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">Grizzaka <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">(Talk)  20:38, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

so where's the RP? <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">Grizzaka <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">(Talk)  20:38, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry, it won't happen again i promise. <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">Grizzaka <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">(Talk)  20:43, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

oh wonderful... alright then. <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">Grizzaka <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">(Talk)  21:41, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Ray Martinez' Zanpakuto
Right, I just talked to Grizzaka about the whole thing with the MAJOR changes to Ray - and it came to notice that you meant that the Lion aspect of his character had to go; I wonder why exactly that would be so, though I too admit that certain things of it has to go, most noteable that Lion form of his. Anyway I ask this question because of the fact that the lion aspect has become such a large part of Ray's article that removing it completely can essentially destroy the character, as well as Grizz' own liking to him.

I've spied on the User Talk between you and Grizz as that is really the only way I can get an in-depth understanding of what has transpired and which conclusions you've reached - I agree with the fact that Suzumebachi would fit the character well, but I don't think Suzumebachi is viable in roleplay as the opponent would likely never let himself be hit a second time. Not to mention that Zanpakuto copies can be really risky on this site.

My suggestion is: That you, me, Koukishi and Twonir, along with Grizz himself of course sit down and discuss this properly as while this is all undouptedly due to good will - I feel that we should work in unison so as to not "Domineer" Grizz towards a direction he may not be comfortable with, no? Njalm2 20:38, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, I'll be adressing my answers systematically here: Though before that I have to state something, which is, I do NOT dislike you, I DON'T disrespect you, and I DO appreciate your works. I state this, due to the fact that you portray a rather noticeable animosity towards me as opposed to other users. I imagine this to be partially due to the bad review I gave of Rozeluxe a while back, in which I was quite, quite harsh. I do hope we can set aside our differences and simply work together to help Grizz as that IS what he needs, and hopefully we can keep a civil tone hereafter as I deem you as one of the most mature members of the GF, and quite possibly one of its best roleplayers, and would really dislike to be on your bad side :P
 * 1) Alright, it appears that of the Lion concept I've been given incorrect information as Grizz conveyed it to me as if you had seemingly banished the idea entirely. Its relieving that this is untrue :)
 * 2) And while I admit I did intervene I did so with purely good intentions - though truth be told, it'd be good if we actually worked together here, as you and I have differing strengths and weaknesses, and by working together the end result would probably be better than what either of us could have managed on his own.
 * 3) The idea you do have is quite good actually, and if Suzumebachi is only a temporary Zanpakuto it'll work out for the better I'm sure, and the fact that you've tailored this little idea of yours to expand with the changes to Ray Martinez is really quite neat.
 * 4) And over to the copies - yes, I've seen every single one of the Ichigo copies on this site - and I don't dissaprove of that, if I did I would've been quite the hypocrite. Copying Zanpakuto IS risky however, and that I know precisely because I've read the talk pages of said copies, but you're right in that in this case it'll run quite smoothly.
 * 5) And finally about Koukishi, given how he attacked Grizz at his talk page I can easily see what you mean.

The very last note is that as you know Grizzaka more than I do, I know your results would be excellent, but as I too am a member of the GF, and concider myself to be on friendly terms with him - I too wish to help regardless of this.

Ahh.. seems like this was a mutual misunderstanding then - and that the "animosity" was in fact wariness. I want to clarify that I much enjoyed our first roleplay, the one between Rutilus and Haruki. I didn't actually end it because it was boring, I just didn't have any other word for it - I had at that time unknowingly contracted a fever and my mental capacity was greatly reduced, which induced a sense of tiredness, as I was doing several roleplays simultaneously as well. So I apologize for that time.

The second time, I was more upset over your character than you as a roleplayer; along with the fact that I had worked quite ineptly with Miyata for some time and was annoyed at his evident powerlessness in that given situation.

As for the Zanpakuto, the idea shines quite brightly, the idea of incorporating poison was something I'd never thought of myself as I'm largely incapable of thinking outside the box. I've very recently made a poison-type Zanpakuto which works similarily to that one - though mine uses Hemotoxin instead - this is the link - take a look at it and see if any of its aspects could fit into Ray's Zanpakuto.

Njalm2 21:42, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Grizzaka
Luxe, I offered my help to Grizzaka, and he accepted. Then, he went on Ray's talk page and stated that Ray was the best character on all of BFFW. When I confronted him about that (and he needed to be confronted), he said that the only reason he'd allow me to help was 'cause you would. So, if he hadn't had said that Ray was the best character ever, there wouldn't be a problem. About what Njalm said, I think that he's right. We need to have a sit down and discuss what will be the end result of all of this. Also, I'm on my phone, so I can only reply by adding a new section.


 * No, you can ask anyone else on BFFW; it was needed. If it was just my own opinion, I'd leave it alone, but when admins believe the same thing, there is a major problem.  Also, this isn't my standards, this is the standards of the admins.  If you have a problem with that, take it up with them.  Since I seem to have forgotten, when was I told to stay out of it by you, because I don't remember such an occurance.

On phone again
I failed to see your "I got it" comment. And you're right; I don't share the same mentality as others, which is why I don't feel that what I said was an attack. Lastly, I didn't contact an admin about this, but did you not see Pantheon's comment on Grizzaka's talk page? That proves that there is a problem.
 * Yes, I meant before all this started. I saw it after all this stuff happened, not before.  Also, you delete stuff off of your talk page?  'Cause that's what Pantheon was talking about.  Grizzaka also seems to only delete things off of his talk page when I'm the one saying something, which might also be why Pantheon posted on his talk page.

Just Saying This
You said the Talk Page is Your Talk Page and while that may be true, according to wikia it is defined as
 * "A talk page (also known as a discussion page) is a page which editors can use to discuss improvements to an article or other Wikipedia page."

It specifies "Editors" meaning not just your talk page, its for everyone to use. Your User Page is YOUR page, unlike the talk page-- Hohenheim Talk to Me ◕ ‿‿ ◕ 22:23, May 15, 2011 (UTC)


 * I know, I was just throwing it out there-- Hohenheim Talk to Me ◕ ‿‿ ◕ 22:33, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

^_^
Ok! Now we wait for Kenji..... hmm... And Im up with anything u want raze-kun Lone Black Garuga 23:25, May 15, 2011 (UTC)