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Diabolus Request
Thanks for asking, but obviously you already know that you dont have to ask. It was for the community anyways. But I appreciate the comments on the Diabolus, and looking good so far with Rutilus Maculosus Lupus. I cant wait to see the finished product. --- Illuminate Void 18:23, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

Retort
I just kinda wanna point something out in your citation of Yamamoto's quote on Twilight Despair 5's user talk-page. He said clearly, "no Shinigami was born stronger than me in the last 1000 years". Sei and Kamui are Sōzōshin, not Shinigami. So that puts a hole through your argument. Secondly, if it was down to just about their strength, remember that I have participated in well over fifty roleplays on this site alone, let alone independent stories. When Seireitou was first written, he was no stronger than an average Captain, perhaps weaker. Kamui was slightly above the norm for Captain, and would be capable of holding his own in a fight with Aizen due to his Zanpakutō's illusionary abilities. Over time, and much much development, the two grew incredibly strong to the level they are today. Everything they have now is because of the stories I wrote and worked on with my best bro Tenny, and especially others. Now, I know I can't force you to change your views, so if even after this explanation, you still feel like you find my characters unfair, I'm afraid I must leave it at that. I can't make everybody happy, but I haven't received complaints from those I work with all the time, so I'm not going to make drastic changes because of one person's opposite view on my work. Otherwise, I'd never be able to keep my characters the way I want it. It's the problem all artists, writers, and musicians all face too. In no way did I take it personally, and I hope I haven't caused you to have a negative view on myself as a writer, but if I have, I'm sorry but I enjoy the work I do, and my closest friends also like my work. Anyways, I can say I've enjoyed some of your work, it seems rather interesting. --Seireitou-shishō (My True Identity 21:59, February 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * Nah, the only time I've ever really sent real hate mail is to Illuminate Void, because even though you might think he's a cool dude based on your conversations with him, he's quite arrogant and likes to always have the last word. But anyways, regarding the tournament, I don't plan on winning. I'm still debating it, but Kamui may just end up finding no more interest, and just leave (think Piccolo in the Bojack movie). Kamui has rarely been used for roleplays recently, since I usually focus on Seireitou more now than I used to back in the day. So this will allow me to test some of the new powers Kamui has obtained in the independent stories I've recently written. I also look forward to your future work, keep up the good work, and happy valentine's day. --Seireitou-shishō [[File:Seireitou's signature picture.jpg]] (My True Identity 22:37, February 14, 2011 (UTC)

Njalm2
I am Twilight Despair 5 now, before you think this a complaint it is the exact opposite. Now I know you and Sliver-Haired Serieitou talk and that it went good. However, you did contact me with good concerns, and I wanted to address them propely. Ok one complaint now you didn't sign your post but thats ok. But I have read your character and it wouldn't have been reject in fact if wanderingshinobi don't post soon I might just give you his spot. The only real requirements are that the character be at least a Shunsui-class but Aizen-class is better as Kamui is in it. And that the character be good or at least a former bad guy turned good guy like Kamui. But that character if I read it right hates fighting more than even Tosen but idk maybe he could win. If wanderingshinobi doesn't post soon or doesn't at least contact me telling when he can i'll give his spot against Kamui.: The Twilight of Your Despair 21:28, February 15, 2011 (UTC)
 * First off I know Kamui/Madara Kawahiru is powerful even by Aizen Class standards. But Sei did put him through so many rps training, and story arcs that I am really surprised that he and Serietou Kawahiru aren't even stronger.
 * Second, I wanted to thank you for you words, but you don't have to put everything like this there is wrong with it but when people use B I U its means noramlly this is the main point or a quote.
 * Third, I like your character Hiroya Ginkarei and most people don't make gay or bisexual characters. I myself made one or two, but really the one running my tournament as since I won't take part my character hosts the tournament. But he is homosexual, but really its cause a Gay King priceless. But this no way reflected on me I just like creating out of the box sometimes.
 * Fourth, and finally I hope to rp with you in the future.: The Twilight of Your Despair 18:02, February 15, 2011 (UTC)

It is not important, but these are views in character article creation. Incase we are ever, at an endpass with each other. I believe that most characters should be developed over time, HOWEVER that is not the only way or the best way to create but the most responsible and a good way. Some characters can be made immensly powerful at the start with a good reason or like a mentor or an enemy. Also, if you just want a strong character than thats fine as long as one, two, three, four don't turn in 20 of them. My view is just cause one way is more acceptable by others doesn't make it completely right. These are my views on the subject for future references.: The Twilight of Your Despair 03:48, February 16, 2011 (UTC)

I agree, but Remember if someone wants to make something of the higher classes or the highest class that is fine as long as they have a reason or as long as it doesn't happen to often and doesn't make the majority of your characters. Like me I have two aizen-class characters and I don't plan on having anymore for a LONG time but one is a villian and one is good character and ther king of his spirit race.

P.S and this wont effect my judgement, but who do you think should win.

Kenji-Taichō ~ Kenji Hiroshi

WanderingShinobi- Ryotenbin Shiki

Yuki-chama - Margin Heart

Kamui --Seireitou-shishō

Naishō Kawahiru.


 * The Twilight of Your Despair 16:34, February 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * Well I cannot say you can win but here are my thoughts.
 * Kenji, he is strong and has great elemental powers.
 * Kamui, in terms of reiatsu or spiritual pressure has the strongest in my opinion.
 * Margin has immense endurence I mean immense.
 * Naisho, cannot say haven't seen much of him yet.
 * Ryotenbin, hmm he looks like the type to have a sceret technique or power than can change the tide of battles.
 * Also as the rp has started no more character will be intro as it would mess up the flow but the next tournament I will make you have the first spot.
 * Sidenote My two strongest characters Haru Nakamaru and Kiyoshi Souzou both of Aizen class.
 * Now Haru is a former royal guard leader or supreme commander. he is evil
 * Kiyoshi is the Kosumosukihaku's supreme king. he is good
 * Now please if you want to say something about them just message me don't use their talk pages. now the only think about them is that is the same they both have well over twice as much spiritual power as an average captain-level shinigami like aizen.: The Twilight of Your Despair 22:00, February 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * Well what you think of Haru Nakamaru and Kiyoshi Souzou now both of their bankais will be revealed later and kiyoshi's shikai is not complete but still
 * Now please if you want to say something about them just message me don't use their talk pages. now the only think about them is that is the same they both have well over twice as much spiritual power as an average captain-level shinigami like aizen.: The Twilight of Your Despair 20:18, February 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * Kiyoshi is the Kosumosukihaku's supreme king. he is good
 * Now please if you want to say something about them just message me don't use their talk pages. now the only think about them is that is the same they both have well over twice as much spiritual power as an average captain-level shinigami like aizen.: The Twilight of Your Despair 22:00, February 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * Well what you think of Haru Nakamaru and Kiyoshi Souzou now both of their bankais will be revealed later and kiyoshi's shikai is not complete but still
 * Now please if you want to say something about them just message me don't use their talk pages. now the only think about them is that is the same they both have well over twice as much spiritual power as an average captain-level shinigami like aizen.: The Twilight of Your Despair 20:18, February 17, 2011 (UTC)
 * Now please if you want to say something about them just message me don't use their talk pages. now the only think about them is that is the same they both have well over twice as much spiritual power as an average captain-level shinigami like aizen.: The Twilight of Your Despair 20:18, February 17, 2011 (UTC)

Ideas for an RP?
Hey, if you're up for it, want to do an RP in the next few days? I'm not exactly sure how their done on the wiki, but it seems you have plenty of experience. Given that Rutilus became apart of Dorothy's Army, I thought it would be interesting to RP how he joined. It could provide some source material later on too. If you have any ideas, we could do those as well. But if you can I'd also need some help in creating the rest of Dorothy's Army. Including your character I'd like to at least two to four more characters. --- Illuminate Void 21:32, February 15, 2011 (UTC)


 * Well, people have already created most of their primary characters, not to mention the idea is new and in a way clashes with an already established race of demons. The fact that I explicity state that there isnt much crossover between Diabolus and Shinigami could also be a deterent. But hmm....Ive finalized some general thoughts on the RP and Dorothy's army. Her subordinates should play specific roles. I'm very keen on characters having roles to play, someone who gathers intel, one with abilities of concealment/travel to hide the group. Perhaps a scientist to ensure they have proper equipment and arent caught unawares, etc. And given Rutilus's abilities he makes an excellent assassin/fighter for the group. Given that in raw physical combat he would easily overpower Dorothy. But if she were to approach your character.....she would have need a reason....well not really, but more of a reason for interest, given her personality. An event of particular noteworthiness showcasing your abilities. Perhaps we can run....an event perhaps a bargain that leads to battle. Human, eaten by hollows. That would definately get any Diabolus pissed. Enough for a battle anyways. And no problem, good characters deserve praise. He's got personality, power but doesnt have any abilities that are exactly broken or outright unfair. He's a defensive fighter first and foremost and thats fine. Although I cant help but think if he and Dorothy ever met. Given that they are both masters of Kido, it would be a rather interesting encounter. --- Illuminate Void 01:01, February 16, 2011 (UTC)

Cheers
Saw your thoughts on the characters taking part in Twilight's Tournament, and I just wanna say thanks for the comments you made about Kenji. Didn't think anyone would consider him the most dangerous close-range combatant, so thanks again, dude. Kenji-Taichō (Talk) 10:28, February 17, 2011 (UTC)


 * I never thought a lot of people read my articles, to be honest. Thanks for the words, though, dude. I'll try my best not to disappoint in the tournament, if you plan on reading it. Kenji's my main character, and the one article I've spent more time and research on than any other. The reason I chose the element of lightning is because of all the potential things you can do with it; enhanced speed and the numbing aura being only a few. The Light Step skill you mentioned on Twilight's page, though, was inspired by Sei, as was the incentive to expand Kenji's lightning prowess beyond the zanpakutō. He always had a lightning-attuned aura, but never as much skill before I took the time skip in my stories. Anyways, I've enjoyed reading your own articles. The story you wrote about your Diablous character and the boy he made popular in high-school got across the entire concept of their race very well, so keep up the good work, dude :) Kenji-Taichō (Talk) 12:45, February 17, 2011 (UTC)

RE:Possible Roleplay
Yeah, well given Dorothy, she would figure out a way to force Hiyora to fight, either by taking his students hostage, or scheming to steal their souls, and forcing him to act, or some other nefarious scheme. I'm sure you realize that being a good guy, also gives your character many weaknesses, morally speaking that is.
 * In regards to Kenshin Yagami, I was actually undergoing some changes to him. If you've noticed, I wanted him to be a sort of master manipulater and beguiler, and I crafted several "disguises" but found that while interesting, they didnt make a whole lot of sense. I did devise a twist that not only makes sense, but also solves most of my problems with his character. I was going to make him a Vasto Lorde or an Arrancar that is the strongest "Trickster" type of his kind. Specializing in illusions, misdirection, and etc. All things considering, he would be a rather scary Hollow since this is one with knowledge of Soul Society, Kido, with some Shinigami abilities, in addition to his own. A rather frightening combination if I do say so myself.
 * And yeah I completely agree with you in terms of roleplaying. I have a link to an old RP I tried to do with another user, but they sort of disappeared and didnt respond for like...weeks, so it was left untouched. I figure thats how I would RP and it would give you a sense of how I might go about doing it. Example RP. I assume it would be something like that. I describe my actions, either a single one or multiple ones, but in the end let you the other author determine the results.
 * Hmm and you DO have a point. Ryuichi would certaintly find that unsettling and investigate it. That could lead to an interesting encounter too. On that note, regarding Ryuichi and the prologue Im writing for him, I'm thinking of removing the text between him and the women and changing it to a battle. Of course I'd also be changing the womens personality too, but given new inspiration, I feel it would be for the best. My ultimate goals is that Ryuichi will be gaining a....Zanpakutou..although I use that term loosely. More like his first real ally. Hmm, ever watch Soul Eater? I suppose thats a better example, with Ryuichi being the meister and ADA being the companion/weapon.
 * With that we should do an RP soon. Although I've been busy as hell this past week. I've had to help family move around a bit, and those were all-day events. Hmm, I'm busy this sunday, although Monday evening I should be mostly free to start up some RPs. I'd like to get more info down first regarding several of my characters. --- Illuminate Void 22:09, February 17, 2011 (UTC)

Characters
Kiyoshi and why he is Aizen Class. Haru and his stats. Inshort these are the reasons for the things you pointed out. I tried to write without many grammer errors.: The Twilight of Your Despair 02:18, February 18, 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) He like Aizen or in his case has well over twice as much spiritual power as an average captain-level Shinigami. Which should make him an aizen class alone and that is why I give it to an Aizen Class character or weapon like Zettaiteki.
 * 2) He is intellect is high as he over 4000 years old.
 * 3) As well about his age his species once they master their power they gain eternal life, and don't require food, water, air or sleep to live. As such they don't age and their bodies don't change from when they gain their immortality. But hair will contiune to grow.
 * 4) His species spells Mystical Power sorry english transtion, differ from Shinigami/Vizard Kido. His species make their own spells and they have many spells. As such by teaching them to other of their species they can use it so no spell is unlearnable (as long as the spells requirements are met.) And their spells have a few more types than just Hado, Bakudo, and Healing. Kosumosukihaku's spells contains types for offence and defence that are spirit energy based or elemental based. They have sealing binding, and barrier spells. They have spells for healing and for spatial and temporal spells. Also they have none spell like abilities like their ability to create reishi or spirit particles as well there are as many none spell types as there are spells. And Kiyoshi's skills in spells and none spells abilties of all types are supreme.
 * 5) He is a master in Zanjutsu, Hakuda, and in their species Shunpo like power. This doen't mean that he can never be hit.
 * 6) Finally his species has the deity-aspect to negate the negative forces toward spirit energy like Sekkiseki and the force of Reason a sort of force that Sei and Ten and Kiyoshi can use it for a long time 32 minutes which is a long time. As just a skill should have a time frame.
 * 1) He like Aizen or in his case has well over twice as much spiritual power as an average captain-level Shinigami. Which should make him an aizen class alone and that is why I give it to an Aizen Class character or weapon like Zettaiteki. Just a repeat.
 * 2) Even though that he is 2200 Yamamato states that he held the Captain Commander title for 1000 years as no Shinigami has been born that is stronger since then. Haru is a former Supreme Commander of the Royal Guard like the Head Captain. Also the Shino Academy is 2000 years old which Haru went to and Yamamato made it so its hard to believe that Yamamato is the first Shinigami and to say that the Soul Society is as old as him is kind of weird. Also its hard to think he is only 2000 years old. I believe my info on this is right or close though I always could be wrong.
 * 3) If the complete lore of bleach is follow 100% of the time than it gets old. Just certain characters that are stronger than Aizen or Yamamato for as the writer spends a lot of time making them with believable stories.

Did the reasons I point out help to understand them better?: The Twilight of Your Despair 21:47, February 19, 2011 (UTC)

P.S want to rp with Kiyoshi cause I need strong opponents to reveal his shikai's special powers in as his has a few but I use rps to reveal them.: The Twilight of Your Despair 21:54, February 19, 2011 (UTC)

Hiroya is strong enough, I was think that maybe he see Kiyoshi using his powers and becomes interested in the Cosmos souls spells and none spell like abilities and they have an none lethal fight.This could help him to learn more spell or develop new ones.: The Twilight of Your Despair 22:06, February 19, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, by the way when they are complete would you like to make the Sacred King of the raifutenshis or life angels.

You I making that there are four kings that rule over one aspect of the universe and all it falls under. Now each King is equal in terms one king cannot tell another one what to do.

The soul king rules the aspect of death

the sacred king rules the aspect of life

the slient king rules over the aspect of destruction

the supreme king rules over the aspect of creation

what you think.: The Twilight of Your Despair 22:39, February 19, 2011 (UTC)

RE:Diabolus Squad
Sorry about getting back to you so late, but like earlier this week, I've been busy helping my family out. Anyways, just wanted to give you my thoughts on the Diabolus Squad. Excellent ideas btw, this is precisely the kind of structure necessary for Dorothy's group.
 * Supporter: Now, I have an idea for the supporter role, for one of my original characters, Malik Nazari, I had planned on him doing battle against this women called the Youma of Darkness, she had powers and abilities relating to barriers, cloaking allies, transportation, all of shadow/darkness motif. She would be a Daemon, although a low-tier one, but her unique powers make her very well suited to her role as a support character.
 * Defender/Mentalist/Intel-Gatherer: Hmm, another character concept I had thought of earlier, another daemon by the name of Tedlar, a sort of humanoid monstrous daemon. He had some strange personality quirks, like having an english accent, and being an overall soft-spoken gentleman. He's the type of daemon that collects the souls of nobility, and the rich, making contracts related to the greed of money. Hmm with some tweeking of his abilities he could serve as both Defender and the Intel-Gatherer roles.
 * Spellcaster/Ranged Artillery: Hmm, I'll have to ponder on this one a little more. In many ways Dorothy serves this function given her vast array of magical abilities. Well, a crew of four plus Dorothy could work just fine too. Diabolus are naturally adept infiltrators and masters of espionage, albeit all have their own methods. So for now I think this could work.

Now probably on to the most important thing, as to why Dorothy has her army. I've got some ideas on her own plans, but just as Dorothy gathered this group for her own goals, each individual has their own ambitions as well. But as of right now, her main concern is strengthening the power of this group, so using all of your individual skills, she would likely have everyone gather info on spiritually aware communities, then make plans to corrupt the entire town as opposed to just one individual at a time. Which in of itself is pretty ballsy, but I figure she's that arrogant to believe its possible. After that, well we'll see where things go. Of course this they will likely clash with Hollows and Shinigami alike, so it should be interesting. What are your thoughts? And do you have any ideas for your own characters goals?

I've always found that...a story is FAR easier to create if the characters themselves are pushing the plot. As opposed to the typical method of them to simply reacting towards someone else's. --- Illuminate Void 17:32, February 19, 2011 (UTC)

Gamemaster
Don't mention it. I was just bored and had the time to go into length about him. But if you ever want me to review another character, just post it on my talk page and I'll get to it ASAP. Ciao~ --- Gamemaster (Rules)  19:28, February 19, 2011 (UTC)


 * Hi, Njalm2! I was wondering if you'd kindly do a review of my new titular character, Naishō Kawahiru.  He's finally complete, so I was curious on how well I created him.  Ciao~ --- Gamemaster  (Rules)  17:32, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

RE: Future Roleplay
Oh sorry, I thought I responded to that. Huh, oh well, here it is.


 * Hmm well we could use the grades from say D-S like they do in YuYu Hakusho, although it wouldnt be for all Diabolus, like you said it would be between the individual castes of Diabolus to further distinguish them. Although I figure any Diabolus of Rank S or more is going to be stronger than the average of even those of a caste above them. For example I would rank Dorothy as of right now a B-Class Arcus Daemon. She's powerful dont get me wrong, but an A-class would have master level swordsmanship, hand-to-hand combat and speed, and a few other augmented abilities. S-Class would...hmm...well it would be what Vasto Lorde were rumored to be in the beginning of bleach, wholly powerful beings that even a single one would spell disaster for Soul Society should it ever decide to fight against them. An S-Class Arcus Daemon though? Aizen would sooner piss his pants, hop around three times, and sing "I love you, you love me" by Barney the Dinosaur than screw with one of them.
 * Regarding the other member of Dorothy's Army, you do have a point. Another magician would likely be necessary. And on the note of Diabolus weaknesses, your right I should expand on them. Given the input you have thus far, please feel free to edit the section. I can always look at it later and we can talk it over if there's a difference opinion.

For the Ryuichi - Rutilus Roleplay, I'm currently writing out the encounter he has with that mysterious being who has been identified as ADA. Although in recent thought, I've decided to make it a battle scene first, and introduce another important character - Inoue Orihime. After which he'll mostly have his group filled out - Ryuichi, ADA with Orihime and Uryuu as mentors/backup, much like Urahara and Yoruichi were for Ichigo. Still a roleplay is certaintly possible. And yeah I dont mind the fact that Rutilus is stronger, it makes sense, since Ryuichi will likely be battling against opponents who are almost always stronger than him. If he would win, its because I've impressed you so much with my strategies that you feel Rutilus would lose given the circumstances. And if Ryuichi loses, then yes, he would have dark thoughts and that itself could make for some interesting RP later on. Regardless an interesting story could develop either way.

As for Dorothy and Hiroya, keep in mind Dorothy is a bonafide sadist, and a psychotic b**** who delights in ruin. She could target Hiroya because she's bored, or really for any reason, or none at all. But really, she would do it, if she discovered Hiroya's a pacifist. She would love nothing more than to try an corrupt him, just for the sake of corruption itself. And remember, while Hiroya is certaintly powerful, crushing an opponent under your foot may not be her goal. Especially if she can manipulate events to place innocent people, perhaps Hollows or other Shinigami with the blame and see you fight them. Given she has an "army" at her disposal to help with the process and Hiroya is alone, does not bode well for him. Also - form is meaningless to Dorothy. If necessary she could shapeshift into a man, and well....given her sensual nature; she's a succubus, chances are she has a pretty good chance of seducing him. --- Illuminate Void 03:44, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Sure
No problem, let's see... Well, I told you about ou -> ō. Umm... uu -> ū. ii -> ī. I'm not totally sure about ē, however, or ȳ. aa -> ā. And, I believe that's all of them really. --Seireitou-shishō (My True Identity 18:21, February 21, 2011 (UTC)

Nekkuresu no Raiku (Necklace of life)
Njalm2, I was reading on Hiroya Ginkarei that he knows the spell Nekkuresu no Raiku (''Necklace of life). Well, I would like to know if you borrow that idea from the Gravity Force's Kido page as I made that spell Nekkuresu no Raiku (Necklace of life) ''with very similar powers a long time ago.( By the way it is on the Fobidden spells section.) Or if you came up with it yourself. I normally wouldn't care, but it places a large part in my coming story arc. You see there is God on this site that Ten Tailed Fox made he kind a vice head Admin, the God is called Yawhew. I am making Chaos the bringer of the Ends of Time. You see she is summoned via four special spell created objects that represent one of four aspects of the universe. The Objects of Death, Life, Destruction and Creation. And Nekkuresu no Raiku (Necklace of life) is my object of life that I made months ago. I just need to know really if you could change the name or something. Please get back to me and I am NOT mad.: The Twilight of Your Despair 22:13, February 21, 2011 (UTC)

No, you don't have to remove it. I saw on my mobile browser that it was only a reference and you message me before I could tell you to ignore it. Now actually it isn't a Kido really it is spell that any species other than Demonic spiritual being can do I just put on the Gravity Force kido page for now. Also, my necklace's power is that it stops the ageing of whomever wears it, also it can heal or regenarate any wound lost limbs, or damaged or destroyed organs minus loss of the head.

By the way would like to make the Sacred King of the Life Angels. As I have two Aizen-class character Haru and Kiyoshi and I don't want to be told off for making too many characters of the highest class too often.: The Twilight of Your Despair 23:46, February 21, 2011 (UTC)

Kamisaifūtsuidan (神最封対断, Japanese for Heavenly Final-Seal, Absolute Judgement)

Whom in the future could be used to wreak great havoc. Items of this magnitude are objects similiar to the Hougyoku, and the Zanpakuto that is currently in the possession of the Supreme Kings. Now I know you haven't but that you are referring to my Supreme King's Zanpakuto Zettaiteki. I am happy that someone other than me is using my work even for reference and the spell isn't included in that I just added to the message so you know what I was talking about and of where it was.: The Twilight of Your Despair 00:12, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

Well, than Hiroya Ginkarei would be commenting a great crime. lol.

One, Zettaiteki is a weapon that belongs to the Supreme King of the immortal Kosmosukihakus thus he would be stealing from one of the four kings. Also, the 4 objects are made from spells that each spirit race has one spell and its secret requirements to make it, more than one of say necklaces of life can exist but only when all four seperate objects are brought togethor is Chaos summon. And chaos will be summoned at the ends of times but not before. You see the four kings rule the balance of the universe equally, if even one king dies without a replacement than it will be bad. But do you like my ideas for the four objects, and zettaiteki. After all I made a whole tournament to give Zettaiteki away.: The Twilight of Your Despair 01:11, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

Review
Hello, I have seen you have done reviews of many characters around the site. I was wondering if you could give my character Kigahen Nushi a look. Thanks in advance.--Ryo talk 23:15, February 21, 2011 (UTC)

Roleplay Continued
Right now, Im at my sisters place, so I this wont be long. Im currently without internet, well at least for the next day or two, so I'll be offline until then. I was supposed to have it today, but well..Uncle Murphy came to visit and you know how he tends to screw things up. Anyways, I havent checked any updates or messages yet so Ill attend to those when I get my internet back. Until then... --- Illuminate Void


 * Yes, and I'm glad to be back. And I like the weaknesses you gave them. Personally I wouldnt have made it so extreme, but I feel that what you did was for the best. Ordinary humans have been able to hunt demons/devils for as long as they have existed to a certain extent, and I do enjoy the fact that for all of their power, Diabolus do have certain weaknesses anyone can take advantage of. It also means that they are not godlike in power, and even a well thoughtout plan can foil the strongest of them. It also serves to make the Diabolus unique amongst the various spiritual races on this site as they are the probably the only ones with a slew critical weaknesses. All in all, great job! And yes, I'm sure you noticed that I updated Dorothy. I'll be updating her spell list as I go, so it should expand as the days pass. I'm currently working on the first of the two Diabolus, the Youma of Darkness, although her name will obviously change when its finished. Oh and good job on your RP btw, I just finished reading that. I can tell that RPing with you is going to be a lot of fun. --- Illuminate Void 22:48, February 23, 2011 (UTC)
 * Yeah your work has been a great inspiration for my own, although..hmm...well once I finish with the support/intelligence Diabolus Aurora Vespera, I'll start the RP. Although the beginning I had in mind is somewhat creepy, and the battle may not immediately start as it did with Twilight. Dorothy may be the one coming after Hiroya but she will try and draw him out. --- Illuminate Void 01:21, February 24, 2011 (UTC)

Heya!
I saw you're pretty good at reviews so i was wondering if you could review my titular chracter Raze and possibly give me any tips or suggestions. (He isn't complete as you will see when you look but still) lol. =P RozeluxeMeitzen 00:06, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks man. I appreciate it...If you ever want to RP or need any assistance with something just let me know =) RozeluxeMeitzen 04:33, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

Ok I finished the powers and abilities section of Raze. Check it out if you get the chance and sorry for asking this but could you also review my character HarukiRozeluxeMeitzen 02:38, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

RE: Your Character, Kōmei
Thanks for taking the time to express your views about my character. I'm pleased that my work has influenced you in some form, even if it is only minor. I honestly consider Komei to be a bit of a rush job: I am always trying to improve my writing style and ability to create. --れび (talk to Lavi!) 16:43, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

Howdy
I don't know how good I am, but I've been known to do a few reviews (main customer being North lol) I've read through the article before and enjoyed it, but since your looking a comprehensive review, I'll re-read it all a lot more carefully. And I'd appreciate feedback on Kenji's article, just remember that you don't need to offer review trades to ask me to write up a review :) I'd be more than happy to do it regardless without getting something in return. Oh yeah, I replied on the talk page all ready, but go ahead and use the Gravity Force's Kidō page all you want. I'll get started on the review now, dude :) Kenji-Taichō (Talk) 17:08, February 22, 2011 (UTC)


 * Sorry for the delay in the posting there. I had to fix a problem with my cousins laptop (damndable malware programs) that made me wanna throw the thing over the nearest water wall. Anyways, I'll get to reading the review you gave me now. Yours has been posted (don't know why, but it logged me out after posting, so it'll show as an unregistered wiki editor on the activity page). Thanks again, dude. Kenji-Taichō (Talk) 21:48, February 22, 2011 (UTC)


 * Sorry I haven't gotten 'round to replying until now, dude. Thanks for the review. As soon as I'm finished Twilight's tourney and my RP with Raze (I don't add to powers & abilities when my characters are in joint works like those), I'll move on some of the points. As for Kenji's age, since its bugging you a little, not even I know it exactly. He's spent a lot of time in the Dangai Precipice World (and I don't mean months), so that's the reason for his rapid development. If I was putting some kind of guess to it (this could be wrong), I'd say about anywhere between 400 and 600 easy. Kenji-Taichō (Talk) 21:00, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

I need something.
I tried everything I know, can you move the pic from Chaos's page to the template plz?: The Twilight of Your Despair 18:00, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

ignore the last message

new message. Well, if he were to kill either know that knew those spells it would be the four king

the soul king

the sacred king

the silent king

the supreme king. you see at the ends of time the create them and give to a female to summon chaos as chaos is female. plus a funny note your guy may know the most kido spells i have ever seen but at least kiyoshi has a spell that can disable shinigami kido and demonic spirt beings kido. however by using this spell silent one he cannot use other spells until he deactives it but he can still use his none spell like powers.: The Twilight of Your Despair 21:00, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

would you like to use him as lets say you seal Haru's necklace of life away but he steals one of his students and they fight.: The Twilight of Your Despair 23:50, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, but remember even if you seal it away you Haru can just make another one. So do you know how to rp?: The Twilight of Your Despair 00:04, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

Want me to start the rp or do you.: The Twilight of Your Despair 16:22, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

White feather vs Colorless World is the rp and its your turn.

and yes I know the rules about not doing auto-hitting, auto-controlling and I don't did them. Plus I think when you edited my talk page something happened to it.: The Twilight of Your Despair 16:41, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

You turn.: The Twilight of Your Despair 17:43, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

this has happened before on other things I'll just get an admin to fix it later. and your turn and when you said your character doesn't like to fight you weren't kidding.: The Twilight of Your Despair 17:58, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

Yourturn and Mushokuseken (Colorless World) it has the power to store dead spirit body inside of it and haru can morph them to look just like him and he can hear and he can see through them so they are not clones. But the greatest aspect is these spirit corspes have the same exact level of swordsmenship, shunpo, kido etc skill as haru and the same level of reiatsu as the real Haru but their zanpakutos lack any special powers.: The Twilight of Your Despair 18:21, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

Your turn and to gain the necklace you need to cut off the fake harus head or completely destroy him. at least from the neck down as it is the same thing just backwards. But remember these fake haru are as strong as the real one they are like puppets but they are easy to get rid of just not too easy.: The Twilight of Your Despair 18:50, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

Umm I made a post before I read the message the fight is over but if have the characters talk for a bit than thats fine.

Ok as for Haru the spirit corspes may have the same level in everything but zanpakuto abilities but Haru can only have one of them at a time in Shikai. Also they have no will as Haru must control them normally Haru uses them to use #90 Kido and the Real one does direct attacks. Also i will say maybe I did op alittle but you did make it hard to avoid the spells.

Now and I know you might tell me the spell you used is too strong to undo but I didn't come up with an unrealistic way of getting it back. I came up with a cool way of by passing it. Haru didn't break the spell as you said it is absolute but Haru did find a way by removing the object in question from existence he could make re-exist outside the seal. Again sorry but I took a long time to make a believable reason to get it back out of the Sacred Spell. So I didn't read the message before I posted.: The Twilight of Your Despair 20:35, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

Your turn and the last thing I wrote in italic was just a self-made quote.: The Twilight of Your Despair 19:19, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

Your turn and Haru kidnapped some of his class to use if something like what Hiroya did would happen.: The Twilight of Your Despair 19:30, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

Your turn and the last post. Just Haru and Kiyoshi may seem op but Haru is strong for he was the leader of the Royal Guard and in the fan made on this wikia their are five High marshals wthin five rings which are groups or squads with the High Marshal being the strongest of that ring. Also interms of ranks the lower the number of the rings means the stronger the High Marshal. The Supreme Commander is the leader and the strongest in the Guard. Meaning Haru was the Ring One's High Marshal making him a Supreme Commander.

Kiyoshi is the supreme King so he must be on near or equal to the other Kings in strength. But I doubt he could overpower the soul King.: The Twilight of Your Despair 21:31, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

You may not want Hiroya to join Haru.

This is why

Yahweh (God) Chaos and the Kosumosukihakus the immortal pagan Gods existed before the universe and the beginning of time.

When Yahweh is awake than he rules the universe or all of creation. When Chaos is awake she rules when there is no universe she destroys it and when Chaos decides to sleep God recreates the universe. The Pagan Gods just help them slightly with problems. This is the natural order and by sealing Chaos away God cannot go to sleep thus the universe will never end for only Chaos can wake up God and vice-vera.: The Twilight of Your Despair 21:53, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

Hey I am making a new character called Spirit. None he has no appearance yet but what you think.: The Twilight of Your Despair 17:04, February 24, 2011 (UTC)

Possible rp
Want to rp again I will be using my Shino Terasawa she is vice-captain level or lieutenant level. Now she is not a Shinigami she is of the same spirit race as the Supreme King Kiyoshi so you got any demons or demonic spirit beings that you can use.: The Twilight of Your Despair 20:47, February 25, 2011 (UTC)

Flamen Puteulanus That one will do even if Shino loses its fine. Now Shino is a Kosmosukihaku or Cosmos Soul as such she is of the species that make up the immortal pagan gods my creation.: The Twilight of Your Despair 21:41, February 25, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe but Shino is an immortal Kosumosukihaku as such her species spirit energy has several unique aspects that grant them Deity like spirit energy. One and this ability does have a time limit as one can only use it in time frames like for 16 minutes one Kosumosukihakus can render the negative force toward spirit energy like Sekkseki and the Force of reason. Also, her speices make it very diffcult for them to develop the spiritual powers of other spirit race like hollows. and Finally demonic spirit beings cannot phyiscally touch her without being purifyied. And once completely purifyied than the demon is erased from exists or is reborn as a human soul. Now it doesn't mean that one touch and any demon is gone it the factor is determine between the strength of the pagan god's and the demon's reiatsu.: The Twilight of Your Despair 05:48, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

The Battle of Peace. and its your turn. now remember Shino is not strong enough to purify demon with her reiatsu alone but when a demon grabs or attacks her with hand-to-hand combact than the purifying starts and the longer one has a hold of her or she a hold of them the more of them is purified and I won't op this ability. Also to corraspond with the pagan religions I made her immortal species exist before the creation of the universe and the beginning of time but even as pagan gods they are no where as strong or as old as the true "God".

Your turn.: The Twilight of Your Despair 19:24, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

your turn.: The Twilight of Your Despair 19:43, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Your turn and time for a short character talk between them woundn't you agree.: The Twilight of Your Despair 20:17, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Your turn and I don't know if you made a mistake or just as your guy doesn't know what shino is but she isn't an angel but a immortal pagan god. Just most people don't do things with the pagans anymore so I made a species that make up the some of those religions like Shinto, Celtic, Greek,and Norse and some of China and Asia's religions.: The Twilight of Your Despair 21:11, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Your turn and do you mind if I bring the King to save her but I won't until you say so and I won't use him to fight. But please reframe from calling shino an angel she is an immortal deity just I made the deities in realistic terms of power.: The Twilight of Your Despair 21:51, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Ok but you didn't answer my question can I bring Kiyoshi Souzou the Supreme King to save her. I won't use him for attacks but for just saving her as after the time spell and all the attacks that got her I am surprise she isn't dead.: The Twilight of Your Despair 22:13, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Your turn and remember Kiyoshi is upper Aizen level so be caution lol.: The Twilight of Your Despair 22:37, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

your turn and this is just talking and in a few post the rp ends ok.: The Twilight of Your Despair 23:09, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Hey your turn and just tell Kiyoshi something like that your demon hates angels and though Shino was one or something. And Kiyoshi won't attack even if you do but the barrier is very powerful so don't waste your time trying to break it. :): The Twilight of Your Despair 23:43, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Your turn.: The Twilight of Your Despair 23:55, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Your turn and you cannot get away from the Supreme King that easy. lol and the spell he is about to use he isn't going to use it but he is doing it to scary the demon. Intruth Kiyoshi wants to make peace with hell in the future.: The Twilight of Your Despair 13:53, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

RE: New Suggestion
Sorry, I havent been on much this weekend, though right now I'm kinda out of it. Currently undergoing an experiment that will enable me to become self concious during dreams ie lucid dreaming, which requires me to...well not sleep for a few days to set up the trigger condition. So I've been in and out all day. On another note, yes, I was going through the planning phase of a few Diabolus Lords. In fact a friend of mine gave me the idea for one, his name will be - Berith. He exists in mythology and is allegedly a Duke of Hell, so it should be interesting. I find one particular part of his personality interesting - when asked a question he speaks truthfully, but any other time, he lies. I'll probably preserve that aspect of his personality, but I have an idea of what kind of Diabolus he would be. And yes, it would be good to have a few for those particular reasons you mentioned, tournaments, antagonists, etc.

On another note, if you're up for it, we can start the RP between Hiroya and Dorothy tomorrow. Ive got a rather nasty idea of getting the two involved, though we may not battle right off the bat. Who knows, this could be the start of a unique story all on its own, for both Dorothy and Hiroya in their respective stories, so I'd like to take things a bit slowly and build up to the battle if thats alright with you. If not, I'm fine with Dorothy just wandering around blowing stuff up and Hiroya, and his school in the crossfire. --- Illuminate Void 01:28, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

Your turn and I put this message here as I have a gift for you. I was working on a project, but as I see that you are better at demons like how I am better with pagan gods you want to finish making the Seima no Hamestsu or Holy Demon of Destruction and you can own them?: The Twilight of Your Despair 02:04, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

Lets start the roleplay
Alright the RP should be up shortly after this. God I hate having to do this even though we both just agreed it was stupid, but if you dont mind, I took some artistic liberities to set the mood. There is a bit of prologue and some things going on. I had written a little bit of your characters response, but if you feel he would have done differently, go ahead and change it. I hate controlling other peoples characters, but given what I've seen thus far, I dont think its entirely out of character. It was somewhat necessary for the prologue, to get that sense of...uncertainty, but I can assure you, it wont happen again. Anyway here it is Inquisition of the Pacifist. Cheers! --- Illuminate Void 18:54, February 27, 2011 (UTC)


 * Just wanted to touch base and get your thoughts on the RP thus far. Also my last post ending with Dorothy's signature quote "Shall we play a game" was supposed to indicate the start of a battle. I was hoping the music would get you as pumped as I am. --- Illuminate Void 20:32, February 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * To be honest, Dorothy chose your school playground, purely for psychological reasons. She's going to force you to fight, otherwise, she's probably going to destroy the school. Which will displace hundreds of teachers, students, and disrupt the livelyhood of both yourself and them. I'm really trying to demonstrate how diabolical Dorothy truly is. While characters profess that they are good-natured, caring and will risk themselves to save other people, Dorothy will go out of her way to put you in circumstances, that even if you prevent their death, their life is destroyed. There is also a few other reasons she chose this location, and she has plans even you dont know about. And if you dont mind, I'd like to make use of that new Bestia race I made the Imps in the near future. --- Illuminate Void 21:04, February 28, 2011 (UTC)
 * Oh one more thing, I have something else planned for Hiroya once this battle is over too. --- Illuminate Void 01:02, March 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * Yeah, I know that last post was a dick move. But it wouldnt have been possible if Hiroya had decided to ensure the safety of the rest of his class. Taking advantage of exploits like that....ahh...vintage Dorothy. If you're up for it, we can continue where I'm going with this. I promise it will be short. --- Illuminate Void 21:00, March 1, 2011 (UTC)
 * Well I figured that was as good an ending as any, given everything that happened. So what are your thoughts/concerns regarding the roleplay? I had a lot of fun, I hope you did too. We definately need to get your other Diabolus on this, and weave together some stories. On another note, if I seemed pushy or domineering, I apologize, from the looks of it, I kinda took this RP by the head. Though I'm happy you decided to add your own input with Bloog. Touche. The next RP, you should be the one directing the story. --- Illuminate Void 03:12, March 2, 2011 (UTC)

Greetings!
Heya! My name's well.... you could either call me Yuki or Lone... or just whatever u want lol... hehehe Didn't get to introduce myself to you... well, HI! or Hello! I'm just a friendly neighbor passing by... ^_^ might I say ur work is some piece of excellency (What am I even talking about? lol Just saying ur good at what you do here ^_^) Was hoping if we could have some work together.... RP or something? I saw u creating some Demons as well, I had created one....just a lil different from the Diabolus (did I spell that correctly?) Again, I'm your friendly neighborhood Lone Black Garuga 23:31, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

Dark Brotherhood
Hi! I'm Chrono Nexus, a good friend of Illuminate Void's from way back. I read your RP with him and I am really impressed with your skill. You mentioned Hiroya would be looking for allies, and I think I might be able to help with that. While he's definately weaker than Hiroya, he could still contribute in his own ways, and spreading himself thin seems to be the biggest problem Hiroya has right now. Let me know if you're interested, I look forward to it if you are :) Chrono Nexus 12:40, March 2, 2011 (UTC)

Hi....RP?
Hi there again N. I was wondering if you would like to do an RP with me. I read some of your other ones and they're pretty awesome. Well...just let me know if you're interested. =) RozeluxeMeitzen 14:10, March 2, 2011 (UTC)

Well Haruki, Azami, and Raze are the new MCs for my stories so I would like like to use one or two of them. They are all around rookie level with Raze being the most advanced out of all of them. So if you have anyone around that level or if you want to do a training RP with someone of a higher level that would be awesome. RozeluxeMeitzen 14:42, March 2, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm I think that I will like to take on Rutilus with Haruki. Haruki isn't anywhere near as skilled in combat as Rutilus but still...haha. But Hiroya needs to be annoyed? Then yea these three would have been the best bet to get under his skin a bit to train them =P RozeluxeMeitzen 23:49, March 2, 2011 (UTC)

Demons, Angels, and Gods.
Diabolus may I make one? As while I did create the Kosumosukihaku the immortal Pagan God species. I do like demons. I just like none angelic, Holy, Divine, Heavenly, Sacred, Celestial, etc beings like pagan gods more than demons and angels. But I still like angels and demons.: The Twilight of Your Despair 22:34, March 2, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I might make one in the near future. Sidenote and I just need a summary review not a complete review. What you think of my newest Character Spirit. He is an Enputeiiseikon or an Empty Soul something of my own creation.: The Twilight of Your Despair 22:38, March 2, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I hope you like Spirit. And thanks for the info and latin transitions. When I make one I will use it.: The Twilight of Your Despair 22:46, March 2, 2011 (UTC)

The Four Lords of Hell
Hey, just wanted to bounce some ideas off ya in regards to the Four Lords of Hell. I'd like to construct them in a way that makes their....impact on hell significant, so I was thinking of this:

Hell is a spatially limitless amorphous plane of existence. It is a chaotic ever shifting world, akin to a sea of worlds spontaneously being created and destroyed at random.

The Four Lords of Hell, serve a very unique purpose beyond their title, beyond being considered the strongest. They are anchors. Spiritual Energy by its very definition is described as the spiritual sensitivity and willpower of the user. It is not a power level so many have come to believe, but literally the degree upon which a being can shape the universe.

In this context, a Lord is literally imposing order on the chaos of hell, giving it a form. The very "world" in which the other Diabolus interact with, is in fact Hell reshaped according to the will of its Lord. In essence each Lord has the ability to rewrite reality as the see fit, over an expansive, but finite area, hereafter referred to as their "Domain". Of course, for all of their power, Hell is both their dominion and prison. They can never leave. They are bound to hell as it is bound to them. They are hell.

To give you an analogy, think of hell in its entirety as "space" and the actual "Hell" that Diabolus exist in as "earth". This "earth" is divided into four quadrants, one for each Lord, and together this forms "Hell". The space outside of hell shall be referred to as "Limbo".

Anyway so what are your thoughts on this? --- Illuminate Void 23:10, March 2, 2011 (UTC)


 * Hmm, to be honest I think I found a more appropiate latin name for their title: Arbitrator. Obviously it translates into Arbiter, but I found the translation for arbiter appropriate; a person having complete control of something. This fits considering each lord is literally god of their own domain. And each quadrant should be different than the others. I've already got Amon as having an battleground(s), while Berith will likely have a volcanic and mountainous region. I imagined Arthfael's to be a sort of icey domain, or something similar. As for Dorothy, I had originally planned it to be Lord Berith, given that I see him as the most methodical, and level-headed of the Lords. On that note, I also intended to revive Ulquiorra (he's my favorite bleach character btw), given that the 8th and 9th espada apparently ended up in hell if you recall reading that chapter(s), to promote the new bleach movie. I thought of using Ulquiorra as a sort of Dante from Dante's Inferno, allowing us a perspective of Hell first hand. Of course this is all speculation and nothing concrete yet. --- Illuminate Void 00:45, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reply
Look, I'm going to spare the long reply I was planning to give to retort your statement, but I'll say this simply. I respect your opinion, as well as the opinion of Nexus. I really do. But I've already consulted with admins, and most of us, if not all of us, are in agreement that Bleach is a central Shinto influence. I don't want to sound like a bad guy right now, and make it seem like I think I'm better than you, or anything ridiculous like that. However, I'm not going to take every single opinion into account. Nothing would get done if I did that. The fact is, Kubo has shown us time and again that everything he's written has a Shinto influence, and we just need to deal with that. If you don't want to write about Shinto influenced ideas, then maybe Bleach isn't the right series to write fan fiction for. It's a cruel thing for me to say, and I apologize. I'm glad we have had users like you come on, and design such well-written content, and I'd prefer not to lose you. But I can't make everybody happy. I am the Head Admin, and the Admins are the leaders. And since you quoted something, I'll quote someone as well.

"Even if you sympathize with your subordinates you can't go around tryin' ta please them all the time. You should do things the way you want to do them, and if nobody follows you, it just means you weren't cut out for this job."

I've been followed by many users here, admins and regular users alike, but I know that I'm not perfect, and I can't expect everybody will agree with my decisions, and the decisions of the admins, but that's how we run things here. I will take both your opinion and Nexus's opinion into personal consideration, but I'm not going to tell you with a straight face that I'm going to change the Shinto rule over this. --Seireitou-shishō (My True Identity 21:27, March 3, 2011 (UTC)