Talk:Zero karosaki

Please fix this article's spelling, grammar, and other issues. The spelling and grammar are very poor, but those mistakes should be easy to find and correct. The other issues are that Inner Hollows being born makes absolutely no sense at all, that the whole background is very lacking in detail and explanation, that you should follow the general format rather than clumping everything into one small paragraph, which shouldn't really be a paragraph as it contains many ideas, that a Hollow in Soul Society is a big no, that an Hnner Hollow with an Inner Hollow makes no sense whatsoever, that vasto lordes don't have captains (if you meant he is a captain that is a VL, then revert back to my earlier point about hollows in the gotei), and that an Inner Hollow can't evolve like a normal Hollow, and they don't have Gillian, Menos, Vasto Lorde, etc. classes for them. --'''User:Thepantheon 22:00, December 4, 2010 (UTC)