Thread:Silver-Haired Seireitou/@comment-8914761-20161127030133/@comment-2089817-20161127042012

Hmm... Well, as far as dragon ball-themed villains go, it's not out of place. I mean, there are hints of cliche here and there, like you were intentionally trying to play the villain role. So as far as what I can recommend to improve on, try to avoid falling into villain stereotypes. Villains are still characters, same with heroes and supporting characters too. One thing I could recommend is to identify a specific trait you can tell is cliche of a villain and flip it so that they are opposite to that trait.