User talk:Njalm2

Archived
Alright, I've archived my talk page because it had gotten quite long. Njalm2 19:56, May 29, 2011 (UTC)

RE:Rutilus
Thank you, and would you mind checking out my diabolus, Irae, and tell me what you think of his introduction? It'd be greatly appreciated. (:


 * Of course you can join in! Like I said to Void, the more the merrier. (:  As long as you have a team of three characters (depending on their strength), you're good to go.  Now, if you could, please add your name to the participants section of the Gravity Force talk page, and I'll start up the official tourney page. Ciao~


 * Absolutely. Jut as long as they follow the rules, by all means, go for it. (:


 * Psh! If winning was based on stats, then most of my characters would win. =w=  But no, this is a fair tournament, and it will be based on actual skill (of the rp'er), rather than the statistics of a character.  That is just to limit the amount of god-like characters in this little shindig.

Sure, and for future reference, I'd rather that you post a new reply in your original section, as I find more than one section per user to be incredibly unorganized (blame my extraordinary ocd for that one). Please and thank you. (:
 * EDIT: Also, after examining what you said on Kotarō's talk page, I realized that I was basing stats from characters on here, not of the canon. As such, I've completely overhauled them and changed them.  If you could, please check them and see if they aren't extremely out of proportion. Thank you. (:


 * Hey, Njalm; I was wondering if you could review my character, Shiba Zhijun, and I was also wondering if I should make Naishou bisexual, seeing as his personality is largely based on myself, and I myself am bisexual. Please get back to me when you can. (:


 * I know they aren't prejudice or homophobic, I was just curious about your opinion on it. I'll add it in a bit!  Also, thank you for the review that you'll eventually do. :L


 * Roflmao. Yes, he is popular indeed.  However, from what is said on Naishō's personality, he just wants it out in the open, which is how he'll cope with Kenji having a wife and the like.  Also, I like what you said about Kotarō on Hiroya's relationship section - pure awesomeness! ;D

Hah, I too find people that don't put detail into their rp's incredibly boring to roleplay with. And thank you for the review, and I'm sure the review was perfectly fine. Sadly, I have to leave in a few minutes, so remind me once you see me online again and I'll tell you what I think about it. Ciao~


 * THANK YOU! Those are extremely awesome! ;D ;D ;D  I shall add them at once (and you shall receive full credit, of course).  Once again, thank you for such great spells/weaponry. (:


 * EDIT: You said that I could use some of Hiroya's original spells (after getting your permission, of course), so I was wondering if I could use the following spells for Kotarō (if I cannot, I understand). Ciao~
 * 1) Shirubamon
 * 2) Seitō
 * 3) Saikōsei


 * Honestly, I find capitals in translations to be what you find lower-cases to be. :L As such, I'll keep it as is, because then I won't be tempted to change it back.  However, I do respect your opinion, but I just don't see that working out too well for me. >_> Ciao~

RE: Clan Mortflèau
Thats a great idea, and makes quite a bit of sense. I've seen the article and its quite the piece of work. Hmm do you have any Mortleau characters already created? Oh and as you can see, I've updated the Diabolus a bit, added new information, some images for reference, etc. Hope you like the additions. --- Illuminate Void (Talk) 17:52, May 30, 2011 (UTC)

Lol
Yea I was thinking the same thing, that's why I got so firm about it intead of being my usual slackish self =P But yea...thanks I thought it would be a nice touch to add to my profile, just a little thing to throw people off a bit when they first see it. lol Raze Kucabara-Dono  Light  20:32, May 30, 2011 (UTC)

Hey N, could you take a look at my newest blogpost and let me know what you think of Van's future zanpakuto? Raze Kucabara-Dono  Light  22:43, May 31, 2011 (UTC)

Thank you good sir =D Raze Kucabara-Dono  Light  22:49, May 31, 2011 (UTC)

Your review, good sir.
Sorry about responding so late, I can get it to you tommorrow. I've had a lot to do. Anyway, see you later, Njalm. PersonaSuperiorDeus 04:01, May 31, 2011 (UTC)

And here it is, your review. I'll do it in the same style that I do Kou's reviews if that's okay with you. Alright, his intro, it's interesting, and sets the stage for him. Appearance, I ususally don't need to review this section, but I can say you've done a good job. Personality, he's a pacifist? Awesome. I support pacifism in real life- and I'm surprised in a good way that Hiroya doesn't like fighting, especially since this is a fanon about a shonen manga. He has a realistic personality, he sounds like someone I could meet in everyday life ^^. His history's good, his original life's pretty sad. His childhood, well, it makes one wonder if he was always a pacifist. I'd like to see those surpessed memories come out when he's fighting against someone at least once if he wasn't always strictly no-killing, but that's just me. The rest of his history's interesting, sorry for glossing over those parts. Alright, inventions. They're interesting, and well-written. I'll give you short opinions on some of this, since there's so much detail put into it and I need to leave in a minute, sorry. His Garment of Self-Restraint is good, it suits him perfectly. You're right, this is ruthless, though I'm basking in the awesomeness that Hiroya exudes. Powers and Abilities, Avian Transformation's nice, I didn't really expect it, and it's unique. His basic skills are well-thought out, and his Kido abilities are beyond epic, there's so much there, all I can say is that you've put one heck of a lot of thought into it, and it shows. Congrats for doing such a primo job. While I ususally don't like Kido, I can say that this is incredibly awesome and interesting. And that's all you're getting from me for his Kido, it's too hard to describe in words. Philosophy is good. He's really smart, powerful, and skilled with his sword, sorry for my bluntness. Zanpakuto, Shirohane, is good. I was going to name Gai's Kakusei "Kurohane", but seeing Hiroya put the kibosh on that. A blunt Zan, that's pretty unusual, but it's also pretty unique and cool. Anyway, his releases are well-written, his second Bankai is unique to me, but it's certainly an interesting concept. Summoned Creature is good, his weaknesses are plausible. Fighting style, I don't see that on many articles, and once again, you've done a good job. Anyway, his trivia is interesting. Sorry if this review wasn't any good, Njalm. Anyway, Dues' Verdict: 10/10. You've done a superb job here, Njalm, and that's an understatement. If you feel like, could you tell me what you think of Hizashi Yoshi, my main female and absolute favorite character, who's still a bit of a work in progress, please? PersonaSuperiorDeus 06:30, June 1, 2011 (UTC)

Hiroya
What want to do, is inevitably the natural progression of Hiroya's magic, but given that its YOU creating these abilities, I'm sure they'd be balanced and all. To be honest I'm doing the same thing with Kenshin. I have a few sword techniques that are inherently kido-based, since technique bypasses barriers (warping space), and the last three I'm working on, shed the physical aspect and start manipulating reality.

As for where to go with Hiroya, I can see him having techniques that actually go about disrupting or offering greater protection from reality warping abilities. In time Hiroya should be able to stomp your Jusanseiza character as his defenses go beyond the physical. For now since thats the concentration of his abilities, I'd go with that. Not sure how helpful this actually was but its all I have for now. I'll let you know when I have more ideas.

Mortfleau
Interesting concept, though I'm still working with the Epithet, since after some consideration, its like...a Diabolus isnt born knowing it, but they have to discover it, in a somewhat similar manner Shinigami go through to learn the name of their Zanpakutou. Only there isnt another entity. I'll have to reword how Epithet works but it will still be the same thing. But this does provide another group that the diabolus would be interested in, Dorothy herself too (whom is undergoing an..overhaul of sorts. Well more like clarification of abilities and the addition of spells in a similar manner to Hiroya. Again that character is a great source of inspiration for me, I can't tell you how awesome of a character he is).

Jusanseiza Mission
We shouldnt necessarily stick with it, I only mentioned it, because I thought it would be a cool idea to reintroduce them, and also as a means of providing an explanation for what happens to those supposedly "killed" in the spirit world. I figure it would open up a lot questions just by itself. But we should create some generic Diabolus. With the update on the Diabolus page, we can make use of the images, and create "template" monsters and the like. Shouldnt be too hard. Sort of like those Togabito or whatever they're called from the new bleach movie. --- Illuminate Void (Talk) 02:56, June 1, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, I'm on Chatango, just hit me up whenever. --- Illuminate Void (Talk) 18:27, June 1, 2011 (UTC)

Tsuchi & Miyata
Great idea, it'd be a great chance to use em again, and I'm itching to use Tsuchimikado in a battle and use his Kido in such crazy and innovative ways. Man that'd be fun. Alright we can do a team up, and the Jusanseiza would be interested in poking around to get intel on the tournament anyways so it works out. --- Illuminate Void (Talk) 15:20, June 2, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, I think I've got Tsuchimikado with most of his abilities out of the way. We should also figure out a team name, and go on from there.

Alright, if you dont mind, I'll write the entry for our team on the Tournament of Spirits Arc. Hmm and do you mind if I change the team name? Tsuchimikado would likely change it into something ridiculous like..."The Dynamic Duo" or "The League of Extrarodinary Gentlemen". --- Illuminate Void (Talk) 15:27, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Madame Amarantha
To be honest, I had already screened through her abilities long before you asked me for the review, so consider this an applaud on the work you've done for her. The way you've constructed her as both powerful and yet as a guide, like Urahara only human and not bat shit crazy, is very welcoming, and the fact that she is so set apart from anyone else on the wiki also makes the character just....well awesome. I love the way you've constructed her knowledge of magic, and I have to say I did hit a rut with both Tsuchimikado and Dorothy, but thanks to you, devising their particular specialities and unique magical abilities is MUCH easier now, so you have my eternal gratitude for that. Overall brillant character, but this is by no means the official review. --- Illuminate Void (Talk) 02:49, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

Epithet
I think its a bit odd, normally you add a lot more detail regarding transformations or other abilities, yet this one seems to be...lacking the usual spunk I see in your other works. Also, you never translated the meaning of his Epithet. But as you said this is all relatively new, so I assume things will be updated as new info becomes available right? And yes I suppose I agree that an Epithet would possibly be stronger, in line with the Segunda Etapa. At the moment Im currently editing Dorothy (on a seperate document, before I copy/paste it onto the editor), cleaning up grammer, refining abilities, etc. Though her magic section is a work in progress, but at least its in progress. To give an example of an Epithet name, here's Dorothy's: Marrubrum Sineluce Cael Gemma Amoenae (赤の海光のない空宝石を嫣然一笑逸品(Aka no umi kō no nai sora, hōseki o enzenisshou ippin); Latin and Japanese for "a sea of crimson, lightless sky, bewitching gem"). --- Illuminate Void (Talk) 21:55, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

To be honest, it wasnt what I originally intended either. I did plan to have a very angelic Epithet, but then I realized that it didnt quite fit with the purpose and meaning behind the Epithet. Dorothy as I've portrayed her is a monster, and by invoking the clause that brings out her true form, the physical manifestation of their true nature then it should be just that. Therefore her Epithet is a monster. Still in the context of exotic, it could be considered beautiful but that lies in the eyes of the beholder. I suppose to any Diabolus she would appear more beautiful than she was as a human but thats perception. At least thats how I've wrapped my head around it. Tis a shame though, I really wanted to RP with Yuki and her demonic characters. Would have been an interesting encounter. Oh and good going with your RP with Rutilius against Riki though. Very well done. I'd be RPing a lot more though I find myself occupied with a load of irrestible fanfiction. I suggested this one to Kai, but if you're interested, I think you'd enjoy it too: Harry Potter and the Methods of Rationality. --- Illuminate Void (Talk) 20:24, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

Izanagi
Hmm, after reading his history, and pondering a bit more about his Zanpakutou, I think its possible that Iwanaga would have recruited him, and at the time, been the only one capable of withstanding the....deathly effects of his Zanpakutou. The way her spiritual energy is aligned makes her....at least in my opinion, and at the time largely immune to the effects of his Zanpakutou. It would be the first time in his life where someone near him didnt inexplicity drop and be torn apart by their own nightmares. If you want we could do a small RP regarding this. Just an idea. --- Illuminate Void (Talk) 01:10, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

Howdy
I did what? When did that happen? Thing is dude, I can barely get posting on anything at the minute. I'm in school atm, not home, so that's how I managed to get online in the first place. Still no word on that new router, either. My local schools ban webpages (mostly game sites, and the like), along with half the pages on the actual wiki. Its gotten so bad I can't access NF at all anymore in here >_< Our tourney match, along with the great majority of my current RP's and character articles, are inaccessible. I haven't even gotten to read your post, yet. Complete annoyance in my eyes. And I can't punch out that review I promised yet either, for the same reasons above. Yes, my school sucks :P Kenji-Taichō (Talk)  10:50, June 1, 2011 (UTC)


 * And I think that's the greatest understatement of the century :P It can be tolerated, to a degree at least, but a 10 hour ICT exam thrown into the mix with a psychology one later in the month doesn't help any >_< Kenji-Taichō (Talk)  11:28, June 1, 2011 (UTC)


 * I managed to get a little time on the computer without my router disconeccting me from the net. Sorry for the long wait, but its your turn again on the tourney match, pal. Very nicely done, btw :P Oh yeah, if my reply is slow, its my connection. Right now, its basically hanging on a cliff edge and could fall at any time :( Kenji-Taichō (Talk)  09:04, June 4, 2011 (UTC)


 * I don't mind, pal. We certainly need to do another RP at some point, 'cause this was too good to restrict to one :P I enjoyed that match very much; heck I enjoyed the entire tournament, so cheers for that, dude. I got to RP with Yuki, who I hadn't worked with in ages, and got to have a pop at Hiroya as well. You have got to be the most detailed person I've ever done an RP with, which made it all the better. Nicely done, Njalm. My hats off to ya, pal. Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  11:07, June 4, 2011 (UTC)


 * We'll need to do that, but can it wait until Monday or Tuesday of next week? My new router should be here by then, so I'll be fit to post without fear of my internet suddenly crashing on me or me driving my fist through the thing in frustration :P I've had to restart my com twice in the last hour just so I could keep posting on our tourney match and my other RP's. When I get my com sorted out, Void will be getting a message, but don't sell yourself short, pal. I've read quite a bit of The Swan and the Hunter and know your both pretty darn good. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  11:30, June 4, 2011 (UTC)

Busted lol. I don't even remember where I found the link to the anime database, but I've got a few pictures off it. The place where I got a picture of Hiei and decided to use his pics for Kentaro as well, not to mention Kenji's as well. But I never got Hentai, to be honest. Its pretty... well sick, to be blunt about the thing. You want a good site, then check out zerochan. Its pretty good, though unless you know the name of the person your looking for, its like looking for a needle in a very big haystack :P <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  16:48, June 4, 2011 (UTC)


 * I'd say very unique lol. Hence why I write about 90% of my own articles without any outside help. The rest is my girlfriend, whose eye for mistakes and nice little additives to an article is nothing short of amazing. The leg strap that holds Riki's zanpakutō in place is one such additive. Only problem I have with the anime database is that they usually only have one or two images of each person posted. A good tactic, if your looking more pictures, is to find out the name from the database and then check zerochan as well, 'cause it generally holds more to pick from. Though having less pictures does let you go pretty wild with their released states and appearance therein, though sometimes I feel a pictures good at sparking my creativity :P The database is good for getting their basic appearance, like hair color and such, though. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  17:15, June 4, 2011 (UTC)


 * I have another plan dude, 'cause that prize would offset the balance of Kenji's current skills and make him drastically overpowered at present; something I don't wanna happen because I'd lose interest in him as a character if I suddenly just piled on abilities. If its fine with you, the powers the sword has at present, namely the seperate source of spiritual energy, will be sealed by Hiroya's spell and a sheath of Kenji's own making after the tourney. That way, the only thing it does is create new techniques to suit the wielder, which would require a large amount of time to familiarize himself with the weapon in the first place. That would essentially make the weapon an extra sword that happens to be unbreakable until a certain amount of time passes, and since Kidō has been found to age during Hachigen's fight with Barragan, the seal would eventually erode with the passage of time; allowing Kenji to use its full power. If that sounds fine with you, I was wondering if you'd jump in whenever Kenji receives the weapon and describe the spell yourself? <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  18:01, June 4, 2011 (UTC)


 * I don't see why there'd be problems, though I'll get him to read the above messages and see what he thinks about it. The sword will remain, only its own spiritual energy will be sealed for a time in-story, with its full potential slowly revealed and brought out. We could even say that Zettaiteki wore away the spell over time as a counter measure. Anyways, I'll see what he says. P.S Cheers, btw :P <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  18:11, June 4, 2011 (UTC)


 * Kenji + Sacred Spell = Pain and hospitalization for a time after the tourney >_< That's fine with me, pal, and perfectly justified. Kenji's skill in Kidō, while impressive, is not but a candle compared to Hiroya's epic mastery :P Do what you need to pal, that is if Twilight's happy enough with the plan. If anything, Kenji's quite durable, though most of its stubbornness lol. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  18:32, June 4, 2011 (UTC)

Guess it'd be a dual flight, then. Kenji makes friends quickly; even more so if it happens to be a friendship forged in battle, and if anything, he'd feel he had to return the favor in some way for the times Hiroya has healed him; so he'd likely help if the winged folks decided to go after Hiroya. Besides, Kenji's fond of his costume, which Hiroya happened to fix up perfectly, which would be more than enough reason for Kenji to give him a hand. Wow, I just had a serious case of deja fu there. I hate it when that happens :P <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  18:52, June 4, 2011 (UTC)


 * Twilight's on board with the plan, though the basic catch is that Hiroya was taken to the tourney for a second reason beyond him being powerful enough to compete and possibly win: which is the simple reason his skills in Kidō are advanced enough for him to partially seal Zettaiteki if Twilights guy didn't have enough power left to do the sealing himself. If your okay with the reason, then we're good to go with the idea we talked about, pal. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  20:30, June 4, 2011 (UTC)


 * I choose to look at it in a way that he fears what Kenji may become lol. Makes me happier that way, though you do have a good point. Coincides with what I was hoping for though, so I'll look left and right with a bemused expression and pretend I didn't see it :P Anyways, I'll drop ya a line when the time comes, dude and watch you work your majic... literally. Cheers! <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  20:41, June 4, 2011 (UTC)


 * Lets all pretend I never saw that and that my last message to Twilight was perfectly justified >_< Cheers for the heads up, pal; though its his turn now :P <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  20:57, June 4, 2011 (UTC)


 * Your turn on the match to work your magic, pal. Oh yeah, Hiroya's gonna have another appearance in the closing scenes to receive some prizes as well. I've no idea what they are, though. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  22:16, June 4, 2011 (UTC)

Hope you'll enjoy it :P Anyway, I'll review 'em when my new router lands, (hopefully later today or tomorrow) 'cause this router of mine at the minute is nothing short of pathetic. The signals up and down like a hen pissing on snow; I could have a solid and stable looking signal one minute, then it suddenly dies and the web-pages I've got open close. Pretty annoying, considering it doesn't give you the choice to save your tabs and the work I've done. The changes I made to Ashni's hollow abilities took me three different attempts before I managed to post it :( <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  14:24, June 6, 2011 (UTC)

I do all my office works on the old laptop (doesn't have internet) 'cause it removes any temptation about jumping on the net for a while when I need to do work on Microsoft access, excel, word etc etc for school or something like that, ya know? When I'm reviewing I do it on the desktop and usually shrink two seperate web-pages down so both can sit on the screen beside each other; one the actual page and the other the talk page of the article I'm reviewing. Then I can scroll down and read through bits easier instead of remembering things and going back continually to see whether or not I remembered it right :P <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  16:35, June 6, 2011 (UTC)

Yo

 * Hey I am working on my Gotei 12 Sqaud captain. Minoru Tanaka I have a lot of grammer fixing but aside from that do you like his code of ethics?: The Twilight of Your Despair 22:13, June 1, 2011 (UTC)

Njalm2
Have I done something to offend you?: The Twilight of Your Despair 21:54, June 3, 2011 (UTC)

Just checking as for Minoru he isn't a mad scientist or a lazy genuis like Urahara but a typically scientist that "could" turn into a mad one. But he is kind of like a good middle version betweenn Mayuri and Kisuke.: The Twilight of Your Despair 22:06, June 3, 2011 (UTC)

Power Corruption Possession: It lacks an inner spirit but it is sentimental. Zettaiteki even though it is sentimental it really only true friend is to power. If is current master's mind isn't strong the sword other time and use will make the master feel invincible. The master will go an a rampage until the later are killed. The sword immensely overwhelming power is due to this, as it will control a weak master to fight. (Souzou clan member cannot be possessed by this effect.) As the King Kiyoshi has to protect all his species treasures and the ones that rightfully uses or have earned them.: The Twilight of Your Despair 20:56, June 4, 2011 (UTC)

Nice post and I responded the best I could. Now its your turn and the prize you get is one wish that Hiroya would want via Kaosu's powers. However, be realistic with it. And that isn't the only prize but the best one.: The Twilight of Your Despair 00:10, June 5, 2011 (UTC)

Hey its your turn and its about time I give you one of the prizes a wish from Kaosu as Kiyoshi is far too weak to grant wishes. However despite Kaosu being a neutral character neither good or evil he is a trickster like how Chaos which is his name in japanese form is unpreidactable and can be helpful or harmful. So whatever wish or request if you take one might come with a price or condition.: The Twilight of Your Despair 19:48, June 6, 2011 (UTC)

Its technically Kenji post but if you want to post as least to what Kaosu said thats fine. Also I thought a better ending than just sending them directly home as that would be lame. What they are going to have to do is something very slightly like how Ichigo went to the Soul Society for the first time when the they went through the Dangai.: The Twilight of Your Despair 20:57, June 6, 2011 (UTC)

Now we just have to wait on Kenji. Side note I was surprised at the wish you asked for after the Tournament when Hiroya gets to Karakura he will be greeted by Kaosu and the completely restored school. Also I would think that by xams we will go in the Gen3 so I was think in a sepearate none fighting rp that Kaosu and your Ruler of Hell in an avatar form have a very "small and brief talk" as to the future. After all the tournament and the school being restored his the most Kaosu would have done in thousands of years.: The Twilight of Your Despair 23:41, June 6, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I thought they could leave Hell in an avatar and be restricated to the power of a Captain but maybe I just miss read it. Beside only Arthal himself could harm Kaosu and vice vers, abiet I think neither can kill each other. Reason Arthal is a being that is part of Hell. Kaosu while a Kosumosukihaku 100 percent and isn't any part of any other species is also something else which at this time I will not say as that is a secret (and no he isn't "God" like the Catholic one.). But how about if not Arthal if you can think of a reason for him to talk to Kaosu than how about Hiroya have a short talk with him.: The Twilight of Your Despair 00:01, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

Omnipotent normally mean strongest in all of creation. I mean its your character but Kaosu is a reference and talking character only like yourself. Meaning other than referred to or is talking he doesn't get much spot light. Inaddition his Spiritual Power alone can destroy a planet not including his Philosophy powers which are even stronger. Now its not like Dragon Ball Z that with one single small energy blast he could destroy the Earth, but he has attacks, abilities, technique abiet not many but that can still achieve it. His greatest strength is his intellect. As he pre-dates time and has existenced till now he is one of the smartest being in all of creation abiet not even he is all knowing. I don't suspect that Kaosu could kill one Obimates but I don't think they could either for his Deity Aspect all always active that means Sekkiseki and Reason doesn't work on him, and as a Kosmosukihaku demons cannot touch him as his Spiritual Power would purify them. I don't think that it would do any realistic harm to them but against any other demon other than the four Obimates no Demon can harm him.: The Twilight of Your Despair 22:21, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

Yes your right about the Opimates and Kasou in the last message mostly. However one thing you got wrong. He can move freely but like the other first Kings of the other Ruling Species can only do some much as their powers are so great that it would easily harm the balance of the universe. And that is why at least the First Kings of Life, Destruction, and Creation aren't the Kings anymore. But Kaosu its not like I am going to go around and put him in every main event. Just the one I had with Kenji and this one was for special reason.: The Twilight of Your Despair 23:31, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

Hey this is another prize for you. I am making the Souzou Clan Royal Family and its current member are Kiyoshi, and Void has a character the oldest brother. I was think if you want to make one of his brothers even at a starting level than thats fine.: The Twilight of Your Despair 17:01, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

I wanted to let you know how they are going to leave that place. Inshort after they run to Kiyoshi and Masanori they will grab them and enter the portal and fly them through the Dangai.: The Twilight of Your Despair 23:01, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

Your turn as Masanori is to far away to save him and Kenji is too tired to help him. So logically Hiroya with his vast ability in Kido can if that is fine. Cause if not I will have Kaosu save him. And I really don't want to use him anymore than possible after he grants Kenji's wish he will leave.: The Twilight of Your Despair 19:34, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

Alejandro Nuevo
One review done and dusted, pal. You'll find it on his talk page. And sorry for the long delay in getting that punched out for ya. I didn't do it last night 'cause I was looking to get my RP's posted on, and in some cases, finished or close enough to finished. Its pretty long, and I included some of my own views on how certain powers could be expanded and such. Whether you wanna heed 'em or not, is entirely up to you :P Hope its to your liking, pal. Oh yeah, would you mind doing a full review of Ashni for me? I finished her off yesterday. I tend to struggle creating female characters and would like a second opinion, if you wouldn't mind. And since your not familiar with her racial standing, just focus on the Hollow side of that particular section if you do review her. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  10:22, June 5, 2011 (UTC)


 * Cheers, pal. I didn't create the race, though the similarities are quiet pronounced. My problem is that I've got a pretty big roster of characters, so there's always gonna be some sound or look rather similar in terms of race. It simply can't be helped, though it doesn't stop me trying :P Half the reason why I asked you to give me a review though, is because both you and Raze seem to have the beautiful habit of inspiring me with ideas once I have an idea of what it is I need to hon in on and change. I've already got a neat little idea for her Garganta, as well as the protective skin - which won't be there as a skin at all, but rather something else. I'll change up her zanpakutō a bit more as well, to avoid any similarities with Jr's (my new name for Twonjr lol). Cheers for pointing that out, btw, pal.


 * In fact, I've just had a brainwave for a nice release for her. Kinda fits in a contradicting kinda way... how does emotional control of others sound to you? Say if the foes angry, the power of her release manifests in such a way to weaken the opponent. Basically anger dulls their blade. On Alejandro's article you've said people draw the wrong conclusion about his armor being impenetrable. If her opponent thinks they can't hit her, for example, and show fear or hesitation as result, she receives further protective bonuses? It'll be a different mesh of different emotions, that are constantly changing and altering throughout a battle. Needs a lot of work I know, but what you think of the idea? <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  17:38, June 5, 2011 (UTC)


 * Hmmm, looking at it, that's a pretty nifty idea. It would sure as hell put an end to any clowning about :P Only problem is that I myself wouldn't be great at portraying a zanpakutō like that 'cause I hate most things related to science, meaning I never paid attention to it in class. I dropped the class like a bad habit the second I was fit to, so there'd be way too much research needed on my part to make it sound even anyway remotely correct and good; and if I ever had to explain it in an RP, I'd be up a well known creak without a paddle >_< I'm gonna hit the drawing board and see what I can come up with here. Basically, I'm trying to make something that isn't easily gotten around, and since it deals with emotions... I've got it. Okay, time to see how far I can take this :P <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  18:26, June 5, 2011 (UTC)


 * Thanks for the offer, pal, but I've got roughly half the zanpakutō written out and the rest with basic pointers done already. I would've messaged you last night that I had started it, though my router crapped out again when I tried to download new updates for the add-ons I use on Firefox. A simple download ended up taking me close to an hour to complete and my temper wasn't the best :P <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  14:06, June 6, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I saw Alejandro's changes. One thing I do ask is that you don't touch the zanpakuto, dude. Plot reasons and such for later on. When I've got more reliable computer access than my little cousins notepad, I'll add a little bit more to Yoshiaki's powers and such so its easier to interpret. But you've summed 'em up nicely, and added your own ideas as well that work; such as knowledge about Kitsui. I'd upgrade that to Team Sanretsu though, as Yoshiaki essentially trained them all at some point, though Kitsui more than anyone else. His knowledge regarding the Order as well would really only stretch to the current leadership, as he never actually visited Horiwari, though the knowledge is still there. Anyways, you done a good job with it :P There will eventually be more Yuengiri sealing techniques and methods posted, and as long as they aren't ones Kenji or Kyo develop independantly, Yoshiaki would've known them as well; so feel free to add them when that happens, dude. Anyways, any form of kido you want Yoshiaki to be more proficient in to help Alejandro out? Except his zanpakuto, the powers he demonstrates don't really impact anything anymore so I've got a degree of freedom in that respect; so I might as well angle his powers to help you out a little, pal. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  13:38, June 9, 2011 (UTC)


 * The hunchback was no influence, but now that you mention it, I can see where your coming from :P Yeah, its no secret to why Kitsui was created now. Averian simply wanted the Rei Furashuu. He's got enough time on his hands to do things like that, but Kitsui managed to get away before he gained the mastery Averian sought. Averian could never manage to kill Kusaka after all, so he needed another with the skill, and since he didn't know about Sojiro, and didn't have the means to kill Tadashi either, creating Kitsui seemed like a good idea to me :P Anyways, make whatever you need, pal. As I said, Yoshiaki himself plays little part in future events except as a reference point, so if you benefit from it, its all good in my mind. Create what ya need, dude. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  15:10, June 9, 2011 (UTC)


 * New routers here, and I'm in a much better mood :P Now all I have to do is see whether or not the thing disconnects me or not >_< Well, there's a reason Averian's been portrayed as quite weak so far. When he first appeared, it was Kenji and Van who faced him; and Averian himself wasn't at full power. He can siphon his own energy to his subordinates, weakening himself but strengthening them in the process. He had made the trip to the Human World at that time to recharge by killing a few Shinigami, but ran into two above what he was expecting and was forced to retreat. When he fought Kusaka the first time, he was trying to create Okita (Kusaka's inner being) to essentially enslave Kusaka's body and powers. Kusaka's will was a little stronger than Averian had anticipated, and both Tadashi and Shin happened to be there as well, along with Yukimura; so he was outnumbered as well. Kenji himself was floating around on the outskirts observing things as well, so he'd have had little choice but to retreat. The same thing was true for him when he faced Kusaka for the second time, since he had further empowered some of his subordinates, making him weaker when Kusaka arrived to defend Ino. And Kusaka at that time had learned his Bankai, which Averian wasn't expecting. His defeats have been of his own doing, through empowering others at his own expense and basic underestimation of his opponents. Hope that clears things up a little, though I get what your saying. It makes it look a little inconsistent I know, but there was a reason for it. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  10:01, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

=P
Just saw on Ken's talk page that you were referring him to make a pheromone control zanpakuto. I kinda already have that on Reiki already. But shhhhhhh! Don't tell Ken cause this'll mean that I will have a 1-up on him yet again..effectively equaling the score between us lol. <font color="#0255255" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#2550255" face="Tahoma">Light  19:34, June 5, 2011 (UTC)

Yea I just went and changed it, I meant pheromones but wound up putting hormones in the zanpakuto description as you could tell from the first sentence in the description. Oopsie. <font color="#0255255" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#2550255" face="Tahoma">Light  19:42, June 5, 2011 (UTC)

Hahaha! My theory worked like a charm =P Whenever I say anything about you on a talk page you come zooming in. I swear its more handy than the bat signal. lol. I know you aren't trying to be mean, thats why I said I had to factor in my laziness as well. haha. There are no ill will feelings here pal. Hmm I do pose a question however, with the quadrumvirant (Spell check please? lol)..ummm Q4 haha. Have you four realized that essentially most of you can be negated by the senior fighters of the GF? Like for instance most of the Q4 use illusions, elements, and kido. Those can all be displaced by Van (not trying to make him sound godly) but that's just his innate skills by themselves, then you have to factor in Kenji, Shade, and the others for being able to do the same and what do you get? Just 4 really old people lol. Hmm..I was wondering if you would perhaps delve into something a bit different. Let's say a control of a power that hasn't been utilized yet. That way its not normal enough to be countred easily but is still capable of being comabted against. Cause you said on the talk page of your group that the Q4 would be able to be comabated against by no less than 2 people. But just using yours as an example, your Q4 member wuld have a tough time against Van alone as he uses wind and illusions. Unless I misinterpreted this wrong, then Van could fight him alone....I don't like that...I want baddies that'll shred the universe to pieces you know? lol Cheers anyway pal =) <font color="#0255255" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#2550255" face="Tahoma">Light  23:20, June 11, 2011 (UTC)

Haha Ah. I see your point but a few quick errors...er...points =P Van's current form is as strong as someone already utilizing their shikai, his transformation puts him above Bankai strength....powerful but not withoutits drawbacks.

Also Van's crystal ability has been relegated to the point that even is he faced another crystal user (popping up mighty fast now I might add lol) he is capable of manipulating an opponent's crystal as if it were his own limbs so to speak (Taking Iwanaga into consideration). For isntance...party A utilized a crystal spear at Van, Van could stop its trajectory, re-mold it into a lets say a koala and launch it back at party A, without party A being able to re-gain control. Does that make sense? I'm not too good at explaining things when I just ate haha. But attacking him with a wooden sword? Wouldn't it just crystallize and thus make it pretty useless anyway? lol

Hmm you mentioned Anti-energy...well it was close, Van's abilities are more anti-powerful. Like one abiity grows more powerful the stronger a barrier is used against it. Though Jishaku would delegate Van to seemingly another plane as time, space, kido, elements, and other things like that practically become useless as they enter the time dilation field and slowly "evaporate" before even coming into contact with him. But you made a tiny error when you said the wind wouldn't be able to be crystallized. Well when utilizing your wind abilities you would have to manipulate the air currents otherwise it wouldnt be little more than you standing there flexing your mind :3 And if that's the case Van would be capable of crystallizng the Air currents as they do have mass, thus negating the wind manipulations as wind without air curents isn't capable of much if anything. Lol...felt like I just did an RP against him whew! I'm beat hahaha. But seriously I'm appreciating you explaining this to me so I can understand this all better. <font color="#0255255" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#2550255" face="Tahoma">Light  00:15, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Hey N, I would do another bat-signal but I figure this would be easier lol. You're pretty perceptive when it comes to a character's personality and their powers. So I was wondering if you could help me out. When using Rozeluxe, his prsonality seems to clash with his zanpakuto. It just doesn't "fit" with him you know? Any advice? <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Yuri <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  20:27, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

Funny thing is, I based him off my own persona..not how I viewed him but what my friends and even my psychology professor described me as. Hahaha...oh noes..I'm a cliche! T-T... Thanks though. I really do appreciate the help. Water huh? I try avoiding abilities I utilize so I don't have the same character running around you know? I like diversity. But I think I have an idea of what it should be...maybe not completely flushed out but it'll get there =D <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Yuri <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  02:14, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

Hey N! I was wondering if you would like to do an RP when you have time =) <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Yuri <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  19:13, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

Anyone you feel like using or going against is fine with me lol =D From there we can develop a plot <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Yuri <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  23:05, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

Well hmm how about this, I plan on making a new character soon, and after she's finished I will use her and you use someone you think matches up to her and we ca go from there. Sound good? Sorry I missed your reply, I didnt see it in the middle of everything =P <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Yuri <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  20:02, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reason
Sorry for the late... wow, really late reply. I had alot of graduation parties and stuff, as well as other... more... complex things to deal with. Anyways, sure, you can use Reason. I mean, the Reason I made was based on what Aizen and Gin spoke about the dangai current train, so technically speaking, it would be considered Canon, not my work really. But anyways, yeah, you can use it for her. --Seireitou-shishō (My True Identity 01:10, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

Paradiso
Is Paradiso  the correct word for Paradise in Italian. As the sites I use aren't all that good, and I thought that Paradiso is the correct form. The Japenese translation for Heavenly Paradise World I think that is correct, but I am not sure. I will get Void later to check that one later as I Idk how he does it but I wish I knew the site(s) he uses.: The Twilight of Your Despair 22:49, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

RP
... and royally piss him off when he finds out about said deception. I like it, and because of Riki's "jump first ask questions later" attitude, he'd fall for it to. Plot-line, then. At the minute, my characters are trying to learn as much about Kōhai Tochi as they can, and since the Collective Vices have eyes and ears in a lot of places, rumors and tit-bits could easily be planted by them to make Riki and crew walk, as you said, into a trap. Hows that sound to you for basic background? <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  16:01, June 10, 2011 (UTC)


 * To be honest I don't see how he can be seen as a pervert. Just because he thinks Ashni's got a stunning body, doesn't make him one imo. I'd say he's got more of a crush :P Anyways, Rutilus isn't associated with them, but he might have heard of them and the realm itself. As I said, any information would help them out. With Riki chasing rumors and running into Ashni, he'd fall into the trap no problem. Right location, then. Human World sound good to you? It could be done in any city, town or even small village - as long as there is a collection of people to make a rumor believable. More exiles and shady folks in rural areas and cities as well. And since neither seem to care much about collateral damage, it wouldn't be a problem.


 * With the basic background and meeting done, whats the basic middle and end gonna be? I was thinking Riki picks up a little info about his enemies, maybe not even from Rutilus himself. Probably from one of the many drug dealers trying to pawn Reiyaku on behalf of the CV. That could even happen at the beginning, before Rutilus arrives on scene. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  16:29, June 10, 2011 (UTC)


 * Lol. So, its starts with Riki pounding some random drug dealer for info, while Rutilus is simply trying to make Riki a victim as any Diabolus would do. That sounds good enough to me, pal. Any names in mind, then? One thing I do suck at is naming RP's, and I'd rather not give one of my bouts some variation of "Clash!" like I used to :P <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  08:45, June 11, 2011 (UTC)


 * Right, here's the RP: A Diabolic Preparation. I started it off quite long to describe the area, why Riki was there and also how he got the info he needed. Your turn :P <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  09:50, June 11, 2011 (UTC)


 * Hey dude. Zaraikou's left a message on the Jūsanseiza talk page asking to be allowed to join. Raze directed him to you a while back (round the time Jet left) 'cause your the creator and you never got back to him. Now with Kai's nomination, Zairaikou's asking in as well. There's two positions left which are vacant, and the majority of us (Raze, Kou, Lone and probably others I don't know about) have worked with the guy. I don't see why not, though I'll leave it up to you, pal. Drop him a message whenever pal. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  14:48, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for that, pal. You do a good job with Rutilus as well, especially his dislike of people who mistreat animals. Don't like that much myself, to be honest. I've never really focused on hand-to-hand characters before now though, or ones who use so much emotion in their personalities. I'm normally a Zanjutsu man. And don't worry about it. Being the underdog has its own benefits, 'cause often the most desperate plans are the ones that make the thing more fun and enjoyable :P And I think I'm at the pinnacle of desperate right now. I've had practice with Kentaro and Riki before though, but never Ashni - so that should be interesting. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  19:51, June 16, 2011 (UTC)


 * I think I'll take the fleeing option, thank you :P Serves me better in the long run. Now comes the fun part - avoiding death til the reinforcement can arrive. I'll bring them in separately in a few posts time to add a little realism to it, 'cause suddenly adding two new combatants would throw the balance off. I think it'll work in the growing hope factor on my part a little easier :P Your up again, pal! <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  08:35, June 17, 2011 (UTC)


 * Your turn again, pal. I've introduced Ashni, but ignore the mass abilities in her zanpakutō section, would ya? They won't be used. They'll be changed eventually at some point with the new zan I've been working on, so just look at it as a durable nodachi :P <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  12:16, June 17, 2011 (UTC)


 * If its fine with you pal, I intend to have Riki and Ashni get hit with the remainder of the attack - which will pretty much end their resistance. To stop their death and bring a way for a peaceful end, is it okay to bring in Naibu alongside Harumi for healing before my up-and-coming stars kick the old bucket? <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  17:40, June 18, 2011 (UTC)


 * Happy to hear you've got confidence in me :P This RP has been fun from start to now, so I haven't any complaints. I'll bring in Naibu then, though with Rutilus' not being at full power and Naibu's own ideals about peace prevailing over conflict and all, he'd be more apt to let him walk away instead of forcing a fight. But we'll cross that bridge when we come to it, eh? I'll get to writing my post then :P <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  17:55, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, I think you just read my mind lol. I said basically the same thing when Kou told me about that earlier, though we've got plans that Naishō gets over his infatuation in a three way RP between me, Kou and Raze that lets us test our newest additives. Well, now that Hiroya's actually been introduced to the Order, its only a matter of time before Naibu meets him in some shape or form. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  18:30, June 18, 2011 (UTC)


 * Now that Riki's role is pretty much finished in this RP, I was wondering if you'd give me a general view of how you think his abilities and personality meshed in this RP? With the plot direction I plan on taking, Riki gets placed in greater roles of responsibility and importance; not all of it great and some of it questionable, and he'll find himself questioning the things he does and why he truly does them. Kohai Tochi will be filled with temptation after all, considering the types of folks that call it home - so he'll be getting a good bit of screen time and character development in the near-future, so your opinion after having a pretty long interaction with his character would be appreciated, pal. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  20:46, June 18, 2011 (UTC)


 * I think you'll have seen its not often I'm left speechless. Cheers for the compliments, pal; though I maintain it takes an equally good RP partner for any one side to show their best. The two RP's I've done with you now are probably the best ones I've ever done, especially in regards to detail and content on both sides. And all I can say about that is cheers. The only problem you seem to have is his zanpakutō, which is understandable if we were to switch places. It doesn't match at all, though I can't give an explanation for its place in the article without revealing what I've got planned for him story-wise. All I can ask is that you give it time and it'll soon be made clear :P


 * But I made an assumption on Rutilus and his skills when I was reading through his powers, though, which pretty much paid off for me In the RP I think. I made a subtle hint to it with the reference to Riki dodging strikes from Naibu near the beginning of their fight. Rutilus is fast and incredibly powerful physically, something his spiritual energy wouldn't immediately suggest to the reader, which you happened to portray very well. And if your talking about "farming" his weaknesses, is that not what your supposed to do? I thought it showed the superiority Rutilus had for most of the fight :P Anyways, he'd akin to Naibu in that regard, in that they're both very much physical fighters; so with Riki being Naibu's student and often sparring partner, it was pretty much facing an angrier, bloodthirsty version of his mentor - and that's what I was trying to keep in mind throughout the battle, though its obvious Rutilus would push him much harder than Naibu would do.


 * I know it was a difficult question, and I'm sorry about dropping it on you; but I do appreciate the feedback. As I said in my last message, he's gonna get a lot of character development in my up-coming arcs and stories, so I was trying to get in mind how everything compliments the other before moving on. As the creator, its too easy just to nod my own head and say "Yup, everything works" but an unbiased opinion is often the better solution, so cheers for that, pal :P And I think I'm gonna include about the dog as well. Can't believe I didn't make that link myself. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  09:10, June 19, 2011 (UTC)


 * I've read his transformation a few times, so I knew about the colorless world thing :P Anyways, your turn again, dude. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  09:27, June 20, 2011 (UTC)


 * Well played with the parts that include Harumi, dude. I thought that little "side-story" was quite interesting to include, 'cause it displays Harumi's skill in the one area she's quite skilled in and also the choices she'll have to make. But I reckon I'll need to explain after the RP that Riki was taken to Horiwari and given directly to Ino or Karis :P I'll get to my post now, though. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  18:41, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry about now getting around to posting last night, pal. Lost track of time, and when I looked at the clock, it was nearly time for me to marshal the local band parade 'round the village. Everything went smoothly until some idiot I used to know from out of town started shouting at my 5 year-old cousin 'cause I lot him carry the money box around beside me. After I told the guy what I thought of him, he went and trashed the front headlight on my motorbike and dented it pretty badly! I wasn't happy. Still aren't, to be honest. Anyways, rant over with :P Out of my characters there is one with rejection powers - just haven't added 'em yet, hence the emptiness of her article. Rika Nagakura, whose Riki's twin, in fact. She's in the Yuengiri Academy learning to control her various powers and was going to met up with her brother and co. later on before their jaunt into Kōhai Tochi. If your okay with it, I could speed up her entry and add the relevant updates to her article. All it'd be is a copy & paste job from one of my files on the computer, pal though the only thing I haven't actually finished fully is her personality, which wouldn't take long at all. Everything else if good and ready to go. Gives me a good reason to introduce her gen 2 changes as well :P We can still have a meeting with Hiroya later, 'cause we've been talking about that meeting for a while now, and he could show Harumi some stuff in Kidō. I decided to remove Kentaro's Kidō abilities in favor of swordsmanship and the mental abilities to help add more balance to him, 'cause Kidō does give a slew of additional powers and effects. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  15:04, June 21, 2011 (UTC)


 * Oh, he paid for it, alright. I've never seen them before in my life till last night, but my village apparently has two local policeman living in it who were patrolling the route to stop problems. They must be the best undercover duo the force has on the team, 'cause I've never seen them and I've lived here my whole life! Northern Ireland has always had problems with religion you see, and the village I live in has a mixed community, one half who love the parades and the other half not so much. But the cops gave him the choice - pay for the damages then or pay more later, so it got sorted out pretty quick and an old friend of mines looking over the bike right now. Needed the engine touched up anyway, so its a mixed blessing in a way. Anywho, I'll post the actual content and let you have a look at it yourself to see, 'cause it is your ability it might be counteracting.


 * And I'd be up for that with Rutilus and Riki. Adds more continuity for one and makes things a lot more believable in the long run. Someone hurts those close to you, its only natural to want payback, so its something I could see happening easily enough. Then there's the Barghest point as well :P <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  16:13, June 21, 2011 (UTC)


 * Adding more scope to the RP is never a bad thing :P Sorry about dropping this on ya suddenly though, but truthfully I didn't know about the deformities his claws caused until I read your post about them and simply went with the flow; or I'd have had Rika's powers posted before now >_< One thing I guess I overlooked in Rutilus' article, but the good characters are always the ones that surprise you and make you adjust, I guess. Certainly made it more interesting. Anyways, after super I won't be on again until a little later. Heading down to give my mate a hand with the bike, so I'll be there a while. Later dude! <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  17:16, June 21, 2011 (UTC)


 * Don't know why, but I can't seem to string a description or summary at all tonight. I could stare at a page for thirty minutes and nothing comes to mind, so I'll post tomorrow, pal. But another male admirer? I'm gonna have to have him travel with Ino from now on so folks know he's scooped up >_< <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  17:42, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Idea
I have been thinking ways to make more of a selection of characters. Well I think thinking the Bounts were kind of like Vampires to Humans and you, Void, Nexus made the Diabolus. Well what if we Void, you and myself make a Bleach version of the Fair Folk.: The Twilight of Your Despair 22:07, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

Its your turn and then after Kenji final post the tournament will be closed.: The Twilight of Your Despair 21:00, June 11, 2011 (UTC)

Hey I wanted to know if you like the tournament? And about your two wish via Kaosu. You could have an rp just wriiten by you to tell how he now see the new school, and the child that Kaosu made able to find a new home. And about that wish you could make the child a human with powers to have another developmental character. And in Aug the next tournement will start in Valhalla and this time I have new rules and better ways for winner judging.: The Twilight of Your Despair 22:40, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Hey can I ask you a question?: The Twilight of Your Despair 02:08, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

Final Fantasy
Q&A time again, eh? Okay, I'll do this interview in three parts :P

1) Some small parts have been influenced by FF, mainly 4, 9 and 10. I played those ones the most when I was younger and still do. Small things like Kenji's focus on freedom was mainly gotten from Cecil Harvey and Kain Highwind. Cecil in the beginning wanted to be free from the Dark Sword that was forced on him, while Kain wanted to free himself from under Cecil's shadow by finally beating him and gaining Rosa's affection. Kenji in the beginning wanted to gain power so he could escape from under the shadow of his Father (unknowingly at the time under amnesia and trying to assassinate his son). They'd be small influences though, 'cause I try to make my characters original and not carbon copies with slight changes, ya know? Kusaka's womanizing ways for example was picked up from Zidane Tribal, with the reference being furthered when he eventually settles down with Kireina (Zidane and Garnet). The FF references are there if you can pick 'em out, like you've seemed to do (not surprised at that), though the most are actually from my friends in RL. Kusaka's poetry, for example, is one example, as well as Kenji's habit of smoking a cigarette on the anniversary of his adoptive father's disappearance.

2) How I depict 'em appearance-wise? First thing I tend to do before making a new character is sort out their personality, believe it or not. After I get their individual traits in mind, I think about how I'd see them reacting and conversing with my other characters - usually through short stories no more than maybe a page on Word actually :P Kenji was easy to portray though, 'cause I see his character nearly every day in my friends. There's one guy in my group who's name is William Wallace - I kid you not - who fills the basic Scottish stereotype to a tee. He's loud, can handle his drink and doesn't listen to a damn thing any of us say; sames true for rules. He listens to them just so he can break them. Kenji's portrayal in RP's - the slouch, goofy expression and lazy persona - are gotten from him, so I only need to picture a friend to show it. Only problem was finding pictures that showed what I wanted to show. Kaien Shiba was the first to come to mind - as the profile pic shows, though I quickly rethought it and went with Kyoshiro Mibu and Demon Eyes Kyo from Samurai Deeper. Those two characters share the same body, but have completely different facial expressions and persona's that I could match to Kenji's. Kyo with the bottle in the bar, the smoking of the cigarette and the some of his combat skills.

2 Cont) As I said above, I try to picture how my new characters would be seen among my existing ones. Shinrei and Kenji are a good example and so is Kusaka and Shugo Sabishi. The first two had similar personalities due to the likeness of their souls even before they met one another, so naturally that'd make Shinrei even more like Kenji because of role models factors coming into play, as well as other psychological factors. Shugo mimics Kusaka's womanizing ways. Anyways, I try to picture them as part of the group before making them.

3) Favorite villain hands down would gotta be Jecht in FF10. I know he held off Sin and Yu Yevon for quite a bit, which arguably makes him a good guy simply stuck in the bad guy role; though I loved the way he was portrayed in that game, as well as the relationship he had with Tidus. A close second would probably be Sephiroth, though he's way too one dimensional and cliche. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  14:34, June 15, 2011 (UTC)


 * Oh, Seymour was in-depth all right, no argument here. Only problem I have with the guy is the amount of times you kill him only for him to come back bigger and badder than ever. When I killed the guy over Mount Gagazet I thought that was it and basically done a happy dance, only to find him again when Sin opened his gaping maw! I was more annoyed knowing I'd need to do it all again on my second playthrough >_< <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  14:49, June 15, 2011 (UTC)


 * True enough, but I ever much liked Seymour to start with :P When I first fought him and knocked out his Anima Seymour uses that line "That power that defeated Anima. It will be mine!" I looked at my little brother and said "I'm bloody sure your naw gettin' my Auron" and hit him with a very satisfying Hell Fire two or three turns later :P Shiva got KO'd with Oblivion, so it fell to Auron to do the business. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  15:15, June 15, 2011 (UTC)


 * Nope, the two reasons I don't like him are above. You fight him four times as a main boss - which is annoying in itself, and because he said he was gonna take my Auron. No one separates me from the badassery that is Auron. I liked using Seymour to fight that boss on the Mihein Highroad. Another reference. The mentor relationship between Kenji and Maki was originally inspired by Auron and Tidus. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  15:28, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Izanagi
Why am I not surprised that the section your asking for is the longest of the entire article? Oh yeah, probably because I've read it before :P Speaking of reviews, I still need to punch one out for Kou as well. I'll get started on those two soon, 'cause I'm touching up and adding some new info to Kenji's personality to flesh him out a little more. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  16:39, June 15, 2011 (UTC)


 * Your welcome, pal. But when alls said and done, Shinrei's gonna be one of, if not, my strongest character. The potentials there for great improvement, after all. He's revealed his Bankai and almost all his Shikai, yet he hasn't mastered the final release, nor has he conquered his Inner Hollow yet. And controlling his spiritual energy will be a war in and of itself; so when he's finished he may very well be stronger than Kenji is at his strongest level, which hasn't been reached yet either :P You'll see some major changes to a good number of my characters when I finally knock out the Liberation Saga at the end of Part II and get Part III underway.


 * Izanagi is powerful, there's no denying that. And he'd probably trounce Kenji should they face each other one-on-one, but as you said, Izanagi ain't the kind of foe you face alone. Same kinda deal with Averian - they're simply too powerful for your average run-of-the-mill individual to stand against without aid. Take Averian, he can battle the entire Ryū Guard single handedly without releasing, as well as the four Shiba siblings. I imagine Izanagi could do something similar as well.


 * You should include him in the battle for Hama Town. I know for a fact Van will be there, maybe with Kenji and a few more of my characters besides, so there'll be no shortage of characters to have a pop at the Zodiacs and their leaders :P <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  14:37, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

Njalm2
Hey I was wondering since Void is making Kiyoshi's oldest brother would you like to make on of his other older brothers? As how I used Hiroya in the tournament. You could make him a villian that hates the Royal Family.: The Twilight of Your Despair 23:39, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

Ok and about in appearance the only thing is all natural Kosumosukihaku or divine immortals I called them have pale skin and white blood. Other than that its fine. But you need to make him older than Kiyoshi as Kiyoshi is the youngest of four brothers. Also you can make whatever reason why he didn't take the trone after Voids character in their history. I am doing this to make like Royal Families and other families in this way instead of hundreds of clans that we may never finish or get to where they don't overlap we make several few special ones that we can use for as long as we want.: The Twilight of Your Despair 23:54, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

I know I talk about the same things over and over again. But I have an offer to ask. Would you like if Hiroya and Kiyoshi would have a fight and not the title match to end all matches. As I forgot to give Hiroya one last gift. A key to Paradiso. But before Kiyoshi would give it to him he would have to prove that Hiroya wouldn't try to control it and despite Kiyoshi being smart well not even Kaosu is omniscient.: The Twilight of Your Despair 06:52, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

RP New
Sorry for the late post, I've been busy for these past few weeks due to exams and stuff, but now I am back for a week before I head out to Vacation, so hopefully we can move the RP along during that time, anyways your turn on the RP mate. Also thanks for accepting my char into the Jūsanseiza organization......-- Feel the Rage  (Talk)  08:12, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re:Oni vs Daiblous
well yes I changed it after I seen many different versions of 'Godmod" . I meant NOT to insult anyone, I didn't mean it as an insult. I would still love to rp against him, thought I truly wouldn't really Setsuhiro dead.

But about we doing an RP I would love to do it, If I can ask could it possible that it can be a match against Masashi and Izanagi Zetsubou. But if you don't want it doesn't matter.  ~   Sentonara of  the Spirits  20:28, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

Ok I understand, then do you have anyone in mind, because at this moment in time masashi his team are starting to form for the tournament of spirits arc. I would even use Necrid and his group, but idk who you would have in mind. the only thing I know masashi wants an 'Attractive" Male opponent, with necrid it doesn't matter who you want. Though I would really want to use masasi because I haven't figured out Necrid's release.

Maybe you could join the rp with me and void. Then maybe I am wondering could me and you have our own RP. with either masashi, Necrid or maybe you pick a charatcer that you woulsd use then after looking at it then I might be able to figure out who I would use. I don't care if you join us, just have to ask void. ~   Sentonara of  the Spirits  21:07, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

welll Masashi was an experiment that I was working on. I wanted to create a pyscho killer, then he wanted to go after Male opponents the most. So he kinda become a physco gay man with weapons, well I myself am gay. But that doesn't mean anything, when I mean by "attractive" it is meant that masashi likes good looking men yes, but he really is looking for a battle thrill. Such as his actions, he purpose trys to cut the shirts off of a man because he wants to go after two things. As a gay man, he wants a shirtless man and he wants to get the opponents heart. Then he can have the body, basicly he is more of a killer. I hope I didn't creep you out by masashi. Out of all of my characters masashi is my darkest and strangest.  ~   Sentonara of  the Spirits  21:35, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

I dont mind if you join the RP. If Setsuhiro or Ankoku get in the fight, Dorothy will be hard pressed to fight either one by herself. She could certaintly use the help though. --- Illuminate Void (Talk) 22:09, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

For our own personal RP could we have Alejandro vs Masashi. Thought if I may ask, could necrid make an appearance within the story? ~   Sentonara of  the Spirits  02:56, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Then the question is would you like to start out or should I start to rp? ~   Sentonara of  the Spirits  05:52, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Ok I will start it out ~   Sentonara of  the Spirits  06:12, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

here you go your turn best of luck.

Dangerous Play, Alejandro vs Masashi.

 ~   Sentonara of  the Spirits  06:22, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Ok ok, I understand watch my movement more closely. So sorry, I have to work on the tiny things I see my probelm I am think I have to leave the attack opened for the other charatcer to react. ~   Sentonara of  the Spirits  00:36, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

Like I said, I am still trying to learn about rp. I can understand it, you are more expirenced than I am. but I do thank you for pointing these things out. ~   Sentonara of  the Spirits  22:16, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

Ok I redid my part hopfully this is much better than what Happened before. ~   Sentonara of  the Spirits   23:03, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

Review
Hello Njalm2, I was wondering if you're still doing character reviews and was wondering if you could review some of my characters. I have a few, but I guess the ones that I would like your opinion on are Kenta Takeshi and Fujibayashi Hikage. I'm still trying to get better with my writing so pardon the grammatical errors that may exist. I don't have images yet, mainly because I would rather illustrate my own characters like I did with Kenta, versus finding an image that someone else may already have. Anyways, any feedback would be greatly appreciated. Feel free to critique any other works of mine if you have the time or if you would like. Thanks! Northstar1012 00:28, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Jūsanseize
Hey Njalm, I was having some questions regarding the Jūsanseiza and their current status and all. Seems to me that the group is largely inactive (or am I mistaken?) but I was wondering when actual rps/stories involving the organization are setting off (: Kai  -  Talk  16:53, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reply
Well hmm how about this, I plan on making a new character soon, and after she's finished I will use her and you use someone you think matches up to her and we ca go from there. Sound good? Sorry I missed your reply, I didnt see it in the middle of everything =P <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Yuri <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  20:06, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

Hmmm there's a problem with that. I was about to add it before I read your message (no joke) but like Hama Town has a barrier around it that allows those with no ill will/malice or is "expected" to be there without any harm but evil beings may enter yet begin to have their strength slowly drained away from them. Hmm We can figure something out. But yea. We can have several people participate. Hm Though I think the fusion(s) Me and Ken have may be a bit too much for this battle. They will be exceptionally powerful and their Zan's will be hectic to deal with and in nature =P I'm pretty sure the fusions won't be needed unless we want a quick battle. =3 <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Yuri <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  20:19, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

Well that may be true. But the barrier isn't actively visible. Hmm maybe barrier wasnt the right word. Think of it more of an airspace or even a vacuum for dark energies. And besides even if it was a barrier, its not as any of the members of the group have the abilities to actively find and dispell the barrier....well from what I recall from reading all of them previously. But I don't mean to sound rude here but Van and Kenji are roughly pretty close to Aizen in terms of spiritual power and a fusion doesnt just increase it but multplies it beyond a simple 2.5. Think fusions in DBZ. Like when Vegeta and Goku fused they became stronger than buu by leaps and bounds and overwhelmed him completely. And its not a if we developed this fusion to battle any of the Q4 specifically as it was in the works for quite awhile. As for the zanpakuto, that in itself was developed because of the natural harmony between the two would result in total destruction if they fully let loose. And again...not trying to be mean or rude but you sound as if Izanagi's power's are absoute. I read over him many times and found several weaknesses. By the way you say in 1 or two sections, that a certain ability only has ONE weakness. Although based on the simple laws of nature EVERYTHING has more than one weakness or flaw. Oh! And idk if it was intentional but you placed his main zan bankai under the secondary one. Just thought I would give you a head's up if it was an accident. =p <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Yuri <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  00:13, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Oh I know what you meant by the 2.5 amount but what I meant i that Kenji and Van are still getting stronger so it seemed to me like you were giving them a cap at what they were capable of accomplishing. But inferior? Nah...I think ours is in fact a bit better as it doesnt need a riiculous dance. But destroying worlds is exactly what the fusion is capable of doing as it isnt meant to be spammed against any ordinary opponent. Don't get me wrong, the fusion is for those deemed worthy yet a quick means to end the battle. But onto Nigyomada..actually that's where I found one of the biggest flaws in a battle style. lol. But I'll wait to use that in battle. But if its for a plot device, then I take it that it actually doesnt get used in battle? Or is there something you didnt mention? =P And my apologies, it just looked as if it were the wrong one as it doesnt state the Bankai's name in it, But yea...actually, the fusion was decided on a whim. It wasn't meant to combat anyone in particular, the powers and strength level was decided way before the actual plot. Just using it against Averian just so happen to be the most conviniet means to go about doing it =P <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Yuri <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  00:59, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Um....I never said that Van or Kenji was as strong as Aizen in his base form, In fact I dont think ANYONE on this wikia is as he had the power of the Hogyoku and even after using the final getsuga upon him, Aizen was still only capabale of being sealed and not killed. What I'm saying is that Kenji and Van both still have room to grow to the levels of where Aizen is. Hahaha I do love your argument of logic...you do remember this IS bleach right? Logic has very little grounds here in terms of a character's abilities. It is easy for the two to gain the power to destroy planets. Hell it would be easy to grant a zanpakuto that is capable of summning down Jupiter (FF inside joke between me and Ken.) =P And why is it riduculous? Is it because you want an overwhelming battle? Or is it that you want you character to be something of a powerhouse when in theory, anyone can beat anyone else regardless of power-level if decent tactics are used. And unbeatable? No. It just requires tactics once more as there is still the time limit effect to take into consideration, you don't have to counteract them, because as I said before, there are tactis to take into consideration. Who knows, maybe a simple water tpe could destroy even Kamui's zan if it had the right abilities. But dont worry...no one gets me. Well except Ken, and even then he ha his moments where I confuse him lol But if Ningyomada can simply counteract ny weakness, then wouldnt that make it EXTREMELY overpowered just like you mentioned the power to destroy worlds would be? Hahaha...it i I who doesnt get YOU N. =P <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Yuri <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  01:44, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Are you serious right now? You seem to take everything I say persoanlly as if you feel threatened in some way. I didn't misunderstand anything. You ned to calm down and take a reality check before you really manage to piss me off. All I was doing was giving an example, YOU brought up the destroying worlds aspect, I just followed suit by using it as a means to show what they are CAPABLE of doing. That's not to say that they will immediately be able to do it as soon as they fuse. I even said multiple times that Van and Kenji are still growing and have room to acheive that power. And unless you've written the rest of the Bleach series How do you know what any character is capable of doing? You say Ichigo is the strongest and there wouldnt be many fit to top what he did (that was your argument yes?) But did you forget about the Q4 in their entirety?! They're each more powerful than Ichigo and can do far more than he ever could. And I really don't appreciate you trying to seem as though our characters can only fit into YOUR stat range, just because its not the way you want it to be doesn't mean that it has to change and become how you deem it should be. And a gain in power of the magnitude wouldnt be hard. Do you forget what a fusion is? A combination of souls, thusly it would cause their spiritual energies to become fused allowing them to each an unimaginable height. Its not as if there is a comparison to it in canon as it hasnt even appeared there which i why I was using DBZ as my reference point. But this conversation is pretty much moot because your point is that YOUR character can be overwhelmingly powerful but if another becoems that way, it is dubbed unreasonable or unfit. Very well. <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Yuri <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  13:30, June 24, 2011 (UTC)


 * Your friendly neighborhood intermediary here, simply dropping a message :P Okay, I wrote up the majority of the fusion page, including execution and the dominant fusee thing making a more unique being for the dominant persona, so If you've got any concerns with the fusions design, Shiba Satonaka and Jiyū; or the two fusees doing said fusion - take 'em up with me, Njalm and I'll explain 'em. Its just an observation, but when you and Raze sit down to discuss anything it quickly turns into the old redrag to a bull thing and nothing gets rectified or sorted out. Raze asked me to step in 'cause he doesn't want to argue anymore, which I can understand. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  14:34, June 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * Yes, but to be clear you were the one that made agressive by continuing to try to dismiss anything I said. And as I was about to reply to Ken I noticed your comments. Hmm..I do not have an attitude. Its just when I'm trying to explain something and you keep calling it ridiculous as if we have to follow your standards or something. You even said that Van and Kenji have no breakthroughs of their own, Kenji even brought it to my attention before I remembered that Kenji can summons storms and manipulate lightning like no other, and Van can crystallize entire towns if he wanted without breaking a sweat. And please tell me who I act with an attitude toward besides you? The thing with Kou was because we both were having off-days and we both established that to be the problem, but with you, its as if you think I am some kin of child who needs to listen to you as if you have all the correct answers. Anyone is free to speak their piece but when you start insulting anothers work or putting a "cap" on where another character can go is where the problem begins. I do apoligize if I lost my temper but you have to realize that not everything you say has the right tone behind it. If you go back through the convo, you'll see exactly what I mean. The main reason I came here was to see if we could figure out a way to allow your people to infiltrate and disregard the barrier other than someone coming in and saying "Oh I'm powerful, let me just dispell or overpower this.'<font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Yuri <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  18:48, June 24, 2011 (UTC)
 * Very well, I shall let Kenji handle things from here concerning power levels and such. Since my words are so disagreeable even though he says the same things....>.< I guess its a matter of respect. Oh well. But anywho.....hmmm...as for the barrier. I was thinking, one of the invading parties would make an acquaintance of one of the members of the Town. And have themselves invited along with some of their "friends", thus alowing the invasion to go off without any hinderances from supernatural forces. <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Yuri <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  19:19, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

My diabolus
I really have no idea why I'm saying this, but whatever. :L Anyways, I wanted to tell you that after I add his clan's secret techniques, Kanzen shall be complete, and I will devote my time solely to my diabolus until a majority of him is complete. So, thanks for that push to start on him, since I really needed it.