Thread:AbysmalShadows/@comment-2089817-20150123053544

If you have a moment, whenever you can, would you mind looking through the "Stage of Ri" subsection on Seireitou's Hakuda section and telling me if...

Well, basically, am I on the right track there with the conceptual stuff as we've discussed in the past? Or am I still off the mark? Or rather, am I going a bit too "out there" with what I have so far? 