Talk:Vrasgromere

Interesting
Certainly a lot better than my first attempt, I assure you, so well done on your first article :)

Though I do have a few questions...

1) Though I know we never knew how the Soul King established (all of) the Soul Society(ies) *I'm saying this on behalf of those fanfic writers on here who say there are multiple Soul Societies for every country or nation* but why would the Soul King need a general? Would he be that powerless or did he not have the Gotei 13 to rely on at the time?

2) Measuring this deity's spiritual pressure to the Soul King, is like trying to measure Sosuke's Final Form to the Soul King. I know considering the backround he would HAVE to be a powerful being, and as far as dragons go, he's supposed to be the ARCHDEMON equivalent of all Dragons, but I'm just saying. We could just NOT measure his power to the Soul King...just say that his power was well respected by him, or something, if you get my meaning. People who say their character's pack that much heat, usually get targeted by Admins or Captains on this Wiki for criticism. It may not be today, or next week, but sometime a Admin will get bored and drift through different Articles and find yours, and maybe hammer it for that reason.

3) Its not complete, which I'm pretty sure you're aware of. The manual style is what you could compare mine or Admin-equivalent Articles for characters, that way you have something to base your article off of, as far as formats go. Just some advice...

All in all, great Article, I'm just iffy about an entirely new 'Race' of beings that we all have seen in many fanfictions involving Fantasy Genre, so just letting you know about details. Great work and keep at it ;) The Omniscent Shadow of the Moon 03:01, December 17, 2011 (UTC)