Thread:Skinnyberry9/@comment-1399043-20130724204908/@comment-1399043-20130726125153

What I am saying is that you History is so sparse compared to other character. For something as important as gaining Shinigami powers, you cant just say they died and then gained Shinigami powers. It takes years to centuries to train in order to gain Shinigami powers the proper way, why no expand out the character, flesh out the sections (and example of this would be this or this).

Also I dont understand your abyss break, as it seems a bit broken for a human based powers and no basis like Quincy powers, Fullbring or Naturehold. Please explain how Kin obtained divine powers.