Thread:Sagnik007/@comment-1399043-20120426152718/@comment-4509522-20120426210117

You can start by redoing his powers and abilities section. You outright copied the stats from my Shiroi Yoake character and changed one or two words in them (spelled incorrectly somehow) instead of putting them in your own words. You can even see it in the "Great Intelligence" entry where you copied Shiroi's. Your character is male, and according to the Intelligence part of his powers and abilities, he's a girl. So yeah, originality would be preferred.