Thread:Njalm2/@comment-136273-20151115175718/@comment-3403804-20151115192738

Congrats, you were correct, his final PL is 106,800, above the Yonko line. When it comes it his Kido prowess he's an Advanced Master, I think he's at degree 6 or so. About as good as Kazuya, more or less, at least on paper, although Kazuya is better at elemental magic and offensive ones, whereas Hikari's abiltieis seems to be geared towards something else.

Overall, you've done well, you've got the rare ability of being able to describe something in fewer words than most. Which means you don't strictly need to write a lot, of course if you DO strike a balance, the result really shines.