Talk:Kami Kemuri

Review
^_^ Sorry for the long wait... It'll probably not worth it though...since I'm not that good of a reviewer.. ^_^

Intro
Hmm, like how u've done it ^_^..... It tells us good info about the man while not really reading the other sections.. u might wanna check a thing or two on it... Its not the spelling tho.. Its with the punctuation marks.. Small mistakes, who doesn't have them right? 8/10

Appearance
Its decent, it gave me a picture of Kami in my mind while just reading it.. like I said.. Decent enough ^_^ 9/10

Personality
Hmm... ^_^ Its good enough... But It kinda lacks something, I just don't know what...hehehe I suggest using paragraphs while describing one aspect of the man... (Honestly, this part is the hardest so no worries.... <_< i kinda suck in that section).. 7/10

History
Its unfinished so i wont touch this ^_^ hehehe

Powers and Abilities
Love how you made this section... It gives me the idea not just to mess with this guy... His got more! i mean MORE! lol hehehe aside from a few punctuation mistakes and spelling... Its good...Its good.. 9/10

Zanpakuto
-applauds- Not overpowered... Simple yet theres a sense of complexity... Decent, good, fair enough.. u name it lol... ^_^ 9/10

Overall
A very decent article that you'd surely enjoy reading through ^_^... I'd love to see him more in RPs and other stories.. so out of 5 stars.. Ill give him 4 and maybe another half.. 8/10!!! Congrats on making such a good char.... Hope to see more from ya! Lone Black Garuga 11:22, May 19, 2011 (UTC)