Talk:Setsuhiro Gensaku

Very nice character, his history, personality etc was very well layed out and made effectively. The only major problem with this article is the lack of grammar in it, if possible, you should fix up the grammar used in this article, this makes it more appealing to the reader. You could also describe his appearance a little more, such as his facial tone and when it changes etc, overall very nice.The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 06:11, May 20, 2011 (UTC)