Talk:Desmin cao

Spelling and grammar
Can you work on attuning the spelling and grammar of your current content before adding more? It looks little more than an unorganized pile of basic information. Please use the wiki scripting to help make your article look cleaner. See other articles on this wiki for examples of wiki scripts at work. --れび (talk to Lavi!) 21:59, 21 July 2009 (UTC)