Thread:Jasmineandjani22/@comment-18812574-20151224160458

Anyway that message down there is automated, so I wanted to extend a personal welcome.

Welcome to BFF Jasmine! I saw your edits to Ren, I gotta say, she is pretty original. I am not sure if we've had mermaids on this wiki yet or not. Anyway, if you want to sometime you can consider adding mermaids to the Supernatural Creature Project.

The formatting on your article is a bit out-of-order. The infobox template should be the first thing on the article, before the paragraph of description/the introduction at the beginning of the article. I would suggest using one of our newer templates as well, which you can find on the main page. The one you selected for her article is pretty out-of-date. You can use the templates that I've made too if you would like, just please don't edit them. (Shonen's templates) Also you need to add a property template to your articles, which lets other users know who the author is. Just copy-paste this at the VERY top of the article, before the infobox even:.

Please capitalize all proper nouns in your article. It can be a bit tricky knowing what is capitalized and what is not. On our Manual of Style there is a more in-depth list, but basically anything like Shinigami, Soul Reaper, Reiatsu, Zanpakutou, any of that is capitalized. Also please don't under line section headings. Shinigami Powers and Abilities should just be titled "Powers and Abilities." Here's one of my articles if you would like to see how yours could be better formatted: Takashi Sakuma. If you have trouble with Japanese translations, I would suggest reading THIS blog here.

One last thing. On her powers and abilities section you mentioned that she can take out three lieutenants in hand-to-hand. Just wanted you to know that here on BFF we have something that is sort of like an entrance exam, called the RPCQE. It applies to all users (yes I took it too). Basically you are not allowed to create any character above the level of a fourth seat Shinigami before passing the exam. Hanatarou was a fourth seat in canon, I'm pretty sure he couldn't take out three lieutenants even if he tried, just saying.

Anyway, sorry that was so much there, heh. I am curious to see how Ren is both a Shinigami and a mermaid, as it doesn't make a whole lot of sense without explanation. Also, how do people not know she's a mermaid? Is she a changeling or a shape-shifter or something? Anyway, I'll be keeping up with your edits. Let me know if you need anything else. I'm glad you're here!

-Shonen 