User talk:Twilight Despair 5

user:Twilight Despair 5/Achieve 1.

I have Started my Achieve 2.
My last talk page had ninty-one messages so it was time to make a new Achieve.Td5 03:50, January 15, 2011 (UTC)


 * The Twilight of Your Despair 21:48, February 14, 2011 (UTC)

OK then
Im ready when u are...but can u start it? Lone Black Garuga 06:02, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

UR GO! hehehehe ^_^ Lone Black Garuga 06:55, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

ok, unless you give Ciel a very very very very very good reason, he wont fight women... let alone hurt them...yeah i know..he's a softy for those kind. Lone Black Garuga 07:56, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

go! Lone Black Garuga 11:09, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

Kosumosukihaku
I am starting my Kosumosukihaku. Did you have any specifics on the power? I was going to make him quite strong and very old, having access to the rarer techniques of the race. Is that fine?--The Bleach Masta (Talk)  22:03, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

Demono Hizen, I am still working on his Zanpakuto but that is the gist of him.--The Bleach Masta (Talk)  22:53, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

Its fine. I do have to ask you one thing. I know you said that they all have pale skin but the picture I was going to use for Demono is a darker skinned man. It was going to be a nit of a joke on his profile saying that he despised his pale skin and so uses his Zanpakuto abilities to tan himself. Would that be okay with you? I thought it would just be funny.--The Bleach Masta (Talk)  02:19, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah sure. Let me finish up his shikai first. I think I will be keeping him separate from the society for now. If you want to set up the Rp, go ahead. I will post when I add the last few abilities to his shikai.--The Bleach Masta (Talk)  03:06, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

Your post--The Bleach Masta (Talk)  03:42, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

Your up--The Bleach Masta (Talk)  04:08, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

You now--The Bleach Masta (Talk)  04:32, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

Your turn--The Bleach Masta (Talk)  04:55, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

Your turn--<font color="330099" size="2px">The Bleach Masta <font color="330099" size="2px">(Talk)  05:11, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

Back to you now--<font color="330099" size="2px">The Bleach Masta <font color="330099" size="2px">(Talk)  05:25, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

Your turn, not even supreme sense can make up for the total inability to see an opponent--<font color="330099" size="2px">The Bleach Masta <font color="330099" size="2px">(Talk)  05:52, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

Its back to you now --<font color="330099" size="2px">The Bleach Masta <font color="330099" size="2px">(Talk)  06:12, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

The flames boiled away the water barrier but dissipated at the other barrier. Though now Demono has activated Onken which allows him to super heat his blade, making it able to cut through almost anything with ease. That plus his superior swordsmanship makes it his best move.--<font color="330099" size="2px">The Bleach Masta <font color="330099" size="2px">(Talk)  06:29, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

Your turn--<font color="330099" size="2px">The Bleach Masta <font color="330099" size="2px">(Talk)  06:57, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

That's fine. Your up.--<font color="330099" size="2px">The Bleach Masta <font color="330099" size="2px">(Talk)  07:16, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, your turn--<font color="330099" size="2px">The Bleach Masta <font color="330099" size="2px">(Talk)  07:30, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

Your up again--<font color="330099" size="2px">The Bleach Masta <font color="330099" size="2px">(Talk)  07:41, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

Your post--<font color="330099" size="2px">The Bleach Masta <font color="330099" size="2px">(Talk)  08:04, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

Back to you now--<font color="330099" size="2px">The Bleach Masta <font color="330099" size="2px">(Talk)  08:28, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

You can finish it if you want. I was hoping you would catch on that I wanted you to suggest going to Vazdah :)--<font color="330099" size="2px">The Bleach Masta <font color="330099" size="2px">(Talk)  08:55, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

What do you think of Demono's Bankai?--<font color="330099" size="2px">The Bleach Masta <font color="330099" size="2px">(Talk)  23:07, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

RE:Possible Rp
I know this must be late for a reply...But sure I would like to work with you in a RP. Phantom Reaper 15:13, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

Haru is a really impressive, and I would like take that kind of challenge in a RP, if you are still interested let me know. Phantom Reaper 11:24, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

Well, then the next time your own than I guess we can do a rp. Now Haru is an Aizen-level fighter so you can use an Aizen-level fighter or three elite captain-level fighters like someone at Shunsui Kyōraku level. Also, I have been making so many rps lately so can you make it as one your page says you know how to rp. Also, with Haru I like to use in the World of the Living or the Human world.Td5 07:16, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Hey T
I saved the spot for ya just as you asked. Grizzaka 01:27, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Dude, sure u can add that i finished Making my character if u want to check it out Grizzaka 02:13, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Well it doesn't have to be but it's up to you if U want to Grizzaka 03:13, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Kiyoshi
I was looking over your RP with Yuki and I saw your brought Kiyoshi in again. Kiyoshi is always coming into help Shino, you should just make him a move of Shino's Zanpakuto lol :)--<font color="330099" size="2px">The Bleach Masta <font color="330099" size="2px">(Talk)  04:34, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Haha, its cool man. I just saw you brought him in again and thought it would be hilarious if you made him an attack or her zanpakuto. --<font color="330099" size="2px">The Bleach Masta <font color="330099" size="2px">(Talk)  04:48, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah sure. Let's do it tomorrow though. Its getting late and I want to finish up his training with Vazdah first.--<font color="330099" size="2px">The Bleach Masta <font color="330099" size="2px">(Talk)  04:20, January 20, 2011 (UTC)

I will, I have an idea for one but I don't know if you'll like it. It came from thinking of why Demono would want Saido so badly. My idea was that his clan had a special ability where they could intertwine their spiritual power with other beings allowing them to merge for a short time, giving him a boost in power. This would mean he could could call forth a sinner of hell, merge with them and cleanse them afterwards. Thoughts?--<font color="330099" size="2px">The Bleach Masta <font color="330099" size="2px">(Talk)  04:34, January 20, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry about that
As the title says, sorry about that, Twilight. I was in a bad mood and snapped when I shouldn't have. As for Kiyoshi, I'm liking his personality quite a bit. He just seems like a smart man who'll easily get on with others. He's kinda like my own Kenji Hiroshi in the aspect that he refers to everyone by their given name and is good at making strategies and working things out. I'm assuming he's not a bad guy, 'cause it'd be a real shame If he was, ya know? Oh for his spiritual energy, try not to use monstrously overwhelming too many times, 'cause you'll only end up repeating yourself, dude. I'm looking forward to the rest of his abilities, and when he's finished I'll happily have a pop at him! Kenji Hiroshi 12:56, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Good, I don't either. Grudges only tend to get you nowhere anyways. Lets forget about it then, eh? The only demon character I have is Kurayami, and he's a Shinigami/Demon hybrid. I've got permission to make a second, I just haven't gotten around to it yet. She'll be a surprise for the arc I'll be starting a little after the one I'm currently working on gets up and running lol. As for the race you've created, I've got one of them planned as well, (if thats okay) though they're only academy level at the start with a gift for creating reiryoku. He'll be partnering Kitsui Sanretsu at a later date in gen2, so I'll have to get him posted soon as well. As for the spells, are they similar to Kido? Kenji Hiroshi 13:11, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

I was at a bite lol. Nice description. You could that to pretty good use in terms of defense, but be careful with how you use it in an RP. Before I say anything, does it stop the flow of time for the user as well as the one targeted? Kenji Hiroshi 14:01, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Right, that's what I thought the case would be. Be careful using that spell to stop time and then attacking your foe when they're defenseless. Many would consider that auto-hitting, so I'll just give ya the heads up now. No need to change it though as long as your careful when using it lol. As for the race, I'll make two if that's okay. A younger one to partner Kitsui and an older brother to the guy you made. That sound okay, Twilight? Kenji Hiroshi 14:24, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

I could've swore I replied already, but I guess I must've closed the tab I was editing instead. I'll make none stronger than your guy then. If they're too strong when I post the article, then be sure to tell me, okay? The first will be the academy-level guy, but I need to get their descriptions finished before I post 'em, so they won't be posted today. Kenji Hiroshi 15:03, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not worried either way, dude. I'm not sure what route I'm gonna take with the older bro though, 'cause I've only started getting a few ideas together regarding it. Its too early for me to say either way, so when I get a better idea of what I'm gonna do, I'll tell you lol. Kenji Hiroshi 15:27, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Huh?
Sure what's up?? Grizzaka 00:59, January 18, 2011 (UTC)

Um maybe but for right now i'm not really up for an RP but maybe later Grizzaka 01:10, January 18, 2011 (UTC)

Depends.
What's up? Wahpah 02:27, January 18, 2011 (UTC)

Unfortunately, that's also where I go for my translations. :L All I can recommend is typing in "Demon" and settling for a different name.

Wahpah 02:51, January 18, 2011 (UTC)

=P
Eh....i my opinion you dont need to make any more aizen level characters. i mean even i dont have any yet lol. its mor fun to work with lower level chracters and too many aizen levels gets dull and unoriginal after awhile.RazeOfLight 03:45, January 18, 2011 (UTC)

creating characters of the strongest class is pointless asthey cant become stronger really. I mean you can start them from the bottom and grow them into aizen llevel cause not even aizen just started off where he is now. to me that isnt pushing your skills at all because all you have to do is just make them the best of everything possible with one or two weaknesses. pushing your skills would be working up from the very bottom. RazeOfLight 04:02, January 18, 2011 (UTC)i

its fine. im not criticizing you or anything. its just something i dont like to do you know? And anyone can beat sei and kamui....it all comesdown to tactics and strategy. granted you cant be like an 18th seat or lower but still you get my point. its nothing against you personally just my own tastes. thats why i wanted g2 that way everyonestarts off at the same level and each fight would come down to tactics but everyone wants to be the strongest nowadays. im trying to lose a lot of mine on purpose so that others can see that its not all about winning. RazeOfLight 06:33, January 18, 2011 (UTC)

Hmmm i think I'll use jikan and kyodaina. to give them a test run. hmmm...well i have to finish their battle skills but still. RazeOfLight 00:41, January 19, 2011 (UTC)

well you can start it up that way i have the link. i havent gotten the chance to edit them yet cause everyone is on my caseabout my rp with them...sheesh. lol jk jk. RazeOfLight 02:15, January 19, 2011 (UTC)

sorry i was working on my personal stuff instead of worrying about everyone else. RazeOfLight 05:24, January 20, 2011 (UTC)

What in the world are you talking about? I didn't change anything...you may want to pay attention a bit more. lol They are in the Human World. Hence why they are in Hama Town. And Idk who told you that rule but they were wrong cause either participant can start thefightat any given moment. No one person hascomplete control over anything that happens in a RP between two people.RazeOfLight 18:40, January 20, 2011 (UTC)

No thats not it at all. Hama town is in the world of the living. Idk what you are reading cause I NEVER said that they weren't there. Are you sure youre reading it correctly? And yes I know all about the physical planes of existance, the emotion planes, the metaphorical planes, etc. So please dont try to inform me. T-T its all right there. They are in Hama Town which is the human world (world of the living) so its all still on track RazeOfLight 19:11, January 20, 2011 (UTC)

its fine.i understand college keeping you awake...although i try to get as much sleep as possible.RazeOfLight 19:34, January 20, 2011 (UTC)

your turnRazeOfLight 19:58, January 20, 2011 (UTC)

Your turn. But Where are you getting your info from exactly? NO being is above the soul king...created race or not. That's just overpowered and needs to be toned down severely as the soul king is the one that holds everything together. RazeOfLight 21:02, January 20, 2011 (UTC)

You can do whatever you want to do. Your arguments have several flaws.One Yahweh isnt being used in RPs, he is based off of religious views of the author so implementing him in an argue hurts your defense ashe isnt even part of the general continuity. As you are a part of the GF Universe as are the rest of us then that factor doesn't even apply. Now if you went to RP with Ten and Sei then yes, it would make more sense. Which brings me to my second point. Raian. Have you read his character? He has gotten to where he was over time. It wasn't as if he was created in that race from the very beginning. Unlike Kiyoshi who was just made to be that powerful. As I tell everyone from the very beginning I'm shaky on the idea of a charcater being immensly powerful from their initial creation instead of working up to it. If you do not like the criticism then you are on the wrong place as everyone here is free to their own opinions. And do not place an ultimatum in front of me as you will just anger me and that's not good for anyone. RazeOfLight 21:48, January 20, 2011 (UTC)

Its not a conflict. You became upset as I asked a question. And you realize you just proved my point when you responded to me right? AsSei said as long as it effects YOUR work, that does not include joint works. And yes I have called your work OP before and you even saw some flaws in it and changed some things around. So no it was not out of line. I state what I see and only when I see it. It is not an insult. Its someone making an observation. I did not once say you were a bad writer otherwise I wouldnt work with you at all. You may end the RP anytime you choose. I will not hold it against you as there is no point. RazeOfLight 04:05, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Hey man
hope u don't mind but i got u ur Animal partner for the elemental god, hope u like it Grizzaka 00:23, January 20, 2011 (UTC)

Oh my bad, sorry i'll get u ur's soon Grizzaka 02:05, January 20, 2011 (UTC)

here is ur's i hope Grizzaka 02:10, January 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reply
I apologize for such a late reply. My time online is lessened by the day, and usually when I'm on, I don't pay heed to messages. Anyways, about an RP, I would be willing to, but it'd need to wait a while. I'm in the process of designing a new story atm, and I don't wanna side-track, because I can often lose interest in a story if I don't focus all my attention on it. --Seireitou-shishō (My True Identity 05:21, January 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * I would probably use Kamui then, seeing as I've actually never used him for a serious RP, and he is the true heir to the throne of Soul King. Well, the first heir, that's for sure. --Seireitou-shishō [[File:Seireitou's signature picture.jpg]] (My True Identity 05:34, January 20, 2011 (UTC)

RE: RP
Your go for the RP. I am the lightning, The rain transformed 22:04, January 20, 2011 (UTC)

Hmmm
If Sei and Ten agree to it, I'll happily jump in, Twilight. Try not to get anyone too excited, though, encase nothing comes of it, okay? You know how we all got when Sei challenged us lol, so it'd be a downer if it didn't come off the ground, ya know? So, hows things goin' for ya, dude? Kenji Hiroshi 17:32, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Well, if your doing it regardless, then I guess I'm in regardless of what Sei and Ten say lol. But hold the phone, a minute here. Its your idea, yet you ain't taking part? Any particular reason why you won't be? Kenji Hiroshi 18:06, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

From other times as well, eh? Don't remove that, 'cause it'll be a good way to bring Northstar into it if he's interested, saying as how all his current characters are based in his own universe some time in the future. As for the idea itself, nice one. You played Dissidia Final Fantasy, didn't you? The idea sounds a lot like the war of the gods fought in that game, with warriors from different worlds and times drawn together to fight in a seperate dimension to further their gods cause. Only my observation, though, so pay me no heed lol. I'm liking the idea, dude. Kenji Hiroshi 18:37, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Fight to the death? That'd be a problem, dude. If were only allowed Shunsui to Aizen class, then those will no doubt be our strongest characters (probably main characters) so death would be a big, big problem. I'd run it past the others, though we've still got the Kanmuri Taikai to finish off lol. Kenji Hiroshi 19:10, January 21, 2011 (UTC)


 * Sure, I'll have a go against him. If its fine with you though, could I have this as a type of test for three of my weaker characters? Instead of using who I was planning on (Kenji), I was thinking I'd use Kentaro Hiroshi, Jinta Kanō and Riki Nagakura instead. Only one of 'em has any realistic chance of actually holding his own, but I thought it'd be a good chance to write a bit to show their teamwork ahead of my next story-arc. The problem is, I don't wanna start any more RP's this week, since I don't know how often I'll actually be online because I've got a psychology exam on Friday and a party to go to on Saturday, so would Sunday be a good day? As for the chat room, any chat I do, Twilight, I do on the wiki. I don't work with chatrooms. Kenji Hiroshi 18:04, January 24, 2011 (UTC)


 * I know who your talking about and all about the discussion too, and lets get one thing perfectly clear before we continue this conversation. Calling him "narrow-minded" isn't on at all, Twilight. In fact, thats just gonna make me angry. Your free to your opinion if you think he's annoying, but it ain't a view I share, nor will I ever share it. He's trying to help by pointing out the things he did (I read the messages on both sides), since few people are willing to RP with some of the stronger characters on this wiki, and every fanon wiki for that matter. My Averian falls under the same category, and I think I'm pretty lucky to have found someone (the majority of the GF fall under this category) so willing to battle him despite his massive power-level, multiple times might I add, along with some of my other stronger characters, such as Kenji Hiroshi and Saburo Ryuu that I own. It tests your characters limits and boundaries by making them weak and building them up, and allows you to push past their limits in the future. That guy is my best friend when it comes to the wiki, so I won't tolerate anyone slagging him off, on my talk page no less, especially when they call him narrow-minded when I know different. Now, on to the next point. He never once claimed his ways were right, nor perfect. Its a tested method that we both showed to work with Kenji, Yoshiro, Kusaka, Van, Anna, Jitsuzai and other characters we both own. He tries to make his stuff unique and work something in the canon universe to make it more his own than anyone else I've interacted with to the level I've spoken to him, and he does a hellish good job of it if you ask me. Now, I think we'll drop this topic now before we say something we'll regret. Agreed? Kenji Hiroshi 18:58, January 24, 2011 (UTC)


 * Sorry about the above, then. Guess thats what I get for jumpin' to conclusions, eh? Anyways, if he isn't in the GF, then why worry about it? Its not as if you need to talk to the person when your on, or even interact with him in stories. Just ignore 'em and they'll be no worries from you or whoever it is thats annoying you, Twilight. Kenji Hiroshi 19:56, January 24, 2011 (UTC)


 * I get where your comin' from, dude. I know everyone has their own ways of doing things, but starting out at a weaker level is the better course, in the long run, imo at least. I know I'm going on a bit, but its a proven system that works really well. It doesn't just affect the powers, but how the character grows and matures as his powers do. It makes it that much more believable, rather than someone suddenly going "poof, I'm amazingly powerful, here me roar!" or something like that lol. As for this guy whose bugging you, just ignore 'em, and the raw nerve as you put it, won't be so bad. Trust me, no one likes being told their works OP. When I came at the start, my Kenji was shot down almost immediately until I altered nearly every word in his article lol. Kenji Hiroshi 20:17, January 24, 2011 (UTC)

This is gonna get good. I haven't had an RP match with Yuki in a long time, so I'm looking forward to this lol. But Kamui? Sweet! That can only be an interesting challenge :) If Margin's there, I might get another chance to have a shot at him too, considering our last match was fought to a draw. I'll run with Kenji Hiroshi and use this tournament as a way to really break in his new zanpakutō. Kenji Hiroshi 21:44, January 26, 2011 (UTC)


 * Tell you what I'll do: If you want, I'll make an arrangement with you. Since you ain't taking part in either the RP with Sei and Ten, or the tournament your creating, how about we get ourselves an unofficial match-up at the Kanmuri Taikai tourney the GF started before you joined? Pick yourself three of your characters, and I'll use the team I withdrew from the tourney and have a match on the dunes of Hueco Mundo. If your up for it, the members of the team I had then were Shigeru Yuudai (he'll be using his old zanpakutō and none of his newer abilities for continuity reasons), Teruo Yuudai and Tyrell Nishiki (again, just Shikai and no Hakuda skills because of continuity). Now, back to the Valhalla tourney. I think Raze is on hiatus at the minute, so tell me who all is participating firstly, and I'll run a few ideas past you then. Kenji Hiroshi 19:34, January 27, 2011 (UTC)


 * Well the offers there if you want it, dude. As for the match-ups, I'm begging you to keep mine the way it is. I've been looking a rematch with Yuki for ages now, and she's awesome fun to RP with lol. As I said yesterday, our last fight was a draw, so I'm looking to see who comes out on top this time around; Kenji, or Margin. I assume she's using Margin? But its your tournament, pal, so you call the shots on everything lol. I pity the one who gets Sei, though... Kamui's nothing short of a complete beast in combat. Kenji Hiroshi 20:05, January 27, 2011 (UTC)

Tourney
Can I join the tournament?--<font color="330099" size="2px">The Bleach Masta <font color="330099" size="2px">(Talk)  20:36, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Hey.
Hey. I ain't up to it. I mean... I just had my comeback so.... yeah. I would like to focus on my characters and plotline with Fire right now. 暗い夜 DarkNight (Talk To Me!) 13:15, January 23, 2011 (UTC)

a tourney eh?
sooo hehehe....If there will be one..... Margin's for the go ....lol cant use ciel too much lol hehehe Lone Black Garuga 06:21, January 24, 2011 (UTC)

Demono and Kyoshi RP
Let's start tomorrow. I am going to be in a short time as I have a 10 o'clock class tomorrow. Ill be on most of the afternoon and night tomorrow.--<font color="330099" size="2px">The Bleach Masta <font color="330099" size="2px">(Talk)  06:48, January 24, 2011 (UTC)

All of Demono's spells are his own aside from the ones you listed on the the race's page--<font color="330099" size="2px">The Bleach Masta <font color="330099" size="2px">(Talk)  07:09, January 24, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I can't really consider Vazdah a good guy but Raj's darkness has faded so I will be using him.--<font color="330099" size="2px">The Bleach Masta <font color="330099" size="2px">(Talk)  07:18, January 24, 2011 (UTC)

The ways of the Kosumosukihaku- Kiyoshi helps Demono. I started it off. I have close at 3 and then I am going to come back to my place and crash for an hour or so but I'll get back to it after that.--<font color="330099" size="2px">The Bleach Masta <font color="330099" size="2px">(Talk)  19:16, January 24, 2011 (UTC)

Back to you now. I am off to class. I will catch up with you in a little.--<font color="330099" size="2px">The Bleach Masta <font color="330099" size="2px">(Talk)  19:46, January 24, 2011 (UTC)

Your up--<font color="330099" size="2px">The Bleach Masta <font color="330099" size="2px">(Talk)  21:40, January 24, 2011 (UTC)

Is that not the point of a training RP, to build skills by taking on a stronger character? Your up--<font color="330099" size="2px">The Bleach Masta <font color="330099" size="2px">(Talk)  21:55, January 24, 2011 (UTC)

Your turn--<font color="330099" size="2px">The Bleach Masta <font color="330099" size="2px">(Talk)  01:27, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

Your turn--<font color="330099" size="2px">The Bleach Masta <font color="330099" size="2px">(Talk)  18:02, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

Your up--<font color="330099" size="2px">The Bleach Masta <font color="330099" size="2px">(Talk)  18:51, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

Back To You--<font color="330099" size="2px">The Bleach Masta <font color="330099" size="2px">(Talk)  19:57, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

Your turn--<font color="330099" size="2px">The Bleach Masta <font color="330099" size="2px">(Talk)  21:43, January 26, 2011 (UTC)

Your up--<font color="330099" size="2px">The Bleach Masta <font color="330099" size="2px">(Talk)  03:42, January 27, 2011 (UTC)

Your turn now. Also, is the tournament starting this saturday or next?--<font color="330099" size="2px">The Bleach Masta <font color="330099" size="2px">(Talk)  19:46, January 27, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, your up--<font color="330099" size="2px">The Bleach Masta <font color="330099" size="2px">(Talk)  20:09, January 27, 2011 (UTC)

Your turn--<font color="330099" size="2px">The Bleach Masta <font color="330099" size="2px">(Talk)  20:29, January 27, 2011 (UTC)

Your turn. Ill be gone for an hour or so<font color="330099" size="2px">The Bleach Masta <font color="330099" size="2px">(Talk)  21:12, January 27, 2011 (UTC)

Your turn--<font color="330099" size="2px">The Bleach Masta <font color="330099" size="2px">(Talk)  22:30, January 27, 2011 (UTC)

Your turn--<font color="330099" size="2px">The Bleach Masta <font color="330099" size="2px">(Talk)  23:01, January 27, 2011 (UTC)

Your turn--<font color="330099" size="2px">The Bleach Masta <font color="330099" size="2px">(Talk)  23:16, January 27, 2011 (UTC)

Your turn--<font color="330099" size="2px">The Bleach Masta <font color="330099" size="2px">(Talk)  23:33, January 27, 2011 (UTC)

That should take care of that.--<font color="330099" size="2px">The Bleach Masta <font color="330099" size="2px">(Talk)  00:10, January 28, 2011 (UTC)

I say
Whatever damage this *demons* has done will never be healed...That's what power I think Lone Black Garuga 09:21, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

WHAT AN HONOR! YAY! lol hehehe... And if u wanna meet Fukienzeru, contact User:Sadow-sama Lone Black Garuga 09:45, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm
Firstly, I'm sorry for the late reply. I just noticed you sent a message about that a few days ago, so I apologize for my ignorance. Secondly, sure, I guess I'll compete with Kamui. I'd want Seireitou to be unaware of this tournament (in terms of plot), because Ten isn't competing most likely, and Kamui kinda went his own way again, so I'll go with Kamui. --Seireitou-shishō (My True Identity 20:13, January 26, 2011 (UTC)

Yo ^_^
Yo!~

I'd be thrilled to join your tournament! Lemme know of any specifics that are required, so I know which character to pick!Balance is EverythingUser Talk:WanderingShinobi 02:28, January 27, 2011 (UTC)

Well...my only Shunsui-class character isn't actuall EVIL, he just isn't a big fan of Shinigami.

Is that ok? Ryotenbin Shiki <---

Balance is EverythingUser Talk:WanderingShinobi 05:10, January 28, 2011 (UTC)

Valhalla
Thanks for the invite, but I might have to decline as I haven't RPed enough, nor am I ready to use my strongest characters since I haven't developed them enough. Plus I may not be around that weekend due to prior arrangements. Best of luck to the rest of the participants. Northstar1012 20:20, January 27, 2011 (UTC)

Tourney
I suppose I will be using Van of course hahaha RazeOfLight 04:04, January 28, 2011 (UTC)

To all GF members =)
I'm tired of waiting...im itching for some excitement....lets get things rolling. time to start G2 finally!! If you don't mind, please put some of the other things you are doing on hold and Please contribute to the flow of each arc. RazeOfLight 14:41, January 28, 2011 (UTC)

RE:Kamui vs Van
Very well then, just have Raze message me when our match begins. --Seireitou-shishō (My True Identity 21:20, January 28, 2011 (UTC)

Valhalla Tournament
Hey Twilight, how many fighters are participating in the tournament so far? Northstar1012 22:29, January 28, 2011 (UTC)

I feel like you may be short a few participants. If Round 1, there are six participants, then there will be only 3 winners. So for Round 2, out of those 3 winners, 2 will be fighting, while the remaining fighter doesn't have anyone to go up against. Get what I'm saying? Northstar1012 17:23, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

I don't know. That seems sort of unfair to assume that Raze or Sei are going to win right away. That kinda takes the fun out of a tournament if you're automatically assuming 2 of the 6 fighters are going to be in the finals. It should be treated equally or else you're going to start showing favoritism before the matches already begin. I honestly think that if you can't find more people to make it even then the final 3 should go in a battle royal to keep things equal, and no one is left out. Northstar1012 22:13, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

This is what you wrote and copy/pasting directly: ''"Even if its seem unfair the winner of that round will either be Sei or Raze and their characters are the strongest ones so far to join in." ''What round are you talking about? Round 1, or Round 2? In Round 1, you have 6 fighters, so there will be 3 winners. If you're talking about Round 2, and it's a 3 way fight, why do you think the third fighter wouldn't win? You said it yourself in your statement "even if it seems unfair the winner will be either Sei or Raze". Next time you want to tell me to look closer, I suggest you write sentences that clearly state what you're saying as to not leave room for misinterpretation. Northstar1012 20:11, January 31, 2011 (UTC)

Howdy
As promised, let's get this RP churned out! I breezed my exam, so I'm in a pretty good mood at the minute :) You wanna start it up, Twilight? Kenji Hiroshi 12:19, January 30, 2011 (UTC)


 * No worries, dude. But no, no, no in terms of the Supreme Commander. There's been one argument about that position already, and I don't want anymore arising because of it. When the Supreme Commander is made, it'll either be character we all decide upon, or we all make and contribute to, like one of my villains, Gengetsu. Kenji Hiroshi 17:02, January 30, 2011 (UTC)


 * And I'll agree with that, pal. Someone needs to do all you just said, and I'll trust to your judgment :) Your in no worry about being removed from the group, though, dude. Jasmaljer was different, because unlike you, he hasn't contributed a single word to the GF, while you've done quite a bit to help. Whole articles, in fact (the races you've made, tournaments, characters, building relations etc etc). Jasmaljer got booted because he hadn't done a thing to contribute, and hasn't been online since he was made a member, so we made the decision. Everyone on the list has contributed in their own way, so you've no need to worry, Twilight. Your seat in the GF is safe :) Kenji Hiroshi 17:26, January 30, 2011 (UTC)


 * That's all fine, dude, but you don't have the authority to delete any character, even if it is just a sentence you'll be deleting. You may call the shots in the tournament, but deletion lies with the admins. Not you. Besides, its common courtesy not to add anything to a character during an RP, so now you know why I went with Kenji and not one of my other characters, as I'm still fixing them up for gen2. Now, when we're on the subject of the Kosumosukihaku, I'm making Jiro Kazuki one, because his race has been in question for a while now lol. Kenji Hiroshi 18:07, January 30, 2011 (UTC)


 * I need to seriously start reading things slower >_< Anyways, I'll manage thanks. I've read the RP's you've done with the Kosumosukihaku, so I know a good bit about them already lol. Kenji Hiroshi 18:23, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

North raised a good point when he spoke to me, Twilight. Here's what he said: ''If in Round 1 he only has 6 fighters, that means there can be only 3 winners at the end. For Round 2, 2 of those 3 will be fighting, while one doesn't have an opponent.'' He's a got a point, dude. Are there more participants, or late arrivals going to be showing up? Kenji Hiroshi 20:27, January 30, 2011 (UTC)


 * I'm sure you'll fill the positions soon. Yoshiro's mother died giving birth to him anyway, long before I decided to make him a Vizard/Kosumosukihaku. But I get what your saying. I never wanted him having eternal life, as he has to step down from the battle stage eventually lol and let my newer generation of characters step up. In terms of abilities, can he still create Reishi? That's for a Quincy character who'll be partnering him in the near future, and creating more Reishi particles in the air would help him out quite a bit in battle situations. Kenji Hiroshi 21:12, January 30, 2011 (UTC)


 * That works for me, pal! I won't bother with the Cero-like technique, considering he already has the Cero itself lol. I'll make the additives, then, and work 'em into his abilities :) Cheers dude. Kenji Hiroshi 21:29, January 30, 2011 (UTC)

Proper Rp
yeah i know, didn't really have the proper mindset at the time, tell you what if u want to we will do another rp on the same page, this time properly, without going at each others throats about who's powerful or not, and im guessing you've gained some rping experience over the time i've been away. Well anyways i'm currently working on a char, once i finish up i'll let you know about the proper details. I'll try to stay a bit more around this time........--Big Evil 18:14, January 31, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for the invite but have to decline, since i am busy at the moment with my current project and stuff......--Big Evil 22:09, January 31, 2011 (UTC)

?
Hmmm..no offense but if the prize of the tourney is that zanpakuto then Im afraid I will have to withdraw Van from the tourney. You know my stance on things like that so yea...RazeOfLight 21:06, January 31, 2011 (UTC)

Well I just meant I didnt want van in it...i was gonna add someone different but now that you've managed to anger me I will not be participating at all. You call me childdish? Yes? You do not know anything of any aspect of how I think. Do not jump to your silly conclusions and think you know what I am trying to say. For you will be wrong 100% of the time. I did not withdraw Van because I did not like it. He already has TWO znpakuto I did not want him having another and becoming too OP. You may do as you will but calling my personal opinion childdish just proves how childdish YOU are. If things aren't you're way you seem to have a problem with it. There's a thing called rolling with the punches..not everything will work out exactly as you planned but sometimes you have to go with it regardless. But saying that...I'm am finished with this annoyance. Good day. RazeOfLight 22:03, January 31, 2011 (UTC)

Tourney
I'm in. But why are you leaving GF? User:Firegod00 (Say your prayers) 23:13, January 31, 2011 (UTC)

???
Okay, can I ask why you'll be leaving? I'm curious, 'cause not to long ago, when we removed the other guy by vote, you asked me not to take your name off the list, which I said your position was safe because you've been contributing quite a bit. I'm just confused on the whole thing. Why the sudden change of mind? Kenji Hiroshi 12:08, February 1, 2011 (UTC)


 * The new zanpakutō you created, right? I've seen it, and Raze did only pull out Van because he's getting some new powers which are zanpakutō-based and didn't want a third in the case he won the tourney. That's pretty understandable, considering. Raze and the others practically started the GF, and right now, he's running around trying to get the joint story-lines we've all planned off the ground and underway so we all can have some more fun. But your leaving because of one or two bust ups? And I've already apologized for leaping down your throat already. Is there anything we can do to convince you to stay, or is your mind made up? Kenji Hiroshi 12:59, February 1, 2011 (UTC)


 * Don't let one or two differences of opinion get you down, eh? There's quite a few members in the GF, so we aren't going to agree all the time on everything thats said or done... Though lets not add fuel to any arguments by making unnecessary comments that could annoy/piss off anyone. We all do it, though it can be pretty annoying for both parties. Because that only leads to more arguments, and lets face it, one thing none of us need on the wiki is conflict. Considering most of us come on to have some fun, ya know? I say forget about it, and move on. Kenji Hiroshi 13:24, February 1, 2011 (UTC)


 * Sorry for the delay, dude. Been a little busy with ICT coursework myself. Anyways, I'll leave a message regarding the tournament on the GF talk page, so good luck in your studies. Hope ya do well, man :) Kenji Hiroshi 17:46, February 4, 2011 (UTC)

No problem, dude. Its your zanpakutō, man, so its your decision regarding the strength and weaknesses and how far you wanna push them. Since its a trophy, it'd be pretty rude if the weapon wasn't used by the winner, so If (a big if lol) I do win it, it'll be used responsibly. It'd be nothing but a gigantic middle finger if it was used continually just for the sheer purpose of using it, ya know? Kenji Hiroshi 18:18, February 4, 2011 (UTC)


 * Very much a weapon that develops with its wielder, eh? I like that. Not many zanpakutō like that on here nowadays, so nice one, Twilight. This tourney is gonna be fun, though :) Kenji Hiroshi 18:50, February 4, 2011 (UTC)


 * I see what your trying to get at, but the same could be said for any sword. The weapons only a tool at the end of the day, and tools follow their owners wishes. But energy blasts work, but are way too overused. I'm sure you'll come up with some great ideas. Kenji Hiroshi 19:14, February 4, 2011 (UTC)


 * Howdy dude. Sorry, but can the RP wait until a little later in the week? I've got a few RP's running at the minute with Fenix, Grizz and Raze, so I'm a little busy. Real sorry, dude :( How goes the Valhalla thing? Kenji Hiroshi 18:55, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

His had a zanpakutō spirit, though that can be changed on his article quickly enough. Gives me an easier way to explain his perpetual state of Bankai, as well. Kenji Hiroshi 19:42, February 6, 2011 (UTC)


 * I'll add his name no problem, but is the class thing really needed, dude? I don't really like attaching classes to my characters, except at the beginning when their weak and in need of growth. Kenji Hiroshi 18:04, February 8, 2011 (UTC)


 * I made a seperate section for the tourney participants, and added my name and character. I'll drop the messages to everyone now. Kenji Hiroshi 16:53, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

I've saw it dude. Nice work so far. Kenji Hiroshi 18:25, February 9, 2011 (UTC)


 * Saying as how they're demi-versions of the cosmos souls, wouldn't they have access to some of (but not all) of the cosmos souls skills? If you add some of the skills you said a hybrid cosmos soul could use, then you'd fill out the abilities rather quickly, dude. Anyhow, the page is a little messy, with all the large gaps between the information. You want me to fix it up for you and touch up whatever mistakes I come across when I'm at it? Kenji Hiroshi 18:38, February 9, 2011 (UTC)


 * I was only trying to help, dude. Anyways, I'm outta ideas in terms of powers. Sorry. Kenji Hiroshi 18:58, February 9, 2011 (UTC)


 * It wouldn't have took a big amount of rewrite really, considering Jiro's only had one appearance so far lol. But cheers anyway. I'll keep that message in mind when I finally reveal his entire history later in my stories. Kenji-Taichō (Talk) 19:28, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

Naw, I'm happy enough with what he's got right now, pal. Besides, its your creation, right? The creation of Reishi (love that entire concept btw) allows him to help his Quincy teammate out in battle, along with any Vizard comrades he may have by playing on a hollows ability to feed on spiritual energy, while the Quincy draws them in to use as weapons. That and the unique aspects of the cosmos souls spiritual energy are enough, for him at least, considering the plans I have for him. Kenji-Taichō (Talk) 20:02, February 9, 2011 (UTC)


 * I don't look at victory or defeat when I'm doing an RP, to be honest. As long as I have fun, I'm happy enough. But your probably right. We've got about as much chance of beating Kamui as we had of beating Seireitou Kawahiru. Meh, but If I remember right, the victory goes to the one who the supreme king deems the better combatant. Combat isn't all about power, so tactics and how you deal with everything coming at you will mean just as much in this conflict. If anything, it'll be interesting, to say the least. Kenji-Taichō (Talk) 21:36, February 9, 2011 (UTC)


 * If anything that fight but would be funny... if incredibly short >_< Well it doesn't really matter either way, really. We'll all fight until we've no realistic chance, but you never know. There's little point writing ourselves off before the things even started, but then again, even if we are beaten, I'll take it as a hellish good excuse to make Kenji as powerful as Kamui as one of his goals lol. Kenji-Taichō (Talk) 21:45, February 9, 2011 (UTC)


 * Twilight, I've already figured out how I'm gonna drop that bombshell with Jiro and Yoshiro. The story I've started up already here is when Yoshiro learns about both his hollow powers and his heritage. Its went so long without a post because I was looking to solidify in my own mind what race Jiro was, and in turn, how that would reflect on Yoshiro before I continued it. Kenji-Taichō (Talk) 17:46, February 10, 2011 (UTC)

That's fine by me, dude. Have yourself a good time, eh? Kenji-Taichō (Talk) 20:27, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Alright
sure, sounds good to me anyway only me and fire have done ours so it's not really something to worry about Grizzaka 23:59, February 1, 2011 (UTC)

Re:Article
Sure, I will let him know--<font color="#660066" face="Verdana">God <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">(Pray)  18:22, February 4, 2011 (UTC)

Hey
I made some new characters what to do an RP with them? Grizzaka 01:54, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Um u can decided mine will be Tommy Aguilar and his girlfriend. Grizzaka 02:47, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

I just wanted to test them, NOT KILL THEM!!!!! but fine just get it started and don't kill me plz Grizzaka 02:55, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Ur up and to make it easier just check it out to see if I edited it or not. Grizzaka 03:13, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

ur turn Grizzaka 03:20, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

It's cuz i like to RP with anyone i can Grizzaka 03:29, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Dude, i understand ur still trying to get used to it but remember u can't make my character do whatever u want okay? Grizzaka 04:15, February 7, 2011 (UTC)

Yep and that was a good RP Grizzaka 01:42, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

It's not that, it's cuz u got mostly Gods and Aizen level characters so i can't really win so what else is there. Grizzaka 01:56, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

Kiyoshi Souzou Aizen level

Haru Nakamaru Aizen Level

Purinsu Kuchiki near not quite at an Aizen Level

Sora Hana 3rd Seat to Lieutenant level

Shino Terasawa Lieutenat Level

Demono Hizen an article I got from Bleach Masta as he left BFF but its class my guess Shunsui Class

Masanori Kawahiru now I made this article for Sei as a xmas gift for when I was an admin on another Fan fiction site it was required to give an article to the head admin to keep your status as an admin. His class is Aizen as well but only so that Sei doesn't have to waste time to develop him.

These are all the character I have or and the ones underline names are ones I have made. I am just using my strongest characters for now as I am making a tounrament and need the feel of certain characters just the ones so far that I need to use are powerful.Td5 02:20, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

Either way, it's doesn't matter anymore the RP is done. Grizzaka 02:26, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

?
-sigh- Are you really still angry? Don't come on to my talk page saying you dont know why you saying something to me. Thats kinda rude. If there's a problem come talk to me in a civil manner. BecauseI was already reading over the Valkyrie before you even asked and I liked the concept. Although they should have morefighting capabilities seeing as they were madeto fight wars for the Norse Gods as well as recruit soldiers to fight for them. RozeluxeMeitzen 14:04, February 10, 2011 (UTC)

Ah. Then nevermind. The page is good. Just make sure to clean it up a bit, and maybe add more fighting aspects to it as Valkyries were feared for their combat prowess. Oh me and Kenji are creating a organization of the MAJOR bad guys. If you have any you would like to contribute just let me or him know.RozeluxeMeitzen 15:09, February 11, 2011 (UTC)

RE:Valhalla and the Tournament of Greatest Warrior
Oh, well thanks, sure I'd like to join. But I'm a little unsure of the details of the tournament, let alone who will be participating. --- Illuminate Void 21:30, February 10, 2011 (UTC)


 * Damn. I currently dont have any Aizen-class or Shinsui-class characters completed right now. I am reworking my Shinsengumi character, although given the route I'm going Im not sure whether he would qualify or not (argubaly he's probably a neutral party anyways). Assuming the tournament is held Saturday, I'll let you know by the end of Friday if I'll be able to participate but as of now, I dont think I'll be able to. But I appreciate the invite all the same, once again thanks. --- Illuminate Void 03:02, February 11, 2011 (UTC)

I'm gonna have to withdraw because I don't plan on being home that weekend. I'm very sorry my friend. User:Firegod00 (Say your prayers) 02:30, February 11, 2011 (UTC)


 * I know its a bit late, but I wanted to touch base with you, and at least formally let you know that I'll be unable to participate in the tournament. The only character who meets the requirements would probably be my Quincy and I'm still developing his character. But thanks again and Good luck with the tournament! --- Illuminate Void 06:47, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

um
u sure it's a good idea for Sei to be on this tourny now no one will have a chance to win this and i really wanted to win. Grizzaka 02:33, February 11, 2011 (UTC)

the way i see it, this will be over when he wins so it's not really a tourny more like a practice run for Sei Grizzaka 02:41, February 11, 2011 (UTC)

-sigh- if you had even looked at kamui you'll see that he's way more powerful and guess what buddy sei does whatever he wants here no one can tell him anything Grizzaka 02:59, February 11, 2011 (UTC)

alright
I'm sorry for lashing out at you like that, i was just irritated about Sei and it got the best of me i hope we're still friends and i hope u will still talk to me if not then i understand. Grizzaka 00:54, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

I have to agree
Even though I myself is not participating in the tournament. I've seen their profiles, and I can't say I like them. Both characters have a level of power which hints at surpassing that of Yamamoto, and in my opinion that is ruining some of the Lore in Bleach. As after all, Yamamoto has himself stated that "You think that you can strike me down if you suppress Ryūjin Jakka? How naive. How dizzyingly naive. Why do you think that I held the position of Captain-Commander of the Gotei 13 for a thousand years? It is because, in a thousand years, no Shinigami stronger than myself has been born" 

''Through this fact, one can assume that they really aren't as strong as him. And even if they -DO- participate, well. Then it'll simply be a roleplayers right to lessen their characters in power to such an extent that they're equal to you. As your main focus, Twilight, should be that no-one feels left out. Or worse, that people suspect you make this tournament simply to score points with Seireitou and Company. ''

''If those two do participate, make sure that they're equal in power to the rest of the participants. Thats my advice, otherwise it tick more than one off. To just know that you're never gonna win in the tournament no matter what kinda ruins the fun for everyone.''

''And to Seireitou, and Raze. No actual offense here. Just stating a view of mine out loud.''

''Oh, and for clarification. I'm NOT talking about the actual users here, but rather about the Seireitou, and Kamui characters explicitically.''

Njalm2 07:35, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Tournament
Hi, Despair. I'm not sure if you know me, but I'm a veteran member of Gravity Force. Pleasure to make your acquaintance! (: Anyways, I was wondering if you'd postpone your Tournament until Monday or Tuesday. I know it's EXTREMELY late in asking this, but I just had the most awesome zanpakutō idea, which I'd like to test out in your little tourney. If you'd do me this kindness, I can get the character finished by early Monday evening. Please get back to me soon. --- <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Gamemaster <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">(Rules)  23:27, February 16, 2011 (UTC)


 * I did. Please be patient with me, as I have other Wikia's I deal with. Also, could you make a link to your talk page, or even your user page. It gets annoying to have to search your talk page all the time. Ciao~ --- <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Gamemaster <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">(Rules)  20:51, February 14, 2011 (UTC)


 * Well, I don't understand what you're asking me to do. And to provide a link to your user page, go to your username (at the top-right corner), and, on the drop-down menu, click "My preferences." There, scroll down till you find your signature. Then, copy&paste the following: The Twilight of Your Despair --- <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Gamemaster <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">(Rules)  21:03, February 14, 2011 (UTC)


 * Uhm, I realize you're the creator of this tournament, but it is up to the RP'ers to create the RP's. I mean, Kenji and Garuga haven't even began to leave. That's a technical godmod (although it's not like you'll get in trouble). Just throwing my two cents out there. --- <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Gamemaster <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">(Rules)  23:27, February 16, 2011 (UTC)

It's not like I was mad, as I said, "Just throwing my two cents out there." --- <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Gamemaster <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">(Rules)  23:55, February 16, 2011 (UTC)


 * Personally, I don't usually like the creation of new races, so I'm gonna have to pass on giving my opinion; because you're not gonna want to hear it. --- <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Gamemaster <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">(Rules)  22:08, February 17, 2011 (UTC)


 * It's not really an issue, because, in an three-way RP, I find it simpler to "go with the flow." Honestly, what if Sei tried addressing me, but it was Shinobi's turn next? That's just moronic. So, there will be no set posting order. --- <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Gamemaster <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">(Rules)  22:31, February 17, 2011 (UTC)


 * I don't know if this is what you meant, but I was thinking it'd be like a Ping-pong tournament. An example would be Kenji beats Margin, while Kamui beats Shinobi and I. So, Margin would go against either Shinobi or I, while Kenji would fight Kamui. Then, if Margin beat Shinobi, but I beat Margin, it'd be #1 - Kamui; #2 - Kenji; #3 - Me; #4 - Margin; #5 - Shinobi. Was this what you meant? --- <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Gamemaster <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">(Rules)  01:57, February 18, 2011 (UTC)

I don't know. --- <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Gamemaster <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">(Rules)  03:22, February 18, 2011 (UTC)


 * Tell Sei, since I already told him to start it. --- <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">Gamemaster <font color="#660066" face="Verdana">(Rules)  14:19, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Yo
If it helps you pick 'em apart dude, call Illuminated Void Koukishi or Kou for short, like he was once known by before a hacker f'd with his account a while back. And as for him joining the tournament, I have no objections. Kou's awesome fun to RP with, whether it be a friendly battle or a full-scale war lol. I'd be up for it, but ultimately, the decision comes down to you, Twilight. But this is just my personal opinion: It'd be better with Kou in it :) Kenji-Taichō (Talk) 16:22, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

I figured that's what you were up to, making the article now, instead of later. Means we can jump right in with the final match when the others are finished. Kenji's name will be Kenji Shiba then, just in case your wondering. I'll make my post now then :) Kenji-Taichō (Talk) 20:14, February 14, 2011 (UTC)


 * That's fine by me, dude. Would it be useful? Anything that powerful has to be useful, but in all seriousness, yes I think it would benefit him. The fact it develops new skills based on those of its owner means new approaches to existing skills, potentially righting a weakness or giving a pre-existing skill an added effect not seen before. Then there's the deity aspects of its spiritual energy. One of Kenji's greatest enemies is a demon, and saying as how Averian has absorbed countless spiritually aware beings, some of which had demonic powers; the zanpakutō would be a pretty big help in dealing with those enemies. And since it has its own source of spiritual energy, it wouldn't be effected by one of The Legendary Bakkōtō I made. But don't let any of this sway your decision, dude. Whoever wins, wins. Kenji-Taichō (Talk) 21:43, February 14, 2011 (UTC)


 * Hey, you got the sig sorted! Nice one. Its indestructible to, so that's always a plus :) Kenji-Taichō (Talk) 22:07, February 14, 2011 (UTC)


 * Then there's the reason-cutter part of it, to. Honestly dude, if that zanpakutō can't be put to use, then I don't know lol. Kenji-Taichō (Talk) 22:16, February 14, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry about the late reply, dude. My little bro was using the computer for editing my old characters over on Naruto Fanon Wiki, and I only booted him off to post on my RP's with Raze and answer a few review requests between his posts :) Anyways, I'm liking that idea quite a bit. But the only problem I have is their power levels. They'll be on par with the Soul King and your own Supreme King, so they'll be tough to take down, but I guess thats half the fun in a way. Personally, I like the Aspect of Destruction, and might create a seperate spiritual plain and entity to deal with that and work him into my stories, but I'd need to think about the race in particular a little to make it believable. With your permission, of course. You came up with the idea, Twilight, so its your concept. Kenji-Taichō (Talk) 10:22, February 17, 2011 (UTC)


 * Now that I'm remembering, Raze and I were planning on introducing something along the lines of the Kai's from DBZ, only they aren't god-like beings. More akin to guardians actually who guard Hueco Mundo, the Human World etc etc. These Kings of yours command their own domain, that you've created, right? Like the Heavens of Creation. Kenji-Taichō (Talk) 13:48, February 18, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm
Well, it's up to you. I'm fine with either or, but a two-on-one would be enjoyable. --Seireitou-shishō (My True Identity 02:05, February 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * Well, thank you Twilight. --Seireitou-shishō [[File:Seireitou's signature picture.jpg]] (My True Identity 22:51, February 14, 2011 (UTC)

Thank you
I'd be honored to roleplay with you in the future. And I guess this is where we differ, really. Hiroya is homosexual becouse I am so as well, and making characters that you can easily relate to always works out for the better. And I have the habit of putting more or less everything in Italic becouse I think it looks better that way. This is however not true in articles though, atleast in regards for it being intentional; I usually only use it in articles in translation bubbles. And I had contemplated having Hiroya participate in the Tournament of yours, but I choose not too. Becouse frankly, I thought that I might be rejected, and I'm much too proud for that.

And there's not that much bad blood between me and Seireitou, we're two roleplayers with different views. Though that is by no means the same as thinking him a bad roleplayer, or a bad person. Becouse even if I had disliked him alot. He'd still be neither.

I am naturally very charmed that you enjoy my character. I'd like to ask you to give me a proper review sometime. Really. I've kinda wanted to ask someone of that for quite some time.

Contacting
You wanted me to contact you?Balance is EverythingUser Talk:WanderingShinobi 23:40, February 15, 2011 (UTC)

Sounds like a plan, man :)Balance is EverythingUser Talk:WanderingShinobi 00:01, February 16, 2011 (UTC)

Haha...I literally just posted :)Balance is EverythingUser Talk:WanderingShinobi 19:12, February 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reply
Yes i am an admin, but I'm more of a maintenance/technical admin.... Im not particularly good with Monitoring tournaments and such sorry.--楽しい (talk to Fenix!) 14:49, February 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * Personally im torn between Kamui (because he scares me) and Naishou (because hes unique)...Margin has too much piled on (ive rped yuki with her using him) i dont know much about the Coelen Capitaliter other than they are close to my own Kūdōkihaku and are stronger vizards and Kenji is cool but not on Kamui's level of combat.--楽しい (talk to Fenix!) 14:59, February 16, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm
Hmmm...well it comes down to what happens in the RPs. If Ryotenbin goes against Kamui and releases bankai thn Kamui would be in trouble due to his spirirual energy becoming poisoned. But at the same time if Kamui goes against Margin, it would come down to who can come up with the better tactics. If I was a betting man I would probbly placemy money on the underdog or the tourney. RozeluxeMeitzen 15:05, February 16, 2011 (UTC)

That's similar to an idea me and Kenji werethrowing around. I don't know if you've ever seen Dragonball Z but we were thinking about making people similar to the Kais. Except for instead of the cardinal directions the se kais guard over hueco mundo, human world, soul society, dangai, and hell. And instead of diety like figures they are like powerful guardians that watch over. I don't want to create any diety-like beings because the Soul King imo is the most powerful being and until they reveal his/her power in bleach I won't do anything that can even compare in power. RozeluxeMeitzen 15:37, February 16, 2011 (UTC)

I see
Thank you for your reply Twilight. And I'd be happy to join if only to get some roleplay. Statwise. Hiroya's as good as Unohana, more or less. Though stats are rather overrated. He'd be more than sufficient enough to handle the other combatants on at the very least equal ground.

I agree in the case of the not too powerful characters all at once statement. Though, Hiroya's quite an exception. I've been thinking of him, designing his abilities for a good while before I wrote them down. I've also played around with his ideals and personality in my mind long before I even stumbled over this site, so technically. He's around one year in age allready. I just didn't have the ability to write him down before very recently.

And obviously, he's by far my most powerful Character.

Njalm2 15:47, February 16, 2011 (UTC)

"Who's gonna win"
Right, you've put me in a huge predicament here. Statwise, Kamui should naturally win the whole thing. However, given that one cannot judge the situation entirely based on stats. I've decided to post my views on the subject as in notice to the individual characters. Ahem..

Kenji Hiroshi
Kenji is likely one of the most dangerous close combat opponents in this Tournament. He's got the potential to inflict incredible amounts of damage in very short time, and he's able to move at a speed (Keikaisochi: (けいかいそち, Light Step) which as far as I'm aware far surpasses that of any other combatant. Though with that ability he's unable to attack.

Moreover, Kenji has the added advantages of being very versatile. He's got five different elements to choose from due to his Zanpakuto. And if it gets ugly. He's able to perform that Transformation of his. Whom should also not be taken lightly at all.

His Lightning enhanced reiatsu, and the additional effects it gives him also grants him increased advantages. In my opinion. Kenji is THE most dangerous close-combat fighter in the Tournament when it comes to sheer Swordplay. He's fast, he's strong. He's also really durable.

Ryotenbin Shiki
Now. This guy was abit hard to evaulate given the short drabbles that is most of his abilites description. But that was til I saw his Zanpakuto. His Zanpakuto is really tricky in its design, and the fact that he's able to use it both as support and as an attack also serves to help him. He's howeve got "Master" in all areas except for one or two.

His Bankai is really powerful as well, and when you add his Hollowfication and his Ressurecciòn he becomes at the very least on par the other fighters.

Given his Bankai's ability it becomes very much a "Race" for his opponent, by trying to defeat Ryotenbin before his Spiritual Power dissapears completely. Naturally with "Negation" type of effects, its a whole other matter entirely. Though so far, none of the contestants have displayed anything of the sort. Except for Hiroya, and he might not even participate at all.

Margin Heart
Right. Margin Heart has alot of powerful perks, he's excellent at Swordsmanship. An incredbly efficient Hand-to-Hand Combatant. He's got a really odd Spiritual Power. Which I don't really know much about. He's appearantly really fast, and very strong.

And in addition to all of this he has Hollow-like Zanpakuto which works seemingly somewhat differently than the ordinary Arrancar Zanpakuto. It has an "Awakening" ability which seems to mimic the release of a Shikai. As well as the traditional Ressurecciòn. Which in his case is really strong.

He's got more or less an automatic defense in this form. In the form of his cape. A long with High-Speed Regeneration. And of course a very devastating close-range attack.

Margin's power lie in the sheer balance of his abilities. More or less

Kamui
Allright, in terms of sheer stats. Kamui is superiour. However, Kamui's true power ain't actually realized except for three things. Which I deem to be the most powerful ones. Excluding his incredibly powerful Zanpakuto ( Whom have several weaknesses that I have detected) There's his insane speed. Which I deem to be superiour to everyone else in the tournament. His strenght: Also bigger in volume than most other in the tournament. And finally. What I concider to be his greatest asset (Saja (사절단, Emissary)

The last mentioned ability is easily able to ignore most forms of defenses and kill the opponent completely by surprise. In my opinion this one ability poses more of a threat than any other of Kamui's abiliies, including his Zanpakuto.

Kamui is an all-round master character. He's also one of the oldest chars on this site. He's easily able to adapt to most situations. And thats about it, really. However. I'm not saying that Kamui is the most likely char to win though. He simply is the one with the most advantages.

Naishō Kawahiru
Right, there's really little information on this fellow at the moment. Though I can discern that he's really good at Swordsmanship and all such, perhaps on par with Kenji, I don't know. He's however seemingly pretty bad at Shunpo and Kidò which would give him alot of problems in regards to fast opponents such as Kamui, Ryotenbin and co.

Now. The true powers of Naisho lie in his Zanpakuto. Which is the manipulation of events and situations trough writing. This makes it presumably one of the potentially most powerful Zanpakuto in this little event. Even without a Bankai.

Naisho is currently the char I know the least about, though he's pretty interesting, and I think anyone who fights him'll have fun.

Conclusion
Right, this is pretty much impossible to decide for certain. I think that the winner is decided by whom they face, actually. It depends on their opponents, given this. And the slight possibility that Hiroya might attend, I think the (Very Rough) estimated wins being like these six.

Kenji -> Hiroya -> Kamui -> Margin -> Naisho -> Ryotenbin -> Kenji

Please note that this is very rough estimatee and thus prone to debate and all that. And it would in no way be 100% accurate.

Njalm2 19:45, February 16, 2011 (UTC)

thanks
So many thx for you vote bro Siegwin 14:19, February 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re: Hey there
Hey Td5. Nothing much going on here. Just finishing up some work. How are you doing? Northstar1012 19:33, February 17, 2011 (UTC)

I haven't had the chance to read about the tournament as I haven't been on that much lately, but I will soon. I'm interested to see how everyone does and how everyone writes up their stories. Give me a little bit and I'll read up on your new article so I can give an opinion. Northstar1012 20:14, February 17, 2011 (UTC)

Character Reviews
Right, You asked me to review your characters. And this I will do here and now. And, if I am blunt, excuse me please. I usually don't mean anything personal with it. Well then, lets see..

Kiyoshi Souzou
Right, at first. I was really taken aback by his age. Which reads 4000. I found this to really be alot. And was almost inclined to make a note of it. Before I realized that he's the Supreme King. Which kinda explained it. This also explained his Strategy skills and his Monstrous Intellect. I didn't read to much into him though.

But I liked his personality, and the whole "Spell" concept of his. I can see that he has the same battle-stats as Aizen. But very frankly. He's not Aizen level in my opinion. But above, the Battle Statistics are only for general reference, they are usually very deceiving.

Haru Nakamaru
Right. This one appeared to have quite some aspects whom I concider to abit too "Much" most evidently his age: 2200. Which makes him older than Yamamoto. Which is in my honest opinion, much too old. I react to this due to Haru technically being a Shinigami, whereas Kiyoshi was something else entirely.

I also concider his monstrous intellect to be abit much. Especially when it came to statng Aizen as an idiot by comparison. That actually put me off quite abit. I can however see that the character is rather outdated 8 days since you updated him. And I know alot has happened since then.

I do believe though, that he's got potential. Definatly. When you revise him just a little bit. Atleast that is my suggestion. I rather enjoyed reading trough them though.

Once again, excuse my bluntness. But this is my honest opinion.

YO
yep...Thanks for the heads up! and yep the tourney is looking good so far Lone Black Garuga 14:23, February 18, 2011 (UTC)

Character
Hey could you look over my character Raze and let me know what you think? RozeluxeMeitzen 14:35, February 18, 2011 (UTC)

Answer
Well, I have no characters whom would be interested in fighting simply for the sake of fighting. Besides, I think that Hiroya is the only one capable of forcing him to release his Shikai. And Hiroya is VERY hard to get to fight without resorting to drastic measures.

Njalm2 22:00, February 19, 2011 (UTC)

Second Response
Hiroya doesn't commonly go around where those people are, and besides. He likely wouldn't understand it, and even if he did. There are very few spells whom interest him enough to push his pacifism aside. There's currently only a few spells that he would be interested in. They are as follows.


 * Lævateinn: Dorothy creates a crimson red spear-like weapon using her spiritual power, which she can use as a projectile or as a physical weapon. When thrown, it produces an incredibly-destructive explosion on impact, encompassing the area of a small fortress - From Dorothy Furlan da Liberi


 * Tatewarigyōsei (セグメント, Segmented) is a dark kidō created by Kamui. When uttered, it's effect is the equivalent of an invisible sword, slashing the target repeatedly and inflicting near-horrific scarring and internal bodily injuries, to the point they are disfigured or possibly killed. - From Kamui


 * Unnamed Danku Variation - Seireitou

Njalm2 22:26, February 19, 2011 (UTC)

Howdy
Howdy Twilight! How are ya, dude? I'll be looking forward to the character, and if he's going to be as strong as those two some day, then all I can do is pray lol. Good luck with the design, man. Kenji-Taichō (Talk) 16:33, February 20, 2011 (UTC)


 * No heart, no emotions, right? Won't have much to put in a personality section, so that's one plus, I guess. I'd advise to take that approach slowly, think it through well, and make limitations. Being able to shift between spiritual races at a whim would be considered extremely powerful and flexible. Is there a specific wait time for the switch? A special ritual that needs to be carried out? You'd need to explain all that, dude. Aside from that, I'm liking the idea lol. Kenji-Taichō (Talk) 17:00, February 20, 2011 (UTC)


 * It'll take a while. I mean, you'll build him up, as say, a Shinigami. When he learns all he can (takes generations to master it all) and moves on, to say, a Vizard. He can carry on what he learned as a Shinigami, but again it'd take a long time to learn how to avoid being devoured by his inner hollow and to eventually gain enough control to begin using his mask. Its a good idea, but you'll be committing a lot of time to it, dude. Kenji-Taichō (Talk) 17:34, February 20, 2011 (UTC)


 * Seireitou and Kamui? Your aiming for the stars, dude, but perhaps it ain't a bad thing. He'll need lots of development, story articles and whatnot to even be in their league. Look at Kenji, for one. I've done close to thirty stories (counting my own and RP's with the GF), and he still ain't there. He's strong, don't get me wrong, but it took time. I'll be looking forward to this character of yours dude, so good luck with him. Oh yeah, article-wise, whats your opinion on Kenji? Kenji-Taichō (Talk) 17:59, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Trust me Twilight, Sei will post when he's ready, dude. Sei's pretty busy with more than this wiki, and continually asking him to post will only annoy him in the end. You may believe that Kenji's stronger, but Yuki and me have been looking forward to this match for a long time, Twilight. It will take a while to get the simple desire to enjoy one another's fight out of the way, and at the end of it, If I win, very good. But if Margin wins, my hat'll be off to Yuki for a well fought and fun battle. I won't message Yuki and say that she's gonna lose under any circumstance or for any reason, 'cause this match is still anyone's match up. Besides, I'm enjoying it too much! This is the first time I've been really fit to let loose with Kenji's new tricks since they were posted :) Kenji-Taichō (Talk) 18:20, February 20, 2011 (UTC)


 * I'm looking forward to seeing that. You know already that I prefer characters who start out weak and build themselves up (especially main characters). I find it makes more sense when you make your villains powerful, though, so your character can grow to beat 'em, ya know? Kenji-Taichō (Talk) 18:32, February 20, 2011 (UTC)


 * I know that to. Heck, I'm making one right now whose stronger than Kenji in most points, though he won't be used much outside my own stories. The characters called Meian Shiba and he's Kenji's older brother, who'll play a pretty important point later on. Kenji-Taichō (Talk) 18:43, February 20, 2011 (UTC)


 * Haha! I've heard of people fearing their own power, but never what they've written or plan to lol. I figure you can be scared after someone beats him at that level, eh? He'll be an interesting concept and a powerful ally or enemy depending on the situation. But I find I'm looking forward to his personality the most. Stories aren't all fighting, so his lack of emotions will land him in some interesting situations. Kenji-Taichō (Talk) 19:04, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

Naw, I think I'll pass on that, dude. You know what your looking to portray a lot more than I do, and I've got enough on my plate with my own articles and the help I've been giving my little bro over on Naruto Fanon. Kenji-Taichō (Talk) 19:20, February 20, 2011 (UTC)

I apologize
I'm sorry for my late reply, I've been busy with NF and PF wikias, so I didn't really pay too much heed here for a while. I'm supposed to post, I believe? --Seireitou-shishō (My True Identity 19:08, February 21, 2011 (UTC)
 * Alright, I need to finish the remaining Captains and Lieutenants for my Gotei 13, seeing as I promised two guys I'd let them use it for their RP, so once that's done, posting will be my main priority. I, once again, apologize for starting so late. --Seireitou-shishō [[File:Seireitou's signature picture.jpg]] (My True Identity 19:42, February 21, 2011 (UTC)

Answer to your last post - Njalm2
Allright, I never once stated that he knew the spell. Though it is possible that he does, I'd never cast it, or explicitially that he does so without your consent. "And he has even invented a spell which completely halts aging, and induces immortality in that regard (A feat only achieved by one other spell - namely Nekkuresu no Raiku (Necklace of life)" is what I wrote, the spell I talk about here is Tokijō (時錠, Time Lock). This is also a forbidden spell, and it induces immortality. This is where I compared it to the Necklace of Life, in that they have one similiar trait. And that both of them induce Immortality, though in different ways. Tokijō halts the passage of time for that person entirely. Locking him or her in one state. Whereas the Necklace gives the wearer an endless amount of life-force. I speculate.

The reason I mentioned the necklace was to put it up for reference. And to direct eventual readers attention to it. Don't worry though, Nekkuresu no Raiku (Necklace of life) and Tokijō (時錠, Time Lock) are two completely different spells alltogether. With only two similiar traits, namely their effects to induce Immortality, and that they're both concidered to be Forbidden Spells.

This is simply a misunderstanding. Though if you want me to remove the reference. I'll do so, though I can't actually see the harm in keeping it there and working as some sort of indication to your plot could do any damage I will respect you wish, whatever it may be.

Right, in the Kamisaifūtsuidan (神最封対断, Japanese for Heavenly Final-Seal, Absolute Judgement) Spell-Description I was referring to the Zanpakuto you've named Zettaiteki. For the sake of fluent links, I decided to use that weapon as an example. Zettaiteki is a very powerful weapon which Hiroya deems to upset the balance of things. Thus he'd, if he ever got his hands on it. Seal it away with Kamisaifūtsuidan on a moments notice.

This would also applty to the Necklace of Life, and the other three objects. Which brings me to, while I appreciate the offer for the Saced King, I'll have to humbly decline. Hiroya's such a powerful character. That I do not want to make anymore of his level in a while. Thank you very much for the concideration though.

Njalm2 22:48, February 21, 2011 (UTC)

Late Reply
Well, as you see. Hiroya wouldn't care if he was commiting a crime or not. Because in his eyes, sealing Zettaiteki away is a way to ensure that it would never fall into the wrong hands. And it'd undouptly save the world from much suffering, wether that suffering is from good or bad people doesn't really matter.

This also applies to the four object, Hiroya would. If he ever found out about what they would be used for, try to hunt them down and seal them away one at a time. As well as kill anyone whom knew how to cast the spells themselves. Despite his Pacifism, he's determined enough to fight to kill if it was nessecary.

Even if the universe itself were to shatter, it would simply mean that no one could suffer, ever again. Really extreme, but that is how he is.

And I like the idea, believe me. Its pretty neat, while I do not agree with Zettaiteki being all-powerful. I guess I'll cut it some slack.

Njalm2 08:13, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

Howdy
Couldn't help but see that you need help with Chaos's image. Want me to have a look and see what I can do? That's one of the older templates I think, so posting the image is a little tricky at first, 'cause my younger brother didn't know at first either. Kenji-Taichō (Talk) 18:23, February 22, 2011 (UTC)


 * That's Yu-Gi-Oh, right? Haven't watched that in years, but I remember enough to know who you mean. That guy creped me out something seriously, so it may be a good idea depending on how you portray the character in general. Anyways, the problem with the template was easily solved. You either forgot to copy in the image field, or deleted it by mistake, but I restored it and put the picture in. Instead of the templates we use at the minute, those ones didn't use the [ [ to link to the files location, using only the name you uploaded it under. Anyways, glad to help, dude. Kenji-Taichō (Talk) 18:42, February 22, 2011 (UTC)


 * Twilight, there ain't a lot there at the minute for me to say anything, either way, dude. When he fills out a little more and he's ready to RP with, I'll give you an opinion. As of right now, all I can really say anything about is his intelligence; which is pretty impressive, considering his lack of emotions. Fill him out a little more, and I'll give you a better response. Oh yeah, you may wanna add some information to his template as well. Kenji-Taichō (Talk) 21:06, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reply
Eh, fine. Can't really complain. How about yours? --Seireitou-shishō (My True Identity 23:12, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reply
Right, I read what you said and I think that is certainly doable, Hiroya would no doupt relish in the chance to seal the necklace away though in that regard he'd flee straight afterwards, and he'd very likely be disguised.

Njalm2 00:00, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

Third Reply
I've roleplayed for five years now, though on different places. But I know the rules and how you do it yes.

Njalm2 10:22, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

Your answer
Well, I suppose you'd better do that. For the mention though, I want to make sure that you know how one does a fight in RP such as remembering to write "Attempt, Try" or similiar allegations before each of your attacks. Becouse otherwise roleplaying becomes pretty much hopeless.

Njalm2 16:29, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

Answer
Yes, there's definatly something wrong here though I think that it had allready happened before I came. After all, all I did was leaving a message, I think however that you should ask one of the admins for help here. I've never seen something like this myself.

Looks like there's some trouble with the code or something, as leaving messages now function perfectly. At any rate, its your turn. And the problem here is that for some reason, all the headlines have been deleted, which results in complete chaos. Really sorry though if this was my fault, though I cannot even begin to comprehend how I managed to do it!

Njalm2 17:52, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

Misunderstanding
Hiroya aimed for the real Haru, for the notice. After all it wouldn't be any point in sealing away the fake one. Do note that even if Haru is hit Hiroya won't finish him off, and he'd get his Spiritual Power back in four days or so. For the sake of fluid roleplay I'll not answer the fight before you've answered it properly. Though It is partially my own fault for being too general with it.

Njalm2 19:19, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

Review of the Battle
Allright it was a pretty refreshing little fight. Though I have some things to kindly mention for your improvement in the future (You're free to come with things like these in my regard too, of course) - "Haru simply stops and let the spells both of them hit him." You don't know who you are dealing, but thats not your fault." " I am Haru Nakamaru the former Supreme Commander the Leader of the Royal Guard you cannot bind me with these weak Kido spell." Haru release his reiatsu and it easily overpowers the reiatsu of the Spells that was used on him" Right, this is my first complain. Otherwise though, you seem like a capable roleplayer and I realize that my worries were unfunded ones. I've mentioned what I deem that you need to look into. And of course, you're allowed to critize me as well. I also inform you that I enjoyed the battle, and was actually surprised when you allowed your character to lose.
 * I was somewhat annoyed by the fact that you simply "Out-powered" those spells so easily, I know it was for the sake of showing off that your character ain't no pushover: However, this I find to be somewhat of a minor case of "Powergaming" you immedeatly assumed that the spells were weak, and thus acted it out that way. Without consulting me or checking on my page for reference. This I deem to, while not really that serious, to be an area which you should improve on.
 * Secondly. And this is something I found to be rather imbalanced of your character. The way you've designed the Spirit Corpses to have exactly the same amount of Reiatsu, Kido knowledge and Swordsmanship as the actual Haru makes it a very overpowered ability in that sense. The fact that he can make hordes of these makes it all the worse - I suggest having all their stats halved, and decide upon either Swordsmanship or Kido when it is activated; As I was forced to disregard those aspects of them in order for it to be fair. Which I really don't like to do. You should also limit how many can be out at once.

(As without Spiritual Power he'd pretty much be helpless, all of a Shinigami's abilities such as increased physical provess and their ability to control their Zanpakuto come from there after all, meaning that he'll pretty much be a human for two days. Yes?)

And naturally, I'm not mad at you. I'm in a pretty good mood, its just that I want to help you abit, and i'll appreciate critics myself :)

Allright, I guess that balances out the Spirit Corpses somewhat, though I still think that he should make use of his own Spiritual Power to cast the spells. After all, I don't have to tell you that bombarding people with Level 96 Itto Kaso would be concidered very unfair. I also suggest giving it some detrimental effect on him (Hiroya's able to do something very similiar with Shirohane, though it subracts about four centuries from his lifespan.

And no. You told me before we started that he'd get the Necklace back somehow, and I accepted, I am therefore not angry at all and you even agreed to the rules. And managed to get it back according to them, which was really all you had to do.

As for the thing about the spells being hard to avoid. Yes, that may be so and that is intentional because Hiroya fought him pretty seriously. I don't mind the fact that you broke them (Though its kinda hard to believe) as much as I disliked the WAY you did it.

In the future though, do note that I'm fully inclined to have my opponents dodge spells, even if they're done as elaborately as these as long as you don't simply disregard them. A good idea is to do as I did with Itto Kaso: Lower the damage inflicted, but yet get hit in the end, that is generally accepted in my experience :)

Njalm2 20:24, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

oh?
Cool. Can't wait to see him/her when you're finishedRozeluxeMeitzen 04:56, February 25, 2011 (UTC)

RE: Possible Rp
Well, I've got my two Diabolus - Though both of them are Captain-Level and none of them would be available. Though you can take a look at Rutilus Maculosos Lupus and Flamen Puteulanus. Decide which would be the most plausible and I can see if it'll work.

Well, luckily for you, Flamen happens to be the one whom is most likely to fight - Though she'd still need a valid means as to track him. However, she should have devised a way to flee if it comes to fighting him: He's not like Hiroya, he won't simply let her go to be nice.

Yes, I suppose its settled then, but one still has to find a way for it to work - I'll leave it to you to create the fic this time too - Given that it is your character whom would be looking for him. Though I don't think it'd be too hard, given that she has so good senses that she has.

Flamen naturally calls her that simply out of feigned ignorance - After all, she does appear to dislike the term quite a lot.

Well, yes of course. Though I ask you not to forget the drama!

Njalm2 20:57, February 25, 2011 (UTC)

Honestly
Look, I've been trying to let the roleplay end smoothly for quite some time now, and I ask you to please take a hint. I'm DONE. I think that for the Supreme King to waste so much time and effort on a Daemon is taking things too far, and it stopped to be fun a long time ago. In all honesty, and now I'm actually begining to get slighty irritated. This should in my opinion have ended with "Kiyoshi should find that he's lost all trace of the demon" - That was in my own opinion a very clear end.

I agreed for Kiyoshi to come and save Shino, I never agreed on him following up with harassment! I will answer this last one, but no more. I'd rather avoid being stuck in the very same RP for too long, no offense by the way.

Other than this, it was pretty fun. But do remember in our future roleplays to take the hint when I start uses definites such as "Kiyoshi would find that he no longer is able to detect the Daemon" as that is usually when I deem the roleplay to be done. Besides, I can't understand why it is so darn important for Kiyoshi to get him to apologize, which he will "NEVER" do. Nor do I see the reason why he should, he's the Supreme King, why would he go around all across the globe and spend half a day looking for a measly Daemon just for him to get him to say he's sorry? I find that to be growing quite ridicolous.

Njalm2 14:33, February 27, 2011 (UTC)

RE: New Suggestion
I appreciate the gesture, but no thanks. The most powerful Diabolus, will of course be Diabolus, S-class versions yes, but Diabolus all the same. Two are works in progress along while the other two are still pending. Also their history conflicts with what I've already established in my own works, and would continue to conflict with my own depictions of the spiritual realms, and entities that reside in them. Once again, thanks but no thanks. --- Illuminate Void 02:10, February 28, 2011 (UTC)

Pics
The page has been deleted by Sei, anyways, for having the same picture. This case, though, was a little worse than using the same picture by mistake. Its pretty easy to upload identical images on a site like this, and being genuinely unknowing that the picture your using has been used by someone else can easily be brushed off as long as you remove it when asked; or when an agreement is reached between users to use the same picture. In this case, though, the fella had used the picture Sei had uploaded to the image database; meaning he used it knowing Sei had already used it previously, and since he didn't ask, its against the rules. It all comes down to assuming good faith, but when you start using others images without asking, assuming good faith kinda flies straight out the nearest window, ya know? This isn't a pop at you, dude. I'm just explaining it 'cause you didn't sound sure on the articles talk page. You are right about pictures you've drawn yourself, though, but in that case you need to prove ownership, if I remember right. Kenji-Taichō (Talk) 19:39, February 28, 2011 (UTC)

Spirit Character
Hm..I like him. Do you needhelp adding the pic to the info box? RozeluxeMeitzen 05:21, March 2, 2011 (UTC)

That's Fine
That's more than alright, I look forward to see what you add onto it. As for me, I'm trying to rush through getting some seated officers done for my Gotei 13. --Seireitou-shishō (My True Identity 20:59, March 2, 2011 (UTC)

RE: Diabolus Creation
It is stated on the Diabolus page that it can be used without the authors consent, Illuminate Void has stated many times that he made the race for the community, and as such you're free to make one. This I'm certain of, though if you want to be a part of Dorothy's Army I suppose you'll have to ask him nevertheless, just to be on the safe side.

As a note, the Diabolus use Latin motifs for their names AND their abilities, and as such you should check here for translation, and I feel compelled to note that I am in no way accustomed to the Diabolus race in terms of authority. Illuminate Void has all the power there.

Njalm2 22:34, March 2, 2011 (UTC)


 * Njalm2 is right, you're free to create a Diabolus as you see fit. --- Illuminate Void 00:04, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

New Rules
They might be. Some of the admins, including myself, have been annoyed by some of the content by some new users, and as such, we need to establish a new set of rules that loopholes can't be easily found. Some people will need to have their articles adjusted to the new rules, but there shouldn't be any really drastic changes. --Seireitou-shishō (My True Identity 03:09, March 3, 2011 (UTC)
 * I'll tell you what. I will give you some time to work on those articles, and when you believe you've Shinto-fied them, I'll give them another look. Also, according to a statement by User:Thepantheon, who is one of our main admins, he said: "m actually less concerned about them being not Shinto and more concerned about them being called gods." So, see if you can adjust that somehow. Do not worry, you aren't in any immediate danger of sudden deletions. --Seireitou-shishō [[File:Seireitou's signature picture.jpg]] (My True Identity 03:28, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

dude
that reminds me, i thought u were gonna make the elemental water god? Grizzaka 03:27, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

don't worry, i already made the elemental gods so he can't do anything about it but just to be sure try to do it earlier if u can. Grizzaka 03:34, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

I know man Grizzaka 03:57, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

New Rules Appraisals
I am one of the primary admins involved in the appraisal of work based on these new rules, and am in charge of examination of most of GF's "iffy" work. I know that sentence makes it sound really ominous and all, but I'd like to make it clear first off that I am taking into account your record of work quality, and the amount of work you've put into a lot of your creations. I'm here to try and enforce the rules, but my ideal goal is your work fitting the rules and improving by it, not deleting all your stuff. Looking over some of your work, and looking back through my memory at some of our worst problems with this type of thing, I've noticed something. The main issue with a lot of these types of things, I am realizing, comes down to three things: A) they have very little connection to shinigami/the rest of bleach; B) they lack any sort of release state or similar power; and C) they are pretty much a Bleachified version of whatever inspired them. Adding those things (in a quality fashion, of course) could make a lot of things more interconnected. For the first note, a number of your things seem to be connected with Yahweh or the beginning of the world. Clearly, with the deletion of Yahweh and such, a number of your things will have to be edited anyways, and I feel that, firstly, connection with creation is a bit unnecessary/un-Bleach-like, and secondly they really seem to be out of the "web" of the spirit races. I mean, all the canon races have an obvious place in the world, and all of them and a number of the connected fanon ones have a sort of connection to the others, e.g. the Hollows' degeneration, the Shinkumyo's creation from a Blank, etc., whereas yours seem to be on a different level of operation entirely. Pertaining to the B) statement, it speaks for himself. Some sort of weapon and spiritual release via the weapon or item seems a staple of Bleach to me. As to C), Kubo did not make flat-out Kami, he made them his own creation and such. You are not nearly so bad on this point as some in the past were, such as PsykoReaper's Hell, but your creations, such as the Varukirii or Kosomosukihaku (side note: try and use the actual japanese words, not katakana), tend to be creatures or beings from open fantasy-like settings thrown into Bleach, which in my opinion is very much a restricted setting. I suggest you work on these three, and specifically what needs to be done is to eliminate Yahweh elements/universe creation connection, and try to make your things mesh more closely with the rest of Bleach. As an example, an old (never retconned out of my timeline, but just unused) race of mine, the Forfaðir, were originally a very Norse-based race, who evolved into something Bleach-like, as you can see in their history. Wow, that's an essay of a message, but I think I explained what I needed to >>. Any issues, feel free to talk to me! User:Thepantheon 04:09, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

I am aware that some other users might not take this so well, which is partially why I started with you, because you have never seemed to lose your temper at the enforcing of rules. Of course I do not take your suggestions as insults; you're being perfectly polite and are trying to help. The issue with this is that we want everything to relate to the Bleach canon. If there are people who really want to create something, then with all due respect if it is something that isn't within the scope of this site's purpose, it should be somewhere else. In some cases it's not so much that we need people to leave as their stuff just belongs on a site more geared towards that type of work. I appreciate your trying to help, though, rather than a less civil reaction as some might have. --User:Thepantheon 04:44, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

They can keep most of their abilities, from what I've seen; the main issue is their "place in the world", if you get what I mean. Anyways, I doubt leaving will be necessary. Creator was ridiculously bad at most things. He was tolerated even then; he only left after he was banned from the chat for coming on the chat and claiming that he had learning disabilities, was dying of cancer or some such disease, and was having sex, while talking to us, with his girlfriend. That last one was really what sent him over the edge, because that behavior isn't really acceptable here. He had many issues. I don't know the reason behind Goldeneye's, but I wasn't referring to you when I mentioned people maybe needing to find a different place. I think your stuff is mostly acceptable, and can probably be changed with minimal hassle (really, the most significant part will likely be Yahweh-related, which is inevitable since Yahweh is going to be deleted). The issue is the people who are too attached to their work to suffer any changes to it at all. As far as I can tell, you aren't in that category; you're willing to be accommodating, as long as your work isn't completely destroyed, of course. Hopefully, we will be able to agree on a point where your stuff is as you like it, but connected enough to suit us. --User:Thepantheon 05:12, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

Spirit
Sorry for the late response and all, Twilight. I've been busy with this and that, ya know? Anyways, I'm liking the approach you've taken with Spirit so far. The limitations he has at the minute can be removed as he trains, and he's at a good level at the minute for some growing lol. Looking forward to seeing him finished, dude. Kenji-Taichō (Talk) 16:32, March 3, 2011 (UTC)


 * I've saw the page with the new rules. Making the articles non-religious and to focus on Shinto beliefs, right? That means Chaos and Yawhew are gonna get booted too, right? Guess you'll need a new direction, dude. None of my works use religion heavily, with the exception of a few minor things like zanpakutō names (Kenji's is a prime example), so I'm safe enough in that regard, at least. Kenji-Taichō (Talk) 20:43, March 3, 2011 (UTC)


 * Well, at least you've got another stance to take with them in regards to their history, you know? Saves you the hassle of creating new ideas and writing it all up. You spent quite a bit of time on that race, so I'm pretty happy to see you had another idea in backup, dude. Kenji-Taichō (Talk) 17:08, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

Alright
sure man no prob Grizzaka 22:54, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

I understand and dude it's ur's, u don't have to give it to me Grizzaka 21:47, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

Latin Translation
Right, you should try to do this yourself, it takes a lot of time to find out Latin words, I suggest that you search for latin translation at Google though, much easier that way. Try many different sites, and as a notification. Diabolus don't have Zanpakuto or anything even remotely similiar to that, because the author, Illuminate Void tried to separate them from the other current Bleach Races.

And if you don't find a translation for it, try something simpler - Latin is after all a language which died out long ago, its hard to find exactly what you're looking for.

Njalm2 16:01, March 4, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks
thank you for the pic but I'm kinda sorry to say that I already have the same pic in my archive--[[User:King Cartman|King Cartman] 01:01, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

RE: Zanpakuto = Soul King
Thank you, I figured it's the only logical reason why Rangiku said he had a family, while Aizen refered to it as an "it". Anyways, I figure that works for Kamui. I'll get to the tournament as soon as possible. I'm just behind with these Captains (who knew it was this hard to make captains lol). --Seireitou-shishō (My True Identity 01:59, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

Hola
Hey Td5.... I have a question... What happens when I win this tourney? ^_^ Lone Black Garuga 02:20, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

Hm..
Not any in my archive but i can look around and link it to you if i find one. RozeluxeMeitzen 04:46, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

Howdy
Why I should win, eh? Sigh, I hate questions like that. I leave the decision completely up to you, Twilight, 'cause I've had fun throughout this entire match, and trying to sway your decision for or against wouldn't sit well with me. I'd basically be spitting in Yuki's face by turning around and saying why I should win, which is something I won't do. Regardless of your decision, I'm happy just to have had a chance to see what Kenji's capable of right now and how his Shikai gels as a single unit with all the different elemental powers it has. I know I'm being difficult, but that's my stance, pal. Kenji-Taichō (Talk) 13:35, March 6, 2011 (UTC)


 * That's fine by me, Twilight. Don't worry so much about favoritism, 'cause you'll have to make a decision regardless of the arguments we put forward saying whether our character wins or not. At the end of the day, we're all having fun so everyone wins. I'll drop Yuki the message now, then. Kenji-Taichō (Talk) 14:38, March 6, 2011 (UTC)


 * So, what happens now, then? You said near the beginning that the Supreme King would decide the winner, so does he intervene and end the fight and declare the winner? Yuki won't hold it against you, Twilight, I'm sure. So don't worry about it to much. We all knew you'd have the final word and none of us had any complaints. Anyway, I'm kinda flattered that the chat reckon Kenji should win the round, to be honest. Kenji-Taichō (Talk) 15:24, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

You always ask the interesting questions, pal. Greatest enemy or rival? Oh boy, there's been quite a few lol. It ain't Averian, 'cause he's won just as many as he's lost against him and both are pretty even. The same could be said of Kusaka Kori and Van Satonaka, but those three are quite close in power imo as Kenji could win on his own. If it came down to the one person he wouldn't have a hope in hell of beating on his own though, using only his own power, then I'd probably say his eldest brother Meian Shiba. Meian would wipe the floor with Kenji in almost every regard except Hakuda and the Yuengiri styles and do the majority of it with just his Shikai while Kenji would need a lot more to match him. So yeah, definitely Meian, dude. Kenji-Taichō (Talk) 16:35, March 7, 2011 (UTC)


 * He'll win the war with Averian regardless, 'cause there are still aspects of Kenji's abilities I haven't revealed yet such as his Bankai, his and Kyo's full fused state and its full potential and a few other surprises as well. The sword would help sure, but the army no; for the sole reason of who and what Kenji is. Kenji is the Head-Captain of The Ryu Order after all and the concept that the entire order works as a single entity in battle means that Kenji would never be battling Averian's hollow alone and he would trust those who follow him out of loyalty and respect more than those who follow because he happens to hold Zettaiteki. As for personality, he doesn't allow himself to be shackled by anything, so he'd fell indebted to the Supreme King if his army was called upon and that would put him in his pocket, so to speak. The Order would follow Kenji to the pits of hell itself out of their faith and loyalty to him, so he wouldn't turn to another force for help like that even if he did get over his own sense of freedom. The reason he aids Soul Society is because his adoptive mother is there and that it was once his home and doesn't want to see it destroyed like he did in the future he visited. But I thought there was more to the zanpakutō than simply being a powerful sword :) Kenji-Taichō (Talk) 16:59, March 7, 2011 (UTC)


 * Your race pre-dates the making of the universe now right, instead of being the ones who made it? The description works for its indestructibility, so nice one there. This zanpakutō gets more interesting as you reveal more, dude. Kenji-Taichō (Talk) 17:41, March 7, 2011 (UTC)

RE: Pictures
No, that I do not, I was not even aware that they could be labelled as Arks!

Njalm2 22:37, March 6, 2011 (UTC)

Masanori's Zanpakuto
It appears to me that his Zanpakuto, while certainly original lacks the nessecary work that is required to make such a Zanpakuto useful in rolepay: At the moment it is simply too powerful, with too minor weakenesses; the concept of making thoughts become reality is too powerful for it to not have severe limits, I suggest reading about Man'yōshū, it is a Zanpakuto made by Waterkai for Koukishi, and it has a certain similiar usage, though it is limited enough to be useful, in that it can even potentially kill the weilder himself if used unwisely. Otherwise though, it displays potential and it fit well with Masanori's personality, which is one of the most important aspects in my opinion.

Njalm2 19:01, March 7, 2011 (UTC)

RE: Spirit
Right, please simply edit the section here when you've finished the Zanpakuto and follow the instructions written therein and add the Zanpakuto name, and some general summary of what you want reviewed.

Njalm2 21:40, March 9, 2011 (UTC)

RE: Possible rp
No thanks. I'm already involved in some others atm, and don't really have time to devote to participting in more than two at a time. --- Chrono Nexus 02:17, March 10, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm...
I'm not trying to be mean or anything but I don't think its really needed. There are too many abilities on this site that are just made because it pops into someones head and then doesn't actually get any practical use. But that's just my opinion...sorry. RozeluxeMeitzen 03:27, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

RE: RP between Kamui and Masanori
Sure, but it'd need to wait until I get the ball rolling on one of my new arcs. --Seireitou-shishō (My True Identity 21:27, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

Ok
Sure! Gladly... What kind of RP u want? Lone Black Garuga 02:25, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Hmmm... Im pretty sure Ciel would manage to teach all without Margin but if you insist

Ciel = Kido, battle strategy, and enemy analysis

Margin = Brute force and strength... Head-on battle... Extreme endurance... EXPLOSIONS! lol

ur pick Lone Black Garuga 11:06, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

RE: Hey
Its not nessecary to make another RP, it really is as simple as removing everything that has something to do with Yahweh from the RP itself, there are rather few references to him after all.

The Optimates aren't supposed to be used in roleplay I gather, they're merely there for reference and who knows, perhaps a large scale tournament or other grand event somewhere along the road, but they'll NEVER fight, as their power is incomparable to Bleach Standards, thus, for them to fight would be stomping on your characters, as well as go against the rules of this Wikia.

Njalm2 16:50, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think your immortal pagan deities can coexist in the Hell Arc. As the original creator of the diabolus, of course Illuminate Void will have the final say over how he wants the diabolus used, so ask him. But if I had the authority to give you an answer, I'd say no. Chrono Nexus 04:07, March 14, 2011 (UTC)

The issue is twofold. I think the general quality of your writing isn't very good, and so I think trying to mash the immortal pagan gods together with the hell arc, would make the hell arc worse for it. I'm not trying to be offensive on this point, and I can appreciate your enthusiasm, but your grammar is very poor, your spelling is poor, and to be honest, I'm not a big fan of trying to impose/instill (realistic) religious teachings onto a fictional cartoon show. The second issue isn't unique to you, but a wider problem I've seen with this fanon community. Nearly all of you are more interested in "winning" any RP interactions you have, to "be the best" as opposed to telling a good story. I don't think winning or looking cool is the point, entertaining the reader is. So on this issue, it's more a matter of us having different intentions for our works, and so trying to combine them would lead to inevitable conflicts of interest as our artistic preferences clash. Chrono Nexus 04:30, March 14, 2011 (UTC)

For now, I'll have to say no, the only involvement from the Optimates will largely be from the shadows. However afterwards it may be possible to do an arc together. Though I'm curious, what did exactly did you have mind? --- Illuminate Void (Talk) 05:27, March 14, 2011 (UTC)

First and foremost you need to construct your ideas in a fashion that 1) everyone else can agree with 2) fulfills a purpose.

When you say, "existed before time" what does that mean? Time is abstract and is a measuring tool for beings like you and I. At the very least its a system wherein events happen sequentially as opposed to at the same time. How they did exist before this? I dont understand. What were they? What brought them into existence? For all the Optimates's power they existed only AFTER mankind was sentient enough to fall into sin. But you're creatures existed beforehand? I dont see how thats possible.

And the "darkness", what is that? What do mean? The plane of hell is spatially infinite so opening this ark to release "darkness" wouldnt really change much, considering you havent detailed its powers either.

As for Chaos, why would he bother stopping this? Secondly, how would he stop it? Seal them up again? I dont see much of an arc, if this being will just come down from god who knows where, fix things up and go back to where it came from. I'd rather not get into a pissing contest between "gods" as it is rather boring. --- Illuminate Void (Talk) 06:25, March 14, 2011 (UTC)

I have to second what these two people said as well, you don't give enough information in your articles which make them hard to work with, this is primarily the reason that I've declined your offer of creating one of the Kings.

Also, I think that such an item wouldn't serve any strict purpose, if they got their hands on it they would undouptedly make use of it negatively (Especially in the case of Beherith and Amon, but I also think the same applies to Lucifer and Beelzebub) - and what comes after that? They conquer the Human World, thats it? Not only would this more or less work out of the perspective that Illuminate Void, Chrono and myself have imagined for the Opimates, it would also serve no purpose whatsoever and look pretty ridicolous to boot.

At any rate, as far as I'm aware, the Optimates will simply be used in strict reference for the most part, perhaps with one or two of them hosting a large scale event in Hell: I've personally played with the thought of having another Tournament, though that is quite far into the future.

Njalm2 14:40, March 14, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not asking you to change your work, merely elaborate and explain them. Problems arise when we authors take too many liberities and begin changing some fundamentals of the Bleach Universe. There are...constraints we have to deal with, and its more difficult than you would be led to believe to create something new.

When we change the rules on how the universe operates, our articles will inevitably begin to clash with another. Or articles that dont have a Bleach-isque motif to them. Diabolus while unique still follow certain guidelines.

1) They are born from souls. Unlike hollows wherein souls lose to despair and lose their chain of fate, the souls Diabolus are born from, essentially maintain that chain of fate, but of those sent to hell. Same concept, but in a different place. So its reasonably possible. 2) Diabolus have three castes: Bestia, Daemon and Arcus Daemon, Hollows have three Menos castes: Gillian, Adjuchas and Vasto Lorde.

Of course I've taken the liberty of giving Diabolus different powers and abilities, but regardless, it follows the kind of guideline Tite Kubo has laid out for us. Its fine to create things that exist in mythology, but we cant create them directly and just drop em in the bleach world. They have to be adapted with a Bleach flavor.

You're explanations also don't make a lot of sense. These beings "imagined" themselves into existence? Can you explain what that means? So they existed...before, they existed? The imagination is born from a will, a sentient entity, so they alread were here, before they were here?

Thats the kind of thing you need to create an entire seperate article about, and explain just how they came into being. A few sentences isnt going to do the trick. Sorry if this comes off as aggressive, but I would prefer you better yourself as an author than just tell you the problems and not offer any help.

You mention that this "Ark" contains the "darkness" of the universe. No such thing has existed in the Bleach universe, and it seems that it was convienently created just so this "Ark" could have something sealed in it. And then in the end you simply gave it the same function as the Hogyoku, but now its a pissing contest, since its the "Super" Hogyoku. It seems that you have some really good ideas, but you tend to get impatient, and try to rush through them without thinking through them, and explaining them.

As of now the Kosumosukihaku's are alien beings that just..popped into the bleach universe. They dont serve any role, dont fill any particular niche, and just exist to...exist. Like they're just....there. You haven't given them any motivating goals, or restrictions. It'd be like adding..Goku to the bleach universe. Hey, here's this super powerful being, but whats he doing here? And Goku just smiles and says, "I'm here if you need anything." Ultimately thats what your race is at the moment. Flesh them out, give em life, give them a purpose. What do they bring to the Bleach universe? You have yet to go into detail about this. You say their Pagan Gods, but I dont see anything Pagan about them. They dont fit into any pagan religion, dogma or set of beliefs, more like a jumbled bunch, thrown together haphazardly and presented as Pagan Gods.

The key is explaining or expanding on Tite Kubo has already left for us. For example it IS possible to create the Olympian Gods. They wouldn't be gods, simply Lieutenant or Captain class Shinigami. But without things like Zanpakutou or Shunpo, instead, portfolio's, or domains of influence and power. Mortals were apparently strong enough to find ways to kill them so they arent going to be Aizen class in power either.

One of the things I hate about bleach is the standard its set for other authors. A measuring stick, of power in all of its absurdity. People want their creations to be powerful and so end up creating things that are just flat out MORE powerful than whats in canon cause they dont want to see them destroyed. I understand that, I do. But dont fall into that trap.

I ask you, assuming we did do this arc with the Optimates and the Kosumosukihaku. What would there be left to do? No greater evil could possibly exist. A being older than the universe came in to stop it. There is nothing left that we could do after that. Unless you start trumping your own creations in a DBZ-like fashion, thats it. Thats the end. Whats next? What could possibly challenge them after that? You're trying to have your Kosumosukihaku do too much at one time, and trying to have them fill every single role of god and pagan god, but in the end up doing none of that. Start small and work your way up from there. Like I said, you dont need to change your work. Just give it a focus, and expand from there. You cant think "outside the box" if you never have a "box" to begin with. --- Illuminate Void (Talk) 18:04, March 14, 2011 (UTC)

Heya Twilight
Naw, I haven't quit the wikis, so no worries about that, pal. I've just been busy with a few things I needed to do in person over the last few days making my time online few and far between, ya know? The girlfriend came down with a pretty bad fever and me being the big softie that I am, I was with her for the last five days straight playing messenger and fetcher boy :) Meh, it was pretty fun, though. Sadly, I won't be able to RP for a while, dude. I'll be on more regularly when things cool down over here, but when that it is is another matter, sadly so I'll only be posting on started RP's and a few of my characters to add ideas I haven't had a chance to write up. Anywho, personal spill over, you'll be happy to hear lol. How goes things for ya, dude? Kenji-Taichō (Talk) 17:58, March 14, 2011 (UTC)