Talk:PsykoReaper

Woah...there is soooo many problems with this...where to start..ah yes. A NUETRAL FUC*ING GOD?! Now I dont mind calling things the Spirit King and so on, but to literally call this guy a god! And what the hell is a nuetral god?! Ummm. NEXT! His personality has more condradictions than Obama's economic plan! This isnt even thought out properly, insanity can NEVER be a work of art, and a cat form...? Really? Have some originality! Yourichi can already do that, no need to make copies. You know, Im all for crossovers, but you just directly inserted Alice in Wonderland into the Bleach universe...oh hell no. At least disgues it! I dont even want to talk about his background, that was so confusing and obsurd, I have a headache just from reading it! Also..any captain can beat him? I dont think so, this guy is omnipotent, imortal, can read minds, and has the strength of God. Are you insane? No captain can beat that! Hell, the Gotei 13 combine cant beat that! You didnt even bother with any weaknesses either. This thing is by far the biggest Mary Sue to ever grace Mary Suedom..... Unless he is completely redone he is worthless to this wiki. If you redo him, i suggest adding original content while mixing it with some alice in wonderland ideas, and to give him more detailed, original powers. Sorry for the bluntness and for being harsh, but its my honest opinion.

Minkai, the Legendary Drunk 07:17, 19 August 2009 (UTC)