User talk:Kenji Hiroshi

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Problems
--アンタッチャブルかえんとりえいたい- "Untouchable Flame Bird Of Eternity" (吐露 - "Speak Your Mind" 18:12, July 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * 1) Zanpakutou have only 2 releases, and the zanpakutou belongs to Seigen Suzunami
 * 2) The pictures you are using are of Canon characters
 * 3) Yes remove the hyorinmaru tech
 * 4) Severarly tone down your zanpakutou as it is too powerful
 * 5) Please Follow the manual of style

Well
The thing is, I tend to discourage the whole "fusion", simply because I tried to utilize it once, and it failed, being written off as Godmodded. I recommend that you keep them seperate and remain as Bankai. --Seireitou-shishō (瀞霊冬川平) 19:12, July 16, 2010 (UTC)

Response
Okay Kenji, no problem. I'll do that for you now. Oh yeah, I was meaning to ask you if you got the alterations for my character Yoshiro Kazuki done? Make sure you add them for me when you have, okay? It'd be much oblidged. Garet Strife 22:25, July 16, 2010 (UTC)Garet Strife

Property
I saw on ten's talk page that you need the Property thing. I helped you with Kenji (article). Edit this message and copy the template here: すでに黒バン DarkNight  (Talk to me! | My Contributions) 12:08, July 22, 2010 (UTC)

Its alright, could you call me Hitsuke? I prefer to be called by my real name. Soifon seems, well weird. Anyway, your welcome and if you ever need help again, i'll try to help. Good luck with your characters! Oh and Me and Firegod00 made a group of people called the Soul Suckers. You might wanna make one if possible. We want to create a arc but we have not enough members. See ya すでに黒バン DarkNight (Talk to me! | My Contributions) 12:58, July 22, 2010 (UTC)

Hey
I just wanted to say that you really have an intresting character and i hope you keep up the good work ^^ Grizzaka 20:07, August 20, 2010 (UTC)


 * it's okay, say since you have a captain of squad five wanna make an Rp where my fomer captain and ur's fight? Grizzaka 20:28, August 20, 2010 (UTC)\
 * Actually if ur too busy then it's okay we can talk about it later Grizzaka 20:46, August 20, 2010 (UTC)
 * Well i just looked on google for my character and his forms, why don't you try there? Grizzaka 20:55, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

Yoshiro Kuzaki
I must ask you to remove Yoshiro Kuzaki's pictures, as they were one and all taken from a Bleach character, Ashido Kanō. --The Raven Master 21:27, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

The Hollow picture for sure, as it is just generic and could be anyone killing a Hollow. The full zanpakutou, I guess you can, but not the picture of the chipped guard. I think the main pic has to go though, I'm sorry. --The Raven Master 21:41, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

Do you mean for appearance, or just ideas in general? --The Raven Master 21:51, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

My Kidō
Sure, just use them wisely. --Seireitou-shishō (My True Identity 17:42, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

Hey
Uhmm...Hello..Greetings....Hi.... -bored and has nothing to do- Uhmm...Gud luck? Lone Black Garuga 12:41, August 30, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah....A MH fanatic hehehe.... Tnx and i wish u the same wid ur work! Lone Black Garuga 14:15, August 30, 2010 (UTC)

Hey
So are you ready to RP with me or is it too soon? Grizzaka 14:44, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

Well i need to first ask do you have a chatandgo? Grizzaka 14:54, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

Sure my bad, sorry for suggesting it so who will start the story off? Grizzaka 15:19, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

Sure but i need to tell you that Ray Martinez has changed a bit, and what do i call the story? Grizzaka 15:29, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, well i did the first part and i made the story now it's ur turn http://bleachfanfiction.wikia.com/wiki/Clash!_Captains_of_the_5th_Division!_or_5th_Division,_Past_and_Present. Grizzaka 15:42, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

um, let's just make it where he was ordered to go and kill him then Ray will try to tell him but he won't listen

Ur turn

How bout Where Ray spares his life and tells him the truth and leaves then Ryo decideds weither or not to believe him Grizzaka 17:49, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

Sure, but after a while of battiling k? Grizzaka 17:59, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

Sure fine with me, ur turn Grizzaka 18:30, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

Thx Ryo is pretty bad ass himself, it's ur turn now

Yo
Hey thanks for comment and if you wanna RP sometime just ask xD RAD boy 16:45, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

Hey
You wanna do an arc or something, i really like your characters alot :) Grizzaka 04:41, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

sure that's fine with me, sorry i asked bro i didn't know you were doing another one Grizzaka 14:00, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

me 2, so just tell me when ur ready k? Grizzaka 14:26, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

RP?
Hey. I just read your characters and I think they are just AWESOME! I would really like to RP with you. I'll use whoever you want me to. Thank You and Have A Nice Day! すでに黒バン DarkNight (Talk to me! | My Contributions) 08:05, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm.... Zen would meet up with whoever you want me to use and after talking, they decide to fight each other. すでに黒バン DarkNight (Talk to me! | My Contributions) 09:02, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

Then I'll use Gorrión. Here's the link: Elemental Freak vs Paranoid Arrancar: Double Trouble? すでに黒バン DarkNight (Talk to me! | My Contributions) 09:36, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

Sure! Your turn! すでに黒バン DarkNight (Talk to me! | My Contributions) 09:55, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

Do you have a chatango? That way it'll be easier for me to talk to you. Oh and wanna participate in an arc? Your turn! すでに黒バン DarkNight (Talk to me! | My Contributions) 10:03, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

So, do you want to participate in an arc? Anyway, your turn, dude! すでに黒バン DarkNight (Talk to me! | My Contributions) 10:16, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

Now its yours! すでに黒バン DarkNight (Talk to me! | My Contributions) 10:28, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

Your turn again! Maybe both of us could do that arc with Grizza! すでに黒バン DarkNight (Talk to me! | My Contributions) 10:39, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

Ur turn! すでに黒バン DarkNight (Talk to me! | My Contributions) 10:52, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

UR TURN DUDE!!! すでに黒バン DarkNight (Talk to me! | My Contributions) 11:00, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

ur turn again! すでに黒バン DarkNight (Talk to me! | My Contributions) 11:57, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

Your turn dude! すでに黒バン DarkNight (Talk to me! | My Contributions) 12:24, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

Hey. I really want you to get a chatango cuz it will really be easier. Your turn! すでに黒バン DarkNight (Talk to me! | My Contributions) 12:39, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

Urs now! すでに黒バン DarkNight (Talk to me! | My Contributions) 12:54, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

Oh Right... Do you want to join my Espada or Gotei 13? Gorrión has a probelm with mist since he got turned into a Arrancar. Your turn to rock the house! すでに黒バン DarkNight (Talk to me! | My Contributions) 13:11, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

How about.. there would be no winner or loser... instead, they become friends and work together? すでに黒バン DarkNight (Talk to me! | My Contributions) 13:22, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

I don't get compliments that much... but thanks for your compliment. It was fun RPing with you too! Hope we can RP again soon! すでに黒バン DarkNight (Talk to me! | My Contributions) 13:41, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

Yo man
Sorry I haven't been on lately, Ken. I like what you've done with the characters. Great job! Hehe, I even forgot my sig the first time.--Garet Strife 10:15, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

I've been busy with this and that, you know how it goes. I won't be on long today either. In fact, I came on to tell you that your free to do what you want with the story. I'm goin' on holiday for a few weeks. I'll talk to you later on tonight. You haven't changed your number, right?--Garet Strife 10:38, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

RE: Canon Characters
You'll need to ask User:Ten Tailed Fox, as he owns Shinji and Kensei for BFF. --Seireitou-shishō (My True Identity 09:22, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

chat
im bored in school no classes crap. Garet Strife 13:21, September 3, 2010 (UTC)


 * we still drinking on saturday?Garet Strife 13:38, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Vizard
Well if that's the only thing you're going to use them for, then go ahead.  ~ ~ Ten Tailed Fox   &lt;t al k &gt; 13:50, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Uhm...
Just saying hello again...hehehe... (lying)..Was wondering if ur interested in...RPing? hehehe ^^ Lone Black Garuga 11:08, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Kazuma Nishiki
Yo man, know the character I made? Kazuma Nishiki? Go ahead and use him in your own stories whatever way you wish. I couldn't be bothered be right now to do any writing. Garet Strife 11:14, September 7, 2010 (UTC)

Thank Goodness
Thank goodness i saw zieg...i was about to use cloud....why am i telling this? cuz i got nothing else to do...and well..uhmm well...sorry for the disturbance hehehe... (why the heck did i even post this?) Lone Black Garuga 12:20, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

still wondering if you want that RP i proposed....^_^ Lone Black Garuga 12:23, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

And....Sorry
Sorry for not replying on your last post in my talk page.... Lone Black Garuga 12:27, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Uhmm was planning on using..... Margin Heart if you don't mind Lone Black Garuga 12:33, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Nah...U start it...(bad in intros) Lone Black Garuga 12:38, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

RP?
Sup. I read some of your works and really liked them so I was wondering if you would like to do an RP sometime? RazeOfLight 14:08, September 12, 2010 (UTC)


 * Its fine. And thank you for the compliment of my articles. If you don't mind me asking, Which did you like best? Oh! And if when you talk to lone black garuga tell her that I'm still waiting for a reply in the RP between me and her too. RazeOfLight 15:23, September 12, 2010 (UTC)
 * Thanks. And what do you mean by hide? RazeOfLight 15:37, September 12, 2010 (UTC)
 * No I don't know. i was wondering that myself so if you find out could you let me know? RazeOfLight 15:54, September 12, 2010 (UTC)
 * Thanks for letting me know. Most people when you ask them they tend to forget. lol. RazeOfLight 18:36, September 12, 2010 (UTC)
 * thanks you too. Can't wait to hopefully RP with you sometime RazeOfLight 18:51, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

I think
I think we should make a collaboration together and our characters should meet because I read your articles and liked them alot and it would be really cool and fun.

Give me your opinion on the matter whenever you can thanks

Mugen Sora-kun 19:24, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

I really like Kenji hiroshi but there are alot of similarities between your Ryouta Hachiro and Ryuusei for instance both are loyal to the gotei 13 but are good hearted and will willingly go behind the gotei's back when its in its best interest that quality is really something and the Ryu order is pretty cool to.

Mugen Sora-kun 19:37, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Tis ur Go
Ur move Kenji! Lone Black Garuga 10:49, September 13, 2010 (UTC)

Heya! ur go kenji! and uhmm u can call me lone or yuki ^_^ sorry i cant reply that much...internet problems... Lone Black Garuga 09:39, September 14, 2010 (UTC)

Ur go then! Lone Black Garuga 09:59, September 14, 2010 (UTC)

Purinsu Kuchiki
I am sorry to bother you but I like another member, user, etc opinion on my first character article as I am new here now mind you it is about only haft way done but is it coming along I find, but first I know it has some spelling mistake which I search and find everyday and fix them to prove them.Twilight Despair 5 14:23, September 14, 2010 (UTC)

Well, thank you for being honest just templates are kind of hard mainly for unloading the pic which is the one of him between apperance and personialty. but if can u help that really would help just i only have computer use on the computers at college so i type fast to save time. Side note the ability you said is more like Byakuya Kuchiki's Senbonzakura just it has the power to disrupt spirit energy based attack as well. I am working a fourth ability for him.

Just my character is based off following with some enhances.

Being kisuke urahara in height without his shoes 6ft weight at 125. Also his eye color is saphire blue with jet black hair.

His strength kido is somewhat higher than kisuke's as he doesnt need to say the incantation of hado #91. Also his zanpakuto abilities were based off mostly of kisuke's but slightly Byakuya's too with a Kuchiki theme behind it.

His spiritual power is between say byakuya's and kenpachi Zaraki meaning, not as strong as Aizen's or Yamamoto's but close to them.

His apperance was based off mostly of Byakuya. His intellect was based of Ulquiorra's.

Just I want my first character too be good and well I am trying to make a real good looking article like if it was a real character in the Manga/Anime.Twilight Despair 5 15:54, September 14, 2010 (UTC)

Thank you and i am working on his bankai i got the enhancements and new abilities for it in my head but i need a name. for a banaki as Hakuoukoku (Whitekingdom) is its shikai name and i need a good bankai name got any ideas?

I got one idea but now this is in english Immortal WhiteKingdom.Twilight Despair 5 16:37, September 14, 2010 (UTC)

well i got to get to class for college so till tomorrow bye.Twilight Despair 5 16:46, September 14, 2010 (UTC)

You can fix the spelling if you want to but dont have to and the bankai name is not set in stone but i think ill go with that. Sorry it took me so long to reply but the computers at my college were being which out for newer models.Twilight Despair 5 15:17, September 16, 2010 (UTC)

that is fine and the tempalte is good. and I am figuring out the two new abilities for his bankai now i can find the jap translation but tell me if these go with his theme.

White Knight

Sword of the King

Twilight Despair 5 15:49, September 16, 2010 (UTC)

K thanks just ill put in myself but other than the hair color his appearance is nearly the same as mine. I tried to base myself in bleach as a character. But I'll find the jap translation for Sword of the King. Plus would you like to use him in any storys saga or rps is it. Anyways thanks I also will be making his lieu Suzaku and i need a surname you want to make him or want me to?Twilight Despair 5 16:11, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

Characters
Hello Kenji, I was wondering if you could look over my characters and give me an opinion on them. I'm a new user and it's the first time that I'm actually creating characters where everyone could see. So any feedback would be greatly appreciated. Thank you. Northstar1012 18:20, September 14, 2010 (UTC)

Awesome. I appreciate it. I'm hoping, assuming that I've used the correct formatting, to use these characters as templates for the rest of my characters. Wanted to make sure that I build the pages correctly. Northstar1012 18:28, September 14, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks! I greatly appreciate the criticism. I was definitely hoping that I didn't godmod and hopefully the rest of my characters remain believable and not overpowered. Also, for images, I'm still in the process of drawing them out and only managed to get Kenta up there. If you want, I can keep you posted on any new characters I come up with if you want to check them out. Northstar1012 18:51, September 14, 2010 (UTC)

Ur up!
As the title says...and when u have time...can u look at my char and maybe leave some comments? thanks Lone Black Garuga 22:12, September 14, 2010 (UTC)

KK and kk for ur suggestion Lone Black Garuga 22:49, September 16, 2010 (UTC)

Ur go Kenji! and pls review Margin and Zen for me... ^_^ Lone Black Garuga 11:37, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

I done, u go ^^ Lone Black Garuga 11:53, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU! I really appreciated the comments and how u liked them. ^_^ I'm sooo happy someone liked it! and ur go lol Lone Black Garuga 12:20, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

Ur go! Lone Black Garuga 12:43, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

U just might want to contact me here :http://yukidomari.chatango.com/

And maybe join this chatroom once for a while.....well its not like its always dead... :Chat For BFF and NF

Re: RP
HAHAHA I was just about to send you a message about that. And yes that's fine. Would you mind helping me transform to my characters into vizards? I'm not too clear on how to do that.RazeOfLight 14:44, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

Well just the two. My main character Van Satonaka and Anna Rosenkrantz. And I don't want to make Atsuya anything just yet. Jitsuzai already is a vizard (someone else made him). But yea incorporation into the RP works for me. I just don't know how. sorry for seeming like such a noob with this. RazeOfLight 14:51, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

Thank you for the compliments. Hm I was thinking the same thing about having an inner hollow already there with Van I think I just needed a way to draw it out. Maybe you could use a character more on my characters levels along with Kenji so I won't be swatted down so easily (Been reading the RP you and yuki are doing). But I guess I can have Anna get infected by something to make her into a Vizard. So would you mind starting it up? I'm no good at intros. RazeOfLight 15:09, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

For one I have to applaud you for using the word rubbish. I like that word...can't help it. And as for a name..."Into The Sunset: A Meeting Pre-determined By Fate" And I like that idea of fighting. I was gonna use Jitsuzai too since he is already a vizard and can explain to Van what's happening. Oh and if you want you have Kazuma learn his shikai here that way we both gain something from this. If it doesn't interrupt any of work of course. RazeOfLight 15:23, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

No problem man. I like RPs where everyone can get something out of it and aren't just fighting just to fight. Oh do you have a chatango? It might make things easierRazeOfLight 15:41, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

Its cool if we chat on here. I just didn't want to end up clogging up your talk page becuase I know I'm gonna have lots of question as it goes on. And yes cheers! Hmm well could Kenji become a possible tutor for Van and co.? That way its not like its just one battle and they never see each other again but, it actually has some continuity to it.RazeOfLight 16:04, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry about earlier. It was my schools lunch time and everyone wanted me to go. Ans so would it be like my guys are involved in your arc? If that's the case would it be cool if I added you their relationship sections? RazeOfLight 18:20, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

Wow. I'm gonna start calling you sensei. You think way more in depth about these things than I do. I was going to do the same thing but I didn't know the difference between "history" and "synopsis" so i made it one thing on my pages. And yea feel free to add in the relationships for your characters. That would be great. RazeOfLight 18:40, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

Well its def. more in depth than anything I do. my pages are all over the place currently. And sensei is just a term of respect of my eyes. You actually kept your word about an RP. Other people I asked said they woud want to but thedn ignored me when I talked about starting it up. And yea I didn't think about the whole Van thing. Hmm well you can always bring the other people back to fight Van. That way he's in danger cause Kenji switches opponents and the others fight Anna or something like that. RazeOfLight 19:22, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

Wow. We have similar thinking apparantly because I was just thinking the same thing. I just threw that fear/weakness in for fun. I didn't think it would ever really have a use lol. That's like the perfect way to bring it out. And about the other guy why doesn't he just have the ability to create a temporary artificial moon? That way he can actually fight sometimes but its your call. RazeOfLight 19:55, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

Oh I know about some of the history there. I've been reading as you've been posting. And its cool man. I understand with other stuff to do. I have a movie date later on so I was trying to get it all going. We got a good a bit going already so its all good. And thanks for thye compliment for Anna. I tried to make her unique and able to fight against those OPed characters on the site. And I will add the combinations..that's a good idea. RazeOfLight 20:23, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

Alright man. I like this too. Most people just try to overpower you but, you actually fight it out. And yea we can pick it up later. Thanks dude you rock! I'm actually excited to see whats gonna happen. RazeOfLight 23:19, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

Well to be honest I like the idea but, I have no idea what you mean by doing that with Van. Well I think I do but, if you could lead up to it somehow to give me a feel for it I would love that. And I think that Kenji should somehow slowly force Van to need to call on his inner hollow for support in their battle. As for Kazuma and Anna, we could have Anna put the pressure on him and then he starts to hear the inner voice of his zanpakuto. RazeOfLight 15:25, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

New Characters
Hey Kenji, I added 2 new characters: Hana and Fujibayashi if you wanted to check them out and offer any assistance or critiques. These were a bit more rushed unfortunately so they may not have the same quality as the other 2 I have. Either way, let me know what you think whenever you have the time. Thank you. Northstar1012 19:07, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks for the input. To be honest, I had come up with those characters the same I wrote them here, so I felt like i rushed them. My universe takes place way into the future, as to avoid cannon characters existing within the same timeframe. Trying to keep cannon characters as only reference points and nothing more. I have 2 more captains to write up that are definites and hopefully I can get them tonight or tomorrow. Either way, I'll keep you posted. I just realized, I have alot of lieutenants I have to write up lol Northstar1012 19:42, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

Oops
Did i say its ur go? sorry Lone Black Garuga 11:32, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

suzaku
Suzaku

Could you make him as if i make all of the character than it becomes borin sorry it took so late to reply.

Just make his appearance more muscluar than Purinsu's but between height of 6 to 6:2 ft please hair color and eye color doesnt matter to me nor if he has any to no unique things like tattoos etc.

And make his zanapkuto a melee type but immense in size like Ichigo's sealed zanapkuto.Twilight Despair 5 22:55, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

I have edit Suzaku slightly tell me what you think as it is your atricle to but i didnt say it right his Zanapkuto's shikai is immense in size not sealed though what what you think.Twilight Despair 5 15:23, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Thank you but his zanpakuto isn't a defesive trpe at all believe me but my thought was as Purinsu's Zanpakuto is that of a kingdom and that Suzaku's is that of is guardian protecter but I dont know if you watch other anime but his zanpakuto not Sazulu himself but his zanpakuto kind of looks like Bankotsu's halberd Banryu from the anime Inuyasha. Twilight Despair 5 15:46, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Well if you dont watch it the double edge weapon is what i was talking about. But as for the whole kingdom and its protector thats is just cause their theme's match they are seperate shinigami with their own powers/abilities and his zanapkuto well its call guardian not cause its a defesive type as it isnt just I though guardian sounded better that warrior or knight for a melee type like this this what I was thinking.

Purinsu and his zanapkuto is that of a king and his kingdom

Suzaku and his zanapkuto is that off a traveling guardian fighter that protects others like Purinsu as a king with his immense strength his zanapkuto.

This just how other shinigami or people would describe themTwilight Despair 5 16:41, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Thank for that but they are really just good for the theme just they battle like Suzaku battles the weaker opponents thus protecting Purinsu so he can fight against captain level fighters for his power is stronger that Suzaku's. Just they become a good combo team but not at first then the become a team like Kisuke and Yourichi.Twilight Despair 5 16:57, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Ur go
and sure! Lone Black Garuga 12:46, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Your turn.
First I just want to thank you for the property template I never really thought about it myself. And I'm trying not to overpower Kazuma too much cause I'm trying to give his power a chance to manifest itself first. As for Van. So you're saying I don't have to fight the inner hollow and I can get it to just lend Van its power? That would be a lot easier than having to fight it. I can make it so Van takes too much and then Kenji has to fight it back into control. Would that work? Sorry about the late reply btw you probably already posted since I started writing this but, my com was lagging. RazeOfLight 15:57, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Its fine with me if you have his release start up. No need to ask man. Its all good with me lol. And as for that Kido page. What would I need to do? Cause I could probably think of some things if it was needed. Oh the funny thing is that Van can't really but ALL his friends are really good at it...jitsuzai. And I wanted a crazy hollow that balanced out the usually calm Van like it would be the opposite of whatever Van's emotion is at the time. You think that would work? RazeOfLight 21:10, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

New Kido page under your name
Want to start our own kido page since there is nolonger a continully canon on BFF.Twilight Despair 5 20:10, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Thats fine but all I ask is that Bakudo # 2, 5, 50, and 90 and Hado # 10, 52, and 92, 94 be saved for me as I have reasons for those excat numbers.Twilight Despair 5 20:26, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

If hado number 92 is taken than I wont argue about it I was claiming ones that havent yet as could start with the newest version of the Kido page on Bleach Wiki with pic so that it looks real as possible.Twilight Despair 5 20:44, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

K I just want the our own kido page cause I Purinsu uses Hado # 91 Senjū Kōten Taihō his highest level hado without using an incanation often but he can cast up to Hado 94 with the incanation.Twilight Despair 5 20:58, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Ok and You can call me Td5 and remeber we should start when a fresh undated kido page from Bleach Wiki and then add what kido spells or technique and I will be adding on to it Master Expert Etc levels and describing what how strong is each level. Also remember the pic used look like if it is good for what number you or I or what the other user uses like lets say I have a spells that is Hado #80 but its pic and description looks like it wouldnt be higher than 70 that he should talk things like that and fix them. Oh and please no weird kido like you die or you lose your shinigami powers if yu use it that is just wrong.Twilight Despair 5 21:44, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

The forbidden spells can be like those just none of the 1-99 of Bakudo and Hado Spells please. Also I got ideas incanations, name and can make good judgements on their power place on the scale of 1-99 but I need is jap transtations.Twilight Despair 5 21:54, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Ok laterTwilight Despair 5 22:02, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

I have added both the real Hado # 91 and 96 with pics as they have been shown in the manga. I will add some spells later though some of the might seem somewhat unusual at first.Twilight Despair 5 13:43, September 20, 2010 (UTC)

I add a pic for Hado 86 but in my opinion its level seem to me to be like 97 given the powers you gave it but its only my opinion.Twilight Despair 5 19:36, September 20, 2010 (UTC)

You may want to check the Kido page as I added a Bakudo number 10 spell and a pic for 86 but in my opinion its overall power goes into the 90's like ever 95 or 97 but if you want it there at 86 that its fine.Td5 01:46, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

New Character
New character is up, based on Byakuya. His name Mamoru Masahiro. Still working on his zanpakuto, but any comments or critiques are appreciated. Northstar1012 16:39, September 20, 2010 (UTC)


 * Thanks for the comments. I'm trying hard to create characters that aren't overpowered and balanced with the rest, as my stories don't have a central protagonist, but instead all characters play an important part. It's more about the team, instead of one individual person. I just need to write up 2 more characters, hopefully tonight, and I'll be done with the characters that I came up with. One is going to have sound based powers and the other is going to have lightning based powers. I did manage to come up with a general idea for 2 others, but need to finalize those. Either way, I'll keep you posted. Northstar1012 20:39, September 20, 2010 (UTC)

RE:Bakkoto
We have no specific Bakkoto rules, so far as I know. I believe you can make your own, as long as it is within the general rules such as godmodding and crossover, etc. You could also use a canon one, if you can explain how it was obtained. --The Raven Master 23:30, September 20, 2010 (UTC)

Kido page #2
As the first message is kind of messing here are the two last messages I sent you:


 * I have made Bakudo number10 and added a pic for Hado #86 but in my opionion its power and how its an large area attack I believe it falls into the Level-90 class Kido around ether 95 or 97 as 96 is taken. Please think about it.
 * Other than the ones I requested are there any numbers in Bakudo or Hado you are Raze want for yourselfs for any reason?Td5 13:30, September 21, 2010 (UTC)
 * I was also thinking of a one hit immense forbidden Kido and if you even want to here the idea let me know but here is the name. Scythe of the Death Goddess.Td5 14:08, September 21, 2010 (UTC)
 * Sure 95 is fine. As for the Forbidden Kido Scythe of the Death Goddess. It is a very powerful secret Technique that belongs to the Shinigami Royal Family only that can bring ruin or death to a demension. Its requirements are 10,000 Human souls or a Captain-class Shinigami, Vizard, Hollow, Arrancar etc to be sacrificed after a scythe is conjured and has the power to destroy all life on said demension by dropping the scythe's blade to the ground it destroys the scythe instantaneouly and after releases the immense power of the scythe it also kills the caster as they is no way to survive the power of this technique because the caster is at ground zero of the Kido. While what you think.It will be a main story plot item as the first Shinigami King used it against the Hollow royal family and that is why Huceo mundo is a desert.Td5 15:40, September 21, 2010 (UTC)
 * That is understandable just even if it would be allowed I would make it so hard to cast and first you must say the incanation and even if you have the requiments it takes 13 hours for it to be casted also only the royal family knews it but how about it can bring ruin to a small demension like how the Kido cannon is used in the first Bleach movie to destroy the valley of screams.
 * Also I edited Hado nuber 9 as you or Raze made it sound more like a bakudo spell thought I made sound like it can still be used like binding spells just that I made its purpose more for attacking.
 * Finally, I cannot seem to make more tables on my college computer on the kido page can you add a hado number 50 I'll fill it in later thanks.Td5 16:04, September 21, 2010 (UTC)
 * I made bakudo number #90 what you think?Td5 11:06, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

Hollow.
Thanks for the compliments. I wanted to make it like how it happened with ichigo but in a different manner (sorry if that seemed confusing) I'm not too sure how to go about it from here other than augmenting my powers unless that's it then ill just feel silly lol RazeOfLight 15:28, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks. And yea I did watch that filler (the part you refrenced was one of the only GOOD parts imo) Oh when should I add the hollow section to Van's page? I don't want to edit it too soon and seem like I'm adding powers in as we go along but I don't want to forget the ideas that I have running through my head. RazeOfLight 17:23, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Yea I like that part too. Personally I liked Muramasa. I wish he was still around as someone's zanpakuto. They could've worked in that being ichigo's second sword or one of his friends'. Muramasa is just too awesome (imo) not to be used more. But yea I'll add it in as we go. He already has cero doble (nel's move) if you've read it in the Rp already. I'll think of something else too. And I found a great picture for it. lol I'm liking this battle. Fell free to go all out. Cause the hollowfication is still getting worse. RazeOfLight 17:44, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Haha thanks. I didn't think it would actually play out like that by crystalizing lightning. I did it cause I noticed how many OP elemental zanpakutos there are on here and it would make things a lot more even. And Kyo's power? Thats the second sword right? Cause that's pretty dang awesome! RazeOfLight 18:34, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

So you're going to hueco mundo? Hmm sounds interesting I have to make sure to keep up with everything. And yea it took awhile to pick crystal. I went through nearly every character i could find on here and no one was using it. I'm not complaining. I like being a unique zanpakuto user. And its fine if Kazuma joins in. Beating down the hollow is going to take some work lol RazeOfLight 18:54, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Yea. That would be fine. It would give a chance for Anna to possibly gain some new talents. And so how far am I going in your Arc? I don't mind helping but, I dont want to add myself in when you h=want something else. RazeOfLight 19:09, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

I'm enjoying this RP too and thanks for the compliments! I would love to do more with you. I'm not real sure how the two groups are gonna balance as a team but still. lol Oh! We can even have a mini-side tourney between the two groups or even with other ppl on BFF. I think that would be fun but, Idk. And thanks I had anna charge him so she'll be fighting him for a bit. Jitsuzai might end up fighting with Kazuma again but eh...Oh do you think people are gonna think Anna is OP cause after awhile she's gonna have so many powers its gonna be hard for people to compete. =PRazeOfLight 03:24, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

Yea I was thinking about that and I realized that she already had a handicap of the moves being weaker than the originals. I just forgot I had that in there. And the balance thing I just meant some personalities might clash especially since you haven't met Van's brother Shiro (and his better than thou personality) but, then again what group ALWAYS gets along. And I have to admit that was pretty skillful how you added in my Hollow abilities as the battle went on. I can't wait to see how things continue in other RPs. I kinda want to know what Ino's zanpakuto is (fav. female from Naruto btw) your move RazeOfLight 14:21, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

THANK YOU! Everyone always says how Ino doesnt do anything and thats cause sakura is spending all the screen time complaining! lol And I just meant that you read hos hollow abilities and included them as a part of it before I did which most people dont do. I thought it was pretty cool. And that's a good idea. Should I separate my characters into two groups instead of trying to have all of them in every RP I do? that way its not cluttered with people.

I think I'm gonna stick with one group and just make them the best I can. And actually funny thing is I knew Kenji's abilities without going to his page during the Rp cause like I said before I've read some of your works with him in it. But I do see what you mean about it flowing easier that way someone does just pop up mid-RP saying their character has an automatic kill skill. But yea...its gonna be a mixture of Van fighting and down and Kenji beating him. If you read it you'll know. RazeOfLight 19:08, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks. I liked Jitsuzai coming in like that. Made me feel like it was all happening right in front of me. Well its your turn. Fell free to things how you want it now. RazeOfLight 20:04, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

Yea that's a good idea. Just let me know where the Arc is going from here. This was really helpful in developing my characters. RazeOfLight 20:33, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

Rp fight?
When I finish Purinsu would you like him to fight Yoshiro Kuzaki for what very reason you or I make. But I am not sure if our character match in strength cause mine might be too strong for him now at least, Though if Yoshiro can use a 89 Hado than wouldnt his level be master not expert as master are normally the only ones you can cast number 80 or 90 kido. Td5 16:17, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Well how about they fight in the past and well they become friends after and so well he will be at the appropriate level in the pasted.--Td5 16:51, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

I was thinking of that one a mission Yoshiro meets up with Purinsu after learns his bankai he is curious what he is doing and well thats a start. Ans what is your new thoughts about the Scythe of the Death Goddess Kido.Td5 18:44, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Just when Purinsu and yoshiro meet Purinsu has just learned his bankai so if they fight who would win and who would loses or do you want an interputed fight?Td5 19:21, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

ok and it the meantime I'll work on Purinsu's Bankai and do you want them to become friends rivials or enemies. And About the Forbidden kido it doesnt destroy like destruction it bring ruin or death like all life like plants peoples etc die like it makes the land becomes void of life but we got time to work out the details we can says its power can do harm to even demensions though the spirit energy and sacrifices would be untold like 1,000.000 humans to bring death to entire demension.Td5 19:59, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Please read you messages.Td5 18:49, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry about that I send my own messages to myself sometimes. But no White knight is his not ulimate power but the suits of armor can be broken easily the more that are made so even if one thousand knights are made they can be beaten easy and Purinsu cannot use his zanpakuto other abilities until he stops using the white knight his strongest attack his the Sword of the King but I am working out the details.Td5 19:14, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

I am in the next 30 mins gonna add Purinsu's Sword of the King bankai ability and I like your new Kido spells.Td5 21:08, September 25, 2010 (UTC)

Hikaru Miyazaki
New character is up though he doesn't have a history yet. Still working on that part. Let me know what you think. Unfortunately, with this character, I just put him in fast to get everything on the page. Northstar1012 16:18, September 21, 2010 (UTC)


 * Haha thanks for the compliment. Hikaru was actually my first character that I started and I really liked the name I gave his Zanpakuto. I wanted to create someone that was more comical and free-spirited, as opposed to the rest of the list that's fairly serious. And I like that he's married. It's a trait that he share's with the 12th Division captain who has a wife AND daughter. I thought it would be a nice twist since we rarely ever saw captains with families. Northstar1012 16:57, September 21, 2010 (UTC)
 * At first, I was worried how inferior my characters were to the majority of this site. Everyone seems to be masters at everything, prodigies, having such uber-immense-super-ultra-so-much-more-powerful-than-your-character-spiritual pressure, that I don't know how people can write stories all the time when so many equally powerful characters exist... That's why I came up with rules when writing my characters. First and foremost, none of them are or will ever be hybrids, gain hollow powers, be endowed with extraordinary power, etc... They will be Shinigami captains, who know their limitations and what they're fully capable of. Secondly, when I write the character, they have to have a weakness, be it physical or emotional. Each character needs to be going through something. No character is perfect, no character is just born and has access to a huge assortment of abilities, ascends to a new form or awakens hidden powers. I feel like this just cheapens the character a bit... and alot of characters out there aren't just Shinigami. They are Vizards, or Shinigami hybrids, or whole new races all together. And I think most people don't want to be Shinigami because, frankly, after looking through this site, they're probably now the weakest form a human spirit can be. Not to say that some people don't have awesome characters. Some are really well written, thought out and given interesting history and plots to them. But some, and unfortunately there will always be some, are made just because they want to have an uber powerful character that can easily destroy 300 arrancar with a wave of a hand, or battle the entire Gotei 13 in their Bankai forms and still be able to beat them all with "no apparent effort" or "relative ease". Now I think I'm just ranting haha but back to my characters. My whole thought process for them was to make them strong, but have limitations. I think that's why I feel they're more believable than just overloading them with abilities and having 17 abilities in their Shikai form, and then 59 abilities in Bankai form. I just want o keep it to no more than 3 abilities if they have multiple abilities. I want the character to have to deal with and work within the limitations of their Zanpakuto. This is what makes them have to be versatile and creative with what their abilities are and the skills they possess. Alright, I think I'm done for now lol Northstar1012 03:00, September 22, 2010 (UTC)
 * You got it, buddy. I still have a few ideas for lieutenants that I have to clear up. And then I need to start making enemies up. That's going to be another task and a half. It will most likely be arrancars, no new race or anything like that. Most likely since the Gotei 13 is being rebuilt, somewhere in Hueco Mundo there's going to be arrancars that want to rebuild the Espada. I am thinking about coming up with a race of arrancar henchmen that are really lower class arrancar that serve as cannon fodder really. I just wanted to have enemies that were humanoid in appearance and size, and not have huge monsters all the time. Centuries have gone by so hollows and arrancars began to evolve slightly. Have to clean that idea up. Northstar1012 20:59, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

Really!?
Wow. Before I say anything to the author take a look at this page Taishoku Kokumin. Is this a theft of Anna's abilities? I mean that would be really messed up but, eh I wanted a second opinion before I talked to the admins about it. But yea so do you want to do something else or are you going to do your own thing for a bit? I'm fine either way caue that RP was pretty fun. RazeOfLight 03:02, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Its fine. I'm gonna make a big deal out of it. Its like saying every ice zanpakuto is stealing hyourinmaru's abilities. I just have to make mine the best. And its cool I'm actually thinking about making a second group of characters cause i have a few more powers in mind for zanpakutos and they could either be allies or rivals for Van's group. Idk yet. Once I create them I'll give you the links so you can tell me what you think of them. RazeOfLight 02:28, September 24, 2010 (UTC)

Helpful Tip.
If you wish for actual pictures, try searching DeviantArt or Photobucket, or even Google Images (though I would discourage the latter due to its broad reach). But do look for images that are not of canon characters of other series. If you must do so, find pictures that are not obvious. --Senkaku, The Lost Prodigy 20:07, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Same place where the pics for the characters can be found. --Senkaku, The Lost Prodigy 21:57, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

kido reply
well the light kido sound like a binding spell but what is its effects.

The hado spell sound good but how about this since most high level kido spells are big attacks or area damage attack it could be hado number 50 as that sounds like a good fit and makes it strong but not unbeatable and it could works as without an incanation it does limited damage and numbing to the body to where it can with an incanation it can pierce most mid and some high level barriers along with greatly increased in lighting power to the spells damage power and numbing to the body.Td5 20:31, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks
Thank you for the compliments. I didn't expect you to read it yet but still. Now I just have to find a way to introduce them....after I finish of course. Any ideas? If not I can think of something. RazeOfLight 13:21, September 24, 2010 (UTC)

Yea that's why I wanted to introduce a new group. Cause my characters have like zero back story to them It just starts off with them in a random RP. I'm not too good at doing solo RPs so if you stop by and read it then and let me know if I do something wrong or could fix that would be apprecated. And thanks for the ideas for introduction. You're a life saver. RazeOfLight 13:43, September 24, 2010 (UTC)

Well I will def give you the link once I finish up all my characters and start it up. And there's a rule saying you can't use Naruto pics? People do it on here all the time. There's Madara on here and then there is the guy from d-gray man. (Idk his name). Everyone uses characters from different shows so i didnt know there were rules against it...that sucks! RazeOfLight 18:22, September 24, 2010 (UTC)

Ohhh, well I mean its no problem if we just conform to get them off our backs right? That's why I try to use pics that are from video games or unknown things. If you need some good pictures go to zerochan.net. And thanks one of my friends is helping me with the zanpakuto abilities so I can't take all the credit. Just have to make Luka's and then I'm finished. RazeOfLight 18:42, September 24, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry for the late response. I took a nap by mistake trying to think of a weapon for Luka's zanpakuto. And I take it you like the site cause I already see some new pics being used. Oh I will have to introduce your cousin to my friend cause there would become complete due their brains melding and becoming the new grand being =P. Well I'm about to go add Luka's zanpakuto abilities. Quick question. If I made it using plant life using electricity would that be a plant type or electric type? RazeOfLight 20:20, September 24, 2010 (UTC)

Oh I do like the bakkoto. I forgot about those things (didn't like the characters of that arc) but, its a nice implement I dint see that around here much. Can't wait to see how you use it. RazeOfLight 20:21, September 24, 2010 (UTC)

I tend to just ignore most fillers cause they don't interest me really (excluding the one with muramasa) And as I said before I can't wait to see how you implement that bakkoto into your RPs. That is def. going to be something I have to look out for when fighting you one day. Almost done with Luka. Then you can look over it when I'm finished. If you don't mind of course. RazeOfLight 21:03, September 24, 2010 (UTC)

VRRRRRRRRROOOOOOOOOOIIIIIIIII!
Is Zen ready to battle again? Also, wanna join my Espada list? すでに黒バン DarkNight (Talk to me! | My Contributions) 16:28, September 24, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks
Thanks for the welcome man :). I am still working on Taro as I was stuck on his appearance and personality. Have changed that and will have him done in a day or so. Maybe you could look him over then and let me know of yours views on him? Hope to see you around and maybe we could rp some time? Peace!  Sid  Mi Casa 20:33, September 24, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks for the review. I understand what you mean. I am expanding his history section and will make rp's for him to gain his powers after I make a few more characters to go along with him. Is there by any chance a way to hide a section for a period of time? And though I understand what you mean by revealing his powers slowly, how exactly do you implement that? List his powers at a weaker level and then make rps or stories to have him develop his powers and update the page as he develops? or something else? Peace!  Sid  Mi Casa 20:30, September 25, 2010 (UTC)

Ok got it. I'll go with making rps to slowly reveal his powers. The hiding part seems too complicated. Will have to make a few support characters first and then will start off. Thanks a lot for your help man :). Really appreciate it.  Sid  Mi Casa 21:00, September 25, 2010 (UTC)

Ur go
Sorry if im not on for such a long time....net problems and electricity probs....yes we'll go for the tie! ^^

after this fight, be sure to ask anything from me ^^ Lone Black Garuga 10:33, September 25, 2010 (UTC)

I heat it up for ya! let's go for this final clash! lol '''Bring it! Lone Black Garuga 10:57, September 25, 2010 (UTC)'''

=)
Thanks for the compliments dude. i figure you have to give them weaknesses and such cause I figured if you don't then characters will just be walking around thinking their unbeatable. Odd thought I know. And a lot of his normal skills are things just to counter the OP characters....cough cough the reflexes =P. I think once I get it going I might make them a part of the...oh wait I don't want to ruin the story before I even write it out. As for the zanpakuto thanks again. I wanted something that would be a bit different. I told my friend that I wanted to combine two elements and he said go for the most used (fire tree would be useless, lightning being the next) and the one used the least (plant) and thus the zanpakuto was born. Well I think its time i get to work on the story. RazeOfLight 12:59, September 25, 2010 (UTC)

About Taro's Review
Dude, I don't think that Taro is that good. I mean, he is a bit overpowered to me. Especially the part: He is also capable of completing Jinzen within roughly half a year, a feat which even the strongest of the Shinigami in Soul Society will take thousands of years to complete. (Advanced Growth Rate Part) I mean like, that IS overestimating his character. It sounds like Taro IS even stronger than the strongest shinigami in Soul Society. Alas, it would be appreciated if you give me a review on Kite and Shiraishi. すでに黒バン DarkNight (Talk to me! | My Contributions) 12:59, September 25, 2010 (UTC)

Nix the above. I see that the owner noticed my comment and cowardly took it off. But the review part, i still appreciate it. すでに黒バン DarkNight (Talk to me! | My Contributions) 17:04, September 25, 2010 (UTC)

Purinsu finished
I think that Purinsu is finished but cannot say for sure need an overlook please. Mainly his sword of the king ability just if its powers/abilities doesnt suit its name than could you give me some idea please.

P.S. I am working to make new kido spells.Td5 22:59, September 25, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks for your overlook.


 * 1) As for the Kido Spells/Techniques I made the first of few of my Forbidden ones and made Scythe of the Death Goddess what you think.


 * 1) As for other Kido I am soon gonna make make bakudo #90 name pending.


 * 1) As for Purinsu I thought if I made him immensly strong in Kido around Yamamoto, Aizen or Kisuke's level and elite captain class in Shunpo plus 100% for his intellect I had to level out his swordsmenship strength and defense to around 80 Gin's level plus I made average in strength not weak.


 * 1) Plus his spiritual power is immense around somewhere Yamamoto's or Aizen before he absorbed the Hōgyoku though not as strong but close. As he can use 90 level hado and bakudo spells as well as some of his Zanpakuto's abilities powers for strong even in Shikai.


 * 1) Finally as for the rp what your ideas as I am gonna make a quote that Purinsu says in his quote section about when he Kenji for the first time they meet.Td5 13:48, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Image you may want
Here Td5 04:47, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

My RP
Bleach Days Of Carnage: When Three Became One let me know what you think. RazeOfLight 13:39, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks. You said I needed background info on everyone. So i thought what better way to start things off than bringing them back to the first day of school. I'm actually enjoying writing this RP I have a million ideas running through my head. I thought I would hate working on a solo RP but it gives me so much more flexibility to do what I want. I'm glad you could imagine the academy. That's what I was going for. I figured a great picture had to be painted first before a story could be laid out. Whew a quick break then back to work hopefully. RazeOfLight 14:05, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Rp
I know that the Kido is unusal to say the least but since with enough sacrifrices that can destroy all life on earth well it has to be right.

Though I miss said I would like Purinsu to meet Yoshiro and well yoshiro find Purinsu fight hollows states in his mind that he must be captain cause of his spiritual power and wonders as he kills 5 gillian menos class hollows with a sealed zanpakuto just how strong is he. After Purinsu kills them he says that he knows that Yoshiro is there and states that his spirit energy is unusual like a hollow and asks him to leave him be Yoshiro asks him his name but Purinsu says leave he be or least. Well Yoshiro say or least what? The Purinsu releases his zanpakuto and attacks with its Awaisuto (Pale Strike) ability and uses his zanpakuto Aisumēkā (Ice Maker). This is the basic starting point for them. As for the name how about this The first meet the one of Ice meets the one of White.Td5 14:35, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

You start the rp as I have never really wriiten one before. The name sound ok too. Td5 15:00, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Ok I will try my best but for links for names like how Yoshiro is I cannot do that but I'll try my best.Td5 15:12, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry like I said I never really rped much but it won't happen again.Td5 15:40, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

You turnTd5 15:58, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Your up KenjiTd5 16:09, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

You up dude but I'll be back in 25 min got to drive to a store its football and my states team are playing today and i got to buy pizza. okTd5 16:31, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

I didnt have leave yea so I am up right?Td5 16:39, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Your up.Td5 16:49, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Hey your up I did paralyze Yoshiro with Giragira (Glare) but the attack I sent to him hasnt hit him yet that is up tp u.Td5 17:10, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Your up.Td5 17:34, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Your up and now I used Zougenotou: (Ivory Tower) even in Shikai it can kill elite captains so good luck.Td5 17:53, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Your up whenever but i left it to where it sounds good so whenever.Td5 18:08, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Your up again now I am using the full force of Purinsu's shikai.--Td5 13:23, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

Ok just do you want or will allow Purinsu to use his bankai and can I use his Hado 91 near the end of the fight and I was wondering that near the fight also that Kenji makes an apperance.--Td5 13:32, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks!
Thanks for the reviews. Right now, I have two reviewers who could help me and I thank them greatly. One of them is you and the other is Mr. Yum Yum! Anyway, workin on Kite and Yuuhei now. Check back soon! すでに黒バン DarkNight (Talk to me! | My Contributions) 08:13, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

P.S: But still, shouldn't someone NOT overestimate their character even if it's their first time?

Re:Heya
Not many people have Bakkoto nowadays. Truthfully, I think that the second ability should be more powerful than the first. Which is why it is the true form right? And secondly, the first form seems to be a little OP cuz of the part you said that it'll create craters easily. So that part, tone it down A LITTLE. But then again, Bakkoto are supposed to be powerful. Other then that, SWEET BAKKOTO! すでに黒バン DarkNight (Talk to me! | My Contributions) 09:22, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

P.S: If you're wondering why I bolded a little up there is cuz if you tone it down too much then it would be UP, get what I mean?

 

Also, I would really really appreciate it if you get a chatango. Why? Cuz that way we (Raz, Fire, Grizz and I) can talk to you PRIVATELY. As in like, no one knowing what we talked about. Besides that, I helped you make Yoshiro's Picture smaller for the template cuz the current one was too big. Hope you understand. If you don't want it then just change it back to the original. すでに黒バン DarkNight (Talk to me! | My Contributions) 14:07, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

DONE!!!!!
im done with my post....u could end it if u want ^^ Lone Black Garuga 11:36, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

rp cont
Yeah that's fine that's up to yu but remember I am using the full force of his shikai now.--Td5 13:57, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

I started this page as the last one was getting kind of long.

Now when you have time and a computer that lets you could i fight against Takeshi too like I overpower Yoshiro somewhat only by attacking him with them full force of Purinsu's shikai and now so that Yoshiro can recover I fight against Takeshi for a short time maybe huh?Td5 15:28, September 27, 2010 (UTC) Umm not yet I am at college and the computer lab instructor are being stupid checking on me so I cannot write good stuff as that takes a second so when I get home I would like Takeshi to join the fight near the end as he is there all ready.--Td5 15:56, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

P.s your up.--Td5 15:57, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

I got go to college class now ill post when I get home at 12:30 lata gives me time to think of good posting right?--Td5 16:08, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

I am back and your up.Td5 18:00, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry was cooking me lunch but I am back and your up Kenji.Td5 19:03, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

Your up Kenji and now is the climax before I use Purinsu's bankai.Td5 19:30, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

Time for the real fight your up good luck.Td5 19:59, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

I dont know are yu or I up?Td5 14:32, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry thinking of something to say in the rp your up and after your next post look at Purinsu mainly his Shunpo and his Immense Spiritual power to tell me if it sounds more of an elite captain at battle stats of 520/600 please Kenji?Td5 15:31, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

your up and just I ask an admin his opinion and few days ago and everyone throws in their 2 cents about it so I edited to make it sound better I think.Td5 15:53, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

Your up i posted before I read your message sorry if messes with the rp and I just thought of what I wrote as why Purinsu is so cold and hateful.Td5 16:13, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

Sure but after my next post I got to get to class will be back on at 1:30 p.m and after I post your up.Td5 16:27, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

your up but I got to get to class so till 1:30 p.m lata.Td5 16:35, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

I am about and I am up by the way nice pic you added to one of your articles.Td5 18:54, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

Your up.Td5 19:07, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

Well how about we start a small rp with Purinsu healing Yoshiro and them sharing their sad past stories or something like that then we start a rp with Purinsu and Yoshiro fighting against Dastan or another powerful enemy maybe.Td5 19:42, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

Your up again.Td5 20:01, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

Way to do the picture.
No Probelm, basically its just you put File:Picturename.format|200px. For example, File:Hitsuke.JPG|200px. But be sure to include the  inside. That's all you need to do. Hope I helped :D  The Lightning Rod That Takes All The Damage. That's me, DarkNight!   ( Requesting for protection from Lightning? ) 14:03, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

Tyrell Nishiki
I like him. As soon as I started reading him I wanted to face him / work with him at some point. He seemed like an actual person when I was reading over it. Overall congrats dude! =) RazeOfLight 20:24, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

Tyrell Nishiki
Hmm... you might need a weakness for him. Since both his Swordsmanship and Hakuda is good. But overall, I love him. Maybe Zen + Him vs Gorrion + Malocchio? It could be AWESOME! The Sky That Understands All Others. I'm The Man, DarkNight! ( Say What You Have To Say ) 07:12, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

Signature Vote.
Hey, Could you help me choose which sig is the best out of the 6?

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Sky: The Sky That Understands All Others. I'm The Man, DarkNight! ( Say What You Have To Say )

Lightning:  The Lightning Rod That Takes All The Damage. That's me, DarkNight!  ( Requesting for protection from Lightning? )

Cloud:  The Cloud That Watches From Afar. Drifting In The Clouds Is Me, DarkNight!  ( Just Say What You Have To. I Don't Have All Day. )

Sun:  The Sun That Shines Brightly Upon The Area. My Shine, DarkNight!  ( I'll Be Ready For Any Words To The Extreme! )

Rain:  The Requim Rain That Washes Conflict Away. I'm The Rain, I'm DarkNight!  ( I'll Wash Conflicts Away For You! )

RP
Hmm... Zieg seems quite powerful but then again, it could serve as training for Malocchio. So, its on! Who creates the page? The Requim Rain That Washes Conflict Away. I'm DarkNight! ( I'll Wash Conflicts Away For You! ) 10:35, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

Here's the link to our RP: Two Forces Collide, Who Stands On Top?. Your go! The Requim Rain That Washes Conflict Away. I'm DarkNight! ( I'll Wash Conflicts Away For You! ) 10:53, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

Now it's yours! Thanks... though credit Fire for the name. He comes up with AWESOME names seriously. The Requim Rain That Washes Conflict Away. I'm DarkNight! ( I'll Wash Conflicts Away For You! ) 11:05, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

Ur go! This is SOO gonna be good. The Requim Rain That Washes Conflict Away. I'm DarkNight! ( I'll Wash Conflicts Away For You! ) 11:26, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

Who's turn to rock the house? YOU!!! The Requim Rain That Washes Conflict Away. I'm DarkNight! ( I'll Wash Conflicts Away For You! ) 13:47, September 28, 2010 (UTC)