Talk:Lost and Found

Review
It is observed in nature that although rain is made up of small, annoying droplets of water that would have no evident effect on the world by themselves, storms still manage to cause considerable damage.

Small errors in word choice and placement are of little consequence when these instances are isolated. Nonetheless, it is suggested that revisions be made to improve this story's writing by what little measure is needed.

Grammatically, this story has few errors in verb agreement and adjective placement. It is suggested that these errors be revised to enhance flow.

The exchange from author to author in this collaboration is minimally noticed by this reviewer. The writing from those involved in the collaboration meshes well enough to allow adequate comprehension.

PipeCleaner345 01:25, April 16, 2010 (UTC)