Thread:ISavage/@comment-18812574-20150203042127/@comment-6673974-20150203044457

OMG thank you for your feedback on my character, some of the stuff you pointed out were things I did on NF. I'm not done with the character if I have told you, but I think with the guides and other stuff I can finish him to be a decent character.

I'm just horrible with appearance, so I think that will be difficult, but I'll work on it. And grammar is another thing I will try work on. I'm just going to work on him with the advice and links you've given me. Again, thank you for the feedback