Thread:Upzilonz/@comment-4326112-20120927033700/@comment-4326112-20121001021836

Lol -hasn't noticed- That's fine :) I'm quite occupied with the other guys here in the meantime X3

Also, something you should note, I think you should cut down how much dialogue you use in a single post. If you try to simultaneously post large amounts of action AND dialogue for multiple characters, it can be a little disorienting for other people x.x

Whenever big action sequences or important dialougue scenes are taking place, sometimes I place dividers between the two and maintain a nice even amount of time spent between the two, or focus on one moreso than the other so characters won't seem to be popping in and out, never giving a clear picture of WHO is the main charry in that scene.

Just something to think about...