Talk:Moeru Umarekawari

Okay. First of all, there should be a the between of and 9th. Two, it is refered as the Human World, not realm. Again, it is spelled Visored, not Vizard. Next, employee is spelled...well..employee, and its Shin'ō Academy. Next, you should replace incredibly with exceedingly and unbreakable is..unbreakable. And then Akihikos should be Akihiko's, and you will need to look through the entire article and look for capitalization and other errors, as there are so many I can't even list them all. Please update this article and make the changes. Refer to the Manual of Style if you need it; it may help. Phoenix 04:47, November 2, 2012 (UTC)