Thread:Saris Khan/@comment-3403804-20161212005824/@comment-3403804-20161231114045

Whew, and so ends the fight between Toso and Hiromasa. Its been a ton of fun trying out a newish character for the first time! Anyway, in regards to feedback I have nothing negative to say about your attitude, since you've been very patient, not many people are capable of fighting at such a disadvantage as what Toso did against Hiromasa without breaking off into long angry tirades. I certainly wasn't, although following the shift from talk pages to message walls, my angry tirade was mercifully lost to history. As we said before, I think Toso needs to focus more on actual Hakuda and Martial Arts in order to better prepare the character for the challenges faced as a Yonko-level character. Likewise, while your defense is great, your offense is often lacking, meaning that you cannot adequately pressure other such combatants in Roleplays, something which until its fixed, will probably always lead to a loss. Furthermore, when you did attack, Toso did so in very simple ways that informed me of its supposed power as opposed to showing me, you mentioned roundhouse kicks, jabs, punches, elbow strikes.. all of which are attacks which while good for a Kung-Fu Movie are of little consequence in a battle between such monsters. It'd be within your best interest to find way to express his attacks that put emphasis on their supernatural properties. This battle has also shown me that you are very overreliant on your techniques, which is another weakness of yours; techniques exist to specify existing applications of high-end powerhouses, but most of them draw their power chiefly from experience and grandmastery of their field. Essentially, they make their own techniques mid-combat out of their capabilities on the drop of a hat as is required.