Talk:Onkuo Senshu

You might wanna consider renaming her Zanpakutō. How do I say this? It's really bad news you see. Onara means fart in Japanese. Wind is translated as Kaze, Kaza, Ka, Fū, or Hō. If you must name her Zanpakutō wind goddess you could use Kaze no Megami (風の女神, Wind Goddess) or Reppū Megami (烈風女神, Gale Goddess) Reppū literally means enraged wind, more poetic. An alternative could be Reppūshin (烈風神, Gale God) Kami, which is read Shin in this case is gender neutral and could refer to both a male or female deity, but if you want to use Megami is good too, if you want to be specific about the Zanpakutō's spirit gender.

Please don't take this as shaming criticism, I've already come across some people who don't appreciate my comments when I try add come constrictive criticism to their work. This is all trying to make something that looks good even better. This is all up to you and you don't have to change it but I'm happy to help. Have a nice day! :D

Dainemuri (talk) 02:49, February 27, 2016 (UTC)