Thread:Nisshou/@comment-24579076-20141020203302

I deleted my previous request for my character exam in order to brush up on a few things and could you help me out a bit? I'm at 8,000 bytes when I need 25,000 (x.x....) but I have no idea what I can do to expand my content, could you just take a quick look and help me a bit? Much appreciated :D

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