Talk:Seikai Joshin

Issue
Aha, while this is commendably better than your older stuff, I have one thing to say. Eight hundred miles? Really? Tone that down, because eight hundred miles would first off take an incredible amount of energy, second off is way too much, third off would affect way more than just the battlefield, and fourth off is unneeded. The rest is good. --Thepantheon 14:39, June 6, 2010 (UTC)