Thread:Saris Khan/@comment-18812574-20150130163335

Nah, not really. I read your first chapter. Two things:

1. Why were they roasting a whole deer over the fire? That would take a good day, at least. They should quarter, hang, and trim off pieces of meat to cook. Also, you use deer hide, not fur, to make clothes and stuff with.

2. Why does Eiko have a beard? ''"Oh, I see, you've been wounded", she remarked, stroking her beard. "You can put that mask on if you feel better that way."'' ... ?

*ahem* Those are my only comments on the thing... sorry about that. Heh. XD 