Thread:Upzilonz/@comment-4326112-20120923053753/@comment-5037483-20120923230432

Bleh, I've tried my absolute hardest to make it better, but it seems I'm incapable of doing so. I think I'm forced to leave it be and just learn from my mistakes, and maybe later on I'll add onto the begining to help understand their hate toward each other. That was my original plan but I wanted to get the actual fighting out of the way so I could devote all my ideas to the opening and such and such.