Thread:Silver-Haired Seireitou/@comment-5778280-20140409175832/@comment-2089817-20140413211616

It looks good, but the only issue I have with it is this:

"As such, instead of being an art in which nullifies the others, Arataryū is an art in which counters the others. Through creating a flow of opposing nature, Mukei can essentially cancel out the flows defined by the four Zankensoki. Though, that would defeat the entire purpose of the fighting with Zankensoki abilities."

The four Zankensoki are different ways of approaching flow. Like hard and soft. They can't best each other nor outright neutralize each other, because they look at flow from completely different angles. One manipulating the form of flow and another manipulating the behavior of flow, if you could cancel out the former with the latter, then the opposite would also be true, but that depends upon the user and their skill with it. The wording you use here makes it almost sound like an indefinite rule, that it is some sort of fail safe that, once Mukei reaches that level, will be able to neutralize the other three arts without flaw, so you should consider rewording that part or removing it altogether.