Thread:GokūBlack10/@comment-4280197-20140311043719/@comment-28861328-20140311061512

First of all.

What I say about someone else's character is none of your business. You weren't asked to review it, so frankly, your ability to "see it" doesn't matter to me or the author.

Secondly, I never commented on your character's Zanpakuto, nor Sora's, so once more you are rambling about nothing in particular. Melee-type Zanpakutou are exactly what 11th Division characters should have, and Kido shouldn't be used by them do the way the division views Kido users. It is you that cannot have it both ways.

Lastly, I couldn't really give a flying horse's shit what you find to be "worthless critiqu[ing]". Your article was borderline illegible. The sentences weren't structured properly, punctuation was off, as was capitalization. Some of your sentences wouldn't even pass a 4th grade English test, and I'm sorry, that needs to be fixed. Now, to my knowledge, I don't think I ever gave you a critique of "unoriginal", but if you really want to go there with me, then maybe you should stop naming your characters after canon characters from other series first and then tell me what is worthless.

Period.