Thread:Mangetsu20/@comment-5778280-20130314005021/@comment-4326112-20130314201947

Well they seem to be both well descript in the areas that are filled out currently. Beyond that, I cannot make a full assessment until you declare the Articles finished.

I will say however that you should establish Mukei's weakness or drawbacks of him fighting against a well talented, disciplined warrior who's spent many years honing their own skills in comparison to his "Speed Growth" treatment.

Other than that, they hold promise and I can't wait until I see the full completed articles :3