Thread:Mangetsu20/@comment-5651818-20130119152632/@comment-4326112-20130121013429

-facepalms- Just how much abilities do you plan to stack on this Gekkou? Not only from my brief read-through of the Articles proves to be nothing more than a Cookie-Cutter of a lot of articles I've seen you take inspiration from (a few of the abilities as well) you're basically making him unreasonably strong with no real strong background to solidify his character.

Its the equivalent of making an all powerful being at the beginning of the story with no explanation or backdrop of how he got to what he is and why he is the way he is. My final peeve is the fact you're blatantly using Tensa Zangetsu as his appearance in a BLEACH storyline. That doesn't sit well with me, not to mention that he "happens" to have Hollowfication which is still not explained in a History Bio or how he knows all the forms of Spirit Energy.

My suggestion? Please revamp the whole character. As much hard work as that's going to be, if you want to make a decent Captain, don't make him an Aizen-class. Try to give your character some limitations in SOME areas and disallow him from having nearly every known power there is available to Soul Reapers. Okay?