Forum:I want to introduce new zanpakuto, can someone help me with my Japanese?

Would anyone here that knows the language be willing to help me out with a couple sword and attack names?

Here's a list and with what translation I've managed to do with online dictionaries, feel free to fix errors or translate it differently to make them sound better:

Shikai: Fool's Raven (Tawakemono/Orokamono no Karasu.)

Vampire (Kyuuketsuki, which I'm fine with) (a warped zanpakuto)

Bankai: Raven's Union (Karasu no Rengoo)

Vampire God (Kyuuketsuki no Kami) (partially released, not at full power)

Alternate Forms: Judgment (Handan) (the original form of Vampire)

Rising Vampire God (Tachiagaru Kyuuketsuki no Kami) (fully released bankai of Vampire)

Heaven's Judgment (Ten no Handan) (bankai form of Handan)

Attacks/Powers:

All Weapons (Subete no Buki) (shikai power)

Ten Thousand Arrows (Yorozu no Ya) (shikai attack)

Essence Bullet/Arrow (Honsh!tsu no Dangan/Ya) (bankai attack)

Total Empathy (Soo Kyookan) (power)

Techniques:

Flash Compression (Senkou Assaku)