User talk:Perchan

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Mr. Kou
I'd rather not notify you each and every time I post, 'cause I just find it really annoying. I can always just look at the recent changes and see who posted last. It becomes quite a hassle for me to remind an rp'er every time it's their post (mostly due to the fact that I always forget to do so).


 * I shall post when I'm on the computer, as it's midnight here. Also, you said you'd like to be the first to review Orijinaru, well... it's your turn to shine! Don't mine Hohenheim, his doesn't count as an actual review.


 * Firstly, thank you for the review of Orijinaru. (: Secondly, it all depends on what you want to do. Since Hizashi is/was a Captain of the Gotei 13, perhaps she could try and persuade the other Captains to revolt against the Central 46, thus making them powerless against Gai and his friends. Or, you can go a completely different route and have Hizashi fight on Gai's side while the rest of the Captains fight alongside the Central 46. If either of those aren't good enough, I'll try my best to think up better ones.


 * I just wanted to let you know that in my last post, I made Naishō walk up to Hizashi with his blade sheathed, but it doesn't mean the battle's over. I thought that she could perhaps still fear him and try to attack him while he's attempting to help her up. If you have a better idea, go for it; mine was just a suggestion.

You're doing fine; but you seem to have to have a plot for your rp's, when (at least here) you roleplay, you usually just go with the flow. Anyways, just have Hizashi play tag with Naishō, since he loves games. ;D


 * The race is great, but I'd like to point out that if a Mototsu is unable to learn zanjutsu, then it is impossible for one to wield a zanpakutō; plus, zanjutsu isn't a shinigami-only ability. Any being that uses a blade can, and has, learned zanjutsu. However, that's just my two cents.


 * EDIT: It's fine if you take a break; it'll still be there when you get back.
 * EDIT #2: How do you like my new signature? :3


 * If you continue to say you're not good at rp'ing, or keep on apologizing, we're gonna have issues. It annoys me when people do that, 'cause I do not enjoy pity parties. If you weren't good, I wouldn't even think of rp'ing you, since my standards (despite not being the best rp'er myself) are pretty high. So, stop saying that you're not a good rp'er, or I'll end our rp right then and there. Got it?


 * EDIT: I wanted to mention that Naishō's not usually like this, but when he's trying to make someone work harder, he becomes very mocking, to the point where you just want to suffocate him with a pillow. :L So, don't think this is how he normally acts; he just wants to make Hizashi be confident in her abilities without someone else telling her so (weird method, huh?).


 * You're welcome, and after seeing your user page: 1 - I need to be more honest around you. I'm usually incredibly honest, but sometimes, my honesty is hard to hear. 2 - I'm gonna have to call you "Sup!" 'cause it seems people are calling you Deus. Sorry, I like to be the only person calling someone something. Ciao~


 * EDIT: What is the reason that you mentioned before you changed your edit? I promise that I won't look down on you or the like.

Hey, Sup!. I was wondering if you'd like to have our two Kawahiru clansmen to be brother and sister, as I think that'd be cool - especially if we rp'd with them. That brings me to my second question: since you stopped writing your personal story, how 'bout you and I collaborate (similar to Aha and Archrones) and have our own story? If you'd rather not, I completely understand. Lastly, would you check out my newest creation and tell me what you think about it? It'd be greatly appreciated.


 * Since my phone utterly hates me, I'll have to post like this. Moving on, I was thinking that we'd make two completely new characters and make them our main ones for our story. I planned on making a female character with her appearance based on Tsunade when she was younger, but she's a very rational young woman and plans ahead for everything. I was then thinking that you could make the antithesis of her, but that's entirely up to you ('cause it could be a rag-tag team of sorts, ya know?). As for the story, we can discuss that at a later date. I plan on starting up the central page for our story tomorrow (it's almost midnight here). If you have any questions or concerns, please notify me immediately so I can answer them before we go too far into this.


 * Well, I would rather have Shion be male, but it's perfectly fine that Shion be a female instead. And I've decided I'll be using Kushina Uzumaki as my characte's appearance. Lastly, can you lower Shion's age to, like, eleven? If not, then I understand.


 * It's fine if you keep Shion as a girl, it doesn't matter, really. And I'm sure you'll do fine making Shion as a child. (: I have faith in you my possibly closest friend here on BFF.

When I get to a computer, I'll add everything from today to my original section, but I don't want my phone to lag. As the title suggests, I mean ever word I have ever spoken to you. And it is my personal opinion that you are one of, if not the most awesome person I've met on BFF. I really hope that we see our collaboration through, as I really love working with you. ^_^ This last part may seem creeper-ish, but I'd love to meet you in real life, 'cause I could see us getting along quite well. (: So, please don't let your disease prevent you from making friends, because you're one of the coolest people I know; internet-wise, as well as real-life.


 * Perhaps you didn't see my message, or maybe you just haven't replied yet. If it is the latter, I sincerely apologize for being so impatient...


 * Sure; you can make a couple of antagonists. I already planned on using two of my villains as antagonists, but that's for a later arc. I think the first arc should be titled the "Academy arc" and have Shion and Tsubame get use to life in the academy, as well as manifesting their zanpakutō for the first time (that's when a shinigami normally manifests their zanpakutō). I think it would be a good way to start a story, as there won't be much real fights, but there shall be sparring matches. That way, we can get used to each other's writing style before we starting hitting the hard stuff. So, here's my thinking of the "Academy arc..."


 * Beginning: The very start shall be Shion and Tsubame's first day of school, where they meet each other and meet a few of the other students.
 * Middle: The body of the arc should be their studies while at Shinō, as well as the first manifestation of our character's zanpakutō. This will be where most of the spars take place, as well as little conflicts that all schools have.
 * End: The end shall be where Shion and Tsubame graduate (between the middle and end, there shall be a time-skip of two years). During graduation, the first true antagonist makes themselves known, and that's where the next arc starts.
 * If you don't like that, please feel free to throw out your own ideas. Anyways, Shion is looking nice, but I'd put a note at the top of her zanpakutō section stating that she has yet to manifest it, so people don't think that shall can use it yet. But that's just my opinion. Ciao, Sup!.


 * Sure, Kaori can be part of our story. I don't see why not. (: And thank you, but I have enough techniques for Kanzen at the moment. But once again, thanks. ;D Also, I'm about to make this character that's from Yāolù and he'll probably be the last major antagonist of part I of our spin-off. The reason for this is that I want to make him like the "final boss" like in the Legend of Zelda games, where they are, by far, the strongest opponent's the characters have faced before. Lastly, what do you think of my little outline above. (

Thanks. (: This is the start. Hao Baojia.


 * Thanks! ;D I've got up to his personality (mah favorite part! ^_^) done, so it's off to powers and abilities next. (:


 * Absolutely! Hey, she could even be an instructor like her brother! :L Sibling tag-team! ^_^


 * About your minor antagonist, awesome! I'd love for her to be an antagonist to Shion and Tsubame! ^_^ As for Setsuna, that sounds great, 'cause then Naishō can feel and obligation to be the one to save her from herself, which could cause a strife between Naishō and his students, who'll want to kill her. So, great idea, Sup! (like always).


 * EDIT: Can you review Hao Baojia, now that he's close to done? It'd be greatly appreciated. (:

But I left you a message, and then put the section back under my original heading. Since you're prone to apologizing, know that there's no need for any sorry. Just get back to me when you can; ciao.


 * First of all, thank you for the review of Hao! (: Second of all, all your ideas are awesome! Third of all, I think after the "Academy arc," our first arc with an antagonist could be Shiki. I've never really used him, and he'd be a good starter for them, seeing as they're not gonna be almighty and able to beat characters of Aizen's caliber anytime soon. If he was the antagonist, he could make himself known at the girls' graduation and he ruins it, causing them to spring into action and hunt him down to enable the safety of the rest of the academy. What do ya think? (btdubs, the arc could be called "Hunt for Shiki arc")


 * As long as they aren't an antagonist (seeing as we have about ten already :L). Also, go on chatango, since I'll be on for while. Remember that my name is "AnonymousChair," kay?


 * I'm terribly sorry, Sup!, but my computer hates wikia at the moment, so I won't be on much; I hope we can delay our story a few weeks, tops. If I'm not on by next weekend, please continue on without me. Once again, I'm regretably sorry for this...

Chatango ios also bugging out on me. The main chat works very rarely, and private messages don't work at all. I wish I could talk to you somewhere else. If I find another site, I'll let you know my username and we can talk there. So, for the third time, I'm sorry.


 * So, I have full internet access this weekend! ^_^


 * My thoughts exactly! ;D ;D


 * No, I usually have internet access all the time, but I meant for here, as I'm using a different computer. I'll check on the original one on monday.

I am hoping for the best! (: If not, Void gave me a useful tip that I may try if it appears that it won't work. Also, go on chatango; I shall be waiting. (


 * Sure thing! (: Also, can you get on chatango while you're still up?


 * Hah, it's fine. If you're still on, come join me on chatango now. :L


 * Hey, you should get on chatango; if you have the time, that is.

About the TBTP arc, that's fine with me, but I request that it take place between Part II and Part III, since we already have the first two arcs planned out, and I don't like how the anime/manga put it in the middle of an arc (that utterly pissed me off). And I like the newest addition to your Mototsu article; it kind of reminds me of the segunda etapa form Ulquiorra displayed, but not so much that it's not a carbon-copy of it. Very nice. (:


 * Hmm, I guess I missed you. The next time you're on, go to chatango and, if I'm not online, just type it in one big ol' post, and press enter. That way, when I get online, I'll still see it.


 * Hah, thanks for the compliments, pal. (: Hey, if you have the time, get on chatango.


 * Hey, you should get on chatango.

That's perfectly fine, pal. (: As long as it's done by Part III, we're all good.  Also, I read it and it looks good.  Can you read the first two chapters of this and tell me what you think.  Lastly, please give me your opinion of this new item I created: Portentum.


 * Thanks; and it'll be the central focus of Part III, if that's okay with you.


 * Hey, Sup!, if you're still on, get on chatango quick.

Sure
Sure you can make one of my Kosmousukihaku. And don't worry about things like that have and can be for characters. I will deal with the have and that way you an have fun on the what can be.: The Twilight of Your Despair 03:11, June 5, 2011 (UTC)

Umm did I message this to the wrong person? I have had to talk with many people today here cause of my Tournament.: The Twilight of Your Despair 05:15, June 5, 2011 (UTC)

Td5, I was wondering, could I create a Kosumossukihaku (That's a lot to stomach, lol)? PersonaSuperiorDeus 00:29, June 5, 2011 (UTC )If you didn't send this than you have a hacker and need to report it too Sei the heasd Admin at once for someone with your signature sent this message.: The Twilight of Your Despair 06:02, June 5, 2011 (UTC)

I am the host of a Tournament and I have to message a lot of people in it about posts and things. I thought I sent a message to the wrong person when I had to reply to five messages. But why do you want to make a Kosumosukihaku, but you have my permission which isn't needed.: The Twilight of Your Despair 06:12, June 5, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, ok then just wondering. As for how you make it thats up to you mostly. If there is something that breaks free from the foundation means its origin idea of their history, appearance, powers, etc I will message you about it. As I am correcting its horrible grammer.: The Twilight of Your Despair 06:28, June 5, 2011 (UTC)

Howdy
Your post and what 4 gods are you referring to? Maybe I could help you if I knew more. =D Raze Kucabara-Dono  Light  03:23, June 5, 2011 (UTC

Hmmm why don't you manifest them when you first activate the ability causing them to be able to be able to protect you or even attack the enemy but then they each have a "true" ability that can be used once she prepares herself. Like for instance Seiryuu would be albe to capture the foe in a sphere of energy that slowly drains their energy until they try to escape and then self-destructs with the strength they used against it. Its weaker against a drained foe due to them not having much strength left but against a foe that breaks out early with tremendous power it is much higher quality attack. I hope that makes sense and helped at least a bit. =) Raze Kucabara-Dono  Light  03:46, June 5, 2011 (UTC)

Im a he btw...just cause I saw what you put on Hizashi's page lol. Not that it actually matters =P But yea hmmm just post s you normally would. Don't think so much about it, just respond as the character would in a fight, don't try to think ahead for next moves in such and just go with the flow. Its more fun that way =) Raze Kucabara-Dono  Light  05:06, June 6, 2011 (UTC)


 * Oh I'm thinking of joining the FTF....anything you suggest? Raze Kucabara-Dono  Light  05:23, June 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * Hmm awesome sauce. I think I'll go make my first character (Van's counter part) over there now while I wait for RPs lol. Who knows, maybe we can start up the GF over there as well =P Raze Kucabara-Dono  Light  05:30, June 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * Okie dokie that works lol. Haha Well once I finish my character, just let me know what you think of it =) Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#2550255" face="Tahoma">Light  05:37, June 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * Actually I'm gonna utilize crystal (dragon slayer) as I already thought about it quite frequently. Though I din't know there was a FTF out there =P Now if only Index and Reborn had Fanons as the OP fanon kinda sucked lol <font color="#0255255" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#2550255" face="Tahoma">Light  05:47, June 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * Haha wow! I can't wait for the Index one to really start up. That should be intereting to see how it goes =D Though I'm kinda scared cause I can imagine what pops up seeing as that it was one complex series haha. <font color="#0255255" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#2550255" face="Tahoma">Light  05:53, June 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * Well Makoto and Touma wouldnt be able to identify as thats just electricity and negation respectively so I mean that could be worked around quite easily. Though Accel and Fiamma...that isnt so easy to break down lol Hmmm I think if anything they would try to combine some characters and call it something new =P <font color="#0255255" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#2550255" face="Tahoma">Light  06:05, June 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * I find Fiamma to not be as powerful as everyonr interprets. Just immobolize him and he's useless like they shown in the anime (or maybe it was the manga) when you surprise him it easy to attack him seeing as he wouldnt have the chance to utilize that destructive hand lol. But technically speaking I go back between NF BFF and now FTF. =P <font color="#0255255" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#2550255" face="Tahoma">Light  06:29, June 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * I cant reall think of what to do now that I started there lol. Hmmm oh well. I think i'll focus on this for now too get my stories done lol. But don't forget it your move on our RP. Oh and try to think of something for the other fight as well...just dont think too hard lol <font color="#0255255" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#2550255" face="Tahoma">Light  06:52, June 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * Oh I will when the combat starts. lol I just figured her attack would lose strength as it continued onward such as the the case with any attack, allowing Raze to deflect it. Though I did have one question about your last message. Defeat Yamamoto? Whoa! That's some aspiration you have there. Though I find it incredibly hard it to believe too. Not even wonderweiss (who was made to defeat him) or Aizen-fly succeeded. And no offense but I dont think Hizashi is capable of beating Aizen so you may want to change that up a bit especially since Yamamoto was noted to be the strongest Shinigami in all of history as well as the oldest granting him a large sum of experience and thus combat prowess. But yea the latest chpters? Besides the ones that already out? I usually read them pretty much as soon as they come out lol Hmm if the latest chapter isnt the one where Erza defeats Azuma then sure! =D <font color="#0255255" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#2550255" face="Tahoma">Light  07:34, June 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * Haha you get chapters before the website? Cause I usually read them at mangastream or tenmanga as soon as theyre out. =P But yea...hmmm why is it you cant think of anything to do with Unmei? Is it because you don't know how to combat Kamina? Cause ou've been doin a pretty good job ofit so far pal. lol. <font color="#0255255" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#2550255" face="Tahoma">Light  14:35, June 6, 2011 (UTC)
 * Hahaha its cool. its a great ability though there's a slight problem. in my post i said that it was bonding with your organs so by expelling it you would effictively be expelling your own innards. the process work by causing the liquid that makes up the dragon to insert into the blood cells and then insert cells that make up organs. ---just in case you were wondering. But the purpose of this is to let you kno youu may want to change the post a bit as you would be killing hizashi in the process. <font color="#0255255" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#2550255" face="Tahoma">Light  04:28, June 8, 2011 (UTC)
 * Ha thanks pal, but I read it earlier on tenmanga.com. =P I wished they would get back to the action instead of the multiple explanations. Granted, I now they did somewhat, but I miss the older chapters where it was like Natsu was punching in faces for like 13 pages with maybe 3 pages of dialogue lol. But thanks for the review of Madoka as well. Funny thing is Imade a mistake when writing it, I meant that that the zanpakuto changes its abilities based on the situation but the mistake turned out to be a blessing in disguise as it works and works better at that lol. And Don't worry, I haven't forgotten about our RP. I'm just trying to organize things a bit better on my charcater's pages as well as adding needed information. =) <font color="#0255255" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#2550255" face="Tahoma">Light  01:50, June 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * Hahaha whoa whoa whoa pal. its cool if you wait abit before leaving a new message. but um i like haru's? zanpakuto, though if you used bluenote as inspiration thn you officially chose the worst charcter lol. And before creating a new chacter i would think of how you want this character to go. For example, you have many charcters but you could make your titular character and then start them low or mid-level and then work up slowly through RPs with others or you could just have a character train another to become stronger lol. Hope that helps<font color="#0255255" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#2550255" face="Tahoma">Light  05:12, June 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * Oh! And its your move in our RP when you get the chance =) <font color="#0255255" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#2550255" face="Tahoma">Light  01:20, June 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * lol sorry, this way it works out better for her character capabilities =P but I see you took the opposite approach that i suggested with that character oh well its your characters so I can't really complain lol. <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Yuri <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  02:33, June 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Haha ohhh thats ok so are you going to make student to go with?<font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Yuri <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  02:55, June 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Hahaha and maybe we coud have a little match between Haruki and him/her lol Oh do you have any ideas about what Rozeluxe's zanpakuto should be? I plan on changing it but idk what to just yet. <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Yuri <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  03:10, June 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Awesome! lol. Hmm I have a few ideas but I'm not sure about anything just yet. I just need somethin to spark an idea you know? lol <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Yuri <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  03:49, June 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * oh and since youre pretty much a member of the GF heres our site we use for images for characters =) <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Yuri <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  03:51, June 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * I like it. Hmm though I dont think you have enough info there for others to utilize it, well unless that was part of your plan then coolio! lol. Though Personally I don't creations that deem to be the source of anything at all as I think Blach canon will reveal that but I like how you say that there may be more to it than meets the eye so that puts a healthier light on it in my opinion. =) <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Yuri <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  04:57, June 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * Its not bad but I dount you could use him in many RPs on here as most people dislike zans that directly copy their ability. Thats why with Anna I only have her activate it in dire situations and Ruiko learns and upgrades their abilities that way its not just spamming cloning you know? As for the other character well you could always have her meet a few other charcaters to build relationships and then start some journeys. lol. <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Yuri <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  05:13, June 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * DOnt feel like doing your own story? Well just do loads of RPs and have that branch off from your own story. That way its continuing but it has help from others you know? I would hate to see you vanish from the site like other users but then again I could always find you on FTF. lol <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Yuri <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  06:55, June 14, 2011 (UTC)
 * ARGH!!!! COuld you do me a favor (if possible) to move the bottom two sections of Raze's zanpakuto over. like indent them or some sort? i tried indenting and bullets but the latter just gives me some bogus coding error. and im getting super POed. >.< But yea I will post as soon as I get this organized...the main reason i havent been posting, trying to get this knocked out. and well yea...i rread it lol. Though it wasnt a good as I thought it would be until the end. SHOCKER!!! He's a cousin! BWHAT!? That just confirms everyone suspicions that Karin is the new shinigami in town cause Yuzu was the only one home and there are other various hints that my friend pointed out that says she will be. Though I think that will pit her and ichigo against each other with ichigo relenting nad her feeling bad for attackng her brother or some sort of weird sad story where ichigo beats her to the point where she loses her powers or something or at the end of the series you find out that the ichigo just dreampt it all or he died and this was all just a hallucination he saw before his death lol. As for the charactes well I would say develop the student more that way you can develop how she interacts with the teacher and then how the teacher's friend interacts with both and how their teacher interacts with all three. See what I'm getting at? <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Yuri <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  04:43, June 16, 2011 (UTC)
 * Its fine, I have various random helper bees lol. Its all good. But yea..well Van is seriously OP. Like say Aizen-dly would be a chump comapred to him at this point. But then again he is my main MC lol. But he could do the Haruki one...hell Haruki is gullible enough to develop a crush on her and then let that get the best of him lol. <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Yuri <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  03:02, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

RE:Another new Section
Your turn mate.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 04:13, June 5, 2011 (UTC)

Oh yeah, Deus, I was wondering something.. I was planning on starting up a fanon wiki for the Toaru series, named Toaru Fanon wikia, what do you think about this??<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 10:09, June 5, 2011 (UTC)

Well it's not like we have to anyway, all we need to do is expand on things, and maybe focus a little more on physical ability. So, I'll give you the link when I've started it.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 10:14, June 5, 2011 (UTC)

Well, here you are, the new wiki, after you make a few pages, I can give you admin rights if you want.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 10:37, June 5, 2011 (UTC)

I understand where you are coming from don't worry.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 11:14, June 5, 2011 (UTC)

Why don't you introduce Soji and Yurei? And maybe make Gai get his zanpakutou's true form.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 05:29, June 6, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah it's nice, although you should put a duration on it, as it would cost alot of energy to utilise, by the way, how do you like these two characters.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 08:56, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, and the reason for that will be explained later, although I'll tell you right now. His ability Omnipresence and Tracker are actually magical abilities, as he is an artificial 'angel' like Kazakiri, except that his magical powers were converted into esper abilities as he formed an AIM field when he was 14, but more will be explained. When he 'awakens' into an artificial angel form, he will become a mage and esper hybrid much like Tsuchimikado, however, he has an ability to completely seal either his magical powers or esper abilities, as he cannot use magic while having an AIM field, a person developed that seal and blah blah blah, more will be explained later.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 09:10, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks. <font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 09:44, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

Hey man, could you give me a full fledged review like critical and everything on my new character in FTF, whenever you have the time, here he is, I think he's pretty well done, although it's your decision, so yeah, oh and don't be surprised if there are some similarities to this guy, he wasn't based off him but I needed someone to battle Hozukiproperly and I felt the guy I made suited the role. <font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 10:35, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, can I use my new character for the RP, if Karen is still crazy then it gives me the opportunity to place him against someone of basically equal level (psychotic person) by the way, your arc of possession won't work against his sword as it is made out of the material that Nordic Throne creates (don't know how)10:50, June 8, 2011 (UTC)<font color="#44444" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!)

Yeah I guess, how do you like my new signature?<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 11:09, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

I can't really say too much, but she's nice.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 09:18, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

Sure. Should I start it.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 09:36, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yo Persona, by the way, can you tell me what you think of this character's persona, I might make him my main character in terms of roleplaying, I actually was thinking of a more manipulative persona, but I might explore that later, I don't know, but yeah.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 09:38, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

Well, thanks for that, I think I have a way to add to his 'curiosity complex' as I'll now call it, while adding a manipulative 'touch' to it. He could possibly use manipulation in order to fulfill his curiosity about his opponent's or allies' intellectual capacity and willpower. Anyways, onto your character, she's really funny and powerful no doubt. Her appearance is outlined very well, which I like, as well as her personality, which I found quite a few similarities to Kazehana from Sekirei, if you know of her, her zanpakutou is based off of Gildarts' dissassembly, but I like the weakness you've placed there, awesome work.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 09:58, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

yeah, thanks. Oh, and who's the enemy that Karen is fighting next? Is it story related??<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 10:40, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

Lol, don't worry, by the way, could you please make a new section next time you post on my talk page, the Another New Section, section is getting too big.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 10:50, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

She's cool, I like how you've made her almost opposite to Ayano which is because of her revenge, nice work. By the way, once I've done a bit on Jin's zan and vizard powers, would you think of RP'ing with him?<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 05:18, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

sure, I'll be done soon I hope<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 05:32, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Well I think Jin's ready for a RP, can you check out his zan, it's quite different from what I planned it after seeing Jin's personality, oh well, I think it's quite original, what do you think. So you wanna RP with Ayano or Misaki?<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 06:47, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

No problem.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 07:18, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Sure I'll RP with Ayano if you don't mind, it will be interesting to see the two clash. Oh and, should I start?<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 20:37, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

I have to go school soon so sure!<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 21:44, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

yo dues, anyways, so should I start the RP, what should I name it though?<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 06:41, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

How about the Two Vizards Clash, Curiousity and Laziness (referring to personas)<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 07:17, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

It's up, you can post, by the way, you don't have to tell me when to post, as I'll read when to post. So yeah.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 07:57, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, she's cool, wow her zan sealed state is detailed, well that's cool though, anyway it's your turn.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 09:18, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

your turn mate.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 09:49, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

don't worry about it mate.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 05:29, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

Oh not again! I wrote on my talk page instead of yours, sorry.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 06:20, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

Lol, that's funny. So when's the battle going to start, should I do it, or you?<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 10:55, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

How do we start it though?<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 11:14, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

she's basically Chall isn't she? Well she's nice, so that's cool.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 08:30, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

don't worry.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 08:54, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

Well he only talks really for his own benefit, he's quite selfish, although it's not always the case, but yeah.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 11:03, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

lol, I don't mind.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 11:21, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

hmm, if you tone down her abilities and take away the swords and give her some nice magic, she'll be perfectly fine.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 10:08, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

Sure!
^_^ u can always do... Do tell me who though Lone Black Garuga 05:48, June 5, 2011 (UTC)

Rp
Hey their Persona just wonderin if ya wanna do a rp with me

11:11, June 5, 2011 (UTC)GuNzOfWoLfz

Hey again i would love your help creating my characters because they quite unorganised at the moment thx

11:35, June 5, 2011 (UTC)GuNzOfWoLfz

Um ya i would like you to make a char for me and i dont mind what you do with that char and thx

GuNzOfWoLfz 12:01, June 5, 2011 (UTC)

cheers just come and tell me when your ready for a rp or when your not busy

GuNzOfWoLfz 13:03, June 5, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm..
To be honest, whenever I create a character... I simply let ideas pop out of nowhere and I start writing them on the said character.. ^_^ I know I'm wierd... So I suggest you let it flow! I know this doesn't help but all my RPs are just quite random and simply type in random things... Though... This certain RP... Do you want ur char to develop in some aspect? Personality-growth? Power-growth like training? I'm in whatever it is you want. Hmm but if you created this character out of thin air... (which I normally do) doing a little chit-chat kind of RP is good for her to develop or for you to atleast get some ideas... ^_^ Lone Black Garuga 13:06, June 5, 2011 (UTC)

Mahou Sensei Negima!
Yep, I read it. Secundum actually pissed me off. Cheers to Fate for finishing him off like he was nothing. Fate reminds me a bit of Ulquiorra. Alotta good guy potential there.--ようこそ地獄へ - "Yōkoso jigoku e." ("Enter the Hell of Darknesslover") 04:01, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

I hope so too. And, could u tell me watcha think of Ahatake's new Bankai? Due to certain...shall we say complications that have arisen, I've had to change it. Ahatake Noriko Kurosaki/Kan'na. Please tell me watcha think.--ようこそ地獄へ - "Yōkoso jigoku e." ("Enter the Hell of Darknesslover") 04:33, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks. And the administration, aside from a few who are decent, assume that rudeness is the best way to deal with me. Of course they're wrong, but I deal with it. I'm used to it. And thanks again ^^--ようこそ地獄へ - "Yōkoso jigoku e." ("Enter the Hell of Darknesslover") 05:05, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

Psd
It remembered this that I the article character that I helped you figure out, what kind Zanpakuto he should have. The one with the poison Sake. Well you should at least credit Kou for helping, as all I did was come the idea but he made it Bleach realistic and deserves credit.: The Twilight of Your Despair 05:28, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

God Damnit. Ignore that message it was for someone else Twonjr3. I was checking my messages and I rememberred about that. And I just got the wronger user. However, if you need help with Zanpakuto I can help. Doing too much at once can trip you up.: The Twilight of Your Despair 05:41, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

The bomb
Lol, I'd be insulted if you didn't ^^ Feel free.--ようこそ地獄へ - "Yōkoso jigoku e." ("Enter the Hell of Darknesslover") 03:38, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

It's nice to know some people can get away with something like that. Pretty sure if I tried something like that with mine, with the admins current mood towards me, a rage-filled lecture would follow.--ようこそ地獄へ - "Yōkoso jigoku e." ("Enter the Hell of Darknesslover") 14:42, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

Like you have no idea. Though it's more of them being against me than gender-bending.--ようこそ地獄へ - "Yōkoso jigoku e." ("Enter the Hell of Darknesslover") 16:53, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

Btw, what do u think of her, so far? --ようこそ地獄へ - "Yōkoso jigoku e." ("Enter the Hell of Darknesslover") 18:48, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks ^^ The higher-ups seem irritated with her. Here's hoping I'm still on wikia when you get back.--ようこそ地獄へ - "Yōkoso jigoku e." ("Enter the Hell of Darknesslover") 02:28, June 11, 2011 (UTC)

False alarm. I thought they were irritated, though it doesn't take to irritate one of them anyway. And "Squicky"? I've only ever heard that on TVTropes. And I'm not sure. While we've only seen Arrancar use Sonído, Adjuchas and Vasto Lordes level Menos may be able to as well, just we haven't seen. And thanks ^^ She's the first human I've created with the intention of actually using.--ようこそ地獄へ - "Yōkoso jigoku e." ("Enter the Hell of Darknesslover") 00:05, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Yep. Btw, next time you send a message to my page, please start a new section. "Hey there..." is becoming the longest section on my page ^^--ようこそ地獄へ - "Yōkoso jigoku e." ("Enter the Hell of Darknesslover") 06:34, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

TT ^TT I g2g. Reply to this so I'll remember to look at them when I log back on please.--ようこそ地獄へ - "Yōkoso jigoku e." ("Enter the Hell of Darknesslover") 03:35, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Lone is a girl and you don't have to feel bad about never RPing with her. Unless of course she asked repeatedly. I'm gonna miss Lone though, she was always nice to me and very enjoyable to talk to. Now onto yours peoples. I am at school, and I only have 5 minutes, so I'll make this fast. Misaki. First, to my knowledge, anyone who gets discharged from the Gotei 13 is taken to the Nest of Maggots, the prison in the soul society. Kisuke just went over that in the latest dubbed episode actually. For Shinigami, there is no such thing as retirement. "Leave of abscense" is allowed, but to be discharged equals imprisonment I believe. And I'm really sure a member of the Royal Guard would only be able to retire if they lost every single limb on their body and they were beyond repair. Of course, by then they'd be begging to be put down. I like her Kido spells. Ame no Habaya reminds me of Sagitta Magica. Onto Ayano. I hear there are pills that can be taken for anxiety. O.O You are really good at making up extra abilities like Kido and character specific techniques for Zanjutsu and Shunpo. I can't say alot more since I am running outta time and should really save this message. I'll try and read them more thoroughly at home, but I have a pic I'm working on for a friend, but I'll see what I can do.--ようこそ地獄へ - "Yōkoso jigoku e." ("Enter the Hell of Darknesslover") 14:53, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

Persona! You still wanna RP with Yian (Lone)? She's requesting one last RP. Now's yer chance if you wanna go for it--ようこそ地獄へ - "Yōkoso jigoku e." ("Enter the Hell of Darknesslover") 14:50, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

Yo
Yeah, Yuki's gone. She's a girl btw :P Don't worry about the character you didn't finish. She left her work to me, Raze and Fire; so I'm sure one of us will step in and give you a hand. But it'll be sad to see her go. The old gang just seem to be dropping off one by one >_< First Crimm, then Hitsuke and Grizz and now Yuki. All of 'em where around when I first came on here. Heck they where the ones who showed me the ropes. But I'm getting sidetracked. Sorry about that.

Looking at the Shikai, the Bankai could be one of two things:


 * 1) An expansion of the perception abilities in and of themselves. She'd be fit to perceive those things without actually looking at the opponents body... like an extra sense, I suppose. The barriers then serve the same purpose as in Shikai, in that they defend her. You might wanna go down the rout that she can control her foes speed when she does come into physical contact. Speed up the blood in their body to make them dizzy or something along those lines, or speed their limbs up to such degrees that they can no longer turn and smack into things. And after looking at her powers and abilities, I'd recommended gibing her a Kidō ability (or make one and post it on the GF Kidō page) that makes it rain in an area. When someones moving at incredible speeds, the rain would shred their body. Ever watched Darker Than Black? If not, here's the character I mean - Goran.


 * 2) You could focus more on the barrier aspect while keeping the sense of perception the same when in Bankai. You've already given the Shikai a weakness, so if you strengthened that any more, its safe to assume the weakness would become greater as well; which would make the ability difficult and risky to use - hence unsuitable for battle. With the barriers, you've got a greater degree of flexibility. You could use them as they were designed - a defense. Or you could use them in a more unique manner. Form then, defend against an attack and then kick it towards an enemy. Since they'd be pretty durable in Bankai, it'd cause a fair degree of blunt force damage. You could also form them with sharpened edges and control their movements with hand motions or eyesight - basically allowing you to spin them at range like a disc.

Hope that gives you a few ideas, pal. And I got the router sorted, thanks for asking :P Only took BT a magical three weeks to send me the bloody thing >_< <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  12:50, June 15, 2011 (UTC)


 * I didn't need credited for it, pal. Just happy to help out :P Anyways, glad you liked the idea though. Need any more help, I'm only a message away. Night pal. Wow, it sounds odd saying that when its only 2.30 in the afternoon over here :P <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  13:36, June 15, 2011 (UTC)


 * Sure, go ahead. Just remember that the only place that actually teaches the styles is the Yuengiri Academy in Horiwari, so your character will probably need to attend there if he/she is only an apprentice. If you need help with the styles, then drop me a line, 'cause I haven't updated the Yuengiri page in ages :P <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  10:22, June 20, 2011 (UTC)


 * Well I'm not doing actual reviews at the minute, but I'll happily give my general opinion, pal :P Right, first of all let me congratulate you. The sections are pretty detailed and portray exactly what the reader needs to see in order to draw their conclusions about the character. The appearance is written well and detailed, as is the personality. The powers and abilities flow and you haven't revealed everything off the bat - like her swordsmanship abilities. That helps add suspense, at least in my thinking. But the organization of the former powers could be improved, pal. Put them under one section so it looks something like this. You may also wanna hide the information. Its former, so it shouldn't be read unless someone is using it as a reference for an earlier story - hence why I kept my own Kenji's Aoi Inazuma and Hollow Powers on his article instead of just erasing them. If you wanna see how to hide the section, then check out the edit view of Kenji's former powers and just follow what I've done. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  09:32, July 3, 2011 (UTC)


 * I was flicking through some pages last night when I was on my PS3, but couldn't get editing to the same degree I can when I'm at the computer. Hope you don't mind, but I just went ahead and fixed it up for ya, pal. I'd avoid using the tab system as well, if I were you. It was something I used to use for Kenji and its better having it all on one page. Easier navigated to, you know? <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  07:39, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

Your welcome, dude. But its hidden, its not supposed to come up until you hit the hide/show button twice :P Or is the hide/show part that doesn't show up on your com? It shows on mine, as does Kenji's and Raian's. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  07:49, July 4, 2011 (UTC)


 * Naw, that's what I thought, to be honest. Doesn't show up when I'm on my PS3 for one, or on my cousins laptop for that matter, pal. There's nothing wrong with your laptop in that respect, at least. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  07:54, July 4, 2011 (UTC)


 * No problem, pal :P <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  08:14, July 4, 2011 (UTC)


 * Sure thing, dude. Just make sure and use the templates for them: Template:Bleach Character Infobox (Excavado) or Template:Bleach Character Infobox (Excavado Alma), depending on the type your going for. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  08:31, July 4, 2011 (UTC)


 * The idea is sound enough, but you wouldn't need to sacrifice the Kidō to gain the Sonido. The Excavado are, in essence, a stronger version of a Vizard after all. The only Arrancar abilities they don't actually utilize are Bala and Hierro, meaning that they could develop Sonido over time and with teaching - like my own Shigeru Yuudai done with his Hollow Mask. If you wanna do it that way, though, fire away pal :P Just saying if you wanna keep the Kidō abilities, you can. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  10:48, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, Bakkōtō can be wielded by anyone with spiritual energy, so feel free, dude. I might just do that, in fact; though I'll need to see how I'll work him/her into my stories beforehand :P At least you had someone like Shigeru to reference when you created Airi lol. I wasn't so lucky :P <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  11:41, July 4, 2011 (UTC)


 * No worries, dude. Do this in two parts then :P


 * Mototsu: Since it exists as a state seperate from the zanpakutō, you ain't breaking any rules by trying to create something higher than Bankai thats attached to the zanpakutō. Its like my own Kyuukyou Shouten and Raze's Heiki for the Yuengiri. Their new releases sure, but they ain't granted through the zanpakutō's Inner Spirit. Anyways, the idea is sound enough and interesting to read. But I do have a question. If it immerses the Bankai in reiatsu, dissembles it all and reforms it as the Setsura; wouldn't the Bankai become unusable after that, instead being the Setsura release? Aside from that little qualm, nice work and good addition.


 * Zanpakutō: I don't know what you were planning with the current zanpakutō named Daybreak, but after reading her personality and finding her to be a vengeful person; something that reflects that ideal might be a better idea, so it fits more with the theme of vengeance. Nine times outta ten, characters work better and gel in their techniques if you set them a theme and follow it throughout. My Kentaro Hiroshi has two - anger and shadow or darkness if you prefer. His zanpakutō manipulates shadow, and his Hollow transformation plays off his anger. See what I'm getting at? Anyways, here's a zanpakutō I've had in the works for a while but never found a use for. If you want, you can have it, pal :P

Souruītā (ソウルイーター, Japanese for Soul Eater) You can decide the sealed appearance.

Shikai: Released with the command Inflict. I'll let you decide the Shikai form, though if your interested I was for making it a short spear, colored black, with a prong sticking out at a 45 degree angle near the spear-point that could be used to stop bladed weapons if your committed to a piercing attack. The tip was also double-sided, meaning it could be used as a make-shift sword if you needed to. The shaft was steel, with various runic marking along its length, the meaning of which were unknown.


 * Shikai Special Ability: Souruītā's power lies in the ability to strengthen the user at the expense of their physical health. The zanpakutō relishes in carnage, and the more injuries Airi receives, the greater her spiritual and physical powers become - all in the effort of rising above her opponents in order to exact vengeance on them for injuring her. The downside is that to benefit from the boost and make the effects stack, she needs to be struck with an attack stronger than the last to reflect her newfound powers, otherwise she remains the same.

Anyways, if you want it, you can have it, pal. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  09:48, July 5, 2011 (UTC)


 * Your welcome, pal. Glad you liked it :P Just keep in mind that a zan is the manifestation of the users soul, making personality a key trait in deciding its powers. And themes help you decide what your going to add and why. My own Kenji for example, likes delivering retribution, hence the theme of mercy, justice and vengeance in his own zanpakutō and the powers granted by Zettaiteki. But you've worked around my previous question about the Setsura and it makes a lot more sense now, so give yourself a pat on the back and let me take my own hat off to you for once :P If you want some useful tips about zanpakutō creation you should check out Njalm's guide on it: Here it is. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  11:14, July 5, 2011 (UTC)


 * I couldn't help noticing that a good majority of your articles lack pictures, pal. While it isn't a problem, are you having trouble finding good pics? I could give you the links to a few me, Raze and a few others use, pal. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  08:18, July 6, 2011 (UTC)


 * Haha. I can see where your coming from, pal. lol. Some of the pics you do find are... well pretty out there :P Anyways, here's the websites. You never know, you might find a few worthwhile ones, though be forewarned. Expect to find crap alongside the good lol. Zerochan and the Anime database. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  08:44, July 6, 2011 (UTC)


 * Your welcome, dude :P <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  09:18, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Sure, the Orders pretty big and Kenji's a colorful persona, so its understandable they'd have heard of him :P Go right ahead, but please no mad admirers lol. He's already got a few psychopaths after him on this wiki for one reason or another. Any more might kill me >_< Why couldn't he just have a fan club... :P <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  08:06, July 7, 2011 (UTC)


 * Tell me about it >_< How many people can say they've got the Jack-the-Ripper of the Bleach world after them? <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  08:51, July 7, 2011 (UTC)


 * Well, it depends how well the Motosu use spiritual energy. Its a difficult question, pal, because if you unlocked an ability like Twilight's Philosophy or Sei's Reason, you might use that completely instead of spiritual energy. But to keep things simple, its a good restriction 'cause it means they can't pile on abilities like Shikai, Bankai, and then a Philosophy manifestation. You'd be better keeping them to spiritual energy, dude, though that's only my opinion. Look at the differences in the two types of Excavado, for example. One, while being fit to don their Hollow mask and utilize the Nakazora Tamashii can't use their old Shikai or Bankai state. Those that keep their old zanpakutō lose the ability to don their Hollow mask so they gain the Nakazora Tamashii. Its a restriction to prevent overpowered characters; but the best example I could give you among my own articles would be an Arcanist/Shinigami hybrid. It'll never exist, but just think about an Arcanist who can wield the four classic elements plus Kidō and a zanpakutō and you'll see what I'm trying to say about piling on abilities. Hope that helps you out somewhat :p Oh yeah, mind giving me an opinion on Garian Shinjo? <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  11:04, July 7, 2011 (UTC)


 * Thank ya much, pal. My friend said that to me a day or two before I posted it after waking up with a killer hangover and a sore head. I damn near pissed myself laughing at her. But its a refreshing thought to know you won't overpower your articles with an assortment of powers. Right now, my own Kenji's got way too many and I'll be the first to admit that; though you'll see some changes as soon as I punch out and finish up the conclusion to Part II called the Liberation Saga. While Philosophy and Reason would be useful, I view it all as energy at the end of the day and everyone has the same problems in a story-line - your characters will eventually run out :P <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  11:38, July 7, 2011 (UTC)


 * Raze always manages to break the mold with something new and unexpected... People say that my Kenji's stronger than Van, but in any RP's we've done together the two are equal - always have been. Anyways, the Requiem he came up with was an awesome idea, so I'm looking forward to see what you come up with. Not to interfere with what you've got planned or anything, but you could have the Requiem as her Setsura release. The Setsura struck me as the full evolution of the users soul when I read it, so you could bring forth her Requiem that way. Just a suggestion. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  12:14, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Hope you enjoy 'em as much as I enjoyed writing 'em, pal :p <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  12:53, July 7, 2011 (UTC)


 * Now I enjoyed that :p There's five stages you'll go through... Priceless lol. I saw that little gender changing idea a while back and simply rolled my eyes, but its actually pretty funny if you do it right. Anyways, one thing you might wanna do is seperate the descriptions out from the conversation. You do a good job explaining their respective appearances, and the reader can guess their personalities based on their reactions, though the wording is kinda hard to follow at times because of the descriptions beforehand. Simply take a space when its a new speaker. You'll have an abundance of shorter sentences, but the story tends to flow better. Look at general novels and you'll see what I mean. The authors generally describe... say the scenery, the characters and then does an indented segment to signal a new speaker. Its a nice system you can accomplish on the wiki just by taking a space, pal. Aside from that, its obvious your in-character with each of your different participants. You don't use the same mannerisms for each, its enriched with comedy and its a good read. Make the conversation a little easier to follow like I've pointed out and you'll have yourself a very nice short story, pal.


 * Anyways, moving onto your gender bending Head-Captain :p Okay, so there's no confusion I'll just call the character she or her lol. Anyways, the problem is that you've essentially taken Zabimaru and copy and pasted it into her article with a few name changes. I'd suggest changing the concept a little. You won't need to alter it considerably to show a few unique twists, while keeping true to what you wanna portray. If I were you, using this zanpakuto, I'd focus more predominately on the Ryūga Zekkō attack; in fact I'd turn that into the main Shikai ability instead of the whip-like extension. The segments would float around her continually, guided by the hand motions she demonstrates. I'd even say its a sister-sword to Zabimaru, and have the segments coming together to form the whip-like blade as a named ability. Basically what I'm suggesting is the reversal of the roles you've assigned. The released state is the blade segments floating around, enabling long-range combat without the downside of it being a one-shot omni-directional strike. The whip-blade is then the named ability, though obviously since it isn't the main power now, you'd have to craft in a limitation. It'd essentially be used for surprising an opponent who thinks your characters defenseless after they dodge the segments. As for the Bankai, I'd follow a similar theme, with the segments working before the whip-like part. Hope that gives you come kind of help, pal. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  09:08, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

RE:Opinion
Hi how you doin Deus

I am wondering one things, could I have your Opinion on Necrid and Masashi? If not I understand, thanks. ~   Sentonara of  the Spirits  06:03, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks Deus, I would love to do an RP with you. ~   Sentonara of  the Spirits  22:22, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

Just a Question for yeah Dues, If we do an RP together. Who would you like to use? ~   Sentonara of  the Spirits  04:54, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

oh deus don't worry about I have to many RPs at the moment as well.  ~   Sentonara of  the Spirits  05:44, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

Oh yeah I would love to do one, I would either use Takashi, Sentonara or Tuskumogami. ~   Sentonara of  the Spirits  00:56, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

I personal think that Takashi and Gai would make an interresting RP because both are mistaken for being women haha or maybe Masashi and Takashi would like to work together for once:P ~   Sentonara of  the Spirits  01:05, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Ok that sounds good, but the question is would you like to start it or would I? I suck with making titles -.- ~   Sentonara of  the Spirits  01:07, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Ok your turn, just where we wouldn't keep messaging eachother. I will check every so often if you added to it and good luck:) ~   Sentonara of  the Spirits  01:32, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Sōzōshin
Sure, you can make a Sōzōshin. Also, by the way, don't just send a message on a section from long ago. Put in a new section, because when people do that, I don't keep track of messages and I end up not being able to message someone back. --Seireitou-shishō (My True Identity 05:21, June 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * Sure, that works. --Seireitou-shishō [[File:Seireitou's signature picture.jpg]] (My True Identity 05:35, June 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * Its cool. However you should in my opinion say when and that if I missed it. Is when they came to be. Like with my immortal Kosumosukihaku race. The first of their Kind existed before time did. Just a foundation of when they came to be is useful. Also I believe this race could be the foundation to others of your creations.: The Twilight of Your Despair 06:29, June 20, 2011 (UTC)
 * Its cool. However you should in my opinion say when and that if I missed it. Is when they came to be. Like with my immortal Kosumosukihaku race. The first of their Kind existed before time did. Just a foundation of when they came to be is useful. Also I believe this race could be the foundation to others of your creations.: The Twilight of Your Despair 06:29, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

Uhh... really distant to Seireitou and Kamui. I say this because I already have made many relatives to him, when there's supposed to be a shortage of Kawahiru, so... yeah, reeeeally distant cousin. And yeah, you can give her the Sinseang Jeongsu. --Seireitou-shishō (My True Identity 17:29, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

I see you made a Kawahiru. Would you be willing to test yours against mine when you get the chance?--ようこそ地獄へ - "Yōkoso jigoku e." ("Enter the Hell of Darknesslover") 14:54, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

Alright. I patiently await the battle.--ようこそ地獄へ - "Yōkoso jigoku e." ("Enter the Hell of Darknesslover") 23:34, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

Would you like for Masanori Kawahiru to be close as they both would have reasons to fight Kamui?: The Twilight of Your Despair 01:07, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

I take it you would rather not for Masanori Kawahiru and Setsuna Kawahiru to know each other. That is completely ok just throwning ideas arounds.: The Twilight of Your Despair 06:46, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Oh well then they might not like each other all that much as Naisho and Masanori don't like each other. But separate issue would you like to create a Royal Family member to the Souzou Clan of the Kosumosukihaku. Just cause I have the Four direct princes made doesn't mean that there aren't cousins.: The Twilight of Your Despair 06:59, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Huh, yes of course there can be females in the Kosumosukihaku and even in the Souzou clan. Just the Four direct crown princes are all brothers. The last King before Kiyoshi Souzou had many sibling and they had children. That is unless you don't want to make a Kos and that is the short code word from now on has the full name is long.: The Twilight of Your Despair 06:43, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

Kawahiru Clan Page
No, you can just add her in there, I already gave you permission to make it. --Seireitou-shishō (My True Identity 19:07, June 28, 2011 (UTC) No, you can just add

=P
Haha I find it funny I read that after I posted =P But yea it fine. I think the reason its hard for us to think of things to use in that RP is because we kind of had a mismatched battle grouping. We shouldvestarted with a meeting of sorts between two chaacters or even start with a sparring session instead of jumping right into that giant brawl that way we could get used to each other better for our first RP and then have things flow better. <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Yuri <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  03:55, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Hey ther pal. Havent heard from you in awhile, I was wondering if you could tell me what you think of Ekatarina so far. Oh and wheres the newest FT chapter? is it on break or somethin? =P <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Yuri <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  03:24, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

Haha awww...I thought I was gonna get the first swing at Shion. But its fine. lol. Hmm Thanks for the compliments as well. I thought to finally flesh out the Satonaka Clan, that way if others want to create one they may. lol. ut hmm I guess I can keep waiting for it to come out. No worries lol <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Yuri <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  04:08, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

RP talk (Ash)
Did I remove parts of the RP? I don't think I.... Oh! My brother must have done it by accident (or purpose) he hates wikia so yeah, I got the parts back so don't worry, and it's actually your go.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 09:19, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, she's really good, especially her persona, kind of scary in fact, in a good way of course. Well done.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 06:44, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, your techniques aren't overpowered for both Ayano and Setsuna. I also have an idea for Ayano's bankai, I don't know if you'll like it but since you're doing a 'net' thing for her shikai, I was thinking perhaps she could have a 'sewing' theme for her Bankai, I know it sounds weird but hear me out. Ok, basically she can use her Shikai ability to augmented levels, BUT can also 'weave' together spiritual particles in the air, or the ones that she just dissassembled into almost any shape (the more complex the more time it takes) and you need a medium, such as a sword or something to 'sew' with. The other weakness is that the reishi must be pre-existing in the environment, and not made by someone else (Kosumosukihaku). Lastly, the larger or more complex the creation, the more spiritual power that must be 'poured' into the 'needle (medium)' in order to create it, and as mentioned before, these take a while. You CANNOT recreate an object such as the Hogyoku etc, although you can make an imitation it has no properties at all, aside from being combustible, even then, being harmlessly combustible.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 12:49, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

Cool, no problem, and I'll have to wait for a while to get my Bankai in order to fight Ayano properly, so I'll be a while.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 11:08, June 28, 2011 (UTC)

Soz I haven't been on much, anyways, Sayaka is really cool, I like her personality and such, overall awesome character.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 00:35, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah sorry about that, I don't think I'll use my Bankai in this fight. I'll try to win, although I know you'll win.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 03:54, July 2, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I was hoping we get it over and done with, but no probs, I can wait, you'll soon know why Jin hates his ressurecion though. :D<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 08:42, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

I know, I'm just completing my ressurecion, as well as wondering, what is Ayano going to do? Just clash?<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 08:53, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

Which is? Because I don't know what it is. I was wondering also, who's gonna win?<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 09:01, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

A draw would be ok, by the way, how's your story coming along with Koukishi?<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 09:07, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

That's cool, okay I was wondering, what would be most effective against Ayano's current assault, the perfection of Strength to counter it, or Durability to block it (ressurecion special ability)<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 09:13, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, so I basically block the attack?<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 09:23, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

your go.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 09:43, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

Well I have lost, a bystander and Jin's partner, who I'll create in a moment will come and take him away. hat was an excellent match<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 11:29, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

So I think we're finished? Well, anyway, you should put a slight comical scene involving Ayano and the money she receives from my character, it'd be funny too read.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 12:25, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

I never thought Ayano would do that with her money? Oh well, funny nonetheless.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 13:28, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

I live in Australia as well, so yeah, :D<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 08:53, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I am as well. And I would be glad to, I was planning on asking you but I couldn't think of a Zanpakutou for him... Man, your Mototsu zans are hard, oh well l'll try.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 09:27, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Well I haven't done anything basically, but here's your Mototsu. Anyways, you mind if he's an acquaintance of sorts with Kagirinai (Gai's brother I'm not sure how to spell his name)<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 11:02, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Nah I'm good, oh and did you base Setsura off the Sozoshin's Sinsaeng Jeosu, the similarities are rather visible.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 11:09, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah guess I didn't really read that page enough. Anyways, as for your Mototsu they are coming along great.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 11:23, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for that, I will use it if needed, but how's this power? Ok, basically, it's called Embodiment (Jap Trans later) and it allows Natsu to embody any power that is around him, such as embodying trees to obtain nature manipulation etc? Although he must first touch it, and there's a time limit for each embodiment. He can also embody an enemy's power, although these cost much more power to utilise and only stay for a minute at maximum. He can't embody Reason, Sekkisekki or Philosophy, and he can't embody illusions or anything like that. So how's that sound?<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 02:22, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

No probs, I'll just use a SUPERPOWER then, :D<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 02:25, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, after looking at the Selective Invulnerability article of the Almighty Powers, I'm going to use the ability of 'Choice' by that dude in D Gray Man, Tyki Mikk, that's it. Although I'll change it slightly.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 02:32, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry to dissappoint, but Natsu uses his humor to fight, lol :D<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 03:32, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Well here's Natsu's shikai, it's slightly diffrent from what I planned but here it is<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 07:38, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Greetings, Greetings
Hey, Persona. If you happen to like Naruto, how about joining Naruto Fanon Wiki. I'd like to RP with you there, test out a new char. of mine.--シルバー人柱力 - The Silver Jinchūriki. ("Talk to me.") 21:11, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, no worries. I have seven weeks off from school summer break has been drastically shortened) so I have time.--シルバー人柱力 - The Silver Jinchūriki. ("Talk to me.") 00:47, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

It doesn't matter which day. I'm on summer break, so I got time.--シルバー人柱力 - The Silver Jinchūriki. ("Talk to me.") 07:44, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I'm a bit too sleepy to fully read it, but I did skim it, and I enjoyed what I saw. Being reborn as a human I like, and I find her Fullbring interesting. Firstly tho, on her Zan, I think it's Yuki Onna (雪女, snow woman), though that's just following wikipedia. Sorry for not going into much detail in describing your article, but I am rather sleep--シルバー人柱力 - The Silver Jinchūriki. ("Talk to me.") 08:47, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

Mhm anytime.--シルバー人柱力 - The Silver Jinchūriki. ("Talk to me.") 21:45, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

Whichever can keep up with Itoku. Her Zanpakutō is actually a good one (one of my best if I was to brag). Should I make the article, or you?--シルバー人柱力 - The Silver Jinchūriki. ("Talk to me.") 05:38, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Kawahiru Bout: Setsuna vs Itoku!. And there it is, it is your turn.--シルバー人柱力 - The Silver Jinchūriki. ("Talk to me.") 06:08, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Yer go--シルバー人柱力 - The Silver Jinchūriki. ("Talk to me.") 06:48, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Your turn now.--シルバー人柱力 - The Silver Jinchūriki. ("Talk to me.") 07:26, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

O? Interesting. and yer go--シルバー人柱力 - The Silver Jinchūriki. ("Talk to me.") 07:35, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Your turn.--シルバー人柱力 - The Silver Jinchūriki. ("Talk to me.") 07:45, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe Itoku can preven that insanity.--シルバー人柱力 - The Silver Jinchūriki. ("Talk to me.") 07:48, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Your go now.--シルバー人柱力 - The Silver Jinchūriki. ("Talk to me.") 08:01, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Your turn. I like what I just did ^^--シルバー人柱力 - The Silver Jinchūriki. ("Talk to me.") 08:27, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

I've seen it done before. A character I've done, Aace Archibald has one (he's dead so it doesn't matter anymore tho). Hell, Sei OWNS Byakuya. I don't think they'd be too mad. Itoku's Shikai is technically similar. And your turn.--シルバー人柱力 - The Silver Jinchūriki. ("Talk to me.") 08:45, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Your turn.--シルバー人柱力 - The Silver Jinchūriki. ("Talk to me.") 09:00, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Your tune ^^ So convenient to have a Zanpakutō like Giekiri.--シルバー人柱力 - The Silver Jinchūriki. ("Talk to me.") 09:15, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Alright and it's your go (if my posts get bad, I'm a bit sleepy)--シルバー人柱力 - The Silver Jinchūriki. ("Talk to me.") 09:32, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks. You're good too. I assume btw that Setsuna is holding onto the chain, so my attack is design to burn her. (I basically just used one of Sei's flame spells while ripping off one of Sasuke's techniques). Your go.--シルバー人柱力 - The Silver Jinchūriki. ("Talk to me.") 09:47, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Your go. Sorry for taking so long, I was wrapped up in something. Combining Senbonzakura with Amaterasu? Sounds painful.--シルバー人柱力 - The Silver Jinchūriki. ("Talk to me.") 10:18, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Ah. Your go. and a meteor? Really nao? I believe that falls under the trope "There's No Kill Like Overkill". And I'mma gonna go to bed. After you make this post, I'll post when I wake up.--シルバー人柱力 - The Silver Jinchūriki. ("Talk to me.") 11:17, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, I was wrapped in something else. It's your go. Btw, mind telling me your opinion on Muko Tajuujinkaku?--シルバー人柱力 - The Silver Jinchūriki. ("Talk to me.") 04:41, July 2, 2011 (UTC)

Your go, and aww, no opinion on Muko Tajuujinkaku?--シルバー人柱力 - The Silver Jinchūriki. ("Talk to me.") 06:25, July 2, 2011 (UTC)

^^ Thanks. Btw, did u read the latest Negima?--シルバー人柱力 - The Silver Jinchūriki. ("Talk to me.") 06:40, July 2, 2011 (UTC)

Your go. And I think that was an O.K. speech. Naturally, I countered with my own speech.--シルバー人柱力 - The Silver Jinchūriki. ("Talk to me.") 07:23, July 2, 2011 (UTC)

Kk. I got time. Nets cutting off. lates.--シルバー人柱力 - The Silver Jinchūriki. ("Talk to me.") 08:07, July 2, 2011 (UTC)

RE: Hey there
Hey Dues. I believe I'm long over due to say welcome to the wiki but I'll say it nevertheless. Welcome! I've been meaning to reply back to your message but I kept it putting it off until now. :T I must apologize for that. Sorry! As for the review of your character, I have to say that he is nicely done albeit I thought they were a girl at first. T_T All I can say is that it is amazingly detailed and is worthy of praise as I can say that you're talented. And you're not bugging me at all if you think that. I'm a bit busy right now since I'm writing the Fusō Clan but I'm pretty much done with it at the least. I don't bite; I'm not mean at all. =] Anyways. Sure! I would love to RP with you sometime. Cheers!

Actually, I'm not stuck on his Zanpakutō as I already have everything planned out (look at the images in the gallery) I'm just lazy to right it at the moment. :T haha. However, I am open to ideas and maybe I can use it for him or for someone else in his clan (who would be deceased of course, or a puppet.) Have you read the page so far? If so, tell me what you think. I'm very open to suggestions. And if you want, we can RP right now. And my name is quite simple. Everyone calls me that. Its APS. Haha. Another Poetic Spartan. Cheers!!

Please, tell me more of your simple yet effective ideas. Haha. If you can, can you keep it to a theme though? Anyways thanks! He's probably going to be one of my main characters along with Kei Yume. I'm usually on for most part of the day, I just don't do much unless prompted.

Dokeshi's clan powers revolve around Puppets. But his Zanpakutō is related to Clowns. Hence the Joker reference. Lol. Hmm. Typical of an arsonist. And the Puppeteer one is quite interesting honestly. Alrite then Dues.

Personally, my favorite series is Mobile Suit Gundam SEED/SEED Destiny and then OO. I'll give her a look later.

I liked G Gundam and I plan to own every series. SEED had morale implications for me. And your very welcome.

SEED will probably be my number one unless AGE beats that. Partially because of Lacus Clyne. <3 Haha. You think? I thought so too but I'm behind on mine. Haha. But okay then. What do you want to do?

I'll be using my main of course, Kei Yume. Would you like to include the RP in your storyline? Or anything of that matter.

Mmkay Start it if you will Dues. :}

Heya Persona
Sorry. I've been busy lately I havent been ignoring you in the least. Hmm As for Setsuna...well personaly, I don't care much for the Kawahiru clan as I feel they are WAY too overpowered but you've managed to go and balance it out quite well. I do like the cosmic based zanpakuto as well. Hmm some suggestions, you could try to work in gravity control, or even cosmic radiation absorbtion that chanes into a getsuga like attack or even just an enhancement to her physical capablities. Oh! A for the satonaka clan member, well there's only two things you really need to know. Don't make them older than Rei'juro or Inai, and give them some sort of manipulation ability and you're good to go. I'm fairly sick right now so I probably won't get to the actual clan page for a bit of time. But if you need ny help feel free to ask =) <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Yuri <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  00:03, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Np pal. Hmm just let me know the character's relation to the clan so I can add it to page. Thanks for the get wells as well =P I do hope we can do another RP sometime soon, rather than the mash-up of mayhem we had previously. <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">"Rin-Okumura  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  01:34, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Hey pal. I just made a new Satonaka clan member Kujina and wanted to know if you wanted her and Akiha to be sisters? Oh! Do you have a picture planned for her? If not I could help you find one. =) It helps gives some personality to the chaacters, if they have an image that matches their well...personality...it makes them seem more relatable. And would you mind taking a look at the changes I made to both Rozeluxe and Van....at the bottom of each under Yuengiri teachings. (I think you will notice the inspiration in most of those) =P <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">"Rin-Okumura  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  01:17, July 2, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome sauce. Well I will add that to Kujina momentrily =) Hmm why don't you use pictures anymore....if you dont mind me asking of course. And I just used Kaori for Kujina since I changed Ruiko's apperance. I really liked the character in the anime seeing as she went from completly terrifying BA to this adorable BA who is constntl seeking affection form a guy who cant notice the long trail of females after him if there were a series of signs plastered in front of him lol. And yup...I made a few changes to it to make it more Van-esque (I hope I saved it) but in any case. Thanks =) <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">"Rin-Okumura  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  02:19, July 2, 2011 (UTC)

Ohhhhh ok. Yea that makes sense. I just really wanted to see what Akiha mightve looked like I'm no good when it comes to imagining based on the appearance section alone as I tend to think of people I know that resemble it...trust me I know some strange looking people lol. But its no worries pal. =D <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">"Rin-Okumura  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  13:39, July 2, 2011 (UTC)


 * The Satonaka Talk Page is up and running now =) <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">"Rin-Okumura  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  17:56, July 2, 2011 (UTC)

I meant Clan page, not talk page in the above message. But yea thanks for the compliments though I think N may have a problem with the character concept....its probably something easily fixed like he doesnt like one of the images or something. But yea I've been lookin at her my friend. (Quite the troll in fact lol) I see several inspirations possibly...such as Gildarts, Ice Make (possibly the guy from blazblue), and other icy sources =P. Though in the swordsmanship part where you say the techniques have ill-affects on others but she doesnt feel any--you may want to make her feel a bit if they are that dangerous for others to learn or maybe explain why she doesnt feel any of them like she went through a special training to bypass the dangers but slightly weakens the tecnhiques until she releases her zanpakuto. Or something along those lines =) But no worries pal...you arent a bother to me. Heck you inspire random ideas in my mind lol. Dont worry so much lol <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">"Rin-Okumura  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  00:38, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

No problem pal. =) Hmm I'll probably end up making a mototsu sometime as a villian for mine and Kenji's characters lol. I'm still waiting on you to work on those Accelerators. lol. Then again I was thinking of making something like the innovators from Gundam 00 if you ever seen it. =P Oh! Could you tell me what you think of Haruki's fullbring when you get the chance? <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">"Rin-Okumura  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  03:31, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

hahaha I take it youve seen it. =P But you're right, Ribbons and the Innovators (Time out...what bad guy name is Ribbons? lol) all wore crazy costumes though I did like the tieria clone lol. Funny thing is, I've pretty much watched all the gundam series besides SD and I have to say Setsuna has done the least amount of changing out of all the Main Characters and that counts Athrun and freackin Heero Yuy!...That guy was a wall to the end lol. Gotta admit...I love me some lockon...his death as well as the death of most of the ptolemy crew in the season 1 finale has got to be my favorite gundam moment well second to G-Gundam's final battle between Domon and Raine Vs Dark Gundam...pure genius! But anywho.....thanks for the compliments, I was looking around and I realized NO ONE utilized anything from scryed for a fullbring but everyone utilizes something from naruto or some variation of oe of the canon fullbring lol. And hmmm....is there like anything I need to know about making a mototsu? <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">"Rin-Okumura  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  04:06, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

"This hand of ours is burning red, its loud roar tells us to DEFEAT YOU!" Haha....that moment when the shuffle alliance pulled that off was priceless. =D Gotta admit though..in 00 Setsuna was a little off his rocker when it came to getting the job done...first episode....boom boom boom. He's a serious dude. Though I wish they didnt kill off Lockon just to bring back...well....Lockon =P Haha I mean it was a good death...they couldve just brought a different brother or something. Not a twin....kinda downplayed the original's death imho...but they had two different personalities so it worked out I guess. As for Airi....already read her earlier lol. She inspired me to make Harribel's daughter so to speak haha and make her an Arcanist/Excavado.....shhhh thats my secret plan. No one knows about that except you and Kenji =D <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">"Rin-Okumura  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  01:12, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Hahaha I already saw it pal and trust me...if I saw a problem I would call you out on it =P I give it a 9 out of 10 seeing as you added that life or death thing to it. And given how powerful the mototsu can be the only way they could be there is by another mototsu. lol But all in all ilike it alot! Good job and keep it comin. Oh! After I finish Van's new ability(ies) would you mind letting me know what you think? <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">"Rin-Okumura  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  00:34, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

I was gonna ask if you liked it but seeing as you want to use it I take that as a yes =P lol. And your welcome pal. But umm sure I guess. I didnt really think about others applying it and I'm not the stickler to say someone cant use something I come up with lol. Hmm though I'm not sure how it would work...unless it manifests itself in some new way like with Van its Rifts = Void but with a fire user it could be Fire = Magma or something like that. Go for it pal. If you need any help we could do an RP where Van teaches the character how to use it lol <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">"Rin-Okumura  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  03:52, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, I read your message earlier and then fell asleep at the com...got a bad habit of that =P Hmmm. So who would we be using and what's the story with it? But I agree with what you said about Gai, I dont think you should have get anything else for a bit, flesh him out more and then add on to him but for the time being you should give a Requiem Variant (Requiem's Van's ability name. lol) to someone else instead. Hmm...I should probably make a page for the idea as well. haha. <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">"Rin-Okumura  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  01:10, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Haha that works. Though I have to warn you, Van probably wont be holding back on her. lol. Do you mind if I use Haruki first and then bring in Van? I want to be able to flex Haruki's fullbring a bit hahah. Hmm Sayaka is a lesbian you say? Hmm I could also bring in Izuna as well (another lesbian) and she and Haruki could attempt to fight Sayaka until Van arrives to help them from being overwhelmed lol <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">"Rin-Okumura  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  01:47, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Hha would you mind starting it up then pal? I am terribly awful at intros....its my kryptonite. =P But oh! yea that works then. Hmm I do look foward to this. hmmm though I have to add Izuna's abilities first. but yea go ahead and do the basis and ill let you know what needs fixing. =D <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">"Rin-Okumura  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  02:39, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry about the late responding and such but I like the idea. Agian sorry..Ive been busy with work and now I have a pounding headache from being in the heat all day yet different circumstances prevent me from obtaining any sort of rest whatsoever. I do like the ideas you proposed as well. Time to get this party rocked. <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">"Rin-Okumura  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  22:50, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Kawahiru Faceoff
Would you like your Kawahiru to face off against mine, Masanori Kawahiru.: The Twilight of Your Despair 23:26, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Alright
Sure, which one? Master N 08:17, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

Yup Master N 09:07, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

Now it begins again
Your go. Now with Bankai, I can truly fight!--シルバー人柱力 - The Silver Jinchūriki. ("Talk to me.") 09:21, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

I'd agree, but that move merely set the table for my next move.--シルバー人柱力 - The Silver Jinchūriki. ("Talk to me.") 10:10, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

Lol true. Your turn.--シルバー人柱力 - The Silver Jinchūriki. ("Talk to me.") 11:39, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

Yer go, and I'll review him just a 'lil later.--シルバー人柱力 - The Silver Jinchūriki. ("Talk to me.") 23:33, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

Your go. I merely countered with something similar.--シルバー人柱力 - The Silver Jinchūriki. ("Talk to me.") 05:26, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Could you? Please feel free ^^ And it's your go.--シルバー人柱力 - The Silver Jinchūriki. ("Talk to me.") 06:37, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Lol k. I ended the story and I'm about to go to sleep, so I'll check that article tomorrow. Link me to the other one u wanted me to check as well.--シルバー人柱力 - The Silver Jinchūriki. ("Talk to me.") 08:27, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Tenshi
Yes, sure. Go right ahead. Sorry for the late reply. <font color="#008000" face="Verdana">Captain Jack Sparrow  <font color="#008000" face="Verdana"> (Captain's Logs) 00:25, July 5, 2011 (UTC)


 * Yes you may. <font color="#008000" face="Verdana">Captain Jack Sparrow  <font color="#008000" face="Verdana"> (Captain's Logs) 00:47, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Umm
Sure would do you want Masanori Kawahiru to fight?: The Twilight of Your Despair 02:10, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Sure and can you start it please I dont care where or when it takes place. Also can you start a new message as my talk page is getting long and by the end of this or next week I will be achieving it again.: The Twilight of Your Despair 02:29, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Hey I was wondering for Ash told me to ask you. Can my character Kiyoshi Souzou have at least some inner knowledge of the Mototsu. For I am about to do an rp with him Kiyoshi vs Natsu whom is a Mototsu. And before ask how could he as Kiyoshi is only 4000 plus years old and the Mototsu are millions of years old. Kiyoshi grandfather Kaosu Souzou predates time itself and would have told him of all the early species once Kiyoshi become the King of his species.: The Twilight of Your Despair 04:21, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Ok and as Kaosu is giving Natsu an object that has similar powers to what the Kosmosukihaku can do than it doesn't go against your articles foundation laws which is a writer's rights. Ash asked that as Kaosu with his godly power grant wishes and I gave him one free wish. Thank you.: The Twilight of Your Despair 04:49, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

I was alittle confused I know about how they don't develop other species powers. But could a Mototsu learn how to use Philosophy? As Philosophy is not spiritual energy or reason. It is created when one has a Kaigan or Spiritual Awaken from their Spiritual Power. But if you don't want that it is completely 100 ok just making sure and I already changed it to where Philosophy can be manifested by almost anyone instead of anyone.: The Twilight of Your Despair 04:56, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Oh and I hope this gets to you before you reply. Sure that is possible and as Philosophy is a foreigh type of none spiritual energy only a complete Philosophy would not destroy a Mototsu as per your use of it for complete Philosophy is complete Harmony.: The Twilight of Your Despair 04:59, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Well immortality for the Kosumosukihaku is not aging, and not requiring food, water, air or sleep. But that is fine about Philosophy I even edited to where certain species that use it can harm them. As for me making a Mototsu thanks can I have the slot and start to make him/her at a latter date still got a lot of characters to finish first. But Hakuda you know that Hakuda is really just hand-to-hand combact, just they use the term Hakuda. but guess you know this already. And I mean Kaosu maybe be able to grant them immortality but it would be hard and would take time and it mostly likely would kill them as a Kosumosukihaku's immortality is their divinity or divine powers outside of Philosophy.: The Twilight of Your Despair 05:14, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Well my Kosmosukihaku are like deities and I believe that all deities are at least immortal that they age and don't require worship type shit pardon my lanuage as if they did than who worshiped them before humans did animals?lol Just if the universe would end any deities left will continue to live unless they are killed and after the end their job is to start building things after the next universe starts.

But yeah you can have your character use Philosophy but they have to use it under which form Death, Life, Destruction, or Creation unless you want them to use Complete Philosophy but the way describe them than using a complete Philosophy would killed them instantly most likely. And ill think of some abilities for the Mototsu and get back to you on that one.

Btw the do you want the character that is to battle Masanori Kawahiru to learn how to develop Philosophy as next to Kaosu of course he is the strongest user of it.: The Twilight of Your Despair 05:36, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Would you like for your character to be able to use a complete Philosophy or just an incomplete Philosophy.: The Twilight of Your Despair 07:46, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Verywell now you will have to up heard to that it has been over 10,000 years since anyone has been able to manifest a complete version as Masanori Kawahiru broke that recently but before him its been that long. But as your character is a Mototsu and are normally over 100,000 than it shouldn't be an issue. After all using the complete Philosophy even for a short time would do great harm to a Mototsu according to your wishes.: The Twilight of Your Despair 07:54, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Umm I wanted to let you know if change your mind you can have a Mototsu able to learn Philosophy. And I respect your decision that they cannot gain powers from other species. But you should give full details on that. Like saying if they try to gain powers from others or if someone bestows powers on to them their bodies reject and it destorys or harms them. Or something along your ideas.: The Twilight of Your Despair 05:27, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

I saw it that is fine. And I had an idea for them. That the original Mototsu couldn't uses Reason or Philosophy as they bodies are made of a certain kind of Reishi that cannot work well with those energies. But what if in the future there were a tansended or evolved species that comes from the Mototsu that can still purge foreign energy from their bodies but at will and can use them.

Side note I will wirte that Philosophy cannot be used by Mototsu as the divine properities are too pure for their bodies to handle. But as along as those kinds of energy can work on them like attacks and that they cannot use or gain them than the rest is no problem.: The Twilight of Your Despair 06:02, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Well thats your article but I would change that from not working to barely working on Gai. As one time my Philosophy couldn't be broken down by Sekkiseki, Reason or Spiritual Powers. Now only Sekkiseki and Reason cannot break down Philosophy. and only the strongest Spiritual Powers can work on Philosophy. My theory is that only supernatural energy can break down supernatural energy but no supernatural energy is completely immune to any other.

Example as my character Masanori Kawahiru's has the only Philosophy Zanapkuto in Creation that only uses Philosophy energy. So if Gai and Masanori would fight than it would be impossible for him to fight him/her. I am not trying to make you write to my wishes but look on the talk page of Philosophy and you will see how much shit I got from saying only Philosophy energy can break down Philosophy energy.Just saving you some trouble.: The Twilight of Your Despair 06:25, July 7, 2011 (UTC)\

Well thats ok. Just Philosophy users really only can use a part or an incompletel version of it. It really only just enhances Spiritual Power and added the Complete Protection's power among the other strengthened powers. Example it would make a Hado number 90 have the strength of a 95. Only complete Philosophy really has ujust Philosophy based powers. I mean for Kaosu Souzou the first user of it his Spiritual Power alone is strong enough to destroy a planet (and that is why he is only used for wishes not battle talk about Dragon ball Z if he would.) But he has the high level of Philosophy Power too which is at least equal to his Spiritual Power. Just one can completely seal it off from there Spiritual Power.

But like I said I am not trying to passively force my ideas, just saving you some trouble. I am like that too that if I like my character too much even a small change can get me mad. And I figured out why they couldn't develop it as they cannot have a Kaigan or Spiritual Awakening. As the Spiritual Awakening is an awakening from Spiritual Powers and allowing from Philosophy energy to manifest. This would completely explain why their bodies reject or don't mix well with Philosophy and why they cannot learn it.: The Twilight of Your Despair 06:51, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

To mainfest complete Philosophy is very difficult and most stop once they have learn the incomplete version.: The Twilight of Your Despair 06:53, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Its fine.: The Twilight of Your Despair 22:47, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

For Philosophy that is fine but it cannot always work but say 80% of the time sure it can work. As for reason well take from my species the Kosumosukihaku. They have certain deity or divine-like powers to negate the powers of Sekkiseki and Reason without even having Philosophy in time frames (aside from Kaosu but he is too strong to be used for battle so he doesn't really could. But you should ask Sei if that is possible. Aside note would you like to make a amatsuotome?: The Twilight of Your Despair 01:52, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Ok and now regardless of your decision I will let you make one. but as these are limited after yours and another that I asked today I am closing the race for awhile. Can I ask a favor please?: The Twilight of Your Despair 02:33, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Well and now its your choice 100 percent. But I am asking if at all possible if you could make to where certain Beings like Kaosu Souzou, or one of the Opimates can grant powers or new energy to a Mototsu. Now the main reason as while "they" are not omnipotent the trait that no deity cannot grant them powers makes them in a way omnipotent by form of omnipotent structure. The MAIN reason for this is that if Bff ever has an all powerful god again for at one time it did I don't want you to get introuble for that. Now here is what I think that would not destroy the foundation of the rule but stretches it just enough to make everyone ok with it.

While most Mototsu cannot develop traits, powers, or another energies they can be granted to them via godly powerful beings like the Opimates or by deities like Kaosu Souzou. However they maybe able to grant powers or another energy to them but they cannot make them completely able to use them and after time will be harmed if not destroyed by using them. This way it protects that except for only godly demons and deities there is no way they can develop power or energies other than of their own kind. Regardless of your decision which I will respect either way you can make one of the amatsuotome. : The Twilight of Your Despair 02:55, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Well you could state that it is a well kept secret among them to prevent others from going to them and asking for more powers. Only beings like the Soul King and Kaosu, also the Opimates could know this but they don't let other Mototsu know this. But beings of Kaosu level of divinity can grant them powers and abilities and energies but only an all powerful god can do that and allow them to not be harmed or destroyed by them.: The Twilight of Your Despair 03:36, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Uhh yeah I said that you could regardless of your decision. Also you should update on the Mototsu page with what you have decided.: The Twilight of Your Despair 06:33, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Hey tell me do you think I am coming along with the Philosophy spell page called Kamiwaza?: The Twilight of Your Despair 02:53, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Sure
Go ahead. --Seireitou-shishō (My True Identity 00:57, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Story Arc
I will read it in a bit. I'm currently developing characters that rival the Satonaka Clan...Arma Clan. They will all possess weaponry that counters the Satonaka special abilities and be involved in an upcoming arc. You can make one as well if you want. =) <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">"Rin-Okumura  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  01:33, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Haha I doubt anyone will even notice to be honest and besides if anyone say anything...there are so many zangetsus and byakuya clones that it wont make a difference if someone has a Zabimaru relative. Thats my take on it at least. lol. But yea just link me to Haruko and I'll give it a look over =) Whew! Making these clansmen is a bit tiring lol. <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">"Rin-Okumura  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  01:48, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Coolio! Cant wait to see it. Whew im almost done with the concept behind van's counterpart now I just have to add the information. =P But yea..I like the gravity abilities. I think I may use them for Ruiko in her resurrecion state, seeing as utilizes gravity. Man You just made the Cero Espada that much more powerful...makes me think that she will be a formindable opponent for Van pretty soon. Well she already is with her zan alone but still haha <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">"Rin-Okumura  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  02:04, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks pal. Oh! How do you do the hide thing? <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">"Rin-Okumura  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  02:25, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Ohhhhhh...oopsie =P <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">"Rin-Okumura  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  02:46, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Nah, I don't really need Philosophy for Natsu, I'll just keep him how he is, nice and simple, by the way, can you check out Kaede, Kiba and Miroku for me? Although their not done.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 03:37, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Haha Awesome! I rather liked that zan. Sure I'll be willing to take it off of your hands. I'll give it to Ennaria and work it more into a hand to hand zanpakuto. lol <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">"Rin-Okumura  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  04:38, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Your GOING TO JAPAN!!! I HATE YOU!!! LOLS XD, but that was sad, killing of Zancrow was mean, give Mashima the complaints that everyone is firing off will ya! :D<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 07:10, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

true true indeed.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 07:51, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Hmmm after loking at both I would say that you should probably expand upn both making them more unique to the individual utilizing it. Both are pretty much carbon copies of the original (senbonsakura and zabimaru) with a few things changed. Instead look at at the character's personalities and then develop them more fitting that like you did with Sayaka. <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">"Rin-Okumura  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  01:34, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

Honestly if you like it then you dont have to change it. its your characters. thats pretty much the bottom line. <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">"Rin-Okumura  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  01:57, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

Yea that's much better pal. Makes it seem much more realistic and not like a copy at all. <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">"Rin-Okumura  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  04:19, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm im sorry pal. I'm currently trying to think of one for Raze cause I want to take him in a unique direction but I just dont know what it should be just yet. lol <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">"Rin-Okumura  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  06:40, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

Alright. I'll post when i finish a few edits. Nd you can create the clan member whenever you get time. <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">"Rin-Okumura  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  07:58, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

I know its none of my business but if I were you then I would have stood up to Sei more instead of changing the idea of my whole race as he said his is through jinzen then you could have reworded yours to have done the sme thereby going through the loophole. I dont think its fair that he is able to utilize something and then if anyone comes up with something that is remotely similar then it gets threatened by deletion. Thats just my view on it at least. <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">"Rin-Okumura  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  04:07, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

You dont gotta delete it. Its what you think. He can't get mad at you for your opinion. Its not directly affecting him in any way s o theres not anything he can really do to you fro sharing what you think other than saying that youre wrong but then thats his opinion. I personally agree with you cause Gai was actually thought up instead of just throwing on random abilities to make a "perfect zan". If you want hax look at his. Haha though wouldnt it be funny if someone made a zan that put interactions back together just like his takes them apart? lol. In fact I think you should join the GF and utilize one of our transformation stagers instead of using naturehold cause thats an obvious rip of fullbriing. Just look at the name and you can tell lol. But that's just me =P<font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">"Rin-Okumura  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  04:44, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

''Well we're doing this RP right now arent we? lol. This counts as well. And lucky! My bro is in japan and says itscool but the storms are terrible. Though if youre talking about the interaction zan i was gonna give it to raze cause I want him in a new direction but you can have it pal. Though im still trying to figure out what zan to guve him lol. and if you want to use the transformations you have my permission as i pretty much had a hand in most of them the GF uses lol <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">"Rin-Okumura  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  05:11, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Permission
You need permission from the technique's author, so you'll need to track down whoever made which technique on that page. --Seireitou-shishō (My True Identity 00:58, July 12, 2011 (UTC)
 * Sure, go ahead. --Seireitou-shishō [[File:Seireitou's signature picture.jpg]] (My True Identity 01:21, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

RP
Is the rp over? ~   Sentonara of  the Spirits  03:04, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

Ok it was a very good rp, hopefully that we can do other RP's in the future ~   Sentonara of  the Spirits   03:50, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

RE: Idea
I'm currently giving the article a read, so I can get a feel for what kind of powers she could have, thats why my response has been delayed. But sure, I'll try and post some ideas tomorrow, after I've mulled it over a bit. --- Illuminate Void (Talk) 04:35, July 12, 2011 (UTC)