User talk:Twilight Despair 5

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This message is for me as I am using my phone as my desktop is being used.--Twilight Despair 5 15:00, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

RE: Admins
Please create a normal type of Zanpakutou, the unique types were spammed recently and as such need a VERY good reason to be created, most times a "Unique" zanpakutou is a fancy Kido type and not a real unique new type of zanpakutou......just a word of thumb, just make a normal one, because also the unique types are really easy to godmod...which would get you into trouble again-- 楽しい Vui  (吐露) 15:52, September 6, 2010 (UTC)
 * It looked from your post on ten's page that you got in trouble before-- 楽しい Vui Kiryu's Eternal Eyes.png (吐露) 17:23, September 6, 2010 (UTC)
 * Goto http://www.nihongodict.com/ -- 楽しい Vui Kiryu's Eternal Eyes.png (吐露) 02:44, September 7, 2010 (UTC)

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okay which one of my articles do u want to use, and if u can give me some insight to ur storyline in which my characters will be used will be helpful. and your hollow/arrancar royal army sounds like a good idea......--Master of the Mangekyo Sharingan 16:11, September 7, 2010 (UTC)

the original ower of the articles that u have listed are no longer active on this wikia and such left most of his work to me, as u can see his work wasn't very good, the only reason i took them was to feature them as small time villans in my own story arcs, but if u think u can re-work them than it is fine by me, but before i give u permission to use them i would like to see some of your work as in a character or article u have made.......--Master of the Mangekyo Sharingan 16:26, September 7, 2010 (UTC)

it looks okay but it needs a lot of work and i suggest you have a look around at the site at some of the articles made by other people, so you can get the feel of how we make articles her, so my advice to you is to ee some articles and then used their styles tat first to make your own articles.......--Master of the Mangekyo Sharingan 14:50, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

hey twlight sorry i couldn't relpy u sooner i've been really busy with stuff, so anyways yeah i really like your Purinsu Kuchiki character good job on it, and also welcome to bff i know that a bit overdue but anyways hope u've been having fun i've been here for a while so anything u need let me know because im officially back to bff and will be as active as mich as i can, also if u ever wanna rp let me know......--Master of the Mangekyo Sharingan 15:26, October 21, 2010 (UTC)

I have a few that can fight againt him, but i think i would like to use my version of Zangetsu (Shadow Rage) in the rp, although if ur okay with, it let me know......--Master of the Mangekyo Sharingan 17:42, October 21, 2010 (UTC)

i would like to rp with you, i'll be using Zangetsu (Shadow Rage) if u don't mind, let me know.....--Master of the Mangekyo Sharingan 20:36, October 21, 2010 (UTC)

okay then since ur character is quite powerful then i'll use my most powerful guy against yours, although i have to say he is as strong as his former captain byakuya just to let you know, his stats are at 560 meaning he is at aizen level, if u don't have a problem fighting him then i am ready, have look for yourself Takashi Kosuda, tell me what you think and let me know.......--Master of the Mangekyo Sharingan 21:17, October 21, 2010 (UTC)

alright then lets start one right now, where do u want the location the battle to take place, in the soul sociey or in the human world, like karakura town, let me know.......--Master of the Mangekyo Sharingan 21:51, October 21, 2010 (UTC)

listen i am kinda busy with some other rp and stuff, but i will defiantly start the rp tomorrow since i can't write up anything new for our rp, I’ll work on it tonight and post it tomorrow, so it Takashi Kosuda vs Purinsu Kuchiki, a 6th division captain vs another 6th division captain, and also the story will take place when my char was still the captain of the sixth division and your kuchiki is a rouge criminal who left soul society and the kuchiki house, and my char has been sent to the human world to bring him back, so that’s pretty much the story of our rp in the beginning, so let me know what u think and sorry again for the inconvenience ........--Master of the Mangekyo Sharingan 22:27, October 21, 2010 (UTC)

okay sorry for the mistake and that is fine i'll post the link of the rp to u tommorow and we will begin once u get back from college, alright mate i'll see u tommorow then......--Master of the Mangekyo Sharingan 22:39, October 21, 2010 (UTC)

okay give me a few minutes as i st up the rp.....--Master of the Mangekyo Sharingan 16:57, October 22, 2010 (UTC)

i created the page and started the rp, so here it is Scenes from a Memory: The Battle For Pride, it ur turn.....--Master of the Mangekyo Sharingan 17:27, October 22, 2010 (UTC)

RE: Request
Um, a site wide canon was tried and it failed sadly, because it was hard to coordinate. 2nd your dont have to ask permission to make a new race, as long as it fits in the bleach universe and isnt copying another anime (ie: plagiarism). Now the kido pages are often made by user for organizing ideas, but ask head admin User:Seireitou about that because i dont know. And the power levels are set by the canon not use please look at the Bleach Fan Fiction Wikia Rules and Regulations - Seireitou Administration to see the set power levels. thank you-- 楽しい Vui  (吐露) 18:10, September 7, 2010 (UTC)

RE: Purinsu Kuchiki
Yeah sure I'll take a look at the page for ya. Give me a few minutes and I'll te'll ya what I think of it. Kenji Hiroshi 15:22, September 14, 2010 (UTC)


 * Okay, first off, the content is good. The appearance, personality and abilities section's are fiting for a Kuchiki and a Captain. I also liked the zanpakuto (the ability to disrupt a cero before it's even fired sounds handy to me). The only problem I can see is one you pointed out yourself and that's spelling. That's simple enough to fix, though, so don't worry too much. Just take your time and you'll improve (Trust me, my spelling was terrible when I started writing for Fanfiction.net) If you aren't good at pickin' out spelling on your own, then get someone (a friend) to do it for you. The only other thing I say you should get is an infobox template. Do you know how to put those in? If you've any questions, then ask away. If I can help, then I'll try. Kenji Hiroshi 15:36, September 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * Sure, I'll add the template for you and add the pic as well. For adding a picture to a template (let's use your character's appearance as an example) the code would be: Paste this into the space between the bracets File:Guy-1.jpg to add the picture into the template. Template's use the codes to add things (even bold text) but the codes can easily be found online are easy enough to add once you get the hang of things. Heck, I only started using templates about a week ago (if even) and had to learn all this stuff as well. The best advice I can give ya is to experiment with templates usin' the preview button and save it only when you're happy with it. Kenji Hiroshi 16:30, September 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * I'm workin' on the template and all now, so do you want me to fix up some of the spellin' as well? As for the Bankai, Immortal has a few translations in japanese that I found. You could have Fukyuu, Fumetsu, Senkofumetsu (this also means everlasting) or Senzaifuma. They all mean immortal, it's all about how you arrange the kanji. Here's the link to the translation site I use http://www.nihongodict.com/. Kenji Hiroshi 16:48, September 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * Well, is the template to your liking? For any of your future characters, simply copy and paste that in and edit it on the new article. And I did fix a few of the spelling's (I think I got about halfway down the powers and abilities section), but then I had a football match to watch (sorry about that). Oh yeah, If you've any questions pal, then ask away. I ain't no admin, but If I know what ya need, I'll try to help ya out. Kenji Hiroshi 15:33, September 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * Well, White Knight fits with the whole theme, especially the colour. You've used "White", "Pale" and "Ivory" in most of his zanpakuto abilities, so White Knight definitely fits. Btw, White Knight is Hakubanokishi in japanese, but that was the only translation I could get. And Sword of the King fits well, considering he's a noble (and a Kuchiki to boot). I couldn't get a translation for Sword of the King (sorry 'bout that). So the question if they go with the theme is yes they do. He's got some nice skills too. Good job, man. Kenji Hiroshi 16:00, September 16, 2010 (UTC)

Suzaku
You want me to make the character page, or just the surname? If it's a surname, then how about Takahiro? It means whidespread nobility and would fit with him bein' Purinsu's lieutenant. Kenji Hiroshi 16:19, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

Could you as I still only have computer use at college during week days but I have only two requirements please.

Just make his appearance more muscluar than Purinsu's but between height of 6 to 6:2 ft please hair color and eye color doesnt matter to me nor if he has any to no unique things like tattoos etc.

And make his zanapkuto a melee type but immense in size like Ichigo's sealed zanapkuto.

Now i got to get to class.Twilight Despair 5 16:26, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, I've created the page under the name Suzaku Takahiro (Just plain Suzaku was taken, sadly). I've added his appearance (couldn't find a pic, though), if you want to add to it or change it, it's up to you. It is your article. His sealed zanpakuto's been writin' up, again you can change it to fit your tastes. I'll leave you to fill out his personality and powers and abilities, though I took a little initiive with his abilities like Immense spiritual power (needed to explain why his zanpakuto's so huge) and enhanced strength (sayin' how easy he wields such a large sword). The template's also been added, but some info only you can add (blood group, partners, etc). Hope ya enjoy! Kenji Hiroshi 11:47, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Yup, you did good with the changes. His spiritual energy's more in line with a Lieutenant now anyway. Like the new design for his sealed zan as well. With a name like Guardian, I bet he's gonna be a defensive kinda fighter. Yeah, I'm lookin' forward to see how ya work him and Purinsu Kuchiki into your universe. Kenji Hiroshi 15:35, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Cool pic. And cool idea about the kingdom and protector zanpakuto. I'd never have though of that. I generally go for the whole "hit ya as hard as i can thing with a defensive ability if your in trouble" format when makin' a zanpakuto. You're characters are gonna be good. Can't say I've ever watched Inuyasha. I normally stick to the more well-known ones like Bleach, Naruto and Fairy Tail. You might wanna try Black Blood Brothers. Short, but good. Anyways, Suzaku's gonna have interestin' abilities to say the least. Can't wait to see how they turn out. Kenji Hiroshi 15:58, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

These two are startin' sound like the complete ideal Captain and Lieutenant combo. It's a cool idea and will make the characters that much better. Good thinkin' man. Kenji Hiroshi 16:45, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

New Kido Page
If were for makin' a Kido page, then I'll insist we both have our names on it. I can't take the full credit when the idea wasn't even my own. And there might be someone else who might want in on the idea, but I'll hafta ask him. He's been helpin' with my main characters. I have a few Kido spells on my User Page that I use in my stories, so that'll give us a good start and then whatever ones you can add. But I won't start it now until I've spoken to Raze. Is that okay? The more the merrier after all. Kenji Hiroshi 20:19, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, that's fine. But, I was wonderin' what your plan was for Hado 92, 'cause that spell has featured as an inportant part of one my characters, namely Kusaka Kori and his development, 'cause he recieved burn scars and almost died because of that spell durin' my first story arc while savin' my main character. Kenji Hiroshi 20:35, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Naw, the problem is that I'll hafta ask Head-Admin Sei if I could use that spell, 'cause I was usin' his Kido page at that point. There are plenty of pic's on the net that could be used as Kido (I know a few other anime, mainly Naruto) that we could use. I'll ask Sei if we can use that spell in our page 'cause it's featured in my story. Your other numbers are fine, btw. I have no argument with those, man. Kenji Hiroshi 20:50, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, well I spoke to Raze and he's up for the idea. If it's okay, I'll make the page in school tomorrow and throw all of our name's on it (give me somethin' to do besides school work) and add whatever canon spells we can along with the one's I've made. We can add others to our hearts are content after that. That okay with you? Oh yeah, you may wanna add a word or two to your user page, man. That way, your sig won't appear with a broken link. Oh yeah, something shorter I can call ya? Twilight Despair 5's a little long-winded. Kenji Hiroshi 21:28, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, but the wierd sacrificing Kido's all a part of it to and really show off a character's overall mastery. If we do make them, we'll put 'em in the forbidden section, and whoever uses 'em then will do it at their own discretion knowin' the risks. Besides, it ain't unheard of for a shinigami to regain their powers. Just look at Isshin Kurosaki. He lost 'em somehow and got 'em back again. So there's always work-arounds. The main problem I see is the incantation's. We can have some without, but it wouldn't look right havin' a kido page with amazin' spells but no incantations, right? Ah, we'll work somethin' out. Kenji Hiroshi 21:50, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Well the translation site I gave ya in an earlier message is the one I use and It's quite accurate. Whatever Kido I've made myself, the translations came off there. So the translations won't really be a problem. Anyways, I'm gonna call it a night man. I've got school in the mornin' unfortunately. I'll get the the basic layout of the page done tomorrow and we can tweek it and add to it when we feel the need. If ya want, have a look at the spells I've already made. You'll find 'em on my user page. Later! Kenji Hiroshi 22:01, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Well, the Kido page has been created. Here's the page: Kido (Kenji, TD5 & Raze). I'll work the unnamed spells into wherever they fit best, 'cause I plan to use a few of 'em in my stories. As for my own spells, they've been added, but i won't get the pic's up for a bit. I've also got a forbidden sealing spell to add, but again I'll do that later. Kenji Hiroshi 10:11, September 20, 2010 (UTC)

Cheers for that. I'm at home now anyway, so I'll go ahead and work those unnamed spells into the articles, 'cause most look like either bakudo or forbidden from my POV. There's a lot of other unnamed Kido on the normal Bleach Wiki right? If I find any we don't have, I'll work 'em in the best I can. I'll also add whatever pic's I can for the one's I've created. I've got good pic's for hado #20 and bakudo #32 spells, but I'll hafta look around for the others. If ya find any that might fit with the spell's I've made, then do us a favour and upload 'em, would ya? Two pair of eyes are better than one. I'll ask Raze to do the same. Kenji Hiroshi 15:12, September 20, 2010 (UTC)

Kido Page#2
Just read through Bakudo #10 man, and that's a cool idea. Nice pic to. Okay, about Hado 86. Yeah, readin' over it seems to be a seriosuly high leveled spell beyond the 80's. And I've noticed that it fits in well with Purinsu's character. Didn't you say he could use upwards of hado 96 or somethin'? With that in mind, I'll move it from #86 to 95 if it's okay with you. I'll ask Raze if there's any numbers he want's to reserve and tell 'em to ya. And cheers for the Imperial Wrath pic. Looks sweet man. I've left a message on my user page askin' for people for help with Kido pic's. Don't know how many will bother to respond, but hey, it's an idea and it could help. Kenji Hiroshi 15:18, September 21, 2010 (UTC)


 * And immensly powerful, one-hit Kido's are right up my street, but we'll hafta be realistic with those. I like the name, Scythe of the Goddess. Got a nice ring to it. What kinda effect, aside from the whole "I blow you into oblivion" thing did ya have in mind? Kenji Hiroshi 15:27, September 21, 2010 (UTC)
 * Okay, with that much power, the spell would be removed as soon as we posted it, dude. Any and all life in a certain area would be understandable and certainly enough to reduce the hollow royal family to smolderin' ash, but an entire dimension? That would be deemed amazingly and undeniably god-like in its power and wouldn't be allowed, dude. I've had experience with godmodding myself, 'cause I've been taken up on once or twice and that's what it would be deemed. It's a good idea, don't get me wrong, but i think we'd need to tone that one down a lot. I mean, if it could wipe out a dimension then every major bad guy would sacrifice their strongest minion and win easily. Kenji Hiroshi 15:54, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

RP
Naw I musta worded his Kido bit seriously wrong. Yoshiro can repel Hado of level 89, but he can't use them yet. His teacher, Ryouta Hachirou, is the Kido master of my story. But I'll do an RP with ya usin' Yoshiro if ya want, or we can wait until I reveal his Bakkōtō. Let me worry about how he fights, 'cause Yoshiro can take a battering, even from ex-Royal Guards. The guy's a monster when it comes to sheer stamina. Or we could do an RP when the two do a mission together and leave the fight until Yoshi develops a little more. Yoshiro leads his own Patrol Team, so it wouldn't be hard to incorperate that into the Td5 14:07, September 22, 2010 (UTC)set our RP to appear durin' Purinsu's past and Yoshiro's present. Would that be alright? Kenji Hiroshi 16:30, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah that work's for me. So, they gonna fight, or go on a mission together? I ain't fussy. I'll go with the flow. Oh yeah, and cheers for fixin' the wordin' on Hado 9. That was my one, and my bad I suppose. But what can ya do? If ya find a pic for it, then throw it in. I'll trust your judgement, man. Anyways, what ya wanna call this RP? I'm rubbish at namin' things, especially story pages or RP's. Mine normally involve somethin' to do with Clash! and that get's old in my opinion. Kenji Hiroshi 17:04, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

I have a plan to make this RP even better. But I'll need a while so I can introduce Yoshiro's Bakkōtō. With that boostin' his energy, he might be able to fight on par with a Bankai user for a little while at least. Give me until friday so I can introduce his Bakkōtō in-story, then we'll start it. That okay with you? And sorry for the late replies. Raze and I are doin' our RP.

Oh yeah, about the forbidden kido. With the levels of sacrifices and even the time needed, It could pass, but I'd still say lower it's overall strength and destructive power more. If an entire dimension were to suddenly go "boom" we'd have problems. All hollow within Hueco Mundo would disappear along with the Arrancar, which means who's left to fight with? That's the main problem that I can see.

I added the 5th ability to Purnisu's bankai what you think its white knight.Td5 14:07, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

I assume you mean the message about Purinsu's new bankai ability? Just sayin', but it's a little hard for me to see messages that ain't on my own talk page, man. Sorry man, but I didn't read the message because i didn't know it was there. I don't get notified unless the messages come to my own talk page. Anyway, forget about it. That's the White Knight ability, right? It sounds good and very handy if there were a few hundred hollow between you and and your goal. Overall, it's a good ability. I'm assuming this is his ultimate ability? Kenji Hiroshi 18:59, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

No worries. I nearly do it at times as well. I like the ability 'cause it ain't just a one-hit kill all type of thing. If need be, it can be used for defence and if used together with kido, you could make yourself some interestin' moves. Kenji Hiroshi 19:19, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

Just I dont know if Sword of the king should be a one hit or what yet.Td5 19:35, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

New Kido
I've got an idea for 2 new Kido spells, but the thing is I don't know whether one should be a Bakudo or a Hado, considerin' it's just a massive flash of pure white light. Any thoughts about its classification? It's called Assarishita (Light) and is a 70-80 level Kido because the flash is big and hard to avoid.

The other is definitely a Hado spell, 'cause it focuses lightning onto the user's hand (like the Chidori from Naruto). But this is where the uniqeness come's into play. Know the number 90 odd Bakudo spell that works in 3 parts? I was thinkin' that this lightning spell could work in the exact same way. #1) The user focuses lightning onto their hand to cause severe piercing and lightning damage to an opponent that numbs their body as well. #2) Again the user concentrates lightnin' onto their hand, but shot it in a thin, more concentrated form (similar to the Byakurai). Finally, number 3) Instead of the hand, the lightning is focused around their body and can act as form of defense as well as attack. Because of the complexity, it would obviously be a higher-up Kido, but it doesn't have the one-hit kill ability that the other higher-ups have, so I was gonna go more for a number between 60 and 70. What you think? Kenji Hiroshi 16:43, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

I like the way you think, pal. Anyway, the light kido blinds them in order to cause a diversion for other attacks. It has its advantages. As for the lightnin' one, number 50 sounds good, but wasn't that one of the one's you asked for? I'll make it number 51 instead. Now, the three forms. Should we do part 1 as hado 51, part 2 as number 52 etc, or just combine 'em into one spell? I think individually would be better. Now, we hit the snag. I got nothin' for an incantation right now. Any ideas? Kenji Hiroshi 20:37, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

???
Im confused on what your asking-- 楽しい Vui  (吐露) 02:52, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Purinsu
Okay pal, I've given Purinsu a full overlook, so here's the review :) Firstly, let me just say thanks for the pic, man. I'll definitely be usin' that one. Okay, Purinsu. I've already made comments about his appearance and personality in an earlier message, so I'll just go ahead and skip that bit and start right in on his powers and abilities. Our Kido page is definitely gonna come in handy for this guy and his Kido powers are obviously the most powerful aspect about him. He's got a kido-type zan and fantastic skill with kido to boot. As for the rest of his abilities, they all seem to be at the right level for a Shinigami captain (nice addition of the stats). His main skills, imo, are Flash Steps and Kido, and the two can make a potent combo. As for his zanpakuto, the new Bankai ability, Sword of the King fits into the theme seen in the rest. And it also sounds good. Tearin' apart the spiritual energy that makes up an object has to be a good addition to anyone's arsenal, right? Anyway, the only thing that need's attention now is spelling, buddy. But don't worry to much about it. Just take your time goin' through it.

Oh yeah, you said you were workin' on some new Kido? I've gotten the 3 lightnin' one's posted along with the flash of light if ya wanna take a look at 'em. Kenji Hiroshi 09:27, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

I've already read over the Kido, and I've gotta say that it would be a seriously annoyin' one to be prepearing for. With that many sacrifieces and time needed, you'd be seriosuly pissed off if someone interrupted ya. Yeah, and we can get this RP started now if ya want. Who you wanna fight though? Kenji or Yoshiro? I don't mind which. And what about the name? Kenji Hiroshi 14:05, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

How about this. The First Meeting: Yoshiro vs Purinsu. It's simple and shows what it's about. So you want Yoshiro to use his hollow powers? That won't be a problem, man. You wanna start off, or should I? Kenji Hiroshi 14:52, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Our RP
The First Meeting: Yoshiro vs Purinsu! has been made, man. Just go ahead and write what your character's doin' after my bit. Let's make this a good one, eh? Kenji Hiroshi 15:11, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, this is your first RP, so just let me tell ya something. You decide whatever Purinsu does and say. I control what my characters say, do think etc. You don't control what Yoshiro does. I take a turn of editing from my guy's point of view and you then do that with Puirnsu. When I finish my part, the next part would be seen from Purinsu's point of view. You'd say how he killed the Gillian and explain about that. Then I'd say how surprised my own guy's are, 'cause I know their character better than anyone. Just like you know Purinsu's. Kenji Hiroshi 15:33, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, it's your turn to post, man. Just keep your own parts about Purinsu and you'll do fine. Good luck. Kenji Hiroshi 15:40, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

It's your turn once again, man. You know what they say. You learn by doin', right? I didn't have the foggiest what I was doin' in my first RP either. Any questions, then ask away. Kenji Hiroshi 15:59, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

And you're up again, man. Kenji Hiroshi 16:15, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

And it's your turn again, man. Let's get this fight started, eh? Kenji Hiroshi 17:02, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Was it ok to use Giragira (Glare) on Yoshiro?Td5 17:25, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

And you're up, man and have a Cero to contend with. Kenji Hiroshi 17:26, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

And it's your turn again, man. Sorry man, but I've got a History essay I need to write for tomorrow (Curse school work). I might be on when I'm finsihed, or I might not be. I don't know yet. Kenji Hiroshi 18:01, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry TD5, but I won't be able to make a post until I get home. Im in school and these computer's are picky about which computer pages they let a person open. I can get into some, then there's some I can't. Our RP is just one of the one's I can't get into. Kenji Hiroshi 13:26, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

I know no way to bring Kenji into the RP, man, 'cause he's travellin' the Human World with his own allies. And it would seem kinda crazy just to have Kenji pop through a Garganta and say "Yo, Yoshiro, I see you're havin' a few problem's? Need a hand?" If you want, I could introduce either Ryouta Hachirou or Maki Zhijun. Ryouta's Yoshiro's mentor and Maki's an exile who's just as powerful as Ryouta. Kenji Hiroshi 13:39, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, but we'll fight a little between Yoshiro and Purinsu before I bring anyone else in. And if it's okay with you, I'll use Maki Zhijun, because I haven't had a lot of practice usin' him in RP's and would like to show off some more of his skills. It's your turn again, man, and sorry about not bein' able to post when I was in school. Kenji Hiroshi 15:32, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

I'll get postin' after I write this. The problem is, if you fight Takeshi, you may not get to fight Yoshiro again, 'cause the guy's Shikai transformation put's him in a state that allows him to fight at the level of a Bankai user without much trouble, although it is taxing. And he's got a split personality that come's out whenever he uses that ability, and he's as crazy and unpredictable as any Inner Hollow ever was. But, if you wanna fight him, it's entirely up to you, man. Kenji Hiroshi 15:37, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

And it is your turn again, man. You wanna fight Takeshi? Or should I bring Maki Zhijun into it a little later? I ain't fussed either way. Kenji Hiroshi 15:47, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, teachers are annoyin' at every level, whether it's school, university or college, so don't worry about it. But, we'll fight for a bit with Yoshiro and Purinsu, then I'll bring Takeshi into it when Yoshiro get's beaten, but it won't be easy. Yoshiro's endurance is one of his highest attribute's, so he can take quite a beatin'. This ain't the 1st Captain level opponent he's fought. Your up again, to, man. Kenji Hiroshi 16:06, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

A race, eh? No problem. Your up again, man. Kenji Hiroshi 18:21, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

And it is your turn once again, man. And no worries. We all gotta eat, don't we? Kenji Hiroshi 19:13, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

And you're up again, dude. Nice speech btw, I liked that. Kenji Hiroshi 19:46, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

Now this is gonna get interestin', but I've gotta run, man. Somethin important just came up, so I doubt I'll be on the rest of the night. I'll make a post again tomorrow when I'm at home, 'cause I can't do it when I'm stuck in school. Sorry about this, man. Kenji Hiroshi 20:06, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

It's your turn again, man. Oh and If your stuck about who's turn it is again, simply look at the bottom of the RP. It'll tell ya the last person to make an edit on the page, so you'll be fit to tell from that. Kenji Hiroshi 15:07, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

I see nothin' wrong with his Shunpo, 'cause you've only added what his title was before goin' into exile. And I also read the Utesmei ability, so we'll hafta do that soon. But I wouldn't mention Kido is his spiritual energy. Kido imo, belongs in the Kido section, man. Your up again btw. Kenji Hiroshi 15:46, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

Well man, that's what the admin's are for. They're only doin' their job, otherwise the entire site would go to hell in a hen basket. And I've just had a cool idea. How about you knock Yoshiro out in the next attack, and Takeshi steps in for a bit? Your talk about hate gave me a thought. If it's okay with you, I'd like to introduce Yoshiro's Inner Hollow, who takes control of Yoshiro's body. Let's face it, Inner Hollow's have more hate than anyone, right? Kenji Hiroshi 16:04, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

Well? Should I bring Yoshiro's hollow into the picture? Your up again, as well. Kenji Hiroshi 16:25, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

I've decided against usin' Yoshiro's Inner Hollow. What happen's next is up to you, man. You can fight Takeshi, or we can add a little more to finish it off and do one later if you want. Kenji Hiroshi 19:22, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

I like the idea of them sharin' their past and that can be done in this RP without makin' another, but Dastan won't be makin' an appearance in my stories for a long time, and when he does, it won't be Yoshiro who'll be fightin' him. That's a plot device I'm leavin' for Kenji, 'cause Kenji really goes to town on him for what he does, but I'll say no more about that. And RP's are all well and good, but I don't do joint works on my solo story. I simply use RP's to fill in my characters back stories to show what they got up to when I take a time skip. This one with Purinsu. if it's okay with you, could be put in when the focus of my story switch's from Yoshiro back to Kenji. Your character will appear in my storyline to a degree and will be added under Yoshiro's relationship's when the RP's finished if you want. Your up again, btw man. Kenji Hiroshi 19:50, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

It's your turn again, man. And we'll do another RP with these two, but not until Yoshiro achieves either his Bankai, or Resurccion. They'll both be able to kick back and really let loose then. This is entitled the First Meetin' after all, so why not have a second later on? Kenji Hiroshi 20:10, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

Your up man. Kenji Hiroshi 20:29, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, man you're clear to bring this RP to a close. Gotta admit, this was fun. Kenji Hiroshi 20:48, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

That was a nic endin', so good job man. Kenji Hiroshi 06:26, September 29, 2010 (UTC)

RE: Shared Kido
Now that was a nice Kido. I looked at it the minute I seen ya made an edit. Supreme Lightning. Cool name too. I've got a few ideas for new Kido, but there still that, ideas. I've got the basic image fleshed out, but the effects are another thing entirely. When I finish 'em, I'll post 'em and see what ya think, man. And I'm lookin' forward to seein' Purinsu's finished product, dude. Kenji Hiroshi 14:50, October 2, 2010 (UTC)

Well, Sei never goty 'round to replyin', so go ahead and use it. I ain't in worry. One spell I have got in mind is a mid-level fire spell, but I don't want it just to be "he waves his hand, fire forms and the enemy gets burned" kinda thing. I was wantin' a more unique kinda thing that could serve several different uses, but what those are is another thing. The second was a forbidden spell that uses the caster's own life energy as fuel, makin' it far more potent than other spells. And since it is life energy bein' used, not spiritual, it can get around barriers that stop spiritual energy. The downside would be, that if used to much, the caster kicks the bucket. Those are the main two anyway. And I'll go ahead and make the healin' section now, then. Kenji Hiroshi 15:03, October 2, 2010 (UTC)

Stats
Sure just tell me everything and I'll help you out that way things don't seem as bad. I used to have that same problem so I know how it feels to be scrutinized for your wrk. RazeOfLight 15:16, October 2, 2010 (UTC)

Well for starters you could tone down the intellect a bit. Those guys you compared him too have been there for ages. Even Kyoraku and Ukitake who were the first grarduates of the academy can't compare to yamamoto's intellect quite yet. And don't say he can take on 3 captains at once. There are lieutenants that are able to defeat a captain level opponent so that would def. seem a bit too strong. RazeOfLight 16:00, October 2, 2010 (UTC)

Well that is one way to go. But you could always have them contract a disease which gives them hollow based powers and develops into a hollow or have a hollow already sitting inside of them but not fully awakened yet RazeOfLight 13:58, October 3, 2010 (UTC)

that is a good concept but if you think about it. A split persona and an inner being are two different things. I like the idea you're going for but if you do it right you could have two inner hollows cause the personalities would be two different people. (On a side note: You don't have to use aizen for them to become vizards) RazeOfLight 14:08, October 3, 2010 (UTC)

Um what?
What are you talking about?-- 楽しい Vui  (吐露) 15:28, October 2, 2010 (UTC)
 * Please refrain from using MY images or any other that werent uploaded by you. that image is already being used by Harusame Kawahiru and i dont appreciate seeing its use on your kido page, I was the Anon that removed it sorry i didnt sign in but i was too pissed that this isnt the 1st time someone has stolen my images without asking. -- 楽しい Vui  Kiryu's Eternal Eyes.png (吐露) 19:56, October 7, 2010 (UTC)
 * You may have found it on google but it was already on the wikia if you haven noticed because you didnt upload it i did...thats all im saying. -- 楽しい Vui Kiryu's Eternal Eyes.png (吐露) 20:20, October 7, 2010 (UTC)
 * Nendai no Ankoku 

(Age of Darkness)  - sorry bout that-- 楽しい Vui  (吐露) 22:31, October 7, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry
I honest to god thought it was my friends and it needed some stuff removed but I'm sorry and I will not make that mistake Again Plz forgive me Grizzaka 15:30, October 2, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks for the other pic, man. As for the forbidden Kido, I like the idea. Yeah, but that spell wouldn't hafta be a forbidden one if they can survive it. Look at the Hado I made, Gekirin. A strong shinigami can survive it, so I'd say make it a high-level Hado spell. As for my own Kido, I was plannin' to have that as a storyline spell, 'cause one of the bad guys I'm workin' on can form a barrier that blocks spirit based attacks. Life energy is a different story, though. As for Purinsu, I'll check him tomorrow man, 'cause I am knackered. And those spells ya have foatin' about your head. Fire in whatever one's ya think are the best. I'll trust your judgement, 'cause the one's you've made so far are all cool and pretty badass. Still likin' that Supreme Lightnin' one. Forsee it becomin' Kenji's main Kido...:) Later dude! Kenji Hiroshi 21:28, October 2, 2010 (UTC)

New RP
Kenji; I know you have been busy with other RPs other users and with the new changes that are coming to BFF.

I was thinking that if you got any new or old character that I can rp with Purinsu just until I am get movtived I won't be able to create new characters or Kido or rp stories etc.

I have been working on Purinsu making his sound more realialistic for being a elite captain level shinigami. Mostly with Banaki explaining how each of his bankai enhances the techniques of his zanapkuto in size, form, ammount and increase to the strength of their spiritual power.Td5 03:02, October 6, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Dude
Naw, you haven't done anything to annoy me, man, I was just slow at gettin' round to ya and then forgot (sorry about that). I've been busy with RP's, especially with Raze and Hitsuke, my own articles and school stuff and just haven't gotten 'round to ya yet. I was usin' the old style of editin' and the wiki wouldn't let me edit pages until I changed to the more used style, and I'm still learnin' how to work it. Any time I clicked to leave a message, it loaded the screen, but wouldn't let me type. I've been spendin' my time today fixin' my prefrences to get 'round it and then decided to hell with it and just decided to roll with the new look. I did look over Purinsu though, and you've made his abilities sound better overall dude. Kenji Hiroshi 14:03, October 6, 2010 (UTC)

Well, you want to know how I think you can make Purinsu better? Remember the guy I made for you? Suzaku Takahiro. He is supposed to be Purinsu's partner, right? Why not do a few stories with those two in the mix? My problem is that Kenji and Yoshiro won't be meetin' again until a specific point in my story, even through RP's, but one of 'em bein' involved without the other is fine, man. Which one ya want me to use? Yoshiro or Kenji? Kenji Hiroshi 14:32, October 6, 2010 (UTC)

RP =)
I would be happy to do an RP with you. Since Purinsu is a capatain how about he fights Anna Rosenkrantz and Medaka Hagane to make it fair? RazeOfLight 02:16, October 19, 2010 (UTC)

Well if its Van you wish to fight. Please give me some time because I have to edit his abilities nd such still. We can start sometime tomorrow if you want. And present time is fine with me. RazeOfLight 02:39, October 19, 2010 (UTC)

Its fine. I enjoy the talking. I like that more than the fighting actually but still. I know what you mean. lol RazeOfLight 02:53, October 19, 2010 (UTC)

I dont mind grammar errorsbut at least make sure its understandable. Some points are kinda hard to comprehend but, nothing we cant work on together =) RazeOfLight 03:11, October 19, 2010 (UTC)

Feel free to start it up =) RazeOfLight 18:29, October 19, 2010 (UTC)

Oh yea sorry. I got sidetracked. Hmm Could you fight Akira instead? Van is in an RP at the moment. If thats a problem for you I could always make Van fight in two. RazeOfLight 00:36, October 20, 2010 (UTC)

Lol. You can be Aizen level. All that matters is how well you RP. Power isn't everything you know?. RazeOfLight 00:55, October 20, 2010 (UTC)

Alright. I understand why you want to do that. But that would be too much work for someone to follow. Try making your characters get stronger as time progresses. I men that way everyone sees the growth rate and learns more about the character as a person as time goes on insteadof immediately aving a powerful character. RazeOfLight 01:09, October 20, 2010 (UTC)

A Threat On The Horizon thats the RPRazeOfLight 01:14, October 20, 2010 (UTC)

You have the idea right but you messed up by starting to give my character actions and directing what he does. Take your turn again and just move your guy instead. And btw you dont have to say "this is where so and so enters" RazeOfLight 03:53, October 20, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry
Hey sorry. About that....here's to your turn. And btw. Akira is no pushover lol =) RazeOfLight 00:41, October 21, 2010 (UTC)

Akira no longer has a zanpakuto lol RazeOfLight 01:12, October 21, 2010 (UTC)

Don't worry about Akira. He has some special trick up his sleeve. I hope you arent going off of his current page because I'm pretty sure I said I was still editing abilities and such cause that stuf was back in academy days lol. RazeOfLight 02:40, October 21, 2010 (UTC)

oh no you misunderstand. he's an instructor/criminal at the academy now. its part of a story im writing now. just havent posted it yet RazeOfLight 03:17, October 21, 2010 (UTC)

He's on whatever side he feels is right or best serves his purpose. oh and he's a criminal but tolerated in order to teach the demons beneath the academy in me and my friends' bleach universe. RazeOfLight 04:18, October 21, 2010 (UTC)

your move. and yes it is literally a scratching attack lol RazeOfLight 04:55, October 21, 2010 (UTC)

You may want to read Akira's abilites in his transformation. Energy based attack are...*cough cough* lol I'm liking purinsu though. Oh btw you dont have to explain the atack in such details. That's what reading about the opponent is for =) Your turn. RazeOfLight 14:49, October 21, 2010 (UTC)

Haha go ahead and release. You haven't figured out that you're gonna need a lot more than powerful techniques to defeat Akira?. I'm still finishing up his transformation. I had class but I'm done for the day now. RazeOfLight 17:47, October 21, 2010 (UTC)

your turn. RazeOfLight 18:18, October 21, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry but...uh your blades wouldn't have hit Akira. His ability renders the technique useless as it is made of spiritual energy resulting in it being deflected away. You may want to re-do your move. Or I can ignore that factor and continue anyway haha. RazeOfLight 19:27, October 21, 2010 (UTC)

hahaha It isnt overpowered because this is one huge weakness with it that you've yet to use. your move RazeOfLight 19:52, October 21, 2010 (UTC)

Whoa whoa whoa whoa! Major flaws here...3 things. One) You must make some indication of you using a kido such as that in beforehand. Even if it is a master kido user. A kido of that level must have some indication of you preparing it beforehand especially in an RP with two people becasue then its just like I can say I set one up to nullify the kido you set up. Two) he knew how to break free from Akira's technique even though they never had any contact whatsoever? That's you granting your character omnipotence, which only admin characters can even come close to and still even then its after analysis. And three) autohitting? You said all of these things hit me which takes away my chance to dodge or even counter-attack. That is clearly godmodding. Either change what happened or this RP comes to an abrupt end. RazeOfLight 22:31, October 21, 2010 (UTC)

well your actions havent been rectified but I understand you point. we will just call this little rp here your victory. RazeOfLight 23:18, October 21, 2010 (UTC)

its fine. dont worry about it. just dont try things like that again. i understand you want to win but no one wants their main character to die. But sometimes you have to lose in order to become stronger. Everyone has a weakness. Akira just happens to be purinsu's. Look at it this way...If purinsu loses then he knows what he has to work on and can develop new techniques and become stronger. And if he wins it works the same way. No one ever really "loses" here because everyone grows stronger each tme they fight a new opponent. Don't think about it as you having to win or lose but more of a learning exprience each time otherwise you wont have as much fun. but it would still be your turn being trapped in the illusion. You could have purinsu struggle trying to break out cause the technique doesnt cause any physical harm but disorients the opponent. RazeOfLight 03:42, October 22, 2010 (UTC)

Cool man.
Don't worry about it anymore. If you just did that from the start the whole thing couldve been avoided. I like what you did now better anyway. Seems more likely to occur. See what I mean by a learning experience? =) Its fun when you realize what you have to chage. It makes you into a better RPer. But your move my friend Oh! btw...you don't have to give the translation of your moves. lolRazeOfLight 14:27, October 22, 2010 (UTC)

sorry i kinda dozed off then got on facebook. youre fine dont worry. but uh...its not gonna end as easily as you think. You aveto earn your victory. This way Purinsu learns new ways to fight instead of relying on techniques. <biggest hint EVER on how to fight Akira. lol RazeOfLight 17:57, October 22, 2010 (UTC)

Akira is all done (for the most part) so get a good look in now. Purinsu's fight isn't going to be an easy one my friend.RazeOfLight 19:13, October 22, 2010 (UTC)

I noticed. You set things up for a climatic battle. Time to pull out the dangerous stuff. lol your move.RazeOfLight 23:26, October 22, 2010 (UTC)

the claw is just a form of his hand. its not actually needed. Its like ichigo's cloth. he can still fight without it. but your move still then. lolRazeOfLight 01:41, October 23, 2010 (UTC)

energy moves are still a bad idea. and you just auto-hit which is a BIG no no. But ill allow it. Don't think Akira is such a push over. Time to let lose. Prepare. RazeOfLight 02:41, October 23, 2010 (UTC)

if you read akira...kido is useless too. RazeOfLight 03:44, October 23, 2010 (UTC)

You do realize you can be hit and not die right? I won't kill him. He would just be damaged, Trust me. You're gonna win. Even Ichigo got majorly damaged before winning his fights. Don't worry so much man lol. And just have him get hit by the attack. I'll set it up for your victory. I had it planned =) RazeOfLight 04:36, October 23, 2010 (UTC) lol your move my friend. Akira is down. Time for the reversal on your part. RazeOfLight 05:10, October 23, 2010 (UTC)
 * sigh* lol my mistake. Ok auto-hitting is when you take your turn and say your attack hits then thats godmodding in a sense. And since I guess you 're gonna be the winner of this fight I can tell you the simple weakness. I mead you already exploited it once....physical attacks. The ability is op cause he cant redirect elemental attacks. He's supposed to be van's opposite in a sense. And btw...time was slowed already when the sphere started forming, He wouldn;t have time to say the kido spell it was point blankk range since you came in for the attack. your turn still. RazeOfLight 04:20, October 23, 2010 (UTC)

oh its over for the most part. Imean do you have any other characters? we can do another one or we could work on a character for you together. i liked this one. feel free to do as you please. i mean they could always train together or something afterwards if you wantRazeOfLight 05:24, October 23, 2010 (UTC)

rp
i posted, so its ur turn on our rp......--Master of the Mangekyo Sharingan 21:49, October 23, 2010 (UTC)

sighs, this is really getting annoying, you cannot change the laws of soul society like that and the soul king does not directly interact with the soul society or even any shinigami, since no one has ever seen the soul king before, so it is highly unlikely that the soul king himself would give ur char that document, so like all shinigami except the members of the royal guard you must answer to the central 46 chambers since ur char is not a member of the zero division as such you must have gotten the orders from central 46 and not the soul king himself. also please change your post i don't mind your char being hesitant to return as it can be a good plot but u cannot cahnge an rp to suit ur need, this is a collaboration between two rpers, so once again i ask you change your post.......--Master of the Mangekyo Sharingan 16:12, October 24, 2010 (UTC)

i am sorry to hear that but you must change it, first of all it doesn't make sense, since your char is not a member of the royal guard and i am just assuming he is a regular shinigami, or even at this point in time a seated officer, you don't have to change his mission or even his reason for undertaking this mission, but you cannot show a document out of no where that states you can do anything and bypass the laws that was set by the soul society, please refer to the like below to get a better understyanding of the sou society and it's laws......http://bleach.wikia.com/wiki/Soul_Society#Laws....--Master of the Mangekyo Sharingan 16:31, October 24, 2010 (UTC)

twlight i have to say most of what ur saying in the rp doesn't make much sense, as i don't understand most of the stuff you wrote, it sounds all ginnerish to me, please revise and also break down your paragraphs into two instead of making one long paragraph, i will post once you've fixed your post......--Master of the Mangekyo Sharingan 21:03, October 24, 2010 (UTC)

they way he is acting maks him more of a rouge than a villian, and u can't say that ur char can't be defeated, i am just dragging out the rp, if i wanted i could finish the rp but i want to see more of ur rping skills, which by the way needs more improvement. because the whole soul king and document thing sounds very stupid to me, remeber the soul king has never given any orders to the soul society or even the central 46 chambers, but anyways i don't want to boter with he details and also u don't have to remind me everytime u make a post, i've been here on the wiki for the whole day, if u don't see me for a day or two then u can message me and if u hqve something important to discuss.......--Master of the Mangekyo Sharingan 21:57, October 24, 2010 (UTC)

okay we will finish the rp tomorrow.........--Master of the Mangekyo Sharingan 23:17, October 24, 2010 (UTC)

Review
You weren't that bad. You were just trying to fight immediately with overpowering. Don't do that. Try to have a story with it so the rp isnt some random fight. Dont try to just overpower the opponent. Cause power can be beaten by strategy. Just fight it out. Dont say "Purinsu's monsterous power broke the environment" instead use "Purinsu's energy began causing the environment to crumble." that way theres more room to increase and work with. And you dont haveto give the discription in english after the technique. Its fine just writing the name. that way the opponet hasto look at it in orderto figure out a way to counter. oh and dont speak as if reading a book. like you dont have to purinsu enters the area. say like purinsu walked in from around the corner. and you know about the godmodding. and dont be afraid of losing..that way you can have a training rp after that. and make more charactersthat way Purinsu has allies to work with and villians to fight. =)RazeOfLight 02:19, October 24, 2010 (UTC)

Review
Aloha, Despair. I was wondering if you would review my character, Shiki, for me. It'd be greatly appreciated. Please get back to me soon. Sincerely,  すじ  (talk to Joker!) 18:10, October 24, 2010 (UTC)
 * To answer your questions: 1 - He is not a Demon. He was created in a laberatory (Spelling?), so no.  That's also why he only has Transformations.  2 - I asked because I want opinions on my characters.  If you'd join us at http://narutofanon.chatang.com (The site's chat), we could communicate better.
 * Sincerely,  すじ  (talk to Joker!) 18:59, October 24, 2010 (UTC)

RE: Help requested
What can I do to help ya out? Kenji Hiroshi 08:16, October 28, 2010 (UTC)

Well, Yoshiro can use level 90 Kido, but he needs the incantation and it tires him out quite a bit. But moving on. You'll wanna be careful with a Zaraki-class character, dude. Especially his age. If he's a Captain and quite old, then that ain't a problem, but havin a youngster (say Academy age) bein' able to level a mountain with spiritual energy alone ain't gonna happen. And havin' no Kido skills or flash steps makes it hard to work, but it ain't impossible, and works quite well if ya can pull it off. The stats you mentioned would probably be abour right.

As for the creation zanpakuto, I've already read the post ya made on Raze's talk page. I have no problem with it, but others might. Unique zanpakuto were spammed recently, and have been clamped down on since then. Instead of a "Unique-type", I'd label it a Kido-type with creation powers. And you'd hafta explain it quite well, strengths weaknesses ect, to avoid it bein' labelled godmodding. As for the RP, ask me after we finish up the Gravity Force tourney, 'cause that starts tomorrow, and'll drain my time something serious. Kenji Hiroshi 12:50, October 30, 2010 (UTC)

Creation
Yes. A detailed explanation would be appreciated that way I can let you know if it would be passes or not or if theres things needing to be changed RazeOfLight 16:38, October 29, 2010 (UTC)

I like the concept. See you're learning how to find boundaries on how strong somethng should be. thats good. Hmm...all i ave to say is that you should make sure you spell check and work on the grammar of it before you ask Sei. Cause if he can't understand I dont think he would want to waste his time on it. RazeOfLight 17:28, October 29, 2010 (UTC)

Its not godmod at all..as long as you stae the boundaries of it cause notyhing can change everyone's reality. that would be interreferring with the senses of everyone ever! thats godmod..but you did pretty good. honestly i think you should give it to a low level character that way the boundary is relatively small cause their spiritual strength isnt that high. but as they fight and get stronger their range increases. but thats just my thought. RazeOfLight 04:55, October 30, 2010 (UTC)

RE: Important Info
Sure I'll look after your article's until you come back, man. That wouldn't be a problem. And I'm a little chuffed that you decided to let me look after them, to be honest. Nothin'll happen 'em, trust me on that. Anyway, have yourself a good break, and I'll talk to ya when ya get back. Kenji Hiroshi 19:01, November 5, 2010 (UTC)

Then let me wish you all the luck in the world, pal. You'll manage it, pal, don't worry. Kenji Hiroshi 19:12, November 5, 2010 (UTC)


 * Twilight, I was never the 'owner', dude. That is, and always will be you. All I did was look after 'em for you, so there's no need to request them back again lol. There yours, even if you did ask me to look after 'em. Hope the studyin' went well :) Kenji Hiroshi 09:20, November 10, 2010 (UTC)

It'll be a while before I'm free to do an RP, dude. I've got my alternate future arc started, a joint RP with Raze, Hitsuke and a few others and a tournament to finish off all goin' on. Sorry, but until that's finished and thing's calm down, I won't be startin' anythin' else 'cause I won't be fit to keep up. Kenji Hiroshi 18:31, November 15, 2010 (UTC)

It has been a while, dude. Raze might be free, but I've got two tourney matches still to do with Crimm and Grizz and a start to make on gen2 of the GF, not to mention an RP still on with Hitsuke that introduces my Espada and his fraccion. Sorry dude, but I'm bogged down here. How goes things with your characters anyhow? Kenji Hiroshi 18:26, December 8, 2010 (UTC)

Heh, you're tellin' me? Check out the GF Bleach Page and you'll see how many arcs we've still got to do and mine haven't even been added yet lol. You should consider makin' yourself a bad guy and havin' Purinsu appear in his own solo stories, dude. But your lucky if ya ask me. No college until the 19th? Nice! I don't get my holidays until the 22nd! Kenji Hiroshi 18:41, December 8, 2010 (UTC)

My tests aren't until January, so I've still got plenty of time. Yeah, coming up with original ideas are hard at times, especially with so much already done on this wiki. The only advice I can give is to think outside the box as much as possible. A view I quite like is that evil is just a point of view. If you can portray your bad guy as doing what he thinks is right, then that opens up a whole new scenario for ya to write from and run with. That way, you can show 'em as having a goal to work towards and not just "Haha. I'm a God and I'm going to destroy you all" kinda thing. Kenji Hiroshi 19:05, December 8, 2010 (UTC)

I don't mind, but you'll have to ask two others and get their okay as well because the final decision doesn't lie with me. That's the rule the original members agreed upon, so if they give ya the go ahead, then I have no problems. Kenji Hiroshi 19:22, December 8, 2010 (UTC)

=)
I don't mind...the more the merrier. you just need 3 votes to be in. so just ask anyone else from the GF and youre in i guess RazeOfLight 21:57, December 8, 2010 (UTC)

Hmmm
I will confer with the others and give you a response as soon as I do. In the meantime why dont you make more characters to show the others what you got in that brain of yours pal! =D RazeOfLight 00:21, December 10, 2010 (UTC)

RE: Helful items
I know your tryin' to help, but I'm rollin' with the three strongest characters I've got, buddy. Kenji's got the raw strength, Kusaka's got the defensive factor and Yoshiro's got that much raw endurance he'll take a few solid hits. And each of 'em have a Bankai and a little something extra. I know Purinsu's strong, but I'm fully aware of the limits and capabilities of my own characters, 'cause the three I'm using are the three I use the most in stories and RP's. Thanks for the offer though :) Kenji Hiroshi 07:32, December 10, 2010 (UTC)


 * I'm likin' Suzaku Takahiro so far, man. His skill in individual fields like swordsmanship and hakuda are high, but you've balanced him out with only expert-level Shunpo and Kido, and you've stated the strength of his spiritual pressure to be that of an average Captain, so he ain't OP or anything. I still remember the theme you mentioned a while back about his zanpakuto, so I've got a bit of a clue to what your aiming for with those. Hope it turns out well, buddy :) Kenji Hiroshi 17:00, December 10, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, but what you have in mind for a zanpakuto, then? It's a good thing to change ideas, but make sure you keep the idea. It might suit a character you make in the future, and it'll save ya havin' to make up a whole new one, ya know? Kenji Hiroshi 17:49, December 10, 2010 (UTC)

I like the overall idea, buddy and how you've made it different already. Can't wait to see what abilities this race can pull outta their sleeves, though. :) Nice so far! Kenji Hiroshi 14:02, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Trust me pal, the rookie-level characters are the most fun to use, because they develop slowly, but you get a lot more fun out of 'em when compared to the stronger guys. Sure, you need powerful folks like Purinsu, but the weak are just as important. Besides, when your usin' a weaker character, you can easily push 'em to the limit, use your own foresight and tactics to have 'em perform a little better. I'm lookin' forward to seein' what ya come up with, dude. Kenji Hiroshi 18:36, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

If its okay with you, I'll take whatever spells we have on the Kidō page I share with you and Raze and transfer 'em over. With all three of us in the Gravity Force, it isn't really needed now, is it? When I'm done, I'll ask an admin to delete it. welcome aboard, pal. Kenji Hiroshi 19:15, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Well, I've moved a few over already, but If you want the page to stay, then it can, dude :) I'm not fussed either way, really. So, how comes the ideas for your new low-tier character? Need a hand with anything? Kenji Hiroshi 19:40, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

We don't know where the fight'll take place. Probably some wasteland somewhere, and if it isn't, it will be when we're done lol. Besides, if we did that there wouldn't be a Karakura Town, 'cause the force of such a technique would blow the entire place to the moon lol. But the ideas a good one, If a little powerful (FF7m lifestream, right?), but Sei's character is a master in Kido, so he'd either avoid it or find the weakness either way. Kidō won't win this match, pal, especially with Saori there as well. We need to concentrate on findin' holes and weaknesses in Seireitou himself. Kenji Hiroshi 19:56, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

It's entirely up to you, pal. I'll transfer them across later, because I'm gonna finish up the article I'm editing and then I gotta run. See ya later, dude. Kenji Hiroshi 20:09, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Welcome!
Well. Sorry for the late reply and all but since I've got nowt against you sure you can have my vote to join the GF. (Actually now is a good time to join) I am the lightning, The rain transformed 12:23, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

First thing's first
Feel free to add yourself but after one thing. First try to make a lower tier chracter like a rookie. We all know anyone is capable of making a captain level opponent but it takes some restraint in order to make a rookie level character. If you need some sort of base point look at Haruki and Azami. RazeOfLight 16:57, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

As I said before making another character or two is a requirement I have of you. Once you do THEN you will be considered a true member. RazeOfLight 00:09, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Im liking it so far. Just make sure to add an info box and a good picture lol. Try to make an ally as well that way we can RP together with some rookies. See..when you start small you can build on them as you progress. Think about it..if ichigo started as strong as he is now how would he get stronger? a big enemy comes around and beats him there wouldnt be anything he could do except cry. You know what I mean? And when you make the ally try to avoid cliche abilities like the standard elements...try something that doesnt get much use like eath, wood, plants, bugs, acid, luck, etc, If you need help I can do that as well. And I respect you for doing that wuth the sei battle. Don't take it personally. Its just that as soon as the battle was declared lots of people wanted to join...seemed kind of suspicious. RazeOfLight 05:58, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Intro!
Hi! Lemme introduce myself...name's Lone...but pls call me Yuki! Well....Like you I'm a GF member.... Just wanted *hello and hi* and *I hope we could get to work together sometimes." heheh...if you need help..be sure to ask! Lone Black Garuga 06:43, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Hey Heres some Templates:

and for Kido....Im an expert (exaggerating) On Demonic Kido for demons only.... but I'll help on the normal kido Lone Black Garuga 07:14, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Well...Sure....I'd be using Margin Heart if you don't mind... Lone Black Garuga 07:41, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

RP
Challenging A Hollow...Its up and u could post whenever u want Lone Black Garuga 08:05, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Ur go! Lone Black Garuga 08:16, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Started it up for ya! lol....ur post Lone Black Garuga 08:34, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Ur go my friend...Lone Black Garuga 08:49, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Mhm...But I have yet to show my powers.... ur post Lone Black Garuga 09:08, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

^_^ ur go....For u not to say Margin is OP....His reiatsu is his greatest asset but it has its weakness....hint: Irony.... Lone Black Garuga 11:46, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Intro
I don't remember introducing myself lol. But forgive me if I have, I don't have such a good memory. But anyway, Hello! And you have my permission to join GF... though you don't need any more... but anyway... Do participate in the activities we have and any announcements and ideas can be redirected to the Gravity Force Talkpage. And I wish to work with you soon. Perhaps an RP? 暗い夜 DarkNight (Talk To Me!) 17:34, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

I added an infobox in for you. And I think Sora is pretty good so far. I smell an RP with him pretty soon =D 暗い夜 DarkNight (Talk To Me!) 04:00, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

Oh
Just because his name is sora doesnt mean it has to be sky. I mean I can name someone terra yet they could control water you know? Its all up to what you want. I mean ichigo doesnt have anything to do with moon or heaven fang. lol But yea..I know what you mean. This battle is turning out to look pretty grim but I figure it can only be loads of fun. At this point it'll be a miracle if we win now that Ten has joined. But her miracles happen all the time so its not that farfetched. =DRazeOfLight 20:19, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Auto-hit....^_^
Ur move Td5! Well uhmm...Just a note: We have this certain rule where we can't automatically hit an opponent unless the attack is 100% sure to hit.... Now my post is almost as same as yours but I'll give the choice whether to avoid it or not... Lone Black Garuga 23:21, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Well....Ok.. Ur go Td5-sama! Lone Black Garuga 23:58, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

....Margin won't easily fell on his knees just because of spiritual pressure.... well oh well.... ur post Lone Black Garuga 01:15, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

Its ok....ur go by the way Lone Black Garuga 02:14, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

^_^ ur go and....im serious right now... Lone Black Garuga 03:38, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

Oh well....Lets get this started...ur go Lone Black Garuga 04:09, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

Found it hilarious that i mistook my page to be yours...lol... ur go Lone Black Garuga 04:54, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

Your move and next time please if you plan something like a clone being the enemy for a long time tell in advance so I can make my character not look like a total fool cause it was hard making Purinsu sound like he knew or guess somthing was wrong about Margin but nice plot twist though.Td5 05:09, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

hehehehe...sorry....its your post Lone Black Garuga 05:21, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

^_^ ur post again Lone Black Garuga 05:41, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

Oh I could kill Haru? lol joke....ur go Lone Black Garuga 06:05, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

Not necessarily..... Main chars can be OP sometimes through training (Ichigo Kurosaki) and chars who are OP but there part in the story would be mentors or something and villanuous OP chars such as Aizen. ur go Lone Black Garuga 06:24, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

Your Post!
title says it all! Lone Black Garuga 06:46, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

Wow...Tnx... Its ur post Lone Black Garuga 07:07, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

Go! its ur go! go go go! Lone Black Garuga 07:25, December 14, 2010 (UTC)

About the Infobox
Well.. if you want to put the picture in the infobox, just put [ [ File :(Name of Image Here).(Extension here)|200px ] ] Without the spaces in the image part. 暗い夜 DarkNight (Talk To Me!) 03:07, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

RE:Permission
Well, first off, you don't need permission to make a strong character unless it will be used solely in your own works and with other people who are okay with it. Secondly, Yahweh is the character of User:Ten Tailed Fox, so you will need his permission. --Seireitou-shishō (My True Identity 21:50, December 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * Well, I run this place for the most part, mainly with Ten. We have a rather lax policy on godmodding. Basically, so long as you write in explanations for why they have so much power, and its excellent formating and grammar, no admin will give you a hard time about it. --Seireitou-shishō [[File:Seireitou's signature picture.jpg]] (My True Identity 22:07, December 15, 2010 (UTC)
 * It sounds like a good idea. --Seireitou-shishō [[File:Seireitou's signature picture.jpg]] (My True Identity 22:24, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Sora
Pretty good. See? That's how a character should start then build your way up as you RP with him and train. That way there is more working room you know? Cause if you start him off powerful then there isnt really much you can do to improve on their abilities except for add new ones. I cant wait to see what you have in store for his bankai. And did you make the ally like I asked of you? RazeOfLight 04:21, December 16, 2010 (UTC)

Yes I meant the second character. And thats good. I suppose you need a villian at aizen level. and look at it this way. Purinsu can train sora and the other character that way they can all fight against the aizen level fighter and have a fair chance. you know? and you can build them up as time goes on and make everyone even better =D RazeOfLight 04:53, December 16, 2010 (UTC)

sorry dont think im ignoring you. im just trying to edit van a bit. i will give you a full review after that. ok buddy? lol RazeOfLight 06:52, December 16, 2010 (UTC)

Yo
Sorry...thought it was still ur turn.... but ehehehhe sorry again...ur go Lone Black Garuga 00:16, December 16, 2010 (UTC)

Sora looks like a very great charecter, and in case I haven't got around to it yet, welcome to GF. User:Firegod00 (Say your prayers) 00:49, December 16, 2010 (UTC)

Oh crap!
Sorry Td5....Im really sorry... yeah ur right I'm kinda busy wid loads of works at hand..... I'll try posting. sorry againLone Black Garuga 07:05, December 16, 2010 (UTC)

Sora Hana
I'm likin' him, dude! You've balanced him, put in some good info regarding his personality and appearance, and have a good zanpakuto that can be improved as he speaks with his zanpakuto's spirit and as he trains. Imo, the zanpakuto is awesome (wind's one of my favorite elements). Here's an idea for you that could be used to make it better, dude. By manipulating the wind around him, he can increase his levels of speed to better surprise his enemies, or to create an area of air around him that prevents him from being effected by poisonous gas. Overall, I'm looking forward to see how you work him into your stories :) Kenji Hiroshi 19:01, December 16, 2010 (UTC)

Nice plot, dude. Sounds like they've got a hard fight ahead of 'em, since they'll basically be fighting a god lol. Lookin' forward to it, man! Kenji Hiroshi 20:06, December 16, 2010 (UTC)


 * Cheers, dude. I was tryin' to get away from the whole obsession with the law the Kuchiki Clan seems to have and show that there are some members who aren't as serious lol. He'll be used quite a bit throughout gen2 of my stories, so he'll have some important parts to play. When we finish with Sei's challenge, he'll hafta find Purinsu, though he won't be looking to bring him back because he doesn't really uphold the law that much lol :) Kenji Hiroshi 18:41, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

I like Purinsu, 'cause I've actually fought the guy in an RP :) If I can work it into my stories, then I'll try to use 'em dude. I have one question about 'em, though. Can a human who was once a Shinigami ever become one? Kenji Hiroshi 19:08, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

Fair enough, lol. There are a lot of hybrids on this site, though. Heck, I've got more than my fair share as well :) So they can exchange their immortality? Nice. That could come in handy in certain circumstances. Its a good idea and I'm likin' it so far. Can't wait to see what this race can do. Kenji Hiroshi 19:37, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

Helping to kill a god or two? Sure thing! Yoshiro, since he's already met Purinsu, could help out with that lol. Well, I've got Kensai Kuchiki finished for the most part, and I gotta say that I really like his zanpakuto. Anyways, I've gotta run here pal. Talk to ya later. Kenji Hiroshi 20:00, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

I'm game
Sure thing, but, uh can you start it please? I'm generally not the best at starting rp's. User:Firegod00 (Say your prayers) 23:16, December 16, 2010 (UTC)

I'll be using Hayashi Kagekyo, And as for the Chaos thing, even though I'm not a lawyer, the language is air-tight by my understanding. User:Firegod00 (Say your prayers) 23:24, December 16, 2010 (UTC)

The whole concept of something that could match God is kinda hard for me, so I'm not the best person to ask about that. I'm sorry that I can't be of more assistance. But, I will say I look forward to what you plan on doing with Chaos. User:Firegod00 (Say your prayers) 23:37, December 16, 2010 (UTC)

You're up, and welcome back. User:Firegod00 (Say your prayers) 02:13, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

your turn my friend, User:Firegod00 (Say your prayers) 02:31, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

Really Sorry
Hehehe I posted...Sorry...My internet is sooooo slow... well anyway...sorry again.. Lone Black Garuga 03:02, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry I keep taking so long. I had like 3 RP's to handle, and my Cerebral Palsy is slowing me down again. anywho, your post my friend. User:Firegod00 (Say your prayers) 03:06, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

I still apologize for my late posts....ur post Lone Black Garuga 03:40, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

Well...U only need to work in your grammar and spelling...but ^_^ that can be practiced.... But ur chars and ideas are all good! yep....but come on..my work aint that good....ur work..hmm.I'll rate it 7 of 10.. Lone Black Garuga 06:21, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

I rated you 7 cuz i didn't see most of your work, and hell yeah im sure your work in the future will be a BOMB! lol.... well ur good to go already! Lone Black Garuga 06:46, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

First off, thanks for the compliment. I find your work very original and well thought out, so I'd say 9.5/10 olny because of a few grammar issues, which even I am subject to at times. As a final note, I won't be home till sunday. Anywho, keep up the good work. User:Firegod00 (Say your prayers) 19:56, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

Chaos
Haha its done fine pal. RazeOfLight 21:11, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry to be the one to have to inform you about this buddy. But its impossible for you to actually join gravity force at this point. Cause youre actually always been a member since you got the three votes regardless of whether not i said anything. I just wanted to see what you were capable of. I find that people do really good work when they have a goal that they are working toward like the one I placed in front of you hahaha. I liked the abilities of Shino. Simple yet effective. You should made her a weaker member of the species you are building lke still discovering her abilities but its your characters you can do what you want lol. But yea who do you want me use in the RP of yours? RazeOfLight 04:52, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

Haru Nakamura
Ah, so we see Haru at last, eh? Apart from a few grammar errors, I'm likin' it dude. I gotta admit, this guy is either a brainbox no one can compare to, or he's just incredibly big-headed. It would take one of the two to call Aizen an idiot (loved that btw). Lookin' forward to see what ya do with his abilities and such, dude. Now, onto Shino, pal. You've gotten better at making weaker-tier characters, dude. Her skills are balanced and I like her zanpakuto and Kosumosukihaku abilities. Her appearance and personality had good info (a few mistakes, but your improving). My hats off to ya dude :) Good job! Kenji Hiroshi 18:57, December 18, 2010 (UTC)


 * It's been added, so I'll ask an admin to delete the old page. When we get this RP done with Sei and Ten, I'll happily do an RP with ya, dude :) I'm interested to see what this race can do to be honest :) Kenji Hiroshi 19:21, December 18, 2010 (UTC)


 * Well, Yoshiro'd be the best choice, considering he's been involved with Purinsu before, but don't worry. It's not like I'm gonna go all out with him or anything. We could have it as a training match if you'd like so she improves, ya know? I'll make it as fair as I can. As for the Sei and Ten RP, your guess is as good as mine lol. I think they're starting it up, but truth be told, I'm not really sure... Kenji Hiroshi 19:36, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

Do you use firefox? If you don't, I'd suggest it over internet explorer or Google chrome. Firefox has a spell check that comes in handy picking up mistakes; though the best cure is to do the writing in Microsoft word or something and get someone to read over it before you post it. My spelling sucked when I first started writing, but practice improved me, dude. Kenji Hiroshi 19:55, December 18, 2010 (UTC)