Thread:Silver-Haired Seireitou/@comment-5651818-20150511162209/@comment-3030647-20150512100139

While it might not be my place to interject...just to add onto what Sei is saying, I think you should focus a bit more on Gekkou as a person. His personality, his backstory, his current story, what his motivations are, etc. These things can be inspired from you or from anywhere, but they should be the thing you centralize everything else around. Race is something that you can deal with at a later point because, honestly speaking, circumventing race-exclusive abilities by being a Shinigami, Quincy or just an ordinary Soul is not impossible, as seen with several characters on the site.