Thread:Sagnik007/@comment-1399043-20120423112837

I left this same message on the talk page but i will leave it here as well.

This character needs major work, firstly this statement "Sagnik Ghosh is a member gotei 13 and is one of the most strongest shinigami ever." needs to go and be reworded as your trying to state that he is stronger than shinigami such as Yama-ji and Ichigo in the canon and even Seireitou Kawahiru, Kamui and Raian Getsueikirite in the fanon which I highly doubt....Secondly his spiritual pressure is still too high, he CANNOT possess a power that causes others to die.... next his shunpo usage, I highly doubt he is is faster than Yoruichi.... Now on to his Zanpakutō which simply looks like again a naruto themed Zan with Tensa Zangetsu elements and stating his bankai increases his power by 20 when you stated before that he can kill a vice captain level is not allowed, you also have some grammatical issues (which I cant talk as I make them too) but yours are way out of hand..... You have until next sunday to fix this and bring it up to the Bleach Fan Fiction Wiki:Manual of Style or it will be deleted.--"Hello, I'm the Doctor; Basically...... Run." (Appointments?) 11:27, April 23, 2012 (UTC)  