Thread:Dainemuri/@comment-25152698-20160506235937/@comment-25152698-20160507010615

The history for the most part was pretty generic (following what appears to be a very basic approach most beginners through with, with all the education and loss of parents and all) but quite honestly I thought it was alright, definitely good enough to get by me.

As for the Quincy section you're referring to, ehhh, I do feel like the timing is a bit off with it. I think if he arrived after the first invasion had ended, it would have been much better, because it seems like the guys who are escorting him to the Central 46 are holding Daisuke in greater importance than the actual invasion. A bit silly, but easily fixable; we saw Shunsui and Zaraki head over to the Central 46 after the first invasion, so I think if Daisuke went in sometime after them, it'd make it much better. Originally, I wasn't so sure they'd be so willing as to place their trust in someone who's been MIA for the past several hundreds of years, but, then again, they were shown to be overly desperate in the manga, to the point where they went to Aizen of all people for help. So yeah, I guess I'm alright with them turning to a Kido master for help as well based on that as support. (The meeting between Aizen and his character is a bit unnecessary imo; maybe the user's just an Aizen fan so he couldn't help including it).

The whole training constant training ordeal is overdone and rather nooby. But again, I'm going to cut him some slack because he's new, and quite honestly, I'm a sucker for users who devote much of their time to building a story with their characters instead of solely going all out on the abilities section.