Thread:Stylx/@comment-1493741-20131105142822/@comment-5020614-20140408232830

Saris, I just wanna talk about something about your edit, which was caused due to me not describing well enough, however, one of your paragraphs goes along the lines of this.

"Apparently, the inexperienced children pretending to be warriors ignored the arrogant Arrancar's words, and proceeded to inadvertently, and foolishly empower the beast rather than target its only definite weak spot."

Now, okay, both Kerri's and Haiiro's attacks didn't hit the weak point of Black, but the paragraph implies that they weren't even attempting to hit it's weak point, which wasn't my intention, as I wanted those attacks aimed at it's face and jaw mainly to hit Black in the mouth if it opened it's mouth.

I might be going too far into it, as it does sound like that paragraph came from Zetsubo's perspective but I want to point my intentions out in the case of it not being so.