Thread:BraveHeart70/@comment-26193148-20160719045217/@comment-3030647-20160719215342

I ain't Con but I like interfering in this sorta stuff. Dunno why.

Anyways, I'mma just outright say that most of Mikado's Zanjutsu is just fluff, and not actual substance. You go into depth about how he's "trimming the excess" and that the "blade is me" and etc, but there's no apparent visualization of how that's shown in his combat style. Even his mastery of "form" is left kinda barebones.

Your base is good, but you need to actually start from there and move in.