Thread:Zf6hellion/@comment-136273-20161211130904/@comment-136273-20161211185029

In the middle of an attack that shouldn't be even used in an RP? Yeah, pretty sure we can do better than that xD

It's fairly easy to fix, and wouldn't require much time either. Probably just a few post exchanges with several things in mind:
 * We both respect and cooperate with each other.
 * I only want Kimiko to gain something from the battle: confidence, experience, motivation. Whether she loses, wins, or the battle ends in a draw is fine as long as she does gain something valuable from the ordeal.
 * We revert at least to the immediate aftermath of Kimiko's final Bankai assault. Speaking of which...
 * We might keep the part where Shingen tricks Kimiko if you really want to. However, there're a few issues with that part:
 * How and when does the real Satou escape from within the giant Bankai cloud when the attack commences? There's no explanation provided.
 * Where and how does he hide from Kimiko in the aftermath? There's no explanation provided.
 * Where does all the tremendous Bankai mass go after mauling the Shadow Clone? It seems to just disappear.

We can work together to fix that part and provide the RP with proper closure, salvaging all the time and effort that went into it. What do you think?