Talk:King of Bone Hill

Corrections to Severino Corbusier
Whoa there: Severino is not ‘’that’’ talk-active. He really doesn’t speak a lot about things, and you put him off as quite arrogant. Instead of his first statement “Your attack is rather weak…”, he would say something more akin to “Such perfection in the preparation of your attack, yet so lacking in power.” A proper introduction would be “I am Severino Corbusier, Noveno Espada.” Also, Severino is more of a pacifist than most other arrancar we have seen: he would try to get them to return home, or else he would be forced to remove them by force. “If you value your lives, return to Soul Society; there is no reason for us to fight.”

I would assume that both shinigami would refuse to return home (how valiant), so Severino would note that Ren is already preparing for attack, but not say so out loud. When Ren refers to Severino’s rank in his cocky tone, Severino would probably take offense to that, so he would already be set to attack, too. If he was to say anything, it would be most like “One’s rank is not a meter to one’s power. I don’t need to rise any higher than number nine: I am already at the pinnacle of power.”

When Ren releases his copies, I would revise Severino’s comment to the plain word “Interesting.” When Severino next speaks, he would say, instead of “Very well…”, something more like “You leave me no choice.” But a cero would be most appropriate for an initial attack :). The quote that you copied from his page, it is inserted there somewhat randomly, to be honest. Severino simply has no reason to say that. --れび (talk to Lavi!) 21:59, 24 March 2009 (UTC)