Talk:Chiaroscuro: Trepidation

I'm Impressed
I've got to say that this roleplay impressed me, most roleplays on this site are boringly stale, uneventful and rather silly really. They're silly power-contests meant to decide which character has the bigger gun, there's very rarely any intrigue or story involved, additionally, the roleplayers are often so caught up in their own characters that they don't really care much for the other part.

This roleplay has nothing of the sort, its a surprisingly even and clever roleplay with excellent grammar, spelling and content. Its nice to see that the two of you seem to respect one another quite a bit, that makes for a much more dignified roleplay. I'm also impressed with the level of detail you include in the roleplay, in particular am I impressed with the level of detail put into the nightmare world produced by one of the characters.

Overall, the level of detail in this roleplay makes it very easy to immerse oneself in, I can clearly imagine the scenery and the happenings. I can also hear, feel and smell the environment it takes place in, that's a very good quality for a roleplay to have, because it makes it all the more enjoyable.