User talk:Njalm2

Archived
Alright, I've archived my talk page because it had gotten quite long. Njalm2 19:56, May 29, 2011 (UTC)

RE:Rutilus
Thank you, and would you mind checking out my diabolus, Irae, and tell me what you think of his introduction? It'd be greatly appreciated. (:


 * Of course you can join in! Like I said to Void, the more the merrier. (:  As long as you have a team of three characters (depending on their strength), you're good to go.  Now, if you could, please add your name to the participants section of the Gravity Force talk page, and I'll start up the official tourney page. Ciao~


 * Absolutely. Jut as long as they follow the rules, by all means, go for it. (:


 * Psh! If winning was based on stats, then most of my characters would win. =w=  But no, this is a fair tournament, and it will be based on actual skill (of the rp'er), rather than the statistics of a character.  That is just to limit the amount of god-like characters in this little shindig.

Sure, and for future reference, I'd rather that you post a new reply in your original section, as I find more than one section per user to be incredibly unorganized (blame my extraordinary ocd for that one). Please and thank you. (:
 * EDIT: Also, after examining what you said on Kotarō's talk page, I realized that I was basing stats from characters on here, not of the canon. As such, I've completely overhauled them and changed them.  If you could, please check them and see if they aren't extremely out of proportion. Thank you. (:


 * Hey, Njalm; I was wondering if you could review my character, Shiba Zhijun, and I was also wondering if I should make Naishou bisexual, seeing as his personality is largely based on myself, and I myself am bisexual. Please get back to me when you can. (:

RE: Clan Mortflèau
Thats a great idea, and makes quite a bit of sense. I've seen the article and its quite the piece of work. Hmm do you have any Mortleau characters already created? Oh and as you can see, I've updated the Diabolus a bit, added new information, some images for reference, etc. Hope you like the additions. --- Illuminate Void (Talk) 17:52, May 30, 2011 (UTC)

Lol
Yea I was thinking the same thing, that's why I got so firm about it intead of being my usual slackish self =P But yea...thanks I thought it would be a nice touch to add to my profile, just a little thing to throw people off a bit when they first see it. lol Raze Kucabara-Dono  Light  20:32, May 30, 2011 (UTC)

Hey N, could you take a look at my newest blogpost and let me know what you think of Van's future zanpakuto? Raze Kucabara-Dono  Light  22:43, May 31, 2011 (UTC)

Thank you good sir =D Raze Kucabara-Dono  Light  22:49, May 31, 2011 (UTC)

Your review, good sir.
Sorry about responding so late, I can get it to you tommorrow. I've had a lot to do. Anyway, see you later, Njalm. PersonaSuperiorDeus 04:01, May 31, 2011 (UTC)

And here it is, your review. I'll do it in the same style that I do Kou's reviews if that's okay with you. Alright, his intro, it's interesting, and sets the stage for him. Appearance, I ususally don't need to review this section, but I can say you've done a good job. Personality, he's a pacifist? Awesome. I support pacifism in real life- and I'm surprised in a good way that Hiroya doesn't like fighting, especially since this is a fanon about a shonen manga. He has a realistic personality, he sounds like someone I could meet in everyday life ^^. His history's good, his original life's pretty sad. His childhood, well, it makes one wonder if he was always a pacifist. I'd like to see those surpessed memories come out when he's fighting against someone at least once if he wasn't always strictly no-killing, but that's just me. The rest of his history's interesting, sorry for glossing over those parts. Alright, inventions. They're interesting, and well-written. I'll give you short opinions on some of this, since there's so much detail put into it and I need to leave in a minute, sorry. His Garment of Self-Restraint is good, it suits him perfectly. You're right, this is ruthless, though I'm basking in the awesomeness that Hiroya exudes. Powers and Abilities, Avian Transformation's nice, I didn't really expect it, and it's unique. His basic skills are well-thought out, and his Kido abilities are beyond epic, there's so much there, all I can say is that you've put one heck of a lot of thought into it, and it shows. Congrats for doing such a primo job. While I ususally don't like Kido, I can say that this is incredibly awesome and interesting. And that's all you're getting from me for his Kido, it's too hard to describe in words. Philosophy is good. He's really smart, powerful, and skilled with his sword, sorry for my bluntness. Zanpakuto, Shirohane, is good. I was going to name Gai's Kakusei "Kurohane", but seeing Hiroya put the kibosh on that. A blunt Zan, that's pretty unusual, but it's also pretty unique and cool. Anyway, his releases are well-written, his second Bankai is unique to me, but it's certainly an interesting concept. Summoned Creature is good, his weaknesses are plausible. Fighting style, I don't see that on many articles, and once again, you've done a good job. Anyway, his trivia is interesting. Sorry if this review wasn't any good, Njalm. Anyway, Dues' Verdict: 10/10. You've done a superb job here, Njalm, and that's an understatement. If you feel like, could you tell me what you think of Hizashi Yoshi, my main female and absolute favorite character, who's still a bit of a work in progress, please? PersonaSuperiorDeus 06:30, June 1, 2011 (UTC)

Hiroya
What want to do, is inevitably the natural progression of Hiroya's magic, but given that its YOU creating these abilities, I'm sure they'd be balanced and all. To be honest I'm doing the same thing with Kenshin. I have a few sword techniques that are inherently kido-based, since technique bypasses barriers (warping space), and the last three I'm working on, shed the physical aspect and start manipulating reality.

As for where to go with Hiroya, I can see him having techniques that actually go about disrupting or offering greater protection from reality warping abilities. In time Hiroya should be able to stomp your Jusanseiza character as his defenses go beyond the physical. For now since thats the concentration of his abilities, I'd go with that. Not sure how helpful this actually was but its all I have for now. I'll let you know when I have more ideas.

Mortfleau
Interesting concept, though I'm still working with the Epithet, since after some consideration, its like...a Diabolus isnt born knowing it, but they have to discover it, in a somewhat similar manner Shinigami go through to learn the name of their Zanpakutou. Only there isnt another entity. I'll have to reword how Epithet works but it will still be the same thing. But this does provide another group that the diabolus would be interested in, Dorothy herself too (whom is undergoing an..overhaul of sorts. Well more like clarification of abilities and the addition of spells in a similar manner to Hiroya. Again that character is a great source of inspiration for me, I can't tell you how awesome of a character he is).

Jusanseiza Mission
We shouldnt necessarily stick with it, I only mentioned it, because I thought it would be a cool idea to reintroduce them, and also as a means of providing an explanation for what happens to those supposedly "killed" in the spirit world. I figure it would open up a lot questions just by itself. But we should create some generic Diabolus. With the update on the Diabolus page, we can make use of the images, and create "template" monsters and the like. Shouldnt be too hard. Sort of like those Togabito or whatever they're called from the new bleach movie. --- Illuminate Void (Talk) 02:56, June 1, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, I'm on Chatango, just hit me up whenever. --- Illuminate Void (Talk) 18:27, June 1, 2011 (UTC)

Tsuchi & Miyata
Great idea, it'd be a great chance to use em again, and I'm itching to use Tsuchimikado in a battle and use his Kido in such crazy and innovative ways. Man that'd be fun. Alright we can do a team up, and the Jusanseiza would be interested in poking around to get intel on the tournament anyways so it works out. --- Illuminate Void (Talk) 15:20, June 2, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, I think I've got Tsuchimikado with most of his abilities out of the way. We should also figure out a team name, and go on from there.

Alright, if you dont mind, I'll write the entry for our team on the Tournament of Spirits Arc. Hmm and do you mind if I change the team name? Tsuchimikado would likely change it into something ridiculous like..."The Dynamic Duo" or "The League of Extrarodinary Gentlemen". --- Illuminate Void (Talk) 15:27, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Madame Amarantha
To be honest, I had already screened through her abilities long before you asked me for the review, so consider this an applaud on the work you've done for her. The way you've constructed her as both powerful and yet as a guide, like Urahara only human and not bat shit crazy, is very welcoming, and the fact that she is so set apart from anyone else on the wiki also makes the character just....well awesome. I love the way you've constructed her knowledge of magic, and I have to say I did hit a rut with both Tsuchimikado and Dorothy, but thanks to you, devising their particular specialities and unique magical abilities is MUCH easier now, so you have my eternal gratitude for that. Overall brillant character, but this is by no means the official review. --- Illuminate Void (Talk) 02:49, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

Epithet
I think its a bit odd, normally you add a lot more detail regarding transformations or other abilities, yet this one seems to be...lacking the usual spunk I see in your other works. Also, you never translated the meaning of his Epithet. But as you said this is all relatively new, so I assume things will be updated as new info becomes available right? And yes I suppose I agree that an Epithet would possibly be stronger, in line with the Segunda Etapa. At the moment Im currently editing Dorothy (on a seperate document, before I copy/paste it onto the editor), cleaning up grammer, refining abilities, etc. Though her magic section is a work in progress, but at least its in progress. To give an example of an Epithet name, here's Dorothy's: Marrubrum Sineluce Cael Gemma Amoenae (赤の海光のない空宝石を嫣然一笑逸品(Aka no umi kō no nai sora, hōseki o enzenisshou ippin); Latin and Japanese for "a sea of crimson, lightless sky, bewitching gem"). --- Illuminate Void (Talk) 21:55, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

Izanagi
Hmm, after reading his history, and pondering a bit more about his Zanpakutou, I think its possible that Iwanaga would have recruited him, and at the time, been the only one capable of withstanding the....deathly effects of his Zanpakutou. The way her spiritual energy is aligned makes her....at least in my opinion, and at the time largely immune to the effects of his Zanpakutou. It would be the first time in his life where someone near him didnt inexplicity drop and be torn apart by their own nightmares. If you want we could do a small RP regarding this. Just an idea. --- Illuminate Void (Talk) 01:10, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

Howdy
I did what? When did that happen? Thing is dude, I can barely get posting on anything at the minute. I'm in school atm, not home, so that's how I managed to get online in the first place. Still no word on that new router, either. My local schools ban webpages (mostly game sites, and the like), along with half the pages on the actual wiki. Its gotten so bad I can't access NF at all anymore in here >_< Our tourney match, along with the great majority of my current RP's and character articles, are inaccessible. I haven't even gotten to read your post, yet. Complete annoyance in my eyes. And I can't punch out that review I promised yet either, for the same reasons above. Yes, my school sucks :P Kenji-Taichō (Talk)  10:50, June 1, 2011 (UTC)


 * And I think that's the greatest understatement of the century :P It can be tolerated, to a degree at least, but a 10 hour ICT exam thrown into the mix with a psychology one later in the month doesn't help any >_< Kenji-Taichō (Talk)  11:28, June 1, 2011 (UTC)


 * I managed to get a little time on the computer without my router disconeccting me from the net. Sorry for the long wait, but its your turn again on the tourney match, pal. Very nicely done, btw :P Oh yeah, if my reply is slow, its my connection. Right now, its basically hanging on a cliff edge and could fall at any time :( Kenji-Taichō (Talk)  09:04, June 4, 2011 (UTC)


 * I don't mind, pal. We certainly need to do another RP at some point, 'cause this was too good to restrict to one :P I enjoyed that match very much; heck I enjoyed the entire tournament, so cheers for that, dude. I got to RP with Yuki, who I hadn't worked with in ages, and got to have a pop at Hiroya as well. You have got to be the most detailed person I've ever done an RP with, which made it all the better. Nicely done, Njalm. My hats off to ya, pal. Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  11:07, June 4, 2011 (UTC)


 * We'll need to do that, but can it wait until Monday or Tuesday of next week? My new router should be here by then, so I'll be fit to post without fear of my internet suddenly crashing on me or me driving my fist through the thing in frustration :P I've had to restart my com twice in the last hour just so I could keep posting on our tourney match and my other RP's. When I get my com sorted out, Void will be getting a message, but don't sell yourself short, pal. I've read quite a bit of The Swan and the Hunter and know your both pretty darn good. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  11:30, June 4, 2011 (UTC)

Busted lol. I don't even remember where I found the link to the anime database, but I've got a few pictures off it. The place where I got a picture of Hiei and decided to use his pics for Kentaro as well, not to mention Kenji's as well. But I never got Hentai, to be honest. Its pretty... well sick, to be blunt about the thing. You want a good site, then check out zerochan. Its pretty good, though unless you know the name of the person your looking for, its like looking for a needle in a very big haystack :P <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  16:48, June 4, 2011 (UTC)


 * I'd say very unique lol. Hence why I write about 90% of my own articles without any outside help. The rest is my girlfriend, whose eye for mistakes and nice little additives to an article is nothing short of amazing. The leg strap that holds Riki's zanpakutō in place is one such additive. Only problem I have with the anime database is that they usually only have one or two images of each person posted. A good tactic, if your looking more pictures, is to find out the name from the database and then check zerochan as well, 'cause it generally holds more to pick from. Though having less pictures does let you go pretty wild with their released states and appearance therein, though sometimes I feel a pictures good at sparking my creativity :P The database is good for getting their basic appearance, like hair color and such, though. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  17:15, June 4, 2011 (UTC)


 * I have another plan dude, 'cause that prize would offset the balance of Kenji's current skills and make him drastically overpowered at present; something I don't wanna happen because I'd lose interest in him as a character if I suddenly just piled on abilities. If its fine with you, the powers the sword has at present, namely the seperate source of spiritual energy, will be sealed by Hiroya's spell and a sheath of Kenji's own making after the tourney. That way, the only thing it does is create new techniques to suit the wielder, which would require a large amount of time to familiarize himself with the weapon in the first place. That would essentially make the weapon an extra sword that happens to be unbreakable until a certain amount of time passes, and since Kidō has been found to age during Hachigen's fight with Barragan, the seal would eventually erode with the passage of time; allowing Kenji to use its full power. If that sounds fine with you, I was wondering if you'd jump in whenever Kenji receives the weapon and describe the spell yourself? <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  18:01, June 4, 2011 (UTC)


 * I don't see why there'd be problems, though I'll get him to read the above messages and see what he thinks about it. The sword will remain, only its own spiritual energy will be sealed for a time in-story, with its full potential slowly revealed and brought out. We could even say that Zettaiteki wore away the spell over time as a counter measure. Anyways, I'll see what he says. P.S Cheers, btw :P <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  18:11, June 4, 2011 (UTC)


 * Kenji + Sacred Spell = Pain and hospitalization for a time after the tourney >_< That's fine with me, pal, and perfectly justified. Kenji's skill in Kidō, while impressive, is not but a candle compared to Hiroya's epic mastery :P Do what you need to pal, that is if Twilight's happy enough with the plan. If anything, Kenji's quite durable, though most of its stubbornness lol. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  18:32, June 4, 2011 (UTC)

Guess it'd be a dual flight, then. Kenji makes friends quickly; even more so if it happens to be a friendship forged in battle, and if anything, he'd feel he had to return the favor in some way for the times Hiroya has healed him; so he'd likely help if the winged folks decided to go after Hiroya. Besides, Kenji's fond of his costume, which Hiroya happened to fix up perfectly, which would be more than enough reason for Kenji to give him a hand. Wow, I just had a serious case of deja fu there. I hate it when that happens :P <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  18:52, June 4, 2011 (UTC)


 * Twilight's on board with the plan, though the basic catch is that Hiroya was taken to the tourney for a second reason beyond him being powerful enough to compete and possibly win: which is the simple reason his skills in Kidō are advanced enough for him to partially seal Zettaiteki if Twilights guy didn't have enough power left to do the sealing himself. If your okay with the reason, then we're good to go with the idea we talked about, pal. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  20:30, June 4, 2011 (UTC)


 * I choose to look at it in a way that he fears what Kenji may become lol. Makes me happier that way, though you do have a good point. Coincides with what I was hoping for though, so I'll look left and right with a bemused expression and pretend I didn't see it :P Anyways, I'll drop ya a line when the time comes, dude and watch you work your majic... literally. Cheers! <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  20:41, June 4, 2011 (UTC)


 * Lets all pretend I never saw that and that my last message to Twilight was perfectly justified >_< Cheers for the heads up, pal; though its his turn now :P <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  20:57, June 4, 2011 (UTC)


 * Your turn on the match to work your magic, pal. Oh yeah, Hiroya's gonna have another appearance in the closing scenes to receive some prizes as well. I've no idea what they are, though. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  22:16, June 4, 2011 (UTC)

Hope you'll enjoy it :P Anyway, I'll review 'em when my new router lands, (hopefully later today or tomorrow) 'cause this router of mine at the minute is nothing short of pathetic. The signals up and down like a hen pissing on snow; I could have a solid and stable looking signal one minute, then it suddenly dies and the web-pages I've got open close. Pretty annoying, considering it doesn't give you the choice to save your tabs and the work I've done. The changes I made to Ashni's hollow abilities took me three different attempts before I managed to post it :( <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  14:24, June 6, 2011 (UTC)

I do all my office works on the old laptop (doesn't have internet) 'cause it removes any temptation about jumping on the net for a while when I need to do work on Microsoft access, excel, word etc etc for school or something like that, ya know? When I'm reviewing I do it on the desktop and usually shrink two seperate web-pages down so both can sit on the screen beside each other; one the actual page and the other the talk page of the article I'm reviewing. Then I can scroll down and read through bits easier instead of remembering things and going back continually to see whether or not I remembered it right :P <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  16:35, June 6, 2011 (UTC)

Yo

 * Hey I am working on my Gotei 12 Sqaud captain. Minoru Tanaka I have a lot of grammer fixing but aside from that do you like his code of ethics?: The Twilight of Your Despair 22:13, June 1, 2011 (UTC)

Njalm2
Have I done something to offend you?: The Twilight of Your Despair 21:54, June 3, 2011 (UTC)

Just checking as for Minoru he isn't a mad scientist or a lazy genuis like Urahara but a typically scientist that "could" turn into a mad one. But he is kind of like a good middle version betweenn Mayuri and Kisuke.: The Twilight of Your Despair 22:06, June 3, 2011 (UTC)

Power Corruption Possession: It lacks an inner spirit but it is sentimental. Zettaiteki even though it is sentimental it really only true friend is to power. If is current master's mind isn't strong the sword other time and use will make the master feel invincible. The master will go an a rampage until the later are killed. The sword immensely overwhelming power is due to this, as it will control a weak master to fight. (Souzou clan member cannot be possessed by this effect.) As the King Kiyoshi has to protect all his species treasures and the ones that rightfully uses or have earned them.: The Twilight of Your Despair 20:56, June 4, 2011 (UTC)

Nice post and I responded the best I could. Now its your turn and the prize you get is one wish that Hiroya would want via Kaosu's powers. However, be realistic with it. And that isn't the only prize but the best one.: The Twilight of Your Despair 00:10, June 5, 2011 (UTC)

Hey its your turn and its about time I give you one of the prizes a wish from Kaosu as Kiyoshi is far too weak to grant wishes. However despite Kaosu being a neutral character neither good or evil he is a trickster like how Chaos which is his name in japanese form is unpreidactable and can be helpful or harmful. So whatever wish or request if you take one might come with a price or condition.: The Twilight of Your Despair 19:48, June 6, 2011 (UTC)

Its technically Kenji post but if you want to post as least to what Kaosu said thats fine. Also I thought a better ending than just sending them directly home as that would be lame. What they are going to have to do is something very slightly like how Ichigo went to the Soul Society for the first time when the they went through the Dangai.: The Twilight of Your Despair 20:57, June 6, 2011 (UTC)

Now we just have to wait on Kenji. Side note I was surprised at the wish you asked for after the Tournament when Hiroya gets to Karakura he will be greeted by Kaosu and the completely restored school. Also I would think that by xams we will go in the Gen3 so I was think in a sepearate none fighting rp that Kaosu and your Ruler of Hell in an avatar form have a very "small and brief talk" as to the future. After all the tournament and the school being restored his the most Kaosu would have done in thousands of years.: The Twilight of Your Despair 23:41, June 6, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I thought they could leave Hell in an avatar and be restricated to the power of a Captain but maybe I just miss read it. Beside only Arthal himself could harm Kaosu and vice vers, abiet I think neither can kill each other. Reason Arthal is a being that is part of Hell. Kaosu while a Kosumosukihaku 100 percent and isn't any part of any other species is also something else which at this time I will not say as that is a secret (and no he isn't "God" like the Catholic one.). But how about if not Arthal if you can think of a reason for him to talk to Kaosu than how about Hiroya have a short talk with him.: The Twilight of Your Despair 00:01, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

Omnipotent normally mean strongest in all of creation. I mean its your character but Kaosu is a reference and talking character only like yourself. Meaning other than referred to or is talking he doesn't get much spot light. Inaddition his Spiritual Power alone can destroy a planet not including his Philosophy powers which are even stronger. Now its not like Dragon Ball Z that with one single small energy blast he could destroy the Earth, but he has attacks, abilities, technique abiet not many but that can still achieve it. His greatest strength is his intellect. As he pre-dates time and has existenced till now he is one of the smartest being in all of creation abiet not even he is all knowing. I don't suspect that Kaosu could kill one Obimates but I don't think they could either for his Deity Aspect all always active that means Sekkiseki and Reason doesn't work on him, and as a Kosmosukihaku demons cannot touch him as his Spiritual Power would purify them. I don't think that it would do any realistic harm to them but against any other demon other than the four Obimates no Demon can harm him.: The Twilight of Your Despair 22:21, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

Yes your right about the Opimates and Kasou in the last message mostly. However one thing you got wrong. He can move freely but like the other first Kings of the other Ruling Species can only do some much as their powers are so great that it would easily harm the balance of the universe. And that is why at least the First Kings of Life, Destruction, and Creation aren't the Kings anymore. But Kaosu its not like I am going to go around and put him in every main event. Just the one I had with Kenji and this one was for special reason.: The Twilight of Your Despair 23:31, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

Hey this is another prize for you. I am making the Souzou Clan Royal Family and its current member are Kiyoshi, and Void has a character the oldest brother. I was think if you want to make one of his brothers even at a starting level than thats fine.: The Twilight of Your Despair 17:01, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

I wanted to let you know how they are going to leave that place. Inshort after they run to Kiyoshi and Masanori they will grab them and enter the portal and fly them through the Dangai.: The Twilight of Your Despair 23:01, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

Your turn as Masanori is to far away to save him and Kenji is too tired to help him. So logically Hiroya with his vast ability in Kido can if that is fine. Cause if not I will have Kaosu save him. And I really don't want to use him anymore than possible after he grants Kenji's wish he will leave.: The Twilight of Your Despair 19:34, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

Alejandro Nuevo
One review done and dusted, pal. You'll find it on his talk page. And sorry for the long delay in getting that punched out for ya. I didn't do it last night 'cause I was looking to get my RP's posted on, and in some cases, finished or close enough to finished. Its pretty long, and I included some of my own views on how certain powers could be expanded and such. Whether you wanna heed 'em or not, is entirely up to you :P Hope its to your liking, pal. Oh yeah, would you mind doing a full review of Ashni for me? I finished her off yesterday. I tend to struggle creating female characters and would like a second opinion, if you wouldn't mind. And since your not familiar with her racial standing, just focus on the Hollow side of that particular section if you do review her. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  10:22, June 5, 2011 (UTC)


 * Cheers, pal. I didn't create the race, though the similarities are quiet pronounced. My problem is that I've got a pretty big roster of characters, so there's always gonna be some sound or look rather similar in terms of race. It simply can't be helped, though it doesn't stop me trying :P Half the reason why I asked you to give me a review though, is because both you and Raze seem to have the beautiful habit of inspiring me with ideas once I have an idea of what it is I need to hon in on and change. I've already got a neat little idea for her Garganta, as well as the protective skin - which won't be there as a skin at all, but rather something else. I'll change up her zanpakutō a bit more as well, to avoid any similarities with Jr's (my new name for Twonjr lol). Cheers for pointing that out, btw, pal.


 * In fact, I've just had a brainwave for a nice release for her. Kinda fits in a contradicting kinda way... how does emotional control of others sound to you? Say if the foes angry, the power of her release manifests in such a way to weaken the opponent. Basically anger dulls their blade. On Alejandro's article you've said people draw the wrong conclusion about his armor being impenetrable. If her opponent thinks they can't hit her, for example, and show fear or hesitation as result, she receives further protective bonuses? It'll be a different mesh of different emotions, that are constantly changing and altering throughout a battle. Needs a lot of work I know, but what you think of the idea? <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  17:38, June 5, 2011 (UTC)


 * Hmmm, looking at it, that's a pretty nifty idea. It would sure as hell put an end to any clowning about :P Only problem is that I myself wouldn't be great at portraying a zanpakutō like that 'cause I hate most things related to science, meaning I never paid attention to it in class. I dropped the class like a bad habit the second I was fit to, so there'd be way too much research needed on my part to make it sound even anyway remotely correct and good; and if I ever had to explain it in an RP, I'd be up a well known creak without a paddle >_< I'm gonna hit the drawing board and see what I can come up with here. Basically, I'm trying to make something that isn't easily gotten around, and since it deals with emotions... I've got it. Okay, time to see how far I can take this :P <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  18:26, June 5, 2011 (UTC)


 * Thanks for the offer, pal, but I've got roughly half the zanpakutō written out and the rest with basic pointers done already. I would've messaged you last night that I had started it, though my router crapped out again when I tried to download new updates for the add-ons I use on Firefox. A simple download ended up taking me close to an hour to complete and my temper wasn't the best :P <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  14:06, June 6, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I saw Alejandro's changes. One thing I do ask is that you don't touch the zanpakuto, dude. Plot reasons and such for later on. When I've got more reliable computer access than my little cousins notepad, I'll add a little bit more to Yoshiaki's powers and such so its easier to interpret. But you've summed 'em up nicely, and added your own ideas as well that work; such as knowledge about Kitsui. I'd upgrade that to Team Sanretsu though, as Yoshiaki essentially trained them all at some point, though Kitsui more than anyone else. His knowledge regarding the Order as well would really only stretch to the current leadership, as he never actually visited Horiwari, though the knowledge is still there. Anyways, you done a good job with it :P There will eventually be more Yuengiri sealing techniques and methods posted, and as long as they aren't ones Kenji or Kyo develop independantly, Yoshiaki would've known them as well; so feel free to add them when that happens, dude. Anyways, any form of kido you want Yoshiaki to be more proficient in to help Alejandro out? Except his zanpakuto, the powers he demonstrates don't really impact anything anymore so I've got a degree of freedom in that respect; so I might as well angle his powers to help you out a little, pal. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  13:38, June 9, 2011 (UTC)


 * The hunchback was no influence, but now that you mention it, I can see where your coming from :P Yeah, its no secret to why Kitsui was created now. Averian simply wanted the Rei Furashuu. He's got enough time on his hands to do things like that, but Kitsui managed to get away before he gained the mastery Averian sought. Averian could never manage to kill Kusaka after all, so he needed another with the skill, and since he didn't know about Sojiro, and didn't have the means to kill Tadashi either, creating Kitsui seemed like a good idea to me :P Anyways, make whatever you need, pal. As I said, Yoshiaki himself plays little part in future events except as a reference point, so if you benefit from it, its all good in my mind. Create what ya need, dude. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  15:10, June 9, 2011 (UTC)


 * New routers here, and I'm in a much better mood :P Now all I have to do is see whether or not the thing disconnects me or not >_< Well, there's a reason Averian's been portrayed as quite weak so far. When he first appeared, it was Kenji and Van who faced him; and Averian himself wasn't at full power. He can siphon his own energy to his subordinates, weakening himself but strengthening them in the process. He had made the trip to the Human World at that time to recharge by killing a few Shinigami, but ran into two above what he was expecting and was forced to retreat. When he fought Kusaka the first time, he was trying to create Okita (Kusaka's inner being) to essentially enslave Kusaka's body and powers. Kusaka's will was a little stronger than Averian had anticipated, and both Tadashi and Shin happened to be there as well, along with Yukimura; so he was outnumbered as well. Kenji himself was floating around on the outskirts observing things as well, so he'd have had little choice but to retreat. The same thing was true for him when he faced Kusaka for the second time, since he had further empowered some of his subordinates, making him weaker when Kusaka arrived to defend Ino. And Kusaka at that time had learned his Bankai, which Averian wasn't expecting. His defeats have been of his own doing, through empowering others at his own expense and basic underestimation of his opponents. Hope that clears things up a little, though I get what your saying. It makes it look a little inconsistent I know, but there was a reason for it. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  10:01, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

=P
Just saw on Ken's talk page that you were referring him to make a pheromone control zanpakuto. I kinda already have that on Reiki already. But shhhhhhh! Don't tell Ken cause this'll mean that I will have a 1-up on him yet again..effectively equaling the score between us lol. <font color="#0255255" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#2550255" face="Tahoma">Light  19:34, June 5, 2011 (UTC)

Yea I just went and changed it, I meant pheromones but wound up putting hormones in the zanpakuto description as you could tell from the first sentence in the description. Oopsie. <font color="#0255255" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#2550255" face="Tahoma">Light  19:42, June 5, 2011 (UTC)

Hahaha! My theory worked like a charm =P Whenever I say anything about you on a talk page you come zooming in. I swear its more handy than the bat signal. lol. I know you aren't trying to be mean, thats why I said I had to factor in my laziness as well. haha. There are no ill will feelings here pal. Hmm I do pose a question however, with the quadrumvirant (Spell check please? lol)..ummm Q4 haha. Have you four realized that essentially most of you can be negated by the senior fighters of the GF? Like for instance most of the Q4 use illusions, elements, and kido. Those can all be displaced by Van (not trying to make him sound godly) but that's just his innate skills by themselves, then you have to factor in Kenji, Shade, and the others for being able to do the same and what do you get? Just 4 really old people lol. Hmm..I was wondering if you would perhaps delve into something a bit different. Let's say a control of a power that hasn't been utilized yet. That way its not normal enough to be countred easily but is still capable of being comabted against. Cause you said on the talk page of your group that the Q4 would be able to be comabated against by no less than 2 people. But just using yours as an example, your Q4 member wuld have a tough time against Van alone as he uses wind and illusions. Unless I misinterpreted this wrong, then Van could fight him alone....I don't like that...I want baddies that'll shred the universe to pieces you know? lol Cheers anyway pal =) <font color="#0255255" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#2550255" face="Tahoma">Light  23:20, June 11, 2011 (UTC)

Haha Ah. I see your point but a few quick errors...er...points =P Van's current form is as strong as someone already utilizing their shikai, his transformation puts him above Bankai strength....powerful but not withoutits drawbacks.

Also Van's crystal ability has been relegated to the point that even is he faced another crystal user (popping up mighty fast now I might add lol) he is capable of manipulating an opponent's crystal as if it were his own limbs so to speak (Taking Iwanaga into consideration). For isntance...party A utilized a crystal spear at Van, Van could stop its trajectory, re-mold it into a lets say a koala and launch it back at party A, without party A being able to re-gain control. Does that make sense? I'm not too good at explaining things when I just ate haha. But attacking him with a wooden sword? Wouldn't it just crystallize and thus make it pretty useless anyway? lol

Hmm you mentioned Anti-energy...well it was close, Van's abilities are more anti-powerful. Like one abiity grows more powerful the stronger a barrier is used against it. Though Jishaku would delegate Van to seemingly another plane as time, space, kido, elements, and other things like that practically become useless as they enter the time dilation field and slowly "evaporate" before even coming into contact with him. But you made a tiny error when you said the wind wouldn't be able to be crystallized. Well when utilizing your wind abilities you would have to manipulate the air currents otherwise it wouldnt be little more than you standing there flexing your mind :3 And if that's the case Van would be capable of crystallizng the Air currents as they do have mass, thus negating the wind manipulations as wind without air curents isn't capable of much if anything. Lol...felt like I just did an RP against him whew! I'm beat hahaha. But seriously I'm appreciating you explaining this to me so I can understand this all better. <font color="#0255255" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#2550255" face="Tahoma">Light  00:15, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Hey N, I would do another bat-signal but I figure this would be easier lol. You're pretty perceptive when it comes to a character's personality and their powers. So I was wondering if you could help me out. When using Rozeluxe, his prsonality seems to clash with his zanpakuto. It just doesn't "fit" with him you know? Any advice? <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Yuri <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  20:27, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

Funny thing is, I based him off my own persona..not how I viewed him but what my friends and even my psychology professor described me as. Hahaha...oh noes..I'm a cliche! T-T... Thanks though. I really do appreciate the help. Water huh? I try avoiding abilities I utilize so I don't have the same character running around you know? I like diversity. But I think I have an idea of what it should be...maybe not completely flushed out but it'll get there =D <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Yuri <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  02:14, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reason
Sorry for the late... wow, really late reply. I had alot of graduation parties and stuff, as well as other... more... complex things to deal with. Anyways, sure, you can use Reason. I mean, the Reason I made was based on what Aizen and Gin spoke about the dangai current train, so technically speaking, it would be considered Canon, not my work really. But anyways, yeah, you can use it for her. --Seireitou-shishō (My True Identity 01:10, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

Paradiso
Is Paradiso  the correct word for Paradise in Italian. As the sites I use aren't all that good, and I thought that Paradiso is the correct form. The Japenese translation for Heavenly Paradise World I think that is correct, but I am not sure. I will get Void later to check that one later as I Idk how he does it but I wish I knew the site(s) he uses.: The Twilight of Your Despair 22:49, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

RP
... and royally piss him off when he finds out about said deception. I like it, and because of Riki's "jump first ask questions later" attitude, he'd fall for it to. Plot-line, then. At the minute, my characters are trying to learn as much about Kōhai Tochi as they can, and since the Collective Vices have eyes and ears in a lot of places, rumors and tit-bits could easily be planted by them to make Riki and crew walk, as you said, into a trap. Hows that sound to you for basic background? <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  16:01, June 10, 2011 (UTC)


 * To be honest I don't see how he can be seen as a pervert. Just because he thinks Ashni's got a stunning body, doesn't make him one imo. I'd say he's got more of a crush :P Anyways, Rutilus isn't associated with them, but he might have heard of them and the realm itself. As I said, any information would help them out. With Riki chasing rumors and running into Ashni, he'd fall into the trap no problem. Right location, then. Human World sound good to you? It could be done in any city, town or even small village - as long as there is a collection of people to make a rumor believable. More exiles and shady folks in rural areas and cities as well. And since neither seem to care much about collateral damage, it wouldn't be a problem.


 * With the basic background and meeting done, whats the basic middle and end gonna be? I was thinking Riki picks up a little info about his enemies, maybe not even from Rutilus himself. Probably from one of the many drug dealers trying to pawn Reiyaku on behalf of the CV. That could even happen at the beginning, before Rutilus arrives on scene. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  16:29, June 10, 2011 (UTC)


 * Lol. So, its starts with Riki pounding some random drug dealer for info, while Rutilus is simply trying to make Riki a victim as any Diabolus would do. That sounds good enough to me, pal. Any names in mind, then? One thing I do suck at is naming RP's, and I'd rather not give one of my bouts some variation of "Clash!" like I used to :P <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  08:45, June 11, 2011 (UTC)


 * Right, here's the RP: A Diabolic Preparation. I started it off quite long to describe the area, why Riki was there and also how he got the info he needed. Your turn :P <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  09:50, June 11, 2011 (UTC)


 * Hey dude. Zaraikou's left a message on the Jūsanseiza talk page asking to be allowed to join. Raze directed him to you a while back (round the time Jet left) 'cause your the creator and you never got back to him. Now with Kai's nomination, Zairaikou's asking in as well. There's two positions left which are vacant, and the majority of us (Raze, Kou, Lone and probably others I don't know about) have worked with the guy. I don't see why not, though I'll leave it up to you, pal. Drop him a message whenever pal. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  14:48, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for that, pal. You do a good job with Rutilus as well, especially his dislike of people who mistreat animals. Don't like that much myself, to be honest. I've never really focused on hand-to-hand characters before now though, or ones who use so much emotion in their personalities. I'm normally a Zanjutsu man. And don't worry about it. Being the underdog has its own benefits, 'cause often the most desperate plans are the ones that make the thing more fun and enjoyable :P And I think I'm at the pinnacle of desperate right now. I've had practice with Kentaro and Riki before though, but never Ashni - so that should be interesting. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  19:51, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

Idea
I have been thinking ways to make more of a selection of characters. Well I think thinking the Bounts were kind of like Vampires to Humans and you, Void, Nexus made the Diabolus. Well what if we Void, you and myself make a Bleach version of the Fair Folk.: The Twilight of Your Despair 22:07, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

Its your turn and then after Kenji final post the tournament will be closed.: The Twilight of Your Despair 21:00, June 11, 2011 (UTC)

Hey I wanted to know if you like the tournament? And about your two wish via Kaosu. You could have an rp just wriiten by you to tell how he now see the new school, and the child that Kaosu made able to find a new home. And about that wish you could make the child a human with powers to have another developmental character. And in Aug the next tournement will start in Valhalla and this time I have new rules and better ways for winner judging.: The Twilight of Your Despair 22:40, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Hey can I ask you a question?: The Twilight of Your Despair 02:08, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

Final Fantasy
Q&A time again, eh? Okay, I'll do this interview in three parts :P

1) Some small parts have been influenced by FF, mainly 4, 9 and 10. I played those ones the most when I was younger and still do. Small things like Kenji's focus on freedom was mainly gotten from Cecil Harvey and Kain Highwind. Cecil in the beginning wanted to be free from the Dark Sword that was forced on him, while Kain wanted to free himself from under Cecil's shadow by finally beating him and gaining Rosa's affection. Kenji in the beginning wanted to gain power so he could escape from under the shadow of his Father (unknowingly at the time under amnesia and trying to assassinate his son). They'd be small influences though, 'cause I try to make my characters original and not carbon copies with slight changes, ya know? Kusaka's womanizing ways for example was picked up from Zidane Tribal, with the reference being furthered when he eventually settles down with Kireina (Zidane and Garnet). The FF references are there if you can pick 'em out, like you've seemed to do (not surprised at that), though the most are actually from my friends in RL. Kusaka's poetry, for example, is one example, as well as Kenji's habit of smoking a cigarette on the anniversary of his adoptive father's disappearance.

2) How I depict 'em appearance-wise? First thing I tend to do before making a new character is sort out their personality, believe it or not. After I get their individual traits in mind, I think about how I'd see them reacting and conversing with my other characters - usually through short stories no more than maybe a page on Word actually :P Kenji was easy to portray though, 'cause I see his character nearly every day in my friends. There's one guy in my group who's name is William Wallace - I kid you not - who fills the basic Scottish stereotype to a tee. He's loud, can handle his drink and doesn't listen to a damn thing any of us say; sames true for rules. He listens to them just so he can break them. Kenji's portrayal in RP's - the slouch, goofy expression and lazy persona - are gotten from him, so I only need to picture a friend to show it. Only problem was finding pictures that showed what I wanted to show. Kaien Shiba was the first to come to mind - as the profile pic shows, though I quickly rethought it and went with Kyoshiro Mibu and Demon Eyes Kyo from Samurai Deeper. Those two characters share the same body, but have completely different facial expressions and persona's that I could match to Kenji's. Kyo with the bottle in the bar, the smoking of the cigarette and the some of his combat skills.

2 Cont) As I said above, I try to picture how my new characters would be seen among my existing ones. Shinrei and Kenji are a good example and so is Kusaka and Shugo Sabishi. The first two had similar personalities due to the likeness of their souls even before they met one another, so naturally that'd make Shinrei even more like Kenji because of role models factors coming into play, as well as other psychological factors. Shugo mimics Kusaka's womanizing ways. Anyways, I try to picture them as part of the group before making them.

3) Favorite villain hands down would gotta be Jecht in FF10. I know he held off Sin and Yu Yevon for quite a bit, which arguably makes him a good guy simply stuck in the bad guy role; though I loved the way he was portrayed in that game, as well as the relationship he had with Tidus. A close second would probably be Sephiroth, though he's way too one dimensional and cliche. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  14:34, June 15, 2011 (UTC)


 * Oh, Seymour was in-depth all right, no argument here. Only problem I have with the guy is the amount of times you kill him only for him to come back bigger and badder than ever. When I killed the guy over Mount Gagazet I thought that was it and basically done a happy dance, only to find him again when Sin opened his gaping maw! I was more annoyed knowing I'd need to do it all again on my second playthrough >_< <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  14:49, June 15, 2011 (UTC)


 * True enough, but I ever much liked Seymour to start with :P When I first fought him and knocked out his Anima Seymour uses that line "That power that defeated Anima. It will be mine!" I looked at my little brother and said "I'm bloody sure your naw gettin' my Auron" and hit him with a very satisfying Hell Fire two or three turns later :P Shiva got KO'd with Oblivion, so it fell to Auron to do the business. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  15:15, June 15, 2011 (UTC)


 * Nope, the two reasons I don't like him are above. You fight him four times as a main boss - which is annoying in itself, and because he said he was gonna take my Auron. No one separates me from the badassery that is Auron. I liked using Seymour to fight that boss on the Mihein Highroad. Another reference. The mentor relationship between Kenji and Maki was originally inspired by Auron and Tidus. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  15:28, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Izanagi
Why am I not surprised that the section your asking for is the longest of the entire article? Oh yeah, probably because I've read it before :P Speaking of reviews, I still need to punch one out for Kou as well. I'll get started on those two soon, 'cause I'm touching up and adding some new info to Kenji's personality to flesh him out a little more. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  16:39, June 15, 2011 (UTC)


 * Your welcome, pal. But when alls said and done, Shinrei's gonna be one of, if not, my strongest character. The potentials there for great improvement, after all. He's revealed his Bankai and almost all his Shikai, yet he hasn't mastered the final release, nor has he conquered his Inner Hollow yet. And controlling his spiritual energy will be a war in and of itself; so when he's finished he may very well be stronger than Kenji is at his strongest level, which hasn't been reached yet either :P You'll see some major changes to a good number of my characters when I finally knock out the Liberation Saga at the end of Part II and get Part III underway.


 * Izanagi is powerful, there's no denying that. And he'd probably trounce Kenji should they face each other one-on-one, but as you said, Izanagi ain't the kind of foe you face alone. Same kinda deal with Averian - they're simply too powerful for your average run-of-the-mill individual to stand against without aid. Take Averian, he can battle the entire Ryū Guard single handedly without releasing, as well as the four Shiba siblings. I imagine Izanagi could do something similar as well.


 * You should include him in the battle for Hama Town. I know for a fact Van will be there, maybe with Kenji and a few more of my characters besides, so there'll be no shortage of characters to have a pop at the Zodiacs and their leaders :P <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  14:37, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

Njalm2
Hey I was wondering since Void is making Kiyoshi's oldest brother would you like to make on of his other older brothers? As how I used Hiroya in the tournament. You could make him a villian that hates the Royal Family.: The Twilight of Your Despair 23:39, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

Ok and about in appearance the only thing is all natural Kosumosukihaku or divine immortals I called them have pale skin and white blood. Other than that its fine. But you need to make him older than Kiyoshi as Kiyoshi is the youngest of four brothers. Also you can make whatever reason why he didn't take the trone after Voids character in their history. I am doing this to make like Royal Families and other families in this way instead of hundreds of clans that we may never finish or get to where they don't overlap we make several few special ones that we can use for as long as we want.: The Twilight of Your Despair 23:54, June 16, 2011 (UTC)