Thread:EmpheralBeauty/@comment-1399043-20130503195956/@comment-4326112-20130504050435

Thanks, Doc, I'll take it from here.

I'm the Admin that placed up that Warning Banner on your character Article. While still retaining a number of grammatical errors, this isn't how we create articles. Its not neat, its descriptions are bland or nondescript, and plainly looking a lot clunkier than it should.

If you need assistance as how to "fatten up" your article to make it look more substantial, or how to write out a decent backstory for a character, just inquire. But if writing in any aspect isn't your strong suit, I suggest you take down the article and come back when you've sharpened those skills necessary for creating a Character Article on BFF.