Talk:Masutā tatsumaki

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to be honest the structure of this article is not very good u need to put a lot more work and effort into it but since ur just got started i advise u to look at some of the better articles made by some of the older user and get an idea how a good organized character is made, u also need to work on ur personality, powers & abilities, as well as the zanpakuto section as not much information is given there and little is known about ur character. and also u need to put the avatar or pic of the character inside the infobox, im sorry to say this and since u wanted me to take a look at ur character, but at the moment it is not good at all but i know u can improve on the character and make it much beeter, so good luck and enjoy ur time here in bff........--Shadow Rage 10:48, July 2, 2010 (UTC)