Thread:Mangetsu20/@comment-25165500-20140728061059/@comment-4326112-20140729045634

They seem a bit...far-fetched to be legitimate races. I like how much thought and detail you placed into their abilities and the conception behind their creation. But the context of their individuality and how they attained these powers is kind of pushing the boundaries of what I can believe. If possible, please put further thought in reevulating these articles so that they can make a litlte more sense and possibly use less words