Thread:BraveHeart70/@comment-3403804-20140621021710/@comment-3403804-20140621125722

I see, Brave. Though I would've wished you went into more detail on exactly how you intended to accomplish this. What I want is a few concrete examples on what he would be capable of doing when he finally becomes a Grandmaster. His motivation is well and good, but what you actually need to consider if you want a Grandmaster, is how you can expand on Kido as a whole and make a form of it unique to Gekko himself. What kind of spells does he favor? What is his intent when casting a spell? These are questions that I want you to answer on his behalf.

Beyond that. I believe you're using the term "Lust" incorrectly here. Unless you mean to say that his clan was sexually interested in him for no other reason than his apparent Power. "Lusting" when used about a person, always refers to sexual desires regarding that individual. If Gekko is lusted after, they want to get in his pants, not use his power for their own ends. The correct term to use would be "Desire". Such as ""Hated for his weaknesses, yet desired for his strengths".