Thread:Upzilonz/@comment-4326112-20120923053753/@comment-4326112-20120923230115

Ummm...I honestly do not understand what the beef is between the two fighters, as well as why "Killing Intent" is being utilized as if it was as an Energy source rather than a "Mind-Set" as it states in Bleach itself.

Other than that, it was okay, except the dialogue wasn't in collescing with the action paragraphs unlike the other day when you were practic Roleplaying.