Thread:BraveHeart70/@comment-5778280-20130926004836/@comment-5651818-20130926022506

Okay; taking everything you said into account, yes our efforts where futile against Sei and Raian. It is mostly our fault because we should have shown a better example of teamwork and how to combine our strengths in order to take those two on.

What I think the problem was, was that we were both aiming to be the "Billy Badasses" of the entire collaboration by making our characters pull of some fancy smancy moves and come out with the victory over two veterans.

And, in regards to our chemistry, our first (which I personally wish to redo) Rp showed that our characters have a certain "pull" towards one another. Their own tendencies and quarks work well with one another and could use some definite refining. I'm working on my creativity, writing style, grammar, and RPing skills so we're not as far apart as you think. And in order for use to improve on our own weaknesses is to work together and familiarize ourselves with our own writing styles and each other's so that our connection as writers could grow.

Now, in regards to the collaboration, I'm willing and able when I'm not in school (or during the month of October; that's when I rest)