Thread:Upzilonz/@comment-4326112-20120922225500/@comment-4326112-20120923011633

[You seem to be doing a superb job so far for a first time demonstration! :) So far, your grammar format seems to be good and everything seems to be in sync as well as complimenting the last post I did. Let's keep going and see if there's anything I can note of importance...]

"NGHFRT?!" Ichigo blurted out, suddenly feeling the repulsive, possessed, plushie form of Kon crash into his face as he barely opened his pillow "shield" to see Rukia standing on his bed. Not expecting to have her throw the said Kon, Ichigo felt himself roll off his bed with a unexpected and irritated fall.

After ripping off Kon's body from his face, a comical exasperated look crossed his face as he shook Kon's hapless form in emphasis of his outrage, "What the Hell, Rukia?! Couldn't you at least knock on my door instead of sneak through my window?! Today's a Saturday, and I'll have you know I happen to cherish my sleep, seeing as I am among the living, IDIOT!"