Talk:Reopurotekutā Asashinburēdo

Character Review
This is a brief outline from what I've seen of this character so far:

1) He somehow has the skills to nearly assassinate Aizen...AIZEN! It doesn't help his case that he has a shotty past at best and somehow has Hollowfication powers along with his age and sketchy past, but the fact he was "Toying" with Aizen makes it appear like a Gary Stu: A OP character in other words.

2) The sentence structuring makes my brain spasm from how much lag I've had to read. Despite this being IN Manual Style this is not the best Article I've seen but one of the worst. Try to check your Spell Checker once in awhile...or all the time, please! >.<

3) The prof pic is...how should I put it...not well done. A simple camera pic of a hand drawn face *I'm not sure what I'm looking at* isn't exactly what we use for Character Mugshots on Articles XP

This Article is far from being perfect, but it fits the requirements of the Manual Style, so I'll drop the warning. For now...The Omniscent Shadow of the Moon (talk) 17:17, August 29, 2012 (UTC)