Thread:ShikonChireru/@comment-1493741-20140618210745/@comment-1493741-20140620222632

Alright, its looking better, mostly just grammatical stuff now and the appearance could use some better structure (Don't mix her various styles of appearance in together if they're going to be done as costumized sets, if she wears her hair one way whilst on official business, then describe it with her official business look and so on).

Ran through the Kaiju-Ningen some for alternate translations for stuff while I was at it:
 * Jūhei (獣兵, Beast Soldiers)
 * Jūsenken (獣戦剣, Beast Warrior Sword)
 * Jūkenkai (獣剣解, Beast-Sword Release)
 * Jūkenkaito (獣剣解達, Beast-Sword Release Mastery)
 * Shin Kaiju (真怪獣, True Monster)
 * Saibakei (再発形, Recurring Beast Form)
 * Shizenji (自然地, Natural Earth)
 * Kyoshinkū (巨真空, Great Vacuum)
 * Kyodai Kaiyō (巨大海洋, Vast Ocean)
 * Yōka (永火, The Eternal Fire)
 * Fukyūfū (不朽封, Indestructible Seal)
 * Kimyō (帰命, Returning Life)