Thread:Blankslate/@comment-5270101-20120712072408/@comment-4509522-20120712133716

Yeah I read it. And I have a gripe with it.

I understand that english isn't your native language and that you're still in the process of learning more about it. I won't call you out for that. What I WILL call this arc out for is how bloody confusing it is. I'm reading it, and I'm just like "What the hell did he just do that caused him to yell out in pain like that?" Or: "What is he doing right now?" And WHY do you have so many exclamation marks? Again, english isn't your best language, I understand that. But you REALLY need to get a better grasp on it if you want people to read this arc and knowing what's going on.