Talk:Gunner Sizaeon

Sento's Comments
All in all this character is coming along very nicely. Although the organization, some spelling, picture use and just between you and me. He kinda comes off as an over powered character, BUT if he is like your main character that you will use, like my Sentonara. Then those will almost fit the bill, although you should just tone down the power levels of him if you would want to put it this way. The other thing I have seen in some of your work Gunz, is the placement of the picture, you would want it in the info box not on the other side. Is that you don't know how to get the picture to bo on there and size it right or you have it there for another reason.

You almost got the right idea of creating a new article, but you just to have to go over the finer detials. Such as picture size and placement, that is the biggest thing I have seen about some of your work. If you want I could help you with the picture sizing and placement. Because on this page alone it seems to have some follow but, I go to read through it and it seems that a big then a small picture is messing with the paragrah organization. The best thing I could say is preview it before you pulish it or ask another user to look and see how it will go. Yes you could do it as well but, you will have the idea in your head of what should go where.

While a user just reading it might be a little confused with what goes with what. Although some of the good things about it is, that you have really cleaned up the gammer and such where it is very nice to read. But you want to have a balance of things take Roukotsu for example his powers alisted as such but how it is written it isn't to weak or over powered just inbetween. Gunner seems to be a bit over powered, while it isn't bad to have several attacks or powers. But to many of them and some of the reads will lose interest and go onto another article. So I hope I helped out and I didn't want to be mean, because we all have been in that begin stages, but if you take alot of the feedback on the works you get. Then when you makes those changes it will make the reader want to see more of your work.  ~   Sentonara of  the Spirits   02:35, July 15, 2011 (UTC)