Thread:Mangetsu20/@comment-4280197-20131219032250/@comment-4326112-20131219045122

1) Your Articles are edited in a way that looks sloppy and amateurish. Try looking at some of the other Character Articles that have a more voluminous visage. They usually have a better example of how to arrange your article in such a manner. If you haven't looked, however, please check the Manual of Style for which all articles are created by.

2) Creating characters on the pretense they are "so powerful they rarely use Zanpakuto" is not something you list on the initial introductory paragraph of your Article. This is viewed as both pretentious and egotistic. Your first Articles shouldn't be about powerful characters. They should be more about developed and believable characters. This will help you build up to those kinds of characters so that they aren't assumed and most likely turn out to be Gary Stus and Mary Sues.