Talk:Yoshitsugu Mori

Yo. You asked and you shall receive ^_^
 * The history has potential but its very vague. Try being more descriptive. The grammar isn't to strong either, try fixing up any small errors that just don't sound right. The Zanpakutō format could be a little better done, try to avoid using the Underline tool because it just makes articles look fairly sloppy. Also, separate the appearance and personality section. In terms of the character, he is fairly under developed. If I had to give you my honest opinion, its that the article needs a lot of work--Hohenheim of Light 04:10, April 10, 2011 (UTC)