Thread:Silver-Haired Seireitou/@comment-4630969-20120603060952/@comment-2089817-20120603163407

It looks good to me. Grammar seems consistent, you're keeping the personality tones of the characters well, and overall, it is pretty good work. One thing I'd recommend is, maybe you may want to extend this RP. What I mean is, use this RP as a launchpad to start an entire series of RPs, or rather, an entire story.