Talk:Bleach: The Journey of Kenji Ryuun

This is certainly looking like an interesting read, however there are a few notable problems.

The main thing is, if a character is panting, it isn't appropriate to implement *pant, pant* in his sentances. Simply put down: "In so and so place at so and so time, a young boy was running rapidly through the woods, panting heavily as he did so." Blankslate 02:06, April 11, 2012 (UTC)