Talk:Eliskuya

I bet you white wash this.
Congradulations. You've compiled a messay, gramatically incorrect pile of useless garbage and stuck a label reading "character" on it. There is basically nothing written on the character page besides title headings, sub-headings, and quotes I'm sure you've copy and pasted from somewhere else. Instead of writing a personality for your character, instead, you linked us to some schmuck from Power Rangers, a marvel alien symbiote, and an alien demon from samurai jack. Not only do these personalities contradict with each other (seeing how carnage is homicidal and insane, Lord Zed is just stupid, and Aku is smarter than most may think) it looks more like you just linked some characters you liked to the page. Oh, what else? If he was first seat of the second division, wouldn't that mean replacing his ahem "girlfriend" Soi Fon as captain? Not to mention that you added the incorrect "First Seat" (dumbass) to the Official Bleach Fan Fiction Gotei 13 section.

Oh, wait, there's more! Your character somehow has relations with people from outside the Bleach Universe, hell, even from outside the Manga/Anime universe! Beth was his ex. I think that speaks for itself. You also took the liberty of renaming on of the Captains in Bleach, Shinsui Kyoraku as quote - "Renton Michael Sr. Thurwolf". Wow. His family includes characters from Shaman King, Total Drama Island, Mai-HiME, Ace Attorney (wtf?), and one even links to an assortment of pictures. You've created a family that's more dysfunctional and contradictory than mine. I'm impressed (sarcasm, in case you're too stupid to understand).

So, let's recap shall we? You neglected the first thing we learn about grammer, that every sentence begins with a capital letter, you've created a multi-universal family of teens, samurai, shinigami, and Shamans, and did the cliche dull thing of making an arrancar-shinigami hybrid (soooooo original). Oh, and I forgot one thing. His age. Yes, it looks like his current age is a mixture of every age. I think I'm finished with my rant.

--Watchamacalit =D 02:15, December 13, 2009 (UTC)