Talk:Margin Heart

Hmm..
well, I read almost all of it, (it was a bit too much too read). Looking over it all, I saw things like some grammar errors, misspellings, and typically wouldn't you use past tense for an article? I think I saw some things written in present tense but, I'm not sure if that's a fault or not. And in terms of his power, I see nothing wrong, but "immeasurable spirit power" is a bit much I think. just my opinion though. --Dusk-sama 18:49, May 2, 2010 (UTC)