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Its not up to me
Its not up to just me. You will have to ak everyon what they think. If you get a majority vote then yea, but if not well...that's the way it has to be. Good luck pal. Raze Kucabara-Dono  Light  01:50, May 13, 2011 (UTC)

RE: Overture of the King
Sei and I have two different interpertations, and its fine that we do. In my story, Ninigi will be the Soul King, since my stories will draw heavily from Japanese mythology, and I'll be drawing connections between the two. Its obvious that Sei's original conception has changed given the new rules they've created, how much I'm not sure, and to what changes he'll make to his own work is also up in the air. Whether my creation will be independent or accepted as a whole is unclear, and frankly beyond my concern. So as long as I can create it, thats fine by me.

My soul king will inherently be different than Sei's for many reasons, and as for Aizen hating him? Even if he is supposedly one of smartest characters in the series, there are many things that even he is unaware of, and his own interpertations can be just as flawed as anyone else. For simplicity sake, the Soul King in my story has "transcended" in a similar manner that Aizen wanted to, but on a completely different scale. Pronouns denoting gender, are irrelevant, and he's become closer to an "it" than an actual person. What "it" is remains to be seen. --- Illuminate Void (Talk) 21:31, May 13, 2011 (UTC)

Kamui vs Masanori
Sure, perhaps sometime this weekend? I've gotten a real limitation on my computer usage time due to my laptop being in the shop. I'm stuck using my home computer, which I can't really use after a specific time. --Seireitou-shishō (My True Identity 00:17, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

Sure
Sure! But who'd u wanna fight? Lone Black Garuga 02:16, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

uhmmm.... Its either Ciel or Hotaru.... But oh well... lets use Hotaru on this one ^_^ Lone Black Garuga 02:25, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

U might wanna start this one pls ^_^ Lone Black Garuga 02:35, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

Ur go TD-kun! Lone Black Garuga 03:27, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

I don't really know his weakness...but i guess u can look at his Konton ga kaijū ^_^ Lone Black Garuga 04:05, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

RE: Masanori Kawahiru
With whom, and for what reason exactly? Njalm2 18:52, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

Well, Izanagi is impossible given the fact that if they fought Masanori likely wouldn't be alive to face Kamui at all - Hiroya will be doing alot of other things so I don't really know what that leaves us with :) Njalm2 19:12, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

Than I guess we cannot rp. But while Masanori is only standard Aizen class without Zanpakuto release he can still use a complete Philosophy that even without his sword he would end up stronger than Aizen's fourth form without releasing his shikai, (abeit only for a few minutes.): The Twilight of Your Despair 19:33, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

Well Masanori doesnt appear to be finished, and there's a lot of formatting/grammatical errors you should correct on your article. You also need to add an introduction and expand on his appearance, personality and powers and abilities. Explain them in detail, dont just list their effect. I've told you before, I wont RP with you until you're work has improved. Simple things like that can easily be fixed with barely any effort. If you wont bother putting at least that much effort in, why should I go out of my way to do so in any RP? Trying to RP with an incomplete character shows otherwise. --- Illuminate Void (Talk) 21:30, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm
I would but all my most powerful characters are caught up in RPs already. Sorry pal. And well, I think you just need a 1-2 more votes and you should be good. Raze Kucabara-Dono  Light  20:05, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

Sup. My support
Yeah I support ya. and yes I'll Rp with ya. --- Twon Junior (the Third)  20:33, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

Whenever you ready here it is. Crossing Blades of Peace. Its with my newest character Kami Kemuri. --- Twon Junior (the Third)  21:08, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

Philosophy
Yes, I would greatly appreciate if you did. Also, who do I ask for creating a member of the Royal Guard?The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 22:16, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

It's ok, thank you for your help.The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 22:29, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, thanks for the heads up.The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 22:43, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

yo
Intrested in doing an RP with me? Grizzaka (Talk)  22:31, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

since u decided to once again use powerful characters I'll be using my best: Ray Martinez. Since ur the powerful person u start the RP. Grizzaka <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">(Talk)  22:40, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

Well? we gonna start this RP or what? <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">Grizzaka <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">(Talk)  22:48, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

Well dude Ray didn't become strong when i made him, i had him endure so much hardship that he got to be the person he is today. <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">Grizzaka <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">(Talk)  22:53, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

Okay him i can understand but the rest were made powerful without going through the proper places in training, like they say Rome wasn't built in a day and don't worry about messenging me when it's my turn I'll know so don't worry. <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">Grizzaka <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">(Talk)  22:59, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

ur post. <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">Grizzaka <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">(Talk)  23:23, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

dude my bad, i messed up u should redue ur post. <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">Grizzaka <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">(Talk)  23:37, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

ur post <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">Grizzaka <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">(Talk)  23:53, May 14, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not redoing him and sorry i got other stuff on my mind. <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">Grizzaka <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">(Talk)  18:52, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

sorry dude but for right now i need to stop the RP cuz I'm completely changing Ray's powers. <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">Grizzaka <font color="#9400D3" face="Papyrus">(Talk)  20:06, May 17, 2011 (UTC)

Weakness
...Hmm... I bet memories of killing his friend and most of the Quincies haunts him today.. ^_^ ur go by the way Lone Black Garuga 03:34, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Tougenkyou Zenaku no Kajitsu has now become more of an optical-illusion for Hotaru due to his zanpakuto, so he could only see this inner conflict, not actually feel them in reality and someone his caliber won't fall like that easily. ^_^ ur go Lone Black Garuga 05:33, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Masanori Review
Ok, let's start off with introduction. (Note, I'll be a little harsh on this article because it has A LOT of potential)

Introduction-You haven't really given him an introduction, but the quote is nice, it clearly defines his (is it hatred?) for Kamui, which is nice, unique as it actually describes his personality in a sense as well, well done.

Rating-8/10 (would have been ten if you had put a brief summary of the character in the intro as well, but never mind)

Appearance- Nice section, doesn't really need to be rated, so I'm not going to rate it, nice work with how he makes his own clothes, cool!

Personality- Very nice personality, although you could go into a little more depth, maybe explain his personality before Kamui did all that mean stuff, and put in a quirk or two, otherwise nice work.

Rating- 7/10 (I'm being quite harsh, please don't blame me, but this character has alot of potential)

History- Very good section, although a little detail would help, it clearly defines his great hatred for Madara, which is very reasonable, I'd do the same if I was in his position.

Rating- 9/10

Powers and Abilities, alright, here we go! 9.8/10 (I think the grandmaster shouls be toned down, otherwise very nice)
 * Immortality: That is cool, it's like Kiyoshi Souzou and all that which is very unique, especially among Kawahiru members, great job with that.
 * Excellent use of intellect, which is really good, I love how you made Madara slightly frightened by it, as Madara is also highly intellectual, nice!
 * Great use of swordsmanship, although if he was really grandmaster I would've thought he had mastered some techniques, because 'Grandmaster' is the highest you can go, so maybe add a few techniques that he has created and/or learned
 * Hand to Hand Combat: It's good you haven't overpowered him by saying Master, otherwise I would get annoyed, I hate overpowered characters for no reason, but I like your style of editing, nice work.
 * Shunpo and Kido: Good work with these two, shows him as a prodigy in the art, although for the Senju Koten Taiho, you should say it tires him visibly, so that they know he isn't overpowered, just a suggestion however.
 * I like his spiritual pressure, gentle is very unusual when it comes to spiritual pressure, yet you say it brings down opponents, how about you say, when not focusing it on opponents it seems gentle, then when he focuses it, it becomes really dense, or something like that, and I like the deity like spiritual energy and the angel wings, cool!

Zanpakutou/Philosophy

Interesting combination of his zanpakutou and philosophy, hats off to you for that. I like his special ability, to calm everyone in the area is very 'deity like' indeed. His abilities are very well done, it's very cool that you added that the ability doesn't fade away even if they seal their zanpakutou, makes it seem very powerful, that's good for matching Kamui. You have balanced it with you must have the mental will to activate them, meaning he must control his emotions and mindset if he wants to use them right? Rating-9.5/10, I think you should go into more detail with how philosophy relates to his zanpakutou and such, otherwise, great job!
 * Tougenkyou Zenaku no Kajitsu: First ability, I like this ability, to bring out the greatest weakness of the enemy, I like the reference to tree and fruit here. This ability is awesome
 * Shinkagami: A defensive ability, nice, however it seems overpowered although it can only be used if he wants to truly protect someone right? So I guess it's ok
 * Futen Hikari: Nice attack, so this can only be used if he wants to destroy something right? Nice work, although stronger than a level 90 hado spell is a bit much, but you could say, at it's full power it's more devastating than a level 90 Hado spell or something.
 * Ok the last ability is cool, another reference to Philosophy is nice, I was wondering when it'd show up, but can attacks phase through the giant or something, because if not, then how will Masanori get injured, detail man, detail.

So, my overall rating is 9/10, Great Character, it can really be improved though, it has a lot of potential.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 08:04, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Well, that's cool, anyways, good luck with it! You wanna RP sometime by the way? After you've done all this, maybe a little fight between Hayato and Masanori (Hayato is Aizen Class)<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 08:21, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah pal to tell the truth I'm actually very interestted in your Phiolshy idea nice. --- <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">Twon Junior <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">(the Third)  21:35, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Like with what? <font color="#0255255" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#2550255" face="Tahoma">Light  00:41, May 16, 2011 (UTC)

I have no idea as I have the same problem you do. <font color="#0255255" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#2550255" face="Tahoma">Light  01:04, May 16, 2011 (UTC)

Yay, you increased your introduction, good job, and nice work with adding some stuff to your zanpakutou abilities, now it's a 10/10 for me :D<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 21:30, May 17, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, if you want to, you can start it, I'll add some stuff in a little later, I have homework.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 05:55, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

Masanori
His powers & abilities are quite detailed, pal. The only problem I see aside from a few grammar issues are the length of your appearance and personality sections. In many ways, those sections are the fundamentals of any article, so try and spruce them up a bit with more details and examples, and you'll make the article a lot better. And you might wanna write some kind of opening paragraph letting people know a little bit a bout his character. It gives a reader more incentive to read more of the article, ya know? Aside from that, you've explained well his abilities and zanpakutō, so nice one on those accounts, Twilight. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  15:25, May 16, 2011 (UTC)


 * Having any control over reality would be taxing, I'd imagine. There's a lot to control after all, and I'd say you'd need quite a degree of concentration to stop anything, like say, reality unwinding during battle from happening. If Philosophy was working alongside that, he might not be fit to concentrate. As for an RP, I can't right now. I've got whatever RP's I'm doing with Raze, the arc I'm now in with both Raze and Yuki, my tourney match with Njalm, one to start with Koukishi and another RP to do with Fire. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  17:21, May 16, 2011 (UTC)


 * Yo. A new group for good guys only? To be honest pal, I don't see the point, personally. We've got the Gotei 13, Royal Guard, Heavens Dark Guardians, and other small groups which would essentially serve the same purpose. Trust me when I say we've got enough good-guy organizations in the GF. If you wanna form one though, then post something to that effect on the GF talk page and see what the others think. After all, I'm only one opinion, and there's a lot more than me in the GF :P <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  18:35, May 18, 2011 (UTC)


 * Njalm and I have already gotten our judges sorted, dude. All we need to do is wait on their decision. The one who gets two outta the three votes is the winner. We decided to put the match on hold until we figure out the winner, since it'll allow us to better build up to the victory and show which one is gonna slow down first and ultimately lose. Its the best way to do things, we figured. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  18:55, May 18, 2011 (UTC)


 * I won't be fit to face him for quite a while, dude. My RP schedule is pretty full right now, and most of 'em aren't one shots either. The majority are ones which follow onto another almost immediately after ones finished :P But if it was anyone, I'd either run with Meian or Rosuto, 'cause those two are easily my strongest. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  19:05, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

Meian's easily my strongest character, and when his Akuma Taisen form is finally revealed; he'll be even stronger. And Rosuto's on the same level in terms of spiritual strength, even though his other abilities do lag behind somewhat. But Seireitou and Kamui are indeed powerful, with some awesome abilities that only make 'em all the better. Well, I reckon you using him is deserved. You did put a lot of work into him, after all. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  19:58, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

RE: Equipment
You've piqued my interest speak your mind :) Albeit I don't have any characters whom could have invented it, or whom would need to use it. Njalm2 19:22, May 16, 2011 (UTC)

R.A.I.S.E
Hmm...it would be good except it woul be considered OP. Think about those who would want to RP with you yet don't use reason or philosophy? They wouln't be able to anything at all and that would just be unfair completely. I know you said even those with the above mentioned powers could use theirs for a period of time before they are unable, but before they run out there is more than enough time to overwhelm and defeat the opponent. So I would vote no. But hey, youcan if you want...that's just my take on it =) And yea I knew what i from...I used some code geass in some of my articles. Heck...I'm still trying to find a way to use Kallen or C.C lol <font color="#0255255" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#2550255" face="Tahoma">Light  20:15, May 16, 2011 (UTC)

Hm? I confused. In one post you say that it completely renders spiritual energy and seals it in its source yet in the next post you say spiritual energy can destroy it? Also you didnt mention that it had a set time period previously, as that would make a major difference. But all in all...its your choice. Do as you will. <font color="#0255255" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#2550255" face="Tahoma">Light  20:41, May 16, 2011 (UTC)

Hmmmm..... Though I'm slightly confused... I think I grasp the concept.. Maybe just a lil more tweak on it ^_^ and it'll be fine..... Lone Black Garuga 02:23, May 17, 2011 (UTC)

Masanori
I guess... Kawahirus are known for their complexity and superiority over others... ^_^ Seireitou is one hell of a good example... The whole GF cant take him hehehe Lone Black Garuga 02:42, May 17, 2011 (UTC)

Be careful then ^_^.... Even that is not a reason for u to underestimate Kamui with Sei using him <_< his BFF's Tite Kubo afterall hehehehe, his got more than 1 trick up his sleeves....

Late Reply
I apologize for the late reply. We could probably RP sometime later this week, as school is nearing its end for me. And sure, you can make a Sinseang Jeongsu for Masanori. --Seireitou-shishō (My True Identity 04:29, May 17, 2011 (UTC)

RE: Hello
um.... o.o okay~ Who will you use?

FFFFUUUUUU- holy shit i just wread his power and abilities.... o-o;; and ... give me acouple minutes to figure out who to use.

You dont have to ask me. I told you that once you had majority then you're back in. Though if this happens again, there are no second chances. <font color="#0255255" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#2550255" face="Tahoma">Light  03:28, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

A resolve of judgement
So what do you want Hayato to do? I mean he can't just say you wanna fight and etc. Although, since he doesn't dismiss the need for violence when something 'evil' is happening, what do you want Hayato to do?<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 06:04, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

That sounds interesting, although he was kicked out of Soul Society because of this dude, we'll go with your idea for now, I think I'll say that he was denied of the promotion for unknown reasons.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 06:33, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

I saw that, anyways, your turn.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 06:39, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

Oh I see, that's fine.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 21:16, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, I had no idea, sorry about that, next time I won't do it, anyway, it's your turn.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 06:24, May 19, 2011 (UTC)

It's your turn by the way.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 22:29, May 20, 2011 (UTC) Oh and the Shusseki technique is basically a kido spell he invented. The dust created from the explosion absorbs a little bit of the opponent's spiritual power, which then gets transferred to all the dust, allowing Hayato to sense him. <font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 22:29, May 20, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, thanks.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 09:09, May 23, 2011 (UTC)

your turn.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 09:21, May 23, 2011 (UTC) For battling, how will we be able to know whether the opponent or something responds to the attack if we can't control the other user's character.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash  (Let's Chat!) 09:21, May 23, 2011 (UTC)

Ideas
I see you want me to pitch you a few ideas. Anyway, I'm PersonaSuperiorDeus (well, you already know that). I'm new here, but I'll give it a shot. This Philosophy is really powerful. ...I don't know very much about Reason either, so I'm going through the articles. So I was thinking for Bankai, Masanori could obtain use of Reason, and meld it and Philosophy into an unexplainable and incomprehensible type of energy. The energy by nature cannot be explained. Since it can't be comprehended, very few things can stop it. Of course, that probably sounds overpowered. I could think of something else later if this isn't good, but this is all I can come up with right now. ...Oh, yeah. Nice to meet you, Td5! PersonaSuperiorDeus 04:38, May 20, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry about that. I didn't know, but I'll check that out. Just wondering, why is Sei's property template there? ...I'm not really good with anything other than reishi and reiatsu when it comes to energies, but if you want help with anything else, just ask. See you later. PersonaSuperiorDeus 04:53, May 20, 2011 (UTC)

I see. Well, my friend on Fairy Tail Fanon (He's Ash9876 here) told me how to put templates on when I first started, so I'll help you out with his advice: "Go into Insert Template, and find the property template, then you can write your username, then click ok and it will automatically create a box at the top of the screen". Hope this helps! PersonaSuperiorDeus 05:09, May 20, 2011 (UTC)

It's great. The amount of detail you've put into it is stunning. 10/10! Good job! PersonaSuperiorDeus 05:18, May 20, 2011 (UTC)

I've got a some RPs I've promised several people (Raze, Lone), so after all that, yeah, of course! PersonaSuperiorDeus 04:00, May 23, 2011 (UTC)

Td5, I was wondering, could I create a Kosumossukihaku (That's a lot to stomach, lol)? PersonaSuperiorDeus 00:29, June 5, 2011 (UTC)

Wha...? All I know is that you said I could create a Kosumossukihaku. Sorry about that, I think you probably did message the wrong person, Td5. Though I'm not so good at these sort of things. PersonaSuperiorDeus 05:57, June 5, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, that's what you meant. Ahaha, sorry for that, pal. I wasn't thinking straight at the time. I'm perfectly fine, I just misinterpreted your question. PersonaSuperiorDeus 06:07, June 5, 2011 (UTC)

It'd vary my cast up a bit (full of Shinigami, one Mototsu, and whatever the heck Nika is), and I'm going to use her to RP with Lone if so. PersonaSuperiorDeus 06:21, June 5, 2011 (UTC)

What? I think you've got the wrong guy, sorry. I didn't have any poison Sake Zan on any of my characters, though you suggested what Zan Hizashi could have to me, Td5. PersonaSuperiorDeus 05:33, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

Haha, no worries. I've already thought of a Zan for Hizashi anyway. See you later. PersonaSuperiorDeus 06:12, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

Td5, could you look at my Mototsu race if you have the time, please? PersonaSuperiorDeus 05:09, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, I didn't see your message before Td5. Sure, they can know each other, and Setsuna's already Naisho Kawahiru's sister. PersonaSuperiorDeus 06:54, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, sure, thanks for that. I'll do that later on today or tomorrow. PersonaSuperiorDeus 07:26, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Just wondering, can females be Kosumosukihaku? Just wondering. Anyway, I'll get started right away on that character. PersonaSuperiorDeus 05:27, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

Hah, scratch that, I just looked at the article again, sorry. PersonaSuperiorDeus 05:30, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

I'm actually in the process of creating her right now, thanks for confirming that for me. PersonaSuperiorDeus 07:04, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

When I finish one of my RPs I'm doing currently, I'll give you a shout so we can start, Td5. PersonaSuperiorDeus 23:38, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Ready to RP, Td5? I won't use Setsuna, though. I recently learnt that she don't work well in RPs. How 'bout Gai vs. Masanori? PersonaSuperiorDeus 01:05, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

How 'bout this character? PersonaSuperiorDeus 02:23, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

About Griz
Well apparantly this what ten said "I'm here to inform you that, after an encounter with Grizz and his fake account on the chat, we have come to the same conclusion Raze has. We have numerous factors to consider here, including lying to you all as his fellow users and us as the administration team, multiple accounts, and vandalism, even if it was of his own stuff. We all (the admins) debated the facts and the story both Grizz and his supposed "cousin" gave us, and came to a unanimous consensus to ban Grizzka. At first, it was just going to be a month long ban, for harassment, however, after discovering that it really was a fake account and that Grizzka had done all of this, primarily to get attention, we have decided to ban him permanently." And after what I saw on here well I can't blame them for this conclusion. He brought it on himself =/ <font color="#0255255" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#2550255" face="Tahoma">Light  04:45, May 21, 2011 (UTC)

Yea...Idk what brought him to that..I realized that he was doing it because I myself have the experience with dealing with those trying to use the faux family excuse. Its quite sad but then again...I suppose griz had some things going on in his life. /but now we won't ever know...as for removing his name...I forbid that as he was one of the founding members. <font color="#0255255" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#2550255" face="Tahoma">Light  05:17, May 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re"Hello
hi its nice to meet you td2 i am sento for short. and is there something i can help you with?

(Sentonara 05:02, May 21, 2011 (UTC))

well yes and no i never have really,my thing is i just want to try to be a little more known and just to have my work for people to enjoy.even though i make villians mostly lol.i am sorry but that has to be my thing,but i can give it a shot why not i need to try to be on both ends i have often asked other users to see what they think from alot of the stuff i get back they really like my stuff,though really my spelling and crap but i am working on that lol.But i am shocked that alot of the members of the gravity force likes some of my work one of my most remeberable moment is from i think kenji that he was imperssed with Gaiten and just posted it a few mins ago that day.and i often taking much of the stuff taken from the other users and then rebuild up my characters i started out a know nothing on here and now its like i have been on here for years.lol but i do have a question for you this maybe out of left feild,is it possible that one can become a member of the gravity force ? i have seen many of yours guys work and i love it. i am just wondering if you don't take in new members i understand i was wondeirng thats all.

Thanks

(Sentonara 05:24, May 21, 2011 (UTC))

thank you very much i will see about the character and such which you gave me and i will ask kenji or raze about the stuff to become a member and thanks i myself really feel kinda lucky that you would have a vote for me thank you very much Td :)

(Sentonara 05:33, May 21, 2011 (UTC))

Hi how you doin

i did look over masanori and that other page.well first off it was very good,but the only thing i notice was with the appearance and personality on masanori.what i often do with my characters i listen their personality as in their actions and emotions.i did see that with masanori but you could have gone into a little more for him such as he has a great love for his brother and cousin.maybe you could explain how thier relastionship can be like do they hang out alot and stuff. like for my character Koushaku,i explained the different relationships he has with his partners and what they would do as in do they respect eachother are each other all the time.

with his appearance very good,but i often discribe maybe if he wears like different outfits like Setsuhiro i said that when he is in the soul society sometime he wears a different outfit to hide his face and such.Like if he is in the world of living would he wear something else like jeans and top kinda guy or something else.

as for the philosophy it is a very interresting power and stuff.i think that was very well written by you.I know myself have created the Reiniku race what i am think is it a yes and no within it being under a race what i am thinking is its like a fullbring every human has it but it has to be devloped.i think i am in the same area with the philosophy.i personality like it because.

this is just coming from me,within buddhism they have almost the same princeple with it to be in compelete harmony.the same princeple can be said about the buddhists they wish to reach that harmony.but bottom line they both are very good if you could make the changes i suggested it would be prefect.as for the philosophy its prefect the way it is.

(Sentonara 18:05, May 21, 2011 (UTC))

Yo
Well Twilight, it seems you've taken my words to heart, at least to some degree, I can see that you're trying to improve your articles, which is good start, just keep things up. Its a long road to recovery in some cases, but given your zeal for the wiki, I'm sure you'll continue to grow both as a person and a writer in the future.

I have been keeping track of some of the things you've been doing, so as a friend I'll offer some advice. When roleplaying with your characters, you tend to....address your opponents in the same manner regardless of your actual character. Insults and vulgar language are common, even amongst those who are apparently, "soft-spoken" or those who seek peace. In any given battle, you should try to refrain from outright insulting your opponent, possibly even complimenting them on their prowess, while your character continues to dodge their assaults while using counter-attacks. Given what you've written about Masanori, this could be something to attribute to his nature.

Just try to keep your character's personalities in mind when roleplaying them, as it can be difficult to try and visualize different personalities, and "roleplay" as them when they're so different than your own. In such cases, dont imagine that you are "roleplaying" as the character, but instead write it from the perspective of a author whose putting the character they created through the given situation. If you keep that in mind, its much easier to differentiate between yourself and the character your writing about. Well, just wanted to say good luck to ya, and keep up the good work. --- Illuminate Void (Talk) 20:10, May 21, 2011 (UTC)

I think you're overthinking it too much in regards to your ruling species. I've only made one race and thats the Diabolus, because I wanted them to be distinct from Hollows. Creating an entire species isnt...necessary, so as much as getting down the concept of what they do. Unless you plan on creating a whole bunch of them, then just creating the Kishimetsu should suffice for you, and even then, you only need to devote a paragraph or two to describing what it is they do and their purpose. Other than that, I cant be of much help. Like I said, our creations are somewhat different, and even if I did create the Kishimetsu we'd end up butting heads more often than not due to differences in roles/concept, etc and what I visualize them as and you. Even in my "Turn Back the Pendulum" the whole...creation of the gods is left ambiguous, at best, and open to change if need be. So in short, I'll have to kindly decline your offer. --- Illuminate Void (Talk) 20:56, May 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re:rp
No thank you, I have alot on my plate and can barely keep up with the rp im in with zaraikou at the moment.. sorry.--Fenix-Taichō (Request an Audience) 04:31, May 23, 2011 (UTC)

RE: Hey
Sure but I can't right now because I am writing a paper for class. Haha. I'll give you my thoughts/ideas for his Bankai later tomorrow. Cheers!

RE:Slots
Well not to bring up old wounds, but it wouldn't be fair to give you the spot seeing as you did leave the GF at one point. Who knows when another situation such as that might arise, but in saying that I reccommend you either go for the now vacant 2nd and 8th spots or make sure no one else wants the Primera spot and go from there. Though I must warn you, I want the Primera espada to be of the highest quality possible, so I will be critiquing everything. Sorry if it sounds mean but I have to bring down the mantle per se. <font color="#0255255" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#2550255" face="Tahoma">Light  21:52, May 24, 2011 (UTC)

Yea..if I said it then why are you asking? Hahahaha silly goose =P <font color="#0255255" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#2550255" face="Tahoma">Light  19:47, May 25, 2011 (UTC)

Hmmm..why are you telling me if there nothing even there? <font color="#0255255" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#2550255" face="Tahoma">Light  02:10, May 26, 2011 (UTC)

Kaosu Souzou
Evidently I used a somewhat similar premise, in Overture of the King, although mine relates specifically to japanese mythology. I also left it ambiguous at best at "what/whom" were the first to emerge, and how long ago they did so. This way other stories relating to the beginning can emerge.

Anyways, as for the story itself, its a short introduction, and while there are a few errors (mostly uses of pronouns in my opinion) its writtenly fairly well. Im not exactly sure of the tone you want to set for this, which will depend entirely on your use of vocabularly to describe how the events play out. If you want, look at my story above, its not much but it could serve to help you if you. Adding a bit of..mysticism to this could enhance the mood, though to do that you may need to use...more...symoblism in your writing. But other than you've got a good base, but I found my own story difficult to write, as I modified it several times. It helps to speak out loud, so as to help you set the tone, pacing, etc of what you're writing. --- Illuminate Void (Talk) 23:59, May 24, 2011 (UTC)

Masanori
Hmm, no I dont. Like I said to Raze, for me I've always established a theme to my characters, from their name down to the abilities, its all part of this neat little package. Its why I have so few characters overall. Well at least "main ones". As for Masanori, I'm not sure of the connection he has to his Zanpakutou, and aside from you creating Masanori for Sei, if there isnt much else for his creation, I can't get any ideas from that either. You may need to establish a story-arc or plan if you want to develop Masanori. That or elaborate more on his personality and how it connects to his Zanpakutou. What sort of theme if any or archetype did you have when creating this character. Anything regarding his history? Future? etc. --- Illuminate Void (Talk) 21:21, May 26, 2011 (UTC)

Seems to me that you might be better off making his Zanpakutou Spirit the spiritual manifestation of Masanori's Philosophy. Or rather, his power/control over philosophy has changed the very nature of his Zanpakutou. In this case, I would make it so that Masanori only has an incomplete version of Philosophy, but while manifesting his Zanpakutou he gains the "complete" Philosophy. It would probably have the appearance of a god/goddess perhaps an androgynous being or something. For an RP character its important to have weaknesses, and Philosophy by itself is already powerful enough. Im not sure how you envisioned Philosophy, but you should probably stick with only one aspect for Masanori. Giving him...a box, a means of confining his abilities, is necessary, as its the only way for you to start thinking "outside" of the box and expand upon them. Otherwise, his powers will seem odd, unrelated and slapped together. Well thats all the advice I have for Masanori. Oh and, yes I would give Masanori's spirit a level of spiritual energy, be it he has a lot, or like my character Kenshin Yagami during his Bankai, quanity simply becomes meaningless. His reserves refill too fast for it to even matter. After Overwhelming Spiritual Power, there really isnt a point to quantifying it anymore. The point is made, the character has a lot, big deal, only question is, can you make it interesting enough for it to matter? --- Illuminate Void (Talk) 21:51, May 26, 2011 (UTC)

Avaron would be the japanese romaji seeing as "L's" dont exist in the langauge. As for the other translation:

Saijin (最神, lit. "Highest Deity"). --- Illuminate Void (Talk) 01:38, May 27, 2011 (UTC)

Just so you know...
It's your post when you can(:

I think I will decline on your offer, only because this character is a bit too powerful for my taste, and even if i used my best character it wouldn't be a fair fight, due to Masanori's large amount of abilities and lack of weaknesses to exploit........-- Feel the Rage  (Talk)  07:09, May 25, 2011 (UTC)

I don't see why not. --Seireitou-shishō (My True Identity 21:52, May 26, 2011 (UTC)

My decision about RPing your character may have been premature and if your offer still stands I would like to RP against Masanori, mainly because Rping against a character of this magnitude and power would surely be interesting, so do let me know, and I would also like to apologise if I sounded harsh or rude earlier, that was not my intention........-- Feel the Rage  (Talk)  09:55, May 29, 2011 (UTC)

Well then, I suppose Saigo will be fighting against a deity like being, not that it matters, since I am confident he can hold his own or even overcome this advesary. But let me remind you, he is not any regular Captain level shinigami, so i hope you don't treat hi like one. And also I read through bits of the articles you posted on my talk page, and I have a basic understanding of it, so if you don't mind starting the RP, we can get started.....-- Feel the Rage  (Talk)  11:02, May 29, 2011 (UTC)

I'll be using Saigo Murakami in the RP, and I don't have problem with him using Spiritual Power or Philosophy, and if you don't mind starting the RP, we can get started.....-- Feel the Rage  (Talk)  11:11, May 29, 2011 (UTC)

Like i said, it doesn't make much difference, but anyways I posted so its your turn......-- Feel the Rage  (Talk)  11:34, May 29, 2011 (UTC)

No problem mate, take your time, I'll be busy as well.....-- Feel the Rage  (Talk)  16:27, May 29, 2011 (UTC)

You Post mate on Lost Temprance, I know I've been away for a while due to my exams, but I am back for a week before I head out for Vacation, so we need to get this RP moving in that time, if you have any problems let me know, cheers......-- Feel the Rage  (Talk)  08:04, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re: Pic
Hmm, thank you for the picture, but I don't think I'll use it. Might I suggest that you use the picture yourself for a future character? Kiyoshi's lover mayhaps?

Njalm2 06:41, May 27, 2011 (UTC)

"Homosexual Title Match"
Kiyoshi vs Hiroya, eh? Well that'd certainly be quite interesting; the winner likely becomes worthy of the title of "Strongest Homosexual Character on the Wiki" :P - though I feel compelled to note that Hiroya never spars, any battle would have to be initiated by Kiyoshi for obvious reasons.

Hiroya also has no idea that he has Philosophy, and thus he would never ask Kiyoshi for help, though I suppose Kiyoshi might be aware of the fact that Hiroya does indeed have such. As for the timing of the battle, I suppose it would be somewhere after the events of the Valhalla Tournament.

Kido, being magic doesn't follow the laws of nature, something which by extension would render Kiyoshi's abilities useless against it.

Oh and, well we are currently waiting for the judgement of our three judges - namely Iluminate Void, Koukishi and Razeluxe. Though they spend an awful lot of time deciding.

Njalm2 07:23, May 27, 2011 (UTC)

RE: Segunda Espada
Psh..I dont know, its your character. If you have a theme or archetype just go for that, I'm sure that if you try you can put as much detail as you need to for this character. Personally? If I had to choose for myself I'd go with the light manipulation since its more like manipulation of waves on the electromagnetic spectrum. That has a bit more potential than poison, and telekinesis is overdone. Finally, as I recall Njalm's Alejandro Nuevo specializes in the use of Cero. --- Illuminate Void (Talk) 19:35, May 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reply
Well, today was my Calculus exam, and... that's pretty much it. And trained on my Moon-Moo form. How about you? --Seireitou-shishō (My True Identity 22:57, May 27, 2011 (UTC)

Sup?!
^_^ hows life treating u td-kun? Lone Black Garuga 05:11, May 28, 2011 (UTC)

uhmm that would be interesting ^_^ ok... but u can start it Lone Black Garuga 06:40, May 28, 2011 (UTC)

Ur go Td-kun! ^_^ the character is going along quite well... Hope to see him improve more and get involve throughout ur stories.. Lone Black Garuga 03:28, May 30, 2011 (UTC)

Custodio
I like this guy, curiousity really makes him stand out among other arrancar great job, history's nice as well, although grammar could be improved, it probably will be improved eventually. It's your go in our RP<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 00:18, May 29, 2011 (UTC)

So our RP is finished I presume, sorry for adding new abilities without telling. Although it was a great RP, I was surprised you bought in Kaosu, although it was still nice, so it's ok.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 10:07, May 29, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I see, anyways, I really like Custodio, his abilities are great, especially the Pesquisa, which is surprising as almost no arrancar use pesquisa these days, nice. Oh, and for the personality section, just for more detail, you could describe where his curiosity arised from.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 10:19, May 29, 2011 (UTC)

I thought so, thanks for the warning though.<font color="#11010" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Passing Ash (Let's Chat!) 21:33, May 29, 2011 (UTC)

Hi Td
Hi How you doing

I am wondering Td could you look at Ankoku though he is very very new. I am wondering what you think of him, if you don't want to it I understand. 戦闘丸,Sento-Sama 03:09, May 29, 2011 (UTC)

Well thanks Td, but if a diety that you want I do have one for tsudzuru she is a hindu god. but I as I said within her overview many pagan religons want her to be named as one of the gods. She is Kali.

戦闘丸,Sento-Sama 03:28, May 29, 2011 (UTC)

Well td I can see your point, Kali is not really wordship. With Tsudzuru, I made to be more or less like a monk well a fallen monk is maybe his better term. I see where your comming from, well it seems that Kali hasn't been an issues. She has been added a few weeks ago, and I was careful with many of kali's things. I Often just use her as an example like the rp I am doing right now, Setsuhiro and Ciel. Kali was only said about, I have it as that only a thing that is spoken of. Not an enemy or ally. Though with tsudzuru he sees her as a mother than a god. She only had one connect with him and that is by his asura form. Then other than that she is just spoken of. So she doesn't have a role.

Btw, I think some of the adim have seen kali and she hasn't been deleted. Hopefully not -.-, but like I said she is only a thing that is spoken of. 戦闘丸,Sento-Sama 03:54, May 29, 2011 (UTC)

-Sigh-
No one told you to give up your spot,, you did that on your own accord. Don't go trying to blame me like I forced you into doing something. And by leaving comments like that on the page, you still give off the impression of a bratty child in passive agressive way. <font color="#0255255" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#2550255" face="Tahoma">Light  20:34, May 30, 2011 (UTC)

First don't compare yourself to Griz as we gave him chances because he came asking for help with his zanpakuto and then did or did not do whatever transpired. You on the otherhand just up and left becuase you wanted pretty much wanted to se how people would respond. Those are two different things entirely, and no one said you are five, you threw that out there (by my count) twice now. And honestly, I'm quite sick of you stating that you think that I'm seeing you in some kind of negativelight or thinking of you in some bad way. I never did once up until now because frankly I'm quite sick of arguing with you over pointless things. Good day. <font color="#0255255" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#2550255" face="Tahoma">Light  20:45, May 30, 2011 (UTC)

New tournament
I can't give you details as of yet. As soon as I get at least six participants, I shall create the page, which will have all the rules for the tourney. Just so you know, unless a character has 600 stat-wise, they're allowed the participate. I will set character limitations on that page, so stay tuned. Try getting the other members of Gravity Force involved as well. (:
 * I'd go with the poison-type, seeing as a scientist would be more inclined to study a multitude of toxins, which could be incorporated into the zanpakutou. However, that's just my take on it; feel free to totally disregard what I just said.

School
Yeah, I just finished up, and have my graduation this Saturday. I can finally begin working on my Baguazhang techniques, along with Taekwondo. --Seireitou-shishō (My True Identity 23:46, May 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * Uh... I live in the United States, dude. ~_~ Anyways, I'll probably get to our RP sometime this week. I'm assisting in some renovation on Naruto Fanon, so I'm trying to finish up my Kōkiorosu members and some of Sōkudo's followers. --Seireitou-shishō [[File:Seireitou's signature picture.jpg]] (My True Identity 23:52, May 30, 2011 (UTC)

RE: Translation Request
Kenpu Eizou (絹布影像, lit. "Silk Silhouette") --- Illuminate Void (Talk) 05:34, May 31, 2011 (UTC)

Interesting Zanpakutou. Its useful but not overtly powerful or possessing overpowering offense. Great job. Oh and if I may, I'd like make a request. If you dont mind, would it be possible for Tsuchimikado Shikizaki to have Incomplete Philosophy? I was looking for a means of giving him a power boost, since he's going to rely entirely on his martial arts and magic (I havent decided on his Zanpakutou yet, im changing it around), but I think the Philosophy of Destruction fits quite well with his character. He helped orchestrate the Sengoku Era of Japan, basically condeming destruction everywhere, and allowed himself to be killed, ensuring his "destruction" so to speak. I could go into detail, but I think that his character fits, given his mind-set and soothsayer abilities. Who better to possess the aspect of destruction in regards to Philsophy than a man who can peer into the future and know when it must be done? And do nothing to stop it? Perhaps even ensuring that it happens? Well I'm going to crash for the night. I'll respond tomorrow morning to any messages. Good night. --- Illuminate Void (Talk) 04:55, June 1, 2011 (UTC)

RE: Njalm2
Not at all TD :) I'd be impressed if you managed to do that though. I think Minoru has an interesting personality, if abit general. I generally don't like characters whom try to avoid things that cannot be avoided, after all, were he to become mad - he wouldn't know he was. I also don't like evil characters whom admit that they're evil and all such archetypes. But otherwise he is interesting.

A chat with Arthfael, eh - I don't think that'd be a pleasant conversation for Kaosu, and the only way he'd be capable of talking to Arthfael would be for him to enter Elysium himself and request an audience - depending on Arthfaels mood it might go well, or it may end in complete and utter tragedy. Besides, I feel compelled to note that I don't think talking about the future with Arthfael would have any purpose given how he's unable to influence the Human World directly.

Kaosu is a ridicolously powerful character, but he's not Omnipotent; Arthfael is Omnipotent when he's in Elysium, which he always is. Kaosu would in all honesty be incapable of even wounding him other than a superficial gash, killing him would thus be all but impossible by extension - Arthfael as opposed to that could simply erase him out of existance; Arthfael's power is as such incalculable - he's not simply more powerful than anyone else, Arthfaels power cannot in fact be called power for the sole reason that it is incomprehensible. If Arthfael was capable of leaving hell, which would likely include a lot of vessels and thus dilate his power by billions of times, it'd be possible that he'd be on Kaosu's level.

You've got alot of what the Optimates can do and are wrong - the fact is, that none of them are Diabolus; hell they're not even actual beings, they are pictures, pigments and representations of something much greater; besides even if they were, Philosophy likely doesn't have enough power to destroy beings of their magnitude, or even of the magnitude of the average Daemon-class and above; the greatest weaknesses to Diabolus are Silver and even that has its limits. I've chosen to interpret purifying abilities as something akin to burns - when Flamen faced off against that character of yours he was painfully affected by her presence - their Aura are in a sense damaging to them, but such effects are quite limited. Kaosu is also a very unbalanced character in that he can move freely, he has no restrictions at all - he can simply travel wherever he pleases, do whatever he wants and no one have the capacity to challenge him. For someone of his power that is in my opinion completely ridicolous - if he is what you've made him out to be he would likely be bound to something and his abilities to influence the world should be quite inhibited. The Optimates are bound to hell after all, and each of them are effectively Omnipotent while they're present.

Njalm2 22:01, June 3, 2011 (UTC)

It should also be noted that the "purification" abilities associated with your Kosumosukihaku would likely be useless against the Optimates. For the same reason Sesshoumaru was largely immune to the effects of "purification" due to his Youki being "pure" the same would hold true for any Optimates and any Arcus Daemon imho. They've gotten to a point where any "impurities" burned off by the Kosumosukihaku would actually empower them instead of weaken/kill them. --- Illuminate Void (Talk) 01:06, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, I'll do it - I promised to make a Kosumi-whatever at one point after all. :) Njalm2 23:45, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

Yo
I've already seen it, pal. I wasn't on before 'cause my router is basically F'd with very little connectivity at the minute. It worked a while this morning and then died again shortly after. I'm now working off my neighbors wireless signal, who were kind enough to let me use it until my new router comes on Monday. Anyways, on the subject of the winner, its your turn to post on Kenji and Hiroya's tourney match, 'cause the match is pretty much finished. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  17:08, June 4, 2011 (UTC)


 * To avoid overloading Kenji with new powers as a consequence of Zettaiteki, I was wondering if it'd be alright to slowly bring its powers, and the effect they'll have on Kenji himself, to the fore slowly? Basically, since the weapon has its own spiritual energy that Kenji could effectively use himself should he need to in certain situations, I was wondering if Hiroya's sealing spell could work, but not in the intended manner. Instead of sealing the weapon completely, it only cuts Kenji off from using its spiritual energy. He'll still be able to develop techniques and use the sword, but it would take a while for the weapons true potential to reveal itself; mainly because like all Kidō, the seal would eventually erode with time. This sound okay to you, Twilight? <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  18:17, June 4, 2011 (UTC)


 * That works fine with me, pal. There will be a time, either through Hiroya voluntarily removing the seal or it simply eroding to the point it breaks, though it'll take quite an amount of time to happen. It gives Kenji the chance to familiarize himself with the blade, but having it with merely lieutenant-level power is alright; 'cause its still a good deal of power, though pretty small that it makes little difference to a powerful combatant. I'll run the plan by Njalm so we all know what we're doing, as he'll be the one who describes the spells actual activation since he knows more about the mechanics of the sacred spells than any of us do :P Anyways, I'll add the actual weapon to Kenji's article tomorrow at some point, 'cause I'm spending my time working through Ashni and getting her powers and what-not established for my next individual arc, as well as my other gen2 characters. P.S. Oh yeah, its your turn on the tourney round, pal. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  20:42, June 4, 2011 (UTC)

Just as a heads up, pal. When my post is done, it'll be Njalm's turn, as he set the spell up in such a way that it'll activate when Kenji receives the sword. Just to let you know :P <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  22:12, June 4, 2011 (UTC)


 * Cheers for the heads up, dude. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  16:22, June 6, 2011 (UTC)


 * Its being a good router right now - maybe its finally taken my threats seriously lol. Managed to get my post done, though. Outta curiosity, whats the other prize, pal? <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  20:53, June 8, 2011 (UTC)


 * I'll work with a brace on the handguard then that'll basically do the same thing. Its basically so the spiritual energy can be hidden so it doesn't cause adverse reactions to the human world, and since Kenji does technically live there, its an important point for him :P I'm a firm believer that those who are dead should remain as such, though, I do have one thing in mind that would save me a lot of time - 'cause I wouldn't need to write an arc explaining it all. Rosuto Shiba is stuck in the Wandering Spiritual World; which is a realm explored in Bleach: The 3rd Phantom for the DS. Usually, its next to impossible to enter or leave, so if Kaosu could teleport him out and send him to Horiwari, it'd save me a lot of time and effort. That be okay with you, pal? <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  21:33, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

I'll make my post in a sec then. The thing is, that's a youtube video your looking to add, ain't it? I'd need to download the actual video and post it that way, and I'm not doing that, pal. If you want it added, you'll have to download it yourself and upload it as you would any other picture, dude. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  18:29, June 10, 2011 (UTC)


 * Cheers for that dude, but ask before adding it next time and I'll get round to it when I'm sprucing up other parts. After my next few RP's with Kenji there'll be a few new abilities added as well. Anyways, I enjoyed the tourney. What I'm glad for is that we managed to finish the thing. The Kanmuri Taikai didn't get that luxury. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  19:42, June 13, 2011 (UTC)


 * I read that at the bottom of the tourney match. Kenji would probably keep an artifact like that in a safe place. The [Mukashi Shinden]] is a spiritual retreat of sorts for the Yuengiri, so currently only four people know of existence. I can keep the key there to be reclaimed whenever its needed, pal. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  19:58, June 13, 2011 (UTC)


 * Point this new fellow in the direction of Kenji Hiroshi and Van Satonaka :P Those two have quite the number of tricks up their sleeves and more power than they know what to do with. With a few others backing them, not many would beat 'em :P In all seriousness though, that sounds pretty fun. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  20:12, June 13, 2011 (UTC)


 * Then point Haru in their direction lol. Believe me, after Part II of my stories are finished with and Part III begins, you won't recognize Kenji. Big changes are coming his way :P <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  20:24, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

Looking forward to seeing what you come up with, pal :P <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  20:53, June 13, 2011 (UTC)


 * Awesome dude. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  18:21, June 17, 2011 (UTC)


 * The idea Void and Njalm gave is pretty solid, so I look forward to seeing the changes you three come up with, dude. Good luck with that :P <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  18:51, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

RE: Philosophy
Well you probably shouldnt do a Zanpakutou Rebellion arc, as thats already been done before. Though I am keen on the idea of having my own Cosmos Soul being weakened, for whatever reason. As for Philosophy, yes it should probably have a limit of sorts, though not necessarily time. If you do, it would be similar to a Hollow Mask in that aspect, but use of it should always end in extensive fatigue and exhaustion. Also if you dont mind, I'd like to correct a few formatting issues and clarify some things with the Kosumosukihaku article. If you dont like the changes or rewording, your more than welcome to change it back. --- Illuminate Void (Talk) 23:57, June 4, 2011 (UTC)

Philosophy
Well technically speaking Van could beat philosophy with Jishaku as it doesnt use spiritual energy but works by breaking down the balance of forces within any technique. Onto the question at hand, first well you really gotta stop referring to yourself as a previous admin. Just makes you sound ridiculous as it has no merit here. Not trying to be mean just honest. But hmm...well two...you can change the abilities you hae listed. its not wrong. If its to make it better then that's what you have to do or else everyone would be using something that's broken. You see what I'm coming from? And Hmm Idk..honestly I think you should change it a bit so that there is something that can break it down as that would be OP if used against someone who's zanpakuto is mainly for asorbing spirital particles. I mean you can make it resistant against absorption but there should be something that can destroy it. Like make an anti-matter for philosophy called like doubt or soemthing =P. <font color="#0255255" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#2550255" face="Tahoma">Light  03:33, June 5, 2011 (UTC)

Actually if philosophy is a form of energy then it would have mass and if it as mass then it would count as matter so antimatter would still apply =P Maybe you should stick to a chef. Jk jk. <font color="#0255255" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#2550255" face="Tahoma">Light  03:50, June 5, 2011 (UTC)

Haha you're talking to a magic fanatic here =p Magic in its purest form is all realtive of energy being used to perform wonders that humans don't have any idea of how they happened so lable them as magic (or in some cases magiks) SO in that regard magic would be considered energy and ipso facto it would be matter =P BUt even if philosophy is base don the roots of amgic then it would still be energy based due to the simple history of magic revolving around the practical use of enery to perform "miracles". And on the page itself it is referenced as energy several times further proving my point xP <font color="#0255255" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#2550255" face="Tahoma">Light  04:07, June 5, 2011 (UTC)

Well seeing as you just said that in an incredibly rude way as if you control what we talk about, no I do not wish to hear your idea. <font color="#0255255" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#2550255" face="Tahoma">Light  04:14, June 5, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry to intrude, but it seems this conversation has already come and passed, but Twilight, I did reword how the "Complete Protection from Negative or Dispelling Effects" worked for Tsuchimikado as I interperted it. As the ability is it written it seems...overpowered but also not, and very confusing, so instead I worded it in a way that was what you probably intended. For Tsuchimikado it simply allows him to use his abilities in situations where he normally wouldnt be able to. It also provides a viable defense against abilities such as the manipulation of reality, or things that would counter-act his use of spiritual energy such as the sekkiseki stone. Not only could he freely pass through the barrier, he could cast his magic through it. I think the basic concept of Philosophy is interesting but it still needs some revision in some parts. And if you do revise it, thats fine, just let us know what the changes are going to be ahead of time before making it "concrete". Because as written he's not "manipulating" Philosophy or the energy itself, rather he's using it to coat his own powers, which in augments them to varying degree's. I suppose its more similar to the Chakra Shroud of a Jinchuuriki, as opposed to anything else. It seems Complete Philosophy would be the actual use of this energy as opposed to just harnessing it like a cloak. At least thats what my interpertation. --- Illuminate Void (Talk) 15:15, June 5, 2011 (UTC)

Norwegian Translations
Alright, I've decided to help you flesh out some translations for some of the words you've been using.

Varukirri = Valkyrie

Valhalla = Valhall

Hope this helps, and I happen to BE norwegian so I can transelate anything you want.

Sure, I'm all ears!

Njalm2 12:01, June 5, 2011 (UTC)

Opinion
Hi how you doin Td?

I am wondering, could you take a look at Masashi (He is still in progress and he is a bit freaky) but could I have your opinion on him. 戦闘丸,Sento-Sama (come and see) 02:40, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

Hey Td, I did manage to get Masashi's powers up and into his page. So when you get time, can you look over him and see what you think of his stuff. Thanks 戦闘丸,Sento-Sama (come and see) 04:00, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

RE: Longwei
Twilight, I have to apologize for the late response, I'm not ignoring you or your suggestions on what to do with Longwei, I do appreciate them as they've been helpful in narrowing down exactly what had happened to make him so weak. Although I wont be using the aforementioned suggestions, you gave me, like I said they did help narrow the list down drastically. Anyways, I'm still in the process of constructing him and so forth, but its going to be awhile, since I still have one last character left on the back burner who I've neglected for so long - Dorothy. Once she's finished with her...revisions, I'll be clear to go with Longwei. Once again, thanks for the help. --- Illuminate Void (Talk) 02:57, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I've been trying to catch up on some reading, and my weekened was pretty busy. Lately when I make updates, its a bunch of updates at one time, given how things are changing around my place. Just needed a break from everything, some time to get some fresh prespective, new ideas, etc. But thanks for asking man, how are things going on your end? --- Illuminate Void (Talk) 20:15, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

I would suggest looking at this: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Takamagahara. Although short it could provide some inspiration. If you're going with predominately japanese culture, than perhaps you should consider some japanese mythology in the Kosumosukihaku. They appear to have quite a number of similiarties to the Kotoamatsukami which is where I was in a way basing Longwei off of, given how you've presented them. I could go on about the similiarities between the Shinigami and the other kami, but thats for another day. Just check those two links out and see if anythings interesting. --- Illuminate Void (Talk) 22:04, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

I hinted that there were many wars in the past, so whichever one it doesnt matter really. As for becoming the king permanently that also doesnt make sense. How could there have been three kings before Kiyoshi if that was the case? Although at the moment, there is actually very little reason for Longwei to meet with Kiyoshi and even if they did, it would probably turn violent. He's still a bit sore from having his powers sealed and the subsequent banishment. I need him to mellow out a bit, and grow in strength. He's currently one of the weakest characters on the BFF too. So he'll need to gain some power. --- Illuminate Void (Talk) 23:30, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

It would make sense. You have permission to make any reference you want to Longwei, though do ask for my permission if it concerns specific events in their history. Not that you havent already, but just reiterating. --- Illuminate Void (Talk) 21:46, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

Ya know, one thing I've been curious about is, the construction of how a Cosmos Soul attains their powers, and why there is a large number of just..."ordinary" souls that exist. In the Cosmos Soul description they seem to be more of a collection of very powerful souls. As opposed to a race, they seem more like a family or a Clan. You might want to explain why they arent born immortal, and besides explaining the effects of immortaility (which you go into far too much detail than is necessary), you should explain why the immortaility itself is there. What triggers the immortaility if its something to be attained? Sorry if I seem nosy regarding the race, but thats just how I am. --- Illuminate Void (Talk) 19:41, June 21, 2011 (UTC)

Not exactly sure, at the moment, I'm actually trying to catch up on so many fanfictions I need to read, and their word count...god I just finished one or rather caught with up a Harry Potter fanfic that has more words than the entire book series combined, and its still not finished. Im going to be reading this bleach fanfic, probably the best one out there, havent gotten a chance to finish it, interest in bleach waned for a bit, but I'm gonna finish it. Hopefully I'll learn some tips on the way for writing respectable dialogue and devising plots and whatnot. Though who do have to RP thats at Longwei's current level? He's essentially a glorified seated officer, not much better though. Normal Hollows will be giving him a challenge, and Menos will potentially kill him. He's weak right now and overcoming that weakness is important to his development as a character. --- Illuminate Void (Talk) 03:16, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Well Shino Terasawa is a Rangiku class so no with that one. My weakest character is Sora Hana and he is at a third seated officer level. No strike that Spirit is my weakest character.: The Twilight of Your Despair 03:36, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

The most likely answer is no, Longwei would have been stripped of it as part of his banishment, and the circumstances surrounding his banishment have likely left a foul taste in his mouth for the rest of his family. As for the other Cosmos Souls its hard to say, though given his abilities he would likely help them if they needed it. I suppose the same could be said for his family, though it would take a great threat to prompt him to help them. At this point, with him created, I'm not exactly sure where to start him. When I designed him he seems more of a story type character, one created for his own manga in a way. I'll have to write his story or at least its beginnings, but not at the moment. I'm bogged down with other RPs, not to mention paper after paper for summer classes. --- Illuminate Void (Talk) 21:59, June 29, 2011 (UTC)

hm
Hmm honestly, it was fair but personally i didn't like how your attempted to "direct" the way things flowed, the participants seemed far more robatic than usual. I know its your creation and all but it wouldve been better to let things just flow rather than telling them that certain things needed to happen. Wouldve made it funnier if they did something wrong or tried to figure out what was going on. You know what I mean? <font color="#0255255" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#2550255" face="Tahoma">Light  02:01, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

12th division
Hi Td5 how you doing

I am still working on him, I did his appearance and Personality. I am hoping, what I did was he was a former 4th seat. So yeah we could have something between them. How about you read his personality and maybe we can see what we can do. I still have to make the relationship with the captian. so yeah look at what I have so far and then we can go from there. ~   Sentonara of  the Spirits  03:47, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

I see whatcha getting at Td, how about that they wouldn't get along. I can see they are compelete opposites, thought maybe like one thing. Ryuhaku seen Mayuri as a mentor or such and has put some of his traits into his personality. But the one thing that he has that mayuri didn't is that. He wants the 12th division to the best out of the 13 divisions. But what could happen is that, maybe that your character can try to hold back ryuhaku. From trying to yell and taunt the members of the squad. that can be the hate they have for eachother. Though underneath, he only wants his division to be the best.

My idea with his was, I wanted him to have maybe a higher status that a normal Lieutenants like before in that bleach turn back the clock or whatever. That some Lieutenants where within the captians meetings. Now I put this up for discussion, I want him to be like a strategist or tactician to the Gotei 13. Thats why I kinda gave him an Haori because I want to put him as maybe one who wants to have a high status.  ~   Sentonara of  the Spirits  04:01, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Ok Td, I can do that. They both have a love to research that can be the only thing they may have in comman. Then maybe likehe will go by that code thing. But he will question it alot, but he knows that it will be for the best of the division status so ok then.Though I will still try to keep that idea of him being a strategist or tactician  ~   Sentonara of  the Spirits  04:19, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Ok Td, I wouldn't mind doing an RP with the two. So would it be like, that he was made the captain and he wanted to meet all of the members of the division and then he sees Ryuhaku and then go from there. ~   Sentonara of  the Spirits  23:42, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Oh yeah Td, I am still working on Ryuhaku as well. so he was promoted to captain and then we can go from there how does that sound when your character is done? then by that time, Ryuhaku will be done as well. ~   Sentonara of  the Spirits  23:53, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Ok Td, I am still experimenting with Ryuhaku. I can make the changes to him, I still want to get most of his info together and then I can make most of the changes but I can change him no probelm. ~   Sentonara of  the Spirits  02:01, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

Td, how about we do this. I will lower his Kido and speed down to like 75 but could ryuhaku be the better swordsmen? ~   Sentonara of  the Spirits  02:06, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

Ok td, that is fair enough. But Let Ryuhaku do as he pleases, when it comes to research of course the captain can try to stop him. ~   Sentonara of  the Spirits  02:35, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

Ok Td, mostly he knows if its like a emecery or whatever he will listen to his captan. Now as for the Rp, would you like to start it up or should I? If I would start it up I would just start it out as saying like. "All the members of the 12th division where gathered at there HQ waiting for some news or something like that. ~   Sentonara of  the Spirits  02:50, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

Ok Td, my only personal thing of mine is. If your going first could you leave a link to the rp itself on my talk page thanks and I have to warn you. I am still getting use to the RP onto here, so forgive me if I kinda go overboard lol. ~   Sentonara of  the Spirits  02:56, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

No just having a little treat for his captain. ~   Sentonara of  the Spirits  02:19, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

Satonaka
Sure. I will be scutinizing it lol Two things, they usually have some sort of manipulation ability and they dont usually use anything besides spiritual energy lol. =P bwahaha jk <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Yuri <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  01:36, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

Haha I was kidding but sure...let's go with what you said =P It'll be good to se what you come up with. Hmm as for the relation that's entirely up to you though It can't be any higher than Brother/Sister to Shiro, Van and Toru, as I already have all the Parents figured out. I hope that makes sense =) <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Yuri <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  02:20, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

Nooooooo! don't tell me...just make it up and then let me see lol. Then we can RP it out to see if it all works out =) <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Yuri <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  02:30, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

Ok thats fine. <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Yuri <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  02:35, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

not really. just alive =P <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Yuri <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  02:46, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

Just do as you please. Don't worry about it. I'll let you know if anything needs changing. <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Yuri <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  03:18, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

Ive been keeping track. No need to tell me pal. lol But yea they're looking good. As for the Satonaka member...who are her parents? What relation does she have with the others? <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Yuri <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  03:17, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

Well thats the thing I didnt want like a large clan filled with various people just yet =P But hm why don't you have her be the daughter of Inai and Araziel who I havent revealed to be the father just yet. That way she's is half-siblings with most of the Satonaka boys and ful blooded sibiling with Toru Satonaka. =) <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Yuri <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  03:28, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

Well Inai wouldnt just go sleeping around lol jk jk. That works for me. As does the Culinary thing. Though I dont see the point of having it labled as Grandmaster. Master is fine. As she wouldnt primarily rely on cooking in combat would she? Cause if she's a grandmaster chef she better be able to cook a giant ball of death coming down at her pretty fast hahaha. <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Yuri <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  03:55, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

Haha thats fine. Cant wait to see what you come up with. <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Yuri <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  04:14, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah
Graduation was pretty good, the weather was excellent. I've been working at Taekwondo more often, and also been looking for another job too to start getting some money in for college. I have a decent amount stashed away, but it won't be enough to pay for the entire four years, and I'd like to get a jump start on it. So yeah, plus, I've had alittle writer's block lately, so I'm hoping to work on some characters and hopefully get some sort of spark started in my head. How are you? --Seireitou-shishō (My True Identity 19:11, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

May I have a review? From Ash
Hey there Td5, how are you going? Anyway, I was wondering if you could give me a short or detailed review (I don't care which) of Jin Terumi, I think that he is quite a nice character. If you want to RP with him, I don't mind at all.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 07:22, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Well hope that gets fixed, anyway, thanks.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 21:36, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Sure, I don't mind. That's one of the only things I'm good at, lol<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 21:48, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

done! If you want a review on him later I'll be glad to give him one, and nice image!<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 21:49, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

Oh yeah! That's right, it's Cornelia isn't it? Sorry I'm a little off today. By the way, I was wondering, if she's done and she's in the Jusanseiza I presume? If we could RP, I'll use Jin Terumi and you can use her, if you want.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 21:59, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

sorry, I just presumed that. Well I guess I can fight Kiyoshi, don't know what he's like, and Haru is epicly strong, I don't think I could keep up that well, lol, but he's an awesome character.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 22:07, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

Well that's fine, I'm going to school, so see ya!<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 22:15, June 16, 2011 (UTC)

Sure, why not, btw I live in Australia so yeah. And Purinsu is a cool character, I'll RP with him if you want, by the way, you want me to put the image in his infobox?<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 05:10, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

By the way, does his last name have to be Souzou?<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 05:49, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

By the way, here he is! Hope you like him, although he isn't done. Is he Kiyoshi's brother?<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 06:43, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

Ok no problem, by the way am I allowed to use him for RP's against others? And I'll put the pic in right away.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 21:42, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

Sure, you can start it, they could have a sparring session, could they?<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 21:50, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

Ok then, I have no problem with that.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 22:02, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

By the way, how do you like Junsui's Philosophy, although it's still in completion.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 22:49, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 22:57, June 17, 2011 (UTC)

Oh ok, I'll change it.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 00:42, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

Ok thanks!<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 03:51, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

hey man, before we continue, do you mind if I add some stuff to Junsui's philosophy section, just so people don't think I'm randomly adding abilities, even though he's your character.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 07:45, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

Oh ok, I thought you'd use him in a storyline or something. You know, we could do a collaborative storyline a little while later (after my RP's start to rest) and when you're free, cause your Kosumosukihaky race is really cool, we could base it off two young Kosumosukihaku and such.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 07:51, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

No problem.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 08:00, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I don't mind.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 08:26, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

Thank You
Thank you for the offer, but I already had the picture saved xD. I'm waiting to expand to add more pictures, or else it would look very unorganized and sloppy.-- Hohenheim ☯ Talk ☯ 06:22, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

RE:Paradiso
I personaly like it Td, it makes me want to wait and see what it is really for and stuff. Now can you tell me what do you think of this ~   Sentonara of  the Spirits  01:50, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

Well the three great sages idea came from a very old thing I wanted to do, but never got the time to do it. I didn't really get the idea from avatar. I got this idea from a set of men, back in Japan that served under Hideyoshi that acted as advisers to him.

On to the demonic and divine knowing thing. I personaly am catholic, but I look into the Buddha and Hindu beliefs. Which all in reality are all the same. Just be a good person and you will be good haha. Though alot of my ideas from the demons and others are from just things I come up with out of the blue. I just need to see a picture, and most of the times I can figure out a back stroy and all that for a charatcer. I am really creative -.- although my drawing skills suck. ~   Sentonara of  the Spirits  02:03, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

Well Td not many know this about me but, I believe this. that the buddha himself and even the hindu dieties. The buddha was sent by a higher power to help teach the world peace, though he WAS NOT the messiah. He is most like a great Saint in my eyes. Then onto the hindu Dieities, they where created to act mostly like either messageners or maybe a bit more powerful angels that will help people of the 'All mighty" on his behalf. Though they should NEVER be put before the all might one. well thats what I believe hahah ~   Sentonara of  the Spirits  02:18, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

Yes each sage well almost all the sages have their own article thing. I just need to work on the sage of the viod. These sages can be playable. ~   Sentonara of  the Spirits  02:32, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

yeah yeah I know I was only kidding, I wouldn't another Masashi running around up there haha. I will start trying to get something together. ~   Sentonara of  the Spirits  01:49, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

Sōzō Clan
Sorry for the late reply, things have been hectic with my two jobs. Anyways, I'd be glad to make the character for the Sōzō Clan. Any specifics on what sort of character you want me to make? --Seireitou-shishō (My True Identity 05:08, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

RE: Hey
Personally, I'm all for it, but that decision isnt up to us remember? Though given that its Sei, I'm sure that no one's going to have a problem with it, but I suppose that this is more of a formality anyway, than something that needs to be discussed at length. --- Illuminate Void (Talk) 23:28, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Well a few things I need to establish with Longwei is what "era" he'd be roleplaying in. To make things easier for me at least, I'd prefer if his "story" occured roughly...two centuries or so before canon. Also, given that he's in the Academy, I'm not quite sure how Spirit could roleplay with him. To be honest, as long as the character is around the strength of a Lieutenant than it should be fine. But I have no idea how Spirit would meet with him in the first place or what logical reason he'd have to be in Soul Society let alone associate with a character who will go out of his way to insult the guy and be left alone. The trouble with this kind of character is that circumstances generally force him to work with others. --- Illuminate Void (Talk) 19:04, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

Re:Paradiso
Yeah Td, I would. I will take a look at the clan and see what I come up with. ~   Sentonara of  the Spirits  01:18, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm of td would you like my charatcer be a brother or sister to Kiyoshi Souzou or something else? ~   Sentonara of  the Spirits  01:24, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

ok then, A male cousin it will be, but if I may ask can the Sages, having something with my character or mayber to do with these god like beings? To be honest I have to find a thing for them. Beside being the most trust worthy group of advisers that the soul society has.  ~   Sentonara of  the Spirits  01:33, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

yes I was thining of the sages as mostly teachers to him. -.- and fine no demonic abilities :P  ~   Sentonara of  the Spirits  01:41, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

Td I did have someone created if you take a look, I had to use kiyosko or how ever you spell it as a guide. I think I got most of the info down. but anyway here is the Page, I am not sure at all about his powers only that since he is an apprenticesage. he is very skilled in the light ways of Kido. ~   Sentonara of  the Spirits  02:48, June 23, 2011 (UTC)

Kaosu's discussion
Well, I do think he was being partially harsh to you, and you didn't reply with anger, in fact you were quite polite, if you want, you can report him to Fenix or someone? I like the name Kaosu, or just a suggestion, perhaps he is called Kaosu, but his real name is the hiragana translation of Chaos? Just a suggestion though.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 05:21, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Honestly yea. I mean its exactly as you said. Its YOUR character. You can choose how you translate the names. Now if he had just said it differently then no it wouldnt be but the fact that you asked him to desist but he continued anyway makes it harassment. Hmm..I think it was taken out of hand cause there is no logical reason other than the fact that it just annoys him seeing as no one else seemed to mind except him. <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Yuri <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  05:40, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, he is your character, he's awesome, and the name's cool as well so it doesn't matter.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 05:46, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Yea. Well he's not a memberof the Gf so Icant do much to him. But I really didnt expect him to be the type to do something like that. He seemed pretty nice to me. Hmm well anyway just wait to see what the admins say. <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Yuri <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">Kucabara-Dono  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  05:54, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, don't worry about it.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 08:22, June 24, 2011 (UTC)


 * Don't worry, I'll set King straight. I apologize for his immaturity. --Seireitou-shishō [[File:Seireitou's signature picture.jpg]] (My True Identity 19:53, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

RE:Souzou Clan
Well ok td, but can I ask you on Sentonara and orokashii (he was created for comic relief but still see whatcha think of him). thanks  ~   Sentonara of  the Spirits  06:40, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

RE: Hiroya vs Kiyoshi
Well, I don't see any reason for Hiroya to fight Kiyoshi, because while Hiroya detests Kiyoshi greatly he would never seek to harm or injure him for that reason; and it'll be really hard to reverse Hiroya's negative opinions of him, as Kiyoshi pretty much suggested that he gave his subjects away as "playthings" for visitors, the fact that he offended Kenji and pretty much kidnapped him to boot only serves to add to that score; and Kiyoshi doesn't need to remedy it to get Hiroya's help in a case, Hiroya would be willing to help anyone if it was for a good cause. There is one possible solution to your request though, and that would be for Kiyoshi to pre-emptively attack Hiroya; this will of course detoriate their relationship further but you'll get your battle.

Kiyoshi offended Kenji when he offered him "intercourse with whoever he wanted" this is also what offended Hiroya personally as well - as it indicates that Kiyoshi uses his own subjects as playthings for those who visit him in his realm - also, Hiroya has no interest whatsoever in magical artifacts, especially not ones of such power such as that sphere; besides, Hiroya would only further loathe Kiyoshi if he felt that the latter was trying to "buy" his good will trough such. Its quite hard to regain Hiroya's trust if you've managed to lose it - even more so given that Kiyoshi never had a trusty relationship in the first place.

Master N 11:41, June 28, 2011 (UTC)

Mr. Kou
I see you're having trouble with the RTE. Well, to change your editor, go to your preferences and click the "Editing" tab. Once you get to that page, just find where it says "enable Rich Text Editor." Uncheck that box, save at the bottom of the page and you should be already to go with the coding editor (which I find much easier to use). Hope this helps.


 * Hmm, well then I guess it's because there are so many kidou-type zanpakutou in the list. But what do you mean by "editing with source?" Are you meaning source as in wiki code? If you are, then I don't know why you think it's difficult; I've been using it since I first appeared on wikia over a year now. Anyways, I hope that everything works out for you.


 * Hiya, Despair. I was wondering if you'd like to have an RP with me, with you using Masanori and I using either Fūma Kotarō, Naishō Kawahiru or Oda Nobunaga. If you choose the former two, we can start the RP, if you accept, as soon as you'd like. However, if you pick Nobunaga, we'll have to wait till this week. I know you have your RP with Sei coming up, so I thought, "why not have Masanori face another Kawahiru, or someone of equal strength to said Kawahiru?" So, if you wish to accept my offer, I shall be waiting. Ciao~


 * Well, it'll have to wait till tomorrow, seeing as I have two concerts to perform at tonight, so I won't be home till late at night. So, we can start it whenever you get on tomorrow. It's about 5 PM, my time, in case you were wondering around what times I'm on. Some people do, so I just give everyone a heads up. Anyways, I have to leave, so I'll see ya tomorrow. Ciao~

If you would be so kind to start our RP, I'd be greatly appreciative of you. I ask for two reasons: one, I suck at introductions to RP's; and two, I'm trying to finish Oda Nobunaga's personality. So, I need to focus on writing that before I attempt starting an RP.


 * Your go. Would you rather we tell each other when it's our turn to post, or just go by looking at the recent activity page? Also, I changed the name to "Discord between Clansmen," due to the fact that I find it to be intriguing to the reader. I hope you don't mind...


 * Okee doke. It'll be your post in a few minutes(:


 * Hey, I just wanted to say that when doing RP's it's best to write in past tense, as it sounds rather weird when reading something in present tense in a roleplay. Anyways, I was wondering if I could use Naishō's hollow powers in this RP. If you have read the RP A Game with the Gamemaster, you'd notice that Naishō is developing an inner hollow, and I'd like to use him in this battle. However, I have yet to post this on Naishō's article, so I will understand completely if you wish for me not to use these abilities. Your post, by the way.

Well, there's no need, seeing as I get on my phone to check BFFW just about every forty minutes. Anyways, your post when you return.


 * Sorry, I thought you weren't on yet. Usually, most people I RP with aren't on when I am, which is why I said that.


 * Like I told you before, I don't like philosophy or reason being used as zanpakutō; so I wouldn't be helpful in the least.


 * EDIT: Change your post. When I said "impossible to find," I meant impossible to find.


 * ...wow. You have just lost all of the respect I had for you in that one post. I ask you to change it because you made Masanori do something I stated it was impossible to do, so you go "I'm bored. hardyharhar." Whatever, I don't care anymore.

Well, I don't play off of deserters in the middle of a RP. If people were fixing your internet, you could have easily just have waited until they were done to change it. That way I wouldn't think that you're just up and leaving. And, I will not continue your "I'm leaving, so come chase me," tactic. They piss me off to no end. So, unless you'd rather not RP anymore, then I suggest changing your post.


 * You didn't have to tell me. I mean, they fixed in, what? A half hour? It's not like it doesn't take people hours to reply. You could have just waited, then changed it. Then none of this would have transpired.


 * Your post, and, if you had read Naishō's zanpakutō, you'd know that he didn't actually release his shikai. "I want to become" is his initial release command, but it doesn't actually release his shikai. That's why I like it; 'cause it confuses the enemy into thinking that Naishō had released his zanpakutō, but in truth, he only appeared to have released it.


 * Already did.

Hi, Despair. I was wondering if I could have the one and only character that can destroy philosophy. The reason I ask this as they will be the former Captain-Commander and their zanpakutou has the ability to destroy anything by using it's own kinetic energy against it. If you say I can't, I completely understand; if you say I can, awesome! I hope to hear from you asap.


 * I guess that I can't do that, 'cause that is not how my zanpakutō works. See here for what it does (scroll down to the bottom of the section).


 * Okay; and thanks for the name, but I already had one in mind.


 * Actually, it was both. I did it because it was your work, so you'd be the one to decide it, but I also did it 'cause if I did it without your permission, you, with a few others, would probably bitch at me about it, and I do not allow bitchiness about something so dumb as the internet. So, whatever you decide is fine with me, and here's the character that'll have the ability. Ciao~

The wording's fine, but you could always just say that quincies and Orijinaru can completely dispel philosophy. But, whatever; your choice. And here's the completed character.


 * No, I'd rather not do another rp at the moment. Also, for future reference, I'd rather that you'd post a new reply in your original section, as I find more than one section per user incredibly unorganized (thank my extreme ocd for that one).


 * It wasn't that hard, so I thought I'd save Ketchum the trouble.


 * Sorry, but I have to focus on my own characters that aren't yet finished before I do anything else.

I saw the message earlier, and I'm all for it; I'd like to have another rp with GF v. Sei again. So, he's got my vote (though I really doubt it's necessary). On a completely different note, would mind look over Tsubame Shihoin and tell me what you think.


 * First, thanks for the short little review. Secondly, why did you give Tsubame an 11/10? Lastly, what did you mean by this sentence. "In personality well detailed but no so detailed that others just sick it."


 * I know that it was your honest opinion, I just didn't think Tsubame was that good.


 * Okay, I have two things to ask you: 1 - Tsubame is completed, so you can give your "proper" rating now; and 2 - if you're not going to participate in it anymore, please make your team for the Tournament of Spirits before Thursday. Ciao~

Okay, I'm also migrating all my messages on your talk page to this section, so don't be surprised when it's really long. Moving on, let's begin: Purinsu Kuchiki
 * {| border="1" cellpadding="1" cellspacing="1" style="width: 500px"

! scope="col"|Offense ! scope="col"|Defense ! scope="col"|Speed ! scope="col"|Kidō/Reiatsu ! scope="col"|Intelligence ! scope="col"|Stamina ! scope="col"|Total ! scope="col"|85 ! scope="col"|100 ! scope="col"|80 ! scope="col"|85 ! scope="col"|80 ! scope="col"|90 ! scope="col"|520 Haru Nakamaru
 * }
 * {| border="1" cellpadding="1" cellspacing="1" style="width: 500px"

! scope="col"|Offense ! scope="col"|Defense ! scope="col"|Speed ! scope="col"|Kidō/Reiatsu ! scope="col"|Intelligence ! scope="col"|Stamina ! scope="col"|Total ! scope="col"|80 ! scope="col"|95 ! scope="col"|75 ! scope="col"|95 ! scope="col"|100 ! scope="col"|90 ! scope="col"|535 Kiyoshi Souzou
 * }
 * {| border="1" cellpadding="1" cellspacing="1" style="width: 500px"

! scope="col"|Offense ! scope="col"|Defense ! scope="col"|Speed ! scope="col"|Kidō/Reiatsu ! scope="col"|Intelligence ! scope="col"|Stamina ! scope="col"|Total ! scope="col"|90 ! scope="col"|100 ! scope="col"|100 ! scope="col"|95 ! scope="col"|100 ! scope="col"|85 ! scope="col"|570 There you go, Despair.
 * }


 * Huh? What brought this on?


 * Well, you're not one of my favorite users, but I don't hate you. And there is no one that could ever become Grizzaka. He was the worst person I have ever encountered on this wiki, and nothing could be worse than him. Your ideas losing their meaning? I don't know what their meaning was, so I don't have an answer to that one. About new users, I really couldn't care less about a new user, so I usually tend to blatantly ignore anything they say to me (yes, I'm a mean person). Lastly, I really didn't think the Kaosu "argument" (if you can even call it that) was that big of a deal, seeing as no one is hurt. If anything, I just found it quite comical.


 * No, thank you. My characters are all being used in my own storyline with Sup! (PersonaSuperiorDeus), so they can't. Sorry.

They're both a correct hiragana translation, but eudict also gives the translation of Tenjin (てんじん, Japanese for "celestial maiden"), which I think rolls off the tongue better. You don't have to use it; just a suggestion.


 * Honestly, I find them to be the same as yūreiyushi with just a different genetic make-up and name.


 * Here's a slightly different name, but I think it suits it better: Shintoku (神徳, Japanese for "divine virtues") And I may make some if I find the time.


 * I don't know where you get your translations, because, out of the three reliable websites I use, I cannot find "shin" as divine/heavenly/whatever. As for the divine way translation, I found this: Zaitenuei (在天ウェイ, Japanese for "divine way").

New Races
Thank you. While I am here, can I ask if all pages have to have a japanese name? I wanted to call my race the prophets and am not a fan of the japanese word for prophet.--Vaius21 21:17, June 28, 2011 (UTC)

You as Well
I wish you a happy Fourth of July as well, and have yourself a good time at those countries. --Seireitou-shishō (My True Identity 16:54, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

Formal Apology
This is long overdue Twilight, but I'd like to apologize for my behavior towards you. I have no explanation for my actions, as they were wrong in every sense. It was your article, in every aspect, and I have no right to hinder your creativity or deny your choices. I understand if you do not wish to accept, I was quite an ass.-- Hohenheim ☯ Talk ☯ 17:07, June 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * I appreciate it :) I have been very informal lately in alot of my doings and am trying to get back on track to my normal self.-- Hohenheim ☯ Talk ☯ 17:32, June 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * Sure, I should have it up by tonight :) Any personal requirments you would like?-- Hohenheim ☯ Talk ☯ 20:29, June 30, 2011 (UTC)
 * Sounds like a plan, but I must warn you. I'm not the best RP'er-- Hohenheim ☯ Talk ☯ 03:56, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Yo
Dude, my RP list hasn't dried up any since our last chat. If anything I'm busier than ever, 'cause I haven't gotten round to posting my latest updates lately. Writers block on my part :P Besides, Kenji isn't the main focus of my attention at the minute 'cause any major development he's gonna go through happens in the Liberation Saga I've got planned for the end of Part II and Inquiry into Madness with Raze and Kou. The members of the Rookie Six are my main focus at the minute, excepting Kentaro, 'cause I got his training sorted and explained in Ancient Blood Returns earlier today. As soon as Raze finishes up Haruki and Azami's training in the Training Arc he's got going with Kou's Naishō Kawahiru, we'll be starting into the Soul Society arc proper. As soon as its finished my own characters will be launching their own raid of Kōhai Tochi. And on the side, I'm participating in Kou's Tournament of Spirits arc. On that subject, you entering? If you are, we might get drew against each other. You should enter a team, dude. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  19:04, July 1, 2011 (UTC)


 * The Bankai will obviously have some connection with the Shikai, so an additive to the actual Shikai name would probably work the best, dude. What that could be though, I have no idea. Think of something that works with Colorless World and Immortal Untainted God, either before or after the name. My Kusaka's Bankai is Ameno Shagetsu, while Kenji's is Sanmiittai Seikatsu Shinsei for example. Sorry I couldn't help out, pal. And I'll be using Zettaiteki in Kou's tourney. It'll have some rudimentary new skills learned as a result of Inquiry into Madness, 'cause in that RP its the only weapon I plan on him using so he can familiarize himself with it. If you wanna see Kenji and Kusaka's goals for the tourney, then check out Team Ryū. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  09:24, July 3, 2011 (UTC)


 * Twilight, the simple truth is that power is simply way too OP to be used in an RP or even story-line, pal. Causing death simply by touching someone? Zettaiteki may be a powerful weapon, but even for it; causing a one-hit kill is godmodding to the extreme, so it won't be on Kenji's article, dude. Add it to Zettaiteki's individual article if you want - it is your creation after all - but that skill won't be added to Kenji's article. Zettaiteki's powers are developed to fit the users theme of powers anyway, which for Kenji is retribution and the three forms his zanpakutō takes - which are mercy, justice and vengeance. Even if the skill was made more usable, it doesn't fit with Kenji's theme of powers in the first place - hence Zettaiteki wouldn't provide him with the ability to use it in the first place, pal. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  20:59, July 5, 2011 (UTC)


 * Not to be a pain dude, but Kenji isn't Goku lol. The new revision only really works for people who, after fighting their fiercest enemy, turns around and forgives them for doing what they did; turning them into their greatest ally in the process. Like Goku does with almost everyone he's ever fought in Dragon Ball and early Dragon Ball Z. And any villains I have - out of respect and companionship Kenji would never use that ability on anyone he deems a friend - are already showing their true selves, so the ability kinda becomes entirely void pal. I know your trying to help, but Zettaiteki has enough powers at the minute, considering he's still familiarizing himself with the sword and it with him. Its a slow process that won't suddenly happen one day. It'll need development, pal. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  07:13, July 6, 2011 (UTC)


 * That's perfectly fine with me, dude. Its not as if Kenji will always have the sword. Things change hands eventually. Anyways there is one thing I don't get. How could revealing someones true self drive them to madness, though? I don't see the connection between the two. Unless they're consciously suppressing it themselves, in which case the person in question is aware of the behavior they wish to mask, it would simply bring about an outward and inward change in personality when the behavior is no longer suppressed. Even if they happened to suppress it into the unconscious to prevent psychological harm in some way, it would still only bring about a change in persona because the person would recognize the behavior from past experiences stored in their conscious memory as soon as the unconscious stopped working against it. The mind is a massive store of information and past experience, especially if your looking at the cognitive approach to psychological development, meaning everything you do in life - from the second your born to the day you die is recorded and filed away for future use. The only people the ability would cause madness to, pal, are those who've suffered from memory lose, and are thus unable to recall their previous memories - thus not knowing about their previous personality state which they're trying to suppress. See what I mean, pal? The most it would do would cause confusion to the opponent being hit - not madness. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  07:33, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

It still doesn't make any sense, though. I'll admit every heart has good and bad intentions, but that ability doesn't follow any level of reason, pal. People don't usually do the extreme opposite of their true feelings, because everyone has a conscience and that would make you doubt your actions. People who kill things and then get the desire to plant flowers? Its too great a somersault to be plausible in my mind. Aside from the comical side I can't see a use for it, dude :P Then there's the problems it would bring about in RP's. BFF might not be listed as an RP wiki, but thats what it essentially is, and no one would like their characters changed in such an abrupt manner when they're expecting nothing more than some friendly competition to further their own stories. And your still completely disregarding the psychological implications, pal. Bleach may be supernatural in almost every respect, but the person is still an individual with the same thought and mental processes as you and me. A change that abrupt to the psyche would trigger unconscious defense mechanisms that would deal with the threat, especially repression of said threat into the unconscious. I know 'cause I've studied psychology for two years straight, nearly cracking my own psyche in the process from how boring it all was :P But whatever. I'm not gonna ramble on anymore, dude. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  08:02, July 6, 2011 (UTC)


 * Cheers for the offer pal, but I'm sweet. The only wish I needed was the one Kasou already granted - the freeing of Rosuto from the Wandering Spirit World. Sure I'll vault 'em away though for later use :p <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  18:28, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

OK
well dude,let's do it Daisuke Yagami

Key
Hmm not off the top off my head. I wouldnt mind taking the Key anyway and maybe having one of my younger chacters go there to further their training. <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">"Rin-Okumura  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  21:22, July 2, 2011 (UTC)

Hm. I think I want to give the key to Anna Satonaka as she's pretty much able to utilize any skill by muscle memory and her zanpakuto. So she would be able to utilize certain aspects of philosophy as well. <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">"Rin-Okumura  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  04:33, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

RP
This is the RP story The Calm Before of The Storm:Human and Sozoshin and still your turn

Daisuke Yagami 19:28, July 2, 2011 (UTC)

Ummm...
I'm not really too good either...You've have to ask someone better than me.--シルバー人柱力 - The Silver Jinchūriki. ("Talk to me.") 04:29, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

RE: Masanori Kawahiru
Hiroya's not really on the best of terms with Masanori either, given how the latter silently bragged about his power during the Valhalla tournament and well, Masanori likely wouldn't be able to make Hiroya fight him unless it was in self-defense. Master N 09:24, July 3, 2011 (UTC)


 * Well, a talking roleplay would certainly work, though I think one should mash the chats with Kiyoshi, Kaosu and Masanori into a single roleplay, different chapters if you will. Master N 10:42, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

you turn
jejeje I'll keep that in mind next time, well is time to fight your turn Daisuke Yagami 18:27, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

is you turn now Daisuke Yagami 19:50, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

<p style="text-align: justify">Hey pal, Daisuke no have the power level to fight with masanori so we could focus the RP story about how masanori can help Daisuke to train, I hope you help me with that Daisuke Yagami 14:25, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

RE:Natsu Ginjo Pics
Oh yeah, those pics are from Densetsu no Yuusha no Densetsu, or just Densetsu no Yuusha (Legend of the Legendary Heroes is the full meaning) and the character's name is Sion Astal, you can use the pic with the sword if you want?<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 00:05, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

It's ok, I'm not going to use any others, if I do, and you have them before me, I'll ask you, is that ok?<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 00:41, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah I know, I saw that as well<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 00:46, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

No probs.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 00:51, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

A wish? Such as more power? Why not, what do you think would be appropiate though?<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 03:02, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

What about we could have a slight twist type of thing. Ok, so let's imagine we do a RP where Natsu and your Kiyoshi fight and Kaosu is viewing everything from somewhere, and once the battle is concluded he could appear and because he admired Natsu's skills or something, granted him one of the powers of a Kosumosukihaku? Would that make sense?<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 03:19, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

That's really funny.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 03:20, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Then what if Kaosu creates a special type of equipment that allows Natsu to negate the effects of Reason and Sekkisekki (albeit for an extremely limited period of time, about 2 minutes maximum)? Cause I don't want to go through the trouble of a transformation, as my character is of this race that Dues (PersonaSuperiorDeus) has created.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 03:39, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Kiyoshi vs Natsu
Hey I was wondering if we could do a RP between Kiyoshi and Natsu, as they look alike, it'd be funny to see the outcome don't you think?<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 03:14, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

That'd be cool, why not. So what should we name it, I was thinking of something along the lines of Identical yet Apart, mainly because of difference in personality yet similarities in appearance <font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 04:09, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Of course, although you should ask Dues just in case, he's the creator of the species.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 04:15, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Sure, that would be good. Although can we not release our zanpakutou during the fight, as I don't want to create his zanpakutou just yet, as Mototsu zanpakutou are a real pain, do you mind?<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 04:40, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Well then the wish could be knowledge on the Kosumosukihaku and Philosophy? But, instead of explaining it, Kaosu could just 'place' it into Natsu's mind, and if he ever fights or encounters a Kosumosukihaku or user of Philosophy he could know what it is or something?<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 04:53, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

So then let's keep it to the artifact that negates sekkisekki and reason then shall we? As that isn't Philosophy is it?<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 05:06, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

So that's that then? Then should I start, and should we use the name Identical yet Apart?<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 05:25, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, got it, but what did you mean by Please? Did you mean I should start?<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 05:42, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Sure, but it can't be in the Kyuuten no Souzou can it? Should it just be in Rukongai? In a desolate area.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 05:46, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Okey Dokey, let's get started.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 05:52, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Here you go. Your turn.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 05:58, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

No problem.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 08:43, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Sure, I don't mind helping you with those. Exactly what do you need help on?<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 02:16, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Sure.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 02:24, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Wish
Hmmm I'm not sure on a wish just yet but it would probably be to increase Haruki's fuulbring down the line. Like grant it the ability of evolution or something like that. But since I've yet to actually use it in an RP yet I dont want to go and make it stronger just yet. OH! Could you tell me what you think of Haruki's fullbring and Van's new trance ability as well? <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">"Rin-Okumura  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  03:44, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Hahah Van's isnt supposed to be scary. He's more of a lover than a fighter =P But hmm....idk about the other wishes just yet. Seeing as I'm utilizing any of them atm I guess i can keep them in storage until they're needed. haha. But hmmm...honestly pal...I would re-word the predate time thing. That would cause too many unneeded fight with people as it may clash with their religion or not make sense to them. You could have him predate the establishment of the Soul Society and existed on a different plane or somthing like that. But its your article so i cant make you do anyting. <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">"Rin-Okumura  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  04:21, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Haha I was kidding about Van but oh ok...then I suppose yu dont have to change it then. lol. But bah! I dont believe in being careful...theres no fun in that. I prefer taking risks asmuch a posiible hahaha <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">"Rin-Okumura  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  04:39, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Yea she could take part but as for restoring former powers, well Van pretty much has access to all of his old abilities in some form so that wouldnt be necessary. <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">"Rin-Okumura  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  23:40, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Um nope not at all =P..eh dont bother thinking about it, You probably wont come up with anything that I may think of for a wish hahaha <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">"Rin-Okumura  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  02:25, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Mototsu
Yeah, sure. Also, Mototsu can't use any other spiritual energy other than reiatsu and reiryoku. Nor can they take on the traits of other races. Just thought I'd let you know, Td5.PersonaSuperiorDeus 04:43, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

I don't actually mind them having Pholiosphy (As I said before, I like the concept), I already have plans (If I could, please?) to have a Mototsu to use Philiosophy, and since the energy begins to break down his soul due to it being foreign, he dies a few minutes before he almost kills the protagonist of my story. There are no exceptions to this self-destruction which happens whenever a Mototsu aquires an alternate form of spiritual energy. PersonaSuperiorDeus 04:54, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

No Kido, no Hakuda, no Shunpo, no anything like that. It's all their own skills, unless they transmigrated from Shinigami to Fullbringer into Mototsu. And let's say, Kaosu wanted to grant a Mototsu immortality. It's pretty much impossible, their souls reject anything another race attempts to grant them. Supernatural, that's what I meant. And they could learn Philosophy, but only use it for maybe an half an hour at best before they decompose and die, so nearly all of them don't even think of utilizing it. Though I might make a character who attempts to and dies during a fight with Gai, if that's okay with you. Also, would you like to create a Mototsu, Td5? PersonaSuperiorDeus 05:04, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Mototsu are pretty much immortal as well, they stop aging at twenty-five and live for trillions (I hate using that number) of years though they need to eat, sleep, and stuff like that. Argh, I meant Hakuda techniques learnt from anyone other than another Mototsu. Could I use Philosophy for one of my characters as well? And if you think of any additions to Mototsu abilities, please tell me, your contributions are greatly welcomed, pal. PersonaSuperiorDeus 05:26, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Eh, complete sounds a-okay, pal. PersonaSuperiorDeus 07:47, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Just rethinking my choices, I might not use it for a Mototsu, I might use it for a Shinigami who would die anyway due to another event. I've made too many Mototsu myself, so I won't be making any more for quite a while. PersonaSuperiorDeus 08:04, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

I have provided a justification for why Mototsu cannot use other supernatural energy. It's on their page, in the overview section, Td5. PersonaSuperiorDeus 05:54, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

I must've worded that wrong, the original Mototsu could accept reason and all that stuff, it'd just kill them in a few hours if not purged immediately, and they couldn't utilize it. Mototsu can only use reiatsu and reiryoku, even if there was a transended species in the future, they could still only use reiatsu and reiryoku, I'm sorry about that. And thank you for your idea, Td5. Philosophy's not too divine for them; they just can't accept it. And yeah and no. Philosophy attacks work on them, it's just immediately converted into reiryoku before it touches them and it will have the same amount of power as it would be if it would be your energy. I apologize if I sound harsh, I honestly don't know if I'm being rude or not all time. Except for Gai. Other supernatural energy won't work on my main anymore. PersonaSuperiorDeus 06:16, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Masanori's Zan would affect Gai like it does everyone else, but if Masanori tried to use any Philosophy that doesn't involve his blade in some way, it would probably be negated or the effect lessened. And Gai is well...a guy's name. And the ability has limitations, plus I don't plan for Gai to come into contact with Philosophy user for a long time (I will still RP with you later if you want, though, I might not use Gai), and my 'verse only uses reiatsu and reiryoku, so it's virtually useless there. PersonaSuperiorDeus 06:40, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not mad, I'm just happy with how Gai is right now. Even though I've read the Philosophy article ten times now, it still doesn't make any sense to me at all, no offense, but that's just my opinion on the matter. It's too complicated for my fragile little mind lol. But I'm usually bad at grasping new concepts. Mototsu already have limitless potential of their own, anyway and I'm happy with that, easy and simple. I'm dropping this whole Philosophy talk if you don't mind (we can continue if you want), I'm not honestly good at this stuff, I prefer humor in my stories, I don't take very many things seriously, I'm honestly just happy to use reiatsu and reiryoku (Philosophy is still a good article and intriguing, just not my cup of tea when it comes to applying it to my characters), though if I want a win to look more impressive, I'll request to use a different type of energy or give my baddies hax powers. 'Cides, a good ol' punch in-between the eyes beats anything like Philosophy anyday in my opinion lol. And Incomplete sounds good, then. Whatever floats yer boat, pal, I just want Gai's win against Fumio to look even more impressive as he rips through her Philosophy with his bare hands and punches her in the mouth with enough force to knock some of her teeth out LIKE A TRUE MAN (logic often flies out the window in my stories), though I don't mind either way. And thank you for your expansion on why Mototsu cannot use Philosophy, Td5. Your contributions are always greatly welcomed to my works. PersonaSuperiorDeus 07:22, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Just gettin' it out there that I've got nothing against you if you think I do, and that I think you're a good writer. If I have insulted you or your works above, please tell me, as I am unsure if I have or not so that I can apologize to you. Though I can't get that apology to you until next Monday, as I'm going away for four days, sorry about that Td5. PersonaSuperiorDeus 22:17, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

That's a relief. Thank you for that, Td5. PersonaSuperiorDeus 22:54, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

I hope I haven't outworn my welcome, Td5, but could you read this if you had the time, please? And yes, I did alter Gai's ability to make it fairer for Reason and Philosophy user against him, it still hits him and deals damage, it's just converted to reiatsu and reiryoku as it strikes him. Sound good? PersonaSuperiorDeus 01:24, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Nice race, Td5. Very nice indeed^^. Good job, pal. I'll get to creating an Amatsuotome as soon as I can think of a name for her (I'm out of names...Argh). And for that ability, I'll ask Sei when he's on next. And thank you very much for your comment on the first chapter of my TBTP series, Td5. I appreciate it. PersonaSuperiorDeus 02:29, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Hm, what's this favor? Tell me, I'm interested Td5. PersonaSuperiorDeus 02:36, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reading it like that, sure certain beings like Kaosu can grant them other energies, buddy, sounds like a plan. And I see your point about godlike constructs, though my original plan was since the Mototsu were created by the Soul King at the very beginning of Soul Society, their bodies weren't compatible with anything other than reiatsu and reiryoku. Doesn't make them god-like, it just makes them a sort of unique design, with no way to replicate their systems and such. ...Come to think of it, that makes them sort of mini-Soul Kings. Argh, I've gotta go and tell Ash that he could've accepted Kaosu's gift of Philosophy. All in all, your idea gets the green light in my book, Td5. PersonaSuperiorDeus 03:30, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Sounds like a plan. Also, Td5, could I still create an Amatsuotome? PersonaSuperiorDeus 06:30, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Here's my Amatsuotome. Just started, I'll finish tomorrow. PersonaSuperiorDeus 13:27, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

They're good, I suggest going to nihongodict for translations whenever you need them. Sorry I haven't been able to focus, Sei just warned me about Setsura one hour ago, so I'm renaming Gai's Setsura "Bankai Second Release", like Njalm's Hiroya and changing it drastically. PersonaSuperiorDeus 02:58, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Wish
Kool idea. Well now that you mention it what kind of wish can he grant. Can he do something like raise the dead? --- <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">Twon Junior <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">(the Third)  02:26, July 7, 2011 (UTC

Wait I get three wishes. If so then forget the raise the dead thing. It might take me awhile but I'll come up with something. I'll message you when I come up with three good ones :) --- <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">Twon Junior <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">(the Third)  02:41, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Its fine I've gotta a new idea about my wish anyway. Also you don't mind being in my Bleach series do ya. --- <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">Twon Junior <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">(the Third)  05:34, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Help with Species
It's your turn. As for the help with your species, should I edit the pages or give you suggestions or do both?<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 03:00, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

ok, I better start on that then.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 03:09, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

RE: Wish & Translations
Sorry for the delay, here are the translations you requested.

As for the wish, its largely unnecessary, as 1) Kenshin wouldnt bother, afterall he did fight his son, and blew up part of the Kyuuten no Souzou. I dont see any favors being dished out anytime soon. 2) Dorothy wouldnt want it because it would spoil her fun. Though she may be inclined to wish for something that would have unforeseen consequences or do things that would screw with reality as we know it. So she should NOT be given a wish. 3) Ryuichi doesnt even know the being and would prefer to examine his abilities and try to emulate them through science. 4) Tsuchimikado...well....his wish is one the King wouldnt grant. 5) Nanashi (he's new)...well I know less about him than anything so I cant give an answer for that. Long story short, none of my characters would be inclined, nor would they really benefit from a "wish". Of course I'm aware of the dangers of wishes anyway, so I'd stay very clear from them and actually go out to prevent some idiot from making a potentially dangerous one.
 * Kinkagi-no-Tengoku (金鍵天国, lit. "Golden Key to Paradise")
 * Tama-no-Shimekiri (球締め切り, lit. "Orb of the Closed Way")
 * Eihei-no-Tetsugaku (衛兵哲学, lit. "Sentinel of Philosophy)

As for Diabolus being able to use Philosophy? I doubt it. Only because their mind-set is so alien, that I dont think they have the fundamental mind-set necessary to even conceptualize Philosophy as it is currently known. That and it purifies things, even demonic hosts, so probably not. Although if a Diabolus ever WAS able to use Philosophy, it would undoubtably be unfair on an unprecedented level. Well if it were an Arcus Daemon at least. As opposed to killing them it would immediately remove any impurities within their spiritual energy, which would make the "chaos" that composes their forms pure, and that would equate to cosmic power. At least thats how I see it. Purification is a funny thing. --- Illuminate Void (Talk) 23:31, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Yureiryushi
Sure, go ahead. --Seireitou-shishō (My True Identity 00:11, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Amatsuotome
left my review thingy on the talk page. ~   Sentonara of  the Spirits  04:37, July 9, 2011 (UTC)


 * They're a race, so make sure you add Template:Racial Groups, pal. Aside from that, I don't see anything much wrong with them, dude. Only thing I don't get is that they're only women. If, say, a male soul died in the sea of Philosophy, would they be reborn as a female? You might wanna address that in the overview, if you've got a reason. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  08:45, July 9, 2011 (UTC)


 * I know it seems strange based on their name, but its also strange that there isn't a male variant of some shape or form, if you get what I'm saying. But regardless, I ain't gonna worry about it, dude. Nice race so far :p <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  09:20, July 9, 2011 (UTC)


 * I was only making an observation, pal. But Sei's Mikō are passed down through the blood. Sei even states they mated with human men to continue their race, meaning men are needed or their wouldn't be any to begin with, dude. Reproduction takes two, after all. Anyways, its a picture of a big-busted woman. Of course I like it :p <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  09:47, July 9, 2011 (UTC)


 * Sure I'll make one up, dude. Give me a little time and I'll see what I can come up with :p <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  08:06, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Minako
Should I change the size of your pic in Minako's page?<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 10:45, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

No I think those are fine, but if the stats totalled up to 570-580 then I'd be worried, although I can only see if she's overpowered when her abilities are done, but good luck!<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 10:53, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Ok but it's still ok in my opinion.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 11:01, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Well that's Sento's style for you. Anyway, knowing her looks anybody will fall for her, I wouldn't be surprised if even my characters fell for her in a RP.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 11:10, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Kiba Senshi
Hey there Td5, how's it going? By the way, if you have any time can you check out my new character ? He isn't done in terms of abilities, but if you have any advice you can whole-heartedly tell me. :)<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 23:45, July 9, 2011 (UTC)

Alrighty
Sure.. I would be up for making one. Do they have to be of a certain age group or anything? If not then I already have a few images in mind lol. Oh! When you say Nature Manipulation do you mean like the Satonaka Clan's or just like plant life in itself cause if its the latter then you may want to change it from nature to faunal maipulation. But oh? What other character had spices/cooking as their primary usage? And even if they did you could do it too as long as it wasnt a carbon copy. I mean there are so many people with crystal on here now its not even funny lol. <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">"Rin-Okumura  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  04:36, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Ah I see...well let me think a bit on her abilities then I'll make her up. I also have to go get some images for her as well. =D <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">"Rin-Okumura  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  04:52, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Ok Well I have the images I wanted and I'm gonna take some liberties with her associations and such. I hope thats not too much of a problem or anything. =) And I like the light bending aspects of things hmm...mind if I tweak it a bit formine and allow her to produce a set of wings? <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">"Rin-Okumura  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  05:21, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Alright that all works into what I had planned. Now its time to get to work lol. <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">"Rin-Okumura  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  05:35, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm thats fine. I probably wont give it to Miya cause I want her to be able to face life threatening situations and even maybe be put on the brink of death eventually. But you can add it for the rest of them if you want. I personally dont see a need for it =) <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">"Rin-Okumura  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  05:43, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

So they forever remain virgins? So they can mate with as many ppl a they want with no damage? ahahaha thats a funny thought to implement storywise. But hmm more pure than a virgin? Well a baby for one cause a virgin can participate in certain sexual acts but still keep their virginity but thats another conversation altogether lol <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">"Rin-Okumura  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  06:02, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Haha nah...dont worry. I planned on her being more of a spiritual guide not a combat person unless it actually came down to it. She's mostly there for comic relief and to gather intel for my characters. =P <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">"Rin-Okumura  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  06:13, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

I thought you said it was my character? As long as it follow the basics of the species then by wiki ruling im allowed to do as I please =P I wanted her to be a spirit like being. As she wont be able to directly get contacted by just anyone which will play a part later on in my stories. And as for the clothes have you ever seen Asura Cryin? The spirit (Misao) constantly changes clothes but they dont hinder her in the slightest. You're thinking too much about it. This is bleach...spirits can wear clothing and pass through objects as if they werent even there. <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">"Rin-Okumura  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  06:25, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Yea I plan on changing the infobox but its getting late here well kinda early in the morning now lol but still lol. But yea...i know they arent reishi. Again...I just wanted her to be a spirit like being. But I will add more to her powers and such later on. I'm trying to flesh out the rest first. <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">"Rin-Okumura  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  06:51, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

YES PLEASE! Thank you very much! I won't dissappoint you, can I make her an associate of Minako.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 07:51, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Ok sure thing.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 07:58, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Just dont use translations. <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">"Rin-Okumura  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  02:05, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Ah ok. And yea that works fine. Though itll probably be maybe a day or two before I finish her so i can finish all of my own things. <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">"Rin-Okumura  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  02:21, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Um okie dokie ill keep that in mine but techiclly speaking its up to others to decide who is the most beautiful regardless of who the creator is. Just thought I would throw that out there. <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">"Rin-Okumura  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  03:06, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

okie dokie that works. =) <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">"Rin-Okumura  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  04:52, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

I would say no. Cause there would be no point if the female can die and be bathed in philosophy and become one. Then it would be best if more females became one that way instead of sudenly having daughters and husbands. And besides if they are supposed to be virgins then there would be no need for husbands i the first place. <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">"Rin-Okumura  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  05:15, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Well yeah I guess it's plausible, but there should be a limit to how much they can actually manipulate their philosophy into light, as Philosophy is pure and all, it'd be rather limited. Oh, how do you like Kaede, she's done. I don't mind any editing from you though, and how do you like her Philosophy "freezing" Raze said it was really good, although I need your opinion on it.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 08:02, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

In a seductive way, Miya, but in the standard field of beauty, I'd say Minako, as she isn't as seductive as Kaede or Miya, not saying it's bad of course. Translation for Divine Arts would be...... I don't know really. Sorry, I've studied japanese, but only limited so yeah.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 08:21, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Ok I'll add immortality, and as for the RP, sure, but it's around 6:30 in the evening here, and I have school tomorrow morning NOO!!!!!! So I might post a little late if the chance of that occurs.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 08:29, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Lol, I can never wake up for that long, I would sleep by 12:00 am minimum.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 08:34, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Um, perhaps before she dies, she splits her power which creates another Amatsuotome (a younger one) and eventually she becomes as powerful as Minako after a long time?<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 08:46, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah I guess that works, although I don't really think it's necessary, as most Amatsuotome are bound to be Byakuya Class at most so yeah. Perhaps it's a Divine Art? Oh and just to tell you, my Freezing ability for Kaede is also a Divine Art that she created.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 09:14, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, so basically your saying that the spells used by Celestial Maidens excelusively will be in another category, while standard Philosophy spells will be for everyone using Philosophy?<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 21:36, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Oh ok I get it. By the way do they all start with Divine Art:blah blah blah, or are they just named the spell itself. If so, I can get the translation for my spell and add it to the page later.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 05:11, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

Oh ok, so it's basically kido. So does my Freezing ability count as a Kamiwaza?<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 05:49, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

Sure thing, Shinkijutsu was it?<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 05:54, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

although divine work could be considered as work of those who relay gods duty, like angels or guardians?<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 05:59, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

oh Shinkijutsu, translates to new technology when I looked it up.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 06:03, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

None of those either it seems.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 06:21, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

But Shintoku means divine virtues and Shoumei means divine oracle. As well as this, for the Kosumosukihaku, I found a translation for creative power, possibly for their creation of reishi, which is Souzouryoku or Sousakaryoku? If you want to use it<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 06:23, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

That's good with me.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 06:30, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

Well I checked, and I'm not sure, so sorry. :(<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 06:38, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry i cant be of help atm. Im currently trying to develop my own things right now. <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">"Rin-Okumura  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  06:55, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

''I already saw pal. Nice going. But by the way you really dont have to inform me on every update you make or change that you plan on making. Im sure to see it. <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Raze  <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">"Rin-Okumura  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka'' 04:34, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Go ahead and do it. I cant really say unless I see the idea in action. <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">"Rin-Okumura  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  04:56, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

It looks awesome, by the way, you mind if I make another Amatsuotome, I can't think of a Seijou for mine, and I have a great idea for another Amatsuotome character, so do you mind?<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 07:27, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Why don't we go on the wiki chat, I've used it before, it's actually really good.<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 07:29, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

New
Yeah I know! I read the article alot and I wanted to make one but I was doing something for Raze. I am a little unexperieced with Philosophy '''but I'll get the hang of it. Trust me I'll make one at least by tommorrow if not sooner. --- <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">' ''<font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">Twon Junior  <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">(the Third) 02:17, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

So when I make one she can only have power based on one of the four powers you mentioned right? --- <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">Twon Junior <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">(the Third)  02:26, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Oh! So the girls must be more powerful than I orginally thought. Can't wait :) --- <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">Twon Junior <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">(the Third)  02:35, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

Lol Gotcha pal. --- <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">Twon Junior <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">(the Third)  02:43, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

I mostly just use Google Translate lol but I typed it in and it translates as God's Way (神の道) Sorry if this dosen't help it takes me awhile myself to find a good translation. --- <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">Twon Junior <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">(the Third)  18:02, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

Since she hasn't been in a RP, her powers are still at an unknown stage. Personallly I think you should go more in depth with her Personality, and History. Considering she was the first Amatsuotome her history should be pretty developed. But to tell the truth I like the idea and the character alot besides the suggestions I mention above. Also if you want I'll Rp with her, it should be great. --- <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">Twon Junior <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">(the Third)  04:11, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Pssh. I been made one lol. Here it is. Also I would love to see what you have in store for her history. And for the Kamiwaza '''page. I think it's good similar to kido but different enough that no one would complain. :) --- <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">' ''<font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">Twon Junior  <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">(the Third) 04:28, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reply
Thank you, I appreciate the honor. And thank you for the compliment. I'm glad you like Saori. The problem is, it might take me until the end of this week to get to work on that character though. I have a busy work schedule all this week, plus I'm working with the Jinki Fragments, so I'd really rather have someone more appropiate make one. I'd hate to rush a character that will be part of the amazing race you designed, it'd be an insult to you. In my opinion, Kenji should make it in lieu of me. --Seireitou-shishō (My True Identity 06:02, July 11, 2011 (UTC)
 * I appreciate it. When I get the chance, I'll make sure to make a really cool character for the race. --Seireitou-shishō [[File:Seireitou's signature picture.jpg]] (My True Identity 06:16, July 11, 2011 (UTC)

The translations look rather right, to the best of my knowledge. I usually use Google Translate if I don't know the word, so I wouldn't be the best person to ask. --Seireitou-shishō (My True Identity 22:55, July 12, 2011 (UTC)

New Section was getting too long.
Td5, your character's good, and I'll fix the Mototsu paragraphs soon. PersonaSuperiorDeus 09:42, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Td5, I apologize for not going on the new chat. I've been incredibly busy. PersonaSuperiorDeus 11:52, July 14, 2011 (UTC)

Wanna RP later, Td6? I need to leave soon, so when I get back, maybe then? PersonaSuperiorDeus 21:28, July 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reply
First I would like to apologize for the extremely late reply and secondly I think wouldn't be capable of doing a co-op seeing how most of my character are badly made and incomplete. --King Cartman 11:46, July 13, 2011 (UTC)
 * Also could you give me your personal opinion on a technique I'm still in the making of?--King Cartman 11:46, July 13, 2011 (UTC)

Chat
Not really. Im trying to work on my stuff. <font color="#0165155" face="Tahoma">Raze <font color="#0191255" face="Tahoma">"Rin-Okumura  <font color="#1390235" face="Tahoma">Satanoka  03:41, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Sure. <font color="FireBrick">Kenji-Taichō <font color="FireBrick">(Talk)  08:13, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

She's up
Matsu Sugomori is mine ^^ Tell me how you think she's coming along, since she's a member of your species. (She's not complete, since I need to sleep)--シルバー人柱力 - The Silver Jinchūriki. ("Talk to me.") 12:21, July 15, 2011 (UTC)

Joining GF
Hey there Td5, it's me Ash, as you can see in the section heading, I would like to ask if I have your vote to joining Gravity Force, I'm already doing a RP with Raze, so I just need three votes. So reply to me as soon as possible thanks!<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 12:17, July 16, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, it's awesome, thanks! :D<font color="08937" face="Monotype Corsiva">The Rising Phoenix (Face the almighty!) 21:09, July 20, 2011 (UTC)

Junior
Sup Td5. When you get the time could ya look at this. I was wondering could photokinesis be taught to someone by an Amatsutome or no? Also I was wondering how can a person get to Paradiso. Like can you get their through a garganta or a senkaimon or do you have to use a different method? --- <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">Twon Junior <font color="#FFFFFF" face="Comic Sans MS">(the Third)  16:16, July 17, 2011 (UTC)

GF
Hey Twlight one question I can join gravity force or I am unworthy to belong to the group jejeje just kidding, well see ya Daisuke Yagami 17:33, July 19, 2011 (UTC)