Talk:Erebus ( a story on fanfiction by thehgirl13 )

Alright, I'll make this short. While we do allow articles to be written that stray from the typical "attack attack" RPs and fan-fiction works, there is such a thing as limits. For one, you can't just call Ichigo a "black vampire" and Rukia a "blue vampire". There is no VAMPIRES in Bleach. Granted, if you want to call the Bounts similar to Vampires, then yes. Similar, but they're not bloody vampires. This isn't Twilight, so if you're trying to somehow fuse together a fangirl dream of Bleach and Twilight, this is hardly the place you'll be allowed to do so. And fix your grammar. I can only assume you are of reasonable age, so you have no excuse to rush your writing. However, if it's due to a language barrier, then I apologize for my previous comment. But even in that case, you can always just put your work on Microsoft Word or something, and have it spell-checked. We here at Bleach Fan Fiction Wikia demand correct grammar and sufficient levels of organization, above all else in regards to personal articles.

That's really about it. --Seireitou-shishō (My True Identity 05:44, December 15, 2011 (UTC)