Talk:Kanjiro Kawashima

Review
Looks pretty good!

His descriptions in power categories seem a little much, though. I suggest that you not make him a Kidō master, as that's all about control. And if he's a Hakuda master, that needs to be explained.

And him having Bankai, having been a Shinigami for less time than Ichigo... that's just kind of outside the realm of possibility. Although if he attains it later on, that would make sense.

I'm sure you'll be expanding backstory; it of course can use some work.

Also, the names of the Shikai and Bankai are not actually translated; that's just transliteration, Japanese phonetic pronunciation of the English words. It doesn't really have a meaning like that. (If it sounds like it does in English, then it's a transliteration, not a translation.) I'll get some possible translations for you and post them here for you to choose.

Also, you can use Template:Statistics for that section to get a nice clean look.

All in all, good job.

KawaTsuyo  Message  06:19, January 25, 2013 (UTC)