User talk:Twilight Despair 5

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This message is for me as I am using my phone as my desktop is being used.--Twilight Despair 5 15:00, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

RE: Admins
Please create a normal type of Zanpakutou, the unique types were spammed recently and as such need a VERY good reason to be created, most times a "Unique" zanpakutou is a fancy Kido type and not a real unique new type of zanpakutou......just a word of thumb, just make a normal one, because also the unique types are really easy to godmod...which would get you into trouble again-- 楽しい Vui  (吐露) 15:52, September 6, 2010 (UTC)
 * It looked from your post on ten's page that you got in trouble before-- 楽しい Vui Kiryu's Eternal Eyes.png (吐露) 17:23, September 6, 2010 (UTC)
 * Goto http://www.nihongodict.com/ -- 楽しい Vui Kiryu's Eternal Eyes.png (吐露) 02:44, September 7, 2010 (UTC)

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okay which one of my articles do u want to use, and if u can give me some insight to ur storyline in which my characters will be used will be helpful. and your hollow/arrancar royal army sounds like a good idea......--Master of the Mangekyo Sharingan 16:11, September 7, 2010 (UTC)

the original ower of the articles that u have listed are no longer active on this wikia and such left most of his work to me, as u can see his work wasn't very good, the only reason i took them was to feature them as small time villans in my own story arcs, but if u think u can re-work them than it is fine by me, but before i give u permission to use them i would like to see some of your work as in a character or article u have made.......--Master of the Mangekyo Sharingan 16:26, September 7, 2010 (UTC)

it looks okay but it needs a lot of work and i suggest you have a look around at the site at some of the articles made by other people, so you can get the feel of how we make articles her, so my advice to you is to ee some articles and then used their styles tat first to make your own articles.......--Master of the Mangekyo Sharingan 14:50, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

RE: Request
Um, a site wide canon was tried and it failed sadly, because it was hard to coordinate. 2nd your dont have to ask permission to make a new race, as long as it fits in the bleach universe and isnt copying another anime (ie: plagiarism). Now the kido pages are often made by user for organizing ideas, but ask head admin User:Seireitou about that because i dont know. And the power levels are set by the canon not use please look at the Bleach Fan Fiction Wikia Rules and Regulations - Seireitou Administration to see the set power levels. thank you-- 楽しい Vui  (吐露) 18:10, September 7, 2010 (UTC)

RE: Purinsu Kuchiki
Yeah sure I'll take a look at the page for ya. Give me a few minutes and I'll te'll ya what I think of it. Kenji Hiroshi 15:22, September 14, 2010 (UTC)


 * Okay, first off, the content is good. The appearance, personality and abilities section's are fiting for a Kuchiki and a Captain. I also liked the zanpakuto (the ability to disrupt a cero before it's even fired sounds handy to me). The only problem I can see is one you pointed out yourself and that's spelling. That's simple enough to fix, though, so don't worry too much. Just take your time and you'll improve (Trust me, my spelling was terrible when I started writing for Fanfiction.net) If you aren't good at pickin' out spelling on your own, then get someone (a friend) to do it for you. The only other thing I say you should get is an infobox template. Do you know how to put those in? If you've any questions, then ask away. If I can help, then I'll try. Kenji Hiroshi 15:36, September 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * Sure, I'll add the template for you and add the pic as well. For adding a picture to a template (let's use your character's appearance as an example) the code would be: Paste this into the space between the bracets File:Guy-1.jpg to add the picture into the template. Template's use the codes to add things (even bold text) but the codes can easily be found online are easy enough to add once you get the hang of things. Heck, I only started using templates about a week ago (if even) and had to learn all this stuff as well. The best advice I can give ya is to experiment with templates usin' the preview button and save it only when you're happy with it. Kenji Hiroshi 16:30, September 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * I'm workin' on the template and all now, so do you want me to fix up some of the spellin' as well? As for the Bankai, Immortal has a few translations in japanese that I found. You could have Fukyuu, Fumetsu, Senkofumetsu (this also means everlasting) or Senzaifuma. They all mean immortal, it's all about how you arrange the kanji. Here's the link to the translation site I use http://www.nihongodict.com/. Kenji Hiroshi 16:48, September 14, 2010 (UTC)
 * Well, is the template to your liking? For any of your future characters, simply copy and paste that in and edit it on the new article. And I did fix a few of the spelling's (I think I got about halfway down the powers and abilities section), but then I had a football match to watch (sorry about that). Oh yeah, If you've any questions pal, then ask away. I ain't no admin, but If I know what ya need, I'll try to help ya out. Kenji Hiroshi 15:33, September 16, 2010 (UTC)
 * Well, White Knight fits with the whole theme, especially the colour. You've used "White", "Pale" and "Ivory" in most of his zanpakuto abilities, so White Knight definitely fits. Btw, White Knight is Hakubanokishi in japanese, but that was the only translation I could get. And Sword of the King fits well, considering he's a noble (and a Kuchiki to boot). I couldn't get a translation for Sword of the King (sorry 'bout that). So the question if they go with the theme is yes they do. He's got some nice skills too. Good job, man. Kenji Hiroshi 16:00, September 16, 2010 (UTC)

Suzaku
You want me to make the character page, or just the surname? If it's a surname, then how about Takahiro? It means whidespread nobility and would fit with him bein' Purinsu's lieutenant. Kenji Hiroshi 16:19, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

Could you as I still only have computer use at college during week days but I have only two requirements please.

Just make his appearance more muscluar than Purinsu's but between height of 6 to 6:2 ft please hair color and eye color doesnt matter to me nor if he has any to no unique things like tattoos etc.

And make his zanapkuto a melee type but immense in size like Ichigo's sealed zanapkuto.

Now i got to get to class.Twilight Despair 5 16:26, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, I've created the page under the name Suzaku Takahiro (Just plain Suzaku was taken, sadly). I've added his appearance (couldn't find a pic, though), if you want to add to it or change it, it's up to you. It is your article. His sealed zanpakuto's been writin' up, again you can change it to fit your tastes. I'll leave you to fill out his personality and powers and abilities, though I took a little initiive with his abilities like Immense spiritual power (needed to explain why his zanpakuto's so huge) and enhanced strength (sayin' how easy he wields such a large sword). The template's also been added, but some info only you can add (blood group, partners, etc). Hope ya enjoy! Kenji Hiroshi 11:47, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Yup, you did good with the changes. His spiritual energy's more in line with a Lieutenant now anyway. Like the new design for his sealed zan as well. With a name like Guardian, I bet he's gonna be a defensive kinda fighter. Yeah, I'm lookin' forward to see how ya work him and Purinsu Kuchiki into your universe. Kenji Hiroshi 15:35, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Cool pic. And cool idea about the kingdom and protector zanpakuto. I'd never have though of that. I generally go for the whole "hit ya as hard as i can thing with a defensive ability if your in trouble" format when makin' a zanpakuto. You're characters are gonna be good. Can't say I've ever watched Inuyasha. I normally stick to the more well-known ones like Bleach, Naruto and Fairy Tail. You might wanna try Black Blood Brothers. Short, but good. Anyways, Suzaku's gonna have interestin' abilities to say the least. Can't wait to see how they turn out. Kenji Hiroshi 15:58, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

These two are startin' sound like the complete ideal Captain and Lieutenant combo. It's a cool idea and will make the characters that much better. Good thinkin' man. Kenji Hiroshi 16:45, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

New Kido Page
If were for makin' a Kido page, then I'll insist we both have our names on it. I can't take the full credit when the idea wasn't even my own. And there might be someone else who might want in on the idea, but I'll hafta ask him. He's been helpin' with my main characters. I have a few Kido spells on my User Page that I use in my stories, so that'll give us a good start and then whatever ones you can add. But I won't start it now until I've spoken to Raze. Is that okay? The more the merrier after all. Kenji Hiroshi 20:19, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, that's fine. But, I was wonderin' what your plan was for Hado 92, 'cause that spell has featured as an inportant part of one my characters, namely Kusaka Kori and his development, 'cause he recieved burn scars and almost died because of that spell durin' my first story arc while savin' my main character. Kenji Hiroshi 20:35, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Naw, the problem is that I'll hafta ask Head-Admin Sei if I could use that spell, 'cause I was usin' his Kido page at that point. There are plenty of pic's on the net that could be used as Kido (I know a few other anime, mainly Naruto) that we could use. I'll ask Sei if we can use that spell in our page 'cause it's featured in my story. Your other numbers are fine, btw. I have no argument with those, man. Kenji Hiroshi 20:50, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, well I spoke to Raze and he's up for the idea. If it's okay, I'll make the page in school tomorrow and throw all of our name's on it (give me somethin' to do besides school work) and add whatever canon spells we can along with the one's I've made. We can add others to our hearts are content after that. That okay with you? Oh yeah, you may wanna add a word or two to your user page, man. That way, your sig won't appear with a broken link. Oh yeah, something shorter I can call ya? Twilight Despair 5's a little long-winded. Kenji Hiroshi 21:28, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, but the wierd sacrificing Kido's all a part of it to and really show off a character's overall mastery. If we do make them, we'll put 'em in the forbidden section, and whoever uses 'em then will do it at their own discretion knowin' the risks. Besides, it ain't unheard of for a shinigami to regain their powers. Just look at Isshin Kurosaki. He lost 'em somehow and got 'em back again. So there's always work-arounds. The main problem I see is the incantation's. We can have some without, but it wouldn't look right havin' a kido page with amazin' spells but no incantations, right? Ah, we'll work somethin' out. Kenji Hiroshi 21:50, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Well the translation site I gave ya in an earlier message is the one I use and It's quite accurate. Whatever Kido I've made myself, the translations came off there. So the translations won't really be a problem. Anyways, I'm gonna call it a night man. I've got school in the mornin' unfortunately. I'll get the the basic layout of the page done tomorrow and we can tweek it and add to it when we feel the need. If ya want, have a look at the spells I've already made. You'll find 'em on my user page. Later! Kenji Hiroshi 22:01, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Well, the Kido page has been created. Here's the page: Kido (Kenji, TD5 & Raze). I'll work the unnamed spells into wherever they fit best, 'cause I plan to use a few of 'em in my stories. As for my own spells, they've been added, but i won't get the pic's up for a bit. I've also got a forbidden sealing spell to add, but again I'll do that later. Kenji Hiroshi 10:11, September 20, 2010 (UTC)

Cheers for that. I'm at home now anyway, so I'll go ahead and work those unnamed spells into the articles, 'cause most look like either bakudo or forbidden from my POV. There's a lot of other unnamed Kido on the normal Bleach Wiki right? If I find any we don't have, I'll work 'em in the best I can. I'll also add whatever pic's I can for the one's I've created. I've got good pic's for hado #20 and bakudo #32 spells, but I'll hafta look around for the others. If ya find any that might fit with the spell's I've made, then do us a favour and upload 'em, would ya? Two pair of eyes are better than one. I'll ask Raze to do the same. Kenji Hiroshi 15:12, September 20, 2010 (UTC)

Kido Page#2
Just read through Bakudo #10 man, and that's a cool idea. Nice pic to. Okay, about Hado 86. Yeah, readin' over it seems to be a seriosuly high leveled spell beyond the 80's. And I've noticed that it fits in well with Purinsu's character. Didn't you say he could use upwards of hado 96 or somethin'? With that in mind, I'll move it from #86 to 95 if it's okay with you. I'll ask Raze if there's any numbers he want's to reserve and tell 'em to ya. And cheers for the Imperial Wrath pic. Looks sweet man. I've left a message on my user page askin' for people for help with Kido pic's. Don't know how many will bother to respond, but hey, it's an idea and it could help. Kenji Hiroshi 15:18, September 21, 2010 (UTC)


 * And immensly powerful, one-hit Kido's are right up my street, but we'll hafta be realistic with those. I like the name, Scythe of the Goddess. Got a nice ring to it. What kinda effect, aside from the whole "I blow you into oblivion" thing did ya have in mind? Kenji Hiroshi 15:27, September 21, 2010 (UTC)
 * Okay, with that much power, the spell would be removed as soon as we posted it, dude. Any and all life in a certain area would be understandable and certainly enough to reduce the hollow royal family to smolderin' ash, but an entire dimension? That would be deemed amazingly and undeniably god-like in its power and wouldn't be allowed, dude. I've had experience with godmodding myself, 'cause I've been taken up on once or twice and that's what it would be deemed. It's a good idea, don't get me wrong, but i think we'd need to tone that one down a lot. I mean, if it could wipe out a dimension then every major bad guy would sacrifice their strongest minion and win easily. Kenji Hiroshi 15:54, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

RP
Naw I musta worded his Kido bit seriously wrong. Yoshiro can repel Hado of level 89, but he can't use them yet. His teacher, Ryouta Hachirou, is the Kido master of my story. But I'll do an RP with ya usin' Yoshiro if ya want, or we can wait until I reveal his Bakkōtō. Let me worry about how he fights, 'cause Yoshiro can take a battering, even from ex-Royal Guards. The guy's a monster when it comes to sheer stamina. Or we could do an RP when the two do a mission together and leave the fight until Yoshi develops a little more. Yoshiro leads his own Patrol Team, so it wouldn't be hard to incorperate that into the Td5 14:07, September 22, 2010 (UTC)set our RP to appear durin' Purinsu's past and Yoshiro's present. Would that be alright? Kenji Hiroshi 16:30, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah that work's for me. So, they gonna fight, or go on a mission together? I ain't fussy. I'll go with the flow. Oh yeah, and cheers for fixin' the wordin' on Hado 9. That was my one, and my bad I suppose. But what can ya do? If ya find a pic for it, then throw it in. I'll trust your judgement, man. Anyways, what ya wanna call this RP? I'm rubbish at namin' things, especially story pages or RP's. Mine normally involve somethin' to do with Clash! and that get's old in my opinion. Kenji Hiroshi 17:04, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

I have a plan to make this RP even better. But I'll need a while so I can introduce Yoshiro's Bakkōtō. With that boostin' his energy, he might be able to fight on par with a Bankai user for a little while at least. Give me until friday so I can introduce his Bakkōtō in-story, then we'll start it. That okay with you? And sorry for the late replies. Raze and I are doin' our RP.

Oh yeah, about the forbidden kido. With the levels of sacrifices and even the time needed, It could pass, but I'd still say lower it's overall strength and destructive power more. If an entire dimension were to suddenly go "boom" we'd have problems. All hollow within Hueco Mundo would disappear along with the Arrancar, which means who's left to fight with? That's the main problem that I can see.

I added the 5th ability to Purnisu's bankai what you think its white knight.Td5 14:07, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

I assume you mean the message about Purinsu's new bankai ability? Just sayin', but it's a little hard for me to see messages that ain't on my own talk page, man. Sorry man, but I didn't read the message because i didn't know it was there. I don't get notified unless the messages come to my own talk page. Anyway, forget about it. That's the White Knight ability, right? It sounds good and very handy if there were a few hundred hollow between you and and your goal. Overall, it's a good ability. I'm assuming this is his ultimate ability? Kenji Hiroshi 18:59, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

No worries. I nearly do it at times as well. I like the ability 'cause it ain't just a one-hit kill all type of thing. If need be, it can be used for defence and if used together with kido, you could make yourself some interestin' moves. Kenji Hiroshi 19:19, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

Just I dont know if Sword of the king should be a one hit or what yet.Td5 19:35, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

New Kido
I've got an idea for 2 new Kido spells, but the thing is I don't know whether one should be a Bakudo or a Hado, considerin' it's just a massive flash of pure white light. Any thoughts about its classification? It's called Assarishita (Light) and is a 70-80 level Kido because the flash is big and hard to avoid.

The other is definitely a Hado spell, 'cause it focuses lightning onto the user's hand (like the Chidori from Naruto). But this is where the uniqeness come's into play. Know the number 90 odd Bakudo spell that works in 3 parts? I was thinkin' that this lightning spell could work in the exact same way. #1) The user focuses lightning onto their hand to cause severe piercing and lightning damage to an opponent that numbs their body as well. #2) Again the user concentrates lightnin' onto their hand, but shot it in a thin, more concentrated form (similar to the Byakurai). Finally, number 3) Instead of the hand, the lightning is focused around their body and can act as form of defense as well as attack. Because of the complexity, it would obviously be a higher-up Kido, but it doesn't have the one-hit kill ability that the other higher-ups have, so I was gonna go more for a number between 60 and 70. What you think? Kenji Hiroshi 16:43, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

I like the way you think, pal. Anyway, the light kido blinds them in order to cause a diversion for other attacks. It has its advantages. As for the lightnin' one, number 50 sounds good, but wasn't that one of the one's you asked for? I'll make it number 51 instead. Now, the three forms. Should we do part 1 as hado 51, part 2 as number 52 etc, or just combine 'em into one spell? I think individually would be better. Now, we hit the snag. I got nothin' for an incantation right now. Any ideas? Kenji Hiroshi 20:37, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

???
Im confused on what your asking-- 楽しい Vui  (吐露) 02:52, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Purinsu
Okay pal, I've given Purinsu a full overlook, so here's the review :) Firstly, let me just say thanks for the pic, man. I'll definitely be usin' that one. Okay, Purinsu. I've already made comments about his appearance and personality in an earlier message, so I'll just go ahead and skip that bit and start right in on his powers and abilities. Our Kido page is definitely gonna come in handy for this guy and his Kido powers are obviously the most powerful aspect about him. He's got a kido-type zan and fantastic skill with kido to boot. As for the rest of his abilities, they all seem to be at the right level for a Shinigami captain (nice addition of the stats). His main skills, imo, are Flash Steps and Kido, and the two can make a potent combo. As for his zanpakuto, the new Bankai ability, Sword of the King fits into the theme seen in the rest. And it also sounds good. Tearin' apart the spiritual energy that makes up an object has to be a good addition to anyone's arsenal, right? Anyway, the only thing that need's attention now is spelling, buddy. But don't worry to much about it. Just take your time goin' through it.

Oh yeah, you said you were workin' on some new Kido? I've gotten the 3 lightnin' one's posted along with the flash of light if ya wanna take a look at 'em. Kenji Hiroshi 09:27, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

I've already read over the Kido, and I've gotta say that it would be a seriously annoyin' one to be prepearing for. With that many sacrifieces and time needed, you'd be seriosuly pissed off if someone interrupted ya. Yeah, and we can get this RP started now if ya want. Who you wanna fight though? Kenji or Yoshiro? I don't mind which. And what about the name? Kenji Hiroshi 14:05, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

How about this. The First Meeting: Yoshiro vs Purinsu. It's simple and shows what it's about. So you want Yoshiro to use his hollow powers? That won't be a problem, man. You wanna start off, or should I? Kenji Hiroshi 14:52, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Our RP
The First Meeting: Yoshiro vs Purinsu! has been made, man. Just go ahead and write what your character's doin' after my bit. Let's make this a good one, eh? Kenji Hiroshi 15:11, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, this is your first RP, so just let me tell ya something. You decide whatever Purinsu does and say. I control what my characters say, do think etc. You don't control what Yoshiro does. I take a turn of editing from my guy's point of view and you then do that with Puirnsu. When I finish my part, the next part would be seen from Purinsu's point of view. You'd say how he killed the Gillian and explain about that. Then I'd say how surprised my own guy's are, 'cause I know their character better than anyone. Just like you know Purinsu's. Kenji Hiroshi 15:33, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, it's your turn to post, man. Just keep your own parts about Purinsu and you'll do fine. Good luck. Kenji Hiroshi 15:40, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

It's your turn once again, man. You know what they say. You learn by doin', right? I didn't have the foggiest what I was doin' in my first RP either. Any questions, then ask away. Kenji Hiroshi 15:59, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

And you're up again, man. Kenji Hiroshi 16:15, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

And it's your turn again, man. Let's get this fight started, eh? Kenji Hiroshi 17:02, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Was it ok to use Giragira (Glare) on Yoshiro?Td5 17:25, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

And you're up, man and have a Cero to contend with. Kenji Hiroshi 17:26, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

And it's your turn again, man. Sorry man, but I've got a History essay I need to write for tomorrow (Curse school work). I might be on when I'm finsihed, or I might not be. I don't know yet. Kenji Hiroshi 18:01, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry TD5, but I won't be able to make a post until I get home. Im in school and these computer's are picky about which computer pages they let a person open. I can get into some, then there's some I can't. Our RP is just one of the one's I can't get into. Kenji Hiroshi 13:26, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

I know no way to bring Kenji into the RP, man, 'cause he's travellin' the Human World with his own allies. And it would seem kinda crazy just to have Kenji pop through a Garganta and say "Yo, Yoshiro, I see you're havin' a few problem's? Need a hand?" If you want, I could introduce either Ryouta Hachirou or Maki Zhijun. Ryouta's Yoshiro's mentor and Maki's an exile who's just as powerful as Ryouta. Kenji Hiroshi 13:39, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, but we'll fight a little between Yoshiro and Purinsu before I bring anyone else in. And if it's okay with you, I'll use Maki Zhijun, because I haven't had a lot of practice usin' him in RP's and would like to show off some more of his skills. It's your turn again, man, and sorry about not bein' able to post when I was in school. Kenji Hiroshi 15:32, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

I'll get postin' after I write this. The problem is, if you fight Takeshi, you may not get to fight Yoshiro again, 'cause the guy's Shikai transformation put's him in a state that allows him to fight at the level of a Bankai user without much trouble, although it is taxing. And he's got a split personality that come's out whenever he uses that ability, and he's as crazy and unpredictable as any Inner Hollow ever was. But, if you wanna fight him, it's entirely up to you, man. Kenji Hiroshi 15:37, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

And it is your turn again, man. You wanna fight Takeshi? Or should I bring Maki Zhijun into it a little later? I ain't fussed either way. Kenji Hiroshi 15:47, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, teachers are annoyin' at every level, whether it's school, university or college, so don't worry about it. But, we'll fight for a bit with Yoshiro and Purinsu, then I'll bring Takeshi into it when Yoshiro get's beaten, but it won't be easy. Yoshiro's endurance is one of his highest attribute's, so he can take quite a beatin'. This ain't the 1st Captain level opponent he's fought. Your up again, to, man. Kenji Hiroshi 16:06, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

A race, eh? No problem. Your up again, man. Kenji Hiroshi 18:21, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

And it is your turn once again, man. And no worries. We all gotta eat, don't we? Kenji Hiroshi 19:13, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

And you're up again, dude. Nice speech btw, I liked that. Kenji Hiroshi 19:46, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

Now this is gonna get interestin', but I've gotta run, man. Somethin important just came up, so I doubt I'll be on the rest of the night. I'll make a post again tomorrow when I'm at home, 'cause I can't do it when I'm stuck in school. Sorry about this, man. Kenji Hiroshi 20:06, September 27, 2010 (UTC)

It's your turn again, man. Oh and If your stuck about who's turn it is again, simply look at the bottom of the RP. It'll tell ya the last person to make an edit on the page, so you'll be fit to tell from that. Kenji Hiroshi 15:07, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

I see nothin' wrong with his Shunpo, 'cause you've only added what his title was before goin' into exile. And I also read the Utesmei ability, so we'll hafta do that soon. But I wouldn't mention Kido is his spiritual energy. Kido imo, belongs in the Kido section, man. Your up again btw. Kenji Hiroshi 15:46, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

Well man, that's what the admin's are for. They're only doin' their job, otherwise the entire site would go to hell in a hen basket. And I've just had a cool idea. How about you knock Yoshiro out in the next attack, and Takeshi steps in for a bit? Your talk about hate gave me a thought. If it's okay with you, I'd like to introduce Yoshiro's Inner Hollow, who takes control of Yoshiro's body. Let's face it, Inner Hollow's have more hate than anyone, right? Kenji Hiroshi 16:04, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

Well? Should I bring Yoshiro's hollow into the picture? Your up again, as well. Kenji Hiroshi 16:25, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

I've decided against usin' Yoshiro's Inner Hollow. What happen's next is up to you, man. You can fight Takeshi, or we can add a little more to finish it off and do one later if you want. Kenji Hiroshi 19:22, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

I like the idea of them sharin' their past and that can be done in this RP without makin' another, but Dastan won't be makin' an appearance in my stories for a long time, and when he does, it won't be Yoshiro who'll be fightin' him. That's a plot device I'm leavin' for Kenji, 'cause Kenji really goes to town on him for what he does, but I'll say no more about that. And RP's are all well and good, but I don't do joint works on my solo story. I simply use RP's to fill in my characters back stories to show what they got up to when I take a time skip. This one with Purinsu. if it's okay with you, could be put in when the focus of my story switch's from Yoshiro back to Kenji. Your character will appear in my storyline to a degree and will be added under Yoshiro's relationship's when the RP's finished if you want. Your up again, btw man. Kenji Hiroshi 19:50, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

It's your turn again, man. And we'll do another RP with these two, but not until Yoshiro achieves either his Bankai, or Resurccion. They'll both be able to kick back and really let loose then. This is entitled the First Meetin' after all, so why not have a second later on? Kenji Hiroshi 20:10, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

Your up man. Kenji Hiroshi 20:29, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, man you're clear to bring this RP to a close. Gotta admit, this was fun. Kenji Hiroshi 20:48, September 28, 2010 (UTC)

That was a nic endin', so good job man. Kenji Hiroshi 06:26, September 29, 2010 (UTC)

RE: Shared Kido
Now that was a nice Kido. I looked at it the minute I seen ya made an edit. Supreme Lightning. Cool name too. I've got a few ideas for new Kido, but there still that, ideas. I've got the basic image fleshed out, but the effects are another thing entirely. When I finish 'em, I'll post 'em and see what ya think, man. And I'm lookin' forward to seein' Purinsu's finished product, dude. Kenji Hiroshi 14:50, October 2, 2010 (UTC)

Well, Sei never goty 'round to replyin', so go ahead and use it. I ain't in worry. One spell I have got in mind is a mid-level fire spell, but I don't want it just to be "he waves his hand, fire forms and the enemy gets burned" kinda thing. I was wantin' a more unique kinda thing that could serve several different uses, but what those are is another thing. The second was a forbidden spell that uses the caster's own life energy as fuel, makin' it far more potent than other spells. And since it is life energy bein' used, not spiritual, it can get around barriers that stop spiritual energy. The downside would be, that if used to much, the caster kicks the bucket. Those are the main two anyway. And I'll go ahead and make the healin' section now, then. Kenji Hiroshi 15:03, October 2, 2010 (UTC)

Stats
Sure just tell me everything and I'll help you out that way things don't seem as bad. I used to have that same problem so I know how it feels to be scrutinized for your wrk. RazeOfLight 15:16, October 2, 2010 (UTC)

Well for starters you could tone down the intellect a bit. Those guys you compared him too have been there for ages. Even Kyoraku and Ukitake who were the first grarduates of the academy can't compare to yamamoto's intellect quite yet. And don't say he can take on 3 captains at once. There are lieutenants that are able to defeat a captain level opponent so that would def. seem a bit too strong. RazeOfLight 16:00, October 2, 2010 (UTC)

Well that is one way to go. But you could always have them contract a disease which gives them hollow based powers and develops into a hollow or have a hollow already sitting inside of them but not fully awakened yet RazeOfLight 13:58, October 3, 2010 (UTC)

that is a good concept but if you think about it. A split persona and an inner being are two different things. I like the idea you're going for but if you do it right you could have two inner hollows cause the personalities would be two different people. (On a side note: You don't have to use aizen for them to become vizards) RazeOfLight 14:08, October 3, 2010 (UTC)

Um what?
What are you talking about?-- 楽しい Vui  (吐露) 15:28, October 2, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry
I honest to god thought it was my friends and it needed some stuff removed but I'm sorry and I will not make that mistake Again Plz forgive me Grizzaka 15:30, October 2, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks for the other pic, man. As for the forbidden Kido, I like the idea. Yeah, but that spell wouldn't hafta be a forbidden one if they can survive it. Look at the Hado I made, Gekirin. A strong shinigami can survive it, so I'd say make it a high-level Hado spell. As for my own Kido, I was plannin' to have that as a storyline spell, 'cause one of the bad guys I'm workin' on can form a barrier that blocks spirit based attacks. Life energy is a different story, though. As for Purinsu, I'll check him tomorrow man, 'cause I am knackered. And those spells ya have foatin' about your head. Fire in whatever one's ya think are the best. I'll trust your judgement, 'cause the one's you've made so far are all cool and pretty badass. Still likin' that Supreme Lightnin' one. Forsee it becomin' Kenji's main Kido...:) Later dude! Kenji Hiroshi 21:28, October 2, 2010 (UTC)