Talk:Reiji Ryoken

Review for Reiji Ryoken
After looking over this article, I can't help but feel that things are a bit too short for my liking. The basic required layout of it is present and everything seems to be in an organized fashion. But if you want this to be a little bit more on the interesting side, you should go into detail and critical thought about his personality, history and the like. Think about his mannerisms and behavior when interacting with other people. Think about his faults and flaws. Think about his more philisophical or deeper beliefs. Don't be afraid to go far with it.

Other than that, the sections "Obtaining Onikage" and "Becoming Part of Squad 9" need to be under one section titled "Background". Hope this helped. --Achrones150 17:22, April 22, 2013 (UTC)