Thread:ShikonChireru/@comment-1493741-20140618210745/@comment-24660252-20140618211616

Oh crap. Thank you...I was also gonna ask if you if the article(such as it is) is any better now... I've fixed it so she isn't compared to other characters as much, and also changed it so that she has a disdain for fighting( instead of her loving fighting but hating sparring) in general unless her Kaiju-Ningen blood kicks in, THEN her mentality changes and she loves fighting the way Kenpachi does... I still feel adamant about keeping Materia Getsuga cuz (A) Its only an experimental Kido made Natsu, who was on her high horse when she made it and (B) its a novelty of her clan...