User blog:Paradise Paradox/Paradise Paradox Reviews

Writers cry for help

And their associates like to yelp

You may want to go get another box

Because this will have knocked your socks

Look at that terrible poem, but it's probably going to worse than your stories. :D. Will your story be the best. Just post in the comments section below and I will review your story, character or groups. It better be good. Also, I will not review you for spelling and grammar for one main reason: I'm British, so I use UK English grammar and spelling. Also, these are my personal opinion and I'm not claiming that my stories are better.

NOTE: Before posting your character take the Mary Sue Test, it is really beneficial. Even races too!

Mary Sue Test

Story Grades

 * S - Kubo should make this!
 * A - So cool!
 * B - Great
 * C - Good
 * D - Average
 * E - Bad
 * F - Terrible
 * G - Catastrophe
 * U - Catastrophe x10
 * GT(stands for Dragon Ball Grand Tour) - Is this an absolute joke?

Characters Grade

 * Uryu - Kubo should put him in.
 * Byakuya - Awesome
 * Kenji Harima - I must have him in my RP's.
 * Unamed Character - Average
 * Giriko - Bad Character
 * Barbie - It's a clone of someone
 * Aquaman - Useless.
 * Mary Sue - What. The. Heck.