Talk:Hao Baojia

Review time.
Alright, here's Hao's review, Kou. Introduction: Good, it gives the reader a brief summary about what he's done and what he's going to do. (Well, that's obvious). I enjoyed reading this part. Appearance: You know what I'm going to say here. Well-written, and it gives me a good vision of what he looks like without having to take a glance at his pic. Personality: I think all personalities are good, though Hao's is, just like the rest of your works, incredibly detailed and wonderfully immersing (is that even a word...?). Powers and Abilities: Good, incredibly detailed. I could just sum this review up in a few words: "This is an excellent character as always", but I'll continue on. His stamina is a plausible weakness, and I can picture his opponents attempting to exploit the heck out of it. His weapon, it's good, the concept behind it is quite possibly the most original thing I've seen on BFF (If I've said that before, I retract my statement for the previous.) All in all, I look foward to seeing the completed version of Hao. Once again, excellent job, Kou. 10/10! PersonaSuperiorDeus 09:25, June 28, 2011 (UTC)