Talk:Micheal M

Administrative Review.
Hello there. I'm Achrones, and I'll be taking a few minutes to critique this article.

Now, I can probably assume from the look of this, you're new to BFF. I can understand if you're enthusiastic about having a character in order to RP with other people with. However, it does not mean that you can simply overlook your own shortcomings. I will explain to the best of my ability the issues that you need to fix within this article.

Firstly, a skim through shows a clear case of poor organization and violation of the Manual of Style Policy. On top of that, there are glaring grammatical errors and mistakes. If you want an idea of how an article is organized, please check out one of the canon character articles on Bleach Wikia. The less you bother with grammar and how your article looks, the more likely other users will ridicule you for incompetence.

Secondly, there is a lot of problems and conflictions with your storyline that makes it seem irregular and without sense. There is no such thing as a Nexonian within the Bleach universe unless confirmed by Tite Kubo himself. If you are looking to create a new race, you will have to check with one of the administration in order to do so. There is no such thing as Nexus energy, either. From points given within the storyline, you are giving this character power at random intervals without reason or logic.

That is all I can say for now. In the meantime, do find the time to correct these. Achrones, the Cold Sniper 02:14, February 2, 2012 (UTC)