User:Saris Khan/Critique

Appearance
Pardon me for sounding unprofessional, but she's a sexy little creature :) More seriously, though, a good, detailed description.

Personality
MPD, huh? I have BPD, so we have some things in common. It could be a great conversation starter on a hypothetical date with her :P Anyway, the idea of a pacifist Arrancar medic is something unorthodox and creative, I like this (Emma). The addition of a violent split-personality (Niut) is a suitable thing for a being who is composed of hundreds/thousands of separate souls. I actually wonder why none of the canon Arrancars displayed such a disorder.

Powers and Abilities
Emya's powers seem reasonable and fit her split-personalities with the defence/offence focus. I like the Blaster Bala technique. The two separte Resurrección forms are also something I see for the first time, and they further emphasise the differences between the personalities with the abilities.

With the Rayo de la Luz, I'd say the technique is very difficult, but not impossible to block with foreign Reiatsu; what if she was suppressed by a Captain-Commander level spiritual pressure? A minor nerf would make it sound much more balanced, IMHO.

(Cycling shorts :3)

The Diluvio and Estellar remind me of Harribel, but they're not rip-offs. They can stay the way they are.

I think you should mention her spiritual power level; "dense" is merely a trait, a specific designation would be helpful in determining her general combat prowess. I always take a quick look at it when I'm reading about a char to get an idea about their overall power before reading the rest.

Overall
What can I say, it's a good, well-developed character. Where there're no things for me to criticise, I'm rather concise :P Just a couple of spelling mistakes and the things I've mentioned earlier and iz real good.