Thread:Shiro of the Outer Path/@comment-1399043-20120528004748/@comment-4969779-20120528012735

A few things we need to get straight on:

1. No, it is not. I read your article and it's nothing alike. I admit your article is good, but mine is completely original. It's a vacuun-cutter attack. When I read your article, it has nothing to do with a vaacum. Mine also has a gravitational effect, with yet again, yours does not. Also, the corrosion effect came from Lord Sesshomaru's Bakusaiga. Look at the GIF. It pretty makes it clear.

2. Ei Kawahiru is born out of the darkness of the Kawahiru, and thus he created this dangerous technique to sever all ties with his enemies. Yes, you do have a point about the Kawahiru and the Kurosaki being allies and even my character Mandala Kurosaki reflects this fact but there are certain sects of the Kawahiru that he teaches this technique to thus comes "certain members of the Kawahiru" exist on the list. Also the stronger the negative emotions, the stronger the technique and thus becomes a complete foil to the Getsuga Tensho which defends the bonds insteads of severing them.

3. This technique is totally original as the name "Kigetsu Mokushiga" translates to Demon moon, Apocalypse Fang. This meaning that the technique is all about destruction as opposed to your technique which means "Spring Road Fang, Piercer of the Void." If you want to make it sound destructive then I suggest naming it "Winter Path Fang, Pirecer of the Void" as winter is generally associated with destruction, harshness, the void, etc. which perfectly describes the Asakura clan's represenatation of the " Void" in the Tri-Murti. Though I have to admit, your article is good, Nice Work :)

With these three things explained thoroughly, could you please remove the deletion tag off of my article. This would me most appreciated. You have a nice Memorial Day and have fun the wikia sites. :)